19 山东泰安-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

19 山东泰安 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写作，深入了解中国传统节日端午节的文化内涵、习俗和意义，同时考查学生用英语描述个人经历和表达观点的能力。 能力考查：考查学生的英语语言运用能力，包括词汇、语法、句型的掌握和运用，以及组织篇章结构、逻辑连贯表达的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生在真实情境中运用所学知识，传播中国传统文化。 （2024·山东泰安·中考真题）中国传统节日是中华民族丰富多彩文化的重要组成部分。假如你是李平，你校英语社团正在开展以“Traditional Chinese Festivals”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文投稿，介绍端午节的习俗和意义，并描述今年的端午节你是如何度过的。 内容提示： 1. What do you know about the Dragon Boat Festival? 2. What do you think of this festival? 3. How did you spend the Dragon Boat Festival? 参考词汇： the 5th day of the fifth lunar (农历) month；in honor of纪念；wormwood艾草；sachet香囊 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 I’m Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. There are many traditional festivals in our country. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 I’m Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. There are many traditional festivals in our country. The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month. It is celebrated in honor of the great man Qu Yuan. I think we can learn more cultures and customs from them so it’s our duty to try our best to keep them going on. This year, I had a great time during the Dragon Boat Festival. I ate zongzi made by my mother and it was very delicious. We also drank realgar wine, hung Chinese wormwood around the doors and carried a sachet around with me. What made the festival special for me was the dragon boat race. It was very exciting. 【知识点】传统节日、假日活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求根据提示内容介绍端午节的习俗和意义，并描述今年的端午节你是如何度过的，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍端午节的相关信息； 第二步，介绍端午节的意义； 第三步，描述今年的端午节你是如何度过的。 [亮点词汇] ①in honor of纪念 ②go on继续 [高分句型] ①I think we can learn more cultures and customs from them so it’s our duty to try our best to keep them going on. (宾语从句) ②What made the festival special for me was the dragon boat race. (what引导的主语从句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导青少年学生思考在新时代如何成为优秀的学生，培养他们的责任感和自我提升意识。 能力考查：考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握、逻辑思维和语言组织能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的观点和想法，同时也能检验学生对相关话题词汇和句型的掌握程度。 （2023·山东泰安·中考真题）强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面提示，以“How to be good students in the new era”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代（era）的好学生。 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 How to be good students in the new era _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 How to be good students in the new era. The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us. We should be friendly with our classmates. Second, we should study hard and be creative. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent. As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students. 【知识点】意见/建议、教育 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从品德方面介绍如何成为好学生； 第二步，从学业方面介绍如何成为好学生； 第三步，从生活方面介绍如何成为好学生。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as以及 ②help each other互相帮助 ③learn to do学习做 [高分句型] ①We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us.（who引导的定语从句） ②As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.（as long as引导的条件状语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在鼓励青少年积极参与社会实践，培养社会责任感和综合能力。通过让学生选择并描述志愿者活动项目及计划，考查学生的语言表达和组织能力，同时引导学生思考志愿者活动的意义。 能力考查：主要考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰以及对主题的理解和阐述能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，让学生能够用英语表达自己的想法和计划，同时体现对社会问题的关注和参与。 （2022·山东泰安·中考真题）让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动，对其成长具有重要意义，可以帮助他们学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至，请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。 Volunteer Work ◎Help in the city library              ◎Clean up the city parks ◎Hold a charity bazaar（义卖）       ◎Do volunteer work in a hospital ◎Visit the old people’s home          ◎… 要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80-100； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 My Volunteer Work Plan ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Volunteer Work Plan The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean up the city park. Of course, I will ask more people to join me. I will call up my friends and ask them to come. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit sick kids in hospital. I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon. Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. 【知识点】计划、志愿服务 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假期间的志愿者计划。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称采用第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己的志愿者计划以及打算做些什么事情；第二段表达自己做志愿者的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导同学们关注旅游中的环保和公益意识，培养社会责任感，同时考查大家用英语表达观点和建议的能力。 能力考查：考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰以及对题目的理解和发挥能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，让同学们在实际情境中运用所学英语知识，表达自己的想法和观点。 （2021·山东泰安·中考真题）暑假将近，很多人已经开始计划外出旅游了。假定你是李华，请根据以下图示，以“To Be a Good Traveler”为题，给校报专栏写一篇英语短文，倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”，呼吁同学们做有环保意识和社会责任感的旅行者。 要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,可根据提示适当发挥；词数:80~100；文中不得出现姓名,校名,地名等与考生本人相关的真实信息。 To Be a Good Traveler ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 To Be a Good Traveler The summer holiday is coming. To make everyone have a good trip, I want to talk about how to be a good traveler. First, you should ride your bike to travel as much as possible. It’s good for the environment. Second, it’s not good to write or draw on any things in the sights. And it’s impolite to spit in public places. Third, please protect the environment. You shouldn’t pick up the flowers or walk on the grass. Fourth, you should take part in volunteer activities. What’s more, don’t waste food. You’d better eat up the food you order. If you follow the tips above, you can become a good traveler. 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，但写作时要根据图示提示的内容，倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”，内容包括绿色出行、爱护环境、公益随行和适当消费等。 2.写作指导：本文应用第二人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容全面，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题的命题意图在于让同学们关注社会热点现象——网上点餐，培养同学们对事物进行辩证分析的能力，既要看到其优点，也要认识到其缺点。 能力考查： 考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握、逻辑思维和观点表达。要求同学们能够清晰、准确地用英语阐述网上点餐的利与弊，并提出自己的看法。 课标要求： 符合课标的要求，让同学们在真实的情境中运用英语，提高语言综合运用能力。同时，也引导同学们关注生活，培养批判性思维。 （2020·山东泰安·中考真题）新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。请根据以下思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的看法和建议。 要求： （1）语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥； （2）词数：80~100（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现学校姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。 参考词汇：网上点餐order food online；减少外出reduce going out；规避风险avoid risks；塑料包装plastic packages With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online. 【满分优秀范文】 With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online. It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. First of all, it is convenient and can save time. Besides, we can get all kinds of delicious food by shopping online. We can reduce going out. The most important thing is that the food online is always cheaper. However, there are some problems with ordering food online. The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. The plastic packages will pollute the environment. In the way, eating habits are not healthy. In addition, it is not good to improve our independence. In my opinion, ordering food online should only be used when needed. That’s to say, you may buy things you can’t find in local markets. Besides, people should never rely too much on the Internet. 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。要求根据所给出思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述自己的看法和建议。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：本文紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。而且还使用了一些较好的句式，为文章增添了不少色彩。 3.高分亮点： 短语：First of all，all kinds of，not as…as，in local，too much，on the Internet。 句型：It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. 的确，网上订餐有很多优势。that引导宾语从句。       The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. 这食物的质量似乎没有它所承诺的那么好。not as…as…不如……，是原级比较。 最新模拟 1．（2024·山东泰安·二模）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。保安大叔的双语广播让不少市民和游客惊叹不已，他对英语的学习热情也激励着所有英语学习者。China Daily 正举办题目为“How to improve English writing”的中学生有奖征文。请你写一篇文章进行投稿，内容包括： (1)你的英语写作存在哪些困难： (2)你是如何解决英文写作困难的(至少两点)： (3)就如何提高英文写作水平提出建议(至少两点)。 作文要求： (1)不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 (2)语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数. How to improve English writing ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·山东泰安·二模）学校英文网站Life专栏就“关爱生命、安全生活”征文，请以“Self Protection”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 要点提示： 自我保护的重要性 避免伤害危险、促进身心健康发展、塑造正确的行为习惯、培养独立性…… 列举生活中的安全问题 (至少两个方面)，并分别提出合理化建议。 交通安全、运动安全、旅行安全、食品安全、生活用电煤气安全、网络安全…… 发出自我保护的号召 …… 写作要求： 语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 词数80—100 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 3．（2024·山东泰安·二模）假如你是李华，上个月你校举行了“Motherland in My Heart (祖国在我心中)”的主题活动。请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历，写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。 要求： 一、短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯 二、词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； Last month, our school held an event with the theme of “Motherland in My Heart” to express our love for our motherland. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·山东泰安·二模）青少年是祖国的未来，也是世界的未来。应对未来，我们需要具备什么核心能力？体育能力、终身学习能力、时间管理能力、沟通能力，创新能力…… 如果你是李华，学校正在举行以“Core Abilities(核心能力)”为主题的英文演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，选择至少两个核心能力，简单描述其重要性并谈谈自己将如何去提升这两项能力，完成英语演讲稿。 要求：语句通顺，表达完整，书写规范；词数 80—100；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 Core Abilities Good morning, everyone! My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening! 5．（2024·山东泰安·三模）现在神十八已经成功入驻中国空间站，为响应习近平主席“发展航天事业，建设航天强国”的号召，你校组织全体学生观看了神十七与神十八的交接仪式，振奋人心，同学们对我国在太空探索方面所取得的成就了解颇多，感受颇深。现在请你用英语写一篇短文，先谈谈你的感受，再根据要点谈谈太空探索，鼓足信心，努力学习，并给校英文报投稿。 内容要点： 1.有助于农业和科技的发展； 2.解决能源短缺问题； 3.扩大未来的生存空间。 提示词汇：explore 探索；space exploration 太空探索；modern science and technology agriculture 现代科技农业；the shortage of resource 资源短缺 注意事项：1.80词左右； 2.应包含内容要点里的所有内容，可以适当发挥； 3.不得使用真实校名和姓名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·山东泰安·二模）在我们的学习和生活中，能够全身心地投入到一件有意义的事情中去，享受做事情的过程，是一种幸福！但求耕耘，不问收获！某英文网站正在以“全身心投入（Devotion）”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李明，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，包含下列问题： 写作要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 参考词汇： devote oneself to+n./doing 致力于…… Devotion I’m glad to share my ideas about my devotion in my life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·山东泰安·二模）在2024年“两会”上，教育部提出要着力解决“小眼镜”“小胖墩”和学生心理健康问题。为响应号召，某英文网站开设了“树洞倾诉”专栏，并在近期收到了一些求助邮件。请你结合“两会”精神，从下面收集到问题中选取两项提出相关建议，帮助他们解决烦恼，快乐成长。 Problems: Short-sight; too fat; too much homework; difficult to talk with parents; get badly along with classmates... 写作要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80-100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·山东泰安·二模）作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，相信只要我们勇于改变自我，不断蜕变，就可以成就更好的自己。学校英语社开展以“Make Myself Better”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据表格内容提示写一篇短文，向英语社投稿。 问题提示 参考句型 1. What are your advantages and disadvantages? I do well in... I decide to... It’s important to... 2. How are you going to make yourself better? (lifestyle, schoolwork, sports...) 3. Why do you want to do these things? 注意： 1.短文须包括问题提示中的要点，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3.词数80-100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Make Myself Better Everyone wants to become a better person. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·山东泰安·三模）暑假即将到来，为了引导学生充分、合理利用时间，度过一个有意义的假期，你校英语俱乐部打算开展一次以“My summer vacation plan”为主题的交流活动。假如你是该俱乐部成员，请根据以下导图提示写一篇英语发言稿与大家分享。 要求： 1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，书写认真规范； 2.要点齐全，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名，学校。 Hello, everyone! The summer vacation is coming soon. I've made a plan for the long vacation. Now, let me tell you about it.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·山东泰安·二模）每年夏天，溺水事故频发，令人痛心。 防溺水口诀 游泳戏水夏日到；偷偷下水不得了 擅自结伴不能保；大人陪护不能少 没有救援不要去；陌生水域不可靠 盲目施救不可取；安全嘱托别忘掉 暑假将近，校报向你约稿，请你就此话题写一篇英文倡议书。内容包括： 1. 我们应该如何预防此类事故发生？（至少两点建议） 2. 如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何适当施救？ 3. 呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。 作文要求： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 不能出现真实校名和人名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 19 山东泰安 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写作，深入了解中国传统节日端午节的文化内涵、习俗和意义，同时考查学生用英语描述个人经历和表达观点的能力。 能力考查：考查学生的英语语言运用能力，包括词汇、语法、句型的掌握和运用，以及组织篇章结构、逻辑连贯表达的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生在真实情境中运用所学知识，传播中国传统文化。 （2024·山东泰安·中考真题）中国传统节日是中华民族丰富多彩文化的重要组成部分。假如你是李平，你校英语社团正在开展以“Traditional Chinese Festivals”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文投稿，介绍端午节的习俗和意义，并描述今年的端午节你是如何度过的。 内容提示： 1. What do you know about the Dragon Boat Festival? 2. What do you think of this festival? 3. How did you spend the Dragon Boat Festival? 参考词汇： the 5th day of the fifth lunar (农历) month；in honor of纪念；wormwood艾草；sachet香囊 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 I’m Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. There are many traditional festivals in our country. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 I’m Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. There are many traditional festivals in our country. The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month. It is celebrated in honor of the great man Qu Yuan. I think we can learn more cultures and customs from them so it’s our duty to try our best to keep them going on. This year, I had a great time during the Dragon Boat Festival. I ate zongzi made by my mother and it was very delicious. We also drank realgar wine, hung Chinese wormwood around the doors and carried a sachet around with me. What made the festival special for me was the dragon boat race. It was very exciting. 【知识点】传统节日、假日活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求根据提示内容介绍端午节的习俗和意义，并描述今年的端午节你是如何度过的，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍端午节的相关信息； 第二步，介绍端午节的意义； 第三步，描述今年的端午节你是如何度过的。 [亮点词汇] ①in honor of纪念 ②go on继续 [高分句型] ①I think we can learn more cultures and customs from them so it’s our duty to try our best to keep them going on. (宾语从句) ②What made the festival special for me was the dragon boat race. (what引导的主语从句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导青少年学生思考在新时代如何成为优秀的学生，培养他们的责任感和自我提升意识。 能力考查：考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握、逻辑思维和语言组织能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的观点和想法，同时也能检验学生对相关话题词汇和句型的掌握程度。 （2023·山东泰安·中考真题）强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面提示，以“How to be good students in the new era”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代（era）的好学生。 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 How to be good students in the new era _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 How to be good students in the new era. The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us. We should be friendly with our classmates. Second, we should study hard and be creative. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent. As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students. 【知识点】意见/建议、教育 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从品德方面介绍如何成为好学生； 第二步，从学业方面介绍如何成为好学生； 第三步，从生活方面介绍如何成为好学生。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as以及 ②help each other互相帮助 ③learn to do学习做 [高分句型] ①We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us.（who引导的定语从句） ②As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.（as long as引导的条件状语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在鼓励青少年积极参与社会实践，培养社会责任感和综合能力。通过让学生选择并描述志愿者活动项目及计划，考查学生的语言表达和组织能力，同时引导学生思考志愿者活动的意义。 能力考查：主要考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰以及对主题的理解和阐述能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，让学生能够用英语表达自己的想法和计划，同时体现对社会问题的关注和参与。 （2022·山东泰安·中考真题）让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动，对其成长具有重要意义，可以帮助他们学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至，请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。 Volunteer Work ◎Help in the city library              ◎Clean up the city parks ◎Hold a charity bazaar（义卖）       ◎Do volunteer work in a hospital ◎Visit the old people’s home          ◎… 要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80-100； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 My Volunteer Work Plan ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Volunteer Work Plan The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean up the city park. Of course, I will ask more people to join me. I will call up my friends and ask them to come. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit sick kids in hospital. I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon. Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. 【知识点】计划、志愿服务 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假期间的志愿者计划。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称采用第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己的志愿者计划以及打算做些什么事情；第二段表达自己做志愿者的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导同学们关注旅游中的环保和公益意识，培养社会责任感，同时考查大家用英语表达观点和建议的能力。 能力考查：考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰以及对题目的理解和发挥能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，让同学们在实际情境中运用所学英语知识，表达自己的想法和观点。 （2021·山东泰安·中考真题）暑假将近，很多人已经开始计划外出旅游了。假定你是李华，请根据以下图示，以“To Be a Good Traveler”为题，给校报专栏写一篇英语短文，倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”，呼吁同学们做有环保意识和社会责任感的旅行者。 要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,可根据提示适当发挥；词数:80~100；文中不得出现姓名,校名,地名等与考生本人相关的真实信息。 To Be a Good Traveler ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 To Be a Good Traveler The summer holiday is coming. To make everyone have a good trip, I want to talk about how to be a good traveler. First, you should ride your bike to travel as much as possible. It’s good for the environment. Second, it’s not good to write or draw on any things in the sights. And it’s impolite to spit in public places. Third, please protect the environment. You shouldn’t pick up the flowers or walk on the grass. Fourth, you should take part in volunteer activities. What’s more, don’t waste food. You’d better eat up the food you order. If you follow the tips above, you can become a good traveler. 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，但写作时要根据图示提示的内容，倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”，内容包括绿色出行、爱护环境、公益随行和适当消费等。 2.写作指导：本文应用第二人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容全面，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题的命题意图在于让同学们关注社会热点现象——网上点餐，培养同学们对事物进行辩证分析的能力，既要看到其优点，也要认识到其缺点。 能力考查： 考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握、逻辑思维和观点表达。要求同学们能够清晰、准确地用英语阐述网上点餐的利与弊，并提出自己的看法。 课标要求： 符合课标的要求，让同学们在真实的情境中运用英语，提高语言综合运用能力。同时，也引导同学们关注生活，培养批判性思维。 （2020·山东泰安·中考真题）新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。请根据以下思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的看法和建议。 要求： （1）语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥； （2）词数：80~100（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现学校姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。 参考词汇：网上点餐order food online；减少外出reduce going out；规避风险avoid risks；塑料包装plastic packages With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online. 【满分优秀范文】 With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online. It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. First of all, it is convenient and can save time. Besides, we can get all kinds of delicious food by shopping online. We can reduce going out. The most important thing is that the food online is always cheaper. However, there are some problems with ordering food online. The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. The plastic packages will pollute the environment. In the way, eating habits are not healthy. In addition, it is not good to improve our independence. In my opinion, ordering food online should only be used when needed. That’s to say, you may buy things you can’t find in local markets. Besides, people should never rely too much on the Internet. 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。要求根据所给出思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述自己的看法和建议。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：本文紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。而且还使用了一些较好的句式，为文章增添了不少色彩。 3.高分亮点： 短语：First of all，all kinds of，not as…as，in local，too much，on the Internet。 句型：It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. 的确，网上订餐有很多优势。that引导宾语从句。       The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. 这食物的质量似乎没有它所承诺的那么好。not as…as…不如……，是原级比较。 最新模拟 1．（2024·山东泰安·二模）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。保安大叔的双语广播让不少市民和游客惊叹不已，他对英语的学习热情也激励着所有英语学习者。China Daily 正举办题目为“How to improve English writing”的中学生有奖征文。请你写一篇文章进行投稿，内容包括： (1)你的英语写作存在哪些困难： (2)你是如何解决英文写作困难的(至少两点)： (3)就如何提高英文写作水平提出建议(至少两点)。 作文要求： (1)不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 (2)语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数. How to improve English writing ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·山东泰安·二模）学校英文网站Life专栏就“关爱生命、安全生活”征文，请以“Self Protection”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 要点提示： 自我保护的重要性 避免伤害危险、促进身心健康发展、塑造正确的行为习惯、培养独立性…… 列举生活中的安全问题 (至少两个方面)，并分别提出合理化建议。 交通安全、运动安全、旅行安全、食品安全、生活用电煤气安全、网络安全…… 发出自我保护的号召 …… 写作要求： 语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 词数80—100 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 3．（2024·山东泰安·二模）假如你是李华，上个月你校举行了“Motherland in My Heart (祖国在我心中)”的主题活动。请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历，写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。 要求： 一、短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯 二、词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； Last month, our school held an event with the theme of “Motherland in My Heart” to express our love for our motherland. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·山东泰安·二模）青少年是祖国的未来，也是世界的未来。应对未来，我们需要具备什么核心能力？体育能力、终身学习能力、时间管理能力、沟通能力，创新能力…… 如果你是李华，学校正在举行以“Core Abilities(核心能力)”为主题的英文演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，选择至少两个核心能力，简单描述其重要性并谈谈自己将如何去提升这两项能力，完成英语演讲稿。 要求：语句通顺，表达完整，书写规范；词数 80—100；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 Core Abilities Good morning, everyone! My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening! 5．（2024·山东泰安·三模）现在神十八已经成功入驻中国空间站，为响应习近平主席“发展航天事业，建设航天强国”的号召，你校组织全体学生观看了神十七与神十八的交接仪式，振奋人心，同学们对我国在太空探索方面所取得的成就了解颇多，感受颇深。现在请你用英语写一篇短文，先谈谈你的感受，再根据要点谈谈太空探索，鼓足信心，努力学习，并给校英文报投稿。 内容要点： 1.有助于农业和科技的发展； 2.解决能源短缺问题； 3.扩大未来的生存空间。 提示词汇：explore 探索；space exploration 太空探索；modern science and technology agriculture 现代科技农业；the shortage of resource 资源短缺 注意事项：1.80词左右； 2.应包含内容要点里的所有内容，可以适当发挥； 3.不得使用真实校名和姓名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·山东泰安·二模）在我们的学习和生活中，能够全身心地投入到一件有意义的事情中去，享受做事情的过程，是一种幸福！但求耕耘，不问收获！某英文网站正在以“全身心投入（Devotion）”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李明，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，包含下列问题： 写作要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 参考词汇： devote oneself to+n./doing 致力于…… Devotion I’m glad to share my ideas about my devotion in my life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·山东泰安·二模）在2024年“两会”上，教育部提出要着力解决“小眼镜”“小胖墩”和学生心理健康问题。为响应号召，某英文网站开设了“树洞倾诉”专栏，并在近期收到了一些求助邮件。请你结合“两会”精神，从下面收集到问题中选取两项提出相关建议，帮助他们解决烦恼，快乐成长。 Problems: Short-sight; too fat; too much homework; difficult to talk with parents; get badly along with classmates... 写作要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80-100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·山东泰安·二模）作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，相信只要我们勇于改变自我，不断蜕变，就可以成就更好的自己。学校英语社开展以“Make Myself Better”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据表格内容提示写一篇短文，向英语社投稿。 问题提示 参考句型 1. What are your advantages and disadvantages? I do well in... I decide to... It’s important to... 2. How are you going to make yourself better? (lifestyle, schoolwork, sports...) 3. Why do you want to do these things? 注意： 1.短文须包括问题提示中的要点，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3.词数80-100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Make Myself Better Everyone wants to become a better person. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·山东泰安·三模）暑假即将到来，为了引导学生充分、合理利用时间，度过一个有意义的假期，你校英语俱乐部打算开展一次以“My summer vacation plan”为主题的交流活动。假如你是该俱乐部成员，请根据以下导图提示写一篇英语发言稿与大家分享。 要求： 1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，书写认真规范； 2.要点齐全，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名，学校。 Hello, everyone! The summer vacation is coming soon. I've made a plan for the long vacation. Now, let me tell you about it.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·山东泰安·二模）每年夏天，溺水事故频发，令人痛心。 防溺水口诀 游泳戏水夏日到；偷偷下水不得了 擅自结伴不能保；大人陪护不能少 没有救援不要去；陌生水域不可靠 盲目施救不可取；安全嘱托别忘掉 暑假将近，校报向你约稿，请你就此话题写一篇英文倡议书。内容包括： 1. 我们应该如何预防此类事故发生？（至少两点建议） 2. 如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何适当施救？ 3. 呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。 作文要求： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 不能出现真实校名和人名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 How to improve English writing Writing is very important in English learning. Many students are afraid of writing. I like English very much, but I used to have trouble writing in English. I couldn’t write articles. I was very worried about it. So I asked my teacher for help. With the help of my teacher, I knew how to do it. At the same time, my deskmate also helped me learn English writing. Besides, I read the text every day and then looked for good model compositions to recite. Slowly, my writing has improved. In my opinion, if you want to improve your English writing, you should first turn to your teacher for help. Second, you have to work hard, and the most important thing is persistence. 【知识点】学习策略、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据提示内容完成写作，注意要包含题干中的所有要点，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明你的英语写作存在哪些困难； 第二步，具体阐述你是如何解决英语写作困难的； 第三步，最后就如何提高英语写作水平提出建议。 [亮点词汇] ① used to do过去常常做某事 ② have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难 ③ at the same time同时 ④ in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] If you want to improve your English writing, you should first turn to your teacher for help. （if引导的条件状语从句） 2．【满分优秀范文】 Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. As students, we have to go to school every weekday. On the way to school we need to go across the road sometimes. If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car. So we have to learn to protect ourselves. But how can we protect ourselves? First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, don’t cross the street when the lights are red. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. These three suggestions are good for us to protect ourselves. We should adopt these suggestions to protect ourselves. In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 【知识点】自我保护 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“自我保护的重要性”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用学生们在日常生活中会遇到的交通安全问题，引出文章主题； 第二步，从交友、交通或饮食等方面给出合理性的建议，告诉大家应当如何保护自己； 第三步，再次提出保护自身安全的重要性，并结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①have to不得不 ②on the way to在……的路上 [高分句型] ①If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online.（when引导时间状语从句） 3．【满分优秀范文】 Last month, our school held an event with the theme of “Motherland in My Heart” to express our love for our motherland. During the event, we had many activities. including singing red songs and telling stories about the Red Army.  I took part in the singing competition. Besides, I attended the speech contest, in which I told a story about a hero. Many students were moved by my story. I think this event is very meaningful. I’m proud of my country. I hope our motherland will become much greater and everybody can live a better life. 【知识点】叙事忆旧、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍“祖国在我心中”这个活动的具体信息，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍活动的具体内容以及自己参加的活动； 第三步，介绍自己的感受和希望。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②be proud of为……感到骄傲 [高分句型] ①Besides, I attended the speech contest, in which I told a story about a hero. (which引导的定语从句) ②I hope our motherland will become much greater and everybody can live a better life. (宾语从句) 4．【满分优秀范文】： Core Abilities Good morning, everyone! My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today. I think sports and life-long learning are the core abilities that we should have. First of all, health is more important than wealth. So we should pay more attention to our health. It’s necessary for us to spend more time doing sports to keep healthy. We students need to make a plan of exercising and do sports for at least twenty minutes every day. Next, with the rapid development of science and technology, we must have the ability of life-long learning to meet the needs of our work and life. I think the best way of keeping life-long learning is to learn by ourselves. We can learn from book, Internet or even radios. Only by doing this can we take on new challenges any time. I hope that everyone can keep doing sports and keep learning to make ourselves and our life better. That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening! 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出对主题的介绍； 第二步，具体介绍将如何去提升自己的某些核心能力； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①pay more attention to 注意 ②keep healthy 保持健康 ③learn from 向……学习 ④take on new challenges 接受新挑战 [高分句型] ①Only by doing this can we take on new challenges any time.（倒装句） ②I hope that everyone can keep doing sports and keep learning to make ourselves and our life better.（宾语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】 As a student, I am proud that our country has made progress in space explorations. Carrying out space explorations is of great importance. First of all, it helps the development of the agriculture as well as science technology. Besides, it will enable us to find new resources to solve the problem of energy shortage on the earth. Last but not least, it also can expand the living space in the near future. All in all, space explorations are good for all human beings. I believe that we will get greater achievements. I will study hard to make a great contribution to our country. 【知识点】哲理感悟、航天与航空 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；   ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，表达自己的感受；   第二步，具体阐述太空探索带来的好处；   第三步，最后书写结尾，相信祖国的太空事业会越来越好，并表明自己的决心。   [亮点词汇] ①First of all首先 ②as well as也 ③All in all总之 ④make a great contribution to为……做出巨大贡献 [高分句型]   ①Carrying out space explorations is of great importance.(动名词短语作主语) ②I believe that we will get greater achievements.(that引导的宾语从句) 6．【满分优秀范文】 Devotion I’m glad to share my ideas about my devotion in my life. Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which was one of the most important experiences in my life. One day, I saw some of my schoolmates painting in the art room. The colorful pictures caught my attention immediately. I was so interested in the beauty in front of me that I joined the Painting Club. After that, no matter what happened, I still was on time to each art lesson and finished each painting carefully. By doing this, I developed my ability and decided that I wanted to completely devote myself to painting. Not only did I win lots of prizes but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person. 【知识点】个人经历、爱好 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意不要遗漏信息提示，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，讲述自己是如何爱上绘画的以及如何把自己奉献给绘画的； 第三步，书写结语，简单地阐述自己在这次经历中的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①devote oneself to 致力于 ②in front of  在……之前 ③on time 按时 ④not only…but also… 不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which was one of the most important experiences in my life.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②Not only did I win lots of prizes but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.（倒装句） 7．【满分优秀范文】 We have received some help emails recently. Shortsightness is one of the typical problems. For students who are short-sighted, they shouldn’t read books or magazines for too long. They can stop for a while to let their eyes have a rest. Then, they shouldn’t read books under strong lights or weak lights. Fatness is another typical problem. Some students are too fat. Fatness can lead to a number of serious health problems, including heart disease and high blood pressure. It’s important to make healthy food choices. This means eating plenty of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, and avoiding processed and high-fat food. In addition to making healthy food choices, it’s important to take more exercise. It’s common for us to have trouble. I hope the above suggestions can be helpful. 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文： ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：从所列问题中选取两项提出相关建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，选取两个典型问题并提出相关建议； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①have a rest休息 ②a number of许多的 ③in addition to除了 [高分句型] ①It’s important to make healthy food choices. (it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语) ②I hope the above suggestions can be helpful. (省略that的宾语从句) 8．【满分优秀范文】 Make Myself Better Everyone wants to become a better person. First of all, I am a lazy girl and I hardly ever exercise. But I am a positive person. So in the coming year, I am going to start an exercise program to improve my physical health. For example, I plan to join a swimming club and practice it once or twice a week. What’s more, I want to learn how to cook by myself so that I can make meals for my parents when they’re busy. It’s also a good way to improve the relationships with my family. Last but not least, I will take up a new hobby. I think singing is a great activity so I am going to learn to sing. This will also make my family happy because they love to listen to music and sing together. I hope I can be a better me. 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据要点提示进行写作，并适当补充细节，不要有语法错误，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍自己的优势及劣势； 第二步，介绍如何使自己更好； 第三步，为什么想做这些事。 ［亮点词汇］ ①hardly几乎不 ②twice a week一周两次 ③What’s more此外 ［高分句型］ ①What’s more, I want to learn how to cook by myself so that I can make meals for my parents when they’re busy. （目的状语从句） ②This will also make my family happy because they love to listen to music and sing together.（原因状语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 Hello, everyone! The summer vacation is coming soon. I've made a plan for the long vacation. Now, let me tell you about it. First, I will read some books, because through reading I can know more about the world and become knowledgeable. I will also spend 30 minutes doing my homework every day. Secondly, I will do some volunteer work, because I want to help others. I think it is very meaningful. Third, I will learn a new skill. I will learn to cook during this holiday so that I can cook for my parents in the future. Finally, I will visit Sanya with my parents. We will stay there for a week. We’ll have fun on the beach. I am sure I will have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday. 【知识点】计划、假日活动 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ② 时态：时态“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据要点提示介绍自己的假期计划并适当发挥； 第二步，最后书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① spend time doing sth花时间做某事 ② want to do sth想要做某事 ③ have fun玩得开心 [高分句型] ①First, I will read some books, because through reading I can know more about the world and become knowledgeable.（原因状语从句） ②I will learn to cook during this holiday so that I can cook for my parents in the future.（目的状语从句） 10．【满分优秀范文】 It is reported that many people die from drowning accidents almost every year in summer. How do we prevent such sad accidents? First, we shouldn’t go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little about, such as reservoirs and rivers. Secondly, we had better not swim when we feel tired or hungry. If someone falls into the water, we should save him in a right way. For example, we should shout as loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help them. Life is important, we should learn to protect ourselves. We must remember that safety always comes first while swimming. 【知识点】自我保护、安全守则 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述每年夏天溺水事故频发这个事实，并提起下文：我们应该如何预防此类事故发生； 第二步，介绍如何预防此类事故发生的建议； 第三步，介绍落水时应如何施救； 第四步，呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②had better not do sth.最好不要做某事 ③for example例如 [高分句型] ①It is reported that many people die from drowning accidents almost every year in summer. （it is reported that据报道……） ②First, we shouldn’t go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little about, such as reservoirs and rivers.（定语从句） ③If someone falls into the water, we should save him in a right way.（if引导的条件句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$