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Unit 1 Writing Paper 1、 词汇积累 度假 拍了很多照片 了解到了很多 玩的开心 总而言之 另外 二、写作 Dear Wang Wei, How’s everything going? For me, I had a wonderful summer vacation. I went to Paris to visit many beautiful places. How about you? Where did you go this summer vacation? Who did you go with? What did you do there? And how did you feel? Can you tell me something about your summer vacation? Please write to me soon. Yours Linda 1. 审题，列提纲 写作内容： 时态：______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 结构（三段） 第一段：介绍暑假和谁去了什么地方 （1）今年暑假，我和家人们一起去了北京度假。(go... on vacation) 第二段：介绍假期做的事情 如何介绍: 分天介绍去的地方，做的事情 （2）天气晴朗且炎热。 （3）我们去了故宫博物院。 （4）我们在那里拍了很多照片。 （5）我也了解到了关于中国历史的很多东西。（learn...about...） （6）第二天，我们去了长城，它是世界上最长的城墙。（the longest） （7） 全世界的人都去欣赏它的雄伟。（grandness） 第三段：总结度假并表达自己的感受。 （8）我们累并快乐着。（but） 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 （9）我们度过了一个愉快的暑假！ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 （10）希望能再次去北京玩。（hope to do...） 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 3. 成文 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 自评：（1）文章是否包含所有5点内容；（2）文章是否有合适的开头结尾；（3）活动与活动之间是否有合适的词组衔接；（4）是否用过去时描述旅行经历；（5）句子结构是否正确；（6）单词拼写是否正确；（7）书写是否端正清晰。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 Writing Paper 1、 词汇积累 去......度假 go...on vacation 拍了很多照片 took quite a few photos 了解到了很多 learned something about... 玩的开心 enjoyed oneself/had a good time/have fun 总而言之 all in all 另外 what’s more 二、写作 Dear Wang Wei, How’s everything going? For me, I had a wonderful summer vacation. I went to Paris to visit many beautiful places. How about you? Where did you go this summer vacation? Who did you go with? What did you do there? And how did you feel? Can you tell me something about your summer vacation? Please write to me soon. Yours, Linda 1. 审题，列提纲 写作内容：(1) the place you went (2) the person you went with (3) the things you did there (4) the feelings you had (5) more information about it. 时态：描述一段旅行经历，故用过去时。 2. 结构（三段） 第一段：介绍暑假和谁去了什么地方 （1）今年暑假，我和家人们一起去了北京度假。(go... on vacation) I went to Beijing on vacation with my family this summer vacation. 第二段：介绍假期做的事情 如何介绍: 分天介绍去的地方，做的事情 （2）那里的天气很晴朗并且炎热。 The weather there was sunny and hot. （3）我们去了故宫博物院。 We visited the Palace Museum. （4）我们在那里拍了很多照片。 We took quite a few photos there. （5）我也了解到了一些中国历史知识。（learn...about...） We learned something important about Chinese history. （6）第二天，我们去了长城，它是世界上最长的城墙。（the longest） The next day, we went to the Great Wall.It is the longest wall in the world. The next day, we went to the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. （7） 全世界的人都去欣赏它的雄伟。（grandness） People from all over the world went there to enjoy its grandness. 第三段：总结度假并表达自己的感受。 （8）我们累并快乐着。（but） We were tired but happy. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 （9）我们在北京玩得很开心！ We enjoyed ourselves in Beijing./ We had a good time in Beijing. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 （10）希望能再次去北京玩。(hope to do...) We hope to go there again. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 3. 成文 Dear Linda, I’m glad to hear from you. Everything goes well. I went to Beijing on vacation with my family this summer vacation. The weather there was sunny and hot. First we visited the Palace museum. We took quite a few photos there. What’s more, I learned something important about Chinese history. The next day, we went to the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. Therefore, People from all over the world went there to enjoy its grandness. All in all, we were tired but happy. We enjoyed ourselves in Beijing, and we hope to go there again. Yours, Wang Wei　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (蓝色斜体字部分为句子积累部分没有的单词或句子，关注该部分如何让文章更丰富、流畅。） 自评：（1）文章是否包含所有5点内容；（2）文章是否有合适的开头结尾；（3）活动与活动之间是否有合适的词组衔接；（4）是否用过去时描述旅行经历；（5）句子结构是否正确；（6）单词拼写是否正确；（7）书写是否端正清晰。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$