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适合学困生的读后续写语料库
1、 词汇/短语部分
1. 动词以及动词短语(构造动作链使用)
看
单词:look, see, watch, observe, notice, spot, stare, witness, sweep, overlook, glare, glance, peer, gaze, scan
短语:look back, look down, watch over, stare at, glare at, raise xxx’s eyes, at the sight of...,catch one’s eyes
走、跑
单词:walk, run, step, pace, wander, approach, snake, march, rush, dash, race, move, edge, stagger, stumble, stride
短语:run straight into, stride up to sb.(大步向某人走去),rush into(冲进),hurry off to, move towards, edge towards, head towards, dash towards, pace up and down(踱来踱去,走来走去),run as fast as xxx’s legs could carry sb.(飞快地跑)
跳(包含“脚”的一些说法)
单词:jump,leap,spring, skip(蹦蹦跳跳地走)
短语:jump/rise to xxx’s feet
sruggle to sb’s feet 挣扎地站起来
stagger to sb’s feet 摇摇晃晃地站起来
drag sb’s feet 拖着脚
dance with joy手舞足蹈
抓
单词:hold, catch, grab, grasp, snatch(夺去,抢走)
短语:hold onto(紧紧抓住)
拍
单词:pat 短语:pat on xxx’s shoulder
抱
单词:hug, embrace
说
单词:say, speak, tell, talk, shout, scream, whisper, add, insist, declare, complain, explain, announce, respond, comfort,utter, yell, roar, murmur, sigh, mutter,stammer(结结巴巴地说),sniff(不屑、不以为然地说)
短语:in a low tone/voice, in a gentle/soft tone, in whispers, with absolute certainty(斩钉截铁地说)
2. 副词(与动词搭配使用)
gently, quietly, enthusiastically, sincerely, seriously, polietly, proudly, loudly, patiently, smoothly, steadily, encouragingly, happily, cheerfully, brightly, sadly, breathlessly, firmly, definitely, rudely,thoughtfully,tightly, calmly, deeply
3. 形容词(描写人物+描写环境)
(1) 描写人物
· 外貌:fair白皙的,pale苍白的, tanned晒黑的,rosy红润的,well-built身体强壮的,overweight肥胖的,middle-sized中等身材的,attractive有吸引力的,charming迷人的
· 品格:warm-hearted, patient, considerate, strong-willed, mean, generous, brave, determined, lively, optimistic, inquiring, narrow-minded, easy-going, arrogant,sense of duty/responsibility
· 情绪:glad,cheerful,overjoyed,merry,thrilled极为激动、兴奋,
incredible/unbelievable,afraid,scared,frightened,angry,annoyed,terrible, sad,heart-broken, miserable, frustrated
(2) 描写环境
单词:
· 山:hill, mountain, peak, cave, valley→与形容词搭配:gentle平缓的,rocky多岩石的,rolling起伏的,steep陡峭的,bare光秃秃的,grassy多草的,towering高耸的,snowy积雪覆盖的,forested草木丛生的,wooded树木茂盛的
· 水:stream小溪,river,lake,shallows浅滩,sea→与形容词搭配:deep,clear,blue,rough,calm/smooth平静的,winding蜿蜒曲折的,fast-flowing水流湍急的,slow-moving流动缓慢的
· 风:wind,typhoon,hurricane飓风,breeze微风,tornado龙卷风→与形容词搭配:strong,terrible,slight,cold,icy,bitter,biting刺骨的
· 雨:rain,shower,storm,flood,drizzle细雨
· 雪:snow,snowstorm,blizzard暴风雪,snowflake雪花
· 树:tree,forest,woods
短语:listen to the water rolling down the river听着河水潺潺而下
the winding/running/gurgling stream蜿蜒的/奔流的/潺潺的小溪
low and rolling hills山势低缓,连绵起伏
the steep mountains陡峭的山
the snow-covered peaks积雪覆盖的山峰
the deep valley深谷
the gentle breeze温柔的微风
heavy/light rain 大、小雨
the howling wind 嚎叫的风
be destroyed in a typhoon 被台风摧毁
get caught in the rain 遇上雨
pour with the rain下着倾盆大雨
in the dim light在昏暗的灯光下
the burning sunshine灼热的阳光
bathe in the sun沐浴在阳光下
with the sun rising/setting日升、日落
the misty clouds雾霭
the thundering clouds 带着雷电的云
the deep blue sky湛蓝的天空
the deep cloudless sky万里无云的天空
the songs of the birds鸟儿的歌声
the fragrant flowers芬芳的花朵
4. 连接词 linking words
· 表示时间:
短语:several days ago, the other day不久前某一天,at first, at the beginning, then, ...minutes later, later on/after that后来,sice then/from then on从那时起,in the days that followed在接下来的日子里,immediately/at once/ in no time立即,finally/eventually/at last/in the end最后
句式:(1)was/ were doing sth. when...正在做某事时,突然...
(2)was/ were about to do sth. when...正要做某事时,突然...
(3)was/were on the point of doing sth. when...正要做某事时,突然...
(4)There was a time when...曾有一段时间...
(5)It was the first time that sb. had done sth. 这是某人第一次做某事
(6)as soon as/ the moment/ the minute/ the instant...一...就...
(7)no sooner... than.../ hardly... when...一...就...
(8)It was not long before...没过多久就...
(9)It didn’t take long before... 没过多久就...
· 表示让步
短语:im spite of,regardless of(不顾,不管),despite(尽管,即使)
even if/though, though, although
· 表示转折、结果
luckily/fortunately(幸运的是),unluckily/unfortunately(不幸的是),end up doing sth (以做某事结束),surprisingly/to one's astonishment/surprise (令某人惊讶的是),happily/to one’s delight (令某人高兴的是),regrettabaly/It is regrettable that.(令人遗憾的是…),It tured out that…(结果表明/原来...)
2、 句式部分
1. 编织“动作面”(动作+情绪/心理、语言、神态等各种描写)
· 开心/喜悦
(1)Overwhelmed by wild joy, I rose to my feet and punched my fist in the air, shouting out loudly, “I made it!”
被喜悦所淹没,我跳起来在空气中挥舞着我的拳头,大声喊着,“我做到了!”
(2)Hearing the inspiring news, he/ she leaped into the air with joy.
听到这个鼓舞人心的消息,他/她高兴地跳了起来。
(3) xxx feels happy and you can see the glint of excitement in her/his eyes.或者写成 he or she couldn’ t conceal her/his joy.或者 sb grinned from ear to ear.
xxx 感到很高兴,并且你可以看到他/她眼中兴奋的光芒。/xxx 感到很高兴,她/他 不能掩饰他/她的喜悦。/笑得合不拢嘴。
(4)sb’s heart is filled with pleasure and happiness, his/her face blooming like a flower./...beamed with satusfaction.
某人的心中充满了开心和幸福,脸绽放的像花一样。/满意地笑了。
(5)“。。。。。”(语言)said sb excitedly with tears sparkling in her/his eyes.
某人高兴地说道,在他的眼中有泪光闪烁。
(6)sb became happy now and a gentle smile spread over her/his face.
某人变得开心了并且整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。
(7) A surge of excitement bubbling up inside me, I looked up into my dad’s dark eyes, which were shining with delight.
· 生气/愤怒
(1)sb made / makes his/her blood boil when he/she heard this news.(或者其他,可自己替换)
当他/她听到这个消息时,他/她火冒三丈。
(2)sb felt so angry that she stormed out of the room, slamming the door violently.
某人是如此生气以至于他冲出房间,砰地关上了门。
(3)sb shivered withe anger, rubbing her/ his hands violently.
某人生气地发抖,猛烈地搓着自己的手。
(4)He didn't shout, and he just glared at me silently.
他没有大喊大叫,只是默默地怒视着我。
(5)erupt like a volcano像火山一样爆发
(6)in anger/be in a burst of anger在愤怒中
(7)“。。。。。。”I blurted out these words bottled in my heart, face crimson.
我脱口而出这些装在心里的话,脸绯红。
· 悲伤
(1)Her/His hands were shaking. She/He was on the verge of tears.
她/他的手颤抖着,她/他在掉下眼泪的边缘。(快要哭了)
(2)The last word went like a bullet to his/her heart, a ripple of sadness welled up inside him/her.
最后一句话像一颗子弹一样击中了他的心,他的内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。
(3)In spite of his disappointment, he managed a weak smile.
尽管失望,他还是勉强露出一丝淡淡的微笑。
(4)Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.
一听到这个消息,他心很痛,眼泪如溪水般顺着脸颊流下。
(5)As the result of an accident, sb was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
因为这件事,某人被投入黑暗之中,陷入绝望。
(6) Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.
一听到这个消息,她很心痛,眼泪如溪水般顺着面颊流下。
(7) He lay on the bed safe and sound, tears welling up in his eyes.
他安然地躺在床上,泪如泉涌。
· 害怕/恐惧/紧张/震惊
(1)sb’s heart pounding fiercely and one’s palm sweating, an inner voice told sb. that....(必背)
某人的心脏疯狂跳动,手掌出汗,内心有一个声音告诉自己要......
注意:这句话不光可以用来描写“害怕、恐惧”, 还可以用来描写震惊、紧张、迷茫。
(2)At the sight of the fierce wolf, sb felt so scared that her/his throat tightened and knees felt weak.
看到这只凶猛的狼,她吓得喉咙发紧,膝盖发软。
(3)He seemed to be struck by a bolt of thunder, mind blank.
他仿佛被雷击中一样,大脑瞬间一片空白。
(4)He stood there tongue-tied with his face turning pale.
他站在那说不出话,脸色苍白。
(5)He felt so nervous that he could feel his face burning.
他感到如此紧张脸发烫。
(6) sb had butterflies in xxx’s stomach紧张不安
(7) So nervous as he that he kept pacing back and forth in the room.
他是如此紧张以至于在房间里来回踱步。
(8) I stood before xxx, head drooping and heart thudding.
(9) I was stunned into slience./ with a wave of disbelief
· 感动
短语:move sb deeply, be moved to tears, touch sb’s heart, be touched/moved by...,a wave of warmth, be touched beyond words被感动地说不出话来,melt sb’s heart, feel extremely/deeply touched/moved
句式:(1)What moved sb most was that....
(2) xxx was overwhelmingly moved, saying that...
(3) xxx’s eyes glittering with tears of happiness.
(4) “This is the best gift I have ever received!” said the mother excitedly with tears sparkling in her eyes.
(5) Speechless and tearful, I gathered him in my arms and hugged him tightly (无语且泪眼朦胧,我把他拥入怀里,紧紧地抱住了他)
(6) His mom swept him into her arms with her eyes wet as if to squeeze the breath out of him.(他的妈妈紧紧地把他抱在怀里,眼睛湿润着,似乎快要让他不能呼吸)
· 犹豫
(1) When he beckoned me over the table, I edged closer reluctantly, expecting what would be in store for me.
当他示意我过来桌子这边时,我不情愿地慢慢靠近,期待着等待我的是什么。
(2) xxx hesitantly walked over to her.
· 羞愧/尴尬
(1) I was speechless at this, feeling ashamed of my selfishness and guilty at my misunderstanding.
(2) She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.
(3) So ashamed was she that she could feeel the blood rush to her faces.
2. 表示顿悟的句子
(1) Suddenly a brilliant idea flashed into his mind. His mind began to race, trying to think of a way out. (某人突然想起/某人的头脑开始快速转动)
(2) It suddenly occurred to sb. that...
(3) It hit sb that...
(4) It dawned on sb that...
3. 环境描写
(1) The gentle breeze transformed into a strong wind, and thick grey clouds filled the sky.
(2) The moon/sun/stars was shining brightly in the sky.(月亮在天上闪亮地照耀着)
(3) The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks.
天气晴朗,碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。
(4) The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds,(乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
(5) Slience fell upon us for a moment.
(6) Immediately/suddenly, an absolute darkness/silence/ ruled the forest and a wave of +情绪+ swept over sb.(突然间,一阵绝对的黑暗/沉默 控制了森林)
(7) It seemed the city was bathed in brilliant sunshine/pouring rain and even the tree were smiling/crying. 似乎整个城市都沐浴在灿烂阳光下,连树木都在微笑。
4. 主题升华句(主要写在最后)
(1) Every challenge we face is an opportunity to grow and redefine ourselves.(成长类)
(2) Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed into my mind,but the support of my family give me the strength to keep going.(成长类)
(3) His presentation wasn’t an assignment, but a testament to his ability to overcome obstacles.(成长类)
(4) At that time, xxx really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love.(亲情类)
(5) For Brad, he realized that if he hadn’t reach out to(主动与某人联系) his grandmother, it would be a lifelong regret.(亲情类)
(6) Quiet man as dad was, he clearly did more than he said and understand more than I thought.(亲情--父子)
(7) At that time, I learned that I could contribute to the household in my own way.
(8) It was xxx’s kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.(亲情,人际交往类)
(9) It was no exaggeration to utter that the unforgettable experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of xxx’s memories.(必背!!!!适用范围广!!!)
(10) Sometimes a small act of kindness maybe powerful enough to make a huge difference.有时候一个小小的善行可能足以带来巨大的变化。(助人类)
(11) The more you are willing to give, the more you will get.
你愿意付出的越多,你收获的就越多。(助人类)
(12) Love is the most precious gift in the world.(温情类!适用范围广!!)
(13) Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后,我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊!事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,就总有办法摆脱困难。(脱困类)
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