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话题写作培优册
人与自然
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(自然景观介绍;自然科学;热爱与亲近自然的活动;自然灾害与防范)
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八下Unit10生活环境 九全Unit3四处活动 /
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开头句
1.IfIhadtime,whenyouletmechoosewhatto
do,Iwouldchoosetobeclosetonature.
2.Whenwelookaround,itisnaturesendlessgifts
thatenrichourlives.Inthetouchofnature,we
findpeaceandstrength.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
角度1 自然科学
★Thisterm,myteachergavemeataskto
growaplantandrecorditschanges.Ichoseasun
flowerandnameditSunny.Iputtheseedtoanice
containerandcarefulyrecordeditschanges.Each
day,IwateredandlookedafterSunnywithcare.It
wasfascinatingtoseehowitgrewtalerandstronger
slowly.WhenIsawthesunflowergrowwel,Igota
strongfeelingofsatisfaction.Andthefunnyshape
ofthesunflowermademedeeplyinterestedinit.
角度2 亲近自然的活动
★LastSunday,Idecidedtogohikinginthe
XishanMountainswithmyfriends.Itwasaperfect
dayforanouting.Theweatherwassunny,andthe
freshairfiledourbodiesaswestartedourclimb.
Thepathwassuroundedbybeautifultrees,andwe
couldhearbirdssingingalaroundus.Thehike
waschalenging,butitwasalsoagreatwaytoexer
ciseandstayfit.Reachingthetop,wewererewar
dedwithabreathtakingviewofDianchiLake.It
wasamomentofjoyandrelaxation.
★OnTreePlantingDay,ourschoolorganized
atreeplantingactivityonahilside.Theactivity
gaveusachancetogetclosertonature,develop
thespiritofteamworkandprotecttheenvironment.
Afterarivingthere,wedugholesandcarefulyput
theseedlingsintothem.Thenwefiledthehole
withdirt.
角度3 自然灾害与防范
★Whenthereisaflood,weshouldgettohigh
groundandmakesurenottowalkthroughtheflood
water.Ifanearthquakehappens,wecanhideun
derastrongdeskandstayawayfromawindow.Ifa
firehappens,wecanuseawettoweltocoverour
mouthandnoseandstaylowtotheground.Of
course,weshouldtakeactiontopreventfuturedis
asters.Wecanplantmoretreesandprotectwild
animals.Weshouldalsosharesomerelatedinfor
mationwithothers.
结尾句
1.Infrontofnature,weshouldalwayskeepaheart
ofawe,respecteverylife.
2.Naturebringsusendlessjoyandenergy.We
shouldgetclosetonatureandprotectit.
俗语/谚语
1.Thebeautyofnatureneedshumanprotection.大
自然的美丽需要人类的保护。
2.Natureismansgoodfriend.自然是人类的好朋
友.
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众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(RJ)
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(2024云南)你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“GetingClosetoNature”为题的征文活动。请你用
英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟(如郊游、研学、劳动实践等),或
谈谈接近自然的好处。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:讲述接近自然带来的好处用 ;
③人称:介绍接近自然带来的好处时用第 人称,介绍“我”应该怎么做时用第
人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 引入话题:亲近自然的重要性
参考句型:①natureisthegreatestgiftof爥;②Itisveryimportantforsb.todosth.
例:对我们来说,亲近自然是非常重要的。(汉译英)
第二段 具体介绍亲近自然的好处
参考句型:①helpsb.todosth.;②notonly爥butalso爥
例:Getingclosetonaturecanhelpustorelax.Itmakesusknowourselvesandtheworldaround
usbeter.(用which的引导定语从句升格)
第三段 结语:号召要多亲近自然
参考句型:①inconclusion;②spendsometimedoingsth.
例:Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthebeautyofnature.Weshouldprotecttheenvironment.
(用and连接并列句)
三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
GetingClosetoNature
NatureisthegreatestgiftofGodtohumanbe
ings.Itisthemostbeautifulsceneryintheworld.It
isveryimportantforustogetclosetonature.
Firstofal,getingclosetonaturecanhelpus
torelax.Second,getingclosetonaturecanhelpus
tobuildahealthylifestyle.Finaly,getingcloseto
naturecanhelpustofeelthebeautyofnature.
Therefore,getingclosetonatureisveryimpor
tantforus.Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthe
beautyofnatureandprotecttheenvironment.
GetingClosetoNature
NatureisthegreatestgiftofGodtohumanbeings.It
isthesourceofourlifeandthemostbeautifulsceneryin
theworld.Itisveryimportantforustogetclosetonature.
Firstofal,getingclosetonaturecanhelpustore
lax,whichcanmakeusknowourselvesandtheworld
aroundusbeter.Second,getingclosetonaturecannot
onlyhelpusbuildahealthylifestyle,butalsohelpus
keepfit.Finaly,getingclosetonaturecanhelpustoap
preciatethebeautyofnature.
Inconclusion,getingclosetonatureisveryimportant
forus.Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthebeautyofna
tureandprotecttheenvironmentatthesametime.
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话题写作培优册
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一、句子升格练习
1.Thefarmerwascolectingpotatoesinthefield.
Wearivedatthefarm.(用 when引导的时间
状语从句升格)
2.Ifeltalitletiredafterthetrip.Ilearnedalot
andenjoyedmyselfonthefarm.(用 although
引导的让步状语从句升格)
3.Itwashelpfultoourlifeinthefuture.Welearn
edhowtogrowvegetablesandpickfruits.(用
which引导的定语从句升格)
二、书面表达
自然之旅,校园之光,照亮求知的路。你校
英文刊正在开展以“MySchoolTrip”为题的征文
活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享
你的实践之旅(农场体验、户外露营、非遗传承
等),或分享校园旅行的好处。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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众相原创 赋能中考
3.Newenergyvehiclesarenotonlycheapbutalsoenviron
mentalyfriendly.
4.Electriccarsarepopularwithmanypeoplebecauseelec
tricitycanbegotindiferentways.
二、 ScienceShapesOurLife
Inthepastfewyears,sciencehasdevelopedathigh
speedandplayedanimportantroleinourdailylives.Itisthe
developmentofsciencethatcreatesmanyinventionsthathelp
uslivebeter.
Recently,myfamilydecidedtoknowthenewoftrans
portationbyorderinganewenergyvehicle.Ifindthatthee
lectriccarseemstobefasterandsmoothercomparedwiththe
traditionalcar.Whatsmore,newenergyvehiclesarenoton
lycheapbutalsoenvironmentalyfriendly.Electriccarsare
popularwithmanypeoplebecauseelectricitycanbegotin
diferentways,suchassolarpowerandwindenergy.
Inthefuture,Ihopewecanhavemoretechnologylike
this.Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourcountry.We
shouldstudyhardandtryourbesttomakeitstronger,beter
andmorebeautiful.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时 ③三;一
二、第一段 Itisveryimportantforustogetclosetonature.;
第二段 Getingclosetonaturecanhelpustorelax,
whichmakesusknowourselvesandtheworldaroundus
beter.;第三段 Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthe
beautyofnatureandprotecttheenvironment.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Whenwearivedatthefarm,thefarmerwascolecting
potatoesinthefield.
2.AlthoughIfeltalitletiredafterthetrip,Ilearnedalot
andenjoyedmyselfonthefarm.
3.Welearnedhowtogrowvegetablesandpickfruits,which
washelpfultoourlifeinthefuture.
二、记叙文范文
MySchoolTrip
LastSaturday,ourclasstookaschooltriptothefarm.
Aftergetingofthebus,wewalkedalongthemountainroad
forhalfanhourbeforewereachedthefarm.Thescenery
alongthewaywasverybeautiful.
Whenwearivedatthefarm,thefarmerwascolecting
potatoesinthefield.HetookustotheFruitFarmandtaught
ushowtopickapples.Wepickedmanyapplesandate
some.Iveneverhadsuchdeliciousapples.Then,wewent
fishingbytheriver.Wecaughtsomefishandgavethemto
thefarmer.Thefarmershowedushowtofeedthechickens
afterthat.
Afterhavingabigdinneronthefarm,wewentbackto
school.AlthoughIfeltalitletiredafterthetrip,Ilearneda
lotandenjoyedmyselfonthefarm.Ilookforwardtovisiting
thefarmagain.
说明文范文
MySchoolTrip
Ihadawonderfulschooltripwithmyclassmateslast
month.Wewenttoafarmandhadfun.Duringthetrip,we
learnedalot.Herearesomeofmythoughtsaboutit.
Firstly,weexperiencedlifeinperson.Welearnedhow
togrowvegetablesandpickfruits,whichwashelpfultoour
lifeinthefuture.Secondly,wegotclosetonatureandtook
infreshair.Thatmadeusgetaclearmind.Thirdly,weun
derstoodtheimportanceofteamworkandcooperation.By
workingtogether,welearnedhowtohelpandencourageoth
ersandalsomademorefriends.
Inmyopinion,aschooltripisverygoodforus.Ihope
wewilhavemorechancestotakepartinthesekindsofactiv
ities.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;现在完成时 ③一
二、第一段 Thatswhyweshouldtryourbesttoprotectthe
earth.第二段Letsalworktogethertospreadtheimpor
tanceofenvironmentalprotectiontotheworldandencour
ageotherstojoininit.;第三段Lovetheearthasitisour
onlyhome.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisimportantforustocreateanenvironmentaly
friendlysociety.
2.Itcannotonlyreducerubbishpolutionbutalsorecycle
rubbish.
3.Ifalofustryourbesttosortrubbish,welleadabeter
life.
二、 RubbishSortingStartswithMe
Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheim
portanceofrubbishsorting.Itcannotonlyreducerubbish
polutionbutalsorecyclerubbish.Itisimportantforusto
createanenvironmentalyfriendlysociety.
Firstofal,wecanlearntheknowledgeofrubbishsor
tingthroughbooksandtheInternet.Besides,wecanjoinin
volunteerservicetohelppeoplesorttheirrubbish.Second,
weshouldthrowalkindsofrubbishindiferentcoloredrub
bishbins.Third,wecanmakeoldclothesintoshoppingbags
andwasteintoart.Themostimportantthingistoreducethe
useofplasticbags.
Ifalofustryourbesttosortrubbish,welleadabeter
life.Alofuscandoourparttoprotecttheenvironmentand
encourageotherstosorttheirrubbish.Letspultogetherand
takeactionfromnowon.
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