第4部分 话题2 多彩,安全,有意义的学校生活(2021,2020)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册(人教版 云南专用)

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  话题写作培优册 #!" 2 #01&23&456-78./(2021,2020) (学生在学校的学习与生活;校园活动;校园生活的建议;学校规章制度) 【教材单元链接】 人教版 仁爱版 七上Unit3教室里的物品 七上Unit9学校科目 七下Unit1加入社团、俱乐部 七下Unit11校园旅行 九全Unit14学校生活 七下Unit5我们的校园生活 八下Unit8我们的衣服 !" #$%& 开头句 1.Howtimeflies!Imgraduatingfromourschool. 2.Wehavealkindsofafterclassactivitiesinour school. 3.Inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolorful, alkindsofclubshavebeensetup.Asforme, Idliketosetupacookingclub. 中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文] 角度1 学生在学校的学习与生活 ★Inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolor ful,alkindsofclubshavebeensetup.Asforme, IdliketosetupanEnglishclub.Intheclub,you canspeaktoforeignersandtalkaboutgoodwaysof learningEnglish. 角度2 校园环境与基础设施 ★ThereisabigplaygroundinourschoolandI oftenplaywithmyfriendsthere.TheplaceIlike mostinmyschoolistheplaygroundwhereIcando exerciseandplaywithmyclassmateshappily. 角度3 校园活动 ★Firstofal,weplantoholdatextbookplay competitionintheschoolhal.Thenthebeginning ofthecompetitionis3oclockp.m.ontheFriday ofnextweek.Besides,therewilbemanyexciting activitiesonthatday.Wecanreadtextsandhave discussions.Wecanhaveroleplayandstudents cantrytheirbesttoshowthemselves.Thereisno doubtthatwecanhaveagoodtime. 角度4  对新生提出关于校园生活的建议 ★First,asstudents,itsimportantforyouto studyhardatschool.Youmustlistentotheteacher carefulyinclassanddoyourhomeworkcarefuly afterschool.Second,itsalsoimportanttokeep healthy.Tokeephealthy,youcanexerciseoften andeatregularly. 角度5 学校规章制度 ★Youmustfolowrulesbothinandoutof school.Forexample,studentsshouldwearschool uniformsatschool.Andstudentsarenowalowedto bringmobilephonestoschool.Folowingtherules atschoolcanmakeyoubehavewel. 结尾句 1.Aslongasyoufolowtheadviceabove,Ibelieve youwilhaveacolorfulschoollife. 2.Ifyoumakefuluseofyourfreetime,youwil haveawonderfulschoollifeandyouwillearna lot. 3.Withoutdoubt,Igetthevalueofbeingavolun teerfromit—tobringhappinesstopeoplearound me.Takingafterschoolactivitiesisrealya goodwaytoimproveourpracticalabilities.                                                  71   众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(RJ) '" ()*+   你校英文刊正在开展以“AnUnforgetableActivity”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向 专栏投稿,介绍令你难忘的一次活动(如:唱歌比赛、运动会、演讲比赛等)。 要求: 1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。         写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体:本文是一篇    ; ②时态:介绍难忘的活动的具体内容时以    为主,介绍这些活动给自己带来的感受时用     ; ③人称:介绍自己难忘的活动用第    人称。 二、构思框架 第一段 引出话题:介绍让自己记忆犹新的活动 参考句型:①Thereisoneactivitywhich爥;②Howtimeflies! 例:Thereisoneactivity.Itkeepsfreshinmymind.(用which引导的定语从句升格)                                        第二段 详细陈述让你难忘的活动(包括人员、地点、时间以及你参与的事项等) 参考句型:①showsb.sth.;②spend爥with爥;③sb.do/does/didsth.whiledoingsth.;④at theendof爥 例:一些人一边唱歌一边弹吉他,还有一些人随着音乐跳舞。(汉译英)                                        第三段 表达感想和这个活动让你难忘的原因 参考句型:①notonly爥butalso爥;②itwasachancetodosth.爥;③expresssth.tosb. 例:Thispartyismeaningful.Wehadahappytimetogether.Itwasachancetoexpressour thankstoourteachers.(用because,notonly爥butalso爥扩写句子)                                                                                                              81   话题写作培优册 三、分阶范文 初阶范文 高阶范文 AnUnforgetableActivity Howtimeflies!Thereisoneactivity.It keepsfreshinmymind. Altheteachersandstudentscelebratedthe comingnewyear.Myclassmatesshowedtheir talentsinartandmusic.Asforme,Iplayeda pieceofmusicontheviolin.Alofthemcheered meup.Attheendoftheparty,wereadapoem writenbyourclassmatestoourteachers. Thispartyismeaningful.Wehadahappy timetogetherandexpressedourthankstoour teachers.Itwasthemostunforgetableactivityin myschoollife. AnUnforgetableActivity Howtimeflies!Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfresh inmymind. Altheteachersandstudentscelebratedthecomingnew year.Myclassmatesshowedtheirtalentsinartandmusic. Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,andothersdancedto themusic.Asforme,Iplayedapieceofmusicontheviolin. Alofthemcheeredmeup.Attheendoftheparty,wereada poemwritenbyourclassmatestoourteachers. Thispartyismeaningfulnotonlybecausewehadahap pytimetogetherbutalsobecauseitwasachancetoexpress ourthankstoourteachers.Itwasthemostunforgetableactivi tyinmyschoollife.Anditleftmesoftandsweetmemories inmyheart. ," -./0 一、句子升格练习 1.Takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary.It makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly. (用because引导的原因状语从句升格)       2.十分钟的休息是为了让我们放松一下,为下节 课做准备。(beusedtodosth.;preparewel for爥)     3.只有这样,我们才有更多的精力在课堂上有效 地学习。(用only引导倒装句)     4.Everyonewil haveawonderfultenminute break.(用Ihope+宾语从句升格)     二、书面表达 你校英文刊正在开展以 “A Tenminute Break”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短 语,向专栏投稿,介绍你的课间活动的经历与 感受。 要求: 1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。                                                                      91   众相原创 赋能中考 2.Iamsurethatourteacherwilleadustoamorecolorful andwonderfulfuture. 3.Ihavelearnedthatweshouldnevergiveupwhenwemeet withdificulties. 4.Iwanttoknowwhatyoudidtomakeyourdreamcome true. 5.Everyoneintheclassknowswhereteaisproduced. 6.Hedoesntknowifhisbrotherhasreturnedthemagazine tothelibraryyet. 7.IwanttoknowwhyAnnarefusedtocometomyparty. 定语从句 1.MissLiistheteacherwhohelpedmealotduringthepast threeyears. 2.IlikethebookwhichwaswritenbyLuXun. 3.Istilrememberthedaysthatwespentinthecountryside tenyearsago. 4.Fionaloveslisteningtoherchildrensingingsongsthat theylearnedatschool. 5.IdontknowtheboywhosefatherisanEnglishteacher. 技巧2 感叹句 1.HowkindandcaringMissBaiis! 2.Whatgreatfunwehadyesterday! 3.Whatusefulsuggestions/adviceJimgaveus! 4.Howweltheyhavepreparedfortheactivity! 用it作形式主语或形式宾语的句型 1.Amyconsidersitherdutytohelpherclassmates. 2.Itisdificultformetolearnmathswel,butIwilkeep tryingmybest. 3.IfinditinterestingtolearnEnglishbyusingthisapp. 4.Itstimetotakeactiontoprotectourearth. nop[ 1.Jimcannotonlyplaybasketbalwel,butalsoplaythevi olinwel. 2.Ontheonehand,travelingisagoodwaytorelax.Onthe otherhand,wecanknowmoreaboutthisworld. 3.Helenseldomgetsangryevenifshehastowaitforalong time.                          第四部分 高频话题三阶写作指导 78 1 9qrstusvwx*NGy 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③一 二、第一段 Itsnecessary/meaningfulformetoenjoysome freetimeafterworkinghardinclasses.;第二段 Iplanto spendwonderfultimewithmyfamilybyhavingapicnicin theparkandcookingmealswithmyparents. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.WewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegot toBeijing. 2.Though/AlthoughIfelttiredafterthetrip,itwasamean ingfulexperience. 3.Itriedtoputabookshelfinmyroom,butImadeamis take. 4.IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe cultureinourcountry. 二、记叙文范文 SummerVacation Ihadawonderfulvacationthisyear.ThenIwilshare myunforgetableexperiencewithyou. InJuly,ItookatriptoBeijingwithmyfamily.Firstof al,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegotto Beijing.Then,weclimbedtheGreatWalandtookmany photos.Besides,wealsotasteddeliciousfoodandbought presentsinWangfujingStreetformyfriends.ThoughIfelt tiredafterthetrip,itwasanunforgetableexperience. Inaword,Ihadameaningfulandwonderfulsummer vacation. 说明文范文 SummerVacation Iwilgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.Duringthevaca tion,Ildosomethingmeaningfulandpreparewelforthefu ture. IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe cultureinourcountry.Tokeephealthy,Ilexerciseforat leastonehouraday.Exercisemakesmefulofenergy.Il listentomusictorelaxmyself.Also,inordertoimprovemy self,IlreadsomebooksIlike.Illearntocookformypar ents.Besides,Ilhelpoutaroundthecommunity.Finaly,I wilmakeaclearplanforthenewtermtomakesureIcan startitsmoothly.AndIlmakeaperfectplantoliveahappy life. Ihopeeveryonewilspendawonderfulvacation. 78 2 9z{s|0s}~NF€Gy 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时;一般现在时 ③一 二、第一段 Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfreshinmy mind.;第二段Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,and othersdancedtothemusic.;第三段 Thispartyismean ingfulnotonlybecausewehadahappytimetogetherbut alsobecauseitwasachancetoexpressourthankstoour teachers. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.Takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly. 2.Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesandmakes uspreparewelforthenextclass. 3.Onlydoingsocanwehavemoreenergytostudyefectively inclass. 4.Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute break.                                          82   云南英语(RJ) 二、 ATenminuteBreak Wehaveatenminutebreakbetweenclasses.Inmy opinion,takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly. Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesand makesuspreparewelforthenextclass.Onlydoingsocan wehavemoreenergytostudyefectivelyinclass.Myten minutebreakisalwayspleasing.SometimesIdosomesimple exercise.Sometimesmyclassmateshaveafreechatwithme happilyorjusttakeawalkoutside.Therefore,Ialwaysfeel energeticandlistencarefulytoteachers.Youshouldntrun toofarfromyourclassroom.Besides,donttakeenergeticex ercisetoomuch. Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute break. 78 3 9‚ƒ„… 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三 二、第一段 Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworth valuinginourdailylives.;第二段 Iofertodosome houseworkwheneverIhavetimebecauseitnotonlyhelps melearnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmyparents sometimetohavearest.;第三段 Itsmyfamilythatgive methepowertogoforward. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepart involunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime. 2.Itwasverytiring,butIdiditfortwoweeks. 3.IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam stilamiddleschoolstudent. 二、记叙文范文 BeingaVolunteer Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepartin volunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime. Lastyear,Ijoinedagrouptohelptheneighborsthrow outtheirrubbish.Everymorning,Ineededtogetupvery early,andcolecttherubbishfromdoortodoor.Atfirst,I foundithardtogetupearly.Itwasverytiring,butIdidit fortwoweeks.Intheend,Igotathankyouleterfromthe neighbors.Atthattime,Ifeltproudofmyself.Fromthat,I learnedhowtosortdiferentkindsofgarbage. IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam stilamiddleschoolstudent.Ithinkitsgreattobeavolun teer.Helpingothersbringshappinessnotonlytoothersbut alsotoourselves. 说明文范文 BeingaVolunteer Beingavolunteerisgreat,becauseithasmanyadvanta ges. Firstofal,wecangetusefullifeexperiencesandskils fromit.Whendoingvolunteerwork,wecanlearnalotand practiceourskilsatthesametime.Secondly,wecanmeet interestingpeopleandmakemorefriends.Boththepeoplewe arehelpingandthepeopleweareworkingwithmaytelus interestingstories.Wecanmakefriendswiththembydoing kindthings.Thirdly,beingavolunteerisimportantforour health.Whiledoingvolunteerwork,weexerciseandfeel happy,whichisgoodforourbodyandmind. Inshort,beingavolunteercannotonlyhelpothersbut alsomakeabigdiferencetoourlives.Letsworktogetherto makeabeterworld! 78 4 9vwNF6†‡ˆ‰ŠNF6‹Œˆ FŽ 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时 ③一;三 二、第二段 IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,be causeIhadworkedoutaloftheexperimenthomework problems.;IjustcouldntputwhatIhadlearntintoprac ticenomaterhowhardItried.;第三段 Ilearnedtobe modest,whichwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.TodayIwouldliketosharesomeusefultipsonhowto improveEnglishlisteningandspeakingskilswithyou. 2.Weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommunicatewith peopleinEnglish,whethertheyareEnglishteachersor classmates. 二、记叙文范文 HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking WhenIwasinGradeEight,IwaspoorinEnglishlis teningandspeaking.IaskedmyEnglishteacherforhelpand shegavemesomeusefullearningmethods. Atfirst,Ilistenedtotheconversationsandpassagesin thetextbookandrepeatthemloudly.ThenIwasbraveand activetocommunicatewithmyclassmatesinEnglishin class.Afterthat,Icheckedmylearningresultsbytakinglis teningandspeakingtestsontheappofmysmartphone. Theselearningmethodsworked realywel.Aftertwo months,mylisteningandspeakingabilitiesgreatlyimproved. IwasgratefultomyEnglishteacher. Now,Ibelieveaslongaswefindrightlearningmethods andpracticehardalthetime,wewilmakegreatprogressin ourEnglishlisteningandspeaking. 说明文范文 HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking Asweknow,Englishlisteningandspeakingarerealy importantinlearningEnglish.TodayIwouldliketoshare someusefultipsonhowtoimproveEnglishlisteningand speakingskilswithyou. Firstofal,wecanhavemorecommunicationactivities inclass,suchasdiscussions,interviews,storytelingand roleplay.Inthisway,wecanhavemorefunlearningEng lish.Secondly,wecantakepartinmoreoutofclassactivi tieslikeEnglishspeechcompetitions.Throughtheseactivi                                                                      92

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