13 江苏镇江-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

13 江苏镇江 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让同学们回忆初中三年的校园活动，锻炼大家的写作能力和语言表达能力，同时引导同学们珍惜校园生活，培养积极向上的情感态度。 能力考查：考查同学们的观察能力、细节描述能力、逻辑思维能力以及英语语言的综合运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作的要求，即能够清晰、准确地表达自己的想法和经历，运用所学的词汇、语法和句型，使文章内容丰富、连贯。 （2024·江苏镇江·中考真题）初中三年校园生活丰富多彩，有些活动一定令你难忘。近期，你校英文报举办“The School Activity I Will Never Forget”的主题征文活动。 要求： 1.参考下图，确定至少一次活动并详细介绍，可适当发挥； 2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】1: The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget the club activity in Grade Eight. I was a member of the English Drama Club. Every Tuesday, we joined together in the room and learned to act interesting plays. It was my favourite time at my school. Last year, our teacher encouraged us to perform in front of all the students. We felt nervous at first, but our teacher believed us. To make it successful, we spent several weekends practising. It was tiring but no one gave up. Finally, we performed excellently and all the teachers and students praised us. Every member was satisfied with it. Thanks to the club activity, I not only achieved my acting dream but also made some true friends. I will never forget the experience. 【满分优秀范文】2: The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget the sports meeting that I took part in last term. It was a sunny day. We gathered on the playground. All of us were happy and excited. I joined in the 400-metre race. At first, I was very nervous because I was worried about the result. However, when I heard the excited cheers from my classmates, I felt I was full of energy and completed the race successfully. Another activity that impressed me most was the badminton competition in Grade 8. Before my best friend entered the final, we practised hard together every day. At last, she finished fourth. Both of us thought it was meaningful for friends to help each other. Activities are over, but memories remain. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，选择一项校园活动； 第二步，具体阐述活动内容； 第三步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 ②give up放弃 ③be satisfied with对……满意 ④thanks to多亏 [高分句型] To make it successful, we spent several weekends practising.（动词不定式作目的状语） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在考查学生的英语写作能力、逻辑思维能力以及对学校活动和实践空间规划的思考能力。 能力考查：要求学生能够清晰地表达自己的观点和想法，运用所学的英语词汇和语法进行书面表达，同时考查学生对信息的整合和拓展能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识的培养要求，鼓励学生在真实情境中运用英语解决问题，表达自己的见解。 （2023·江苏镇江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校整理出一块空地，将用于拓宽学生活动和实践的空间。校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案，就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意见。请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。 A Culture Corner A Vegetable Garden ●display art works ●share ideas and feelings ●hold activities (fashion shows, …) ●develop a sense of beauty ●… ●work with classmates ●learn farming skills ●harvest vegetables (tomatoes, …) ●form the habit of labour (劳动) ●… 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.对你所选择的方案说明理由，并对其提出建议； 3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to build a vegetable garden. The reasons are as follows. First of all, our country advocates labor education. Second, students can work with their classmates in the garden to strengthen their friendship. Third, working in the garden can help students learn farming skills. Fourth, a garden built on the empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school. Last but not least, students can form the habit of labor by planting vegetables. This is not only good for the school, but also good for the growth of students. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】劳动实践、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据表格选择一种方案； 第二步，就选择的方案结合提示信息介绍下你的想法和建议。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③last but not least最后也是最重要的 [高分句型] Fourth, a garden built on empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题的命题意图在于考查学生的英语写作能力、逻辑思维能力以及对不同活动的理解和分析能力。通过让学生选择并阐述自己更想参与的夏令营活动及理由，培养学生的自主思考和表达能力。 能力考查： 1. 考查学生的语言运用能力，包括词汇、语法的正确使用以及句子结构的合理性。 2. 要求学生能够清晰地组织思路，有条理地阐述选择活动的理由和提出相关建议，从而考查其逻辑思维和组织能力。 课标要求： 这道题符合课标的要求，鼓励学生运用所学的英语知识进行实际的交流和表达，培养学生在真实情境中运用语言解决问题的能力。同时，也促使学生关注生活中的活动，培养他们的兴趣和参与意识。 （2022·江苏镇江·中考真题）假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织的劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥; 2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议; 3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life. The living skills training will be on a farm. There, I can live with local people who will help me learn more about their customs and lifestyles. Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities on the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit. I also have some advice for you. I hope there will be more activities like growing plants and vegetables. I hope I will enjoy myself on the farm. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、假日活动、意见/建议 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文写作，要求根据提示要点内容给报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你会选择的夏令营活动项目及选择的理由，并对活动提出建议。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅。写作时承接短文开头，即直接说明选择的活动项目以及总体原因，作为信件的第一段；第二段根据提示要点依次说明选择此项目的具体原因；第三段对此项目提出一两个建议并结尾。具体原因的阐述为本文重点，写作时应巧妙运用衔接语言，使列举原因更有条理，更清晰易懂。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题的命题意图在于让同学们通过写作来回顾和总结过去三年的校园经历，或者对未来三年的校园生活进行规划和展望，从而锻炼同学们的语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对校园生活的感悟和思考能力。 能力考查： 主要考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握、句子结构组织、时态运用以及内容的连贯性和逻辑性。同时，也考查同学们对过去和未来时态的正确使用，以及能否清晰地表达自己的想法和感受。 课标要求： 符合课标的要求，鼓励同学们运用所学的英语知识，结合自己的实际校园生活进行创作，培养同学们的综合语言运用能力和跨文化交际意识。 （2021·江苏镇江·中考真题）时光荏苒，毕业季来临。假如你们学校校报组织题为“校园生活”的英语征文活动，内容可以是回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。请选择其中之一，并根据提示写一篇短文。 School life in the past three years School life in the coming three years · your hobby or interest · activities you took part in and your progress · your friends and teachers   · your dream or plan · activities you hope to join in and the reasons · teachers and classmates you hope to meet 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括你选择的校园生活的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 解题思路： 1. 确定选择回望过去三年还是畅想未来三年的校园生活。 2. 根据选择的内容，按照相应的时态（过去用一般过去时，未来用一般将来时）和写作指导进行写作。 如果选择回望过去三年的校园生活： 按照示例，先引出主题，如提到时光飞逝要告别学校，想说过去三年的校园生活。 接着描述印象深刻的事情，像示例中的阅读俱乐部经历，包括看到同学们讨论书然后加入，读了哪些书等。 阐述这件事对自己的改变，如变得不再害羞，愿意尝试新事物。 最后提到朋友和老师，如很幸运遇到志同道合的朋友，老师鼓励自己创作故事等。 如果选择畅想未来三年的校园生活： 同样先引出主题。 说明自己的梦想（如想成为数学老师），为了梦想打算学好其他学科的计划。 表达想参加的活动（如加入校足球队）及原因（提高团队精神等）。 最后表达希望遇到严格的老师帮助自己进步，以及友好、勤奋的同学。 由于这是一篇作文题，没有一个固定的唯一答案，只要按照要求进行创作即可。 【满分优秀范文】l: How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school life in the past three years. I love reading. What impressed me most is the Reading Club. One day, I saw some students talking about books on the grass. I felt excited and joined in their discussion. Later, I became a member of the club. I read the four great classical Chinese novels and some history books. Reading has changed me far more than I expected, I am not as shy as I used to be and willing to try new things. I was so lucky to meet a lot of friends who shared the same interest with me. My teachers encouraged me to make up some stories. As far as I’m concerned, reading opens up a new world to me. I will remember the three-year school life forever. 【满分优秀范文】2: How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school football life in the coming three years. I am patient and like playing with kids, and I am good at Maths, so I hope to be a Maths teacher in the future. Besides Maths, I plan to learn other subjects well. They are very important for my dream job. I’m interested in football. I want to join the school football team because I’m expecting to play with my friends in the field to improve my team spirit. I hope that teachers will be strict in my studies so that I can make great progress, because I’m short of self-management sometimes. I also hope to meet friendly and hard-working classmates. I’m looking forward to the coming high school life. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、畅想未来、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。 2.写作指导：回望过去的事情用一般过去时，畅想未来的事情用一般将来时。回望过去可分为三段：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍让自己喜欢的爱好，让自己感触最深的事情；最后一段介绍自己的朋友和老师。畅想未来三年的校园生活时也分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段自己的梦想，希望参加的活动以及元音；最后一段表达自己希望遇见的老师和同学。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让同学们思考并比较不同学习方式的特点，培养大家的分析和表达能力，同时引导大家对学习方式进行深入思考，找到最适合自己的方法。 能力考查：考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰以及观点阐述等方面。还考查了大家对所给信息的理解和整合能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对语言运用、思维发展和文化意识的培养要求。通过描述学习方式，锻炼同学们用英语表达观点和想法的能力，同时让大家了解不同学习方式的优缺点，培养批判性思维。 （2020·江苏镇江·中考真题）技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华，参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由，并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。 Traditional learning in a classroom ● fixed timetable a plan made by a school ● face-to-face communication ● colorful class activities ● team spirit Modern learning on the Internet ● flexible(灵活的) timetable a plan made by oneself ● online communication ● rich learning resources ● any place with the Internet 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息； 2. 对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由，并提出你认为的不足； 3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 With the development of modern technology, the way of leaning is changing. I think__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解题关键点】 1. 按照题目要求选择一种学习方式，这里选择了传统学习方式。 2. 阐述理由时要结合传统学习方式给出的特点，如固定的时间表、学校制定计划、面对面交流、多彩的课堂活动和团队精神等。 3. 指出不足时也要合理，如跟不上老师进度、资源不够丰富等。 【满分优秀范文】 With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in a classroom. First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don't need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have the face-to-face communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What's more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others. However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can't follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can't provide enough resources for me to choose from. 【难度】0.85 【知识点】方法/策略、教育 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求以李华的名义就“学习方式”写一篇文章。题目列出了两种学习方式，一是传统的在教室学习，二是现代化的网上学习，要求选择其中一种自己喜欢的学习方式进行分析，谈谈这种学习方式特点、自己喜欢的理由以及存在的不足等，以上要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知，本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：本文结构紧凑，层次清晰。第一段介绍了自己喜欢的学习方式以及自己为什么喜欢的理由；第二段介绍了传统学习方式的不足。文章要点齐全，逻辑清晰，使读者一目了然。另本文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要。 3.高分亮点： 短语：with the development of；think about；in this way；what's more；get along with。 句型：there be句型；疑问词+动词不定式；when引导的时间状语从句。 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏镇江·二模）转眼我们即将毕业，愉快的暑假也将要到来。有的同学打算去旅游放松，也有的同学打算充实自己，你有什么计划来度过这个多彩的暑假呢？以“My summer holiday plan”为主题写一篇暑假计划。计划包括： 1.自我提高的至少2种安排（比如读书，做志愿者……）及原因； 2.放松活动的安排及原因。 要求： 1.所写内容必须包含自我提高和放松活动两方面的计划和理由，并适当发挥； 2.文章不少于90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文章不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 My summer holiday plan Summer holiday is a golden time for self-development and relaxation. During this break, I plan to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·江苏镇江·二模）假如你是李华，你们学校中英双语编辑部正在举办主题为“a meaningful summer vacation”的征文活动。请你谈谈：除了参观当地博物馆和担任志愿者之外，你是否会采用“云游”博物馆的新方式？为什么？ Ways Visiting local museums Being a volunteer   Visiting museums online YESNO Reasons ● learn about the local cultures ● improve my skills … (至少一点) ● enrich my knowledge ● make more friends ● … (至少一点) ● … (至少一点) 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括表格所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 I’m happy to tell about my ways of spending a meaningful summer vacation. I often __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·江苏镇江·二模）假如你是李华，你校英文报开设To Junior Fellows栏目，向全体初三学生征稿。本期征稿主题为“你最想对初一新生说的话”。 征稿内容包括： 1. 推荐1个社团及理由； 2. 提出至少2条建议及理由, 如勤奋好学、积极锻炼等。 要求； 1. 所写内容必须符合征稿要求，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名等信息。 Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. As a senior student, I’d like to share my thoughts with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·江苏镇江·二模）现实中，大到自然环境和社会环境，小到个人生活和学习，变化无处不在，面对变化，唯有积极适应，才能有所进步和收获。 某英文网站正在开展征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活和学习中一个变化或一点进步，你可以谈谈你是如何应对在生活和学习中这个变化的，以及有什么收获。或者谈谈你如何取得进步，以及有什么收获。 a change a little progress What happened? …… …… How did you deal with it? …… …… What have you learned from the experience? …… …… 参考词语：plan, task, attention, make use of, progress, help, challenge 要求： 1.所写内容必须符合征稿要求，可选用参考词语，可适当发挥； 2.文章不少于80词，文中不得出现真实的校名，姓名等信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏镇江·一模）假如你是李华，你们学校英语报举办关于“How do you show your love to your parents” 的征文活动。 征稿内容包括： 1. 你表达爱意的至少2种方式及理由，如制作生日贺片、买花……； 2. 目前流行用电脑技术制作礼物，你是否会采用这种方式表达爱意，为什么？ 要求： 1. 所写内容必须符合征稿要求，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 I’m happy to tell about my ways of showing love to my parents. I often _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2023·江苏镇江·一模）学校英语报社针对学生的学习方式展开讨论，假如你是李华，请根据表格里提供的信息，选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出不足之处。 Study in a group Study alone Advantages • fixed learning plans • learn faster • develop students’ teamwork spirit • support each other • personal learning plans • learn more quietly • improve the abilities of self-control • form the habit of thinking Disadvantages … … 要求： （1）所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息并提出不足之处；   （2）文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清，书写规范； （4）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Different students like different ways to study. But personally, I would rather _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2023·江苏镇江·二模）假如你是李华，市文明城市创建宣传工作组正在你所在的社区招聘暑期活动志愿者。请用英语给负责人写一封信，谈一谈你更想加入的志愿者活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。 Volunteers Wanted Protecting the environment●Monday morning ●in the community center ●sweep public places ●water flowers and trees ●make people go green … Serving the elderly●Sunday afternoon ●in Home for Elderly ●clean their rooms ●fix desks and chairs ●help the elderly with love … 要求： 1, 所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，并说明理由和建议； 2, 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3, 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4, 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’ve read the posters in our community. I’d like to be a volunteer for _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 8．（2023·江苏镇江·二模）中华优秀传统文化是中华民族的根和魂。作为新时代的少年，我们肩负弘扬传统文化，传承中华美德的重任。因此学校宣传部开设了“尽善尽美家乡语，一帧一帧爱乡情”的专栏。假如你是李华，请根据表格所提供的信息，给学校专栏负责人王老师写一封信，描述你较喜欢的一种镇江传统文化形式，并对学校开展的传统文化教育活动提出1—2点建议。 Food culture 美食文化 Poetry culture 诗歌文化 Food •Salted Pork •Pot noodles •Vinegar •Crab Dumplings in Soup （蟹黄汤包） Poems •Docking at Foot of Mount Beigu《次北固山下》 •Travel around Jinshan Temple《游金山寺》 •Runzhou《润州》 Ways •read books •watch videos •visit Zhenjiang Museum Ways •search on the Internet •choose some to read •give public speeches Suggestions … Suggestions … 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括你较喜欢的一种文化形式及理由； 2, 对学校开展的传统文化教育活动提出1—2点建议; 3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Mr Wang, I am Li Hua from Class 6, Grade 9. I am interested in Chinese Traditional Culture very much,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．（2023·江苏镇江·二模）初中生活即将结束，Li Hua将迎来新一阶段的学习生活。在新的阶段，是否寄宿成为很多学生就要面临的问题。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格里提供的信息，选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出不足之处。 Choice Day student（走读学生） Boarding student （寄宿学生） Advantages ●have more time with family ●have better living conditions ●relax myself on my way home ●save more time to study ●develop a good habit of study and living ●learn how to get along well with others Disadvantages ●be influenced by the Internet ●… ●have less private space ●… 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括一种学生学习的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 对你所选择的学习方式说明理由，并对其提出建议； 3. 文章不少于 90 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 We are going to graduate from our middle school and we will make a choice between being a day student and a boarding student. In my opinion, I prefer to be_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2023·江苏镇江·二模）随着生活条件的改善和汽车工作的发展，大多数家庭都普及了私家车。近年来，新能源汽车发展迅速，尤其是电动汽车(Electric cars)在中国不断兴起，你的父母也想更新一下自己的汽车，请你根据以下电动汽车和传统燃油汽车(Petrol cars)的对比信息，谈谈你希望你的父母买哪一种汽车及理由，并指出这种汽车的的不足之处。 Petrol cars ● strong power ● can run a long way    easy to gas up(加油) ● don’t need to change expensive batteries ● be safer Electric cars ● the cost is low, save money about 0.2 yuan per km ● use clean energy ● less air and noise pollution ● achieve sustainable(可持续) development 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括一种汽车所有信息； 2. 对你喜欢的汽车类型说明理由，并提出你认为的不足； 3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 With the improvement of our life and the development of car industry, most families have had their own cars. Electric cars are very popular in China and my parents are planning to buy a new car. I think ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 13 江苏镇江 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让同学们回忆初中三年的校园活动，锻炼大家的写作能力和语言表达能力，同时引导同学们珍惜校园生活，培养积极向上的情感态度。 能力考查：考查同学们的观察能力、细节描述能力、逻辑思维能力以及英语语言的综合运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作的要求，即能够清晰、准确地表达自己的想法和经历，运用所学的词汇、语法和句型，使文章内容丰富、连贯。 （2024·江苏镇江·中考真题）初中三年校园生活丰富多彩，有些活动一定令你难忘。近期，你校英文报举办“The School Activity I Will Never Forget”的主题征文活动。 要求： 1.参考下图，确定至少一次活动并详细介绍，可适当发挥； 2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】1: The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget the club activity in Grade Eight. I was a member of the English Drama Club. Every Tuesday, we joined together in the room and learned to act interesting plays. It was my favourite time at my school. Last year, our teacher encouraged us to perform in front of all the students. We felt nervous at first, but our teacher believed us. To make it successful, we spent several weekends practising. It was tiring but no one gave up. Finally, we performed excellently and all the teachers and students praised us. Every member was satisfied with it. Thanks to the club activity, I not only achieved my acting dream but also made some true friends. I will never forget the experience. 【满分优秀范文】2: The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget the sports meeting that I took part in last term. It was a sunny day. We gathered on the playground. All of us were happy and excited. I joined in the 400-metre race. At first, I was very nervous because I was worried about the result. However, when I heard the excited cheers from my classmates, I felt I was full of energy and completed the race successfully. Another activity that impressed me most was the badminton competition in Grade 8. Before my best friend entered the final, we practised hard together every day. At last, she finished fourth. Both of us thought it was meaningful for friends to help each other. Activities are over, but memories remain. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，选择一项校园活动； 第二步，具体阐述活动内容； 第三步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 ②give up放弃 ③be satisfied with对……满意 ④thanks to多亏 [高分句型] To make it successful, we spent several weekends practising.（动词不定式作目的状语） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在考查学生的英语写作能力、逻辑思维能力以及对学校活动和实践空间规划的思考能力。 能力考查：要求学生能够清晰地表达自己的观点和想法，运用所学的英语词汇和语法进行书面表达，同时考查学生对信息的整合和拓展能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识的培养要求，鼓励学生在真实情境中运用英语解决问题，表达自己的见解。 （2023·江苏镇江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校整理出一块空地，将用于拓宽学生活动和实践的空间。校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案，就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意见。请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。 A Culture Corner A Vegetable Garden ●display art works ●share ideas and feelings ●hold activities (fashion shows, …) ●develop a sense of beauty ●… ●work with classmates ●learn farming skills ●harvest vegetables (tomatoes, …) ●form the habit of labour (劳动) ●… 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.对你所选择的方案说明理由，并对其提出建议； 3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to build a vegetable garden. The reasons are as follows. First of all, our country advocates labor education. Second, students can work with their classmates in the garden to strengthen their friendship. Third, working in the garden can help students learn farming skills. Fourth, a garden built on the empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school. Last but not least, students can form the habit of labor by planting vegetables. This is not only good for the school, but also good for the growth of students. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】劳动实践、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据表格选择一种方案； 第二步，就选择的方案结合提示信息介绍下你的想法和建议。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③last but not least最后也是最重要的 [高分句型] Fourth, a garden built on empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题的命题意图在于考查学生的英语写作能力、逻辑思维能力以及对不同活动的理解和分析能力。通过让学生选择并阐述自己更想参与的夏令营活动及理由，培养学生的自主思考和表达能力。 能力考查： 1. 考查学生的语言运用能力，包括词汇、语法的正确使用以及句子结构的合理性。 2. 要求学生能够清晰地组织思路，有条理地阐述选择活动的理由和提出相关建议，从而考查其逻辑思维和组织能力。 课标要求： 这道题符合课标的要求，鼓励学生运用所学的英语知识进行实际的交流和表达，培养学生在真实情境中运用语言解决问题的能力。同时，也促使学生关注生活中的活动，培养他们的兴趣和参与意识。 （2022·江苏镇江·中考真题）假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织的劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥; 2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议; 3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life. The living skills training will be on a farm. There, I can live with local people who will help me learn more about their customs and lifestyles. Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities on the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit. I also have some advice for you. I hope there will be more activities like growing plants and vegetables. I hope I will enjoy myself on the farm. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、假日活动、意见/建议 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文写作，要求根据提示要点内容给报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你会选择的夏令营活动项目及选择的理由，并对活动提出建议。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅。写作时承接短文开头，即直接说明选择的活动项目以及总体原因，作为信件的第一段；第二段根据提示要点依次说明选择此项目的具体原因；第三段对此项目提出一两个建议并结尾。具体原因的阐述为本文重点，写作时应巧妙运用衔接语言，使列举原因更有条理，更清晰易懂。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题的命题意图在于让同学们通过写作来回顾和总结过去三年的校园经历，或者对未来三年的校园生活进行规划和展望，从而锻炼同学们的语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对校园生活的感悟和思考能力。 能力考查： 主要考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握、句子结构组织、时态运用以及内容的连贯性和逻辑性。同时，也考查同学们对过去和未来时态的正确使用，以及能否清晰地表达自己的想法和感受。 课标要求： 符合课标的要求，鼓励同学们运用所学的英语知识，结合自己的实际校园生活进行创作，培养同学们的综合语言运用能力和跨文化交际意识。 （2021·江苏镇江·中考真题）时光荏苒，毕业季来临。假如你们学校校报组织题为“校园生活”的英语征文活动，内容可以是回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。请选择其中之一，并根据提示写一篇短文。 School life in the past three years School life in the coming three years · your hobby or interest · activities you took part in and your progress · your friends and teachers   · your dream or plan · activities you hope to join in and the reasons · teachers and classmates you hope to meet 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括你选择的校园生活的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 解题思路： 1. 确定选择回望过去三年还是畅想未来三年的校园生活。 2. 根据选择的内容，按照相应的时态（过去用一般过去时，未来用一般将来时）和写作指导进行写作。 如果选择回望过去三年的校园生活： 按照示例，先引出主题，如提到时光飞逝要告别学校，想说过去三年的校园生活。 接着描述印象深刻的事情，像示例中的阅读俱乐部经历，包括看到同学们讨论书然后加入，读了哪些书等。 阐述这件事对自己的改变，如变得不再害羞，愿意尝试新事物。 最后提到朋友和老师，如很幸运遇到志同道合的朋友，老师鼓励自己创作故事等。 如果选择畅想未来三年的校园生活： 同样先引出主题。 说明自己的梦想（如想成为数学老师），为了梦想打算学好其他学科的计划。 表达想参加的活动（如加入校足球队）及原因（提高团队精神等）。 最后表达希望遇到严格的老师帮助自己进步，以及友好、勤奋的同学。 由于这是一篇作文题，没有一个固定的唯一答案，只要按照要求进行创作即可。 【满分优秀范文】l: How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school life in the past three years. I love reading. What impressed me most is the Reading Club. One day, I saw some students talking about books on the grass. I felt excited and joined in their discussion. Later, I became a member of the club. I read the four great classical Chinese novels and some history books. Reading has changed me far more than I expected, I am not as shy as I used to be and willing to try new things. I was so lucky to meet a lot of friends who shared the same interest with me. My teachers encouraged me to make up some stories. As far as I’m concerned, reading opens up a new world to me. I will remember the three-year school life forever. 【满分优秀范文】2: How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school football life in the coming three years. I am patient and like playing with kids, and I am good at Maths, so I hope to be a Maths teacher in the future. Besides Maths, I plan to learn other subjects well. They are very important for my dream job. I’m interested in football. I want to join the school football team because I’m expecting to play with my friends in the field to improve my team spirit. I hope that teachers will be strict in my studies so that I can make great progress, because I’m short of self-management sometimes. I also hope to meet friendly and hard-working classmates. I’m looking forward to the coming high school life. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、畅想未来、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。 2.写作指导：回望过去的事情用一般过去时，畅想未来的事情用一般将来时。回望过去可分为三段：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍让自己喜欢的爱好，让自己感触最深的事情；最后一段介绍自己的朋友和老师。畅想未来三年的校园生活时也分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段自己的梦想，希望参加的活动以及元音；最后一段表达自己希望遇见的老师和同学。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让同学们思考并比较不同学习方式的特点，培养大家的分析和表达能力，同时引导大家对学习方式进行深入思考，找到最适合自己的方法。 能力考查：考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰以及观点阐述等方面。还考查了大家对所给信息的理解和整合能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对语言运用、思维发展和文化意识的培养要求。通过描述学习方式，锻炼同学们用英语表达观点和想法的能力，同时让大家了解不同学习方式的优缺点，培养批判性思维。 （2020·江苏镇江·中考真题）技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华，参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由，并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。 Traditional learning in a classroom ● fixed timetable a plan made by a school ● face-to-face communication ● colorful class activities ● team spirit Modern learning on the Internet ● flexible(灵活的) timetable a plan made by oneself ● online communication ● rich learning resources ● any place with the Internet 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息； 2. 对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由，并提出你认为的不足； 3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 With the development of modern technology, the way of leaning is changing. I think__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解题关键点】 1. 按照题目要求选择一种学习方式，这里选择了传统学习方式。 2. 阐述理由时要结合传统学习方式给出的特点，如固定的时间表、学校制定计划、面对面交流、多彩的课堂活动和团队精神等。 3. 指出不足时也要合理，如跟不上老师进度、资源不够丰富等。 【满分优秀范文】 With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in a classroom. First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don't need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have the face-to-face communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What's more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others. However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can't follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can't provide enough resources for me to choose from. 【难度】0.85 【知识点】方法/策略、教育 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求以李华的名义就“学习方式”写一篇文章。题目列出了两种学习方式，一是传统的在教室学习，二是现代化的网上学习，要求选择其中一种自己喜欢的学习方式进行分析，谈谈这种学习方式特点、自己喜欢的理由以及存在的不足等，以上要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知，本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：本文结构紧凑，层次清晰。第一段介绍了自己喜欢的学习方式以及自己为什么喜欢的理由；第二段介绍了传统学习方式的不足。文章要点齐全，逻辑清晰，使读者一目了然。另本文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要。 3.高分亮点： 短语：with the development of；think about；in this way；what's more；get along with。 句型：there be句型；疑问词+动词不定式；when引导的时间状语从句。 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏镇江·二模）转眼我们即将毕业，愉快的暑假也将要到来。有的同学打算去旅游放松，也有的同学打算充实自己，你有什么计划来度过这个多彩的暑假呢？以“My summer holiday plan”为主题写一篇暑假计划。计划包括： 1.自我提高的至少2种安排（比如读书，做志愿者……）及原因； 2.放松活动的安排及原因。 要求： 1.所写内容必须包含自我提高和放松活动两方面的计划和理由，并适当发挥； 2.文章不少于90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文章不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 My summer holiday plan Summer holiday is a golden time for self-development and relaxation. During this break, I plan to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·江苏镇江·二模）假如你是李华，你们学校中英双语编辑部正在举办主题为“a meaningful summer vacation”的征文活动。请你谈谈：除了参观当地博物馆和担任志愿者之外，你是否会采用“云游”博物馆的新方式？为什么？ Ways Visiting local museums Being a volunteer   Visiting museums online YESNO Reasons ● learn about the local cultures ● improve my skills … (至少一点) ● enrich my knowledge ● make more friends ● … (至少一点) ● … (至少一点) 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括表格所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 I’m happy to tell about my ways of spending a meaningful summer vacation. I often __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·江苏镇江·二模）假如你是李华，你校英文报开设To Junior Fellows栏目，向全体初三学生征稿。本期征稿主题为“你最想对初一新生说的话”。 征稿内容包括： 1. 推荐1个社团及理由； 2. 提出至少2条建议及理由, 如勤奋好学、积极锻炼等。 要求； 1. 所写内容必须符合征稿要求，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名等信息。 Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. As a senior student, I’d like to share my thoughts with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·江苏镇江·二模）现实中，大到自然环境和社会环境，小到个人生活和学习，变化无处不在，面对变化，唯有积极适应，才能有所进步和收获。 某英文网站正在开展征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活和学习中一个变化或一点进步，你可以谈谈你是如何应对在生活和学习中这个变化的，以及有什么收获。或者谈谈你如何取得进步，以及有什么收获。 a change a little progress What happened? …… …… How did you deal with it? …… …… What have you learned from the experience? …… …… 参考词语：plan, task, attention, make use of, progress, help, challenge 要求： 1.所写内容必须符合征稿要求，可选用参考词语，可适当发挥； 2.文章不少于80词，文中不得出现真实的校名，姓名等信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏镇江·一模）假如你是李华，你们学校英语报举办关于“How do you show your love to your parents” 的征文活动。 征稿内容包括： 1. 你表达爱意的至少2种方式及理由，如制作生日贺片、买花……； 2. 目前流行用电脑技术制作礼物，你是否会采用这种方式表达爱意，为什么？ 要求： 1. 所写内容必须符合征稿要求，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 I’m happy to tell about my ways of showing love to my parents. I often _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2023·江苏镇江·一模）学校英语报社针对学生的学习方式展开讨论，假如你是李华，请根据表格里提供的信息，选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出不足之处。 Study in a group Study alone Advantages • fixed learning plans • learn faster • develop students’ teamwork spirit • support each other • personal learning plans • learn more quietly • improve the abilities of self-control • form the habit of thinking Disadvantages … … 要求： （1）所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息并提出不足之处；   （2）文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清，书写规范； （4）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Different students like different ways to study. But personally, I would rather _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2023·江苏镇江·二模）假如你是李华，市文明城市创建宣传工作组正在你所在的社区招聘暑期活动志愿者。请用英语给负责人写一封信，谈一谈你更想加入的志愿者活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。 Volunteers Wanted Protecting the environment●Monday morning ●in the community center ●sweep public places ●water flowers and trees ●make people go green … Serving the elderly●Sunday afternoon ●in Home for Elderly ●clean their rooms ●fix desks and chairs ●help the elderly with love … 要求： 1, 所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，并说明理由和建议； 2, 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3, 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4, 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’ve read the posters in our community. I’d like to be a volunteer for _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 8．（2023·江苏镇江·二模）中华优秀传统文化是中华民族的根和魂。作为新时代的少年，我们肩负弘扬传统文化，传承中华美德的重任。因此学校宣传部开设了“尽善尽美家乡语，一帧一帧爱乡情”的专栏。假如你是李华，请根据表格所提供的信息，给学校专栏负责人王老师写一封信，描述你较喜欢的一种镇江传统文化形式，并对学校开展的传统文化教育活动提出1—2点建议。 Food culture 美食文化 Poetry culture 诗歌文化 Food •Salted Pork •Pot noodles •Vinegar •Crab Dumplings in Soup （蟹黄汤包） Poems •Docking at Foot of Mount Beigu《次北固山下》 •Travel around Jinshan Temple《游金山寺》 •Runzhou《润州》 Ways •read books •watch videos •visit Zhenjiang Museum Ways •search on the Internet •choose some to read •give public speeches Suggestions … Suggestions … 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括你较喜欢的一种文化形式及理由； 2, 对学校开展的传统文化教育活动提出1—2点建议; 3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Mr Wang, I am Li Hua from Class 6, Grade 9. I am interested in Chinese Traditional Culture very much,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．（2023·江苏镇江·二模）初中生活即将结束，Li Hua将迎来新一阶段的学习生活。在新的阶段，是否寄宿成为很多学生就要面临的问题。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格里提供的信息，选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出不足之处。 Choice Day student（走读学生） Boarding student （寄宿学生） Advantages ●have more time with family ●have better living conditions ●relax myself on my way home ●save more time to study ●develop a good habit of study and living ●learn how to get along well with others Disadvantages ●be influenced by the Internet ●… ●have less private space ●… 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括一种学生学习的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 对你所选择的学习方式说明理由，并对其提出建议； 3. 文章不少于 90 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 We are going to graduate from our middle school and we will make a choice between being a day student and a boarding student. In my opinion, I prefer to be_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2023·江苏镇江·二模）随着生活条件的改善和汽车工作的发展，大多数家庭都普及了私家车。近年来，新能源汽车发展迅速，尤其是电动汽车(Electric cars)在中国不断兴起，你的父母也想更新一下自己的汽车，请你根据以下电动汽车和传统燃油汽车(Petrol cars)的对比信息，谈谈你希望你的父母买哪一种汽车及理由，并指出这种汽车的的不足之处。 Petrol cars ● strong power ● can run a long way    easy to gas up(加油) ● don’t need to change expensive batteries ● be safer Electric cars ● the cost is low, save money about 0.2 yuan per km ● use clean energy ● less air and noise pollution ● achieve sustainable(可持续) development 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括一种汽车所有信息； 2. 对你喜欢的汽车类型说明理由，并提出你认为的不足； 3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 With the improvement of our life and the development of car industry, most families have had their own cars. Electric cars are very popular in China and my parents are planning to buy a new car. I think ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 Summer holiday is a golden time for self-development and relaxation. During this break, I plan to balance my time between learning and entertainment. Firstly, I will read a lot every day. Because reading books can help us learn a lot of knowledge. Reading can make a man progress. It also helps me prepare for senior high school. Besides, I will learn some new skills. We can help our parents do housework, such as washing, cleaning and cooking. Because doing these things can help us not depend on our parents, but on ourselves. What’s more, I have scheduled some entertainment activities such as visiting museums, enjoying the beauty of nature, and spending time with friends and family. These activities not only provide me with an opportunity to open up my eyes but also enrich my life experiences. The most important is that I can try different kinds of local food. I am looking forward to the coming of this colourful and meaningful summer holiday. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】假日活动、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点信息，可适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头，引出暑假计划； 第二步，根据提示，具体阐述计划内容，并介绍原因； 第三步，书写结语：期望暑假的到来。 [亮点词汇] ①balance ... between A and B在A和B之间平衡…… ②prepare for为……做准备 ③depend on依靠 ④looking forward to期盼 [高分句型] ①Because doing these things can help us not depend on our parents, but on ourselves. (动名词短语作主语) ②These activities not only provide me with an opportunity to open up my eyes but also enrich my life experiences. (not only ... but also连接两个对等成分) ③The most important is that I can try different kinds of local food. (that引导的表语从句) 2．【满分优秀范文】1 I’m happy to tell about my ways of spending a meaningful summer vacation. I often choose to visit local museums during the summer vacation because I can learn more about the local cultures and enrich my knowledge. I can also relax myself and get rid of tiredness in the process. What’s more, being a volunteer is a good choice for me because I can improve my skills and make more like-minded friends. It’s really meaningful for me to help people in need. With the development of technology, some museums provide a new way of travelling for the public. People can get to visit museums online. I think I may choose this way because it can cut down the cost of my travelling and bring great convenience. Also, I can visit museums by clicking my mouse whenever I have free time. It will be a wonderful experience to me. 【满分优秀范文】2 I’m happy to tell about my ways of spending a meaningful summer vacation. I often choose to visit local museums during the summer vacation because I can learn more about the local cultures and enrich my knowledge. I can also relax myself and get rid of tiredness in the process. What’s more, being a volunteer is a good choice for me because I can improve my skills and make more like-minded friends. It’s really meaningful for me to help people in need. With the development of technology, some museums provide a new way of travelling for the public. People can get to visit museums online. I don’t think I will choose this way. From my point of view, visiting museums online will make me feel less interested compared with the traditional way. Moreover, it may be bad for my eyes if I spend much time on the electronic devices like computers or mobile phones. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】假日活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己参观当地博物馆的原因； 第二步，表明自己是否会选择这种“云游”博物馆的新方式； 第三步，解释选择与否的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more此外 ②cut down削减 ③be bad for对……有害 [高分句型] ①I often choose to visit local museums during the summer vacation because I can learn more about the local cultures and enrich my knowledge. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②Moreover, it may be bad for my eyes if I spend much time on the electronic devices like computers or mobile phones. (if引导的条件状语从句) 3．【满分优秀范文】 Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. As a senior student, I’d like to share my thoughts with you.   You will have a lot of experiences, and most of them are fun, challenging. And most importantly, they will affect your future life. There are many ways to get these experiences, including joining different clubs in our school. Joining a club is good for us since we can learn new things, make new friends, and get new experiences. For newcomers, the club that I suggest is an English club, as it can help us improve our English level in many different and interesting ways. To have a better school life, you also need to study hard and be friendly to your classmates.     I hope these suggestions can help you achieve a better and more interesting school life. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、社团/俱乐部 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我推荐的俱乐部以及推荐原因，提出的两条建议及理由”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“欢迎来到阳光中学。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“推荐的俱乐部以及推荐原因，给出两点建议及理由”重点介绍我想对初一新生说的话； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望这些建议能帮助你实现更好、更有趣的学校生活。” [亮点词汇] ①a lot of许多 ②study hard努力学习 ③be friendly to友好 [高分句型] ① For newcomers, the club that I suggest is an English club, as it can help us improve our English level in many different and interesting ways.（as引导的原因状语从句） ② I hope these suggestions can help you achieve a better and more interesting school life.（省略that的宾语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 There are many changes in a person’s life. When I entered middle school, I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. I offered help to my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party. Gradually, I made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates. From this experience, I get to know change brings challenge as well as opportunities. When change comes, we should face it and take action. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述生活中发生的这个变化是什么； 第二步，介绍自己是如何处理这个变化的； 第三步，介绍自己从这段经历中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①fit in 适应 ②invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事 ③as well as 和 ④take action 采取行动 [高分句型] ①There are many changes in a person’s life. （there be句型） ②When change comes, we should face it and take action.（when引导的时间状语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】 I’m happy to tell about my ways of showing love to my parents. I often make a birthday card when my parents’ birthdays come around. I believe that a handwritten card not only conveys my feelings but also has a unique personal style and warmth. Besides, I often spend time with my parents, whether it’s having a meal together, taking a walk, or watching TV. I believe that companionship is the most enduring confession of love. By listening to their daily lives and sharing, I can better understand their feelings and needs, thereby providing them with more support and love. Nowadays, many of my friends choose technology to show their love. I am open to the idea of using computer technology to create gifts. With the advancement of technology, it has become more convenient and diverse to make gifts using computer technology. For example, I can create an electronic photo album to collect the beautiful memories of our family, or design a personalized video to express my gratitude and love for my parents. Whatever the way is, I think to express love to our parents is the most important. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】家人和亲人、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述自己向父母表达爱意的第一个方式及理由； 第二步，讲述自己向父母表达爱意的第二个方式及理由； 第三步，表达自己对电脑制作礼物的看法及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①come around(按照预期)发生 ②not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ③provide sb. with sth.给某人提供某物 [高分句型] ①I often make a birthday card when my parents’ birthdays come around. (when引导的状语从句) ②I believe that companionship is the most enduring confession of love. (that引导的宾语从句) ③Whatever the way is, I think to express love to our parents is the most important. (whatever引导的让步状语从句) 6．【满分优秀范文】： Different students like different ways to study. But personally, I would rather study alone. First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly without other people disturbing me. This way, I can put my heart in study. Third, it can help me improve the abilities of self-control because I have to depend on myself. What’s more, it can also help me form the habit of thinking. However, it also has disadvantages. When I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss the answer with my classmates. I hope everyone can find the best way to learn. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】教育、学习策略 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：选择一种学习方式中材料所给优点不得遗漏，缺点部分自行阐述。 [写作步骤] ① 第一步，表明自己喜欢的学习方式； ② 第二步，阐述该学习方式的优缺点； ③ 第三步，表达作者希望每个人都找到最好学习方式的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① disturbe   打扰；干扰 ② put one’s heart in   全心全意 ③ what’s more   更重要的是；而且 [高分句型] ① I can make a personal learning plans so that I know what to learn.（so that引导目的状语从句） ② When I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss the answer with my classmates.（when引导时间状语从句） 7．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’ve read the posters in our community. I’d like to be a volunteer for protecting the environment. The environment is important for everyone. It’s our duty to protect it. If we don’t have a better environment, humans and animals won’t live a better life. As the saying goes, “Many hands make light work”. I think we can hand out leaflets to ask more people to join in the activity. And teaching people in the community how to sort the rubbish is also important. Besides watering flowers and trees, we can also plant more trees. Let people know the importance of the trees. I hope I can be a member of this activity. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、志愿服务 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己想参加的志愿者活动以及原因； 第二步，提出自己的合理建议。 [亮点词汇] ①be important for对……重要 ②hand out分发 ③join in加入 [高分句型] ①If we don’t have a better environment, humans and animals won’t live a better life.（if引导条件状语从句） ②And teaching people in the community how to sort the rubbish is also important.（动名词作主语） 8．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr Wang, I am Li Hua from Class 6, Grade 9. I am interested in Chinese Traditional Culture very much, especially the food culture. Because I think the food in Zhenjiang is really delicious. There are many kinds of delicious foods, such as Salted pork, Pot noodles, Vinegar and Crab Dumplings in Soup. Zhenjiang vinegar is especially famous in China. If you want to learn about the culture, you can read books, watch videos, and you can also visit the Zhenjiang Museum to learn about the food culture. In my opinion, since we want to show the food culture, we can let the students go home and make some food with their parents, and then bring it to school. Secondly, the school can hold food appreciation once or twice a semester. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.4 【知识点】中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从表格中选择一种文化叙述； 第二步，根据表格内容具体阐述这种文化； 第三步，最后给出你的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①many kinds of许多种类 ②such as比如 ③in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①If you want to learn about the culture, you can read books, watch videos（if引导的条件状语从句） ②since we want to show the food culture, we can let the students go home and make some food with their parents（since引导的原因状语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】     We are going to graduate from our middle school and we will make a choice between being a day student and a boarding student. In my opinion, I prefer to be a boarding student because its advantages overweight its disadvantages.     Although I may not have enough private space or enough time to stay with my parents, I can get more from living at school.     Firstly, if I choose to live at school, there is no need to spend time between my home and school so that I can save much time to study. Secondly, it can help me develop a good habit of study and living. Last but not least, it’s a good chance for me to learn how to behave properly and get along well with others.     In conclusion, whether to be a boarding student or a day student is a personal decision. However, considering the convenience, time saving and more chances of developing friendship, I insist on living at school. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、教育、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章为第一人称，选择一种学习方式进行阐述，选择的理由解释清楚并提出自己的建议，表格内容阐述完整，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，选择自己喜欢的学习方式，做寄宿学生； 第二步，具体介绍自己选择做寄宿学生的原因； 第三步，再次表明自己的选择。 [亮点词汇] ① In my opinion在我看来 ② Last but not least最后但同样重要的是 ③ get along well with相处融洽 ④ In conclusion总而言之 ⑤ insist on坚持 ⑥ develop a good habit of养成好习惯 [高分句型] ①In my opinion, I prefer to be a boarding student because its advantages overweight its disadvantages.（原因状语从句） ②Although I may not have enough private space or enough time to stay with my parents, I can get more from living at school.（让步状语从句） ③Firstly, if I choose to live at school, there is no need to spend time between my home and school so that I can save much time to study.（条件状语从句+there be句型+结果状语从句） ④Last but not least, it’s a good chance for me to learn how to behave properly and get along well with others.（it固定句型+并列句） 10．【满分优秀范文】 With the improvement of our life and the development of car industry, most families have had their own cars. Electric cars are very popular in China and my parents are planning to buy a new car. I think parents can buy an electric car. The reasons are as follows. First of all, the cost of electric cars is very low, about 0.2 yuan per km. If parents buy one, they will save more money. Second, electric cars use clean energy, and there will be less air and noise pollution. Finally, electric cars can achieve sustainable development. At the same time, electric cars also have their disadvantage. For example, electric cars can’t run as far as petrol cars. In addition, electric cars need fixed charging piles to charge. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】交通方式 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你希望你的父母买哪一种汽车； 第二步，具体阐述其中的缘由； 第三步，最后指出这种汽车的的不足之处。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②at the same time同时 ③in addition此外 [高分句型] If parents buy one, they will save more money.（if引导的条件状语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$