2025年贵州中考英语二轮复习主题写作课件：主题1人物介绍

主题1 人物介绍 分析贵州近5年真题可知,2021年贵阳、黔南州中考书面表达以“The Most Beautiful Person in My Heart”为题,要求介绍自己心中最美的人。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知,此主题通常有以下命题角度:1. 介绍身边的人及其对自身的影响;2. 介绍名人及其对自身的影响;3. 介绍自己感恩的人及其对自身的影响。 主题探究 角度1 介绍身边的人及其对自身的影响 1.warm-hearted and kind 热心善良的 2.study hard 努力学习 3.have good grades 成绩优秀 4.be confident and optimistic 自信乐观的 5.be good at/do well in 在……做得好,擅长 6.be willing/ready to help sb.乐于/准备好帮助某人 7.kind and easy-going 善良随和的 主题短语积累 8. active and outgoing 活跃外向的 9. the best candidate for… ……的最佳候选人 10.play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色 11.be of medium height 中等身高 12.be kind to sb. 对某人友善 13.be weak in 在某方面薄弱 14.encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 15.give sb. advice on 在……上给某人建议 16.give sb. the strength to do sth. 给某人做某事的力量 17.overcome the difficulty 克服困难 18.with one's help/with the help of sb.在某人的帮助下 19.make great progress 取得巨大的进步 20.thanks to 多亏了 21.face the difficulties bravely 勇敢地面对困难 22.introduce sb. to sb. 向某人介绍某人 23.take good care of sb. 好好照顾某人 24.set a good example for sb.为某人树立好榜样 25.devote…to sb. /sth. 将……奉献给某人/某物 角度2 介绍名人及其对自身的影响 1.be born in 出生于(某地/某时) 2.strong spirits 坚韧的精神 3.in different fields 在不同领域 4.make a great contribution to 对……做出巨大贡献 5.pass away 过世 6.a member of… …… 的一员 7.sacrifice oneself 牺牲某人自己 8.build a better society 建设一个更美好的社会 9. fight for… 为……奋斗/战斗 10.graduate from 从……毕业 11.take an active part in 积极参与 12.work hard day and night 日夜辛劳工作 角度3 介绍自己感恩的人及其对自身的影响 1.be grateful/thankful to 对……心存感激 2.thank for doing sth. 因做某事而感谢 3.express one's thanks 表达某人的感谢 4.be patient with… 对……有耐心 5.believe in 相信 6.have a great influence on sb. 对某人有很大影响 7.get the first prize 获得一等奖 8.be strict with 对……严厉的 9. be in trouble 遇到麻烦 10.beyond one's imagination 超出某人的想象 11.communicate with 与……沟通/交流 12.make sb. full of confidence 让某人充满信心 13.benefit from… 从……中受益 14.appreciate one's help 感激某人的帮助 15.cheer sb. up 使某人振作 16.be the first to do sth. 第一个做某事的人 17.have difficulty doing sth. 做某事有困难 佳句积累 佳句赏析 介绍身边的人及其对自身的影响 1.As her best friend, I have learned that nothing is impossible and we should help others.(that 引导宾语从句,说明“我”从朋友身上学到了什么) 2.She did nothing great, but what she has done makes me so moved. 3.Ma Li is a warm-hearted classmate who is always willing to help her classmates. 佳句赏析 4.A star of the class should not be someone who only cares about himself or herself, but someone who can inspire others in many ways.(not…but… 不是……而是……) 5.Thanks to her, I realize that I should face the difficulties bravely. 6.As a mother, she takes good care of me.As a friend, she can listen to me. As a teacher, she encourages me instead of getting angry with my poor grades.(用排比句层层递进,说明妈妈在“我”心中的伟大形象) 佳句赏析 介绍名人及其对自身的影响 1.Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou .(who引导定语从句,介绍王亚平的突出事迹) 2.She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training.(高 级词汇①deserve v.值得;②persistence n.坚持) 3.To learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on my weak points and work hard to do better.(①动词不定式位于句首作目的状语,强调后半 句的动作的目的;②reflect on 反思) 佳句赏析 4.In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. 5.Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture in the world.(make a great contribution to为……做出巨大贡献) 6.We live in times of peace and maybe we don't need to sacrifice ourselves. But we should remember the heroes who once fought for our country. (①高级词汇sacrifice v.牺牲;②fight for为……而战斗) 佳句赏析 介绍自己感恩的人及其对自身的影响 1.I am very grateful to you for what you have done for me. 2.To express my love, I can buy presents for her, study hard and help her do something useful.(动词不定式作目的状语,强调后半句中的动作的目的) 3.It's because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(本句为一个强调句,被强调的部分为“because of your efforts”,突出“我”在英语口语上取得快速进步的原因) 佳句赏析 4.Without your help, I wouldn't have gotten such a good result.(该句为虚拟语气,表示对已发生的事进行假设,突出“你的帮助”对“我”的重要性) 5.She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my development in the future. 6.Ms. Zhang is an excellent teacher, to whom I want to say thanks. (whom引导非限制性定语从句,说明“我”想感谢的对象) 句子仿写 1)袁隆平所做的对中国乃至整个世界都影响巨大。[用what引导主语从句仿写] _ 2)李军是我的同学,他总是乐于帮助那些有困难的人。[用短语be willing to和who引导的定语从句仿写] _ What Yuan Longping did has a great influence on China even the whole world. Li Jun is my classmate who is always willing to help those in need/trouble. 句子仿写 3)我们心中的英雄不应该是那些荧幕上的明星,而是那些为社会或国家做出贡献的人。[用连词词组not…but…和who引导的定语从句仿写] _4)多亏了钱学森,我们国家的科技才变得越来越强大。[用短语thanks to仿写] _ The heroes in our hearts should not be those stars on the screen, but those who make contributions to the society or the country. Thanks to Qian Xuesen, our country's science and technology has become stronger and stronger. 句子仿写 5)每当我遇到困难,我最好的朋友都会真诚地鼓励我勇敢地面对,而不是嘲笑我。[用短语instead of仿写] _6)我们应该对那些默默奉献,甚至牺牲自己生命的人心存感激。[用短语be grateful to仿写] _ Whenever I meet difficulties, my best friend will sincerely encourage me to face them bravely instead of laughing at me. We should be grateful to those who silently contribute, even sacrifice their own lives. 句子仿写 7)教师总是被认为是最伟大的工作之一,因为教师对学生有很大的影响。[用短语have a great influence on仿写] _ A teacher is always regarded as one of the greatest jobs, because teachers have a great influence on students. [2021贵阳、黔南州]美不仅在于外表,更在于内心。最美的人可以是为人类进步做出贡献的伟人,也可以是我们身边默默无闻的普通人。在你心目中谁最美?假如你是李华,学校将要开展以“The Most Beautiful Person in My Heart”为主题的征文活动,请你写一篇不少于80词的征文投稿。 真题剖析 要求如下: 1.包含思维导图的所有信息; 2.重点谈谈这个人美在哪里,并举一个例子说明; 3.征文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。 【审题】 主题:介绍自己心中最美的人 文体:_文 要点: ①你心中最美的人是谁,介绍他/她的基本信息(姓名、外貌、性格、职业等) ②举例说明他/她在你心中最美的原因 ③你从这个人身上学到了什么 人称:以第_人称为主 说明 三 时态: 介绍姓名、外貌、性格和职业以_时为主;举例说明这个人在你心中最美的原因,叙述过去发生的事,以_时为主 一般现在 一般过去 【写作框架】 【润色与升格】 连句成篇 The Most Beautiful Person in My Heart To be honest, Sherry is undoubtedly the most beautiful person I've ever met. Sherry is my closest friend in my school. She has a round face and big eyes. ①I don't think she is beautiful although she has pretty appearance. I think she is beautiful because she is always patient, kind, and helpful. ②She always helps those who are in need.[要点1:介绍你心中最美的人是谁以及他/她的基本信息(姓名、外貌、性格、职业等)] 【润色与升格】 连句成篇 There was a time when I fell ill. During that difficult period, she gently told me not to worry about my homework and studies. ③Then, she spent her time and effort helping me with my study. In addition, once when I failed in my math exam and felt sad, she sincerely encouraged me and firmly told me not to give up. ④Because of her words of encouragement, I found my confidence and strength to move forward again.(要点2:举例说明他/她在你心中最美的原因) 【润色与升格】 连句成篇 ⑤As her best friend, I have learned one thing from her—nothing is impossible. Moreover, I have learned the significance and value of giving a helping hand to those who are in need.(要点3:你从这个人身上学到了什么) 【润色与升格】 句子升格 ①用连词“not…but…”合并两个句子并将其中的think升格为believe: _ ②用短语“be willing to”和“give a helping hand to sb.”升格句子: _ I believe she is beautiful not because she has pretty appearance, but because she is always patient, kind, and helpful. She is always willing to give a helping hand to those who are in need. 句子升格 ③用搭配“devote sth. to sth.”升格句子: _④用短语“thanks to”升格句子: _ ⑤用that引导的宾语从句升格句子: _ Then, she devoted her time and effort to helping me with my study. Thanks to her words of encouragement, I found my confidence and strength to move forward again. As her best friend, I have learned that nothing is impossible. 【誊写】 The Most Beautiful Person in My Heart _ To be honest, Sherry is undoubtedly the most beautiful person I've ever met.Sherry is my closest friend in my school. She has a round face. I believe she is beautiful not because she has pretty appearance, but because she is always patient, kind, and helpful. She is always willing to give a helping hand to those who are in need. _ _ There was a time when I fell ill.During that difficult period, she gently told me not to worry about my homework and studies.Then, she devoted her time and effort to helping me with my study.In addition, once when I failed in my math exam and felt sad, she sincerely encouraged me and firmly told me not to give up.Thanks to her words of encouragement, I found my confidence again and the strength to move forward. As her best friend, I have learned that nothing is impossible.Moreover, I have learned the significance and value of giving a helping hand to those who are in need. 同学们,你最想感谢的人是谁呢?最近你校校报英文版正在征稿。请根据思维导图提示,以“I Want to Thank Most”为题,用英语写一篇短文向你校校报投稿。 实战演练 要求如下: 1.结合实际,用适当的名词或名词短语补全标题; 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名; 3.重点谈谈你要感谢他/她的理由; 4.不少于80词。 I Want to Thank _ Most _ My Mother The person I want to thank most is my mother.My mother is a worker and she is a common woman.She is not tall or beautiful.But I love her most and she is also the person I want to say thanks most.Because she gave me life and the deepest love. _ _ One day, I didn't pass an English test. I felt too sorry to talk with my mother.I didn't want to let her down. I didn't feel like eating dinner and only stayed in my room alone sadly.In fact, my mother knew me well.She was sure that I had failed the test. But she pretended not to know it at all.She knocked at the door and asked me to have dinner. After that, she smiled and encouraged me as if nothing had happened. I was so thankful that I wanted to hug my mother. Since then, I have studied very hard.I'll get good grades and go to university to make her proud of me. I'll give her a better life in the future. $$