13.必修第二册Unit 1 Food for thought(食物烹饪方法)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 1 Food for thought 单元写作深度指导 写一种食物的烹饪方法(Writing a recipe) 【学以致用】 1. related adj. 有关系的, 相关的 (应用文之活动介绍)将安排一系列与环境保护有关的讲座, 提高人们的绿色生活意识。 A series of lectures related to environmental protection will be arranged, which will raise people’s awareness of living a green life. 2. addict n. 对……着迷的人 (应用文之人物介绍)Gradually, his interest in collecting stamps has come into a habit and he becomes a stamp addict. 渐渐地, 他对集邮的兴趣变成了一种习惯, 他成了一个邮票迷。 (应用文之建议信)As far as I’m concerned, it’s not wise for us to be addicted to playing with smart phones because we may ignore other things in life. 我认为, 沉迷于玩智能手机对我们来说是不明智的, 因为我们可能会忽略生活中的其他事情。 (应用文之建议信)You should stop taking this medicine because it is addictive (addict). (应用文之邀请信)得知你痴迷于乒乓球, 我写信邀请你加入我们学校的乒乓球队。 Learning that you are addicted to table tennis, I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. 3. (教材原句)Highly recommended!强烈推荐! (应用文之推荐信)I recommend the book to you since you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. 因为你对中国传统文化感兴趣, 我就向你推荐这本书。 (应用文之建议信)我建议你休息几天。 →I recommend you to take some days off. →I recommend that you (should) take some days off. 4.(教材原句)What’s more, it is easy to make and can be adapted to individual tastes. 而且, 它容易制作, 可以适应个人口味。 (应用文之感谢信)没有你的帮助, 我不可能这么快适应环境。 Without your help, I wouldn’t have adapted to the environment so quickly. 5. (教材原句)Cooking together gives us a chance to relax and catch up on each other’s days. 一起做饭让我们有机会放松身心, 了解对方一天的生活。 (应用文之邀请信)Come over for a chat so we can catch up on each other’s news. 过来聊一聊, 了解一下彼此的近况。 6. (教材原句)So, don’t forget to pick up some chicken on your way home and try this recipe out! 所以, 别忘了在回家的路上买些鸡肉试试这个菜谱! (应用文之新闻报道)许多志愿者帮忙捡公园里的垃圾。 Many volunteers helped (to) pick up the trash in the park. 7. (教材原句)I guess I’ve always been a big meat eater and in this house, no family meal is complete without some form of meat. 我想我一直都挺爱吃肉的, 在这个家没有一顿饭菜是没有肉的。 (应用文之感谢信)没有你的慷慨帮助, 我不可能熬过那段痛苦的日子。 I couldn’t have gone through that bitter period without your generous help. (应用文之建议信)如果你使用了正确的学习方法, 短时间内掌握一门外语并不是不可能的。 It’s not impossible to master a foreign language within a short period of time if you use a correct study method. 8. (教材原句)I often end up saving part of my meal for the next day. 我经常把一部分饭留到第二天吃。 (应用文之建议信)You’ll soon end up in debt if you keep on spending money that way. 如果你继续那样花钱, 你很快就会负债的。 (应用文之人物介绍)He began his life as a poor man and ended up as a millionaire. 他出身贫寒, 最终成了百万富翁。 (应用文之建议信)如果你花时间和精力去做这件事, 你会有更多的朋友。 If you take the time and effort to do this, you’ll end up with more friends. (应用文之活动介绍)毕业典礼在一首鼓舞人心的歌曲中结束。 The graduation ceremony ended up with an inspiring song. 9. (教材原句)I know we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables, but ready meals are so convenient. 我知道我们应该多吃新鲜的水果和蔬菜, 但是即食食品方便极了。 (应用文之求助信)I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. (应用文之告知信)对于变动给您带来的不便, 我们深表歉意。 We do apologize for any inconvenience caused by the change. 10. in case 以防万一 (应用文之建议信)You’d better take an umbrella with you in case of the rain. 你最好带把伞, 以防下雨。 1. 题型解读 　　食物烹饪方法属于说明文, 是指按照先后顺序详细介绍食物烹饪过程的文章。其语言凝练, 多用祈使句;逻辑性强, 多使用first(firstly)、second(secondly)等表示顺序的词语。 2. 策略框架 食物烹饪介绍的结构框架: 3. 教材词汇 (1)to one’s taste　适合某人的口味 (2)try out 试验, 试用 (3)heat v. 加热, 变热 (4)stir v. (stirred, stirred, stirring)搅拌, 搅动 (5)season vt. 给……加调味料 (6)dry vt. 使变干 (7)serve v. 端上(食物) 4. 常用词块 (1)cut. . . into pieces　　　切碎 (2)slow fire 慢火 (3)as is known to all 众所周知 (4)date from/date back to 追溯到 (5)a famous traditional food 一种有名的传统美食 (6)cooking methods 烹饪方法 (7)on many important occasions 在很多重要的场合 (8)take to 喜欢 (9)feel at home 感到舒适 (10)pour. . . into 倒入 5. 话题句式 (1)段首句: ①There are several reasons for its popularity. 它的流行有几个原因。 ②Glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese dishes and at your request, I’d like to introduce the recipe for Mapo Tofu. 很高兴听到你对中国菜感兴趣, 应你的要求, 我想介绍一下麻婆豆腐的食谱。 (2)主体段落句: ①When the oil is hot, add the chilies and stir them for about 30 seconds. 油热后加入辣椒搅拌约30秒。 ②When the wrappers are done, it’s time to prepare the filling. 擀好皮后, 就该准备馅了。 ③Make a dozen meatballs out of the mixture you’ve prepared. 用准备好的混合物做十二个肉丸。 ④First, make sure you have all the ingredients. 首先, 确保你有所有的佐料。 ⑤Please mix the sugar, spices and soy sauce in a bowl. 请把糖、调味料和酱油倒在一个碗里混合。 ⑥You’d better mash the potatoes with a fork. 你最好用叉子把马铃薯捣碎成泥。 ⑦Just use a very small amount of oil. 只要放一点点油就行。 (3)结尾常用句型: Hope my instruction will be of great help to you. 希望我的指导对你有很大的帮助。 　　假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Mike来信询问如何包粽子, 请你就此用英文写封回信。 注意: (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2) 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 Step 1: 读题布局 Step 2: 句式激活 1. 首先, 提前数小时做准备。 First, make preparations for hours in advance. 2. 只有叶子和米泡好之后, 你才可以包粽子。 When the leaves and rice are ready you can start to make zongzi. 3. 折叠竹叶, 使其看起来像漏斗(funnel)。 Fold the bamboo leaves and make them like funnels. 4. 将米和枣(jujube)放入里面, 折叠叶子以封口, 用细线系牢。 Put the rice with jujubes in them, fold the leaves down to seal the open side and tie them with thin ropes. 5. 最后一步是煮粽子。 The last step is to boil the zongzi. 6. 用only置于句首的倒装句改写句2 Only when the leaves and rice are ready can you start to make zongzi. 7. 用不定式作目的状语改写句3 Fold the bamboo leaves to make them like funnels. Step 3: 衔接成篇 Dear Mike, 　　I am so glad to hear that you are interested in how to make zongzi. Here I’d like to tell you about the process. 　　First, make preparations for hours in advance. You should place the bamboo leaves and the rice in the water until they become soft, and you should also keep the rice in the water for hours. Only when the leaves and rice are ready can you start to make zongzi. Then fold the bamboo leaves to make them like funnels. After that, put the rice with jujubes in them, fold the leaves down to seal the open side and tie them with thin ropes. The last step is to boil the zongzi. 　　Hope my instruction will be of great help to you. Yours, Li Hua 1．假定你是李华，最近你校举办了主题为“Moving Towards Living Independently”的家庭劳动实践活动。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿, 内容包括: 1. 活动目的； 2. 获取某项生活技能的过程（如烹饪、洗衣等）； 3. 个人感受。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Moving Towards Living Independently ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，在英国一所中学做交换生，现在要参加一个以“Food & Culture”为主题的演讲活动。你准备介绍一种中国传统食物——元宵。请从元宵的历史、寓意及做法等方面写一篇演讲稿。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：蒸steam    炸fry    煮boil Dear friends, I'm Li Hua. I feel greatly honored to be here _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 3．请以“A meal I cooked for my family”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括: 1.做了什么饭； 2.如何做的饭； 3.你有何感受。 注意：1.词数：100左右 2.短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数 A meal I cooked for my family _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你在居家自主学习期间第一次为家人做饭的过程，并以“My First Cooking”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。 提示词：家常菜homely dishes 注意：1. 词数不少于60； 2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．你班英语讨论课主题是“你更愿意自己做饭还是点外卖”。请你就此用英语写一篇短文，表明你的观点：“你更愿意自己做饭”。 内容包括： 1.自己做饭的优点 2.自己做饭的缺点 3.重申自己立场 注意：1.写作词数 80 左右，可以适当增加细节，使行文流畅 2.开头已给出，不计入字数 3.参考词汇：点外卖 ordering delivered food，自己做饭cook by oneself，食材ingredient，住家饭菜homemade food In my opinion, cooking by myself is preferable to ordering delivered food. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你校正在举行主题与食物相关的征文比赛。请以“Dumplings, my favorite food”为题写一篇文章，介绍这一传统美食。内容包括： 1.饺子是中国传统美食； 2.饺子种类繁多，你喜欢的类型及原因； 3.包饺子的意义。 注意：词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的高一学生李敏，得知学校网站发起了一个关于“我与传统美食的故事”的征稿活动。你对此很感兴趣，并积极投稿。你的稿件内容包括： 1.简单介绍你最喜欢的一款传统美食； 2.叙述美食背后的个人故事。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim来信说，很多女生现在对节食瘦身很是痴迷，他询问你对此的看法，以及在你眼里什么是真正的美。请你给他写封回信，说说自己的观点。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 Food for thought 单元写作深度指导 写一种食物的烹饪方法(Writing a recipe) 【学以致用】 1. related adj. 有关系的, 相关的 (应用文之活动介绍)将安排一系列与环境保护有关的讲座, 提高人们的绿色生活意识。 A series of lectures related to environmental protection will be arranged, which will raise people’s awareness of living a green life. 2. addict n. 对……着迷的人 (应用文之人物介绍)Gradually, his interest in collecting stamps has come into a habit and he becomes a stamp addict. 渐渐地, 他对集邮的兴趣变成了一种习惯, 他成了一个邮票迷。 (应用文之建议信)As far as I’m concerned, it’s not wise for us to be addicted to playing with smart phones because we may ignore other things in life. 我认为, 沉迷于玩智能手机对我们来说是不明智的, 因为我们可能会忽略生活中的其他事情。 (应用文之建议信)You should stop taking this medicine because it is addictive (addict). (应用文之邀请信)得知你痴迷于乒乓球, 我写信邀请你加入我们学校的乒乓球队。 Learning that you are addicted to table tennis, I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. 3. (教材原句)Highly recommended!强烈推荐! (应用文之推荐信)I recommend the book to you since you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. 因为你对中国传统文化感兴趣, 我就向你推荐这本书。 (应用文之建议信)我建议你休息几天。 →I recommend you to take some days off. →I recommend that you (should) take some days off. 4.(教材原句)What’s more, it is easy to make and can be adapted to individual tastes. 而且, 它容易制作, 可以适应个人口味。 (应用文之感谢信)没有你的帮助, 我不可能这么快适应环境。 Without your help, I wouldn’t have adapted to the environment so quickly. 5. (教材原句)Cooking together gives us a chance to relax and catch up on each other’s days. 一起做饭让我们有机会放松身心, 了解对方一天的生活。 (应用文之邀请信)Come over for a chat so we can catch up on each other’s news. 过来聊一聊, 了解一下彼此的近况。 6. (教材原句)So, don’t forget to pick up some chicken on your way home and try this recipe out! 所以, 别忘了在回家的路上买些鸡肉试试这个菜谱! (应用文之新闻报道)许多志愿者帮忙捡公园里的垃圾。 Many volunteers helped (to) pick up the trash in the park. 7. (教材原句)I guess I’ve always been a big meat eater and in this house, no family meal is complete without some form of meat. 我想我一直都挺爱吃肉的, 在这个家没有一顿饭菜是没有肉的。 (应用文之感谢信)没有你的慷慨帮助, 我不可能熬过那段痛苦的日子。 I couldn’t have gone through that bitter period without your generous help. (应用文之建议信)如果你使用了正确的学习方法, 短时间内掌握一门外语并不是不可能的。 It’s not impossible to master a foreign language within a short period of time if you use a correct study method. 8. (教材原句)I often end up saving part of my meal for the next day. 我经常把一部分饭留到第二天吃。 (应用文之建议信)You’ll soon end up in debt if you keep on spending money that way. 如果你继续那样花钱, 你很快就会负债的。 (应用文之人物介绍)He began his life as a poor man and ended up as a millionaire. 他出身贫寒, 最终成了百万富翁。 (应用文之建议信)如果你花时间和精力去做这件事, 你会有更多的朋友。 If you take the time and effort to do this, you’ll end up with more friends. (应用文之活动介绍)毕业典礼在一首鼓舞人心的歌曲中结束。 The graduation ceremony ended up with an inspiring song. 9. (教材原句)I know we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables, but ready meals are so convenient. 我知道我们应该多吃新鲜的水果和蔬菜, 但是即食食品方便极了。 (应用文之求助信)I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. (应用文之告知信)对于变动给您带来的不便, 我们深表歉意。 We do apologize for any inconvenience caused by the change. 10. in case 以防万一 (应用文之建议信)You’d better take an umbrella with you in case of the rain. 你最好带把伞, 以防下雨。 1. 题型解读 　　食物烹饪方法属于说明文, 是指按照先后顺序详细介绍食物烹饪过程的文章。其语言凝练, 多用祈使句;逻辑性强, 多使用first(firstly)、second(secondly)等表示顺序的词语。 2. 策略框架 食物烹饪介绍的结构框架: 3. 教材词汇 (1)to one’s taste　适合某人的口味 (2)try out 试验, 试用 (3)heat v. 加热, 变热 (4)stir v. (stirred, stirred, stirring)搅拌, 搅动 (5)season vt. 给……加调味料 (6)dry vt. 使变干 (7)serve v. 端上(食物) 4. 常用词块 (1)cut. . . into pieces　　　切碎 (2)slow fire 慢火 (3)as is known to all 众所周知 (4)date from/date back to 追溯到 (5)a famous traditional food 一种有名的传统美食 (6)cooking methods 烹饪方法 (7)on many important occasions 在很多重要的场合 (8)take to 喜欢 (9)feel at home 感到舒适 (10)pour. . . into 倒入 5. 话题句式 (1)段首句: ①There are several reasons for its popularity. 它的流行有几个原因。 ②Glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese dishes and at your request, I’d like to introduce the recipe for Mapo Tofu. 很高兴听到你对中国菜感兴趣, 应你的要求, 我想介绍一下麻婆豆腐的食谱。 (2)主体段落句: ①When the oil is hot, add the chilies and stir them for about 30 seconds. 油热后加入辣椒搅拌约30秒。 ②When the wrappers are done, it’s time to prepare the filling. 擀好皮后, 就该准备馅了。 ③Make a dozen meatballs out of the mixture you’ve prepared. 用准备好的混合物做十二个肉丸。 ④First, make sure you have all the ingredients. 首先, 确保你有所有的佐料。 ⑤Please mix the sugar, spices and soy sauce in a bowl. 请把糖、调味料和酱油倒在一个碗里混合。 ⑥You’d better mash the potatoes with a fork. 你最好用叉子把马铃薯捣碎成泥。 ⑦Just use a very small amount of oil. 只要放一点点油就行。 (3)结尾常用句型: Hope my instruction will be of great help to you. 希望我的指导对你有很大的帮助。 　　假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Mike来信询问如何包粽子, 请你就此用英文写封回信。 注意: (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2) 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 Step 1: 读题布局 Step 2: 句式激活 1. 首先, 提前数小时做准备。 First, make preparations for hours in advance. 2. 只有叶子和米泡好之后, 你才可以包粽子。 When the leaves and rice are ready you can start to make zongzi. 3. 折叠竹叶, 使其看起来像漏斗(funnel)。 Fold the bamboo leaves and make them like funnels. 4. 将米和枣(jujube)放入里面, 折叠叶子以封口, 用细线系牢。 Put the rice with jujubes in them, fold the leaves down to seal the open side and tie them with thin ropes. 5. 最后一步是煮粽子。 The last step is to boil the zongzi. 6. 用only置于句首的倒装句改写句2 Only when the leaves and rice are ready can you start to make zongzi. 7. 用不定式作目的状语改写句3 Fold the bamboo leaves to make them like funnels. Step 3: 衔接成篇 Dear Mike, 　　I am so glad to hear that you are interested in how to make zongzi. Here I’d like to tell you about the process. 　　First, make preparations for hours in advance. You should place the bamboo leaves and the rice in the water until they become soft, and you should also keep the rice in the water for hours. Only when the leaves and rice are ready can you start to make zongzi. Then fold the bamboo leaves to make them like funnels. After that, put the rice with jujubes in them, fold the leaves down to seal the open side and tie them with thin ropes. The last step is to boil the zongzi. 　　Hope my instruction will be of great help to you. Yours, Li Hua 1．假定你是李华，最近你校举办了主题为“Moving Towards Living Independently”的家庭劳动实践活动。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿, 内容包括: 1. 活动目的； 2. 获取某项生活技能的过程（如烹饪、洗衣等）； 3. 个人感受。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Moving Towards Living Independently ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，在英国一所中学做交换生，现在要参加一个以“Food & Culture”为主题的演讲活动。你准备介绍一种中国传统食物——元宵。请从元宵的历史、寓意及做法等方面写一篇演讲稿。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：蒸steam    炸fry    煮boil Dear friends, I'm Li Hua. I feel greatly honored to be here _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 3．请以“A meal I cooked for my family”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括: 1.做了什么饭； 2.如何做的饭； 3.你有何感受。 注意：1.词数：100左右 2.短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数 A meal I cooked for my family _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你在居家自主学习期间第一次为家人做饭的过程，并以“My First Cooking”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。 提示词：家常菜homely dishes 注意：1. 词数不少于60； 2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．你班英语讨论课主题是“你更愿意自己做饭还是点外卖”。请你就此用英语写一篇短文，表明你的观点：“你更愿意自己做饭”。 内容包括： 1.自己做饭的优点 2.自己做饭的缺点 3.重申自己立场 注意：1.写作词数 80 左右，可以适当增加细节，使行文流畅 2.开头已给出，不计入字数 3.参考词汇：点外卖 ordering delivered food，自己做饭cook by oneself，食材ingredient，住家饭菜homemade food In my opinion, cooking by myself is preferable to ordering delivered food. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你校正在举行主题与食物相关的征文比赛。请以“Dumplings, my favorite food”为题写一篇文章，介绍这一传统美食。内容包括： 1.饺子是中国传统美食； 2.饺子种类繁多，你喜欢的类型及原因； 3.包饺子的意义。 注意：词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的高一学生李敏，得知学校网站发起了一个关于“我与传统美食的故事”的征稿活动。你对此很感兴趣，并积极投稿。你的稿件内容包括： 1.简单介绍你最喜欢的一款传统美食； 2.叙述美食背后的个人故事。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim来信说，很多女生现在对节食瘦身很是痴迷，他询问你对此的看法，以及在你眼里什么是真正的美。请你给他写封回信，说说自己的观点。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案 1． Moving Towards Living Independently To further improve the students’ independent sense of life, our school recently held an activity entitled “Moving Towards Living Independently”. Students of all grades were actively involved. Considering cooking is an essential life skill and that I’m obsessed with all kinds of delicious food, I chose cooking as my practice project. I surfed the Internet and watched lots of short videos, which gave me much information about cooking techniques. I also turned to my parents for help. They patiently explained their daily routine to me and removed some of my misconceptions about cooking. And luckily. I made it finally. In the process of cooking, I not only learned the importance of independence, but also experienced the difficulty in becoming independent. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文，要求考生以“Moving Towards Living Independently”为题，写一篇短文向校英文报投稿, 内容包括：1.活动目的；2.获取某项生活技能的过程(如烹饪、洗衣等)；3.个人感受。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 选择：choose→select 沉迷于：be obsessed with →be addicted to 帮助：help→assistance 重要性：importance→significance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To further improve the students’ independent sense of life, our school recently held an activity entitled “Moving Towards Living Independently”. 拓展句：To further improve the students’ independent sense of life, our school recently held an activity whose title is “Moving Towards Living Independently”. [高分句型1]Considering cooking is an essential life skill and that I’m obsessed with all kinds of delicious food, I chose cooking as my practice project.（运用了that引导宾语从句） [高分句型2]I surfed the Internet and watched lots of short videos, which gave me much information about cooking techniques.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） 2．佳作展示 Dear friends, I'm Li Hua. I feel greatly honored to be here to introduce a traditional Chinese food—yuanxiao, which is made of sticky rice powder with sweet fillings. Yuanxiao, or tangyuan, is the main food for the Lantern Festival. The sweet fillings stand for people's wish for happiness and the round shape is a symbol of reunion. Making yuanxico is really a good way to create a harmonious family atmosphere. Ways of cooking yuanxiao vary from place to place. Generally, they are steamed, boiled or fried. Some are served dry with sugar, while others with soup. I hope the information above is of some help to you. If you want to know more details, please contact me. Welcome to China and I hope you will experience our food culture by yourself! Thanks for listening. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于要参加一个以“Food & Culture”为主题的演讲活动，写一篇演讲稿介绍一种中国传统食物——元宵。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 荣幸的：honored→ privileged 代表：stand for → represent 不同：vary from→ differ from 联系：contact→ touch 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I hope the information above is of some help to you. 拓展句：I hope I give you the information above, which is of some help to you. 【高分句型1】I'm Li Hua. I feel greatly honored to be here to introduce a traditional Chinese food—yuanxiao, which is made of sticky rice powder with sweet fillings. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2 Making yuanxico is really a good way to create a harmonious family atmosphere.（运用了动名词短语Making yuanxiao做主语，不定式短语 to create a harmonious family atmosphere 做后置定语修饰 a good way。） 3．One possible version : A meal I cooked for my family Recently, I’ve learned how to cook fried rice on the Internet. Last Sunday.I cooked a meal for my family. I put some rice and water into the pot and steamed the rice for 20minutes. When the rice was ready, I left it to cool. I cut some carrot sand sausages into small pieces, and then I fried the pieces together with the cooled rice and eggs. Ten minutes later, when the fried rice was on the table, my parents smiled a huge smile. For me, cooking is really a good way to show my love for my family. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文，要求考生请以“A meal I cooked for my family”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1.做了什么饭；2.如何做的饭；3.你有何感受。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 准备好的：ready→prepared 学习：learn→study 和……一起：together with→along with 展示：show→demonstrate 2.句式拓展 并列句变复合句 原句：I cut some carrot sand sausages into small pieces, and then I fried the pieces together with the cooled rice and eggs. 拓展句：I cut some carrot sand sausages into small pieces, after which, I fried the pieces together with the cooled rice and eggs. [高分句型1] Recently, I’ve learned how to cook fried rice on the Internet.（运用了“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作宾语） [高分句型2] Ten minutes later, when the fried rice was on the table, my parents smiled a huge smile.（运用了when引导时间状语从句） 4．◇ Version 1 Last Friday I finished my online course with a rather exhausted mind. Weekdays are finally over but the burdens seemed impossible to go away I was sitting before my desk and doing my homework. When I looked at the clock, it was already 6:20 p.m. I was starving, and neither of my parents had returned from work. Wrestling with my hunger, an idea suddenly occurred to me. Why not cook a dish for my parents myself? Although I’ve never cooked before. I was sure I could figure it out. I turned on my smartphone and went online to search for the recipe of homely dishes. There was a great amount of information provided on the Internet, and after taking various factors into consideration. I decided to cook a fish. The process was not so hard as I imagined, as a matter of fact. I followed the instructions strictly and was extremely careful not to miss any single details in the entire procedure. The outcome was of course far from brilliant but seemed quite decent. It actually tasted not bad at all. Apart from the main dish, I also came up with a vegetable dish and some rice and soup. When my parents came home, they were literally astonished. Mom took pictures with her phone while Dad gave me an encouraging smile and a big thumb up. It was the first time I had cooked and the experience means so much to me. It set me free from my busy daily routine, giving me a precious opportunity to do something for the ones I cherish and react to their unconditional support that I’ve neglected for so long. ◇ Version 2 Last Friday, after I finished my online classes, I started doing homework as I always do. Time seemed to fly by and as I glanced up at the clock, it was already 6:20. My parents were still at work and must be worn out after a week’s work Suddenly, an idea flashed through my mind—I could cook for my parents. As it was the first time for me to cook, I searched for the recipe of homely dishes on the Internet. After some comparison, I chose two dishes that my parents liked the most. Dealing with the fish was the hardest part. After laying the fish in the pan, drops of oil spilled out and landed on my finger. I was scared but managed to calm down and rolled over the fish. As the color of the fish turned golden, I added some salt and garlic. Finally, I finished my first dish and it smelt really great. My parents arrived home the moment I finished cooking. Serving them with the food I made, I was nervous because I didn’t know if I had got everything right. Thankfully, my dad gave me a thumb-up after his first bite and my mom took photos to mark this unforgettable meal. My parents said that I had grown. I was delighted to hear that and was ready to shoulder more things for my parents in the future. 【分析】这是一篇图画类作文。 【要点提示】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你在居家自主学习期间第一次为家人做饭的过程，并以“My First Cooking”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：homely dishes(家常菜)；exhausted (筋疲力尽的)；search for (寻找)；as a matter of fact (事实上)；far from (远非)等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如When I looked at the clock, it was already 6:20 p.m.运用了时间状语从句；Although I’ve never cooked before, I was sure I could figure it out.运用了让步状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 5．Possible version: In my opinion, cooking by myself is preferable to ordering delivered food. First, the meals I cook by myself are healthier because I always use fresh and healthy ingredients. Second, I can cook the food according to my own preferences entirely. Last but not least, eating homemade foods is usually much cheaper than ordering delivered food. Of course, there are some disadvantages of cooking by myself. For example, cooking by myself takes time and I have to spend some time cleaning up afterward. Balancing the advantages and the disadvantages, I would prefer to cook by myself. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。你班英语讨论课主题是“你更愿意自己做饭还是点外卖”，请你就此用英语写一篇短文，表明你的观点：“你更愿意自己做饭”，说明自己做饭的优缺点并重申自己的立场。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 在我的观点中：in my opinion→from my point of view 完全：entirely→wholly 缺点：disadvantage→drawback 举个例子：for example→for instance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Second, I can cook the food according to my own preferences entirely. 拓展句：Second, I can cook the food that caters to my own preferences entirely. 【高分句型1】First, the meals I cook by myself are healthier because I always use fresh and healthy ingredients.（运用了省略关系词引导的定语从句和because引导的状语从句） 【高分句型2】Balancing the advantages and the disadvantages, I would prefer to cook by myself.（运用了现在分词作状语） 6．Dumplings, my favourite food Dumplings are a traditional Chinese food. People in the north have the tradition of eating dumplings during festivals, especially the Spring Festival. Dumplings are delicious and have a wide variety of flavours, which vary according to the fillings. I’m fond of such a filling as a mixture of the Chinese cabbage and meat. I can’t resist the temptation of the hot dumplings when they are taken out of the steaming pot. A bite of the dumplings will relieve me of the tiredness and give me the feeling of home. Making dumplings is really teamwork. Usually all family members will join the work. Dumplings are a strong bond among family members as well as delicious food. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生以“Dumplings, my favorite food”为题写一篇文章，介绍这一传统美食。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 各种各样的：a wide variety of→all kinds of 不同：vary→differ 拒绝：resist→refuse 给某人某物：give sb. sth.→offer sb. sth. 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Making dumplings is really teamwork. 拓展句：Making dumplings is really teamwork, which helps strengthen the family bond. [高分句型1]Dumplings are delicious and have a wide variety of flavours, which vary according to the fillings.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2]I can’t resist the temptation of the hot dumplings when they are taken out of the steaming pot.（运用了when引导时间状语从句） 7．范文 My Story with Traditional Cuisine As a high school student in Mingqi High School, I am excited to join the school website’s writing activity about my favorite traditional cuisine and my personal story. My favorite traditional cuisine is dumplings, a popular dish that symbolizes good fortune and family cohesion in Chinese culture. Every year during winter vacation, my entire family gathers together to make dumplings. This tradition has been passed down from my grandmother to my mother and then to me. We carefully mix the flour and stuffing, knead the dough, and shape the dumplings into beautiful crescents. When we cook and eat them together, we share our dreams and daily experiences, strengthening our familial bond. The tradition of making dumplings not only enhances my love for a delicious food but also creates a special connection between my family and me. This tradition reminds me of my roots and demonstrates the importance of family in traditional Chinese culture. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是明启中学的高一学生李敏，得知学校网站发起了一个关于“我与传统美食的故事”的征稿活动。你对此很感兴趣，并积极投稿。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 活动：activity→event 加强：strengthen/enhance→intensify 重要性：importance→significance 象征：symbolize→stand for 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：This tradition reminds me of my roots and demonstrates the importance of family in traditional Chinese culture. 拓展句：Not only does this tradition remind me of my roots, but also it demonstrates the importance of family in traditional Chinese culture. [高分句型1] When we cook and eat them together, we share our dreams and daily experiences, strengthening our familial bond. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] My favorite traditional cuisine is dumplings, a popular dish that symbolizes good fortune and family cohesion in Chinese culture. (运用了that引导定语从句) 8． Dear Jim, Glad to receive your letter, and I am writing to share my thoughts about the true meaning of beauty. As you said, many girls are addicted to dieting to become slim. My view is that slimming helps us become more beautiful but not necessarily healthier. Good appearances can surely leave a positive impression on others. But it is not worthwhile if it affects our fitness. As for true beauty, I think external beauty is important, but inner beauty should always come first. Do you agree with me? Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生给美国朋友吉姆回信，就女生对节食瘦身痴迷这一现象发表看法，并说明自己眼中什么是真正的美。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→pleased 观点：view→opinion 肯定：surely→certainly 影响：affect→influence 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Good appearances can surely leave a positive impression on others. 拓展句：It is good appearances that can surely leave a positive impression on others. 【高分句型1】As you said, many girls are addicted to dieting to become slim.（运用了as引导非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】My view is that slimming helps us become more beautiful but not necessarily healthier.（运用了that引导表语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$