道歉信写作指导 讲义-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

道歉信写作指导 假定你是李华，在英国就读。前几天同学Jim在背后议论你，愤怒之下你在网上发帖指责他。后来你认识到自己的错误，写信向他致歉并承认错误，内容包括： 1.表示款意：2.反思。(2024云学联盟9月联考） 注意：1.写作词数80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 【应用文写作】本篇应用文要求考生写道歉信，立足于中学生成长，聚焦人际交往中矛盾的处理。 【详解】第一步：审好题 1.审体裁： 应用文 2.审格式： 道歉信（注意写信格式） 3.审内容：（1）表示歉意；（2）反思 4.审人称： 以第一人称写作 5.审时态： 错误行为的部分,以过去时态为主;反思部分，一般现在时或一般将来时为主。 第二步：布好局（Outline） 第一段：开门见山说明写作目的（表达歉意，说明道歉的缘由） 第二段：应具体说明道歉的原因及自己的反思。 （因为 Jim 在背后的议论，导致你愤怒之下在网上发帖指责他,承认自己的错误并反思，反思的内容可以包括自己的不当行为，如何正确地和同学沟通解决问题,也可提出合理的补救措施。） 第三段：重申主题表达期待 （再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解。） 第三步：组织好语言 （理清需要使用的重点词汇和句型。语言要诚挚，内容要让对方容易接受，从而真正达到道歉的写作目的） 重点词汇：Apologies; accused of; gossip about; privacy; commit to; resolve conflicts; discipline myself; made a stupid mistake; be overwhelmed with anger; play a crucial role in sth; make efforts to build a harmonious environment 连词成句：根据关键词（组），使用复合句及非谓语（虚拟语气、定语从句、主语从句、分词做状语、）等句型结构进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：写好字 （连句成篇） Possible Version 1: Dear Jim, I’m writing to convey my sincere apologies to you for my offensive remarks online, which may hurt you unconsciously. The reason why I made this stupid mistake was that I was absolutely overwhelmed with anger when hearing someone gossiping about me. But when I calmed down, it dawned on me that my actions were unreasonable and disrespectful. Much to my regret, I should have communicated with you directly rather than accusing you publicly without making it clear. What is known is that the Internet plays a crucial role in spreading information and exchanging views, not a tool for cyberbullying. As for me, I have the responsibility to be a civilized netizen and make efforts to build a harmonious environment. Sorry again for any damage caused by my inappropriate behavior. Sincerely, Li Hua Possible Version 2: Dear Jim, I am writing to express my heartfelt apologies for my recent inappropriate behavior on the Internet, where I publicly accused you of gossiping about me. But soon enough, I realized my actions were misguided and unreasonable. Anger clouded my judgment, leading me to ignore the principles of respect and privacy. I should have addressed the issue directly with you, but I chose a public platform, which only worsened the situation unnecessarily. Hereafter I will commit myself to resolving conflicts through private, respectful conversations and disciplining myself in my online conduct. Once again, I am really regretful for what I have done and hope for understanding and forgiveness. Sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$