Unit 9 单元写作指导与演练-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）

Unit 9 Can you come to my party? 单元写作指导与演练 【单元话题解读】 本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群,涉及子主题“良好的人际关系与人际交往”。常见的写作任务为写信邀请他人参加某个活动或写信回复（接受/拒绝）他人的邀请,体裁多为书信等应用文。本单元的话题是“邀请”，涉及邀请他人参加聚会或活动或回复他人的邀请信. 【写作目标】 接受邀请的回信一般包含以下内容：首先感谢对方的邀请，并重述邀请信中的主要内容；然后愉快地表示接受邀请，并简要说明自己的打算； 最后表示期待赴会和与对方见面的心情。 谢绝邀请的回信一般包含以下几方面的内容：首先还是要对对方的邀请表示感谢; 然后具体说明自己无法接受邀请的原因，并对无法出席表示遗憾；最后表达自己的祝愿，即祝愿自己未能参加的会议或者活动能顺利进行。 写作技巧、 无论是收到哪种邀请信都要复信，明确表示接受与否。而且无论接受与否都要对邀请者表示感谢。 ◆ 第一步：解释：为什么邀请 ◆第二步：提出邀请，告知时间、地点、活动内容 ◆第三步：嘱托和期待拒绝邀请类作文：一、感谢二、婉拒三、解释原因 “Thank—A/R—Hope”三步法写“回应邀请类”作文 1. Thank: 对于对方的邀请首先表示感谢。 2. A/R: 即Accept/Refuse。对于对方的邀请, 会有两种情况: 接受或拒绝。合理地解释原因是写作的重中之重。 3. Hope: 结束语。无论是否应约, 都要表达美好的祝愿。 【单元素材积累】 【词汇积累】 invite // refuse // accept // prepare for // have the flu // go to the/a doctor // another time // hang out // the day after tomorrow // look after // look forward to // hear from 相关短语积累  1.thanks for doing sth.感谢做某事 2.invite sb.to do sth.邀请某人做某事 3.have to do sth.不得不做某事 4.help sb.(to) do sth.帮助某人做某事 5.go to the dentist 看牙医 6.study for a test 为考试而学习 7.have fun玩得开心 8.next time下次 句型积累 1. To say goodbye to him, we will organize a party. 为了和他告别，我们将要组织一场聚会。 2. At the party, you can enjoy all kinds of food as well as music. 3. We hope that you can accept our invitation. 我们希望你能够接收我们的邀请。 4. Please let me know if you can come. 如果你来了请让我知晓。 5. I’d love to go to the museum with you,but I’m not free this Saturday. 6. Sam isn’t leaving until next Wednesday. 萨姆直到下周三才离开。 7.I am sorry, I must study for a math test. 我很抱歉，我必须要为数学考试做准备。 8. She’s not available. She must go to the doctor. 她没空。她必须去看医生。 9. I’m sad to see her go. 看到她离开我很难过 10. Let’s have a surprise party for her next Friday the 28th! 我们在（本月）28日下周五为她举办一场惊喜聚会吧！ 11. I would like to invite you to the opening of our new library. 我想邀请你们参加我们新图书馆的落成典礼。 12. I already have a great idea about how to do that. 我已经有怎样做它的好主意了！ ◆开头句 ①Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. ②I'd love to go but I can't./I'd love to come to the party，but I'm not available. ③I would like to invite you to my birthday party. ◆中间句 ①I'm sorry.I'm not available.I have to look after my grandma. ②I have an exam on Monday so I must prepare for it. ③To show how much we'll miss her，I'll have a surprise party for her at my home this Saturday evening. ④I also need to study for the coming English test. ◆结尾句 ①Thank you for inviting me. ②I hope you can have a good time. ③Let me know if you want to come. ④I'm looking forward to your coming. 【名言积累】 ①Love me,love my dog.爱屋及乌。 ②To give is better than to receive.给予胜于接受。 【连词】 first, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye 【实例讲解1】 写作任务 (Section B 3c)假如你是王磊，下周日是你的14岁生日，你准备举办一个派对。你想邀请好友Eric来参加，请给他写一封邮件邀请他前来共庆生日。 ●【审清题目】 内容：邀请好友参加生日派对 文体：应用文（邀请函） 时态：一般现在时和一般将来时 人称：第一人称和第二人称 【头脑风暴】 ●【提供素材】 ◆句型 根据汉语提示，写出对应的英文表达。 发出邀请：(1)______________________________(我想邀请你参加我的生日派对).Please join me for my birthday party next Monday.Please join us for drinks and delicious food on September, 12th.I'm happy to invite you to join me for my birthday party at my house.(2)______________________________(你能来参加我的生日派对吗)?Would you like to come to my birthday party?I want you to be at my party because you are very special to me.I'm eager (渴望的) to see you at my party.生日派对相关事宜（活动、准备的物品、穿着等）：Please bring ...(3)______________________________(你不需要带任何东西).We will / are going to sing and dance at the party.We can eat, drink and play games at the party.You don't need to dress up for the party.提醒回复邀请：(4)______________________________(请在下周一之前回复我).You can send me an e-mail by 5:00 p.m. to let me know if you can come.Please tell me as soon as possible if you can come to the party.I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.Please say “yes”.表达诚意：Hope you can come.I do hope you can make it.(5)______________________________(我期待见到你).We will be waiting for you. Key: 1. I would like to invite you to (come to) my birthday party 2. Can you come to my birthday party 3. You don't need to bring anything 4. Please reply to me by next Monday 5. I'm looking forward to meeting / seeing you ●【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 Key: 1. The party will begin at six next Sunday afternoon  2. My parents will prepare food and drinks for us   3. we will have a big dinner  4. we can sing and dance together  5. send me an e-mail or call me 【实例解析2】 如何答复派对邀请（接受）并询问相关事宜 【写作任务】（Section B 3b） 假如你是李娜，你的同学Emma邀请你去她家参加下周六的睡衣派对(pajama party)。你对此很感兴趣，请你用英文写一封电子邮件答复她的派对邀请并询问相关事宜。 【审清题目】 内容：答复派对邀请并询问相关事宜。 文体：应用文——接受邀请。 人称：以第一人称为主。 时态：询问派对具体信息用一般将来时。 【头脑风暴】 To whom Emma For what Pajama party When to go ... o'clock ... next Saturday Where to go Emma's home Who will attend (参加) Emma's classmates, friends, family ... What to wear Pajamas or jeans or T-shirts or dresses or ... What to bring Food and drinks, music CDs, soft toys (布绒玩具) ... What to do Sing, dance, play games, watch movies, take pictures ... Ask for reply ... 【提供素材】 ◆常用表达 根据汉语提示写出下列句子。 ★感谢邀请 1. (1)_____________________________(谢谢邀请我). 2. Thank you for the kind invitation to ... 3. It is so kind of you to invite me to ... 4. It is with great pleasure (愉快) that I write to thank you for your invitation. 5. Many thanks for your invitation. 6. I really appreciate (感激) your invitation. 7. I am writing this e-mail to express my gratitude (表达感谢) for the invitation to ... ★确认参加 1. I'd love to come. 2. (2)_____________________________(我非常期待它). 3. I'm able / free to come to / attend ... at ... 4. I will surely attend ... 5. I will make sure that I am free that day and come to ... ★询问派对相关事宜（衣着、具体活动、参加人员、准备的物品等） 1. ... is strange (陌生的) to me. Can you tell me what it is? 2. What clothes should I wear / bring? 3. (3)_____________________________(我们将做什么活动)? 4. What food or drinks should I bring / buy? 5. Who will also be invited (被邀请)? 6. (4)_____________________________(我应该准备什么东西)? ★提醒回复 1. You can send me an e-mail or chat with (和……聊天) me on WeChat. 2. (5)_____________________________(请下周二前回复我). 3. I hope to hear from you as soon as possible. ★表达祝愿 1. Wish you a good / nice ... 2. I hope (that) everything will go well. Key: 1. Thanks for inviting me   2. I'm looking forward to it very much / very looking forward to it 3. What activities will we do   4. What things should I prepare   5. Please reply to me by next Tuesday 【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 称呼 Dear Emma, 开头：致谢 It is so kind of you to invite me to your pajama party. 正文：表达意愿（接受）+询问具体事宜 I love parties and I'd love to come to your party. But the idea of a pajama party is kind of strange to me. So before I go, (1)______________________________(我想问一些关于睡衣派对的问题). First, what clothes am I expected to wear? (2)______________________________(我必须穿睡衣去参加派对吗)? Second, what will we do at the party? (3)______________________________(我们会玩游戏或看电影吗)? Third, should I bring some drinks to the party, such as cola and juice? Fourth, (4)_______________________________(派对几点开始) and how long will the party last (持续)? Last, let me know if I can help with the preparations. 结束语 I can't wait for your party and hope that everything will go well. 结尾 Yours, Li Na Key: 1. I'd like / I want to ask some questions about the pajama party 2. Must I wear my / the pajamas to the party 3. Will we play games or watch movies 4. what time will the party begin / start 写作练笔 假如你是Jack,你将在家里举行你弟弟去国外（abroad）学习的欢送会（going-away party）,你想邀请Jenny来参加这个聚会。请你根据下表的内容提示和你所补充的信息,写一封80词左右的邀请函。 Date February 18th Time From 5:00 p.m.to 8:00 p.m. Place Jack's house Things to prepare games Activities 1.… 2.… Reply Before February 16th ►►审题指导 1.文体：应用文 2.人称：第一人称和第二人称 3.时态：一般将来时和一般现在时 4.写作要点：明确写作要点,所给的要点要全,并加入自主发挥的部分。 ►►思路点拨 Dear Jenny, I would like to invite you to a going-away party for my brother. He is going to study abroad. The party will be at 5:00 p.m.on February 18th at my home.①It will be nice of you to ②prepare some games for the party.③There is no need for you to ④help out with the party preparations,because my parents will get everything ready. You can ⑤not only enjoy fun games like musical chairs,but also dance to music at the party. Besides,DIY like making cakes or flowers will be prepared. I ⑥do believe you will enjoy yourself then. Please ⑦reply in writing to this invitation by Friday,February 16th. I will be glad to see your coming. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Jack 点评: ①It is +adj.+of sb.to do…,③There is no need for sb.to do…和⑤not only…but also…句型的使用让文章的句式表达更加丰富多样。 ⑥强调句do believe的使用让文章的表达更高级。 本篇范文语言丰富,句式多样,同时能够灵活运用本单元所学短语,如：prepare…for,help out with和reply in writing to this invitation等。 【小试身手】 假如你是李梅, 你的好友Sally邀请你下个周末去动物园, 但你因为有太多的事情要做, 只好婉言拒绝。写一篇谢绝邀请的短文, 并向她讲述你谢绝的原因。 写作要求: (1) 可适当增加细节, 使内容充实, 行文连贯; (2) 词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) 。 【写作模板】 表达感谢 Thanks a lot for... 解释不能赴约 的原因 I’m going to... I have to... I plan to... 结束语 I hope...   【高分作文】 Dear Sally, Thanks a lot for your invitation. I’m sorry I can’t go to the zoo with you, because I will be very busy next weekend. On Saturday morning, I’m going to see a dentist because of my teeth problems. In the afternoon, I will have to wash clothes and clean rooms. I will help my classmate with his English in the evening. On Sunday morning, I plan to prepare for a science test. In the afternoon, I will go to the sports club to do exercise. And I will have a piano lesson in the evening. I hope you will have a great time in the zoo. Thank you very much again. Yours, Li Mei 【真题解析】 1．为了促进同学们的个性发展，很多学校现在都开设了校本课程，如：“古诗词鉴赏”“影视欣赏”“DIY”“电脑小创客”等，这些课程深受同学们的喜爱。请你以“I Enjoy It”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你喜爱的校本课程。 写作提示：1. What school-based courses does your school have? 2. What course would you like to choose? 3. What do you think of it? 写作要求：1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整； 2.  100词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I Enjoy It This term, in order to develop the interest of the students, our school has different kinds of school-based courses. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： I Enjoy It This term, in order to develop the interest of the students, our school has different kinds of school-based courses. For example, there are traditional cultures, movie appreciation and DIY. We can choose whatever we like. For me, I'm interested in making something in my free time, so I choose DIY. It is very interesting to make things according to my imagination. With the teacher's help, I can make beautiful cakes. Last week, I made a birthday cake for my mother. I sent my mother a gift for the first time. She was happy for my love, so was I. DIY not only improves my ability to make things by myself, but also develops my creativity. I really enjoy it. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“I Enjoy It”为题，根据写作提示，谈一谈自己喜爱的校本课程。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主，以一般过去时为辅来叙述，写作时承接开头，要写出选择该课程的原因及自己的感受，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 2．假如你是Becky，你要邀请你的同学Rita参加你的生日聚会，请根据下面表格提示信息，完成这封邀请函。 What Becky’s birthday party Where Becky’s house on Nanjing Street When 2:30 p.m. — 5:00 p.m. Friday How the No. 5 or No. 10 bus Phone number 8456258 要求：1.条理清楚，语意连贯、通顺，格式正确； 2.80词左右。 Invitation Dear Rita, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Becky 【答案】One possible version: Invitation Dear Rita, I am going to have my fourteenth birthday party at my house on Nanjing Street. I think it would be great if you can join us. The party is going to last from 2:30 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on Friday. You can take the No. 5 or No. 10 bus to come here. Li Hui is going to come. I think you must be happy to meet him. If you can’t find my house, please call me at 8456258. Come and have a good time! Yours, Becky 【详解】 1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邀请函的格式写。内容是根据所给的材料，以Becky的身份，写一封邀请函邀请你的同学Rita参加你的生日聚会。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；在邀请函中要介绍此处邀请函的目的，举办生日的时间和地点以及乘车路线和联系方式等。 3．书面表达 Mike乔迁新居，他邀请Jenny下周的某个晚上到新居共进晚餐。由于Jenny下周日程已排满，不能前往。请以Jenny的口吻替Jenny回信婉拒，并表示谢意。词数在60个左右。 September Sunday Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Saturday Dinner with my cousin and uncle Class Music club with Jim Need to work late Need to work late Office party Amy’s birthday party ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： Dear Mike, Thank you for inviting me to have dinner at your new house. I hope that I can have dinner with you. But I have to say sorry to you. I’m really busy next week! On Monday, I have to have class. On Tuesday, I have to go the music club with Jim. On Wednesday and Thursday I need to work late. On Friday, I have to attend the office party. On Saturday, I will go to Amy’s birthday party. On Sunday, I will have dinner with my cousin and uncle. Have a good time! You can live a happy life at your new house. Yours, Jenny 【详解】 1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时开头表示感谢迈克的邀请；第二段解释我不能去参加聚会的愿意，我下周要做的很多事；第三段祝他玩得愉快。 2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用一般将来时解释我下周要做的事，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 3.高分亮点： 短语：invite sb to do sth，say sorry to sb，need to do sth，have a good time。 句型：宾语从句that I can have dinner with you。 4．书面表达 Tom邀请李平周日去参加他的生日宴会，但李平的父母出差了，要到下个月才回来，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾，另外英语考试即将来临，因此李平无法前去参加生日宴会。李平感到很抱歉，只好写信辞谢。 假如你是李平，请根据以上提示内容写一封信，要求80词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tom， Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I'd love to go，but I can't. My parents are out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my coming English exam. I'm very sorry I can't go to your party. I hope you can have a good time. Yours， Li Ping 【详解】1、题干解读：本文属于材料作文，属于道歉信，讲述李平为什么不能去参加汤姆的生日宴会并祝他们玩的开心。 2、例文点评：本文时态运用准确，词句使用恰当，是一篇优秀的文章，符合英语国家的写作思维。 3、高分亮点： 短语：thank you for doing, on business, have to, look after, study for, have a good time. 句型：I’d love to go, but I can’t. 【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如thank you for doing, on business, have to, look after, study for, have a good time, I’d love to go, but I can’t等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 5．假如你是Jane，表姐Susan邀请你下周和她一起去购物。请根据下面提示写一封邮件，告诉表姐，下周你很忙不能和她一起购物。并说明你下周要做的事情，以及你什么时间可以和她去购物。 写作要点： 1. 首先道歉并说明你不能和她去购物的原因； 2. 下周你要做的事：从周一到周五，白天要上学；晚上要写作业；周五晚上，帮助妈妈做家务；周六要为考试学习； 3. 周日可以和她一起去购物。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名； 2. 可适当发挥，使内容完整，行文连贯，要求字迹工整，语言精练，条理清楚； 3. 70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Susan, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Jane 【答案】One possible version: Dear Susan, How are you doing? I’m sorry, I can’t go shopping with you because I will be very busy next week. From Monday to Friday, I’ll have to go to school every day and I must do my homework every evening. On Friday evening, I might have to help my mom do some housework. On Saturday, I need to study for an exam. I will be free on Sunday and I’d like to go shopping with you then, is that OK? Best wishes! Yours, Jane 【详解】 1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据提示的要点，写一封电子邮件告诉苏珊，下周不能和她一起去购物的原因。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般将来时为主来叙述。写作时承接开头，要紧扣要点提示，道歉并简单说明不能和她去购物的原因，然后重点写下一周要做的事情，最后明确能去的时间。行文要格式正确，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 6．假如你是约翰，周五晚上你收到好朋友杰克的邀请函，他邀请你这周末参观他的农场，但是你有事不能接受邀请。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封电子邮件说明原因。词数：80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 内容提示： 1. 周六上午在家帮父母做家务，下午和妈妈一起去购物； 2. 周日学习，为语文考试做准备，晚上和朋友一起去听音乐会； 3. 最后表示下周可以去参观农场。 Dear Jack, Thank you for asking me to visit your farm. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, John 【答案】One possible version: Dear Jack, Thank you for asking me to visit your farm. I’d really love to, but I’m afraid I am not available this weekend. I have to help my parents with the housework tomorrow morning. In the afternoon, I will go shopping with my mother. On Sunday, I have to study for the Chinese test. I promised my friend that I would go to the concert with him in the evening. What a busy weekend! Although I can’t visit your farm this week, I can go next week. What do you think of it? If so, see you next weekend! Best wishes. Yours, John 【详解】 1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据提示的要点，写一封电子邮件，向杰克解释周末不能参观他的农场的原因。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般将来时为主来叙述。写作时承接开头，要紧扣要点提示，写出周末要做的事情，向杰克解释不能去的原因，最后明确能去的时间。行文要格式正确，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 7．Mike邀请Jenny下周到他家共进晚餐，但Jenny下周日程已排满，不能前往。请你根据表格信息以Jenny的口吻回信婉辞，并表示谢意。70词左右。 Sun. Dinner with my cousin and uncle Mon. Class Tue. Join the jazz club with Alice Wed. Need to work late Thur. Need to work late Fri. Office party Sat. Party at Amy’s ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Mike, Thank you very much for your invitation. I’d love to, but I am not available. On Sunday, I will have dinner with my cousin and uncle. I have classes on Monday. On Tuesday I’m going to join the jazz club with Alice. On Wednesday and Thursday I need to work late. We are going to have an office party on Friday. And Amy has asked me to go to her party at her home on Saturday. So I’m sorry I can’t have dinner with you. Yours, Jenny 【详解】题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，要求根据表格信息，以Jenny的口吻回信婉辞Mike的邀请。 写作指导：本文的时态主要用一般现在时和一般将来时；人称主要用第一人称。写作时，首先要感谢对方的邀请，并对不能应邀表示歉意，然后说明理由；最后表达自己的祝福。要注意书信的写作格式，条理要清楚，防止漏写；理由叙述要详尽、语气要委婉；同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，符合英语的表达习惯。此外，可用一些较高级的句型、短语使文章更出色。 8．假如你是John，你将举行一个生日聚会，你想邀请好朋友们来参加，请根据下面的内容提示写一封邀请函给他们。80词左右。 内容提示： 1. 生日聚会的时间：2月3日周五，下午6点开始； 2. 生日聚会的地点：在家（位于长街2号）； 3. 生日聚会的主要活动：大餐，游戏，生日蛋糕。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear friends, To celebrate my birthday, I am going to have a birthday party at my home on Friday, February 3rd. I would like to invite all of you to come to the party. The party will start at six p. m. When the party starts, we will have a big meal first. Then we will play games. At last, there will be a birthday cake with candles for everyone. My house is at 2 Long Street. Please make sure that you all can make it on time. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, John 【详解】 1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据提示的要点，写一封邀请函，邀请好朋友们来参加自己的生日聚会，属于书信作文。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般将来时为主，以第三人称为辅来叙述。写作时紧扣要点提示，交代清楚聚会的时间、地点、邀请对象以及主要活动，最后表达自己的盛情。行文格式正确，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 9．汤姆邀请杰克这周六去他家做客，但杰克那天没空，因此不能赴约。假如你是杰克，请根据下面提示写一封信给汤姆，说明你不能赴约的原因。 提示：study for a test；have a piano lesson；go to the movies 要求：不少于70词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi Tom, Thanks for asking me to go to your home this Saturday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Jack 【答案】例文： Hi Tom, Thanks for asking me to go to your home this Saturday. I’ love to go, but I’m so sorry that I can’t visit you. I’m not available this Saturday. On Saturday morning, I have to study for a test. In the afternoon, I have a piano lesson. In the evening, my family and I are going to the movies. As you can see, I will be really busy. Maybe I can go next time. Best wishes. Yours, Jack 【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达是一篇书信作文。主要是说汤姆邀请杰克这周六去他家做客，但杰克有事情不能赴约。要求我们作为杰克，根据下面提示写一封信给汤姆，说明不能赴约的原因。 2.写作指导：本篇书面表达要以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时；写信要表明几点：开头首先表示感谢，接着表示婉拒，然后解释不能到场的原因。注意语句连贯，条理清晰。 10．假如你是Li Ping，请根据以下写作要点写一封80词左右的email，向你的朋友Tom说明自己不能去参加他的生日宴会。 写作要点： 1. 感谢邀请； 2. 道歉，说明你不能去参加他的生日宴会。 3. 简要说明你不能参加的理由： (1) 奶奶卧病在床需要人照顾； (2) 父母出差要到香港下个月才能回来； (3) 自己的英语不是很好，英语考试即将来临，要为英语考试准备，多做听力练习； 4. 告诉Tom你感到十分抱歉，请他见谅。祝他生日快乐！ 写作要求： 1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名； 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清楚； 4.至少80词。（不含已写出的英文） Dear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best Wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【答案】One possible version Dear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to go but I can’t. I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And my parents are out on business in Hong Kong. They are coming back next month. Also, my English is not so good. I must do more listening practice. I need to study for my coming English exam. I’m very sorry that I can’t go to your party. Thank you for inviting me. I hope you can have a good time. Happy birthday! Best Wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【详解】 1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作文体是邮件。在写作时应承接邮件开头，按照邮件的格式来写；首先是称呼；然后是正文内容，正文包含三个方面的内容：感谢对方的邀请，拒绝对方的邀请，叙述拒绝的理由；结尾告诉对方自己无法参加的歉意以及对对方的祝福；最后落款，署名。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；按照邮件的格式叙述内容；表达拒绝别人的邀请时，语言表达要委婉，态度要温和；叙述拒绝的理由时，层次分明，条理清楚，内容得当；表达歉意时，诚恳真诚。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$