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话题写作培优册
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(学生在学校的学习与生活;校园活动;校园生活的建议;学校规章制度)
【教材单元链接】
人教版 仁爱版
七上Unit3教室里的物品
七上Unit9学校科目
七下Unit1加入社团、俱乐部
七下Unit11校园旅行
九全Unit14学校生活
七下Unit5我们的校园生活
八下Unit8我们的衣服
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开头句
1.Howtimeflies!Imgraduatingfromourschool.
2.Wehavealkindsofafterclassactivitiesinour
school.
3.Inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolorful,
alkindsofclubshavebeensetup.Asforme,
Idliketosetupacookingclub.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
角度1 学生在学校的学习与生活
★Inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolor
ful,alkindsofclubshavebeensetup.Asforme,
IdliketosetupanEnglishclub.Intheclub,you
canspeaktoforeignersandtalkaboutgoodwaysof
learningEnglish.
角度2 校园环境与基础设施
★ThereisabigplaygroundinourschoolandI
oftenplaywithmyfriendsthere.TheplaceIlike
mostinmyschoolistheplaygroundwhereIcando
exerciseandplaywithmyclassmateshappily.
角度3 校园活动
★Firstofal,weplantoholdatextbookplay
competitionintheschoolhal.Thenthebeginning
ofthecompetitionis3oclockp.m.ontheFriday
ofnextweek.Besides,therewilbemanyexciting
activitiesonthatday.Wecanreadtextsandhave
discussions.Wecanhaveroleplayandstudents
cantrytheirbesttoshowthemselves.Thereisno
doubtthatwecanhaveagoodtime.
角度4 对新生提出关于校园生活的建议
★First,asstudents,itsimportantforyouto
studyhardatschool.Youmustlistentotheteacher
carefulyinclassanddoyourhomeworkcarefuly
afterschool.Second,itsalsoimportanttokeep
healthy.Tokeephealthy,youcanexerciseoften
andeatregularly.
角度5 学校规章制度
★Youmustfolowrulesbothinandoutof
school.Forexample,studentsshouldwearschool
uniformsatschool.Andstudentsarenowalowedto
bringmobilephonestoschool.Folowingtherules
atschoolcanmakeyoubehavewel.
结尾句
1.Aslongasyoufolowtheadviceabove,Ibelieve
youwilhaveacolorfulschoollife.
2.Ifyoumakefuluseofyourfreetime,youwil
haveawonderfulschoollifeandyouwillearna
lot.
3.Withoutdoubt,Igetthevalueofbeingavolun
teerfromit—tobringhappinesstopeoplearound
me.Takingafterschoolactivitiesisrealya
goodwaytoimproveourpracticalabilities.
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你校英文刊正在开展以“AnUnforgetableActivity”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向
专栏投稿,介绍令你难忘的一次活动(如:唱歌比赛、运动会、演讲比赛等)。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:介绍难忘的活动的具体内容时以 为主,介绍这些活动给自己带来的感受时用
;
③人称:介绍自己难忘的活动用第 人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 引出话题:介绍让自己记忆犹新的活动
参考句型:①Thereisoneactivitywhich爥;②Howtimeflies!
例:Thereisoneactivity.Itkeepsfreshinmymind.(用which引导的定语从句升格)
第二段 详细陈述让你难忘的活动(包括人员、地点、时间以及你参与的事项等)
参考句型:①showsb.sth.;②spend爥with爥;③sb.do/does/didsth.whiledoingsth.;④at
theendof爥
例:一些人一边唱歌一边弹吉他,还有一些人随着音乐跳舞。(汉译英)
第三段 表达感想和这个活动让你难忘的原因
参考句型:①notonly爥butalso爥;②itwasachancetodosth.爥;③expresssth.tosb.
例:Thispartyismeaningful.Wehadahappytimetogether.Itwasachancetoexpressour
thankstoourteachers.(用because,notonly爥butalso爥扩写句子)
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三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
AnUnforgetableActivity
Howtimeflies!Thereisoneactivity.It
keepsfreshinmymind.
Altheteachersandstudentscelebratedthe
comingnewyear.Myclassmatesshowedtheir
talentsinartandmusic.Asforme,Iplayeda
pieceofmusicontheviolin.Alofthemcheered
meup.Attheendoftheparty,wereadapoem
writenbyourclassmatestoourteachers.
Thispartyismeaningful.Wehadahappy
timetogetherandexpressedourthankstoour
teachers.Itwasthemostunforgetableactivityin
myschoollife.
AnUnforgetableActivity
Howtimeflies!Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfresh
inmymind.
Altheteachersandstudentscelebratedthecomingnew
year.Myclassmatesshowedtheirtalentsinartandmusic.
Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,andothersdancedto
themusic.Asforme,Iplayedapieceofmusicontheviolin.
Alofthemcheeredmeup.Attheendoftheparty,wereada
poemwritenbyourclassmatestoourteachers.
Thispartyismeaningfulnotonlybecausewehadahap
pytimetogetherbutalsobecauseitwasachancetoexpress
ourthankstoourteachers.Itwasthemostunforgetableactivi
tyinmyschoollife.Anditleftmesoftandsweetmemories
inmyheart.
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一、句子升格练习
1.Takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary.It
makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly.
(用because引导的原因状语从句升格)
2.十分钟的休息是为了让我们放松一下,为下节
课做准备。(beusedtodosth.;preparewel
for爥)
3.只有这样,我们才有更多的精力在课堂上有效
地学习。(用only引导倒装句)
4.Everyonewil haveawonderfultenminute
break.(用Ihope+宾语从句升格)
二、书面表达
你校英文刊正在开展以 “A Tenminute
Break”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短
语,向专栏投稿,介绍你的课间活动的经历与
感受。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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2.Iamsurethatourteacherwilleadustoamorecolorful
andwonderfulfuture.
3.Ihavelearnedthatweshouldnevergiveupwhenwemeet
withdificulties.
4.Iwanttoknowwhatyoudidtomakeyourdreamcome
true.
5.Everyoneintheclassknowswhereteaisproduced.
6.Hedoesntknowifhisbrotherhasreturnedthemagazine
tothelibraryyet.
7.IwanttoknowwhyAnnarefusedtocometomyparty.
定语从句
1.MissLiistheteacherwhohelpedmealotduringthepast
threeyears.
2.IlikethebookwhichwaswritenbyLuXun.
3.Istilrememberthedaysthatwespentinthecountryside
tenyearsago.
4.Fionaloveslisteningtoherchildrensingingsongsthat
theylearnedatschool.
5.IdontknowtheboywhosefatherisanEnglishteacher.
技巧2
感叹句
1.HowkindandcaringMissBaiis!
2.Whatgreatfunwehadyesterday!
3.Whatusefulsuggestions/adviceJimgaveus!
4.Howweltheyhavepreparedfortheactivity!
用it作形式主语或形式宾语的句型
1.Amyconsidersitherdutytohelpherclassmates.
2.Itisdificultformetolearnmathswel,butIwilkeep
tryingmybest.
3.IfinditinterestingtolearnEnglishbyusingthisapp.
4.Itstimetotakeactiontoprotectourearth.
nop[
1.Jimcannotonlyplaybasketbalwel,butalsoplaythevi
olinwel.
2.Ontheonehand,travelingisagoodwaytorelax.Onthe
otherhand,wecanknowmoreaboutthisworld.
3.Helenseldomgetsangryevenifshehastowaitforalong
time.
第四部分 高频话题三阶写作指导
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③一
二、第一段 Itsnecessary/meaningfulformetoenjoysome
freetimeafterworkinghardinclasses.;第二段 Iplanto
spendwonderfultimewithmyfamilybyhavingapicnicin
theparkandcookingmealswithmyparents.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.WewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegot
toBeijing.
2.Though/AlthoughIfelttiredafterthetrip,itwasamean
ingfulexperience.
3.Itriedtoputabookshelfinmyroom,butImadeamis
take.
4.IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe
cultureinourcountry.
二、记叙文范文
SummerVacation
Ihadawonderfulvacationthisyear.ThenIwilshare
myunforgetableexperiencewithyou.
InJuly,ItookatriptoBeijingwithmyfamily.Firstof
al,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegotto
Beijing.Then,weclimbedtheGreatWalandtookmany
photos.Besides,wealsotasteddeliciousfoodandbought
presentsinWangfujingStreetformyfriends.ThoughIfelt
tiredafterthetrip,itwasanunforgetableexperience.
Inaword,Ihadameaningfulandwonderfulsummer
vacation.
说明文范文
SummerVacation
Iwilgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.Duringthevaca
tion,Ildosomethingmeaningfulandpreparewelforthefu
ture.
IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe
cultureinourcountry.Tokeephealthy,Ilexerciseforat
leastonehouraday.Exercisemakesmefulofenergy.Il
listentomusictorelaxmyself.Also,inordertoimprovemy
self,IlreadsomebooksIlike.Illearntocookformypar
ents.Besides,Ilhelpoutaroundthecommunity.Finaly,I
wilmakeaclearplanforthenewtermtomakesureIcan
startitsmoothly.AndIlmakeaperfectplantoliveahappy
life.
Ihopeeveryonewilspendawonderfulvacation.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时;一般现在时 ③一
二、第一段 Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfreshinmy
mind.;第二段Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,and
othersdancedtothemusic.;第三段 Thispartyismean
ingfulnotonlybecausewehadahappytimetogetherbut
alsobecauseitwasachancetoexpressourthankstoour
teachers.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit
makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly.
2.Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesandmakes
uspreparewelforthenextclass.
3.Onlydoingsocanwehavemoreenergytostudyefectively
inclass.
4.Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute
break.
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二、 ATenminuteBreak
Wehaveatenminutebreakbetweenclasses.Inmy
opinion,takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit
makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly.
Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesand
makesuspreparewelforthenextclass.Onlydoingsocan
wehavemoreenergytostudyefectivelyinclass.Myten
minutebreakisalwayspleasing.SometimesIdosomesimple
exercise.Sometimesmyclassmateshaveafreechatwithme
happilyorjusttakeawalkoutside.Therefore,Ialwaysfeel
energeticandlistencarefulytoteachers.Youshouldntrun
toofarfromyourclassroom.Besides,donttakeenergeticex
ercisetoomuch.
Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute
break.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworth
valuinginourdailylives.;第二段 Iofertodosome
houseworkwheneverIhavetimebecauseitnotonlyhelps
melearnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmyparents
sometimetohavearest.;第三段 Itsmyfamilythatgive
methepowertogoforward.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepart
involunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime.
2.Itwasverytiring,butIdiditfortwoweeks.
3.IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam
stilamiddleschoolstudent.
二、记叙文范文
BeingaVolunteer
Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepartin
volunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime.
Lastyear,Ijoinedagrouptohelptheneighborsthrow
outtheirrubbish.Everymorning,Ineededtogetupvery
early,andcolecttherubbishfromdoortodoor.Atfirst,I
foundithardtogetupearly.Itwasverytiring,butIdidit
fortwoweeks.Intheend,Igotathankyouleterfromthe
neighbors.Atthattime,Ifeltproudofmyself.Fromthat,I
learnedhowtosortdiferentkindsofgarbage.
IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam
stilamiddleschoolstudent.Ithinkitsgreattobeavolun
teer.Helpingothersbringshappinessnotonlytoothersbut
alsotoourselves.
说明文范文
BeingaVolunteer
Beingavolunteerisgreat,becauseithasmanyadvanta
ges.
Firstofal,wecangetusefullifeexperiencesandskils
fromit.Whendoingvolunteerwork,wecanlearnalotand
practiceourskilsatthesametime.Secondly,wecanmeet
interestingpeopleandmakemorefriends.Boththepeoplewe
arehelpingandthepeopleweareworkingwithmaytelus
interestingstories.Wecanmakefriendswiththembydoing
kindthings.Thirdly,beingavolunteerisimportantforour
health.Whiledoingvolunteerwork,weexerciseandfeel
happy,whichisgoodforourbodyandmind.
Inshort,beingavolunteercannotonlyhelpothersbut
alsomakeabigdiferencetoourlives.Letsworktogetherto
makeabeterworld!
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时 ③一;三
二、第二段 IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,be
causeIhadworkedoutaloftheexperimenthomework
problems.;IjustcouldntputwhatIhadlearntintoprac
ticenomaterhowhardItried.;第三段 Ilearnedtobe
modest,whichwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.TodayIwouldliketosharesomeusefultipsonhowto
improveEnglishlisteningandspeakingskilswithyou.
2.Weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommunicatewith
peopleinEnglish,whethertheyareEnglishteachersor
classmates.
二、记叙文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
WhenIwasinGradeEight,IwaspoorinEnglishlis
teningandspeaking.IaskedmyEnglishteacherforhelpand
shegavemesomeusefullearningmethods.
Atfirst,Ilistenedtotheconversationsandpassagesin
thetextbookandrepeatthemloudly.ThenIwasbraveand
activetocommunicatewithmyclassmatesinEnglishin
class.Afterthat,Icheckedmylearningresultsbytakinglis
teningandspeakingtestsontheappofmysmartphone.
Theselearningmethodsworked realywel.Aftertwo
months,mylisteningandspeakingabilitiesgreatlyimproved.
IwasgratefultomyEnglishteacher.
Now,Ibelieveaslongaswefindrightlearningmethods
andpracticehardalthetime,wewilmakegreatprogressin
ourEnglishlisteningandspeaking.
说明文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
Asweknow,Englishlisteningandspeakingarerealy
importantinlearningEnglish.TodayIwouldliketoshare
someusefultipsonhowtoimproveEnglishlisteningand
speakingskilswithyou.
Firstofal,wecanhavemorecommunicationactivities
inclass,suchasdiscussions,interviews,storytelingand
roleplay.Inthisway,wecanhavemorefunlearningEng
lish.Secondly,wecantakepartinmoreoutofclassactivi
tieslikeEnglishspeechcompetitions.Throughtheseactivi
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