2023-2024学年高一英语作文复习：课后续写--the dog sled race 课件

Continuation Writing 高中2019外研版高一英语 --- the dog sled race watch video and think 1.What is the video about? 3.What is it that made them have a narrow escape from the avalanche? It is about a sled pulled by dogs. It is the lead dog’s quick reaction to the emergency,responsibilty,unwavering determination and persistence that made them out of trouble. 2.Which dog plays the most crucial in the sled? The lead dog. 五四三法 1.Read for elements 2.Read for conflict 3.Read for plot 4. Read for emotional changes 5.Read for theme hints伏笔;clues线索 sequence顺序 coherence连贯 logic逻辑 5R 4句定框架 3大原则 Para1:顺写句...过渡句 Para2:顺写句...主旨句 1）Action--Response 2) Conflict--Resolution 3) Negative--Positive Plot 情节 What to write Why to write How to write Theme主题 Language 3 key elements in Continuation Writing 读后续写三件套 simple and complete positive accurate,diverse and vivid Story Mapping boxes Background What were the main characters? What happened at the beginning? Where was it set? How did character(s) feel? Rising Action What happened next? How did the story hint at a problem? What were the characters’ feeling? Climax/Dilemma What was the problem within the story? How did the characters feel? Falling Action How was the problem resolved? Ending How did the story end? Was there a twist to the plot? How did the characters feel? Susie would choose three of four Aurora’s pups to join the yearly Dog Sled Championships Race in early spring in Fairbanks.Susie was full of hope, hoping Fuge would be a lead dog one day . Susie trained each of them for their roles. Aurora proved to be a good leader and the team did well. Fudge was also trained and kept working hard no matter how tired. Susie was confident in the race. When the race day arrved, Aurora got sick. ? ? ? 目录 CONTENTS 1 划要素 找伏笔 定主题 2 读已给首句 定情节发展 列大纲 两段12句法 3 4 水到渠成 例文赏析 Available Steps 10 1 划要素 找伏笔 定主题 Training puppies was a family affair. Susie's mother and father raised thirteen strong dogs. Susie planned to make her best team this time. Susie trained each of them for their roles. Aurora was surely the leader of her four-dog team. As for Fudge, Susie would also give Fudge a small branch when she often let team dogs pull branches as a kind of training. He kept pulling it even when the other pups knocked him over. He kept working at tasks that Susie gave him, no matter how tired he got. Susie loved him for trying so hard. When spring snow melted into summer, Susie ran her pups through flowered fields and wooded hills to keep them in shape. She felt delighted when Aurora proved to be a good leader and the team did well. Unexpectedly, Fudge got the summer growth that she hadn't counted on. Though not officially belonging to the team, every practice, Fudge did his best beyond Susie had imagined. theme? Fudge worked hard and trained with determination and perseverance. 以决心和毅力 Hard work will reap rewards. 付出总会有收货。 2 读已给首句 定情节发展 (A0) Unfortunately, when the race day arrived , Aurora got sick. (B0)The race began, and Fudge set a fast but steady pace.   A1顺写 A2 A3 A4 A5 A6过渡 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B1顺写 B2 B3 B4 B5 B6主旨 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ①（主题句： won the race with toughness and strong determination） ②（接着A0顺写） ③（过渡句，根据B0逆推） ④（接着B0顺写） 1. At the news, what’s Susie’s feeling? 4. Describe the scene of the race vividly. 3. What was Fudge’s response? 2. Then what did she do? 6. How did Fudge overcome it? 7.What was the result? And What about the responses of Susie and the audience? 5. Was the race a smooth one? What challenge did Fudge come across? 3 列大纲 两段12句法 ① The moment一...就... Fudge reached the finishing line, he was warmly greeted by the ___________________(雷鸣般的掌声) for his ______________________________ . ② __________（听到此消息）, Susie ______________________________(耷拉着脑袋), ______________________________________________(定在原地说不出一句话). ③Then Fudge, _______________________________,________________(瞟了一眼) the snow-covered field, seemingly saying “Let me try. I can _______(成功).” ④Feeling like he had just drunk ______________, Fudge ran _________________________(像一阵风/像一道闪电) . thunderous applause toughness and strong determination Hearing this dropped/ lowered/ ducked her head rooted to the ground and unable to utter a single word. cast a glimpse at with a fierce but quiet determination make it like a gust of wind/ a flash a cup of coffee Group Work (4) A1顺写 A2 A3 A4 A5 A6过渡 B1顺写 B2 B3 B4 B5 B6主旨 (A0) Unfortunately, when the race day arrived , Aurora got sick. (A1) Hearing this, Susie dropped his head, rooted to the ground and unable to utter a single word. (B0)The race began, and Fudge set a fast but steady pace.(B1)Feeling like he had just drunk a cup of coffee, Fudge ran like a gust of wind . A2 A3 A4 A5 1. At the news, what’s Susie’s feeling? 4. Describe the scene of the race vividly. 3. What was Fudge’s response? 2. Then what did she do? 6. How did Fudge overcome it? 7.What was the result? And What about the responses of Susie and the audience? 5. Was the race a smooth one? What challenge did Fudge come across? (A6)Then Fudge, with a fierce and quiet determination, cast a glimpse of the snow-covered field, seemingly saying “I’m gonna run. I can make it.” B2 B3 B4 B5 (B6)The moment Fudge reached the finishing line, he was warmly greeted by the thunderous applause for his toughness and determination . 例文赏析 Unfortunately, when the race day arrived , Aurora got sick. Hearing this, Susie dropped her head, rooted to the ground and unable to utter a single word. All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to/hit/struck/flashed across拂过 Susie/(popped up in Susie’s mind). “Fudge can lead the team.” At the very moment, strong and mighty Fudge came over to her. Susie bent down and stroked抚摸 his hair gently, whispering again and again “ You can do it! You can do it!” Then Fudge, with a fierce and quiet determination, cast a glimpse of the snow-covered field, seemingly saying “Let me try. I can make it.” 4 sequence 顺序 coherence连贯 The race began, and Fudge set a fast but steady pace. Feeling like he had just drunk a cup of coffee, Fudge rushed like a gust of wind/a flash. And the rest of the dogs were inspired to push forward. Meanwhile, Susie waved her arms and cheered for them excitedly. They overtook/ surpassed超过 other teams one by one. But Fudge tripped被绊倒 and fell flat on the ground趴在地上. A loud cry “Come on, Fudge, you can do it!”came,which gave him strength. Fudge immediately picked himself up and started again. The moment Fudge reached the finishing line, he was warmly greeted by the thunderous applause for his toughness and determination. Summary 1.What should we focus on while reading? 3. What are three key elments in writing? 4. Which four sentences can help us set the frame of the two paragraphs? 2. What principles should we keep in mind while thinking? 6.What can we do to get higher score in this part? 5. What can we do to help us organize one paragraph,making it more coherent and logical? School Assignment 1. Review what we have learnt in this class. 2. Beautify and polish the paragraphs to make it more eye-catching. Lavf58.20.100 $$