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Unit 1-Unit 6 书面表达热点话题
常考话题作文汇总
1、 传统艺术/手工艺品:paper cutting剪纸....
1. 假定你是李平, 你的美国笔友 Emma 在网上看到几幅中国剪纸, 对此很感兴趣。下面是Emma 写给你的信件, 请你阅读并根据表格内容给她回复。
注意∶ 1. 词数 80 左右;2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ping,
How's everything going? Recently, I have seen some pictures of Chinese paper !cutting and they are really beautiful. Could you tell me something more about Chinese paper cutting?
Yours,
Emma.
Chinese paper cutting
History
over 1,500 years
Popular
in different parts of China, traditional art
Shapes
Place to put
….
Symbols
….
Dear Emma,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
答案:
Dear Emma,
I am glad to know that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting. Actually, Chinese paper cutting has a long history of more than 1500 years. Paper cutting is one of the most important traditional folk arts, which is really popular in different parts in China. It is made of red paper. The most common pictures in paper cutting are flowers, animals and things about Chinese history.
During the Spring Festival, they are usually put on windows and walls as symbols of wishes for good luck and a happy new year. What’s more, these paper cuttings also show the love that all Chinese people have for life and beauty.
Hope you like my introduction.
Yours,
Li Ping
Paper cutting is a beautiful and special form of Chinese traditional art. The paper, usually red, can be cut into many different shapes. The most common pictures are flowers, animals, and things about Chinese history. They are put on windows, doors and walls during the Spring Festival. They are symbols of wishes for good luck and a happy new year.
2. (23-24九年级上·浙江杭州·期中)在学校“探寻杭州传统艺术”英语项目活动中,你所在小组经过实践与探究,收集了下列相关信息。假设你是李华,请选择其中一种杭州传统艺术品用英语写一个报告,代表小组就你们的研究方法、研究成果以及必得体会进行交流。
Project: Exploring Traditional Art Forms in Hangzhou
Subject
silk umbrellas/Zhang Xiaoquan Scissors/Wangxingji Fans/Longjin Tea
Methods(How we learned)
visit museums…
Information (What we leaned)
history
…
materials
…
usages/steps (how to make it)
…
symbols/influence
…
Your feelings (what you thought about it):
…
下表是小组成员记录的部分信息:
Art forms
silk umbrellas
Zhang Xiaoquan Scissors
Wangxingji Fans
Longjin Tea
History
over 80 years
over 350 years
since 1875
over 1200 years
注意:
(1)短文必须包含你在表中所选艺术品的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2)词数: 80~100,短文开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates, I’m very happy. to share our research with you. The subject_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my presentation. Thank you.
【答案】例文:
Dear classmates,
I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject of our project is Wangxingji Fans, a traditional art form in Hangzhou. To learn more about Wangxingji Fans, we visited museums and interviewed local craftsmen. We discovered that Wangxingji Fans have a history dating back to 1875. These fans are made from high-quality materials such as bamboo and silk. The process of making a Wangxingji Fan involves several steps, including selecting materials, cutting, painting, and assembling. Each fan is a piece of art, symbolizing elegance and cultural heritage. Through our research, we learned that Wangxingji Fans are not only practical tools for cooling but also significant cultural symbols. They have influenced many aspects of Chinese art and daily life.
This project has deepened our appreciation for traditional craftsmanship and the rich cultural history of Hangzhou. We realized the importance of preserving these art forms for future generations.
That’s all for my presentation. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:遵循题目要求的结构,明确提到研究方法、研究成果以及个人感受。同时确保文章逻辑连贯、结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引入话题,说明分享的目的;
第二步,详细阐述研究过程和成果;
第三步,表达个人感受和体会;
第四步,总结并致谢。
[亮点词汇]
①date back to追溯到
②be made from由……制成
③cultural heritage文化遗产
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①We discovered that Wangxingji Fans have a history dating back to 1875.(that引导宾语从句)
②Through our research, we learned that Wangxingji Fans are not only practical tools for cooling but also significant cultural symbols.(宾语从句、not only...but also...结构)
二、Give advice 给建议
1.
假如你是李华,是某英文电台“say it out”栏目的兼职编辑。最近你收到一名叫Mary的中学生发来的求助邮件,请根据邮件内容给她回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using mobile phones. I prefer to do homework with the help of mobile phones. But my parents think I depend too much on them. So they don’t allow me to use mobile phones when I do my homework. It makes me crazy. What should I do? Can you give me some advice?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sad Mary
注意:(1)词数80-100, 可适当发挥。
(2) 至少给出两条建议。
(3) 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Mary,
__________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案:
Sample:
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble. It’s common to have such problems at your age. Cheer up and here is my advice.
Firstly, it’s a good way to work out problems by searching online. But using mobile phones too often will certainly make you addicted to them and do harm to your study. Maybe your parents worry about these things. To understand each other, I suggest that you should have a good talk with them about how to use mobile phones properly. You should tell them you’ll think more while studying. Besides, there are many ways to deal with problems you meet in homework, such as asking the teachers for help and working with friends.
I hope my advice will be helpful.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
2.(23-24九年级上·浙江宁波·期中)假如你是李平,你的一个朋友得知你英语有了很大进步之后给你发了一封电子邮件,想咨询一下你提升英语的经验,请你回信给他介绍一下。
Dear Li Ping,
I heard that you’ve made great progress in English. How can you make it? I remember you were not good at it before. I really want to improve my English, too. Could you please tell me the way you learn it.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Ma Tao
提示:
The way I learned English in the past
used to, be afraid to speak in public, read word by word,...
The way I learn this year
ask...for help, take notes in class, improve speaking skills by...
注意:
(1)短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
短文首句:
Dear Ma Tao,
I know you really want to improve your English. Don’t worry. Let me help you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Studying in a good way really helps. Hope you can also make progress.
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Ma Tao,
I know you really want to improve your English. Don’t worry. Let me help you.
As you know, I was poor in English. I used to read word by word and couldn’t understand what the teacher said. Every time I had English classes, I was so nervous that I couldn’t answer any questions.
However, I have changed a lot this team. I found lots of interesting ways to improve my English. I began to listen to English songs or watch some English movies that I am interested in. Then I ask my teachers for help. That makes me understand some basic words and expressions. I become more and more interested in English.
Studying in a good way really helps. Hope you can also make progress.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主,主要是给朋友介绍自己学习英语的方法和经验。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头文章已给出;
第二步,具体阐述自己过去学习英语的方法和今年改进的方法;
第三步,结尾文章已给出。
[亮点词汇]
①be poor in在……方面差
②begin to do开始做某事
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①Every time I had English classes, I was so nervous that I couldn’t answer any questions.(结果状语从句)
②I began to listen to English songs or watch some English movies that I am interested in.(定语从句)
三、Change and Chinese tea 变化和茶文化
1. 第二节 书面表达 (共1小题,满分15分)
假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友Linda 的电子邮件。请你阅读来信后回复。词数80左右。
Subject:
From: Linda
To: Li Ping
Dear Li Ping,
How’s it going? We haven’t written to each other for a year. I think both of us may change a lot. What are you like now? Which is the most important change for you? The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with Chinese tea. As far as I know, Hangzhou is famous for tea. Can you tell me how tea is produced in your city? Hope to hear form you soon.
Love,
Linda
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear from you. It’s been a year since I wrote to you last time. ______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
2.(23-24九年级上·浙江杭州·期中)假定你是李平,收到了你的伦敦朋友Mario的邮件,请阅读邮件并回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ming,
How is it going? It has been three years since we last saw each other. I used to be thin and shy, but now I’m stronger and more outgoing. What about you? How have you changed? By the way, I am going to Hangzhou next month. I know there are many famous things in Hangzhou, like umbrellas, scissors and tea ... I want to buy one for my friend as a gift. Could you please give me some advice on what to buy? Why is it special?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Mario
Dear Mario,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Mario,
It’s good to hear from you! Yes, it has been a long time since we last met in the US. I’m sure we have both changed a lot over the years.
As for me, I’ve become more mature and independent. I’m excited to hear that you’re coming to Hangzhou next month. Hangzhou is indeed famous for many things, such as its umbrellas, scissors, and tea. If you ask me to introduce one product to you, I choose Longjing tea. Longjing tea is special because it is grown in a specific area around West Lake in Hangzhou, and it requires a unique processing method. The tea leaves are carefully picked by hand and then steamed, dried, and shaped. The final product has a distinctive long, flat shape, and a green color. Longjing tea is known for its delicate aroma, smooth taste, and health benefits.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“现在完成时和一般现在时”;
③提示:根据邮件给出的问题进行写作,可适当增添细节,并突出重点写作,注意行文连贯,表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达收到邮件很高兴;
第二步,介绍自己的变化;
第三步,向对方推荐一个杭州的特色产品并解释原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……著名
②by hand手工
③distinctive独特的
[高分句型]
①it has been a long time since we last met in the US. (since引导的时间状语从句)
②I’m excited to hear that you’re coming to Hangzhou next month. (that引导宾语从句)
③If you ask me to introduce one product to you, I choose Longjing tea. (if引导条件状语从句)
3.(23-24九年级上·浙江杭州·期中)假如你是李平,你的朋友Tom在给你的信中提到不久将再次来中国旅行。请根据Tom的书信内容回复。词数80左右。
Subject:
From: Tom
To: Li Ping
Hi Li Ping,
Long time no see!
It has been ten years since I came to China last time. I know the Asian Games are held in Hangzhou. You’ve mentioned great changes have taken place there in your last letter. Can you tell me about the changes? Has the transportation improved? Are there more buildings? I wonder whether the environment is getting better. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Tom
Subject: Changes in Hangzhou, China
From: Li Ping
To: Tom
Hi Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Hi Tom,
I’m really glad to hear that you will come to China. I would like to introduce the changes in my hometown, Hangzhou.
First of all, the biggest change takes place in transportation. Much more subway stations and lines have been built across the city. So it’s pretty convenient to travel around. The traffic is not crowded in the streets any more. Besides, more trees are planted and the air is much fresher. You can even hear birds singing in green trees. Of course, the most amazing place is still the West Lake, which attracts a large number of tourists from home and abroad.
I can’t wait to meet you in the fantastic city! If you have any other questions about this trip, feel free to ask me!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据书信内容进行回复,注意要点齐全,并突出重点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题介绍家乡杭州的变化;
第二步,从交通、环境等方面具体介绍家乡的变化;
第三步,书写结语,期待对方的到来并表达愿意随时提供帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②can’t wait to do sth迫不及待想做某事
③feel free to do sth随意做某事
[高分句型]
①Of course, the most amazing place is still the West Lake, which attracts a large number of tourists from home and abroad. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②If you have any other questions about this trip, feel free to ask me! (if引导条件状语从句)
4. (23-24九年级上·浙江·期中)假如你是张明,你最近认识的英国笔友Julie给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解你在初三学习和生活方面的一些变化、收获和困惑。认真阅读下面的邮件,根据信中的内容,结合你的实际情况用英语回复。
To: Zhangming@hotmail.com
From: Julie Smith@hotmail.com
Dear Zhang Ming,
Glad to hear you’re in Grade 9 now. I believe you have changed a lot in many ways. And I’m interested in your school life. How have you changed in appearance, personality and hobby? I also hear that you have made great progress in English. What problems did you have in learning English? How did you solve them?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Julie
要求:
1. 书写规范,卷面整洁,语句通顺。
2. 所给的信息点都要用上,可以发挥自己的想象,适当拓展,请注意时态。
3. 100-110个词左右。
Dear Julie,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear Julie,
Thank you so much for your e-mail. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life.
Now I’m taller, and stronger than before. I like the Basketball Club best because I’ve made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover, it’s an excellent chance to learn team spirit. However, I’ve also met some problems over the three years. The biggest one is that I can’t use English grammar. Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to help me. She is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school. I want to be a teacher like her, I will study hard to achieve my dream. In a word, I enjoy my school life because it’s colorful and meaningful.
How about your school life? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作提示已经给出,写作要点需要细化,且可以适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,感谢Julie的来信;
第二步,回复Julie信中提到的问题;
第三步,写结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①quite a few 相当多
②moreover 此外
③in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①The biggest one is that I can’t use English grammar.(表语从句)
②She is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school. (定语从句)
5. (23-24九年级上·浙江温州·期中)随着时代的变迁,中国青少年的娱乐方式也逐渐发生着变化。某英语报社就此话题进行了征稿。请你参考下图,谈谈你对此变化的理解,并倡议青少年进行有益的娱乐活动,给报社投稿。
In the past
Now
参考词汇:滚铁环roll a hoop
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数110左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past.
In the past, the entertainment methods for teenagers were very simple. At that time, they didn’t have a TV, computer or phone. They usually got together to play all kinds of outdoor games. The most popular game was rolling a hoop, which is a single-player game. Although there was no modern entertainment, they all had a good time.
With the development of technology, now they have many modern games, such as computer games and mobile games. Although their activities are enriched, they often feel lonely. Some students hope that traditional games can return to school so that they can experience the joy of past life. Anyway, I hope that teenagers should do more activities that are beneficial to themselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:图片内容表达清楚,全文注意时态切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题写出文章讨论话题;
第二步,介绍过去青少年的娱乐方式及自己看法;
第三步,描述现在青少年的娱乐方式,发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①single-player game单人游戏
②the development of ...……的发展
③be beneficial to有益于
[高分句型]
①Although there was no modern entertainment, they all had a good time.(让步状语从句)
②Some students hope that traditional games can return to school so that they can experience the joy of past life.(宾语从句、结果状语从句)
6. (23-24九年级上·浙江杭州·期中)假如你叫李平, 最近你的美国交换生朋友Jim发给你一封电子邮件, 请你阅读他的邮件, 并根据问题进行回复。
Dear Li Ping,
How’s everything going? Recently, I am doing a social project. People’s life in China has changed a lot these 10 years. Can you describe the changes of celebrating traditional Chinese festivals? What do you think of these changes? By the way, I’m going back to America at the end of this term and I’d like to bring some gifts for my friends. Any good suggestions? Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Jim
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I’m fine these days. Now let me describe the changes of celebrating traditional Chinese festivals to you.
We used to celebrate traditional Chinese festivals face to face. For example, we used to give New Year’s greetings to our elders and neighbors on the first day of the New Year. Then we would visit our relatives. However, now we can celebrate the festival through WeChat. For example, we can wish each other well and give red envelopes on WeChat. Besides, if you would like to bring some gifts for your friends, I think gifts with traditional Chinese characteristics like Chinese knots are good.
I hope my advice is helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Ping
【总体分析】①题材: 本文是一篇回复邮件的应用文,需要针对Jim的邮件内容进行回应,并给出相关信息和建议;
②时态: 时态应灵活使用,对于描述节日庆祝方式的变化可采用“一般现在时”与“现在完成时”结合,表达个人看法和提出建议时则使用“一般现在时”;
③提示: 邮件中需涵盖两部分内容,一是描述中国传统节日庆祝方式的变化及你的看法,二是为Jim提供回国时给朋友带礼物的建议。注意在回复中保持礼貌和友好的语气。
【写作步骤】第一步,回应并表明写作意图。可以先简短问候Jim,并感谢他对中国变化的关注,然后直接切入主题,表示将分别就节日庆祝方式的变化和个人看法,以及带礼物的建议进行回复;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从节日庆祝方式的变化、各人看法和带礼物的建议等方面阐述。
第三步,书写结语。表达希望Jim的社交项目成功,并期待他回国后分享更多关于美国的文化和故事。同时,可以再次强调如果Jim在选择礼物或了解中国文化方面有任何疑问,都欢迎随时联系你。最后,以友好和期待再次交流的语气结束邮件。
【亮点词汇】 ①face to face面对面地
②give New Year’s greetings to向……致以新年祝福
③wish each other well相互祝福
④with traditional Chinese characteristics具有中国传统特色的
【高分句型】 ①We used to celebrate traditional Chinese festivals face to face. (使用“used to do”表达过去常常做某事)
②Besides, if you would like to bring some gifts for your friends, I think gifts with traditional Chinese characteristics like Chinese knots are good. (条件状语从句结合宾语从句,表达建议)
四、Exchange Visit 交换生之旅
1. 第二节 书面表达(共1题,满分15分)
假如你是李雷,请你对照英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行回复。你可以根据邮件内容做适当发挥,
邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数:80-100
To:Lilei@mail.com
Subject: Exchange visit
Hi there, Li Lei!
I am really excited about going to be at your school for the exchange visit later this year-hope you are too !
But the thing is, I really don’t want to do the wrong things while I’m there and especially at school , so I’m wondering if you could tell me a bit about the school rules, phones, clothes, food..
Could you send me a quick email? I’d love to hear from you.
注意:1.词数80左右,开头已写好,不计入总词数
2.回复需包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺
Hi, Bruce!
I am glad that you made a good decision!
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Love
Bruce
2. 第二节:书面表达。(15分)
假设你是李华,你的笔友Grace将作为交换生来中国念书,请你根据所给邮件节选部分,给她写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua,
Long time no see. How is it going?
I am excited to tell you that I am going to study as an exchange student at your school soon I have changed a lot since I saw you five years ago. What about you? And how has Hangzhou changed? By the way, I’d like to buy something special and local in Hangzhou for my host family as a gift when I first meet them. Do you have any suggestions?...
Yours,
Grace
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