2025年贵州中考英语二轮复习主题写作课件：主题2丰富、充实、积极向上的日常生活

主题2　 主题2 丰富、充实、积极向上的日常生活 分析贵州近5年真题可知，该主题在书面表达中未作考查。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知，此主题通常有以下命题角度： 1.规则(规则的重要性以及对规则的看法); 2.假期计划； 3.旅行； 4.对高中生活的 规划。 主题探究 角度1　规则 1．follow the rules 遵守规则 2．view rules positively 积极看待规则 3．protect public safety 保护公共安全 4．provide a stable environment for development 为发展提供稳定的环境 5．regulate people's behaviors 约束人们的行为 主题短语积累 角度2　假期计划 1．prepare for 为……做准备 2．make a plan 制订一个计划 3．around the corner 即将来临 4．pay a visit to 拜访；参观 5．plan to do sth. 计划做某事 6．can't wait to do sth. 等不及做某事 7 ．join sb. in doing sth. 加入某人一起做某事 8．spare some time to do sth. 留出时间做某事 角度3　旅行 1．set off 动身；启程 2．leave for 前往 3．give sb. a lift 捎某人一程 4．be attracted by 被……吸引 5．tourist attraction 旅游景点 6．place of interest 名胜古迹 7．natural scenery 自然景观 8．historical buildings 历史建筑 9． be known for 因……著名 10．lose oneself in 沉醉其中 11．leave sweet memories 留下甜蜜的回忆 12．feel at home 感到舒适自在的 13．leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻的印象 角度4　对高中生活的规划 1．senior high school 高中 2．the beginning of a new life 新生活的开始 3．set out a new journey 开始新旅程 4．be responsible for 对……负责 5．set goals for high school 为高中设定目标 6．balance study and rest 平衡学习和休息 7．learn time management 学习时间管理 佳句积累 佳句赏析 ►规则 1．The most essential thing is to raise your awareness of obeying the rules.(①高级词汇essential adj.极其重要的；②高级短语raise one's awareness提高某人的意识) 2．While rules may limit your freedom, they do regulate your behaviors.(while形成了前后的对比和转折) 佳句赏析 3．Even though some school rules might seem strict, they are designed to shape us into better individuals.(even though引导让步状语从句；shape在这里是动词，意为“塑造”) 4．In public, following the rules shows our respect for others and contributes to a harmonious society.(高级短语contribute to为……做贡献) 5．Ignoring rules can lead to negative effects not only for ourselves but also for those around us.(not only…but also…引出忽视规则的危害) 佳句赏析 ►假期计划 1．I'm glad to hear from you and I would like to introduce my summer holiday plans. 2．In order to have a colorful and meaningful experience, I have made a detailed plan for the coming journey.(in order to…为了……) 3．I will go to the community to help cheer up the old people. 4．All in all, I'm looking forward to spending a pleasant vacation.(look forward to doing sth.期待做某事) 佳句赏析 ►旅行 1．Now more and more people are interested in traveling, and considering it to be an opportunity to experience life and increase knowledge.(consider sth. to be认为……) 2．During the following days, we visited many places of interest, which all made a deep impression on me.(which引导非限制性定语从句，作补充说明) 3．The scenery along the way was so breathtaking that I couldn't take my eyes off it.(so…that…引导结果状语从句) 佳句赏析 4．I captured many beautiful moments with my camera, hoping to keep the memories alive forever.(①高级词汇capture v．捕捉，拍摄；②hoping…为现在分词短语作伴随状语，补充说明了拍摄的目的) 5．Traveling can not only help us see the best sights but also open our eyes to the outside world.(用not only…but also…并列连接旅行的两个作用) 佳句赏析 ►对高中生活的规划 1．This summer vacation before high school, I aim to prepare myself thoroughly for the challenges ahead.(aim to do sth.旨在做某事) 2．This summer, I'm determined to take up a new sport like swimming to keep fit and build my endurance for the busy high school life.(be determined to do sth.下定决心做某事，突出了作者坚定的态度) 佳句赏析 3．High school is a new page, and I'm going to actively participate in various clubs and competitions to explore my interests and talents.(①高级词汇various，此处相当于different kinds of；②to explore…为目的状语，说明了积极参与活动的原因) 4．In the coming high school years, I will take advantage of every chance to learn new knowledge and skills to broaden my horizons.(高级短语take advantage of利用) 5．With a positive attitude, I'm ready to face the challenges in high school and turn them into opportunities for learning and growth.(with引导的介词短语作伴随状语) 句子仿写 1)有些人可能认为规则有限制性，然而它们实际上为进步提供了一种途径。[用while“表示对比”仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2)在学校里，遵守规则有助于营造良好的学习环境。[用短语contribute to仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Some may think rules are limiting, while they actually give a way for improvement. In school, following the rules contributes to creating a good learning environment. 句子仿写 3)违反规则不仅会使事情变得更糟，而且还会对他人产生负面影响。[用连词词组not only…but also…仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4)为了度过一个愉快且充实的假期，我制订了一个详细的假期日程表。[用介词短语in order to仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Breaking the rules will not only make things worse, but also have a negative impact on others. In order to spend a pleasant and rich vacation, I have made a detailed calendar of vacation. 句子仿写 5)我期待经历一次有意义的假期。[用短语look forward to仿写] _______________________________________________________________ 6)很多家长认为假期是他们孩子发展爱好和交朋友的理想时期。[用consider sth. to be仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm looking forward to experiencing a meaningful vacation. Many parents consider the vacation to be an ideal period for their children to develop hobbies and make friends. 句子仿写 7)在接下来的几周里，我参观了许多有关文化的景点，它们让我更深刻地了解了历史。[用which引导的非限定性定语从句仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8)今年秋天，我决定加入一个新的俱乐部，来提高我的沟通技巧。[用be determined to do sth.仿写] _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ During the following weeks, I visited a lot of cultural sights, which all made me understand history more deeply. This autumn, I'm determined to join a new club to improve my communication skills. 句子仿写 9)我准备好以积极的心态迎接即将到来的高中生活。[用with表伴随仿写] _______________________________________________________________ With a positive mind, I am ready to meet the coming high school life. 　　[2024甘肃省卷改编]假期对学生来说是一段放松自己、关心家人、充实自我的时间。对于即将到来的暑假你有什么计划和安排？根据以下思维导图提示，以“My Holiday Plans”为题，用英语写一篇假期计划。 真题剖析 要求： 1．补全标题； 2．内容积极向上，不少于80词； 3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。　　　　 空处缺少形容词，可填的词有：wonderful, rich, interesting，… 【审题】 主题：假期计划 文体：________文 要点： ①介绍假期是什么以及对学生来说假期是什么 ②具体介绍自己的假期计划以及假期计划如何帮助自己成长 ③阐述个人的期望以及假期计划完成后会带来的收获 说明 人称和时态： 要点①：人称以第______人称为主；时态以____________时为主；要点②：人称以第______人称为主；时态以____________时为主；要点③：人称以第______人称为主；时态以___________时和___________时为主 三 一般现在 一 一般现在 一 一般现在 一般将来 【写作框架】 【润色与升格】 连句成篇 My 　　　　　 Holiday Plans A holiday is a special time for students to take a break from school and relax. ①It's a chance that we can enjoy some free time after working hard in classes.(要点1：介绍假期是什么以及对学生来说假期是什么) Wonderful 连句成篇 During my holiday, I plan to spend wonderful time with my family by having picnics in the park, playing board games together, and cooking meals with my parents. ②I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores. Additionally, I want to do much reading because reading is what makes a full man. Besides, travelling is another good choice for such a long holiday. If I have time, I also want to volunteer in our neighborhood. ③Through these plans, I can learn new skills, broaden my mind and make new friends.(要点2：具体介绍自己的假期计划以及假期计划如何帮助自己更好地成长) 连句成篇 I expect to create lasting memories with my family, reading more, learning new things, and showing more love to the world during this holiday. ④After I complete these plans with joy, I'm sure I'll return feeling happy and ready for new experiences.(要点3：阐述个人的期望以及假期计划完成后会带来的收获) 句子升格 ①用it作形式主语，动词不定式结构作真正的主语简化句子： _______________________________________________________________②用短语“such as”扩写具体的家务劳动，升格句子： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It's a chance to enjoy some free time after working hard in classes. I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores, such as washing dishes or tidying up the house. 句子升格 ③用连词词组“not only…but also…”升格句子： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________④用结构“by＋动词-ing”作方式状语升格： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Through these plans, I can not only learn new skills and broaden my mind, but also make new friends. By completing these plans with joy, I'm sure I'll return feeling happy and ready for new experiences. 【誊写】 My ____________ Holiday Plans ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Wonderful A holiday is a special time for students to take a break from school and relax. It's a chance to enjoy some free time after working hard in classes. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ During my holiday, I plan to spend wonderful time with my family by having picnics in the park, playing board games together, and cooking meals with my parents. I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores, such as washing dishes or tidying up the house. Additionally, I want to do much reading because reading is what makes a full man. Besides, travelling is another good choice for such a long holiday. If I have time, I also want to volunteer in our neighborhood. Through these plans, I can not only learn new skills and broaden my mind, but also make new friends. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I expect to creat lasting memories with my family, reading more, learning new things, and showing more love to the world during this holiday. By completing these plans with joy, I'm sure I'll return feeling happy and ready for new experiences. 学校英文网站正在开展以“一次印象深刻的旅行”为主题的征文活动。请你以“My Trip to ”为题，根据以下思维导图用英文写一篇短文投稿。 实战演练 要求： 1．补全标题； 2．内容积极向上，不少于80词； 3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 My Trip to __________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mount Huang Travelling is not only a means of relaxation but also a wonderful way for us to gain knowledge and truly enjoy life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Last summer, I went to Mount Huang with my parents. Before setting off, we took a bag with some food and water and started to climb at seven in the morning since it was sunny. The endless steps offered us a place where we could sit down to rest our aching legs during the next five hours. What impressed us most was the rolling sea of clouds when we were at the top, which reminds us how tiny we human beings are. The out-of-this-world scenes of Mount Huang always stick in my memory. As a Chinese, I am proud of our motherland. And Mount Huang is a must to visit in our life！ $$