Unit 8 Detective stories （同步写作讲义）（人与社会：文学和艺术）英语译林版九年级上册

Unit 8 Detective stories 单元写作指导与演练 【话题分析】 本单元的话题是“侦探故事与人身安全”，要求学生能简单描述侦探故事的情节或者说明如何保护人身安全，本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地描述侦探故事的情节、介绍喜爱的侦探故事或角色或者说明如何保护人身安全。内容包括侦探故事简介、人物角色、情节、演员介绍、喜爱的侦探故事或角色、如何保护人身安全等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 1. 能用定语从句中的关系代词组织内容； 2. 能用正确的时态描述侦探故事的情节； 3. 能正确使用情态动词或者祈使句谈论人身安全； 4. 能正确书写英语句子。 写作步骤 步骤一：确定侦探故事的情节或者说明如何保护人身安全的内容和顺序。 步骤二：列举介绍侦探故事的情节或者说明如何保护人身安全的句型，多多益善。 步骤三：成段成篇，修改完善。 【短语句式积累】 【短语】 1.go missing不见了 2. make notes做记录 3. medium height中等身高 4. tell the truth说实话 5.find out找出,查明 6. somewhere else别的地方 7.ask sb to do sth要求某人做某事 8.bleed to death流血而死 9.be guilty of犯有……罪 10. be charged with被指控…… 11. break into强行闯入 12. lead to导致 13.be sure of sth确信某事 14. have something to do with 与……有关 15.turn out原来是 16. have nothing to do with与……无关 17. be in a hurry to do sth匆忙做某事 18. guard against sth防范,提防(某事) 19. look sb up拜访某人 20. get along/on with与……和睦相处 2、 必备句型 1.I want to know how you get on/ along with your new classmates. 我想知道你和新同学相处得怎么样。 2.A reward of 1000 will be given to the witness who offers clues to the case. 为案件提供线索的证人将获得1000英镑的奖励。 3. It turned out that the man who broke into the bank that day was his brother. 原来那天闯入银行的人是他的兄弟。 4.I wonder whether you have something to do with kidnapping the little boy. 我想知道你是否与绑架那个小男孩有关。 5.The man who has criminal record is the murderer of the criminal case. 有犯罪记录的人是这起刑事案件的凶手。 6. He was under arrest/arrested for stealing valuable jewellery by the police. 他因盗窃贵重珠宝而被警方逮捕。 7.He once told me that he had been in the Computer Club for two years. 他曾经告诉我，他在计算机俱乐部已经两年了。 8.Can you tell me what he is /he has been charged with? 你能告诉我他被控什么罪吗？ 9. No one knows what the old man did for a living in the past. 没有人知道这位老人过去以什么为生。 10.He was in prison for three years and a half because of theft. 他因盗窃被判入狱三年半。 通用开头 1.Mr Wang was an old man. He lived alone and went to the park every day to practise t'ai chi. 2.I'm writing to report a robbery to you. 3.At about nine last night, I was on the way back home from the cinema when suddenly I heard someone crying for help from behind. 4.Someone found a dead body in a factory this morning. The victim was a man who was an engineer and he was 40 years old. 5.Last night, a murder took place between eleven and twelve on Renmin Road. 通用中间段 1.At the crime scene, Detective Li found a knife and a gun. He noticed that there was some white powder on the gun. Detective Li checked the knife and the gun for fingerprints. The powder on the gun turned out to be cooking flour, and the fingerprints were left by Zhou Ming. Detective Li returned to the flats and arrested the cook for murder. 2.I turned around and found a tall man with a pair of dark glasses and a short man robbing a young woman at the street corner near the cinema. The woman wore a gold necklace and a gold watch. She put up a good fight with them． 通用结尾 1.I hope the information will help you catch the robbers． 2.Yes, that's true. It was the necklace that my aunt lost. My aunt was very thankful. She told her new neighbour that they could be good friends later. 3.The police are offering a reward of 100,000 yuan for any clue that leads to the arrest of the murderer. 【实战演练】 （1） 请根据下面的要点提示，以“A Young Businessman Was Murdered”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。 要点：1. 昨晚十点到今天凌晨一点之间，发生了一起谋杀案； 2. 被害人是一名年轻商人，年仅35岁。案发时，有人听到了呼救的声音； 3. 据警方描述，被害人是因为受刀伤后，流血过多而死； 4. 目前凶手在逃，警方悬赏10000元来寻求重要线索，……(请发挥1~2句) A Young Businessman Was Murdered ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 根据图片信息和要点要求，编写一则侦探故事 Tips ● A description of the crime ● Any objects or clues found at the scene of the crime ● A description of the suspect ● How the detective finds the criminal (3) 根据下面提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述一起谋杀案件。 1.昨晚11点到12点之间，人民路上发生了一起谋杀案，被害者是一名司机，四十多岁，中等身材。 2.案发时，有人听到被害者求救。受害人受了刀伤，流血过多而死。 3.警方在现场拍照搜寻线索，也悬赏五万元，以获取重要线索。 4.如果你有任何信息，请拨打110和警方联系。希望得到广大市民帮助将罪犯绳之以法以告慰亡灵。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （4） 假设你是张通，去年寒假去美国探亲。2024年2月18日，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，说明当时的情况。请根据下列叙述写出报告。 1. 2024年2月18日早晨7：30左右发生了一起交通事故； 2. 我在公园路上散步； 3. 一位老人从公园里出来，穿过公园路； 4. 一辆黄颜色小汽车从第三街道开过来右转弯进入公园路； 5. 小汽车撞倒了老人并向西开走； 6. 我看见驾驶员是位年轻妇女，记住了车牌号（the plate number）是AC864，并送老人去了医院。 注意： 1. 词数：90左右； 2. 结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ About two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Zhang Tong （5） 假设你叫李华，昨天晚上你看完电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案。请就以下信息，以李华的名义写一份给警方的书面材料，要求词数100左右。材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 案发时间：昨天晚上大约九点 案发地点：电影院附近的一条街道拐角处 作案人情况：两个男子，一个是戴着墨镜的高个子，一个是矮个子 受害人情况：一位年轻的女士，戴着…… 案发经过及结果：请自拟内容 Dear Sir/Madam,     I’m writing to report a robbery to you. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________     I hope the information will help you catch the robbers. Yours faithfully, 下面是安全防护的文章 （6） 每年都会发生青少年溺水死亡以及车祸死亡事件，因此对于我们来说，懂得如何保护自身安全尤其重要。以＂How to Keep Ourselves Safe＂为题写一篇80词以上的英文短文。 要点： 1. 你觉得安全问题重要呜？ 2. 你周边安全形势如何？ 3. 关于如何保护自身安全，你有些什么想法？ 注意： 1. 可以结合短文中的一个、两个或三个场合，也可以增加内容； 2. 不得出现人名、校名等真实信息. How to Keep Ourselves Safe （7） 建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。 包括以下要点： 1）不带管制刀具到学校； 2）不打架； 3）上学放学的途中应该注意交通安全； 4）遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。 5）… … 参考词汇：管制的：restricted；紧急情况：emergency 写作要求： 1）用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。 2）可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3）严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。 Dear students, As you know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 8 Detective stories 单元写作指导与演练 【话题分析】 本单元的话题是“侦探故事与人身安全”，要求学生能简单描述侦探故事的情节或者说明如何保护人身安全，本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地描述侦探故事的情节、介绍喜爱的侦探故事或角色或者说明如何保护人身安全。内容包括侦探故事简介、人物角色、情节、演员介绍、喜爱的侦探故事或角色、如何保护人身安全等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 1. 能用定语从句中的关系代词组织内容； 2. 能用正确的时态描述侦探故事的情节； 3. 能正确使用情态动词或者祈使句谈论人身安全； 4. 能正确书写英语句子。 写作步骤 步骤一：确定侦探故事的情节或者说明如何保护人身安全的内容和顺序。 步骤二：列举介绍侦探故事的情节或者说明如何保护人身安全的句型，多多益善。 步骤三：成段成篇，修改完善。 【短语句式积累】 【短语】 1.go missing不见了 2. make notes做记录 3. medium height中等身高 4. tell the truth说实话 5.find out找出,查明 6. somewhere else别的地方 7.ask sb to do sth要求某人做某事 8.bleed to death流血而死 9.be guilty of犯有……罪 10. be charged with被指控…… 11. break into强行闯入 12. lead to导致 13.be sure of sth确信某事 14. have something to do with 与……有关 15.turn out原来是 16. have nothing to do with与……无关 17. be in a hurry to do sth匆忙做某事 18. guard against sth防范,提防(某事) 19. look sb up拜访某人 20. get along/on with与……和睦相处 2、 必备句型 1.I want to know how you get on/ along with your new classmates. 我想知道你和新同学相处得怎么样。 2.A reward of 1000 will be given to the witness who offers clues to the case. 为案件提供线索的证人将获得1000英镑的奖励。 3. It turned out that the man who broke into the bank that day was his brother. 原来那天闯入银行的人是他的兄弟。 4.I wonder whether you have something to do with kidnapping the little boy. 我想知道你是否与绑架那个小男孩有关。 5.The man who has criminal record is the murderer of the criminal case. 有犯罪记录的人是这起刑事案件的凶手。 6. He was under arrest/arrested for stealing valuable jewellery by the police. 他因盗窃贵重珠宝而被警方逮捕。 7.He once told me that he had been in the Computer Club for two years. 他曾经告诉我，他在计算机俱乐部已经两年了。 8.Can you tell me what he is /he has been charged with? 你能告诉我他被控什么罪吗？ 9. No one knows what the old man did for a living in the past. 没有人知道这位老人过去以什么为生。 10.He was in prison for three years and a half because of theft. 他因盗窃被判入狱三年半。 通用开头 1.Mr Wang was an old man. He lived alone and went to the park every day to practise t'ai chi. 2.I'm writing to report a robbery to you. 3.At about nine last night, I was on the way back home from the cinema when suddenly I heard someone crying for help from behind. 4.Someone found a dead body in a factory this morning. The victim was a man who was an engineer and he was 40 years old. 5.Last night, a murder took place between eleven and twelve on Renmin Road. 通用中间段 1.At the crime scene, Detective Li found a knife and a gun. He noticed that there was some white powder on the gun. Detective Li checked the knife and the gun for fingerprints. The powder on the gun turned out to be cooking flour, and the fingerprints were left by Zhou Ming. Detective Li returned to the flats and arrested the cook for murder. 2.I turned around and found a tall man with a pair of dark glasses and a short man robbing a young woman at the street corner near the cinema. The woman wore a gold necklace and a gold watch. She put up a good fight with them． 通用结尾 1.I hope the information will help you catch the robbers． 2.Yes, that's true. It was the necklace that my aunt lost. My aunt was very thankful. She told her new neighbour that they could be good friends later. 3.The police are offering a reward of 100,000 yuan for any clue that leads to the arrest of the murderer. 【实战演练】 （1） 请根据下面的要点提示，以“A Young Businessman Was Murdered”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。 要点：1. 昨晚十点到今天凌晨一点之间，发生了一起谋杀案； 2. 被害人是一名年轻商人，年仅35岁。案发时，有人听到了呼救的声音； 3. 据警方描述，被害人是因为受刀伤后，流血过多而死； 4. 目前凶手在逃，警方悬赏10000元来寻求重要线索，……(请发挥1~2句) A Young Businessman Was Murdered ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Young Businessman Was Murdered A murder case happened between ten o'clock last night and one o'clock this morning. The victim was a young businessman who was only 35 years old. At the time of the crime, someone heard the cry for help. According to the police description, the victim died of excessive bleeding after being injured by a knife. The murderer hasn’t been caught so far. The police offer a reward of 10,000 yuan for important clues. We hope that with the help of the public, the murderer can be caught as soon as possible and brought to justice. This incident has caused great shock in the local area. People are looking forward to a quick solution to the case. （2） 根据图片信息和要点要求，编写一则侦探故事 Tips ● A description of the crime ● Any objects or clues found at the scene of the crime ● A description of the suspect ● How the detective finds the criminal 【满分作文】 Mr Wang was an old man. He lived alone and went to the park every day to practise t'ai chi.     One day, Mr Wang's neighbours, Mr and Mrs Zhang, noticed that Mr Wang had not gone to the park that morning as usual. Mrs Zhang became worried. So together with her husband, she went to knock on Mr Wang's door. As they knocked, they noticed the door was not locked. They pushed the door open and saw Mr Wang. He was dead on the ground.     Mr and Mrs Zhang called the police. Detective Li arrived in five minutes. He asked the Mrs Zhang whether they had seen anything unusual the night before. They said that they had not because they were having a party. Detective Li also interviewed another neighbour, Zhou Ming. He was a cook. He said that he was working at his restaurant the night before and did not know anything about the case. At the crime scene, Detective Li found a knife and a gun. He noticed that there was some white powder on the gun. Detective Li checked the knife and the gun for fingerprints. The powder on the gun turned out to be cooking flour, and the fingerprints were left by Zhou Ming. Detective Li returned to the flats and arrested the cook for murder. Later, Zhou Ming admitted that he killed Mr Wang so that he could steal 200,000 yuan from him. 【解题思路】 在写作过程中要注意所写故事的细节，如案发时间和地点、目击者的证词、 嫌疑人的特征等。同时也要求同学们能写出各种场合下的安全防范措施。 【写作步骤】 第一步:引出人物,介绍王先生是一个孤独的老人，每天去公园练习太极拳。 第二步:描述事件背景,王先生的邻居张先生和夫人发现王先生当天没有像往常一样去公园，引起他们的担忧。 第三步:展开情节,详细描述侦探李的调查过程，包括询问邻居、检查犯罪现场等，并通过这些线索揭示出周明是罪犯。 第四步:揭示真相和结局,通过侦探李的调查，进一步揭示出周明杀害王先生的动机和计划，最终周明被逮捕。 【亮点词汇】 arrived in; five minutes; arrived in five minutes; at the crime scene; turned out; arrested for; murder; steal from.  【高分句型】 1.So together with her husband, she went to knock on Mr Wang’s door.(主从复合句,主从句作为状语) 2.Mr and Mrs Zhang called the police. Detective Li arrived in five minutes.(并列句主谓结构) 3.He asked the Mrs Zhang whether they had seen anything unusual the night before.(由whether引导的宾语从句) 4.He said that he was working at his restaurant the night before and did not know anything about the case.(由that引导的宾语从句) (3) 根据下面提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述一起谋杀案件。 1.昨晚11点到12点之间，人民路上发生了一起谋杀案，被害者是一名司机，四十多岁，中等身材。 2.案发时，有人听到被害者求救。受害人受了刀伤，流血过多而死。 3.警方在现场拍照搜寻线索，也悬赏五万元，以获取重要线索。 4.如果你有任何信息，请拨打110和警方联系。希望得到广大市民帮助将罪犯绳之以法以告慰亡灵。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ A horrible murder took place between 11 pm and 12 pm last night on Renmin Road. The victim was a driver of medium height in his forties. During the crime, people nearby heard his cries for help. The poor man fell to the ground on their back and was badly hurt and unfortunately bled to death. The police arrived, but the murderer had gone missing , The police took photos and searched for criminal clues. They also offered a reward of 50,000 yuan for important clues. If you have any information, please contact the police by dialing 110. Every piece of information is crucial for bringing criminals to justice and providing some comfort to the families of victims. The police are working hard to solve the case and need the help of the public. （4） 假设你是张通，去年寒假去美国探亲。2024年2月18日，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，说明当时的情况。请根据下列叙述写出报告。 1. 2024年2月18日早晨7：30左右发生了一起交通事故； 2. 我在公园路上散步； 3. 一位老人从公园里出来，穿过公园路； 4. 一辆黄颜色小汽车从第三街道开过来右转弯进入公园路； 5. 小汽车撞倒了老人并向西开走； 6. 我看见驾驶员是位年轻妇女，记住了车牌号（the plate number）是AC864，并送老人去了医院。 注意： 1. 词数：90左右； 2. 结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ About two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Zhang Tong 【答案】It was about 7:30 on the morning of February 18, 2024. I was taking a walk along Park Road. I saw an old man coming out of the park. Just then a yellow car drove down Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the old man while he was crossing the road. He fell down with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off at a great speed heading west. I clearly noticed that the driver was a young woman. Fortunately, I managed to remember the plate number of the car, which is AC864. About two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Zhang Tong （5） 假设你叫李华，昨天晚上你看完电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案。请就以下信息，以李华的名义写一份给警方的书面材料，要求词数100左右。材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 案发时间：昨天晚上大约九点 案发地点：电影院附近的一条街道拐角处 作案人情况：两个男子，一个是戴着墨镜的高个子，一个是矮个子 受害人情况：一位年轻的女士，戴着…… 案发经过及结果：请自拟内容 Dear Sir/Madam,     I’m writing to report a robbery to you. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________     I hope the information will help you catch the robbers. Yours faithfully, Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing to report a robbery to you. I am Li Hua. I witnessed a robbery last night. At around nine o'clock, when I was on my way home after watching a movie, I saw two men robbing a young lady at a corner of a street near the cinema. One of the men was a tall guy wearing sunglasses. He seemed very strong. The other was a short man. The victim was a young lady wearing a beautiful necklace and carrying a handbag. The tall man grabbed the necklace while the short man snatched the handbag. The woman tried to fight against them , When I appeared , they ran away quickly. Luckily the woman didn’t got hurt. I was shocked by what I had just seen. I immediately took out my phone and called the police.  I hope the information will help you catch the robbers. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 下面是安全防护的文章 （6） 每年都会发生青少年溺水死亡以及车祸死亡事件，因此对于我们来说，懂得如何保护自身安全尤其重要。以＂How to Keep Ourselves Safe＂为题写一篇80词以上的英文短文。 要点： 1. 你觉得安全问题重要呜？ 2. 你周边安全形势如何？ 3. 关于如何保护自身安全，你有些什么想法？ 注意： 1. 可以结合短文中的一个、两个或三个场合，也可以增加内容； 2. 不得出现人名、校名等真实信息. How to Keep Ourselves Safe 【参考范文】 How to Keep Ourselves Safe As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. It’s very important for us to keep safe. But sometimes accidents may happen around us. So how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Third, We should obey the traffic rules. When the red light is on, we must stop and we are not allowed to go on walking. What’s more, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first! （7） 建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。 包括以下要点： 1）不带管制刀具到学校； 2）不打架； 3）上学放学的途中应该注意交通安全； 4）遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。 5）… … 参考词汇：管制的：restricted；紧急情况：emergency 写作要求： 1）用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。 2）可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3）严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。 Dear students, As you know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear students, As you know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. In my opinion, following these safety rules can make us live in peace. Firstly, we mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Secondly, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. And, it is necessary for us to pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, mind the steps when you are going down the stairs. Don’t play with others at that time. Last but not the least, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. Yours Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$