内容正文:
A letter for help
在英美等国家,当学生感受到精神压力大或者在家庭和学校遇到不愉快的事情,同时又无法或不愿与家长、老师及好友交流来释放压力时,他们往往会选择写“求助信”的方式,向自己信赖的心理辅导专员或者专业人士倾诉自己的烦恼,以期得到解决问题的方法。
西方学生的求助信
Let’s learn
I’m Dr. Know(知心博士).
近年来高考中求助信的考查
卷别 话题
2016年全国卷Ⅰ 请外教修改所附材料的文字和格式
2018年.11浙江卷 请航空公司帮助寻找丢失的钱包
2020北京卷 写信请Jim为校俱乐部推荐外籍指导教师
2020全国卷Ⅱ 写信请外教帮忙指导英语短剧
2021全国甲卷 写信向外教了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人
2021·全国甲卷(典例展示)
(2021·全国甲卷)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2021·全国甲卷(范文展示)
Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days? Our school is going to conduct a class meeting themed“Chinese Traditional Culture”, which will be shown on English websites. I'm writing to ask for your suggestions on the topic.
As is known to all, China has abundant and unique traditional cultures with a rich history, such as tea culture, Peking opera, the Chinese calligraphy, the Chinese knot and so on. What's more, there are many historical places of interest, like the Great Wall of China, the famous West Lake and so on. Would you be so kind to tell me which attracts you most so that our meeting can gain great success?
I would highly appreciate it if you could generously share with me your opinion. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step2:structure (结构)
A letter for help
body
purpose
ending
______ parts
three
问候
+写作背景
+来信目的
描述困难(具体)
+寻求帮助
表达期待和谢意
____________________________________
____________________________________
____________________________________
必备表达
1. 做某事有麻烦 ______________________
2. 给某人帮助 ______________________
3. 寻求帮助 ______________________
4. 面临困难 __________________
5. 急需/迫切需要 __________________
6. 专业指导 __________________
7. 面临越来越大的压力 ______________________
8. 取得巨大的进步 ______________________
9. 渴望做某事 ______________________
10. 发现做某事很困难 _______________________
11. 因某事感激某人 ______________________
have/encountor trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth
do sb a favor/give sb a hand
turn to sb for help
be faced with difficulties
in urgent need of
professional guidance
be grateful to sb for sth
under growing pressure
make great progress
be anxious to do sth/long to do sth
find it difficult to do sth
Para.1:
1.最近过的怎么样?/近来可好?
问候
1)How is it going recently?
2)How are you doing these days?
向不熟识你的人求助时,我们还要介绍自己:
I am ×××,a senior high school student from…
Para.1:
问候
写信背景+点名来信目的
+
基础表达
高级表达
.我写信想问您是否可以帮我个忙?
2 .我写信希望您能给我帮助。
I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.
I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
Para.2:
描述困难+寻求帮助
I have some difficulty in...,which bothers me a lot,so I have no choice but to turn to you.
我在……方面有一些困难,这让我很困扰,所以我别无选择只能向您求助。
What troubles me most is.…
最让我苦恼的是…。
练一练:我睡眠有问题,这已经困扰我很久了,因此我没有选择只能向你求助。
I have some difficulty in sleeping, which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
Para.2:
描述困难+寻求帮助
1 我不擅长自行解决英语学习中的困难。(be poor in;on one’s own)
2 我在撰写有关美国人如何度过节假日的短文上遇到一些困难。
3 我发现自己进步不像以前那么快了,这已经困扰我很长时间了。(find +宾语+宾补; as +adj.+ as; annoy)
I’m poor in dealing with the difficulties in the English learning on my own .
I encountered some difficulties in writing the articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals.
I find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
Para.3:
表达期待和谢意
我非常渴望得到你的帮助(be anxious to do sth.)
I am very anxious to get your help.
你能给我一些关于如何解决这些问题的建议吗?( Could you please ... ?)
Could you please give me some advice on how to solve these problems?
升级条件状语从句
I would appreciate it if you can give me some advice on how to solve these problems. ( I would appreciate it if... 如果...我将不胜感激)
Para.3:
表达期待和谢意
1. 如果你能给我一些关于如何为大学生活做准备的建议,我将不胜感激。
2.如果您能帮我提供一些关于英语演讲的建议,那将会是很大的帮助。(be of +抽象名词)
I would appreciate it if you could give me advice on how to prepare myself for college life.
It would be of great help if you can offer me some valuable suggestions on how to make a wonderful English speech.
Para.3:
寻求帮助+表达谢意
I am looking forward to your reply.
升级
I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
期盼回复
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Universal template 通用模板
Dear Kate(称呼) ,
How is it going recently?I’m Li Hua(姓名), a senior 3 student from Hunan Province(自我介绍). I am writing to you for some help, and I’d like you to do me a favor.
I am encountering some problems. To begin with, I am so busy doing my homework that I have no time to take exercise, which troubles me a lot. (求助的原因一) What’s worse, I have difficulty in sleeping because I feel very stressed.(求助的原因二)
Faced with these problems, I am anxious to get your help. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua(署名)
组句成篇
假定你是李华,很快就要参加高考(College Entrance Examination)了,你想在英语学习上有所提高,便向报社的英语学习专栏发电子邮件求助,内容包括:
1. 学习英语的困扰;
2. 请求帮助;
3. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
课外作业
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua. Faced with so many difficulities in learning English during my preparation for the College Entrance Examination in June, I am writing to ask for your help.
To begin with, it’s a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules. Besides, I find it difficult to write good English compositions. My English teacher is always explaining the language points in class and I can hardly take them down. I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in English, which will eventually prevent me from going to college.
Could you help me, please?I would appreciate it if you could give me advice on how to improve my English.
Yours,
Li Hua
THANK YOU
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