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Section Ⅴ Writing——介绍一位喜剧演员
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Charlie Chaplin's Legacy
1.Charlie Chaplin was a British actor, filmmaker and composer. He became famous in the 1910s,when films were silent and in black and white.
2.Charlie Chaplin was one of the best comedy actors of his time because he knew how to use his body and facial features to make people laugh. In my opinion, the funniest thing about Charlie Chaplin was the way he walked when he was acting as the Tramp,who is his most famous character.The Tramp is a poor man with a kind heart who has unexpected adventures. These adventures,often involving the police,are usually the funniest scenes.
3.My favourite Charlie Chaplin film is Modern Times and my favourite scene is in the factory where Charlie Chaplin is working on a production line. When a bee starts circling around Charlie's face, he falls behind with his work. It's so funny to watch him trying to keep up!
4.I think the power of Charlie Chaplin's works is not only in his acting,but also in the stories and characters he created. The Tramp is a symbol of the silent cinema and even after so many years, he is still able to make people laugh.
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学语言
第一段中when引导定语从句,修饰先行词the 1910s。
第二段运用多种语法,如:疑问词+不定式作宾语,不定式作目的状语,the way+定语从句,定语从句,现在分词短语作定语等详细介绍了卓别林。
最后一段用not only...but also连接并列表语。
知结构
第一段简要对人物进行介绍。可从人物的身份、出生地以及时间、主要贡献等对人物进行总体介绍。
第二、三段是文章的主体部分,对人物在细节上进行介绍,可介绍喜欢他的原因,他的主要作品等。
第四段为总结段,可发表自己的观点、看法。
[情景任务写作]
假定你最喜欢的喜剧演员是英国的罗温·艾金森(Rowan Atkinson),请根据下面的提示写一篇短文介绍这位喜剧演员。
1.罗温·艾金森出生于1955年。最著名的成就是成功扮演了憨豆先生。
2.在小学时就表现出了惊人的表演天赋。一天,他对着镜子做鬼脸,发现了自己特别的脸。在1990年成功扮演了憨豆先生。
3.憨豆先生是国际公认的电视和电影中的喜剧人物,他经常陷入有趣的境地,让观众觉得非常好笑。
4.罗温·艾金森是世界上最有趣的喜剧演员之一。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[仿写程序步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
第一段:简要介绍该喜剧演员;
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第二段:介绍该喜剧演员的情况及其著名作品;
第三段:对该喜剧演员进行评价。
2.二仿语言规范美观
①在英国,艾金森先生因为很多著名的角色而出名,其中就有“憨豆先生”。
In Britain,Mr Atkinson is_famous_for_many_wonderful_characters and among them is Mr Bean.
②在上小学时,罗温就表现出了惊人的表演天赋。
While Rowan was at primary school,he_showed_admirable_acting_talent.
③一天,他冲着镜子做鬼脸,发现了自己特别的脸。
One day,he was pulling faces in the mirror and at that time he_discovered_his_special_face.
④他经常陷入有趣的境地,这让观众觉得非常好笑。
He often gets into funny situations and it_greatly_amuses_the_audience.
3.三仿句式高级表达
⑤用定语从句改写句①
In_Britain,Mr_Atkinson_is_famous_for_many_wonderful_characters,among_which_is_Mr Bean.
⑥用省略结构改写句②
While_at_primary_school,Rowan_showed_admirable_acting_talent.
⑦用定语从句改写句④
He_often_gets_into_funny_situations,which_greatly_amuses_the_audience.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
Rowan_Atkinson_is_an_actor.In_Britain,Mr_Atkinson_is_famous_for_many_wonderful characters,among_which_is_Mr_Bean.
Rowan_was_born_in_1955.While_at_primary_school,Rowan_showed_admirable_acting talent.One_day,he_was_pulling_faces_in_the_mirror_when_he_discovered_his_special_face.In 1990,he_succeeded_in_playing_the_part_of_Mr_Bean.Mr_Bean_is_an_internationally recognized_comedy_character_on_TV_and_in_films.He_often_gets_into_funny_situations,which greatly_amuses_the_audience.
I_think_Rowan_Atkinson_is_one_of_the_most_interesting_comedians_in_the_world.
[精彩素材积累]
常用开头句:
1.他被全国同胞称为“活着的卓别林”。
He is called “living Chaplin”by his nationwide fellow countrymen.
2.他是来自阿富汗的喜剧演员。
He is a comedian from Afghanistan.
3.阿西尔化妆打扮,看起来就像英国著名演员查理·卓别林。
Asir wears makeup and clothes to look just like the famous British actor,Charlie Chaplin.
常用中间句:
这位演员表示,他的目标是用幽默来帮助人们从每天面临的困难中解脱出来,让人们有机会重新振作起来迎接新的一天。
The actor says his goal is to use humour to help take people's minds off the difficulties they face every day and to give people a chance to refresh themselves for another day.
常用结束句:
我非常钦佩阿西尔,我会尽我所能让人们开怀大笑,给那些有麻烦的人带来阳光。
I can't admire Asir too much and I will do my best to make people laugh and bring sunlight to those in trouble.
[学以致用]
假定你是李华,打算发布一个帖子,介绍一位你喜欢的喜剧演员Karim Asir (卡里姆·阿西尔)。内容简介:
人物
Karim Asir
职业
阿富汗喜剧演员
表演风格
在街头和大型活动中表演,模仿查理·卓别林的装扮和肢体动作,被称作“活着的卓别林”
人生目标
用他的幽默帮助人们暂时忘却生活中的困难
你的感受
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注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[参考范文]
Perhaps,Karim Asir is not known to most of us.However,he is called “living Chaplin”by his nationwide fellow countrymen.He is a comedian from Afghanistan.
Asir wears makeup and clothes to look just like the famous British actor,Charlie Chaplin.He also uses similar physical movements.He performs on the streets and at big events.The actor says his goal is to use humour to help take people's minds off the difficulties they face every day and to give people a chance to refresh themselves for another day.
I can't admire Asir too much and I will do my best to make people laugh and bring sunlight to those in trouble.
40分写作限时练(一)
(时间:45分钟 满分:40分)
(本栏目内容,在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订!)
Ⅰ.应用文写作(15分)
(2024·河北省沧衡八校联盟期中)
假定你是李华,你校英文报正在举办主题为“我最钦佩的人”的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.钦佩的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Person I Admire Most
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[参考范文]
The Person I Admire Most
Of all the role models, I admire Zhang Guimei most, the headmaster of Huaping Senior High School for Girls in Yunnan Province.
When Zhang went there to support education decades ago, she was shocked to find a lot of girls dropped out of school due to poverty. Feeling heartbroken, she was determined to create the high school for girls with no fee to light up the dreams of girls in the poverty-stricken areas. Since then, Zhang has been devoting herself to the girls' education and changed thousands of girls' life.
It's her selfless commitment to her students and her persistence for the education career that touch me a lot.
Ⅱ.读后续写(25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·浙江金华11月高二上期中)
One Saturday afternoon, I was watching TV in the living room with my grandpa when a blinding flash of lightning flashed across the sky, followed by a deafening sound, and the pictures on TV disappeared with that sound. Before I realized what had happened, a gray-white shadow rushed in through the open window and flew over my head. Bang! It hit the wall and slid off to the floor. Shaking with fear, I approached it cautiously and saw that it was a pigeon. It looked at me in fear, trying to open its wings and struggling its feet, but apparently powerless.
So I called my grandpa and immediately set out to give it a helping hand. Taking it in my hands, I felt a few drops of warmth on my hands. It was blood! I gently spread its wings and there were a few red feathers inside. “Don't worry. We'll get it out alive,” Grandpa said to me. Then he got the first-aid kit. With some cotton, we dried the blood, cleaned the wound and then put it under a hairdryer to dry. All went smoothly, for the pigeon had no strength left to resist. There happened to be an empty birdcage at home, so I put it in gently and added a little water and some grains.
For the next few days, the moment I got home from school, I would run to feed the pigeon. And Grandpa helped a lot, tidying up the cage daily. Little by little, its strength returned. One evening, I fed it with the biscuit I was eating. It enjoyed it! One week later, its wound almost healed (痊愈); its feathers grew and it became brave. Whenever I sat at the table eating biscuits, it looked up at me, cooing (咕咕地叫) constantly. To my joy, I could also reach into the cage to touch it. When I gently fingered its head, it playfully pecked (啄) at me. Finally it completely recovered. But every time I was with it, it seemed restless in the cage. To make it happy and pretty, I tied an orange string (线)around its leg.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
One day,however, when I returned home,Grandpa met me at the door,looking embarrassed.
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[参考范文]
One day,however,when I returned home,Grandpa met me at the door,looking embarrassed. I asked him what had happened. He turned around and pointed to the birdcage, apologizing to me that the pigeon slid out when he was tidying up the cage and flew away through the open window. Gone! I couldn't believe my ears. I rushed over to the birdcage. Just empty! I stared at the remaining water and grains, tears streaming down my cheeks. “Where has it gone? Will it be hurt again? Will it come back? ...” I asked Grandpa, sobbing. “It will fly back!” he convinced me, wiping away my tears gently.
Sure enough,I saw a pigeon flying into the house the next afternoon! It perched near the birdcage, cooing. Despite great excitement, I approached it quietly. It was gray-white and had an orange string tied to one leg. My pigeon came back! “It must be hungry,” Grandpa grinned. Immediately, I fed it with grains and then tiptoed to the window and closed it, urging Grandpa to cage it. But he didn't. “Pigeons need freedom,” he explained to me patiently. I was hesitant but looking at the pigeon wandering and pecking at the grains peacefully, I realized Grandpa was right! I turned back to the window and opened it.
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