Module 6 写作课（课件）-2023-2024学年外研版英语九年级下册

Module 6 Eating together ---巧记妙叙， 留住美好 学习目标： 1. 能用记叙文写作方法来描述一件特别的用餐经历。 2.学会迁移教材中记叙文写作方法完成本模块的写作任务。 Writing Task Describe a special meal you have eaten. Think about: □ when and where you ate it. □ who you were with □ why the meal was special □ what happened during the meal □ what happened at the end of the meal □ what the nicest thing about the experience was Narration 记叙文 妙不可言 选材新颖独特 灵活组织结构 描写细致入微 细节详略得当 回归教材，学以致用 教 材 原文再现 九下M6U2 Eating together During a meal in the west, you use knives and forks most of the time, although you can use your fingers to eat chicken wings or hamburgers. You will be invited to serve yourself with food, the ladies before the gentlemen. 回归教材，学以致用 - 素 材 教 材 原文再现 九上M2U2 Public holidays We still celebrate Thanksgiving Day with a traditional dinner. The kitchen is always the most crowded room in our house beacuse we all help prepare the food. We lay the table ,and then before we begin dinner,my father gives thanks for the food, so we remmember why we celebrate the festival. We usually eat too much,but it is only once a year!We often talk a lot and tell stories after dinner as well. When it is all over, everyone helps wash the dishes. 回归教材，学以致用 - Beginning 教材 原文再现 写作技巧 八上M11U2 Way of life I went to my England , I enjoyed my stay and I noticed something interesting. 开门见山点题 八下M9U2 Friendship When I was thirteen years old, a girl gave me an important gift .It was a smile. It was the early autumn of my first year at a new school. 直扣主题 交代时间地点人物 八下M10U2 On the radio “How old are you ?”The radio manager looked down at me.“Fifteen.”I said. 倒 叙 九上 M4U2 Home alone As a boy,like all other boys, I wanted to be a man. But my parents did everything for me. Actually ,they managed every minute of my life. I became so bored with their orders that I wished they would leave me alone. 写作背景介绍 心理描写 开卷之初，让人一见而惊 .  There are various activities in the college, such as hiking, gathering, competitions and so on. and what impresses me most is my experience of being a cook.  The life is full of the amazing things.I still remember the lucky day. It happened on ...  When I was ten years old, one Sunday afternoon , this is my first time to make food for my parents.When it came to six o'clock at night,the story of a rich lessson took place. 回归教材，学以致用 - Ending 教 材 原文再现 写作技巧 八下M9 U2 Friendship I believe that the world is what you think it is .If you think you are lonely ,you might always be alone. My suggestion is that smile at the world and it will smile back. 表明积极观点 紧扣主题 九上M1U2 Wonders of the world I remained by the canyon for about half an hour, and I asked myself, “Is the Grand Canyon the greatest wonder of the natural world?”I certainly know the answer. What do you think? 真情实感 读者意识 九上M4U2 Home alone Then I realised being home alone was not always prefect. 情感真挚 紧扣主题 1.那些美妙的时刻触动了我的心，我永远不会忘记。 仿句练习 The amazing moments touch my heart and I will never forget it. 2.通过和父母们做一些家务活，我可以更好的了解他们。 3.第一次和我的朋友做食物是如此有趣，我将永远记住它 ______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ The first time to make food with my friends is so interesting that I will remember it forever. ________________________________________________________________________________________ I can get a better understanding of my parents by doing some chores with them . 回归教材，学以致用- 细节描写 教 材 原文再现 写作技巧 八下 M9U2 Friendship Every time I heard the other students talking and laughing ,I felt even more lonely. Suddenly I felt touch of something bright and friendly . It made me feel happy, lively and warm. 心理描写 At that moment, a girl entered the classroom. I didn't know who she was. She passed me and then turned back. She looked at me and ,without a word, smiled. 详略得当 九上M4U2 Home alone As soon as I got home from school the first day, I happily threw my schoolbag on the sofa and ate lots of snacks. The next morning I woke up late. I had to hurry to school without breakfast ,but I was still late. I even dropped my father’s cup when I was cooking ! I found myself so bad at simple cooking dishes. 动作描写 心理描写 lovely I still remember the time when we spent in a lovely restaurant . When we came into it ,we were shocked at the warm eating environment . After ordering some food, my father and I couldn’t wait to show our gifts to my mother. She said that concert ticket and this beautiful silk dress are both her favorite because she is longing for them . During the dinner time ,we gave our best wishes to her. I clearly remembered the happy smile on her face. At the end of the meal ,we all surrounded the table, tasting the delicious birthday cake. The meal ended up with a happy atmosphere that night. 小试牛刀 Summary ★ 表现真情实感，选材新颖： 生活中去要细心观察。 ★ 注意详略得当： 在细节的描写上要注意选择与主题 密切相关的内容。 ★ 语言形式多样，表达恰如其分：娴熟使用动词时态， 副词、形容词、从句等语法功能来进行细节描写。 Homework Describe a special meal you have eaten with the writing methods you have learnt in this lesson. 再 见！ $$