19.必修第二册Unit 4 Stage and screen(写影评)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 4 Stage and screen 单元写作深度指导 　写影评(Writing a movie review) 【学以致用】 1.grateful adj.感谢的,感激的 (应用文之求助信)I would be very grateful if you could help me take care of my pet in my absence. 如果我不在的时候你能帮我照顾我的宠物,我将非常感激。 (应用文之感谢信)I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for your timely help.我谨借此机会对您给予我的及时帮助表示万分感谢。 (应用文之求助信)如果你能就如何交朋友给我一些建议,我将不胜感激。 →I would be grateful to you if you could give me some advice on how to make friends.(grateful)  →I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to make friends.(appreciate)  2.responsibility n.责任 (2023·全国甲卷)She warns of the environmental dangers facing society, and she teaches that people must take responsibility for saving their environment.她警告社会面临的环境危险,并教导人们必须承担起拯救环境的责任。 (应用文之招聘书) Peking Opera Club is looking for some new members who should have a strong sense of responsibility first!京剧俱乐部正在寻找一些新成员,他们首先要有强烈的责任感! (应用文之倡议书)呼吁人们保护我们的环境免受污染是我们的责任。 It is our responsibility to appeal to people to protect our environment from being polluted.  3.(教材原句) Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgement that something else is more important than fear.勇气并不是没有恐惧,而是判断出某些事情比恐惧更为重要。 (应用文之道歉信)我写这封信是为了向你道歉,因为没有参加英语俱乐部的活动。 →I am writing to make an apology to you for being absent from the activity of the English club.(absent)  →I am writing to apologize to you for my absence from the activity of the English club.(absence)  4.appealing adj.有吸引力的;有趣的 (应用文之邀请信)I’m writing to invite you to the music festival which consists of many appealing programs.我写信邀请你参加这个音乐节,这个音乐节有许多吸引人的节目。 (应用文之演讲稿)We make an appeal to the students to set aside at least an hour every day to take exercise in order to raise learning efficiency.为了提高学习效率,我们呼吁学生们每天至少留出一个小时锻炼。 5.(教材原句)Good movies need good stories.If so,why has one of the earliest and greatest works in Western storytelling,Homer’s The Odyssey,never had an equally great movie based on it? 好电影需要好故事。如果这样的话,西方叙事史上最早、最伟大的作品之一,荷马的《奥德赛》,为什么从来没有一部同样伟大的电影是根据它拍摄的呢? (应用文之倡议书)总之,我们必须保护水资源并寻找重复利用水的方法。不然的话,最后一滴水将是我们的眼泪。 In a word, we must preserve the water resource as well as find ways to reuse it.If not, the last drop of water will be our teardrop.  注： 句中If so意为“如果这样的话”,so代替前面句子的肯定内容,构成省略条件句,常见的类似结构有: if not　　　　如果不这样的话 if necessary 如果有必要的话 if possible 如果可能的话 if any 如果有的话 if ever 如果曾经有过的话 I.题型解读 本单元的写作任务是写一个影评,即电影评论,属于夹叙夹议的议论文,是对一部电影的导演、演员、摄影技术、剧情、环境等进行分析和评论的文章。 影评的写作要求主要涉及以下几方面:影片的名称、类型、故事发生的背景、故事情节、社会影响力及自己的评价。其目的在于评价蕴含在荧屏中的审美价值、社会意义、镜头语言等方面。影评要求考生就影片特点进行评论,叙议结合,既有对电影总体内容和主要情节的介绍,又有对重点画面的描述和评论,文章以分析、议论为主。 II.策略框架 III.教材词汇 (1)a movie about...　　　 一部关于……的电影 (2)explore the theme of... 探索……的主题 (3)in an intelligent and humorous way 以一种聪明幽默的方式 (4)the most memorable scene 最令人难忘的场景 (5)be touched 被触动 (6)the most unforgettable lines 最难忘的台词 (7)an interesting movie 一部有趣的电影 IV.常用词块 (1)be directed by 由……执导 (2)be famous/well-known for 因……而出名 (3)make a deep impression on 给……留下深刻印象 (4)be impressed by/with 对……印象深刻 (5)be set in 以……为背景 (6)adapt from 根据……改写/改编 (7)be based on 以……为根据 (8)star in 在……中担任主角 (9)speak highly of 高度评价 (10)highly/strongly recommend强烈推荐 (11)be worth watching 值得观看 (12)play the part of 扮演 (13)be popular with... 受……欢迎 (14)be well received 深受好评 V.话题句式 (1)段首句 ①The film is directed by a famous director. 该电影由著名的导演执导。 ②The action takes place in France. 这个故事发生在法国。 ③The film, starring Miss Zhang and Mr Wu, is based on real events. 这部电影由章小姐和吴先生主演,以真实事件为蓝本。 ④The film World of Plainness is adapted from a novel of the same name. 电影《平凡的世界》由同名小说改编而来。 ⑤The film directed by this director turned out to be a masterpiece. 结果证明由这位导演执导的那部影片是一个杰作。 (2)主体段落句 ①The most memorable scene is how the hero overcame difficulties and returned to his homeland. 最令人难忘的一幕就是主人公如何克服困难回到祖国。 ②All the exciting moments are recreated in the film, along with some dramatic fictional additions.影片复现了所有令人兴奋的时刻,并加入了一些戏剧性的虚构情节。 ③The film explores the theme of responsibility in an intelligent and humorous way. 这部电影以一种聪明幽默的方式探索了责任的主题。 (3)段尾句 ①I was deeply moved by the characters’ bravery and kindness. 我被人物的勇敢和善良深深地打动了。 ②New technology and beautiful natural scenery are the two highlights of the film. 新科技和美丽的自然风光是这部电影的两大亮点。 ③I like the film.Watching the film, I was on the edge of my seat. 我喜欢这部电影。看电影的时候,我极为激动。 ④Even with these small problems, the film is still a great film, and I really enjoy it! 虽然有瑕疵,但这部电影仍不失为一部伟大的电影,我非常喜欢它! 根据《阿凡达》(Avatar)的简介,写一篇影评,内容如下: 1.导演:詹姆斯·卡梅隆(James Cameron);两位主角:杰克·萨利(Jake Sully)由萨姆·沃辛顿(Sam Worthington)扮演和涅提妮(Neytiri)由佐伊·索尔达娜(Zoe Saldana)扮演。 2.故事情节:克隆人阿凡达被送到潘多拉星球(Pandora Planet)说服那里的人离开星球,使人类可以开采一种稀有矿产。杰克被派遣到那里操纵他的阿凡达。然而,他遇到涅提妮,并与之相爱。最后,他和那里的人民一起打败人类,并将其遣送回地球。 3.感想:3D技术和美丽的自然风光是电影的两大亮点。电影的主题是人类应该保护自然,与自然和谐相处。 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.电影《阿凡达》证明非常成功。 The film Avatar has proved to be a great success.  2.它是由詹姆斯·卡梅隆执导的。 It is directed by James Cameron.  3.(一句多译)由萨姆·沃辛顿和佐伊·索尔达娜主演,这部电影绝对不容错过。 →The film is starred by Sam Worthington and Zoe Saldana.You should definitely not miss the movie.  →Starring Sam Worthington and Zoe Saldana, it’s definitely a movie that you should not miss.(用非谓语动词和定语从句来表达)  4.克隆人阿凡达被送到潘多拉星球,说服那里的人离开星球。 Clone man named Avatar is sent to Pandora Planet to persuade people there to leave the planet.  5.人类可以开采一种稀有矿产。 Human beings can exploit a rare mineral. 6.然而,在那里他遇到了涅提妮,并与之相爱。 However,he comes across Neytiri there and they fall in love with each other.  7.(一句多译)最后杰克和当地人合作击败了人类,把他们送回地球。 →At last Jake and the people there work together to defeat human beings and send them back to the earth.  →At last Jake and the people there work together to defeat human beings,sending them back to the earth.(v.-ing短语作结果状语)  8.电影的主题是人类应保护自然,与其和谐相处。 The theme of the movie is that human beings should protect nature and live in harmony with it.  Step 3:衔接成篇 The film Avatar, directed by James Cameron, has proved to be a great success.Starring Sam Worthington and Zoe Saldana, it’s definitely a movie that you should not miss. Clone man named Avatar is sent to Pandora Planet to persuade people there to leave the planet so that human beings can exploit a rare mineral.Jake is sent there to control his Avatar.However, it is there that he comes across Neytiri and falls in love with her.At last Jake and the people there work together to defeat human beings,sending them back to the earth. 3D technology and the beautiful natural scenery are the two highlights of the film.The movie explores the theme that human beings should protect nature and live in harmony with it. 1．请根据以下关于电影《ET外星人》的简介，用英语写一篇电影评论。 A Film Review 片名（Name）：《ET外星人》(ET) 导演（Director）：史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg) 剧情梗概：外星人(ET)误留在地球上，Elliott (Henry Thomas饰)把他秘密留在家里躲避成年人。ET和Elliott成为好朋友，分享痛苦与快乐，最后几个孩子准备冒险送ET返回自己的星球。 评价(Comment)：本片美丽而感人；告诫人们友谊和爱是人生最重要的。 注意：词数80个左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“我说电影”为主题的征文活动，请你针对自己喜欢的电影写一篇影评并投稿。内容包括： 1.电影的简单介绍； 2.你的评价。 注意：1.词数100词左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇发言稿参赛。 内容：1. 人物评价；2. 你敬佩的原因；3. 你的评价或对你的影响。 注意：1. 词数应为80左右； 2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总数。 The Person I Admire Most Dear fellow students, There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank You! 4．请根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(KungFuPanda)的影评。 1.动画电影《功夫熊猫》取材于中国文化。 2.情景:一个平凡的熊猫成为一个龙武士的故事。师傅起初不认为熊猫能成为龙武士,但是通过不断的努力,他最后得到了师傅的认可,并打败了他们的敌人——老虎。 3.主题:只要努力,每个人都能成功。 注意:词数80左右。 提示词:师傅master;龙武士 dragon warrior _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假定你是李华，你在英国某学校读高中。下周末是你们学校的电影节，你准备写一篇纪录片《伟大诗人杜甫（Du Fu：China’s Greatest Poet）》的影评登载在校刊上，推荐同学们在电影节时观看此纪录片。 主要包括：1. 基本信息：发行时间：2020年； 发行机构：BBC； 导演、主持：Michael Wood； 诗歌朗读：Ian McKellen; 2. 主要内容： ①主持人通过诗歌讲述了杜甫的生平 ②杜甫是一位现实主义诗人，他的诗歌反映了当时人民生活的疾苦 ③这个纪录片获得了广泛好评/赞誉。 3.是否推荐观看。 参考词汇：现实主义诗人realistic poet   纪录片documentary 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 注意：1.词数80左右； _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华，你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏，请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。 片名 The Wandering Earth 导演 郭帆 故事梗概 该片改编于刘慈欣的同名小说。影片讲述了在不久的未来太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不适合人类生存。面对绝境，人们将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。 评论 1. 该电影是中国科幻电影史上的里程碑，自上映以来，深受观众欢迎。 2. …… 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 不要逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：里程碑landmark _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．某英文杂志的Film Reviews栏目现向中学生征稿。请你写一则影评，介绍《美女与野兽》(Beauty and the Beast)。 类型：美国奇幻片； 导演：比尔·康顿； 剧情介绍：本片根据1991年同名动画电影改编，讲述了勇敢而美丽的少女贝尔为了解救父亲而与被邪恶的女巫变成野兽的王子朝夕相处，最终用真爱战胜魔法的故事。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．上周六，学校组织高二级的全体学生观看了2005版的《雾都孤儿》的电影，请根据所给信息，写一篇影评。 经典场景一：在济贫院希望多分一点粥 经典场景二：被当做小偷在街上被众人追赶 【写作内容】 电影名称 Oliver Twist 基本信息 1．背景：电影由Roman Polanski执导，2005年上映。以维多利亚时代的伦敦为背景，讲述了奥利佛的悲惨身世及遭遇。 2．情节：故事改编自英国著名作家查尔斯·狄更斯于1938年出版的同名长篇小说，主人公Oliver Twist在孤儿院(orphanage)长大，当过学徒(serve as an apprentice)，误入以Fagin为首的贼窝 (a gang of thieves)，被Bill Sikes胁迫盗窃，拒绝后命在旦夕。最终在善良的Mr. Browlow, Nancy, Rose Maylie等人的帮助下，Oliver查明身世并获得了幸福。 3．主题：揭露济贫院(The workhouse)、童工以及帮派组织吸收青少年参与犯罪等社会问题，宣扬“向善”与“感恩”。 你对影片的评价 就影片的主题、人物特征、表演、语言等任选一个或多个角度，发表自己的见解。 【写作要求】 1．词数：120-150词左右，标题和开头已提供，不计入词数。 2．书写：分段清晰，书写美观，卷面干净。 3．表达：用上unit5、6的相关表达，建议通过连接词、非谓语、从句等形式，体现表达的准确性、观点的科学性、句式的丰富性、结构的连贯性。 My Film Review on Oliver Twist Last Saturday, our school organized the students of Senior Grade Two to watch the Film Oliver Twist released in 2005. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．英语课上，老师让大家观看了电影《阿甘正传》（Forrest Gump）。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语影评。 类型 故事片 导演 Robert Zemeckis 主演 Tom Hanks (Forrest Gump) and Robin Wright (Jenny Curran) 剧情梗概 阿甘智商只有75，妈妈却让他能像普通孩子一样上学。在学校阿甘认识了一生的朋友和至爱珍妮。阿甘有一双跑得很快的腿，在妈妈和珍妮的爱护和鼓励下，他开始了一生不停的奔跑。单纯的思想和执着的信念使他取得了一系列的成功。 评价 1. 一部非常好的故事片；2. 愉悦心灵的同时发人深省。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯； 3. 参考词汇：1. 智商intelligence quotient( IQ )  2. 故事片feature film 10．电影《哈利·波特与魔法石》是根据英国作家J.K. Rowling的小说改编而成的。请根据下表中的提示写一篇80词左右的影评。 片名 Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone 导演 Chris Columbus 故事梗概 哈利失去双亲，在姨母家受到虐待。11岁生日时，他被邀请到霍格沃茨（Hogwarts）魔法学校上学，那是一个神奇莫测的魔幻世界。在学校里，哈利学习了魔法，经历了许多冒险和神奇的事情，也获得了真正的友谊，学会了勇敢。 评价 … _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1． A Film Review ET is a film directed by Steven Spielberg. It is about a story that a creature, ET, is mistakenly left behind on the earth. A boy called Elliott, acted by Henry Thomas, hides ET in his house to protect ET from the cold world of grown-ups. They become good friends, sharing sorrow and happiness and at last some children decide to take the risk of sending ET back to his planet. The film is moving and beautiful, which shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给关于电影《ET外星人》的简介，用英语写一篇电影评论。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 给……命名：call→name 决定做某事：decide to do sth.→determine to do sth. 感人的：moving→touching 重要的：important→significant 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：ET is a film directed by Steven Spielberg. 拓展句：ET is a film which is directed by Steven Spielberg. 【高分句型1】It is about a story that a creature, ET, is mistakenly left behind on the earth. (运用了that引导的同位语从句) 【高分句型2】The film is moving and beautiful, which shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句) 2．Operation Red Sea is a thrilling Chinese war film directed by Dante Lam, a famous director from Hong Kong. Inspired by the evacuation of nearly 600 Chinese citizens from Yemen’s southern port of Aden during the Yemeni Civil War in late March of 2015, the director intends to show the bravery of the Chinese Navy. It tells the story of the Chinese Navy’s Jiaolong Assault Team, which is sent on a mission to rescue Chinese citizens and foreigners that eventually takes them to stop terrorists from gaining possession of nuclear materials to make dirty bombs. The characters’ bravery and kindness touched my heart deeply, making it appeal to people of all ages. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“我说电影”为主题的征文活动，请你针对自己喜欢的电影写一篇影评并投稿。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 著名的：famous→celebrated 最终：eventually→finally 感到：touch→move 吸引：appeal to→attract 2.句式拓展 原句：Operation Red Sea is a thrilling Chinese war film directed by Dante Lam, a famous director from Hong Kong. 拓展句：Operation Red Sea is a thrilling Chinese war film directed by Dante Lam, who is a famous director from Hong Kong. 【高分句型1】Inspired by the evacuation of nearly 600 Chinese citizens from Yemen’s southern port of Aden during the Yemeni Civil War in late March of 2015, the director intends to show the bravery of the Chinese Navy.(运用了过去分词作状语) 【高分句型2】It tells the story of the Chinese Navy’s Jiaolong Assault Team, which is sent on a mission to rescue Chinese citizens and foreigners that eventually takes them to stop terrorists from gaining possession of nuclear materials to make dirty bombs.(运用了which引导定语从句，that引导定语从句，动名词作宾语和不定式作目的状语) 3．                                                             The Person I Admire Most Dear fellow students,     There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is Mrs Wu, aged 30, my English teacher, who has been teaching English for 6 years.     Mrs Wu is kind and considerate towards us students just like our dear mother. Once, one of my classmates got injured accidentally and without hesitation Mrs Wu took him to hospital for medical treatment at once. What impresses me most is that she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. Also, she is very patient with us and always helps us find solutions to problems when we turn to her for help. With her help, our English has made rapid progress.     In my eyes, Mrs Wu is more than our teacher. She’s also our best friend. That’s why she deserves our respect.         That’s all. Thank You! 【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以The Person I Admire Most为题写一篇演讲稿。 【要点提示】1. 词汇积累 体贴的：considerate→ thoughtful 意外地：accidentally→ unexpectedly 立刻：at once→ immediately 帮助：help→ assistance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Mrs Wu is kind and considerate towards us students just like our dear mother. 拓展句：Mrs Wu, who is just like our dear mother, is kind and considerate towards us students. [高分句型1] And the person I admire most is Mrs Wu, aged 30, my English teacher, who has been teaching English for 6 years.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] What impresses me most is that she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. （运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句） 4．Kung Fu Panda,a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements, was released in June,2008. This film tells us a story about how an ordinary panda becomes a real dragon warrior. At the beginning, the master did not believe the panda can be a dragon warrior. But with the panda’s hard work, he wins the master’s acceptance. The master tries his best to train the panda into a real warrior. Finally, the panda defeated their biggest enemy, the tiger. This film shows that as long as we work hard, everyone can succeed. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(KungFuPanda)的影评。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 上映：released→ showed 尽他最大的努力做某事：tries his best to do→ makes his effort to do 最终：Finally→ In the end 打败：defeated→ beated 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Kung Fu Panda, a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements, was released in June, 2008. 拓展句：Kung Fu Panda, which is a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements, was released in June, 2008. 【高分句型1】This film tells us a story about how an ordinary panda becomes a real dragon warrior.（运用了连接副词how引导的宾语从句。） 【高分句型2】This film shows that as long as we work hard, everyone can succeed.（运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句以及as long as引导的条件状语从句。） 5．I watched a documentary recording the great poet Du Fu. The name is Du Fu: China's greatest poet. Released by BBC in 2020, the documentary is directed and hosted by Michael wood. Ian McKellen is invited to interpret and recite Du Fu’s poems. Du Fu is a realistic poet who lived in the historical period from prosperity to decline in the Tang Dynasty. His poetry reflects the sufferings of people’s life at that time. The documentary has won wide recognition. I strongly recommend that you see this documentary. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为纪录片《伟大诗人杜甫（Du Fu：China’s Greatest Poet）》写一篇影评，介绍基本信息以及主要内容，推荐同学们在电影节时观看。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 发行：release→issue 反映：reflect→mirror 苦难：sufferings→misery 赢得：win→gain 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Released by BBC in 2020, the documentary is directed and hosted by Michael wood. 拓展句：The documentary which was released by BBC in 2020 is directed and hosted by Michael wood. 【高分句型1】Du Fu is a realistic poet who lived in the historical period from prosperity to decline in the Tang Dynasty.（运用了who引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】I strongly recommend that you see this documentary.（运用了that引导宾语从句，从句使用虚拟语气） 6．        The Wandering Earth is a science fiction film directed by Guo Fan and adapted from Liu Cixin's novel of the same name. The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying and the solar system is no longer suitable for life. Faced with the danger of human extinction, people will start the "Wandering Earth" project, trying to escape from the solar system with the earth and looking for a new home for human beings. The film is a landmark in the history of Chinese science fiction films and has been popular with audience since its release. So I highly recommend this film. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于影评，考生根据表格中的提示为校英语报介绍影视作品的栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 改编：revise→adapted from 适合做：is fit for →is suitable for 面对：facing→ faced with j建议：suggest→ recommend 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The film is a landmark in the history of Chinese science fiction films and has been popular with audience since its release. So I highly recommend this film. 拓展句： The film is a landmark in the history of Chinese science fiction films and has been popular with audience since its release，which is why I highly recommend this film. [高分句型1] Faced with the danger of human extinction, people will start the "Wandering Earth" project, trying to escape from the solar system with the earth and looking for a new home for human beings.（非谓语动词作状语） [高分句型2]The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying and the solar system is no longer suitable for life.（that引导的同位语从句） 7．One possible version: Beauty and the Beast, directed by Bill Condon, is an amazing American fantasy film. Adapted from a cartoon film of the same name, which was created in 1991, the new version’s characters are real persons. In order to save her father, who is trapped by an ugly beast, Belle, a brave and beautiful girl, has to live with the frightening beast in a castle. Having been a prince, the beast was changed by an evil witch. Only if he can get true love, can he become a person again. After going through plenty of difficulties, the beast earnes Belle’s love. The film, with lovely characters, beautiful music and interesting plot, is really a success. It is worth watching. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写一则影评给某英文杂志的Film Reviews栏目投稿，介绍《美女与野兽》(Beauty and the Beast)。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 为了：in order to→so as to 救出：save→rescue 丑陋的：ugly→hideous 可爱的：lovely→adorable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Beauty and the Beast, directed by Bill Condon, is an amazing American fantasy film. 拓展句：Beauty and the Beast, which was directed by Bill Condon, is an amazing American fantasy film. [高分句型1] Adapted from a cartoon film of the same name, which was created in 1991, the new version’s characters are real persons. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Only if he can get true love, can he become a person again. (运用了部分倒装) 8．范文 My Film Review on Oliver Twist Last Saturday, our school organized the students of Senior Grade Two to watch the Film Oliver Twist released in 2005. Directed by Roman Polanski, the movie is set against the backdrop of Victorian London and tells the tragic story of Oliver Twist's life and experiences. The film is based on the novel of the same name published by the famous British author Charles Dickens in 1838. The film highlights the societal issues of the time, including the poor conditions in workhouses, child labor, and the exploitation of minors by gangs. One memorable scene from the film was when Oliver was begging for more food in the workhouse. Another impactful scene was when Oliver was mistaken for a thief and chased by a mob through the streets. Overall, I was impressed by the performances of the cast, especially the young actor who played Oliver. The film accurately portrayed the characters' personalities and motivations. In conclusion, Oliver Twist is a must-see film that delves into the societal issues of the Victorian era and teaches the important values of kindness and gratitude. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据观看的2005版的电影——《雾都孤儿》和所给信息，写一篇影评。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 追赶：chase→run after 问题：issue→problem 重要的：important→vital 总之：in conclusion→all in all 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The film highlights the societal issues of the time, including the poor conditions in workhouses, child labor, and the exploitation of minors by gangs. 拓展句：The film highlights the societal issues of the time, which includes the poor conditions in workhouses, child labor, and the exploitation of minors by gangs. [高分句型1] Directed by Roman Polanski, the movie is set against the backdrop of Victorian London and tells the tragic story of Oliver Twist's life and experiences. (运用了过去分词作状语) [高分句型2] In conclusion, Oliver Twist is a must-see film that delves into the societal issues of the Victorian era and teaches the important values of kindness and gratitude. (运用了that引导定语从句) 9．Forrest Gump is a feature film directed by Robert Zemeckis. Forrest Gump (played by Tom Hanks), with an IQ of only 75, manages to go to school like normal kids, where he meets Jenny Curran (played by Robin Wright), his lifelong friend and true love. Gump has an unusual ability to run very fast. With the care and encouragement of his mother and Jenny, Gump starts a lifelong journey of running. He has a simple mind and sticks to his dreams, which helps him make a series of achievements. Absolutely, this film is very good in that it not only brings us pleasure but also leads us to think deeply. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给电影《阿甘正传》写一篇英语影评。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 坚持：persist in→stick to 尝试：attempt to→manage to 快乐：happiness→pleasure 不寻常的：distinctive→unusual 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With the care and encouragement of his mother and Jenny, Gump starts a lifelong journey of running. 拓展句：Gump starts a lifelong journey of running because his mother and Jenny gave him the care and encouragement. [高分句型1] Forrest Gump (played by Tom Hanks), with an IQ of only 75, manages to go to school like normal kids, where he meets Jenny Curran (played by Robin Wright), his lifelong friend and true love. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Absolutely, this film is very good in that it not only brings us pleasure but also leads us to think deeply. (运用了in that引导原因状语从句) 10．Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone is a fantasy film, which is adapted from the novel written by the English writer J. K. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus. In the movie, Harry, whose parents were dead, was badly treated at his aunt's home. But fortunately, on his 11th birthday, he was invited to go to Hogwarts, a magic school where he could learn magic. It was a world full of magic and wonders. After Harry had experienced many adventurous and wonderful things there, he gained true friendship and learned to be brave. The movie is a great success and it's popular with people all over the world. Through it, we can learn to believe in ourselves and help others. So I highly recommend it. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就电影《哈利·波特与魔法石》写一篇80词左右的影评。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 电影：film→movie 幸运地：fortunately→luckily 充满：be full of→be filled with 获得：gain→obtain 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone is a fantasy film, which is adapted from the novel written by the English writer J. K. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus. 同义句：Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone is a fantasy film adapted from the novel written by the English writer J. K. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus. [高分句型1] Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone is a fantasy film, which is adapted from the novel written by the English writer J. K. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] After Harry had experienced many adventurous and wonderful things there, he gained true friendship and learned to be brave. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 4 Stage and screen 单元写作深度指导 　写影评(Writing a movie review) 【学以致用】 1.grateful adj.感谢的,感激的 (应用文之求助信)I would be very grateful if you could help me take care of my pet in my absence. 如果我不在的时候你能帮我照顾我的宠物,我将非常感激。 (应用文之感谢信)I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for your timely help.我谨借此机会对您给予我的及时帮助表示万分感谢。 (应用文之求助信)如果你能就如何交朋友给我一些建议,我将不胜感激。 →I would be grateful to you if you could give me some advice on how to make friends.(grateful)  →I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to make friends.(appreciate)  2.responsibility n.责任 (2023·全国甲卷)She warns of the environmental dangers facing society, and she teaches that people must take responsibility for saving their environment.她警告社会面临的环境危险,并教导人们必须承担起拯救环境的责任。 (应用文之招聘书) Peking Opera Club is looking for some new members who should have a strong sense of responsibility first!京剧俱乐部正在寻找一些新成员,他们首先要有强烈的责任感! (应用文之倡议书)呼吁人们保护我们的环境免受污染是我们的责任。 It is our responsibility to appeal to people to protect our environment from being polluted.  3.(教材原句) Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgement that something else is more important than fear.勇气并不是没有恐惧,而是判断出某些事情比恐惧更为重要。 (应用文之道歉信)我写这封信是为了向你道歉,因为没有参加英语俱乐部的活动。 →I am writing to make an apology to you for being absent from the activity of the English club.(absent)  →I am writing to apologize to you for my absence from the activity of the English club.(absence)  4.appealing adj.有吸引力的;有趣的 (应用文之邀请信)I’m writing to invite you to the music festival which consists of many appealing programs.我写信邀请你参加这个音乐节,这个音乐节有许多吸引人的节目。 (应用文之演讲稿)We make an appeal to the students to set aside at least an hour every day to take exercise in order to raise learning efficiency.为了提高学习效率,我们呼吁学生们每天至少留出一个小时锻炼。 5.(教材原句)Good movies need good stories.If so,why has one of the earliest and greatest works in Western storytelling,Homer’s The Odyssey,never had an equally great movie based on it? 好电影需要好故事。如果这样的话,西方叙事史上最早、最伟大的作品之一,荷马的《奥德赛》,为什么从来没有一部同样伟大的电影是根据它拍摄的呢? (应用文之倡议书)总之,我们必须保护水资源并寻找重复利用水的方法。不然的话,最后一滴水将是我们的眼泪。 In a word, we must preserve the water resource as well as find ways to reuse it.If not, the last drop of water will be our teardrop.  注： 句中If so意为“如果这样的话”,so代替前面句子的肯定内容,构成省略条件句,常见的类似结构有: if not　　　　如果不这样的话 if necessary 如果有必要的话 if possible 如果可能的话 if any 如果有的话 if ever 如果曾经有过的话 I.题型解读 本单元的写作任务是写一个影评,即电影评论,属于夹叙夹议的议论文,是对一部电影的导演、演员、摄影技术、剧情、环境等进行分析和评论的文章。 影评的写作要求主要涉及以下几方面:影片的名称、类型、故事发生的背景、故事情节、社会影响力及自己的评价。其目的在于评价蕴含在荧屏中的审美价值、社会意义、镜头语言等方面。影评要求考生就影片特点进行评论,叙议结合,既有对电影总体内容和主要情节的介绍,又有对重点画面的描述和评论,文章以分析、议论为主。 II.策略框架 III.教材词汇 (1)a movie about...　　　 一部关于……的电影 (2)explore the theme of... 探索……的主题 (3)in an intelligent and humorous way 以一种聪明幽默的方式 (4)the most memorable scene 最令人难忘的场景 (5)be touched 被触动 (6)the most unforgettable lines 最难忘的台词 (7)an interesting movie 一部有趣的电影 IV.常用词块 (1)be directed by 由……执导 (2)be famous/well-known for 因……而出名 (3)make a deep impression on 给……留下深刻印象 (4)be impressed by/with 对……印象深刻 (5)be set in 以……为背景 (6)adapt from 根据……改写/改编 (7)be based on 以……为根据 (8)star in 在……中担任主角 (9)speak highly of 高度评价 (10)highly/strongly recommend强烈推荐 (11)be worth watching 值得观看 (12)play the part of 扮演 (13)be popular with... 受……欢迎 (14)be well received 深受好评 V.话题句式 (1)段首句 ①The film is directed by a famous director. 该电影由著名的导演执导。 ②The action takes place in France. 这个故事发生在法国。 ③The film, starring Miss Zhang and Mr Wu, is based on real events. 这部电影由章小姐和吴先生主演,以真实事件为蓝本。 ④The film World of Plainness is adapted from a novel of the same name. 电影《平凡的世界》由同名小说改编而来。 ⑤The film directed by this director turned out to be a masterpiece. 结果证明由这位导演执导的那部影片是一个杰作。 (2)主体段落句 ①The most memorable scene is how the hero overcame difficulties and returned to his homeland. 最令人难忘的一幕就是主人公如何克服困难回到祖国。 ②All the exciting moments are recreated in the film, along with some dramatic fictional additions.影片复现了所有令人兴奋的时刻,并加入了一些戏剧性的虚构情节。 ③The film explores the theme of responsibility in an intelligent and humorous way. 这部电影以一种聪明幽默的方式探索了责任的主题。 (3)段尾句 ①I was deeply moved by the characters’ bravery and kindness. 我被人物的勇敢和善良深深地打动了。 ②New technology and beautiful natural scenery are the two highlights of the film. 新科技和美丽的自然风光是这部电影的两大亮点。 ③I like the film.Watching the film, I was on the edge of my seat. 我喜欢这部电影。看电影的时候,我极为激动。 ④Even with these small problems, the film is still a great film, and I really enjoy it! 虽然有瑕疵,但这部电影仍不失为一部伟大的电影,我非常喜欢它! 根据《阿凡达》(Avatar)的简介,写一篇影评,内容如下: 1.导演:詹姆斯·卡梅隆(James Cameron);两位主角:杰克·萨利(Jake Sully)由萨姆·沃辛顿(Sam Worthington)扮演和涅提妮(Neytiri)由佐伊·索尔达娜(Zoe Saldana)扮演。 2.故事情节:克隆人阿凡达被送到潘多拉星球(Pandora Planet)说服那里的人离开星球,使人类可以开采一种稀有矿产。杰克被派遣到那里操纵他的阿凡达。然而,他遇到涅提妮,并与之相爱。最后,他和那里的人民一起打败人类,并将其遣送回地球。 3.感想:3D技术和美丽的自然风光是电影的两大亮点。电影的主题是人类应该保护自然,与自然和谐相处。 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.电影《阿凡达》证明非常成功。 The film Avatar has proved to be a great success.  2.它是由詹姆斯·卡梅隆执导的。 It is directed by James Cameron.  3.(一句多译)由萨姆·沃辛顿和佐伊·索尔达娜主演,这部电影绝对不容错过。 →The film is starred by Sam Worthington and Zoe Saldana.You should definitely not miss the movie.  →Starring Sam Worthington and Zoe Saldana, it’s definitely a movie that you should not miss.(用非谓语动词和定语从句来表达)  4.克隆人阿凡达被送到潘多拉星球,说服那里的人离开星球。 Clone man named Avatar is sent to Pandora Planet to persuade people there to leave the planet.  5.人类可以开采一种稀有矿产。 Human beings can exploit a rare mineral. 6.然而,在那里他遇到了涅提妮,并与之相爱。 However,he comes across Neytiri there and they fall in love with each other.  7.(一句多译)最后杰克和当地人合作击败了人类,把他们送回地球。 →At last Jake and the people there work together to defeat human beings and send them back to the earth.  →At last Jake and the people there work together to defeat human beings,sending them back to the earth.(v.-ing短语作结果状语)  8.电影的主题是人类应保护自然,与其和谐相处。 The theme of the movie is that human beings should protect nature and live in harmony with it.  Step 3:衔接成篇 The film Avatar, directed by James Cameron, has proved to be a great success.Starring Sam Worthington and Zoe Saldana, it’s definitely a movie that you should not miss. Clone man named Avatar is sent to Pandora Planet to persuade people there to leave the planet so that human beings can exploit a rare mineral.Jake is sent there to control his Avatar.However, it is there that he comes across Neytiri and falls in love with her.At last Jake and the people there work together to defeat human beings,sending them back to the earth. 3D technology and the beautiful natural scenery are the two highlights of the film.The movie explores the theme that human beings should protect nature and live in harmony with it. 1．请根据以下关于电影《ET外星人》的简介，用英语写一篇电影评论。 A Film Review 片名（Name）：《ET外星人》(ET) 导演（Director）：史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg) 剧情梗概：外星人(ET)误留在地球上，Elliott (Henry Thomas饰)把他秘密留在家里躲避成年人。ET和Elliott成为好朋友，分享痛苦与快乐，最后几个孩子准备冒险送ET返回自己的星球。 评价(Comment)：本片美丽而感人；告诫人们友谊和爱是人生最重要的。 注意：词数80个左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“我说电影”为主题的征文活动，请你针对自己喜欢的电影写一篇影评并投稿。内容包括： 1.电影的简单介绍； 2.你的评价。 注意：1.词数100词左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇发言稿参赛。 内容：1. 人物评价；2. 你敬佩的原因；3. 你的评价或对你的影响。 注意：1. 词数应为80左右； 2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总数。 The Person I Admire Most Dear fellow students, There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank You! 4．请根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(KungFuPanda)的影评。 1.动画电影《功夫熊猫》取材于中国文化。 2.情景:一个平凡的熊猫成为一个龙武士的故事。师傅起初不认为熊猫能成为龙武士,但是通过不断的努力,他最后得到了师傅的认可,并打败了他们的敌人——老虎。 3.主题:只要努力,每个人都能成功。 注意:词数80左右。 提示词:师傅master;龙武士 dragon warrior _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假定你是李华，你在英国某学校读高中。下周末是你们学校的电影节，你准备写一篇纪录片《伟大诗人杜甫（Du Fu：China’s Greatest Poet）》的影评登载在校刊上，推荐同学们在电影节时观看此纪录片。 主要包括：1. 基本信息：发行时间：2020年； 发行机构：BBC； 导演、主持：Michael Wood； 诗歌朗读：Ian McKellen; 2. 主要内容： ①主持人通过诗歌讲述了杜甫的生平 ②杜甫是一位现实主义诗人，他的诗歌反映了当时人民生活的疾苦 ③这个纪录片获得了广泛好评/赞誉。 3.是否推荐观看。 参考词汇：现实主义诗人realistic poet   纪录片documentary 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 注意：1.词数80左右； _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华，你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏，请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。 片名 The Wandering Earth 导演 郭帆 故事梗概 该片改编于刘慈欣的同名小说。影片讲述了在不久的未来太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不适合人类生存。面对绝境，人们将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。 评论 1. 该电影是中国科幻电影史上的里程碑，自上映以来，深受观众欢迎。 2. …… 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 不要逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：里程碑landmark _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．某英文杂志的Film Reviews栏目现向中学生征稿。请你写一则影评，介绍《美女与野兽》(Beauty and the Beast)。 类型：美国奇幻片； 导演：比尔·康顿； 剧情介绍：本片根据1991年同名动画电影改编，讲述了勇敢而美丽的少女贝尔为了解救父亲而与被邪恶的女巫变成野兽的王子朝夕相处，最终用真爱战胜魔法的故事。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．上周六，学校组织高二级的全体学生观看了2005版的《雾都孤儿》的电影，请根据所给信息，写一篇影评。 经典场景一：在济贫院希望多分一点粥 经典场景二：被当做小偷在街上被众人追赶 【写作内容】 电影名称 Oliver Twist 基本信息 1．背景：电影由Roman Polanski执导，2005年上映。以维多利亚时代的伦敦为背景，讲述了奥利佛的悲惨身世及遭遇。 2．情节：故事改编自英国著名作家查尔斯·狄更斯于1938年出版的同名长篇小说，主人公Oliver Twist在孤儿院(orphanage)长大，当过学徒(serve as an apprentice)，误入以Fagin为首的贼窝 (a gang of thieves)，被Bill Sikes胁迫盗窃，拒绝后命在旦夕。最终在善良的Mr. Browlow, Nancy, Rose Maylie等人的帮助下，Oliver查明身世并获得了幸福。 3．主题：揭露济贫院(The workhouse)、童工以及帮派组织吸收青少年参与犯罪等社会问题，宣扬“向善”与“感恩”。 你对影片的评价 就影片的主题、人物特征、表演、语言等任选一个或多个角度，发表自己的见解。 【写作要求】 1．词数：120-150词左右，标题和开头已提供，不计入词数。 2．书写：分段清晰，书写美观，卷面干净。 3．表达：用上unit5、6的相关表达，建议通过连接词、非谓语、从句等形式，体现表达的准确性、观点的科学性、句式的丰富性、结构的连贯性。 My Film Review on Oliver Twist Last Saturday, our school organized the students of Senior Grade Two to watch the Film Oliver Twist released in 2005. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．英语课上，老师让大家观看了电影《阿甘正传》（Forrest Gump）。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语影评。 类型 故事片 导演 Robert Zemeckis 主演 Tom Hanks (Forrest Gump) and Robin Wright (Jenny Curran) 剧情梗概 阿甘智商只有75，妈妈却让他能像普通孩子一样上学。在学校阿甘认识了一生的朋友和至爱珍妮。阿甘有一双跑得很快的腿，在妈妈和珍妮的爱护和鼓励下，他开始了一生不停的奔跑。单纯的思想和执着的信念使他取得了一系列的成功。 评价 1. 一部非常好的故事片；2. 愉悦心灵的同时发人深省。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯； 3. 参考词汇：1. 智商intelligence quotient( IQ )  2. 故事片feature film 10．电影《哈利·波特与魔法石》是根据英国作家J.K. Rowling的小说改编而成的。请根据下表中的提示写一篇80词左右的影评。 片名 Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone 导演 Chris Columbus 故事梗概 哈利失去双亲，在姨母家受到虐待。11岁生日时，他被邀请到霍格沃茨（Hogwarts）魔法学校上学，那是一个神奇莫测的魔幻世界。在学校里，哈利学习了魔法，经历了许多冒险和神奇的事情，也获得了真正的友谊，学会了勇敢。 评价 … _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$