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人与社会
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(如何交朋友;解决与朋友之间矛盾的经历或建议;如何与父母相处;团队协作精神)
【教材单元链接】
人教版 仁爱版
七上Unit1结交新朋友 八上Unit9邀请
七上Unit5与朋友共度时光 八下Unit4人际沟通
七下Unit8邻里之间
七上Unit1结交新朋友
九下Unit6娱乐和友谊
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开头句
1.Itsveryimportantforustoknowhowtoget
alongwelwithotherpeople.
2.Haveyouheardofthesaying“Manyhandsmake
lightwork.”?Idliketoshareoneofmyexperi
enceswithyou.Itmakesmeunderstanditbet
ter.
3.Nowadays,manyteenagershavedificultyinget
tingonwelwiththeirparents.Hereissomeof
myadvice.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
角度1 交朋友与交朋友的技巧
★Firstly,Istronglyadviseyoutokeepsmil
ing.Itsawaytoshowyourefriendly.Whats
more,youaresupposedtobehelpful.Everybody
wantstomakefriendswithpeoplewhoalwayshelp
others.Finaly,trytofindsomeonewhohasthe
sameinterest.Ifyouhavethesamehobbies,you
wilhavemoretotalkabout.Thenyouwilbe
friendssoon.
★Ilikeplayingbasketbalwithmyclassmates.
ButlastSaturday,Ifeldownandhurtoneofmy
legsbadlywhenweplayedtogether.Myclassmates
tookmetothehospitalquickly.Thedoctorputsome
medicineonmyleg,andthenputabandagearound
thehurtpartoftheleg.Duringmystayinthehos
pital,someofmyclassmatesvisitedmeandhelped
mewithmyschoolwork.Thatsverykindofthem.I
wiltrymybesttohelpothersinthefuture.
角度2 与父母相处的方法
★Weshouldunderstandandrespectourpar
ents.Ifwehavediferentopinions,weshoulddis
cussthemandtrytofindoutwaystoreachan
agreementinsteadofargument.Besides,wecan
talkwiththemaboutourhappinessandproblems.
★Justmakesureyourparentsknowwhat
youredoing.Letthemknowyourfriends.Phone
themifyoustaysomewhereelsesothatyourparents
dontworyaboutyou.Saysorytothemwhenyou
makemistakes.Takeresponsibilityforwhatyou
havedone.
角度3 团队协作
★Asthesayinggoes,“Twoheadsarebeter
thanone.”Withagroup,Icanlearnalotfrom
others.WheneverIhavesomequestions,theyare
alwaysreadytohelp.Withtheirhelp,Ibecome
moreandmoreconfidentinmystudy.Also,whenI
studywithmyclassmates,wecandiscusstheques
tionsfacetoface.Throughdiscussion,wecan
sharediferentideasandgettoknowmoreabout
eachother.
结尾句(表达对人际关系的愿望、祝福、期望等)
1.Ihopemyadvicewilbehelpfultoyouandyou
wilbehappyinyournewschool.
2.Ifwecandoaloftheabove,wewilmake
friendsandbemorepopular.
3.SoIthinkitsveryimportantforustoworkto
gether.Italowsustocompleteataskmoreeas
ilyandbeter.
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俗语/谚语
1.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见
真情。
2.Manyhandsmakelightwork.众人拾柴火
焰高。
3.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.行动胜于
空谈。
4.Onetreedoesnotmakeaforest.独木不成林。
5.Unityisstrength.团结就是力量。
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为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风,你校英文刊正在开展以“BuildaGoodRelationshipwith
OurParents”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,谈谈与父母建立良好关系的重
要性及具体做法。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:介绍与父母建立良好关系的重要性及方法时以 为主,介绍良好的亲子关系会带来
的结果时用 ;
③人称:介绍我们应该怎么做时用第 人称,介绍父母时用第 人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 阐述与父母建立良好关系的重要性
参考句型:①besupposedtodosth.;②makesth.+adj.
例:良好的家庭关系会使我们的生活更快乐。(汉译英)
第二段 说明与父母建立良好关系的具体做法
参考句型:①communicatewithsb.;②bepatientwithsb.;③share爥with爥;④trytodosth.;
⑤disagreewithsth.
例:Wecanofertosharethehousework.Myparentscanhavearestafteradayswork.
(用sothat引导目的状语从句)
例:Dontmakethemangry.Wedisagreewitheachother.Trytotaketheiradvice.
(用and连接并列句,when引导时间状语从句)
第三段 结语:发出号召
参考句型:①givesb.sth.;②Letsdosth.
例:Buildagoodrelationshipwithourparentsfromnowon!(用Letsdosth.句型)
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三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
BuildaGoodRelationshipwithOurParents
Weshouldbuildgoodrelationshipswith
parents.Becauseagoodfamilyrelationshipwil
makeourlifehappier.
First,wecansharethehouseworksothat
theycanhavearestafteradayswork.Sec
ond,weshouldcommunicatewithourparents
oftenandbepatientwiththem.Last,we
shouldrespectourparentsalthetimeandtry
totaketheiradvice.
Parentsgiveuseverythingtheycangive.
Letsbuildagoodrelationshipwithourparents!
BuildaGoodRelationshipwithOurParents
Wearesupposedtobuildgoodrelationshipswithparents.
Becauseagoodfamilyrelationshipwilmakeourlifehappier.
Firstofal,wecanofertosharethehouseworksuchas
doingthedishesorsweepingthefloorsothattheycanhavea
restafteradayswork.Second,weshouldcommunicatewith
ourparentsoftenandbepatientwiththem.Lastbutnotleast,
weshouldrespectourparentsalthetime.Dontmaketheman
gryandtrytotaketheiradvicewhenwedisagreewitheach
other.
Parentsgiveuseverythingtheycangive.Letsbuilda
goodrelationshipwithourparentsfromnowon!
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一、句子升格练习
1.Workingtogetherbringsushappiness.Working
togetherleadsustosuccess.(用notonly爥but
also爥连接,并用 Ibelievethat爥引导宾语从
句)
2.Everybodyaddsfuel.Theflamesrisehigh.(用
when引导时间状语从句)
3.毫无疑问,交流可以帮助我们更多地了解我们
的队友。(用that引导同位语从句)
二、书面表达
(2024成都改编)“众人拾柴火焰高”。在学
习生活中,大家一起团结协作,往往能取得更好
的成果。你校英文刊正在开展以“ManyHands
MakeLightWork”为题的征文活动,请你用英语
写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享你和他人的一次
合作经历(如:运动会,读书报告,DIY等),或谈
谈在团队中合作的重要性与技巧。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Agoodfamilyrelationshipwilmakeourlifehap
pier.;第二段Wecanofertosharethehouseworksothat
theycanhavearestafteradayswork.;Dontmakethem
angryandtrytotaketheiradvicewhenwedisagreewith
eachother.;第三段 Letsbuildagoodrelationshipwith
ourparentsfromnowon!
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Ibelievethatworkingtogethernotonlybringsushap
pinessbutalsoleadsustosuccess.
2.Wheneverybodyaddsfuel,theflamesrisehigh.
3.Thereisnodoubtthatcommunicationcanhelpusknow
moreaboutourteammates.
二、记叙文范文
ManyHandsMakeLightWork
Haveyouheardofthesaying“Manyhandsmakelight
work.”?Idliketoshareoneofmyexperienceswithyou.It
makesmeunderstanditbeter.
Lastmonth,ourteacheraskedustomakeabook
report.Ourteammembersdecidedtoworktogethertodothe
task.Ilikereadingnovelsandalwayshaveabeter
understandingofthecharacters,soIoferedtopickoutthe
excitingpartsofthenovel.MyfriendAmysearchedforsome
informationaboutthewriterwhileothermembersreadsome
reviewsonline.Throughtheteamwork,thereportgotgreat
success.
Fromthisexperience,Ibelievethatworkingtogethernot
onlybringsushappinessbutalsoleadsustosuccess.
说明文范文
ManyHandsMakeLightWork
ThereisanoldsayinginChina,“Unityisstrength.”It
telspeopletheimportanceofteamwork.Bydiscussingwith
membersintheteam,wecancomeupwiththebeterideas.
Buthowtobeagoodteammember?Herearesomeadvicefor
you.
First,thereisnodoubtthatcommunicationcanhelpus
knowmoreaboutourteammates.Weshouldlistentoother
peopleactivelyandexpressourselvesbravely.Second,work
togetheronprojects.Wheneverybodyaddsfuel,theflames
risehigh.Finaly,trustyourteammates.
Alinal,teamworkplaysanimportantroleinourdaily
life.Letsworktogethertocreateabrighterfuture.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时;一般现在时 ③三;一
二、第一段 TraditionalChinesestoriesplayanimportantrole
inChineseculture.;第二段 Theturtleinsistedonpuling
himselfslowlytotheend,thoughhewasquitetired.;第
三段 Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriouslynotonlyinmy
study,butalsoinmylifeinthefuture.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.MyfavoritefestivalistheWaterFestival,whichhas
beenhandeddownasanationalcustomforhundredsof
years.
2.IliketheWaterFestivalbecausepeoplecansplashwater
oneachothertoexpresstheirbestwishes.
3.Peoplebelievethattheroundmooncakesandafulmoon
aresymbolsofbeingtogether.
4.Nomaterhowpeoplecelebratetheholiday,thespiritis
stilthesame.
二、记叙文范文
MyFavoriteFestival
MyfavoritefestivalistheWaterFestival,whichhas
beenhandeddownasanationalcustom forhundredsof
years.IliketheWaterFestivalbecausepeoplecansplash
wateroneachothertoexpresstheirbestwishesandhopeto
washawaydiseases.
Duringthefestival,wecanwatchtraditionalcelebra
tionssuchasdragonboatracing,raising,watersplashingand
soon.DaiandWapeoplealsodresseduptocelebratethe
WaterFestivalwithtourists.
说明文范文
MyFavoriteFestival
WheneverIamaskedaboutmyfavoritefestival,Itel
peoplethatitisMidAutumnFestival.Itsbecausethefesti
valbringsfamiliestogether.
Eatingmooncakesisthemostimportanttraditionofthis
festival.Peoplebelievethattheroundmooncakesandaful
moonaresymbolsofbeingtogether.Intheevening,families
havedinnertogetherandthengoouttoadmirethefulmoon.
Besides,myfamilyandIareusedtogoingonatrip.Itofers
usagoodchancetorelaxbecausepeoplearesmalerthanon
otherpublicholidays.
Nomaterhowpeoplecelebratetheholiday,thespiritis
stilthesame.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③三;一
二、第一段 Somesmartlightscanworkbythemselvesifpeo
plegiveorderstothem.;第二段 Somestudentsdepend
onsmartproductssomuchthattheywillosetheirabili
tiestodothingsbythemselves.;第三段 Ifweusesmart
productscorectly,theywilbringusamoreconvenient
lifeinthefuture.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisthedevelopmentofsciencethatcreatesmanyin
ventionsthathelpuslivebeter.
2.Ifindthattheelectriccarseemstobefaster.
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