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写作课——节日与假期
★课内素材
1. did you go ?你去哪里度假了?
2.What a a day makes!一天的差异是多么大呀!
3.We took photos there.我们在那里拍了相当多的照片。
4. tasted really good!每样东西都很好吃!
5.We go to the beach near our hotel.我们决定去旅馆附近的海滩。
★课外素材
1.A thousand-li journey starts with the first step.千里之行始于足下。
2.Travel broadens the mind.旅游开阔眼界。
3.Read ten thousand books,and travel ten thousand miles.读万卷书,行万里路。
Where
on vacation
difference
quite a few
Everything
decided to
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愉快的假期生活结束了,假设暑假你和家人去了杭州游玩,请你以“My Vacation to Hangzhou”为题,并根据以下要点提示写一篇短文介绍游玩的情况。
要点提示:
1.暑假我和父母去了杭州游玩;
2.我们坐了大约两个小时的火车到达那里;
3.参观了西湖(West Lake)、杭州游乐园(Hangzhou Amusement Park)、灵隐寺(Lingyin Temple);
4.在延安路购物,品尝当地的美食。
My Vacation to Hangzhou
This summer vacation,I went to Hangzhou with my parents. .
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It was a really wonderful trip!I hope to go to Hangzhou again.
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第一步 审清题意
1.文体:记叙文
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态:一般过去时
第二步 思路点拨
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第三步 连词成句
1.我们坐火车到那里花了大约两个小时。(it took us,get there,by train)
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2.杭州以西湖而闻名。(is famous for)
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3.晚上,我们在湖边散步。(in the evening,took a walk,around)
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4.我在那里拍了相当多的照片。(took,quite a few)
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5.我们去延安路购物。(did some shopping)
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It took us about two hours to get there by train.
Hangzhou is famous for West Lake.
In the evening,we took a walk around the lake.
I took quite a few photos there.
We went to Yan’an Road and did some shopping.
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第四步 组句成篇
第五步 修饰美化(范文见参考答案)
My Vacation to Hangzhou
This summer vacation,I went to Hangzhou with my parents.It took us about
two hours to get there by train.Hangzhou is famous for West Lake.Soon after
we arrived,we took a boat trip on West Lake.In the evening,we took a walk
around the lake.The night views were really wonderful.The next day,we visited
Hangzhou Amusement Park.On the third day,we went to Lingyin Temple.I took
quite a few photos there.On the last day,we went to Yan’an Road and did some
shopping.I bought some silk scarves for my good friends.During our stay,we also
tasted the local delicious food.
It was a really wonderful trip!I hope to go to Hangzhou again.
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