Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks. Section B (3a-3b) 单元主题写作 2023-2024学年人教版英语八年级下册

Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks. Section B (3a-3b) 单元主题写作 主题分析 本单元写作情境为“志愿服务和慈善”,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务与人际关系”这一主题群,涉及子主题“志愿服务与公共服务”。常见的写作任务是介绍志愿服务的经历、志愿服务申请及志愿服务通知,体裁多为记叙文或应用文。 一、素材积累 【单元主题词汇】 志愿服务和慈善 Volunteering and charity 提供帮助 Offering help help, offer, volunteer, repair, raise, give out, hand out, fix up 志愿活动 Volunteering activities clean up, cheer up, put up, care for, give away 【单元主题佳句】 开头句 1. I think it’s great to be a volunteer. 2. Doing volunteer work can bring me a sense of satisfaction.. 中间句 1. I’m good at drawing, so I’ll teach children to draw pictures. 2. He wants to help them do something useful and make them not feel lonely. 结尾句 1. If people help each other, our world will be a big family full of love. 2. Helping others can bring happiness. 名言警句 1. Helping others is helping ourselves. 帮助别人就是帮助我们自己。 2. Roses given, fragrance in hand. 赠人玫瑰,手有余香。 二、以读促写 请结合你了解的志愿服务知识,以 “What should volunteers do?”为题,写一篇英语短文。 注意:1. 语言表达准确,内容通顺,结构完整;2. 80 词左右。 参考词汇:be interested in 对……感兴趣;a feeling of satisfaction 满足感 第一步:审题 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称 第二步:列框架 确定话题 Volunteering can help... 描述示例 I like telling stories... I’m really good with kids... I usually help people carry... 总结感受 I’m happy to help others. It makes me have a feeling of satisfaction. 第三步:教材句型微训练 1. 教材原句: I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the animals get better and the look of joy on their owners’ faces. 结构解读:a strong feeling of satisfaction 表示“一种强烈的满足感” 仿写:当我收到礼物的时候,我有一种强烈的满足感。 _ 2. 教材原句: You helped to make it possible for me to have Lucky. 结构解读:make it possible for sb. to do sth. 表示“使得某人有可能做某事” 仿写:手机使得我们有可能与任何地方的任何人交谈。 _ 参考答案:When I received a gift, I had a strong feeling of satisfaction. Mobile phones make it possible for us to talk to anyone from anywhere. 第四步:连句成篇 优秀作文 What should volunteers do? Volunteering can help others, and it can also help myself.I think to be a volunteer is great. To give people in need some help is necessary. I like telling stories and jokes to old people. It can make them happy. I’m really good with kids. I am able to help them with their homework. I look after the kids and play with them. I usually help people carry the heavy things while I am walking together with them in my neighborhood. In a word, if I am a volunteer, I will take part in all kinds of activities. I’m happy to help others. It makes me have a feeling of satisfaction. 满分作文 What should volunteers do? I believe volunteering can not only help others but also help myself.① I think it’s great to be a volunteer. It is necessary to give people in need some help. ② At first ③ , I like telling stories and jokes to old people to make them happy.④What’s more③, I ’m really good with kids. I am able to help them with their homework when I look after the kids and play with them. Finally③, I usually help people carry the heavy things while I am walking together with them in my neighborhood. In a word, if I am a volunteer, I will take part in all kinds of activities. I’m happy to help others, which makes me have a feeling of satisfaction.⑤ Helping others is helping ourselves.⑥ 满分指导 ①处用宾语从句,并用not only...but also结构,使句子结构更丰富。 ②处使用高级句型“It is + adj . to do sth.”,提升了文章的档次。 ③处增加了at first, what’s more, finally,使文章结构更清晰。 ④处使用动词不定式作目的状语,使句式结构更灵活。 ⑤处使用非限制性定语从句将两个简单句合并为一个复合句,体现了较高的写作水平。 ⑥处增加了名言警句,使文章上升了一个档次。 三、迁移写作 假如你是李华,请给你加拿大的笔友Eric 写一封不少于70 词的邮件, 介绍你和你的朋友的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下: 时间 上周日 地点 学校附近的街区 活动 上午:打扫街道,帮助老人做家务 下午:给小朋友讲故事 感受 帮助别人是快乐的 参考词汇:志愿者工作volunteer work;街区neighborhood;打扫街道clean the street;做家务do housework;讲故事tell stories;帮助他人help others Dear Eric, _ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案: How’s it going? Last Sunday, I did some volunteer work in the neighborhood near our school with my friends. And we were glad that we could do something useful. In the morning, we helped to clean the street. And then we went to the old people’s home to help them do housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the kids in the children’s home. I was excited about staying with them. That day, I was busy but very happy. I think it’s great to be a volunteer. Helping others can bring happiness not only to others but also to ourselves. ( 1 ) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$