UNIT 4 Section Ⅴ Writing—读后续写-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年新教材高一英语必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书word（外研版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing—读后续写 ◎ Stepping out of jail into the cold wind，Bob，now 58，felt lost and helpless. “Twenty years is a long time，” he smiled bitterly，not knowing where to go.He had no family，and had never heard a word from Jimmy again since that cold，dark night.“Was he ashamed of having a friend like me？” Bob longed for an answer. “Excuse me，sir，are you Bob？” Bob heard the voice of a young man. “Yes.” He turned around and was surprised to find a familiar-looking man in his thirties.“Have we met before？” “No，sir，” replied the man.“My father told me to meet you today.I have a note for you from him.” Doubtfully，Bob unfolded the note.His hands were shaking by the time he had finished reading. Bob，the doctor says I've only got three months.I'm afraid I won't be able to meet you this time，but you'll always be my dear friend. Jimmy “You're Jimmy's son？！” Bob shouted in surprise. “Yes，sir，” the young man smiled.“And my name is Bob.” ◎ 学语言 本文是一篇读后续写，原文是欧·亨利的《二十年后》，文章主要续写的是两个失去联系的好友是如何实现二十年之约的。 范文中，作者添加了新的人物——好友的儿子，他赴约给父亲送信，最终实现了两人的二十年之约。 文章开头作者运用cold wind，cold，dark night等环境描写衬托出了主人公Bob的心境；运用心理描写表现出了主人公Bob的无助、无奈与困惑；运用自言自语道出了主人公Bob对朋友的渴望以及对自己的自我安慰。最后，在朋友儿子出现后，作者通过shaking等动作描写表现出了主人公的感动之情；通过surprised，doubtfully，shouted等词对人物进行了生动的刻画。最后通过朋友儿子的自我介绍对文章主题进行升华，使文章回味无穷。 学生用书第117页 知结构 范文的主要线索为主人公Bob的情绪变化： lost and helpless→not knowing where to go→surprised→doubtfully→shouted in surprise [情境任务写作] 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I still remember it，like it was yesterday when my parents told me the news.It was the week before Christmas on Thursday morning when my parents said，“Stacy，start packing your things so we can go to Florida for the holidays.” “Okay，” I responded.We do this every year for Christmas and New Year.It's kind of a family tradition we have.We go every year because we like to visit some family members living in Florida.There has never been a year when we've missed a trip to Florida for the holidays.I was so excited to go on this trip because Christmas is my favorite holiday，but to top it off I was going to get to celebrate it with my family. The next morning，my mother entered my room.“Stacy，wake up! We need to go to the airport so that we can get our plane tickets to Florida before they sell out.” I jumped out of bed and got ready as fast as I could.When we were on our way to the airport，I couldn't stop talking and smiling because I was too excited about getting our tickets. “Aren't you just excited to go to Florida？” I asked. “Yes，I am.We can finally catch up with the family and drink hot cocoa，” responded my mother. The airport was so crowded.Some people were leaving to other countries and others were just visiting for the holiday.There was such a huge line in the airport because so many different people were buying plane tickets. When it was our turn，my mother said，“Three tickets to Florida on Christmas Eve please.” The lady working there responded，“Well，you guys are lucky.You got the last three tickets to Florida.” My mother and I both smiled in relief and paid for our tickets and went back home to finish packing. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 When we arrived home，we found my father was lying on the floor，bleeding. _________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 学生用书第118页 After we left for the airport to buy tickets，a man climbed into our house to steal money. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ [仿写程序步骤] 1．一仿结构布局合理 第一段：根据首句可知，回家之后发现父亲发生意外，本段应该描述父亲发生事故后我们进行的救治； 第二段：根据首句提示可知，本段应该描述事故发生的经过。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①在医生的帮助下，我父亲在平安夜苏醒过来，这使我们全家都很高兴。 With the help of doctors，my father came back to life on Christmas Eve，making our family pleased． ②我母亲日夜陪伴着我父亲，完全忘记了去佛罗里达的旅行。 My mother kept my father company day and night，and she completely forgot the trip to Florida. ③听到这个消息，我们为他感到骄傲。 When we heard the news，we were proud of him. ④我永远不会忘记我和父亲在医院度过的圣诞夜。 I will never forget the time spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital． 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑤把句①改为含有定语从句的复合句 With the help of doctors，my father came back to life on Christmas Eve，which made our family pleased. ⑥用动词-ing形式短语作结果状语改写句② My mother kept my father company day and night，completely forgetting the trip to Florida. ⑦把句③改为含有非谓语动词的简单句 Hearing the news，we were proud of him. ⑧把句④改为含有定语从句的复合句 I will never forget the time (which/that) I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ When we arrived home，we found my father was lying on the floor，bleeding.Though we felt very surprised，we sent him to hospital at once.With the help of doctors，my father came back to life on Christmas Eve，which made our family pleased.My parents loved each other very much，so my mother kept my father company day and night，completely forgetting the trip to Florida.After my father woke up，he said sorry to us and told us everything that had happened to him. After we left for the airport to buy tickets，a man climbed into our house to steal money.My father caught him and bravely fought with him，but unfortunately the man hurt my father.Hearing the news，we were proud of him.On Christmas Eve，we held a party in hospital for my father.Everyone got together around the Christmas tree and sang Christmas songs to him.That Christmas Eve was quite unusual and meaningful.I will never forget the time I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital. [精彩素材积累] 1．动作描写 ①He dropped/lowered his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。 ②Speechless，she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms. 她说不出话来，把儿子一把揽入怀中，脸上洋溢着动人的光彩。 ③Wanting to appear agreeable，I bent down，picked up the ball and，eyes half-shut，threw it back as hard as I could. 我想显得和和气气，便弯下腰捡起球，半闭着眼睛，用尽全力把它扔了回去。 2．心理描写 ①A bright smile appeared on/spread across his face. 他脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。 ②My heart seemed to be torn. 我的心都要碎了。 ③Her heart was thumping with excitement. 她激动得心怦怦跳。 ④At the sight of the fierce wolf，I felt very scared. 看到那只凶猛的狼，我感到非常害怕。 学生用书第119页 3．情感描写 ①The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 ②A smile of understanding flashed across his face. 他脸上露出了一种会心的微笑。 ③He stood silently，tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。 [学以致用] 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I truly learned what a best friend is in my first year at high school.Kate and I were good friends and we were inseparable (分不开的).We spent every day together and always had a good time. Then basketball season started and we were on the same team.After a few games，however，Kate got moved up to the Rose Cup full-time.I wouldn't admit it then，but in fact I envied (嫉妒) her much.Having different practice times，we began to see less of each other and talked less.Soon I was told by others that she was talking behind my back. One night，I called Kate to tell her about my new haircut.To my great surprise，the next day at school she told everyone that I copied her style because she had told me she wanted to get hers cut like this.As a result，I was angry and quite disappointed with her.At noon she handed me a letter and walked away instead of talking with me.I couldn't accept the cruel words on the paper.In great anger，I wrote right back to her.Over the next week，we exchanged more hurtful letters.I cried myself to sleep every night，believing our friendship was over. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 One night my mom took me to Kate's home.___________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ It has been five months since we broke up with each other.____________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] One night my mom took me to Kate's home.Our moms looked at each other，nervous and worried.Kate's mom asked us questions but we both kept silent.I stared at the floor，angry and sad.At last，I let everything out with tears in my eyes.The huge burden in my mind was slowly lifted as we each talked about how we were feeling these days.To my relief，it was all out.Suddenly，to my great surprise，Kate rose from her seat，crossed the room and hugged me with tears.Then I could hardly hold back my tears and hugged her back. It has been five months since we broke up with each other.Last weekend we played together again，laughed a lot and had a good time.It makes me happy that we are not only learning to care about each other more but also value our friendship.Now I know whenever I am asked about my friends at high school，Kate will be my best friend forever. 40分写作限时练(四) (时间：45分钟　满分：40分) (本栏目内容，在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订！) Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分) (2024·陕西高一期中) 假定你是李华，收到了英国好友Alex的电子邮件。他说上高中后，他与之前的一些朋友的感情变淡，有些甚至失去了联系，不知道如何保持长久的友谊。请给Alex写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．了解到Alex的问题； 2．为他提出至少两条建议； 3．希望能够帮助他。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Dear Alex， I'm sorry to hear that you're experiencing difficulties maintaining your friendships since starting high school.Here are two suggestions that might help you. First of all，make an effort to stay in touch.Even if it's difficult to meet up regularly due to busy schedules，you can try to make time to send messages，chat online，or call each other.Besides，create shared experiences and interests.Try to find common ground with your friends and pursue shared interests together. I hope these suggestions are helpful to you. Yours， Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·云南高一期中) Dad and Madison were walking through the party store，gathering decorations for Madison's upcoming birthday party.Every year，her parents would hold a birthday party for her to invite classmates. “But I don't want to invite Lucy Gilbert！” “We already discussed this.You are inviting all the girls from your class.” “But I don't like Lucy Gilbert！” Lucy Gilbert was a new girl in class.Her family just moved here a little over a month ago.As a new classmate，she always sat in the corner by herself and didn't talk to anyone.And every day at lunch，she sat all by herself，eating alone. “Madison，you are being unreasonable.Think about how she would feel.She doesn't know anyone in the school.She left all of her old friends behind and now she has to try to make new friends.Your party will be a great chance for her to get to know everyone.” Madison rolled her eyes.Sometimes Dad just didn't get it. On Saturday morning，her parents were busy preparing for the party while Madison and her best friend were feeding her horse Star in the barn.What she loved most was to be outside riding her horse.And what she talked about most in school with her friends was her Star. Madison greeted her friends at the doorstep，picturing various presents her friends would bring her.In the meanwhile，she was wondering whether Lucy would ruin the party if she came.Anyhow，all the girls she invited came finally，including Lucy.The girls had a fantastic time by singing and dancing while Lucy sat in the corner silently alone.Later，all the girls gathered around the table as Madison opened her presents.Opening them one by one，Madison thanked her friends，with a bright smile on her face. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Lucy's present was the very last to be opened._____________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Madison pulled the horse rope out of the box.______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Lucy's present was the very last to be opened.Madison picked up the present and tore the wrapping paper.Worrying that it would ruin the party，Madison opened it slowly.To her surprise，a handmade blue horse rope came into view，which was so beautiful under the sunshine! Madison was amazed at its beauty，when Lucy said，“It's a horse rope for your Star.I made it by myself！” Madison pulled the horse rope out of the box. With her eyes tied to it，Madison said in excitement，“It was the prettiest one I'd ever seen！” Holding the horse rope，Madison suddenly realized she had been so mean to Lucy.With tears welling in her eyes，she felt a mixture of regret and gratitude.“Thank you so much！” Madison said sincerely，putting her arm around Lucy's shoulders.They eventually became good friends. 学生用书第120页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$