Unit8 At Christmas.写作突破（课件）-2024-2025学年五年级英语上册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

译林版三年级起点五年级上册 Unit8 SUMMER 思维导图法介绍圣诞节 写作方法指引 基础知识精讲 模拟写作提升 Contents 真题写作练习 PART/ 01 写作方法指引 01 写作方法指引-教材引路 引入话题 具体活动1 具体活动2 具体活动3 结尾表达情感 01 写作方法指引-教材引路 PART/ 02 基础知识精讲 基础知识精讲-句型 介绍圣诞节具体活动： 句型： We sometimes… We also… We usually… I always… 短语： go shopping（去购物）、buy a Christmas tree（买一棵圣诞树）、put...on...（把…… 放在…… 上）、pretty things（漂亮的东西）、have a big lunch（吃一顿丰盛的午餐）、put a stocking on the bed（把长筒袜放在床上）、wait for presents（等待礼物） 基础知识精讲-描述事件顺序的连接词 First 表示首先，引导学生理解这是事情发生的第一步。 Next 表示接下来，说明在第一步之后的动作。 Then 表示然后，强调事情发展的顺序。 Finally 表示最后，让学生明白这是整个过程的结尾。 基础知识精讲-描述事件顺序的连接词 基础知识精讲-描述事件顺序的连接词 First, we buy presents. Next, we put pretty things on the Christmas tree Christmas. Then, Christmas Eve comes. Finally, it is Christmas Day. What presents? What else? What do you do? How do you feel? 基础知识精讲-写作框架 引入话题 Christmas comes. At Christmas, I am very happy. 具体活动1 … usually do …. …. always... 具体活动2 … like… 具体活动3 … sometimes… 结尾表达情感 I like Christmas very much. We all have a good time. PART/ 03 模拟写作提升 模拟写作提升1 前情提要： 描述自己和家人在圣诞节前的准备活动及平安夜的期待。 要求： 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于60个单词。 参考提示 框架： Christmas _______. Before Christmas, my family and I _____and _____. Next, we ______on it. Then, we have ______. On Christmas Eve, I ______ on the bed and _______ presents. It’s great fun ! 参考单词： go shopping（去购物）、buy a Christmas tree（买一棵圣诞树）、put...on...（把…… 放在…… 上）、pretty things（漂亮的东西）、have a big lunch（吃一顿丰盛的午餐）、put a stocking on the bed（把长筒袜放在床上）、wait for presents（等待礼物） 范文 Christmas Fun Christmas comes. Before Christmas, my family and I go shopping and buy a Christmas tree. Next, we put some pretty things on it. Then, we have a big lunch. On Christmas Eve, I put a stocking on the bed and wait for presents. It’s great fun ! 具体活动1 具体活动2 引入主题 具体活动3 结尾表达情感 具体活动4 模拟写作提升2 前情提要： 请描述你们一家人圣诞节是怎样过的，会做些什么，说些什么，吃些什么？ 要求： 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于60个单词。 参考提示 框架： Christmas comes. First, my parents, my sister, my brother and I _____. We _____ for _____. We also _____. Next, we _____on the Christmas tree. It looks _____. Then, we _____ on the beds. Finally, _____comes. We say, “_____!” to each other and _____. We ______. We all have a good time. 参考单词：go shopping; presents; family and friends; Christmas tree; put...on...; pretty things; stockings; Christmas Day; Merry Christmas; open presents; sing and dance; 范文 Christmas Fun Christmas comes. First, my parents, my sister, my brother and I go shopping in the morning. We buy a lot of presents for our family and friends. We also buy a big Christmas tree. Next, we put pretty things on the Christmas tree. It looks great. Then, we put stockings on the beds. Finally, Christmas Day comes. We say, “Merry Christmas!” to each other and open our presents. We sing and dance together. We all have a good time. 具体活动1 具体活动2 引入主题 具体活动3 结尾表达情感 具体活动4 PART/ 04 真题写作练习 真题写作练习-安徽马鞍山 请以描述自己在圣诞节的活动和感受。 内容包括： 制作卡片送给好朋友、去看圣诞老人、给圣诞老人写信、在圣诞树上放漂亮礼物、在平安夜把长筒袜放在床上等。 要求： 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于60个单词。 参考提示 参考句型： At Christmas, I am _____. I usually _______. I send _______. I often _______. I sometimes _______. I like _______. It's great fun. I always _______. I like Christmas very much. 参考单词： Christmas（圣诞节）、be happy（开心）、make cards（制作卡片）、send to（送给）、good friends（好朋友）、go to see Father Christmas（去看圣诞老人）、write a letter（写信）、pretty presents（漂亮礼物）、Christmas tree（圣诞树）、put on（放在…… 上）、Christmas Eve（平安夜）、stocking（长筒袜） 范文 At Christmas At Christmas, I am very happy. I usually make some cards. I send them to all my good friends. I often go to see Father Christmas. I sometimes write him a letter. I like putting some pretty presents on the Christmas tree. It's great fun. I always put a stocking on my bed on Christmas Eve. I like Christmas very much. 具体活动1 具体活动2 引入主题 具体活动3 结尾表达情感 具体活动4 Thank you! SUMMER $$