内容正文:
建议信 开头段落(P18页课文背诵)
Having learned that you have difficulty in doing sth, I am writing to share with you some suggestions.(Learning English/Adapting to new school life/improving your Chinese writing)
得知你做某事有困难后,我写信来和你分享一些建议。
建议信 第二段-建议内容句式
①I suggest that you should do sth
②It is highly suggested that you should do
③ If I were you, I would do sth
④It would be better if you did sth..
建议信 第二段-建议内容语料
1.Talk to your teachers about your problem
2.Contact your parents with your phone
3.Ask for advice on social media
4.Turn to trustworthy friends for help
5.Ring help hotlines
6.Write a letter to a professional adviser
7.Join more extra-curricular activities
8.Do some physical exercise to lift your spirit
建议信 第二段-建议理由句式
句子,which will do sth
句子, which is an effective way to do sth
句子, in which way you can do sth
例1.你可以多看中文书刊、电视→建议理由:
这将帮助你更好地了解鲜活的中国文化。
It is highly suggested that you should read Chinese books, magazines and TV shows, which will help you understand Chinese culture.
例2.多参加户外活动和体育锻炼→建议理由:这是解愤怒和压力的有效方法。
I suggest that you participate in more outdoor activities and physical exercise, which is an effective way to get rid of anger and stress.
例3.建议你多看英文小说→建议理由:这样你就能接触到更多的母语表达。
It would be better if you read more English novels, in which way you can be exposed to more native expressions.
建议信 第三段-重申主题
I will be more than delighted if you find my suggestions helpful.
如果你觉得我的建议有帮助,我将非常高兴。
范文
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
Hi Worried,
Having learned that you're having such a tough time at the moment, I am writing to share with you some suggestions.
Initially, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. In addition, participating in more outdoor activities and physical exercise with your friends,which is an effective way to relieve anger and stress. And more importantly,it would be better if you emain optimistic about your future and maintain peace of mind, which can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I will be more than delighted if you find my suggestions helpful. Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Jamie
U2 Travelling Around
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays.
With the National Day coming, I am going to travel to Hainan Island to see its beautiful scenery with my family. We will spend 6 days there, from Oct. 1th to Oct. 6th . It’s because of its beautiful scenery that we choose to travel to Hainan Island. Other than hiking on the island, we have planed many other activities like surfing in the water, spending the nights in the tents. I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Xiao Li
佳作仿写
假定你是李华,请根据下面表格的内容给你的朋友王林写一封电子邮件,介绍你在国庆期间北京之行的计划。
第一天 颐和园
第二天 长城
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Wang Lin,
Since the National Day is coming, I am planning to spend 2 days from 1st October to 2nd October visiting Beijing.
On the first day, I am going to visit the Summer Palace, which is said to be the largest and bestpreserved royal park in China. On the second day, I will visit the Great Wall. As is known to the world, it is one of the Seven Wonders of the World.
Do you have any plans for the coming holiday? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
U3 Sports and Fitness
说明问题:
I worried about+ n/doing
I used to do, but it’s unhealthy.
I always wanted to do, but I failed.
如何解决问题/做出改变+原因
After +doing(在看了什么书/听谁说了什么之后等), I began to change.
Then I started doing sth instead of +doing sth, because….
Instead of doing sth, I would do sth, because….
Rather than +doing sth, I+v-ed , because….
I could still do sth, but I would do, because…
总结结果,提出希望:
Finally/ As a result, I stopped doing sth and began to do sth
By being positive about myself, I became happier and healthier.
范文展示
I always felt anxious and stressful at senior high school at first because I was afraid of being left behind. I was worried about so many things that I couldn’t sleep well and focus on my study.
Then, I read a book called “Who Moved Your Cheese” which made me realize that making changes can make a difference to life. Instead of just worrying about my study, I would make a schedule for my study and finish the to-do list. Rather than being anxious the whole day, I would do some exercises regularly and listen to music to relieve my stress and tiredness after studying, which also helped me feel more energetic.
Now, I stopped feeling upset about something new. Instead, I would also always remind myself to smile as often as possible and stay positive about everything that is going to happen.
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