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众相原创 赋能中考
3.Newenergyvehiclesarenotonlycheapbutalsoenviron
mentalyfriendly.
4.Electriccarsarepopularwithmanypeoplebecauseelec
tricitycanbegotindiferentways.
二、 ScienceShapesOurLife
Inthepastfewyears,sciencehasdevelopedathigh
speedandplayedanimportantroleinourdailylives.Itisthe
developmentofsciencethatcreatesmanyinventionsthathelp
uslivebeter.
Recently,myfamilydecidedtoknowthenewoftrans
portationbyorderinganewenergyvehicle.Ifindthatthee
lectriccarseemstobefasterandsmoothercomparedwiththe
traditionalcar.Whatsmore,newenergyvehiclesarenoton
lycheapbutalsoenvironmentalyfriendly.Electriccarsare
popularwithmanypeoplebecauseelectricitycanbegotin
diferentways,suchassolarpowerandwindenergy.
Inthefuture,Ihopewecanhavemoretechnologylike
this.Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourcountry.We
shouldstudyhardandtryourbesttomakeitstronger,beter
andmorebeautiful.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时 ③三;一
二、第一段 Itisveryimportantforustogetclosetonature.;
第二段 Getingclosetonaturecanhelpustorelax,
whichmakesusknowourselvesandtheworldaroundus
beter.;第三段 Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthe
beautyofnatureandprotecttheenvironment.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Whenwearivedatthefarm,thefarmerwascolecting
potatoesinthefield.
2.AlthoughIfeltalitletiredafterthetrip,Ilearnedalot
andenjoyedmyselfonthefarm.
3.Welearnedhowtogrowvegetablesandpickfruits,which
washelpfultoourlifeinthefuture.
二、记叙文范文
MySchoolTrip
LastSaturday,ourclasstookaschooltriptothefarm.
Aftergetingofthebus,wewalkedalongthemountainroad
forhalfanhourbeforewereachedthefarm.Thescenery
alongthewaywasverybeautiful.
Whenwearivedatthefarm,thefarmerwascolecting
potatoesinthefield.HetookustotheFruitFarmandtaught
ushowtopickapples.Wepickedmanyapplesandate
some.Iveneverhadsuchdeliciousapples.Then,wewent
fishingbytheriver.Wecaughtsomefishandgavethemto
thefarmer.Thefarmershowedushowtofeedthechickens
afterthat.
Afterhavingabigdinneronthefarm,wewentbackto
school.AlthoughIfeltalitletiredafterthetrip,Ilearneda
lotandenjoyedmyselfonthefarm.Ilookforwardtovisiting
thefarmagain.
说明文范文
MySchoolTrip
Ihadawonderfulschooltripwithmyclassmateslast
month.Wewenttoafarmandhadfun.Duringthetrip,we
learnedalot.Herearesomeofmythoughtsaboutit.
Firstly,weexperiencedlifeinperson.Welearnedhow
togrowvegetablesandpickfruits,whichwashelpfultoour
lifeinthefuture.Secondly,wegotclosetonatureandtook
infreshair.Thatmadeusgetaclearmind.Thirdly,weun
derstoodtheimportanceofteamworkandcooperation.By
workingtogether,welearnedhowtohelpandencourageoth
ersandalsomademorefriends.
Inmyopinion,aschooltripisverygoodforus.Ihope
wewilhavemorechancestotakepartinthesekindsofactiv
ities.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;现在完成时 ③一
二、第一段 Thatswhyweshouldtryourbesttoprotectthe
earth.第二段Letsalworktogethertospreadtheimpor
tanceofenvironmentalprotectiontotheworldandencour
ageotherstojoininit.;第三段Lovetheearthasitisour
onlyhome.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisimportantforustocreateanenvironmentaly
friendlysociety.
2.Itcannotonlyreducerubbishpolutionbutalsorecycle
rubbish.
3.Ifalofustryourbesttosortrubbish,welleadabeter
life.
二、 RubbishSortingStartswithMe
Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheim
portanceofrubbishsorting.Itcannotonlyreducerubbish
polutionbutalsorecyclerubbish.Itisimportantforusto
createanenvironmentalyfriendlysociety.
Firstofal,wecanlearntheknowledgeofrubbishsor
tingthroughbooksandtheInternet.Besides,wecanjoinin
volunteerservicetohelppeoplesorttheirrubbish.Second,
weshouldthrowalkindsofrubbishindiferentcoloredrub
bishbins.Third,wecanmakeoldclothesintoshoppingbags
andwasteintoart.Themostimportantthingistoreducethe
useofplasticbags.
Ifalofustryourbesttosortrubbish,welleadabeter
life.Alofuscandoourparttoprotecttheenvironmentand
encourageotherstosorttheirrubbish.Letspultogetherand
takeactionfromnowon.
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众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(RJ)
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#wxyz
(环保行动:垃圾分类,节约用水,绿色校园,低碳生活;保护动植物)
【教材单元链接】
人教版 仁爱版
九全 Unit13保护环境 九上 Unit2拯救地球
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开头句
1.Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealized
theimportanceofplantingtrees.
2.Aswealknow,treesareveryimportantnot
onlytotheenvironmentbutalsotohumans.
3.Nowpolutioniseverywhere.Theriverhasbe
comedirty,theskyhasturnedgrayandsome
areasdonothavecleandrinkingwater.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
角度1 垃圾分类
★Garbagesortingnotonlyreducesunnecessa
ryenvironmentalpolution,butalsoreducesthe
amountofwaste.Inordertopreventgarbagefrom
harmingtheenvironmentaswelasourhealth,its
veryimportantforustothrowthegarbageinto
corectgarbagebins.Ihopealthestudentsinour
schoollearnmoreaboutsortinggarbagetomakethe
earthabeterplacetolivein!
角度2 节约用水
★NowIlremembertoturnofthetapwhenI
amdoingthewashing.Besides,wecansavethe
usedwaterforlateruse.Itisalsoagoodideatoen
courageourfriendsandfamilymemberstojoinus!
角度3 绿色校园
★Firstly,ourschoolplantsmanytreesand
flowerseveryyear.Secondly,eachofusstudentsis
acleaner.Ifweseegarbage,wewilactivelypick
itupandputitinthebin.Thirdly,toavoidwaste,
wereusetextbooks.Atthesametime,wewilalso
useolditemstomakesomereusableitems,suchas
usingcansaspenholders.Finaly,tosaveenergy,
weturnofthetapwhenbrushingourteeth.When
weleavetheclassroom,weturnofthelights.
角度4 低碳生活
★“Lowcarbonlifestyle”isakindofnewpa
ternoflifestyle.Livingalowcarbonlifeisgoodfor
everyone.Ialwayswalkorrideabiketoschoolin
steadoftakingacar.Besides,Iwiltrytouse
thingsthatcanberecycled.Ithinkitsmydutyto
livealowcarbonlife.Andeventhesimplestactivi
tycanmakearealdiferencetotheenvironment.
结尾句
1.Ifalofustryourbesttoprotecttheenviron
ment,welleadabeterlife.
2.Howimportantitisforustoprotecttheenviron
ment!Ifwekeepdoingthesethings,Ibelieve
theenvironmentwilbebeterandbeter.Lets
doittogetherfromnowon.
3.Dontletourtearsbecomethelastdropofwater
ontheearth.
俗语/谚语
1.Savewater,shameofwaste.节约用水,浪费
可耻。
2.Dontletourtearsbecomethelastdropofwater
ontheearth.不要让我们的眼泪成为地球上的
最后一滴水。
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话题写作培优册
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保护环境是每个人的责任和义务,我们在生活中的点滴改变就能使环境有所改变。你校校刊英
语专栏正在开展以“WhatCanWeDofortheEnvironment”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短
文,向专栏投稿,谈谈环保的重要性及你的建议。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:讲述环保的重要性时用 ;介绍我们已经在环保方面做了哪些努力时用 。
③人称:介绍我们应该怎么做时用第 人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 引入话题:环保的重要性
参考句型:①Itseveryonesdutytodosth.;②tryonesbesttodosth.
例:Weshouldtryourbesttoprotecttheearth.Thatisthereason.(用why引导的表语从句升格)
第二段 介绍环保的具体做法
参考句型:①startwithsth.;②wouldliketodosth.;③encouragesb.todosth.
例:让我们共同努力,传播环境保护的重要性,并鼓励其他人加入其中。(汉译英)
第三段 结语:呼吁大家保护环境
参考句型:takeactiontodosth.
例:Lovetheearth.Theearthisouronlyhome.(用as引导的原因状语从句升格)
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众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(RJ)
三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
WhatCanWeDoforthe
Environment
Itseveryonesdutytoprotectourenviron
ment.Toprotecttheenvironmentistoprotectour
home.
Togogreen,weshouldstartwithsmal
thingsaroundus.Ihavestartedtoreducetheuse
ofonetimeproducts.Besides,letstrytoturnof
thelightswhenleaving.Letschooseproducts
thataremadefromrecycledmaterials.Finaly,
letsalworktogethertospreadtheimportanceof
environmentalprotectiontotheworldandencour
ageotherstojoinit.
Ihopepeoplecantakeactiontoprotectthe
environmentatonce.
WhatCanWeDofortheEnvironment
Itseveryonesdutytoprotectourenvironment.The
earthprovidesuswithair,waterandotherthingswe
needforliving.Thatswhyweshouldtryourbesttoprotect
it.Toprotecttheenvironmentistoprotectthehomeonwhich
humanbeingslive.
Togogreen,weshouldstartwithsmalthingsaroundus.
Ihavestartedtoreducetheuseofonetimeproducts,suchas
plasticbagsandwaterbotles.Inaddition,letstrytoturnof
thelightswhenleaving.Whatsmore,letschooseproducts
thataremadefromrecycledmaterials.Finaly,letsalwork
togethertospreadtheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection
totheworldandencourageotherstojoininit.
Ihopepeoplecantakeactiontoprotecttheenvironment
atonce.Lovetheearthasitisouronlyhome.
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一、句子升格练习
1.对我们来说,创建一个环境友好型社会很重
要。(汉译英)
2.Itcanreducerubbishpolution.Itcanrecycle
rubbish.(用notonly爥,butalso爥连接)
3.Welleadabeterlife.Alofustryourbestto
sortrubbish.(用if引导的条件状语从句升格)
二、书面表达
治理白色污染,建立绿色家园。你校英文刊
正在开展以“RubbishSortingStartswithMe”为题
的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投
稿,谈谈垃圾分类的意义和办法。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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