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话题写作培优册
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(喜欢的科目;学习方法;最喜欢的书;阅读习惯)
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九全 Unit1学着如何学习 九上 Unit3世界上的英语
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角度1 阅读、学习的重要性/益处
1.Booksaremybestfriends.Readingcanbring
mehappinessandmakemegrowinwisdom.
2.Readingmakesagreatdiferencetoourlives.
Itsimportantforustokeepgoodreadinghabits.
3.Iprefertostudyingroupsbecauseitcanhelp
methinkindependently.
角度2 学习中存在的问题[选自 2024中考
真题优秀范文]
★Lastyear,myEnglishgrammarwasweak.
Becauseofthisproblem,myEnglishwasnotgood.
SoIwenttoaskmyEnglishteacherforhelp.With
thehelpofmyteacherandmyowneforts,myEng
lishscoreshavegradualyimproved.NowIverealy
learnedhowtolearnEnglishbymyself.
角度3 找到正确的读书和学习方法
开头句
1.Englishisimportantandusefultous.Howcan
welearnitwel?Herearemysuggestions.
2.Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.
ManyforeignerswanttolearnChinese.Imhap
pytosharesomewayswithyou.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
★Youdbeterprepareforthenewlessonsin
advance.Whilehavingclasses,youmustlistento
theteachercarefuly.Afterclass,itsbetertofini
shyourhomeworkontimeandreviewwhatyouhave
learned.Ifyouhavediscoveredanymistakes,cor
rectthemimmediately.Thiswilhelpyouformgood
learninghabits.
★Lastyear,IoftenmademistakeswhenIdid
Englishreading.Rememberingtheteacherhadever
toldus,themoreweread,thehigherourreading
abilitywouldbe.Idecidedtotry.Ispentalmy
freetimeonEnglishreading.WheneverIread,I
madeeveryeforttounderstandthearticlesand
wrotedownmyownunderstandingofthem.Gradu
aly,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishreading.
★Ihaveagoodhabitofreading.Ispendover
tenhoursaweekreadingdiferenttypesofbooks.
ThefourgreatclassicalChinesenovelsaremy
favourite.Whenmyfriendsweretalkingaboutfa
mouscharactersinbooks,Icouldntunderstand
them!ThenIpickedupbooksandbeganreading.
Nowgoodbookshavebecomemygoodfriends.
Theyopenupawholenewworldtome.
结尾句
1.Letsstartreadingnow.Andletitbecomeapart
ofourlife.
2.Ihopeyoucanmakegreatprogressbyusingthe
methodsabove.
角度4 喜欢的科目
开头句
1.Westudydiferentsubjectsatschoolandmyfa
voritesubjectisEnglish(Chinese爥)./Ilike
English(Chinese爥)bestinalmysubjects.
2.Amongalthesubjectswelearnatschool,Ilike
learningmathbestandhereIdliketoshare
someofmywaysoflearningmath.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
★MyfavouritesubjectisEnglishbecauseitis
widelyusedintheworld.Weoftenmeetforeigners
inthepublicplaceseveryday.WithEnglish,we
cantalktothemeasily.MyEnglishteacheriskind
andfriendly,whichmakesmelikeEnglishbeter.I
takeEnglishnotescarefulyinclass.Italkwithmy
classmatesinEnglishinclass.IfindEnglishclass
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veryinteresting.IhavealotoffunlearningEng
lish.
结尾句
1.IbelieveifIputmyheartintolearningit,Iwil
makebigprogress.
2.Alinal,geographyrealybringsmemuch
pleasure.Iwilkeepstudyingithard.
俗语/谚语
1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。
2.Nopain,nogain.一份耕耘,一份收获。
3.Nothingisimpossibleforawilingheart.世上无
难事,只怕有心人。
4.Readingtenthousandbooksisliketravelingten
thousandmiles.读万卷书,行万里路。
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你校英文刊正在开展以“MyMostUnforgetableLesson”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短
文,向专栏投稿,介绍你最难忘的一节课的经历、原因及感受(如:英语课、科学课、物理课等)。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:介绍自己难忘的那节课及学到的道理以 为主;
③人称:介绍自己上课的情况和感受时用第 人称,介绍老师上课的情况时用第
人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 引出话题:介绍自己最难忘的课
参考句型:leaveadeepimpressiononsb.
第二段 阐述难忘的原因
参考句型:①asksb.todosth.;②Iwasconfidentthat爥;③nomaterhow爥;④putsth.into
practice
例:Iwasconfident.Icoulddoagoodjob.Ihadworkedoutaloftheexperimenthomework
problems.(用that引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句升格)
例:无论我多么努力,我就是不能把我学到的东西付诸实践。(用what引导宾语从句,no
materhow引导的让步状语从句升格)
第三段 总结:说明从难忘的课程中学到了什么
参考句型:①TheXXclasswasrealymemorablebecause爥;②learnedanimportantlifelessonthat爥
例:Ilearnedtobemodest.Itwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.(用which引导的定语
从句升格)
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三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
MyMostUnforgetableLesson
Wehavehadthousandsoflessonsin
middleschool.Amongthem,themostun
forgetableoneisaphysicsclass.
Intheclass,ourphysicsteacherMr.
Liubroughtsomematerialsandaskedusto
usethemtodoanexperiment.IthoughtI
coulddoagoodjob.SoIoferedtoper
formtheexperimentinfrontofthewhole
class.However,IjustcouldntputwhatI
hadlearntintopractice.
Ilearnedanimportantlifelessonthat
realknowledgecomesfrompractice.
MyMostUnforgetableLesson
Wehavehadthousandsoflessonsinmiddleschool.Someof
themhaveleftadeepimpressiononme.Amongthem,themost
unforgetableoneisaphysicsclass.
Intheclass,ourphysicsteacherMr.Liubroughtsomemateri
alsandaskedustousethemtodoanexperiment.Iwasconfident
thatIcoulddoagoodjob,becauseIhadworkedoutaloftheex
perimenthomeworkproblems.Ioferedtoperformtheexperiment
infrontofthewholeclass.However,IjustcouldntputwhatIhad
learntintopracticenomaterhowhardItried.
ThephysicsclasswasrealymemorablebecauseIlearnedan
importantlifelessonthatrealknowledgecomesfrompractice.Ialso
learnedtobemodest,whichwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.
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一、句子升格练习
1.今天我想和你们分享一些关于如何提高英语
听说能力的实用技巧。(汉译英)
2.Weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommuni
catewithpeopleinEnglish.TheycanbeEng
lishteachersorclassmates.(用whether引导的
让步状语从句升格)
二、书面表达
英语听说能力是学好英语的关键,你校英文
刊正在开展以“HowtoImproveEnglishListening
andSpeaking”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一
篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享你自己准备英语听说
考试的一次经历,或分享一下提高英语听说能力
的方法。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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二、 ATenminuteBreak
Wehaveatenminutebreakbetweenclasses.Inmy
opinion,takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit
makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly.
Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesand
makesuspreparewelforthenextclass.Onlydoingsocan
wehavemoreenergytostudyefectivelyinclass.Myten
minutebreakisalwayspleasing.SometimesIdosomesimple
exercise.Sometimesmyclassmateshaveafreechatwithme
happilyorjusttakeawalkoutside.Therefore,Ialwaysfeel
energeticandlistencarefulytoteachers.Youshouldntrun
toofarfromyourclassroom.Besides,donttakeenergeticex
ercisetoomuch.
Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute
break.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworth
valuinginourdailylives.;第二段 Iofertodosome
houseworkwheneverIhavetimebecauseitnotonlyhelps
melearnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmyparents
sometimetohavearest.;第三段 Itsmyfamilythatgive
methepowertogoforward.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepart
involunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime.
2.Itwasverytiring,butIdiditfortwoweeks.
3.IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam
stilamiddleschoolstudent.
二、记叙文范文
BeingaVolunteer
Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepartin
volunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime.
Lastyear,Ijoinedagrouptohelptheneighborsthrow
outtheirrubbish.Everymorning,Ineededtogetupvery
early,andcolecttherubbishfromdoortodoor.Atfirst,I
foundithardtogetupearly.Itwasverytiring,butIdidit
fortwoweeks.Intheend,Igotathankyouleterfromthe
neighbors.Atthattime,Ifeltproudofmyself.Fromthat,I
learnedhowtosortdiferentkindsofgarbage.
IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam
stilamiddleschoolstudent.Ithinkitsgreattobeavolun
teer.Helpingothersbringshappinessnotonlytoothersbut
alsotoourselves.
说明文范文
BeingaVolunteer
Beingavolunteerisgreat,becauseithasmanyadvanta
ges.
Firstofal,wecangetusefullifeexperiencesandskils
fromit.Whendoingvolunteerwork,wecanlearnalotand
practiceourskilsatthesametime.Secondly,wecanmeet
interestingpeopleandmakemorefriends.Boththepeoplewe
arehelpingandthepeopleweareworkingwithmaytelus
interestingstories.Wecanmakefriendswiththembydoing
kindthings.Thirdly,beingavolunteerisimportantforour
health.Whiledoingvolunteerwork,weexerciseandfeel
happy,whichisgoodforourbodyandmind.
Inshort,beingavolunteercannotonlyhelpothersbut
alsomakeabigdiferencetoourlives.Letsworktogetherto
makeabeterworld!
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时 ③一;三
二、第二段 IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,be
causeIhadworkedoutaloftheexperimenthomework
problems.;IjustcouldntputwhatIhadlearntintoprac
ticenomaterhowhardItried.;第三段 Ilearnedtobe
modest,whichwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.TodayIwouldliketosharesomeusefultipsonhowto
improveEnglishlisteningandspeakingskilswithyou.
2.Weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommunicatewith
peopleinEnglish,whethertheyareEnglishteachersor
classmates.
二、记叙文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
WhenIwasinGradeEight,IwaspoorinEnglishlis
teningandspeaking.IaskedmyEnglishteacherforhelpand
shegavemesomeusefullearningmethods.
Atfirst,Ilistenedtotheconversationsandpassagesin
thetextbookandrepeatthemloudly.ThenIwasbraveand
activetocommunicatewithmyclassmatesinEnglishin
class.Afterthat,Icheckedmylearningresultsbytakinglis
teningandspeakingtestsontheappofmysmartphone.
Theselearningmethodsworked realywel.Aftertwo
months,mylisteningandspeakingabilitiesgreatlyimproved.
IwasgratefultomyEnglishteacher.
Now,Ibelieveaslongaswefindrightlearningmethods
andpracticehardalthetime,wewilmakegreatprogressin
ourEnglishlisteningandspeaking.
说明文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
Asweknow,Englishlisteningandspeakingarerealy
importantinlearningEnglish.TodayIwouldliketoshare
someusefultipsonhowtoimproveEnglishlisteningand
speakingskilswithyou.
Firstofal,wecanhavemorecommunicationactivities
inclass,suchasdiscussions,interviews,storytelingand
roleplay.Inthisway,wecanhavemorefunlearningEng
lish.Secondly,wecantakepartinmoreoutofclassactivi
tieslikeEnglishspeechcompetitions.Throughtheseactivi
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tieswecanimproveourEnglishskilsinaneasyandrelaxing
way.Thirdly,weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommu
nicatewithpeopleinEnglish.BecauseusingEnglishisthe
bestwaytolearn.
Alinal,whatweneedismorefreetimeandmore
space.Wemustbeabletomasterlisteningandspeaking
skils.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Campusviolenceisharmfulforstudentsphysical
andmentalhealth.;第二段 Whenwemeetviolenceon
campus,weshouldaskteachersandparentsforhelpin
time.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.IwashedmyschooluniformbecauseIneededtowear
itonMonday.
2.Ithoughtweshouldtryourbesttobeindependentandre
sponsible,becausewehavegrownup!
3.Itshelpfulforyoutodosomewashingorcookingonweek
ends.
4.Turntoothersforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems./When
youhaveproblems,turntoothersforhelp.
二、记叙文范文
TakeCareofYourself
LastSaturday,myparentsdecidedtovisitmygrandpar
entsinthecountryside.Beforetheyleft,myparentssaid,
“Takecareofyourself.Welcomebackthisevening.”I
noddedandreplied,“Dontwory,DadandMom.”
Afterthat,Iatebreakfastquicklyandthenstudyforthe
tests.Atabout11:30a.m.,Ifelthungry.Icookedtomato
noodlesformyself.Theywereverydelicious.ThenIwashed
myschooluniformbecauseIneededtowearitonMonday.
Next,Icleanedmybedroomandthelivingroom.At2:00p.
m.,Icontinuedtostudyuntil6:00p.m.
Intheevening,myparentscamebackhome.They
praisedmeforItookgoodcareofmyselfandourhouse.I
thoughtweshouldtryourbesttobeindependentandrespon
sible,becausewehavegrownup!
说明文范文
TakeCareofYourself
Aswealknow,goodhealthisimportant.Soeachof
youshouldpayatentiontotakingcareofyourselves.
First,youshouldputphysicalhealthinthefirstplace.
Asthesayinggoes,tohaveahealthybodyistohaveevery
thing.Youdbeterhaveabalanceddietanddoexercisereg
ularly.Second,somelifeskilsarealsoneeded.Itshelpful
foryoutodosomewashingorcookingonweekends.Inthe
meantime,mentalhealthalsoplaysanimportantroleindaily
life.Positivethinkingisnecessaryforsuccess.Turntoothers
forhelpwhenyouhaveproblems.
Bydoingthese,Imsureyouwilbecomemoreandmore
independentandresponsible.Andyourlifewilbemuchbet
ter,too.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③三;一
二、第一段 Musicislikeakey,whichopensadoortothe
worldforme.;第二段Musicbringsmehopeandstrength
duringhardtimes,oferingwordsofwisdomthatguideme
throughlifeschalenges.;第三段 Ihopethatalofus
wilvaluemusicandmakeitapartofourlife.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itcannotonlydevelopmylivingskilsbutalsohelp
megetasenseofachievement.
2.WhenImfree,Iusualycleanthehouseandcookformy
parents.
3.Wecantakepartinvolunteeractivitiessuchasplanting
treesorgrowingvegetablesinordertoenrichourreal
worldworkexperience.
二、记叙文范文
ToLoveLabor
Ienjoydoingchores.Bydoinghousework,itcannot
onlydevelopmylivingskilsbutalsohelpmegetasenseof
achievement.SoIthinkitsnecessaryformetodochores.
WhenImfree,Iusualycleanthehouseandcookfor
myparents.LastFridayafternoon,Iarivedhomeearlier
thanmyparents,soIdecidedtopreparedinnerforthem.I
cookedpotatopancakes—theirfavoritefood.Whenthey
camebackhome,theytastedsomeandtoldmethesewere
thebestpancakesintheworld.Youcouldntimaginehow
happyIwaswhenIheardthat.
Fromthisexperience,Irealizedthatitismydutyto
sharehousework.SoIplantodomorechoresfromnowonto
makemyparentshappy.
说明文范文
ToLoveLabor
Aswealknow,hardworkingspiriteducationcanhelp
morestudentstogetbeter.Asmiddleschoolstudents,what
shouldwedotofalinlovewithdoingchores?
Firstly,weshouldhavehardworkingspiritclassesto
learnsomebasiclifeskilsatschooleveryweek.Secondly,
wecantakepartinvolunteeractivitiessuchasplantingtrees
orgrowingvegetablesinordertoenrichourrealworldwork
experience.Inaddition,weneedtotrytodosomehousework
athomeliketidyingrooms,washingclothesorcookingsome
dishes.Aboveal,wecouldformgoodworkinghabitsand
valuetheimportanceofworkinghardthroughourexperience.
Inaword,thehardworkingspiriteducationisnecessary
andithelpstoimproveourselves.
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