读后续写情绪表达万能句式 课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写之情绪描写技巧 Ways of describing emotions描 Seeing the man she once loved so ruthlessly(无情), Zhen Huan realized that she had been deceived(欺骗). Shocked and desperate(绝望的), she expressed her confusion, wondering how to accept the truth. Suddenly, Zhen Huan was overcome by a feeling of sadness. She was so upset that she burst out crying. Eyes filled with regretful tears, ZhenHuan finally knew that she was wrong. She was shocked. She was confused. She was sad. She was crying. 赏析比较 Learning objectives rememeber some words and expressions about emotion. learn 6 key sentence patterns to make emotional descriptions more vivid(生动的) and specific(具体的). use the 6 writing skills in different situations. At the end of the class, I’ll be able to moved pleased/delighted excited/ thrilled How does she/he feel? surprised/shocked frightened/afriad nervous/ anxious angry upset/ sad/ worried 情绪 情绪形容词 情绪名词 开心 joyful delighted happy joy delight happiness 激动   thrilled excited   thrill excitement 难过 sorrowful sad sorrow sadness grief 惊讶 amazed astonished surprised amazement astonishment surprise 紧张 anxious nervous   anxiety nervousness   害怕 frightened scared panicked horror fear panic 尴尬 embarrassed awkward ashamed embarrassment shame   后悔 guilty regretful   guilt regret   愤怒 angry annoyed   anger annoyance rage 感激 grateful thankful   gratitude thankfulness   失望 disappointed frustrated depressed disappointment frustration 情绪类必背词汇 What is his emotion? How do you know that? 莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥 Leonardo DiCaprio Watch the video and think. 8 What is his feeling? He feels angry. eyes mouth glare at shout grit his teeth sweat wave his fist is about to hit another guy  [ɡleə]  [fɪst] [ɡrɪt] face 怒目而视 咬紧 挥舞 拳头 body Emotional description Action words Face Body Emotional words Happy, angry, scared……. How to make your continuation writing vivid? 题材 题材 感受情绪 喜怒形于色 Don’t tell，just show Let’s learn to describe. 10 face: body: He/She is happy； …… Actions eyes are bent with laughter one’s eyes light up one’s eyes sparkle/shine with happiness dance with joy cheer and jump for joy [bent] 弯曲的 meme[miːm] 表情包 10 face: body: Actions He/She is sad； …… with tears in one’s eyes burst into tears tears roll/run down one’s cheeks be in floods of tears tears blur one’s eyes wipe tears from one’s face sob in one’s palms 11 face: body: Actions He/She is scared; …… face turned pale eyes wide open mouth wide open tremble legs are weak [ˈtrembl] 颤抖 [peɪl] 苍白的 12 Tom was lost. He was so ____that his face________ .(他吓得脸都变白了) _____________, he_____________, (沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌)wondering what to do next. Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, _______ was Tom that ______________.（汤姆太累了，很快就睡着了） Writing 13 Tom was lost. He was so scared that his faceturned pale.(Tom吓得脸都变白了) Depressed and helpless, he was in floods of tears , (沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌)wondering what to do next. Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, so tired was Tom that he fell asleep quickly.（汤姆太累了，很快就睡着了） Writing 14 Children’day is coming. Tom’s parents said that they would take him to the zoo .Hearing this, Tom jumped up with excitement. His face lit up and his eyes shone. The next morning, they set out early. Tom was delighted all the way with the birds singing songs for him. When they got to the zoo, Tom saw many toys on sales(出售)at the gate of the zoo. He wanted to buy a car toy. His father wouldn’t buy it for him. Tom cried and rolled(翻滚)on the ground. Paragraph1 _____________________________________（他父亲又气又恼，怒视着他，想揍他一顿。)__________________________________________________看到这一切，他母亲虽然不情愿，但也没办法，只好给他买了一个。)______________________________________他非常开心，一直在动物园里玩这辆车。)There were many lovely animals and people in the zoo. He was attracted by the lions. Suddenly, he couldn’t see his parents. Paragraph2 ________________(他吓得脸都变白了。)_____________(沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌,不知道下一步该怎么办);Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, _____________________.（汤姆太累了，很快就睡着了。） 15 Children’day is coming. Tom’s parents said that they would take him to the zoo .Hearing this, Tom jumped up with excitement.His face lit up and his eyes shone. The next morning, they set out early. Tom was delighted all the way with the birds singing songs for him. When they got to the zoo, Tom saw many toys on sales(出售)at the gate of the zoo. He wanted to buy a car toy. His father wouldn’t buy it for him. Tom cried and rolled(翻滚)on the ground. Angry and annoyed, his father glared at him,wanting to beat him.Seeing this, unwilling though his mother was, she had nothing to do but bought one for him. He was so delighted that he kept playing the car in the zoo. There were many lovely animals and people in the zoo. He was attracted by the lions. Suddenly, he couldn't see his parents.He was so scared that his face turned pale. Depressed and helpless, he was in floods of tears, wondering what to do next; Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, Tom was so tired that he fell asleep quickly. “I felt happy.” 无灵主语句：用无生命的事物来做主语 (换主语) : “开心(的情绪)抓住了我 ” (加介短) :“ 一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我” (加并列): “开心与振奋(的情绪)抓住了我” 我开心: Delight seized me. A wave of delight seized me. Delight and excitement seized me. 句型探索 · 无灵主语 情绪名词 固定动词 seize/catch/take hold of 抓住 strike/hit surround 围绕着 tear... into pieces 把..撕碎 well up in 涌入 come over 包围/支配 envelop 笼罩 overwhelm 压倒, 使难以承受 sweep/flood/rush over 袭来 choke 噎住，堵住 sb +as/when sb do sth 无灵主语:“情绪名词+固定动词+sb"+as/when sb do sth (当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头) a burst/wave/surge/sense/flush of +情绪名词 (一阵/一种 ... 向某人袭来) 万能句型1 a sense of/a wave of/a feeling of + 情绪名词 + welled up in one’s heart/within sb 一种……的感觉涌上某人的心头 Eg： A wave of warmth welled up in her heart.    一种温暖的感觉涌上某人的心头。 变形一 sb. felt a great sense of +情绪名词+ welling up in one's heart and surging through sb.     某人感到一股强烈的......感觉在内心升腾，奔涌 Eg： Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.  Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。 变形二  a sense of/ a feeling of/ a wave of + 情感名词 + seized(抓住）sb /overwhelmed （淹没）sb /flooded over (涌上）sb./took hold of（控制）sb     一种……的感觉......某人 Eg：1. A strong wave of fear swept over him and he couldn’t utter a single word. 一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身，他一个字也说不来。     2.  A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the good news. 一听到这个好消息，我很开心。 升级1： 句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。 Eg：  Hearing the thunderous applause for her performance, she felt a wave of excitement and pride welling up in her heart.  听到为她的表演而想起的雷鸣般的掌声，一股兴奋感和骄傲感涌上了她的心头。 升级2： Eg：  Jane felt a great sense of sorrow flooded over her, weeping loudly.     简感到一种强烈的悲痛涌了上来，她大声哭泣。 句尾可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生后 的结果或伴随动作。 升级3： 句首句尾可以加上with结构的伴随状语，表示这种情绪产生的原因、结果或状态。 Eg: 1. With the race starting, Jane felt a great sense of nervousness welling up in her heart and surging through her.     伴随着比赛的开始，简感到一种强烈的紧张在她心中涌出来。 2. Hearing the news that I was not chosen for the team, I felt a wave of sadness overwhelming me, with tears rolling down my face. 听到我没有被选入团队的消息，一股悲伤淹没了我，泪水顺着我的脸颊滚落下来。 万能句型2  表情感的adj.1 and 表情感的adj.2,  sb. did sth.  (升级句子后可跟doing sth..)    怀着...和...的感情，某人做... Eg: 1. Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing   her family. Jane又累又害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念着她的家人。 2. Nervous and slightly scared, I stepped onto the stage, took a deep breath and started to deliver my speech. （动作链）     有点紧张和害怕，我走上台，深呼吸，开始了我的演讲。 常用搭配 1.既开心又激动 2.既难过又沮丧 3.既紧张又焦虑 4.既担心又害怕 5.既坚定又自信 6.既惊讶又感动 7.既生气又失望 8.既疲倦又饥饿 delighted and excited sad and frustrated nervous and anxious worried and scared determined and confident surprised and touched annoyed and disappointed exhausted and hungry 万能句型3  So+表情感的adj.+was/were+主语+that从句    某人是如此的...以致于... Eg: 1. So nervous was I that I heard my heart pounding /beating wildly. 我非常紧张，能听到我的心剧烈地跳动。 2. On hearing the unexpected news, so surprised did he feel that  he froze with his  mouth wide open.    听到这个意外的消息，他如此地惊讶以致于长大嘴巴僵住了。 万能句型4  (much) to one’s + 情绪名词，sb did sth. Eg:  1. Much to mom’s relief, he returned home safe and sound. 使妈妈大大松了一口气的是，他安然无恙回来了。  2. Much to her gratitude, the kind stranger helped him in his time of need. 让她满心感激的是，那个善良的陌生人在她需要的时候帮助了她。    万能句型5 表情绪的adj + as +sb was/were, sb did sth. 尽管某人......,某人做了某事 Eg: 1. Sad as he was, he tried to hold back his tears. 尽管他很难过，他还是努力忍住眼泪。 2. Frustrated as he was about losing the competition, John was dermined to train harder . 尽管John 对输掉比赛感到沮丧，但他决心攻击能力的训练. 万能句型6 身体部位+非谓语动词, sb did sth. 某人做某事，感觉怎样 Eg: Face gleaming with delight, David lay quietly on the playground. 脸上洋溢(gleam)着快乐,David静静地躺在操场上。 Eyes filled with regretful tears, sb did sth... 眼里满含着后悔的泪水,... Eyes glittering with joy, sb did sth... 眼里闪着喜悦,... Face gleaming with delight, sb did sth... 脸上洋溢着快乐,... Heart beating with happiness, sb did sth... 心砰砰直跳,... Arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking, sb did sth 胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛,膝盖发抖,... Word Bank sb was so+情绪形容词+that 从句 某人如此......以至于...... 她太伤心了，突然哭了起来。 我很羞愧，感觉自己的脸在燃烧。 She was so sad that she burst into tears. I was so ashamed that I could feel my face burning. 1. (感到)开心和兴奋的,他给我打电话，分享了这个好消息。 2.(感到)沮丧和无助的, Eric泪流满面，不知道下一步该怎么办。 1._________________________(感到放松的和快乐的) , David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line(终点线) , conveying his happiness and gratitude. （2022全国1卷） 2.________________________(既惊讶又感动), Mr. Alder believed what I said, giving me a second chance. (2023广东一模) Depressed and helpless, Eric burst into tears, wondering what to do next. Relieved and delighted Surprised and touched Delighted and excited, he called me, sharing the good news. 情绪形容词①+情绪形容词②, sb do sth, doing sth. (感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2 尽管他很紧张,David还是决定完成赛跑。 尽管他又累又饿,他还是继续爬山。 ______________(尽管他很害怕), Helctor still plucked up his courage（鼓起勇气） to explain what had happened to Mr. Alder. ________________ (尽管他们感到恐慌和焦虑), the twins explained the situation to their father in a tremble voice. Scared as he was Panic and anxious as they were Exhausted and hungry as he was,he carried on climbing the mountain. Nervous as he was, David was determined to finish the race. 情绪形容词+as sb+be动词，sb (still) do sth. 尽管某人（感到）...，某人仍做某事 33 身体部位+非谓语动词, sb do sth. 某人做某事，感觉怎样 他感到开心和兴奋，终于拿到了他理想大学通知书(admission letter)，眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。 出乎意料，大卫顺利越过终点线(finish line)，脸上洋溢着满足的喜悦。 1. Delighted and excited, he finally got the admission letter from his ideal university, eyes glittering with joy. 2. To my surprise, David crossed the finish line smoothly , his face gleaming with satisfied delight . 举一反三：翻译这个句子。 他吓得脸都变白了。 Tom was so frightened that his face turned pale. Frightened,Tom’s face turned pale. Tom was frightened, his face turning pale. All roads lead to Rome. 高考读后续写应用翻译练习（2021年-2024年） 1. 他们的母亲既震惊又骄傲，轻声说：“谢谢，我的孩子们.” Shocked and proud, their mother said in a sweet whisper, “Thanks, my kids.” 2. 让他们欣慰的是，在父亲的指导下，他们成功地做好了早餐。 To their relief, with the guidance of father, they successfully made the breakfast. 高考读后续写应用翻译练习（2021年-2024年） 3. 看到David苍白的脸，我感到一种同情的心情涌上心头,这让我很难过。 Seeing David’s pale face, I felt a sense of pity welling up within me, which made me sad. 4. 她是如此的高兴以至于紧紧地抱着双胞胎，喜悦的泪水夺眶而出。 So delighted was she that she hugged the twins tightly, tears of joy welling up in her eyes. 高考读后续写应用翻译练习（2021年-2024年） 5. 令大家高兴的是，他到达了终点线，名列第20位。 To everyone’s joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. 6.当我走近房子时，一种好奇心席卷了我，不知道那只小鸟是否还在身边。 A sense of curiosity swept over me as I approached the house, wondering if the little bird was still around. 高考读后续写应用翻译练习（2021年-2024年） 7. David 是如此的意志坚定，以至于他忽略了周围的一切，只是向前看。 So determined was David that he ignored everything around him, just looking ahead. 8. 放松和喜悦的， David 在冲过终点线后立刻向我挥手， 传达着他的幸福和感激之情。 Relaxed and delighted，David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line , conveying his happiness and gratitude . 高考读后续写应用翻译练习（2021年-2024年） 9. 意识到发生了什么，她感觉到一股暖流在她心里涌动，奔腾而来。 Realizing what had happened, she felt a wave of warmth welling up in her heart and surging through her. 10. 尽管她很恐慌，但她仍然试图一层又一层地揭开她面前未知世界的神秘面纱。 Panicked as she was, she still tried to demystify the unknown world before her one floor after another. 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