特色专项1 书面表达（含满分范文）-北师大版九年级上学期期末专项

原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 特色专项 1 书面表达 模块二 实战练笔 参考范文 Passage 1 Reading can make our life colorful. I like reading novels best because I can learn interesting stories of different people. My favorite book is Jane Eyre written by Charlotte Bronte. First, I am moved by Jane’s experience and traits. Jane is small in body but strong in heart. As a poor orphan, she suffered a lot of difficulties but she never gave up. As a woman, she pursued justice, freedom and respect in her life. What’s more, the language is rich and beautiful, which is helpful for English learners. I benefit a lot from reading it. It not only broadens my vision but also helps me build my characters. So I will keep reading as a lasting habit. Passage 2 Everyone may have his own role model. The person I admire most is my father. In my eyes, my father is hard-working and responsible for everything he does. As a doctor, he spends most of his time and energy on his work. He is willing to help and care for all the patients. What’s more, he gives me support to help me through hard times. For example, when I failed an exam last year, he helped me find the solutions and encouraged me to overcome the difficulties. With his guidance and influence, I study hard at school and try to help my classmates with their homework. I hope I can do as well as him in the future. Passage 3 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to share a moving story that happened in my life with you. Last week, Xiaohong took part in a singing competition. I was deeply touched by something that happened then. During the performance, Xiaohong was too nervous to sing. Seeing this, her teachers and her classmates came forward to cheer her on and encouraged her not to give up. With their encouragement, Xiaohong was able to regain her confidence and finally finished her competition successfully. Although she didn’t win a prize, she felt proud of herself for her perseverance. From the story, I’ve learned that everyone has the power to brighten others’ lives. Therefore, let’s work together to spread kindness wherever we go, using our actions and words to light up the world around us. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 2 Li Hua Passage 4 My Journey The world is so beautiful and I want to see it with my own eyes. I went to the famous Beihai Park with my classmates this May and we had a great time. We arrived there early in the morning. The air was cool and fresh. As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercises and dancing. We also took lots of pictures of the beautiful flowers in the gardens. Then we crossed the bridge and climbed up the hill. It was great to enjoy the views from the top. In the afternoon, we took a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together. It was a wonderful and unforgettable trip. We all felt relaxed and happy. I’m looking forward to visiting more beautiful places in our country. Passage 5 Setbacks and Growth When I was new in middle school, I was too shy to speak in front of others. One day our English teacher asked us to give a report in front of the class. After hearing this, I began to practice hard. Once I had problems, I asked my teacher for help. Finally, I presented successfully. Now I can speak English in public confidently. I’ve learnt that no matter what difficulties you have, just face them and try your best. And you’ll work them out. Passage 6 Beauty is everywhere in our school. You can see our beautiful environment, colorful school cultures and good behaviors throughout our school. As for me, I think I can take actions to make my school more beautiful. First, I should greet others with a smile. Besides, I can join the school volunteers. When I see any rubbish, I will pick it up. I can also take care of the plants in our school. All in all, beautiful school requires each of us. Let’s make efforts together. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 特色专项 1 书面表达 Passage 1 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom与你交流如何安排课余生活，请你用英语回复一封邮件。 提示词语：enjoy, sports, relax 提示问题： How do you spend your spare time？ Explain your reasons. 【满分范文必背】 Dear Tom, I’m writing to tell you something about my spare time. I usually enjoy playing sports during my spare time. Playing sports with my friends allows us to 模块一 满分范文 Passage 1: 课余生活安排 Passage 2: 一次劳动经历 Passage 3: 壮志成城 Passage 4: 令我敬佩的人 Passage 5: 在线学习建议 Passage 6: 我最喜欢的书 Passage 7: 观看“天空课堂”有感 Passage 8: 寒假生活安排 Passage 9: 自学汉语建议 Passage 10: 一次学习经历 模块二 实战练笔 Passage 1: 我最喜欢的书 Passage 2: 我心中的榜样 Passage 3: 我身边的感人故事 Passage 4: 我的一次旅行 Passage 5: 挫折与成长 Passage 6: 建设美丽校园 模块概览 模块一 满分范文 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 2 bond and build stronger relationships. I spend some of my free time reading English books and magazines, too. I like English because it can widen my field of vision and provide me with a lot of knowledge. It is also a tool that can help me communicate with foreigners. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua. Passage 2 热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德。劳动可以强健体魄，培养品格。 假如你是李华。请你用英文写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一次你的劳动经历 （labour experience），并谈谈你的收获。 提示词语：plant, soil, water 提示问题： •Describe one of your labour experiences. •What have you learned from that experience? 【满分范文必背】 Labour is the most glorious. I’d like to share my labour experience with you. Last year on Arbor Day, our school organized a tree planting activity. That was my first time to plant trees, and I was very excited. My teacher gave me a young tree. First, I chose a right place where the tree could get much sunlight. Second, I dug a deep hole. Third, I put the tree in the hole and filled the hole with some soil. Finally, I watered the tree. Although I was very tired, I was happy. After the tree planting activity, I often went to water the small tree I planted. Now it is taller than my father. I feel a great sense of achievement. The labour experience will be an unforgettable activity in my school life. No pains, no gains. Labour makes me happy! Passage 3 2023年 7月末，我们的家乡出现了灾害性特大暴雨天气，受损严重。家乡人民众志成城， 积极抗洪救灾。 假如你是李华，你的笔友 Peter非常关心你和你的家乡，想了解一下这次灾情的情况。请 你用英文回复邮件，简述家乡受灾的基本情况，谈谈令你印象深刻的人或事以及感受。 提示词语：flood (洪灾), damage, seriously, neighbour, inspiring 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 提示问题：● What was your hometown like during the flood? ● Who or what impressed you? ● How did you feel? 【满分范文必背】 Dear Peter, Thank you very much for your concern. Disastrous heavy rains occurred in our hometown, causing serious damage in 2023 July. Many low-lying communities flooded again. It was full of muddy water. The PLA men arrived immediately to rescue the villagers of the flooded areas. And they did their best to fight against the flood. They supplied the villagers with fresh vegetables and food. Some medical teams were organized to help us so that we could have a healthy diet. After a long time, everything went on very well. And that was a sign of victory. I was deeply moved by these people. Yours, Li Hua Passage 4 现实中，总会有这样一个人。他（她）有一种独特的人格魅力。这种魅力是令人钦佩的性 格、品质、行为……。他（她）散发出的令人钦佩的气质一直吸引着你，伴随你的成长。 某英文网站正在开展以“令我钦佩的人”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一 篇短文投稿，介绍一下谁是你敬佩的人，你为什么钦佩他（她），以及你从他（她）身上学到 了什么。 提示词语：help, enjoy, friendly, work hard, take action 提示问题： ●Who is the person you admire? ● Why do you admire him or her? ● What have you learnt from him or her? 【满分范文必背】 I admire my mother very much. She is helpful and careful. Every day she gets up very early and goes to bed late. She is not only busy with her work but also takes good care of our family. What’s more, she is very helpful to others. When people around 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 her are in trouble, she’s always ready to help them to solve the problems. All the people like her. I’m lucky to have such a good mother. I love her and I have learned a lot from her. I have known the importance of responsibility and helping others. I will work hard and try my best to help others. Yours, Li Hua Passage 5 根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50词的文段写作。 文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 某英文网站正在开展”Tips for Online Learning”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华, 请用英 语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在线上学习过程中遇到过什么困难，你是怎样解决这些困难的。 提示词语: attention, difficulty, progress 提示问题: ·What online learning problems do you have? ·What did you do to solve these problems? 【满分范文必背】 Online learning is a kind of network learning. We have classes form Monday to Friday. We begin our class at eight in the morning and finish it at four in the afternoon. The subjects we study online are the same as those at school. We have eight classes every day. We do eye exercises between classes to protect our eyes every day. In the past, it was easy for me to skip in class. So I often couldn’t hear what the teacher said. To solve this problem, I asked my parents to accompany me in class. After a month of study, I can finally listen carefully. I can also take the initiative to find out problems and ask teachers and classmates for help. Now I like online classes very much. Passage 6 假如你是李华，你们学校正在举办“我最喜欢的书”的主题活动。请用英语写一封电子邮件 向你们班交换生 Peter介绍你最喜欢哪一本书，这本书的主要内容是什么以及你喜欢的原因。 提示词语：favourite，writer，words，learn，spirit 提示问题： ●What’s your favourite book? ● What is the book about? 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 5 ●Why do you like it? 【满分范文必背】 Dear Peter, How are you? My name is Li Hua and I’m a middle school student in Beijing. Today I’d like to say something about my favourite book. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is my favourite book. It was written by the famous American writer Mark Twain. It was about a lovely, naughty boy who always played tricks on his aunt Polly. Tom and his friend Becky didn’t like to go to school, and they always ran away from school and began their own adventures. I like the book because the words are easy to understand and the story is meaningful. After reading the book, I learned that I should learn Tom Sawyer’s spirit of adventure. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua Passage 7 假如你是李华，你们学校正在组织观看“天宫课堂”太空授课活动。你们班交换生 Peter 给 你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他观看的时间和地点，以及需要做什么 准备。 要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词 数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语：lab, online, notebook, questions 提示问题：●When and where will you watch the class? ● What do you advise Peter to prepare for it? 【满分范文必背】 Dear Peter, How is it going? Our school will organize us to watch the Tiangong Class. All students should participate in the school auditorium. We will watch the life and working conditions of astronauts, and have a deep understanding of their magical daily life and challenging daily tasks. In addition, those lucky 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 students even interact with astronauts through video calls. We should prepare pens and books, and also prepare some scientific questions that we are interested in. If there is anything that I can do, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua Passage 8 假设你是李华。你的英国笔友 Peter 正在安排他的寒假生活，他给你发来邮件，询问你的 假期安排，如做家务、旅游、学习、做公益等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你的寒假计划 及理由并给他提出相关建议。 提示词语：housework, travel, read, volunteer, skill, meaningful 提示问题： ·What is your plan for the winter vacation? And why? ·What do you advise Peter to make his plan? 【满分范文必背】 Dear Peter, I’m glad that you asked for my advice on how to spend the winter vacation. As for me, I have several plans in mind. Firstly, I plan to join in an English reading camp to improve my English. This will not only help me prepare for high school but also change my skills of thinking. Secondly, I want to volunteer in my community to get experience in helping the old in need. Thirdly, I also want to help my parents do some housework. Lastly, I plan to travel to Xi’an which is famous for Terra-Cotta Warriors. In general, I advise you to find a hobby or activity that you enjoy and carry it out during the winter vacation. Then you will also have a meaningful vacation. I hope my advice helps. Please write to me if you need any more help. Yours, Li Hua Passage 9 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Chris明年暑假将来你校交换学习。他给你发来邮件，询问 你校的情况，并表达了想自学汉语的愿望。请你用英语回复一封邮件，简单介绍你校的情况， 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 7 并为他自学汉语提供一些建议。要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50词的文段写 作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语： beautiful, teaching building, library, use songs, watch movies 提示问题： What is the school like? How can you learn Chinese well? 【满分范文必背】 Dear Chris, I’m writing to tell you something about the school first. Our school is nice and beautiful. There is a six-floor teaching building, a big library, a dining hall and a gym. We have many after-school clubs. You will love it! As for Chinese learning, you can use some chants, songs and pictures to help you remember characters or sentence structures. It’s also a good idea to read Chinese stories or watch movies to improve your reading and listening skills. Most importantly, try to use the language in daily life if possible. Hope my advice will help. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua Passage 10 “立身以立学为先”，人生是一个不断学习和进步的过程。通过学习，你掌握了某种技能， 明白了某种道理。 某英文网站正在开展以“A Learning Experience”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英 文写一篇短文投稿，分享你的一次学习经历，以及你从中得到的收获。 要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词 数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语： swim, afraid, encourage, practice, confidence 提示问题： 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 8 Share a story about your learning experience. What have you learned from the experience? 【满分范文必背】 Learning happens anytime and anywhere. I learned to swim when I was 12 years old. Being afraid of water, I couldn’t even move my feet when I stood beside the pool. My coach encouraged me a lot and I finally got my feet wet, and gradually got deeper into the water. After a lot of practice, I became a good swimmer and even won the first prize in a swimming competition. From my experience, I’ve learned that confidence plays a huge part in learning. And hard work is just the key to success. Passage 1 假如你是李华，你校英语社团的公众号计划做以“My Favorite Book”为主题的系列推送。请 你用英语给社团公众号留言，推荐你最喜欢的一本书，谈谈你喜欢的理由及收获。 提示词语：writer，interesting，encourage 提示问题： ·What is your favorite book? ·Why do you like it? ·What benefits have you got from it? Reading can make our life colorful. _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 模块二 实战练笔 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 Passage 2 某英文网站正在开展以“榜样”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投 稿，谈谈谁是你心中的榜样，你的理由，以及他/她对你的影响。 提示词语: helpful, care, work hard, overcome (克服) 提示问题: Who is your role model? Why is he/she your role model? What influence has he/she had on you? Everyone may have his own role model. _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 假设你是李华。你的英国笔友 Peter 给你发来邮件，想询问你身边的感人故事。请你用英 文回复他的邮件，分享发生在你生活中的感人故事以及你的收获。 提示词语：nervous, encourage, help, confidence, light up 提示问题：●What moving story would you like to share? ●What have you learned from the story? Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to share you a moving story that happened in my life. _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 10 Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua Passage 4 “世界是一本书，而不旅行的人只读了其中的一页。”—— 奥古斯狄尼斯。 某英文网站正在开展以“我的旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投 稿，谈谈你的一次旅行，去了哪里，你看到了什么，做了什么，以及你的收获。 提示词语：stay, famous, unforgettable 提示问题： ●Where did you go? ●What did you see and what did you do? ●How did you feel? My Journey The world is so beautiful and I want to see it with my own eyes._____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 挫折是人生的必修课。只有经历挫折，才能让我们真正的成长。某英文网站正在开展以“挫 折与成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你曾遇到了什 么困难，你又是如何克服的，以及你的收获。 提示词语：problem, face, try your best, work out 提示问题：·What difficulty did you meet? ·How did you deal with it? 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 11 ·What have you learnt from it? _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 昌平区正在开展创建文明城区工作，各个学校正响应号召优化校园建设。假如你是李华， 你校公众号英文版正在开展以“创建文明城区，共建美丽校园”为主题的征文活动。请用英文写 一篇短文投稿，描绘你在校园中发现的美，如校园环境、校园文化、校园故事等，并谈谈你能 为建设美丽校园做的具体事情。 提示词语：environment, school cultures, behaviors, volunteer, help 提示问题：·What makes you think your school is beautiful? ·What can you do to make your school more beautiful? _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________