2025年贵州中考英语二轮复习主题写作课件：主题7 职业启蒙与职业精神

主题7 主题7 职业启蒙与职业精神 分析贵州近5年真题可知，该主题在书面表达中未作考查。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知，此主题通常考查职业梦想的内容、原因及实现方法。 主题探究 角度1 职业梦想的内容、原因 1．in the future 在未来 2．grow up 长大 3．want to be a doctor 想要成为一名医生 4．dream of doing sth. 梦想做某事 5．achieve one's dream 实现某人的梦想 6．come true (梦想)实现 7．succeed in doing sth./manage to do sth. 成功做/设法做某事 主题短语积累 9． enrich one's knowledge 充实某人的学识 10．open one's eyes 拓宽某人的视野 11．be brave to face different challenges 勇于面对不同的挑战 12．learn some life skills 学习一些生活技能 13．a sense of responsibility 责任感 14．keep a promise 信守承诺 15．have an effect on 对……有影响 16．be like sb. 像某人样 角度2 实现职业梦想的方法 1．take acting lessons 上表演课 2．keep on doing sth. 坚持做某事 3．have to do with 与……有关 4．be strict with sb. 对某人严格 5．work hard 努力学习 6．stick to 坚持 7．give up 放弃 8．fight for 为……而奋斗 9． hold on to one's dream 坚持梦想 10．develop/form a healthy living habit 养成健康的生活习惯 11．take part in voluntary activities 参加志愿服务活动 12．be admitted into/to 被……录取 13．when it comes to sth. 当谈到某事 14．go all out 全力以赴 15．try one's best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 16．spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力做某事 17．make up one's mind to do sth.→高级表达be determined to do 下定决心做某事 18．improve myself 提升我自己 佳句积累 佳句赏析 ►职业梦想的重要性 1．As the saying goes, “Great dreams make a bright future”. My dream is to be a doctor in the future. 2．Just as President Xi once said, I would like to contribute to my hometown. 佳句赏析 3．No matter who you are and what you are doing, you should have your dreams and hold on to them because they can give you chances to taste success.(No matter who表明梦想对每个人都很重要) 4．It's of great importance for us to make up our minds to achieve our dreams. 佳句赏析 ►职业梦想的原因 1．More and more young people wish to return to their hometowns and contribute to their hometowns' development after graduation.(contribute to促成，有助于) 2．I like talking to people and asking questions, so I want to be a journalist when I grow up. 3．Since my early age, I have been admiring tour guides who travel worldwide.(who引导定语从句，解释说明梦想的职业) 佳句赏析 4．The book I read about great inventors inspired my career dream and made me interested in science.(高级词汇inspire v．鼓励；激励) 5．I dream of being a good teacher who teaches kids not only knowledge but also the truth in life.6.The speech given by a famous doctor made me realize my dream of becoming a doctor to help others. 6. The speech given by a famous doctor made me realize my dream of becoming a doctor to help others. 佳句赏析 ►实现职业梦想的方法 1．My dream is to be an animal doctor, so I'll work as a volunteer in an animal hospital. 2．My first plan has to do with my physical health. I will keep exercising every day to build up my body. (have to do with与……有关，此处在阐明计划后具体描述实施该计划的方式) 3．To improve myself, I plan to spend one hour a day (in) reading the books I'm interested in. (动词不定式作目的状语前置) 佳句赏析 4．If you want to make your dream come true, you should learn all kinds of knowledge to enrich your brain.( if引导条件状语从句，描写实现梦想的途径) 5．I will make every effort to discover the value of traditional Chinese medicine and make it more popular in the world.(make every effort to do sth.竭尽全力做某事) 6．Hard work pays off. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day.( Hard work pays off.天道酬勤。 ) 7．Stick to your dream, and you are sure to achieve success in the end. 8．I strongly believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. 句子仿写 1)拥有梦想和希望对一个人的发展是非常重要的。[用短语be of great importance仿写] _______________________________________________________________ 2)我打算成为一名老师，所以我将要在大学的时候学习教育。[用连词so仿写] _______________________________________________________________ It's of great importance for a person's development to have dreams and hopes. I am going to be a teacher, so I'm going to study education in university. 句子仿写 3)当我长大后，我想成为一个能拯救很多人的好医生。[用who引导的定 语从句仿写] _______________________________________________________________ 4)我梦想着成为一名钢琴家，因为我真的喜欢弹钢琴。[用短语dream of仿写] _______________________________________________________________ When I grow up, I want to be a good doctor who can save many people. I dream of being a pianist because I truly like playing the piano. 句子仿写 5)为了实现我的梦想，我会认真度过我有限的时间。[用动词不定式结构前置作目的状语仿写] _______________________________________________________________ 6)总之，只要我尽最大的努力，我确信我能实现我的梦想。[用连词词组as long as仿写] _______________________________________________________________ 7)我希望我能尽我所能帮助更多生活在山区的学生。[用that引导的宾语从句仿写] _______________________________________________________________ To make my dream come true, I ought to spend my limited time carefully. All in all, I'm sure I will realize my dream as long as I try my best. I hope that I could try my best to help more students living in the mountain areas. [2024山东临沂改编]假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。 Hi Li Ping， You mentioned your dream job in your last letter. I'm really interested in it. Why did you choose it? What/Who influenced you to make the decision? Tell me your experience, please. I look forward to hearing from you soon! Eric 真题剖析 要求： 1．词数不少于80； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 【审题】 文体：________文 主题：职业梦想 要点：邮件中的2个问题和1个请求即3个要点 ①选择该职业梦想的原因 ②影响你做此决定的人或事 ③叙述有关职业梦想的经历 应用 人称：以第______人称为主 时态： 要点①：以____________时为主 要点②和要点③：用____________时 一 一般现在 一般过去 【写作框架】 【润色与升格】 连句成篇 Dear Eric， Thanks for your e-mail. I'm very glad to tell you something about my dream job. 连句成篇 I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children.(要点1：选择该职业的原因) Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher.(要点2：影响你做此决定的人或事) ①She often helps me with my English in her spare time. It has a great influence on me. ②I still remember one thing. Once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. 连句成篇 She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English. I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up.(要点3：叙述有关职业梦想的经历并升华主题) ③Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will work harder to realize my dream. Best wishes! Li Ping 句子升格 ①用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并两个句子： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ②用that引导的宾语从句合并两个句子： _______________________________________________________________ ③用高级短语“make continuous efforts加倍努力”替换“work harder”升格句子： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ She often helps me with my English in her spare time, which has a great influence on me. I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and was upset. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will make continuous efforts to realize my dream. 【誊写】 ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Eric， Thanks for your e-mail. I'm very glad to tell you something about my dream job. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. She often helps me with my English in her spare time, which has a great influence on me. I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English. I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will make continuous efforts to realize my dream. Best wishes！ Li Ping 人生如船，梦想是帆。英语课上，同学们以“My Dream Job”为主题展开讨论，畅想自己的理想职业。请你根据以下提示，以“I Want to Be a(n) ”(我想成为一名……)为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，向校刊投稿。 实战演练 I Want to Be a _______ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Doctor It's essential for everyone to have a dream. Dreams make us full of hope for the future. Different people have different dreams. Encouraged by my mother, I dream of becoming a doctor like her one day. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Though my mother is very busy, she always tries her best to look after patients. She often says she feels happy when she helps patients, which moves me a lot. Here is my plan for the future job. First, to achieve my goal, I will make every effort to win a place in a medical university. Besides, it's important for me to gain lots of knowledge about medicine through reading books. What's more, I decide to do some volunteer work in hospitals to improve my skills. As long as I work hard, I believe I can become a good doctor in the future. $$