12 江苏扬州-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

12 江苏扬州 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题的命题意图在于让学生深入了解端午节这一中国传统节日，包括其重要性、日期、特色活动以及背后蕴含的爱国主义精神。同时，通过让学生思考青少年如何践行爱国主义精神，培养学生的爱国情怀和社会责任感。 能力考查： 考查了学生的英语语言表达能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握和句子组织能力。还考查了学生对文化知识的理解和整合能力，以及逻辑思维和分析问题的能力。 课标要求： 符合课标的要求，让学生在学习英语的过程中，能够用英语介绍和传播中国传统文化，增强文化自信，同时培养学生的跨文化交际意识和能力。 （2024·江苏扬州·中考真题）端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解，激发爱国主义情怀，某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示： (1) What is Duanwu Festival? (importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races) (2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism? (spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing) (3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism? (1. …；2. …) 参考词汇：patriotism n.爱国主义；     patriotic adj.爱国的；     poet n.诗人； all ethnic groups 全民族；     the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五 要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； （3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It falls on the lunar May fifth. People all across China eat rice dumplings and dragon boat races are held in many places to remember a great ancient patriotic poet Qu Yuan. Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism. People’s dragon boat racing is closely related to honor Qu Yuan. As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. First, By working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies, we can make a significant impact on the development of our country. Second, By dedicating ourselves to protect the earth, we also can be a better person and it is good for our country. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】传统节日 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍端午节； 第二步，介绍屈原故事的精神和赛龙舟的精神； 第三步，说明如何实践爱国。 [亮点词汇] ①is closely related to息息相关 ②strive for奋发图强 [高分句型] ①Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism.（定语从句） ②As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland.（宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写作，深入了解中国传统手工艺风筝的相关知识，包括历史、特征、文化重要性等，同时考查学生用英语表达和阐述观点的能力。 能力考查：主要考查学生的英语语言运用能力，如词汇积累、语法掌握、句子组织和逻辑表达。还考查学生对中国传统文化的理解和传承意识。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力和文化意识培养的要求，鼓励学生用英语介绍和传播中国优秀传统文化。 （2023·江苏扬州·中考真题）为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting close to traditional Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。 Kites History Mozi, in the Warring States period Characteristics materials for making kites:… shapes of kites:… Cultural importance kites: ● a traditional Chinese handicraft ● … kite flying: ● a popular outdoor activity… ● the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province… Your ideas … 要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Kites Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Kites Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mozi in the Warring States period. He made a bird out of wood. It was the first kite in history. Later, his student Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on. The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. People all over the world want to go there. Flying kites is deeply loved by people. It is a very popular outdoor activity. Every weekend, I can see many people flying kites in the park. They play happily. But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores. Few people make their own kites. I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】传统工艺、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点； 第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况； 第三步，最后提出自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ① with the invention of paper随着纸的发明 ② take on呈现 ③ all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ① I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down.（宾语从句） ② But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores.（定语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述制作书签的经历，锻炼英语写作能力，包括如何清晰地表达目的、过程和个人感受，同时也能培养同学们对阅读的热爱。 能力考查：考查同学们的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，看能否准确运用所学的词汇和语法来描述制作书签的步骤和心得。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对同学们英语写作的要求，比如能够用简单的语言表达个人经历和感受，并且在写作中注意语法和词汇的正确使用。 写作方法： 1. 确定写作目的 根据题目要求，要介绍制作书签的目的、过程和心得。 目的：从答案中可知，活动目的是“to help us enjoy reading our favorite books”。 2. 分析制作过程 准备材料：“I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on”。 具体步骤： 首先“First, I cut the card into long strips”，把卡片剪成长条。 然后“And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying…on the right”，在左边画猴子，右边写名言。 最后“At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood”，把它粘到薄木片上。 3. 理解制作心得 心得是“Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up. I am proud of myself”，虽然遇到困难但不放弃，为自己感到骄傲。 （2022·江苏扬州·中考真题）最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。 Why you made it help enjoy reading your favourite book（name, type of book, what you like most） How you made it Materials & Tools ● card ● scissors, glue… Steps ● cut the card into… ● draw a picture of… ● write（your favourite sentence from the book or a famous saying or…） ● … How you felt … 要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； （3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 A DIY bookmark for my favourite book Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： A DIY bookmark for my favourite book Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favorite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up. In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying “Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.” on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood. Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】阅读、方法/策略、文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，并结合表格中的内容，描述制作书签的目的和过程，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的，以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方；第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程；第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图在于让学生通过描述家乡春天的景象、人们的活动以及自己的感受，锻炼他们的英语写作能力和语言表达能力，同时培养他们对家乡的热爱之情。 能力考查：考查了学生的观察能力、语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对英语词汇和语法的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让学生能够运用所学的英语知识，描述身边的事物和自己的情感，提高综合语言运用能力。 （2021·江苏扬州·中考真题）某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Spring in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。 提示： (1) What is spring like in your hometown? (2) What do people in your hometown usually do in spring? (three points) (3) How do you like your hometown in spring? (two points) 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥； （3）词数：100 词左右； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Spring in my hometown ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Spring in my hometown When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm. People feel more comfortable than in winter. The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener. Most flowers blossom as the weather becomes warm. All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture. People begin to climb mountains, have a picnic near rivers. They also fly kites in the parks. They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it. Famers start to sow and wait for a good harvest. As far as I am concerned, spring in my hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love the spring in my hometown. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】季节、城市 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Spring in my hometown”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，介绍家乡的春天，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍家乡的春天是什么样子的；第二段介绍家乡的人在春天通常做什么；第三段介绍自己对家乡的春天的感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图在于引导学生关注环保主题，培养学生的环保意识，并通过英语写作的形式，考查学生运用英语表达观点和提出建议的能力。 能力考查：主要考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对环保相关词汇和句型的掌握和运用。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励学生在真实情境中运用英语，提高综合语言运用能力，同时培养学生的社会责任感和环保意识。 （2020·江苏扬州·中考真题）为倡导绿色环保新时尚，学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题, 根据表格中的内容要点写一份英语演讲稿, 号召全体同学行动起来, 共建美好校园。 Purposes develop a green lifestyle Actions save resources1. save paper: reuse the textbooks; use both sides of the paper 2. save ... : two examples 3. save ... : two examples reduce pollution1. take care of the trees and flowers 2. ... Hopes ... 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥; （3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）; （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Go green at school Hi, guys, Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【满分优秀范文】 Go green at school Hi, guys, Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways. On one hand, we should save resources. First, we should save paper. we can reuse the textbooks and use both sides of the paper. Second, we should save water. We can take short showers and reuse water. Third, we are supposed to save electricity. We can turn off the light when we leave from the classroom. Also, we needn't turn on all the lights if enough. On the other hand, we should reduce pollution. We can take care of the trees and flowers, choose the public transport and use the cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should develop a green lifestyle, we can do more exercise and watch less TV. If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow. That’s all. Thank you! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、环境保护 【详解】1、题干解读：要求写一篇演讲稿，轮廓已经给出，学生需要将内容填充进去，合理有据即可。全文人称应以第一人称为主，时态应用一般现在时态。 2、【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】分为三段。第一段直接点题；第二段从两个部分说明了如何行动，分别是节约资源和减少污染；第三部分礼貌结尾。内容详实完整，语言规范。 3、高分亮点： 短语：On one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……；另一方面……；both sides of...……的两面；take showers洗澡；be supposed to do sth.应该做某事；turn off 关闭；turn on 打开；take care of 照料；instead of 代替，而不是；do exercise 锻炼。 句型：when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏扬州·三模）随着人们生活的日益改善，旅行已经为越来越多人所欢迎。旅行有着许多优点，但在旅行过程中我们要做一个文明游客，请根据以下提示号召同学们文明旅行，做文明游客。 1. 表达内容必须包含上述所有问题相关信息，并适当发挥； 2. 要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 3. 词数100字左右； 4. 介绍中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）师生情难忘，同学情久长。老师和同学在我们成长过程中常常给予我们帮助、支持、呵护与关心。在你初中学习的三年中，一定有一位对你有影响、让你心怀感激的老师或同学。你校英文报刊Teenage Zone 正在为毕业季专版征稿，请你根据下面两则征文启事（任选其一），按照要求, 以“Thank you, my teacher/classmate!”为题写一篇文章参加征稿活动。 Target ① Questions Who is the teacher that influences you and what’s he/she like? What did he/she do to help you or improve your study? What influence does he/she have on you in your life/study now? (Give an example) Target ② Questions A classmate Who is the classmate that you want to thank? What are his/her personalities? (Give at least two examples) What did he/she do for you so that you want to thank him/her? 要求： (1) 请根据你选择的任务完成文章标题及结尾句； (2) 不少于 100词，结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整； (4) 内容必须包括以上所有要点，并根据要求补充完整； (5) 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Thank you, my ________! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Before I leave, I want to say “thank you” to you, my dear ________! 3．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）你校英语网站以“How to be a teenager with good habits” 为话题开展征文活动，请你根据下图提示介绍自己的做法并加以适当发挥。 要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯： 2.必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数在100词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)， 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 How to be a teenager with good habits As a teenager, I should have some good habits.  _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·江苏扬州·三模）为帮助学生更好地了解端午节的历史与习俗，感受、挖掘其蕴含的文化内涵，上周你校开展了跨学科融合教学活动一“端午课堂”系列，包括语文、历史、艺术、劳动（Labour）等学科，请你以“Lessons themed on the Dragon Boat Festival”为题，根据表格内容提示完成一篇英语报道，向学校英文报投稿，介绍你们在融合课堂上的实践内容及学习收获。 参考词汇： reed  leaves 棕叶；filling 馅 Background (What you know about the festival) a traditional Chinese Festival Lessons (What you did in class) History & Chinese tell the story of Qu Yuan… read Qu Yuan’s poems… Art & Labour draw/sing/make … Feelings (What you’ve got in class) 要求： (1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2)必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3)词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Lessons themed on the Dragon Boat Festival Last week our school held a series of cross-subject activitics themed on “the Dragon Boat Festival”. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）Challenges are part of life. They push us to grow, to learn and to be better. During the three years of junior high school life, you’ll surely have such experiences to share. Please write a passage about your understanding of the challenge and a story behind it. Be brave to express yourself. Solve a difficult problem by yourself. Achieve success after trying many times. 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 语言通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）假设你是李华，你的网友王梅也在备战中考。最近她在给你的邮件中提到自己心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你就此给她写一封英文回信，内容包括： comfort (安慰) her It’s quite common… the problems that stress may cause 1.… 2.… suggestions and reasons 1.… 2.… 3.… 要求： 1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3)词数：100词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear Wang Mei, I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been stressed because of the coming examination.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）世界环境保护日就要到了，学校组织以“Being a Volunteer of Going Green”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以林涛的名义，根据以下内容写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。 Qualities organized, creative… Favourite colour green, because… Experiences 1. volunteer… 2. help the classmates with problems… Steps to protect the environment 1. … 2. … 注意： 1. 必须包括所有要点，并适当拓展；表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。 2. 词数：100词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Being a Volunteer of Going Green Hello, everyone. I’m Lin Tao. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 8．（2024·江苏南通·一模）近来，安全问题备受关注。专家指出，提高青少年的自我保护能力可以避免80%的意外伤害。因此，自我保护是青少年必备的意识和能力之一。请你以“Self-protection”为题写 一篇演讲稿，选择或自拟两个方面，谈谈自我保护的重要性并提出具体建议。 要求： 词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。 参考词汇：school-bullying校园欺凌 Self-protection Good afternoon, everyone! Recently safety has been paid much attention to. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 9．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）假如你叫李华，将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下： Phenomenon (现象) 1. feel it hard to get along with our parents 2. … Reasons /Causes 1. care too much about our marks 2. … Suggestions     1. communicate with them 2. … 3. … 要求： 1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯： 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3)词数：100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is“Learning to get along with our parents”. These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 10．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）时间在不经意中从指尖划过，转眼我们即将从母校毕业，愉快的暑假也即将来临了，同学们可曾思考如何度过一个多彩的暑假呢？根据以下思维导图的提示，以”My summer holiday plan”为主题的写一篇暑假计划的英语短文。 参考词汇：social practice activities社会实践活动 要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括流程图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（开头己给出, 不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My summer holiday plan Summer holiday is coming.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 12 江苏扬州 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题的命题意图在于让学生深入了解端午节这一中国传统节日，包括其重要性、日期、特色活动以及背后蕴含的爱国主义精神。同时，通过让学生思考青少年如何践行爱国主义精神，培养学生的爱国情怀和社会责任感。 能力考查： 考查了学生的英语语言表达能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握和句子组织能力。还考查了学生对文化知识的理解和整合能力，以及逻辑思维和分析问题的能力。 课标要求： 符合课标的要求，让学生在学习英语的过程中，能够用英语介绍和传播中国传统文化，增强文化自信，同时培养学生的跨文化交际意识和能力。 （2024·江苏扬州·中考真题）端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解，激发爱国主义情怀，某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示： (1) What is Duanwu Festival? (importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races) (2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism? (spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing) (3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism? (1. …；2. …) 参考词汇：patriotism n.爱国主义；     patriotic adj.爱国的；     poet n.诗人； all ethnic groups 全民族；     the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五 要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； （3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It falls on the lunar May fifth. People all across China eat rice dumplings and dragon boat races are held in many places to remember a great ancient patriotic poet Qu Yuan. Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism. People’s dragon boat racing is closely related to honor Qu Yuan. As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. First, By working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies, we can make a significant impact on the development of our country. Second, By dedicating ourselves to protect the earth, we also can be a better person and it is good for our country. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】传统节日 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍端午节； 第二步，介绍屈原故事的精神和赛龙舟的精神； 第三步，说明如何实践爱国。 [亮点词汇] ①is closely related to息息相关 ②strive for奋发图强 [高分句型] ①Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism.（定语从句） ②As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland.（宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写作，深入了解中国传统手工艺风筝的相关知识，包括历史、特征、文化重要性等，同时考查学生用英语表达和阐述观点的能力。 能力考查：主要考查学生的英语语言运用能力，如词汇积累、语法掌握、句子组织和逻辑表达。还考查学生对中国传统文化的理解和传承意识。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力和文化意识培养的要求，鼓励学生用英语介绍和传播中国优秀传统文化。 （2023·江苏扬州·中考真题）为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting close to traditional Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。 Kites History Mozi, in the Warring States period Characteristics materials for making kites:… shapes of kites:… Cultural importance kites: ● a traditional Chinese handicraft ● … kite flying: ● a popular outdoor activity… ● the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province… Your ideas … 要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Kites Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Kites Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mozi in the Warring States period. He made a bird out of wood. It was the first kite in history. Later, his student Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on. The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. People all over the world want to go there. Flying kites is deeply loved by people. It is a very popular outdoor activity. Every weekend, I can see many people flying kites in the park. They play happily. But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores. Few people make their own kites. I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】传统工艺、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点； 第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况； 第三步，最后提出自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ① with the invention of paper随着纸的发明 ② take on呈现 ③ all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ① I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down.（宾语从句） ② But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores.（定语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述制作书签的经历，锻炼英语写作能力，包括如何清晰地表达目的、过程和个人感受，同时也能培养同学们对阅读的热爱。 能力考查：考查同学们的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，看能否准确运用所学的词汇和语法来描述制作书签的步骤和心得。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对同学们英语写作的要求，比如能够用简单的语言表达个人经历和感受，并且在写作中注意语法和词汇的正确使用。 写作方法： 1. 确定写作目的 根据题目要求，要介绍制作书签的目的、过程和心得。 目的：从答案中可知，活动目的是“to help us enjoy reading our favorite books”。 2. 分析制作过程 准备材料：“I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on”。 具体步骤： 首先“First, I cut the card into long strips”，把卡片剪成长条。 然后“And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying…on the right”，在左边画猴子，右边写名言。 最后“At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood”，把它粘到薄木片上。 3. 理解制作心得 心得是“Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up. I am proud of myself”，虽然遇到困难但不放弃，为自己感到骄傲。 （2022·江苏扬州·中考真题）最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。 Why you made it help enjoy reading your favourite book（name, type of book, what you like most） How you made it Materials & Tools ● card ● scissors, glue… Steps ● cut the card into… ● draw a picture of… ● write（your favourite sentence from the book or a famous saying or…） ● … How you felt … 要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； （3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 A DIY bookmark for my favourite book Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： A DIY bookmark for my favourite book Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favorite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up. In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying “Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.” on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood. Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】阅读、方法/策略、文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，并结合表格中的内容，描述制作书签的目的和过程，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的，以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方；第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程；第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图在于让学生通过描述家乡春天的景象、人们的活动以及自己的感受，锻炼他们的英语写作能力和语言表达能力，同时培养他们对家乡的热爱之情。 能力考查：考查了学生的观察能力、语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对英语词汇和语法的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让学生能够运用所学的英语知识，描述身边的事物和自己的情感，提高综合语言运用能力。 （2021·江苏扬州·中考真题）某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Spring in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。 提示： (1) What is spring like in your hometown? (2) What do people in your hometown usually do in spring? (three points) (3) How do you like your hometown in spring? (two points) 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥； （3）词数：100 词左右； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Spring in my hometown ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Spring in my hometown When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm. People feel more comfortable than in winter. The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener. Most flowers blossom as the weather becomes warm. All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture. People begin to climb mountains, have a picnic near rivers. They also fly kites in the parks. They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it. Famers start to sow and wait for a good harvest. As far as I am concerned, spring in my hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love the spring in my hometown. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】季节、城市 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Spring in my hometown”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，介绍家乡的春天，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍家乡的春天是什么样子的；第二段介绍家乡的人在春天通常做什么；第三段介绍自己对家乡的春天的感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图在于引导学生关注环保主题，培养学生的环保意识，并通过英语写作的形式，考查学生运用英语表达观点和提出建议的能力。 能力考查：主要考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对环保相关词汇和句型的掌握和运用。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励学生在真实情境中运用英语，提高综合语言运用能力，同时培养学生的社会责任感和环保意识。 （2020·江苏扬州·中考真题）为倡导绿色环保新时尚，学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题, 根据表格中的内容要点写一份英语演讲稿, 号召全体同学行动起来, 共建美好校园。 Purposes develop a green lifestyle Actions save resources1. save paper: reuse the textbooks; use both sides of the paper 2. save ... : two examples 3. save ... : two examples reduce pollution1. take care of the trees and flowers 2. ... Hopes ... 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥; （3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）; （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Go green at school Hi, guys, Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【满分优秀范文】 Go green at school Hi, guys, Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways. On one hand, we should save resources. First, we should save paper. we can reuse the textbooks and use both sides of the paper. Second, we should save water. We can take short showers and reuse water. Third, we are supposed to save electricity. We can turn off the light when we leave from the classroom. Also, we needn't turn on all the lights if enough. On the other hand, we should reduce pollution. We can take care of the trees and flowers, choose the public transport and use the cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should develop a green lifestyle, we can do more exercise and watch less TV. If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow. That’s all. Thank you! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、环境保护 【详解】1、题干解读：要求写一篇演讲稿，轮廓已经给出，学生需要将内容填充进去，合理有据即可。全文人称应以第一人称为主，时态应用一般现在时态。 2、【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】分为三段。第一段直接点题；第二段从两个部分说明了如何行动，分别是节约资源和减少污染；第三部分礼貌结尾。内容详实完整，语言规范。 3、高分亮点： 短语：On one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……；另一方面……；both sides of...……的两面；take showers洗澡；be supposed to do sth.应该做某事；turn off 关闭；turn on 打开；take care of 照料；instead of 代替，而不是；do exercise 锻炼。 句型：when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏扬州·三模）随着人们生活的日益改善，旅行已经为越来越多人所欢迎。旅行有着许多优点，但在旅行过程中我们要做一个文明游客，请根据以下提示号召同学们文明旅行，做文明游客。 1. 表达内容必须包含上述所有问题相关信息，并适当发挥； 2. 要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 3. 词数100字左右； 4. 介绍中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）师生情难忘，同学情久长。老师和同学在我们成长过程中常常给予我们帮助、支持、呵护与关心。在你初中学习的三年中，一定有一位对你有影响、让你心怀感激的老师或同学。你校英文报刊Teenage Zone 正在为毕业季专版征稿，请你根据下面两则征文启事（任选其一），按照要求, 以“Thank you, my teacher/classmate!”为题写一篇文章参加征稿活动。 Target ① Questions Who is the teacher that influences you and what’s he/she like? What did he/she do to help you or improve your study? What influence does he/she have on you in your life/study now? (Give an example) Target ② Questions A classmate Who is the classmate that you want to thank? What are his/her personalities? (Give at least two examples) What did he/she do for you so that you want to thank him/her? 要求： (1) 请根据你选择的任务完成文章标题及结尾句； (2) 不少于 100词，结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整； (4) 内容必须包括以上所有要点，并根据要求补充完整； (5) 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Thank you, my ________! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Before I leave, I want to say “thank you” to you, my dear ________! 3．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）你校英语网站以“How to be a teenager with good habits” 为话题开展征文活动，请你根据下图提示介绍自己的做法并加以适当发挥。 要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯： 2.必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数在100词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)， 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 How to be a teenager with good habits As a teenager, I should have some good habits.  _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·江苏扬州·三模）为帮助学生更好地了解端午节的历史与习俗，感受、挖掘其蕴含的文化内涵，上周你校开展了跨学科融合教学活动一“端午课堂”系列，包括语文、历史、艺术、劳动（Labour）等学科，请你以“Lessons themed on the Dragon Boat Festival”为题，根据表格内容提示完成一篇英语报道，向学校英文报投稿，介绍你们在融合课堂上的实践内容及学习收获。 参考词汇： reed  leaves 棕叶；filling 馅 Background (What you know about the festival) a traditional Chinese Festival Lessons (What you did in class) History & Chinese tell the story of Qu Yuan… read Qu Yuan’s poems… Art & Labour draw/sing/make … Feelings (What you’ve got in class) 要求： (1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2)必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3)词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Lessons themed on the Dragon Boat Festival Last week our school held a series of cross-subject activitics themed on “the Dragon Boat Festival”. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）Challenges are part of life. They push us to grow, to learn and to be better. During the three years of junior high school life, you’ll surely have such experiences to share. Please write a passage about your understanding of the challenge and a story behind it. Be brave to express yourself. Solve a difficult problem by yourself. Achieve success after trying many times. 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 语言通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）假设你是李华，你的网友王梅也在备战中考。最近她在给你的邮件中提到自己心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你就此给她写一封英文回信，内容包括： comfort (安慰) her It’s quite common… the problems that stress may cause 1.… 2.… suggestions and reasons 1.… 2.… 3.… 要求： 1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3)词数：100词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear Wang Mei, I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been stressed because of the coming examination.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）世界环境保护日就要到了，学校组织以“Being a Volunteer of Going Green”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以林涛的名义，根据以下内容写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。 Qualities organized, creative… Favourite colour green, because… Experiences 1. volunteer… 2. help the classmates with problems… Steps to protect the environment 1. … 2. … 注意： 1. 必须包括所有要点，并适当拓展；表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。 2. 词数：100词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Being a Volunteer of Going Green Hello, everyone. I’m Lin Tao. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 8．（2024·江苏南通·一模）近来，安全问题备受关注。专家指出，提高青少年的自我保护能力可以避免80%的意外伤害。因此，自我保护是青少年必备的意识和能力之一。请你以“Self-protection”为题写 一篇演讲稿，选择或自拟两个方面，谈谈自我保护的重要性并提出具体建议。 要求： 词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。 参考词汇：school-bullying校园欺凌 Self-protection Good afternoon, everyone! Recently safety has been paid much attention to. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 9．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）假如你叫李华，将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下： Phenomenon (现象) 1. feel it hard to get along with our parents 2. … Reasons /Causes 1. care too much about our marks 2. … Suggestions     1. communicate with them 2. … 3. … 要求： 1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯： 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3)词数：100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is“Learning to get along with our parents”. These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 10．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）时间在不经意中从指尖划过，转眼我们即将从母校毕业，愉快的暑假也即将来临了，同学们可曾思考如何度过一个多彩的暑假呢？根据以下思维导图的提示，以”My summer holiday plan”为主题的写一篇暑假计划的英语短文。 参考词汇：social practice activities社会实践活动 要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括流程图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（开头己给出, 不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My summer holiday plan Summer holiday is coming.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 As our lives continue to improve, traveling has become more popular. Travel has many advantages. We can relax ourselves, broaden our horizons, and experience new culture through travel. However, as we travel, it’s crucial to remember to be civilized tourists. We should always behave politely and respect local customs and traditions. Additionally, we should save energy and water, and use public transportation. But we shouldn’t draw on the wall. Moreover, we should not litter or destroy the environment for animals or plants. Let’s make it a point to be responsible travelers and protect the beauty and culture of the places we visit. Together, we can create a more enjoyable travel experience for all. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】礼仪与习俗、意见/建议、守则、旅行 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文属于材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇引出话题，说明旅游趋势的变化； 第二步，根据提示介绍旅行的优点及成为一个文明游客要“做”与“不做”的行为举止，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，呼吁大家文明旅行并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①broaden one’s horizons开阔眼界 ②make it a point to do sth坚持做某事 [高分句型] ①As our lives continue to improve, traveling has become more popular.（as引导的时间状语从句） ②However, as we travel, it’s crucial to remember to be civilized tourists.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语） 2．【满分优秀范文】 Thank you, my teacher! The teacher influences me most is Mrs. Zhou. She is my English teacher. Her smiling eyes make her look friendly and easy-going. Mrs. Zhou helped me a lot in my study. A while ago, I failed several times in oral-English tests because of my poor pronunciation. I felt sad and became less confident. Mrs. Zhou encouraged me and helped me correct my pronunciation. Thanks to her, I made great progress and got full marks in the final test. Mrs. Zhou is always helpful and this has influence on me. Every time someone needs help, I will give him my hand now. Before I leave, I want to say “thank you” to you, my dear Mrs. zhou! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】其他人、朋友 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文的主要时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格内的问题提示完成本篇书面表达，注意需要补充文章的标题及结尾句，要正确使用时态及句型，使语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，简要介绍对你有影响或让你心怀感激的老师或同学； 第二步，介绍这位老师或同学怎么影响到你，为什么你对他/她心怀感激； 第三步，总结感受并再次道谢。 [亮点词汇] ①in oral-English tests 在口语考试中 ②less confident 没有那么自信 ③correct one’s pronunciation 纠正某人的读音 ④make great progress 取得大的进步 ⑤get full marks 得到满分 ⑥have influence on sb. 对某人有影响 [高分句型] ①Every time someone needs help, I will give him my hand now. (Every time引导的时间状语从句) 3．【满分优秀范文】 How to be a teenager with good habits    As a teenager, I should have some good habits. In class, I need to listen to the teachers carefully and get involved in the class activities. After school I should finish my homework in time and do some reading. What’s more, a good teenager needs to live a healthy life. It’s good for me to do more exercise in my spare time. Fresh fruits and vegetables are some of the healthiest foods I can eat to improve health. Last but not least, a good teenager must be the one who cares about his manners. For example, I should respect the old. Also, I need to obey traffic rules. Besides, I should keep voice down in public. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】自我管理、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“作为青少年，我应该养成一些良好的习惯。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——学校、家、公共场所的一些好习惯等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“我应该在公共场合小点声”的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①get involved in涉足 ②What’s more而且 ③obey traffic rules遵守交通规则 [高分句型] ①Last but not least, a good teenager must be the one who cares about his manners. (定语从句） ②It’s good for me to do more exercise in my spare time. (It’s good for sb. to do sth.句型) 4．【满分优秀范文】 Lessons themed on the Dragon Boat Festival Last week, our school held a series of cross-subject activities themed on “the Dragon Boat Festival”. The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese Festival. Many places in China hold dragon boat races to celebrate the festival. On that day, every family will eat rice dumplings. We had many lessons about the festival, from History to Labour. Our history teacher told us the story of Qu Yuan who drowned himself in the Miluo River on that day. We also read aloud some famous lines from his poems in the Chinese lesson. Then came my favorite part—Art and Labor. We expressed our own understanding about this festival by singing, drawing or making posters. We had fun making our own rice dumplings with reed leaves and different fillings. We couldn’t stop laughing when we saw rice dumplings in different shapes. These lessons are not only interesting but also meaningful. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】传统节日、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍端午节的相关情况； 第二步，具体阐述课堂内容； 第三步，总结感受。 [亮点词汇] ①from...to...从……到…… ②have fun玩得开心 ③not only...but also...不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①Our history teacher told us the story of Qu Yuan who drowned himself in the Miluo River on that day.（who引导的定语从句） ②We couldn’t stop laughing when we saw rice dumplings in different shapes.（when引导的时间状语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】： Challenges are inevitable in life, like stepping stones on our journey of growth. During my junior high years, I came across a really hard math problem. A complicated shape problem made me very confused. I didn’t know how to solve it. But I didn’t give up. I studied the concepts, practiced similar problems, and even asked my teachers for help. After trying many times, I found the answer! That feeling of success taught me that challenges are opportunities to learn and improve. They make us stronger and wiser. So, I cherish every challenge that comes my way. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】个人经历、哲理感悟 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作主题已给出，考生应围绕主题进行发挥，需适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简述你对挑战的理解； 第二步，讲述一个你与挑战有关的故事； 第三步，再次强调你对挑战的深刻理解。 [亮点词汇] ①stepping stones on our journey of growth我们成长之路上的垫脚石 ②come across偶然遇见 ③give up放弃 ④ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 [高分句型] ①That feeling of success taught me that challenges are opportunities to learn and improve.（that引导的宾语从句） ②So, I cherish every challenge that comes my way.（that引导的定语从句） 6．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Wang Mei,     I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been stressed because of the coming examination.     Cheer up! You’re not alone. It’s quite common for ninth-graders to worry about it. Stress can change our moods and cause many problems. You may not sleep well, get angry easily or even become forgetful.     Here are some ways that can deal with stress. The first thing you can try is to exercise. Exercise like walking or running not only brings energy but also builds confidence. Another way is to change the colours of your bedroom. Painting it blue may make you feel calm. It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener.     Let me know if I can help further. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍压力会带来哪些问题； 第二步，具体阐述缓解压力的方法； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②cheer up振作起来 ③worry about担心 [高分句型] ①Painting it blue may make you feel calm. (动名词作主语) ②It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener.(定语从句) 7．【满分优秀范文】 Being a Volunteer of Going Green Hello, everyone. I’m Lin Tao. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here. I have many strong qualities. I’m so confident that I’m not afraid of making a speech in public. I’m creative, so I often come up with new ideas. I’m also organized. I always keep all my things in good order. My favourite colour is green, because it’s the colour of nature and represents new life. I have worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also helped my classmates deal with their problems. For example, some of them felt sleepy in class. I advised them to manage the time better and go to bed earlier. If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can throw the rubbish into the rubbish bin. It’s necessary for me to save water by turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. I shouldn’t use plastic bags. Instead, I should take my own bags when shopping. I must try my best to make a big difference to the environment. Thanks for listening! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、环境保护、志愿服务、个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时，一般过去时和现在完成时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍自己的品质，最爱的颜色和原因，志愿事迹和环保措施； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be afraid of 害怕 ②come up with 想出 ③deal with 处理 ④make a big difference to the environment 对环境产生重大影响 [高分句型] ①I’m so confident that I’m not afraid of making a speech in public.（结果状语从句） ②My favourite colour is green, because it’s the colour of nature and represents new life.（原因状语从句） ③If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment.（条件状语从句） 8．【满分优秀范文】 Self-protection Good afternoon, everyone! Recently, more and more people pay attention to safety problems. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us. We can avoid or reduce the possibility of being hurt if we know what to do in different situations. Fire is one of the most terrible accidents around us. If our building is on fire, the most important is to calm down first. Then, cover the mouth and nose with a wet towel to protect ourselves from thick smoke and try to get out as soon as possible. School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us. If we meet with school-bullying, we must tell our teachers or parents about it. They will help us deal with it well. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble. In a word, we should have some self-protection skills to live a safe and happy life. Thanks for your listening! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、自我保护 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自我保护”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍自我保护的重要性； 第二步，根据题干中的表格，具体介绍两种情况并给出建议； 第三步，收尾，并再次点评自我保护的重要性，与前文呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①calm down冷静 ②in a word总而言之 [高分句型] ①School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us.（定语从句） ②What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble.（it is adj for sb to do句型） 9．【满分优秀范文】 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “Learning to get along with our parents”. These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents. We easily get angry for no reason and even don’t talk to them for days. Here are some of the reasons. First, our parents care too much about our marks and it makes us stressed. Second, we are unwilling to communicate with them. It’s time for us to change. First, we can communicate with them, by sharing our joys and worries with them. Then, we can help do some housework to show our love for them. Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they won’t feel worried aboutus. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、家庭关系 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：要点已经部分给出，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍演讲的主题——学会和父母相处； 第二步，介绍父母和子女现状，介绍原因； 第三步，给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①stressed感到有压力 ②achieve a balance获得一个平衡 [高分句型] Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they won’t feel worried aboutus.（结果状语从句） 10． 【满分优秀范文】 My summer holiday plan Summer holiday is coming. We should do what is interesting and meaningful to have a colourful life. First, we should read a lot every day. Because reading books can help us learn a lot of knowledge. Reading can make a man progress. Second, we should learn some new skills. We can help our parents do housework, such as washing , cleaning and cooking. Because doing these things can help us not depend on our parents, but on ourselves. Third, we should take part in different social practice activities. We can be volunteers for our neighborhood. Finally, I want to make a new friend. Because I like making friends. I think if we carry out this plan. we will have a colourful and meaningful summer holiday. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明目的，想要一个多彩的假期； 第二步，具体阐述计划，包括读书、学技巧、参加社会活动，交朋友，并介绍原因； 第三步，总结，表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ②take part in参加 ③depend on依靠 [高分句型] ①Reading can make a man progress. (动名词作主语句型) ②I think if we carry out this plan. (宾语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$