内容正文:
英 语
第二部分 书面表达专练
重点话题写作(二)
主题:今昔变化
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1.审题:
本话题是“我们所发生的变化”,与此相关的写作任务是根据表格提示、文字提示或联系实际生活,简单叙述身边人物或事物的今昔变化。写作时,可采用对比的方式,可以先介绍过去的情况,再介绍现在的情况;也可以在介绍过去情况的同时介绍现在的情况。并且要合理使用一般现在时。
2.话题词汇:
change改变 silent沉默 private私人的 influence影响 be proud of感到自豪 take place发生 deal with处理 in person亲自 from time to time时常 used to曾经 make progress有进步
3.话题句式:
①I notice ____ many families have cars now but we only had bicycles some years ago.
我注意到现在很多家庭都有车,但前些年我们只有自行车。
(提分点:that引导的宾语从句)
②_______ I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class.
因为我过去很害羞,很安静,所以在课堂上我总是沉默寡言。
(提分点:because引导的原因状语从句)
③____ the improvement of the living condition, people can travel in their spare time.
随着生活条件的改善,人们可以在空闲时间旅行。
(提分点:with结构作伴随状语)
④I have changed a lot _____ I became a ninth grader this term.
自从这学期我上九年级以来,我已经改变了很多。
(提分点:since引导的时间状语从句)
【书面表达】
(武汉市汉阳区二模)假如你是李伟,转眼间你即将毕业,你给你的英国朋友Peter写一封信,告诉他这三年在你身上发生了哪些变化?请根据以下内容提示从外貌性格、学习习惯、生活方式等方面讲述你的变化。
提示:
1.What changes do you have?
2.How have you changed?
3.What do you think of the changes?
4.Something more about your changes.
注意:
1.根据所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
3.词数80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How time flies! And I have changed a lot during the past three years.
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I used to be thin and had long hair, but now I am strong and have short hair. At the beginning, I wasn't good at English. With my English teacher's help, I have made progress in it. I often get good grades on my exams now. I even develop many good
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Yours,
Li Wei
learning habits, such as keeping English diaries, reviewing English notes and so on. What's more, I'm more outgoing than I used to be. I attend many activities in my afterschool service and make more friends. Last but not least, I can balance my life and schoolwork better than I used to.
Thanks to the middle school life, I have changed much! I will never forget the valuable middle school life!
对应答案P169
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