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Section Ⅴ Writing—写一封倡议信
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Dear Friends,
We are writing this letter to call on everyone to take part in the Clear Your Plate campaign. It urges people to save food by not wasting anything on the dining table. You may not know over 30% of the world's food is wasted, while many people in poor areas do not have enough to eat. In order to save food, we propose:
1.Do not order more than you need in the school canteen.
2.Order less and take leftover food home when dining in restaurants.
3.Call on family members and friends to take part in the campaign.
Reducing daily food waste by just 5% could save millions of people from starvation.Let's start doing what we can to make the world a greener, cleaner place!
With best wishes,
Class 8
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学语言
1.修饰语:副词just
2.高级句式:
①by doing sth
②while连接的并列句
③in order to do sth
④状语从句的省略句
⑤动词-ing形式短语作主语
3.连接词:and
4.时态:一般现在时
学结构
1.提出问题
2.提出建议
3.表达期望/发出号召
[情景任务写作]
假定你是李华,请你给你校所有学生写一封说服性信函,说明环境的重要性,提出现在存在的问题并给出合理建议,希望同学们行动起来保护环境。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Everyone,
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Yours,
Li Hua
[仿写程序步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段:开门见山,引入话题;
主体:阐述理由,给出建议;
尾段:总结全文,发出希望。
2.二仿语言规范美观
①我们都生活在地球上,这是我们的家园。(定语从句)
We all live on the earth which_is_our_home.
②我们只有一个地球。
We have_only_one_earth.
③我们必须照顾好地球。(take care of)
We must take_good_care_of_the_earth.
④保护环境是我们的责任。(it作形式主语)
It's_our_duty to protect our environment.
⑤我们应该要求政府控制来自工厂的污染。(control)
We should ask_our_government_to_control_the_pollution_from_the_factories.
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⑥如果每个人对环境保护做出贡献,地球将变得更加美丽。(条件状语从句,contribution)
If_everyone_makes_a_contribution_to_protecting_the_environment,_the earth will become much more beautiful.
3.三仿句式高级表达
⑦用so将句②和句③合成一句话
We_have_only_one_earth_so_we_must_take_good_care_of_it.
⑧把句⑤改为含定语从句的句子
We_should_ask_our_government_to_control_the_pollution_which_is_from_the_factories.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
Dear Everyone,
We all live on the earth which is our home. We have only one earth so we must take good care of it. There are three problems on our earth,which are pollution,disaster and illness.
It's our duty to protect our environment. First,we should save every drop of water,such as turning off the taps after using it. Second,we should save energy,such as turning off the lights when we leave,doing more walking and so on. Third,we should ask our government to control the pollution which is from the factories.
Let's act now to save our environment. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment,the earth will become much more beautiful.
Yours,
Li Hua
[精彩素材积累]
1.引入:
(1)I am writing to...
(2)These days we are often told that...But is this really the case...
(3)Faced with...,quite a few people argue that...
(4)Currently there is a widespread concern that...
(5)Now people in growing numbers are coming to realize that...
(6)I was very worried when I heard that...
2.阐述:
(1)Here are my reasons. First of all,I think it would be better if...
(2)On the one hand..., on the other hand...
(3)Moreover... /What's more...
(4)However... /Instead...
(5)Here I'd like to give my advice on...
(6)I would like to suggest that... / If I were you, I would...
3.总结:
(1)All things considered...
(2)As far as I'm concerned...
(3)Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.
(4)I do hope that...
[学以致用]
每年的6月5日是“世界环境日”。你校拟举办“禁止瓶装水”活动,假定你是学生会主席李华,请写一封劝说信,呼吁同学们少买瓶装水,爱护环境。信的内容包括:
1.塑料瓶对环境的危害;
2.建议同学们少买瓶装水;
3.号召大家参加活动。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Friends,
I am writing this letter to raise your awareness of protecting our planet. You can help simply by participating in the No Bottled Water campaign.
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Let's start now.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Friends,
I am writing this letter to raise your awareness of protecting our planet. You can help simply by participating in the No Bottled Water campaign.
People tend to think bottled water is more convenient. However, millions of tons of plastic are used worldwide to make water bottles each year. The plastic can take hundreds of years to break down. So let's carry our water in sustainable or reusable bottles. In this way, we can reduce plastic waste. If you have to purchase a plastic bottled beverage, remember to recycle the bottles. What's more, ask our family members to take part in this campaign. Everyone is responsible for making our planet cleaner and better by doing what we can.
Let's start now.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
40分写作限时练(六)
(时间:45分钟 满分:40分)
(本栏目内容,在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订!)
Ⅰ.应用文写作(共15分)
(2024·江西九江期末)
假定你是李华,你和同学喜欢在周末一起去爬山,经常看到有人在山上捕鸟杀鸟,你觉得有必要向当地的野生动物保护协会反映这一情况。请你用英语写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.山上看到的情况;
2.保护鸟类的原因;
3.保护鸟类的措施。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a high school student. I am writing to tell you the situation where some people are catching or even killing the lovely birds in the woods on the top of the mountain in our area.
It is known that birds are human beings' friends. They can catch pests of the plants for farmers and make our environment much livelier. So we should live harmoniously with them.
In order to protect birds from being caught or killed, we should widely spread the laws of animal protection. Besides, education and raising people's awareness are effective measures.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写(共25分)
(2024·安徽淮南期末)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When my daughter Rachel was 6 years old, we went to the local shelter, looking for a perfect cat. We liked all the cats we saw there, but we especially loved one that was black with a small white tip to her tail, like a bright star in the night sky. We brought her home and called her Starry.
Starry was lovely. At night when we watched TV, she would come into Rachel's lap and comfortably stay there. Starry always got her face close to Rachel's, ending her love with a gentle touch on Rachel's nose. Sometimes I felt so jealous (忌妒的) of their love. Although I was the one who took care of the cat, feeding and cleaning it, Starry was clearly Rachel's cat. Finally, I came to love watching their close relationship.
My little girl grew up and went to senior high school. Starry and Rachel were still close, though Rachel spent less and less time at home.Starry spent most of her day sitting on the sideboard in the dining room, looking out of the window into the backyard. I loved seeing her as I passed by her, for her shiny black coat almost sparkled (闪烁) in the sunlight and the white tip of her tail looked bright against the shining black of her body.
One Sunday morning, early in November, Starry got out of the room before we could stop her. When Rachel came home from school, she went into the room with a worried expression. “Where's Starry?” she asked. When we told her we didn't know, she led us outside with her. There was a black cat lying on the street.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
It was Starry._____________________________________________________________
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Days without Starry went by, but one Christmas recalled us of Starry._________________
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参考范文:
It was Starry. Rachel was upset and hurried to hold it tightly. The cat's body was warm. Carefully, we picked Starry up and rushed her to the vet's. The vet examined her briefly before looking up at us and said. “I'm sorry. She's gone.” When Rachel heard this, she kept silent, tears rolling down her cheeks. On our way home, I held back my tears and comforted my daughter. “Life needs to go on.”
Days without Starry went by, but one Christmas recalled us of Starry. When we were out Christmas shopping, we saw a Christmas tree decoration in the shape of a “cat angel”, a black cat with white wings.We immediately bought it wondering if it would be a happy remembrance of the cat we'd loved.When we got home, we painted a white tip at the end of the angel cat's long black tail and hung it on the Christmas tree.We looked at the tree,and thinking our lovely and nose-touching cat was gone. But now Starry, the Christmas angel, would be a part of our family tradition for years to come.
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