第4部分 话题10 热爱与敬畏自然,与自然和谐共生(2024)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册(人教版 云南专用)

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  话题写作培优册 人与自然 !" 10 #no;pqrsA;rstuv.(2024) (自然景观介绍;自然科学;热爱与亲近自然的活动;自然灾害与防范) 【教材单元链接】 人教版 仁爱版 八下Unit10生活环境   九全Unit3四处活动 / !" #$%& 开头句 1.IfIhadtime,whenyouletmechoosewhatto do,Iwouldchoosetobeclosetonature. 2.Whenwelookaround,itisnaturesendlessgifts thatenrichourlives.Inthetouchofnature,we findpeaceandstrength. 中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文] 角度1 自然科学 ★Thisterm,myteachergavemeataskto growaplantandrecorditschanges.Ichoseasun flowerandnameditSunny.Iputtheseedtoanice containerandcarefulyrecordeditschanges.Each day,IwateredandlookedafterSunnywithcare.It wasfascinatingtoseehowitgrewtalerandstronger slowly.WhenIsawthesunflowergrowwel,Igota strongfeelingofsatisfaction.Andthefunnyshape ofthesunflowermademedeeplyinterestedinit. 角度2  亲近自然的活动 ★LastSunday,Idecidedtogohikinginthe XishanMountainswithmyfriends.Itwasaperfect dayforanouting.Theweatherwassunny,andthe freshairfiledourbodiesaswestartedourclimb. Thepathwassuroundedbybeautifultrees,andwe couldhearbirdssingingalaroundus.Thehike waschalenging,butitwasalsoagreatwaytoexer ciseandstayfit.Reachingthetop,wewererewar dedwithabreathtakingviewofDianchiLake.It wasamomentofjoyandrelaxation. ★OnTreePlantingDay,ourschoolorganized atreeplantingactivityonahilside.Theactivity gaveusachancetogetclosertonature,develop thespiritofteamworkandprotecttheenvironment. Afterarivingthere,wedugholesandcarefulyput theseedlingsintothem.Thenwefiledthehole withdirt. 角度3 自然灾害与防范 ★Whenthereisaflood,weshouldgettohigh groundandmakesurenottowalkthroughtheflood water.Ifanearthquakehappens,wecanhideun derastrongdeskandstayawayfromawindow.Ifa firehappens,wecanuseawettoweltocoverour mouthandnoseandstaylowtotheground.Of course,weshouldtakeactiontopreventfuturedis asters.Wecanplantmoretreesandprotectwild animals.Weshouldalsosharesomerelatedinfor mationwithothers. 结尾句 1.Infrontofnature,weshouldalwayskeepaheart ofawe,respecteverylife. 2.Naturebringsusendlessjoyandenergy.We shouldgetclosetonatureandprotectit. 俗语/谚语 1.Thebeautyofnatureneedshumanprotection.大 自然的美丽需要人类的保护。 2.Natureismansgoodfriend.自然是人类的好朋 友.                                                        14   众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(RJ) '" ()*+   (2024云南)你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“GetingClosetoNature”为题的征文活动。请你用 英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟(如郊游、研学、劳动实践等),或 谈谈接近自然的好处。 要求: 1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。   写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体:本文是一篇    ; ②时态:讲述接近自然带来的好处用    ; ③人称:介绍接近自然带来的好处时用第    人称,介绍“我”应该怎么做时用第     人称。 二、构思框架 第一段 引入话题:亲近自然的重要性 参考句型:①natureisthegreatestgiftof爥;②Itisveryimportantforsb.todosth. 例:对我们来说,亲近自然是非常重要的。(汉译英)                                          第二段 具体介绍亲近自然的好处 参考句型:①helpsb.todosth.;②notonly爥butalso爥 例:Getingclosetonaturecanhelpustorelax.Itmakesusknowourselvesandtheworldaround usbeter.(用which的引导定语从句升格)                                          第三段 结语:号召要多亲近自然 参考句型:①inconclusion;②spendsometimedoingsth. 例:Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthebeautyofnature.Weshouldprotecttheenvironment. (用and连接并列句)                                                               三、分阶范文 初阶范文 高阶范文 GetingClosetoNature   NatureisthegreatestgiftofGodtohumanbe ings.Itisthemostbeautifulsceneryintheworld.It isveryimportantforustogetclosetonature. Firstofal,getingclosetonaturecanhelpus torelax.Second,getingclosetonaturecanhelpus tobuildahealthylifestyle.Finaly,getingcloseto naturecanhelpustofeelthebeautyofnature. Therefore,getingclosetonatureisveryimpor tantforus.Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthe beautyofnatureandprotecttheenvironment. GetingClosetoNature NatureisthegreatestgiftofGodtohumanbeings.It isthesourceofourlifeandthemostbeautifulsceneryin theworld.Itisveryimportantforustogetclosetonature. Firstofal,getingclosetonaturecanhelpustore lax,whichcanmakeusknowourselvesandtheworld aroundusbeter.Second,getingclosetonaturecannot onlyhelpusbuildahealthylifestyle,butalsohelpus keepfit.Finaly,getingclosetonaturecanhelpustoap preciatethebeautyofnature. Inconclusion,getingclosetonatureisveryimportant forus.Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthebeautyofna tureandprotecttheenvironmentatthesametime. 24   话题写作培优册 ," -./0 一、句子升格练习 1.Thefarmerwascolectingpotatoesinthefield. Wearivedatthefarm.(用 when引导的时间 状语从句升格)     2.Ifeltalitletiredafterthetrip.Ilearnedalot andenjoyedmyselfonthefarm.(用 although 引导的让步状语从句升格)     3.Itwashelpfultoourlifeinthefuture.Welearn edhowtogrowvegetablesandpickfruits.(用 which引导的定语从句升格)     二、书面表达 自然之旅,校园之光,照亮求知的路。你校 英文刊正在开展以“MySchoolTrip”为题的征文 活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享 你的实践之旅(农场体验、户外露营、非遗传承 等),或分享校园旅行的好处。 要求: 1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。                                                                                                       34   众相原创 赋能中考 3.Newenergyvehiclesarenotonlycheapbutalsoenviron mentalyfriendly. 4.Electriccarsarepopularwithmanypeoplebecauseelec tricitycanbegotindiferentways. 二、 ScienceShapesOurLife Inthepastfewyears,sciencehasdevelopedathigh speedandplayedanimportantroleinourdailylives.Itisthe developmentofsciencethatcreatesmanyinventionsthathelp uslivebeter. Recently,myfamilydecidedtoknowthenewoftrans portationbyorderinganewenergyvehicle.Ifindthatthee lectriccarseemstobefasterandsmoothercomparedwiththe traditionalcar.Whatsmore,newenergyvehiclesarenoton lycheapbutalsoenvironmentalyfriendly.Electriccarsare popularwithmanypeoplebecauseelectricitycanbegotin diferentways,suchassolarpowerandwindenergy. Inthefuture,Ihopewecanhavemoretechnologylike this.Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourcountry.We shouldstudyhardandtryourbesttomakeitstronger,beter andmorebeautiful. 78 10 9T£ƒ¤¥¦§ˆƒ¦§¨©ªG 写作剖析 一、①说明文 ②一般现在时 ③三;一 二、第一段 Itisveryimportantforustogetclosetonature.; 第二段 Getingclosetonaturecanhelpustorelax, whichmakesusknowourselvesandtheworldaroundus beter.;第三段 Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthe beautyofnatureandprotecttheenvironment. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.Whenwearivedatthefarm,thefarmerwascolecting potatoesinthefield. 2.AlthoughIfeltalitletiredafterthetrip,Ilearnedalot andenjoyedmyselfonthefarm. 3.Welearnedhowtogrowvegetablesandpickfruits,which washelpfultoourlifeinthefuture. 二、记叙文范文 MySchoolTrip LastSaturday,ourclasstookaschooltriptothefarm. Aftergetingofthebus,wewalkedalongthemountainroad forhalfanhourbeforewereachedthefarm.Thescenery alongthewaywasverybeautiful. Whenwearivedatthefarm,thefarmerwascolecting potatoesinthefield.HetookustotheFruitFarmandtaught ushowtopickapples.Wepickedmanyapplesandate some.Iveneverhadsuchdeliciousapples.Then,wewent fishingbytheriver.Wecaughtsomefishandgavethemto thefarmer.Thefarmershowedushowtofeedthechickens afterthat. Afterhavingabigdinneronthefarm,wewentbackto school.AlthoughIfeltalitletiredafterthetrip,Ilearneda lotandenjoyedmyselfonthefarm.Ilookforwardtovisiting thefarmagain. 说明文范文 MySchoolTrip Ihadawonderfulschooltripwithmyclassmateslast month.Wewenttoafarmandhadfun.Duringthetrip,we learnedalot.Herearesomeofmythoughtsaboutit. Firstly,weexperiencedlifeinperson.Welearnedhow togrowvegetablesandpickfruits,whichwashelpfultoour lifeinthefuture.Secondly,wegotclosetonatureandtook infreshair.Thatmadeusgetaclearmind.Thirdly,weun derstoodtheimportanceofteamworkandcooperation.By workingtogether,welearnedhowtohelpandencourageoth ersandalsomademorefriends. Inmyopinion,aschooltripisverygoodforus.Ihope wewilhavemorechancestotakepartinthesekindsofactiv ities. 78 11 9«i¬­ 写作剖析 一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;现在完成时 ③一 二、第一段 Thatswhyweshouldtryourbesttoprotectthe earth.第二段Letsalworktogethertospreadtheimpor tanceofenvironmentalprotectiontotheworldandencour ageotherstojoininit.;第三段Lovetheearthasitisour onlyhome. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.Itisimportantforustocreateanenvironmentaly friendlysociety. 2.Itcannotonlyreducerubbishpolutionbutalsorecycle rubbish. 3.Ifalofustryourbesttosortrubbish,welleadabeter life. 二、 RubbishSortingStartswithMe Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheim portanceofrubbishsorting.Itcannotonlyreducerubbish polutionbutalsorecyclerubbish.Itisimportantforusto createanenvironmentalyfriendlysociety. Firstofal,wecanlearntheknowledgeofrubbishsor tingthroughbooksandtheInternet.Besides,wecanjoinin volunteerservicetohelppeoplesorttheirrubbish.Second, weshouldthrowalkindsofrubbishindiferentcoloredrub bishbins.Third,wecanmakeoldclothesintoshoppingbags andwasteintoart.Themostimportantthingistoreducethe useofplasticbags. Ifalofustryourbesttosortrubbish,welleadabeter life.Alofuscandoourparttoprotecttheenvironmentand encourageotherstosorttheirrubbish.Letspultogetherand takeactionfromnowon.                                                                      23

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