11 江苏无锡-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

11 江苏无锡 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写邮件的方式，介绍中国传统节日，加深对中华文化的理解和传承，同时提高英语书面表达能力和跨文化交流意识。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、词汇运用能力、语法掌握能力以及对中西方文化差异的了解。比如，能否准确描述节日的时间、庆祝方式，能否正确使用相关的英语词汇和句型。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的观点和想法，增强文化意识。 （2024·江苏无锡·中考真题）传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项： 1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival. Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】传统节日 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①put up couplets贴春联 ②set off the fireworks燃放烟花 [高分句型] ①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句) ②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写邮件的方式，锻炼用英语表达自己的烦恼和寻求建议的能力，同时培养学生的语言组织和逻辑思维能力。 能力考查：考查学生对一般现在时的运用，以及能否清晰、准确地描述自己的感受和问题。还考查学生是否能够根据题目要求，合理组织邮件的结构和内容。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力和书面表达能力的培养要求，让学生能够在实际情境中运用所学的英语知识进行交流和表达。 （2023·江苏无锡·中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。 注意事项： （1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； （2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Mr. Friend, I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】： Dear Mr. Friend, I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents? Can you give me some advice? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。 第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。 第三步，书写结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①argue with和某人争吵 ②care about关心 ③take painting lessons上绘画课 [高分句型] ①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作) ② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写演讲稿的形式，锻炼英语表达能力，学会感恩身边对自己有影响的人，同时培养学生对人物的描述和事件的叙述能力。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力、词汇运用能力以及对英语语法的掌握程度。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的培养要求，强调语言的实际运用和情感表达。通过这样的题目，引导学生关注身边的人和事，并用英语准确、流畅地表达自己的感受和想法。 （2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。 注意事项： 1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The Person I Want to Thank In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee. Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】学校人员、情感、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。 2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述自己最敬佩的人，锻炼用英语进行人物介绍和表达观点的能力。 能力考查：考查同学们的英语语言组织能力、对人物信息的描述能力，还有对所学词汇和语法的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的培养要求，让同学们能够用英语清晰、准确地表达自己的想法和感受。 （2021·江苏无锡·中考真题）今年以来，数位中科院院士相继离世，在社会各界纷纷表达惋惜之余，“谁是真正的偶像”的话题被再度热议。为此，Teens英文报特辟了主题为“Who You Admire Most”的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容，仅供参考。 Actors/Singers/… Scietists/Doctors/… ●Jackie Chan (Chinese kung fu superstar) ●Date of birth: Apr.7,1954(Hong Kong) ●Achievements: act in mearly 100 films; many awards; many years of charity work; help people in over 30 countries ●Yuan Longping (Father of Hybrid Rice) ●Date of firth: Sept.7, 1930 (Beijing) ●Achievements: develop a new type of hybrid rice (1970s; 20% more per unit); the World Food Prize(2004); save millions of lives 注意事项： 1. 短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在90个左右，短文标题已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among whom, Jackie Chan has impressed me most. He is the person I admire most. He is a Chinese kung fu superstar. He was born in Hong Kong on Apr. 7th, 1954. He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. His movies are very exciting. In order to make the movies real and excellent, he plays the roles of the movies carefully. So l admire him very much. Sometimes, he can hurt himself. He does many years of charity work. He helps people in over 30 countries. I should learn strong spirits from him. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】其他人、其他著名人物 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出自己最敬佩的一个人，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与主题紧密结合，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图在于通过让学生介绍读过的一本书，考查学生的英语表达能力和对书籍内容的理解与概括能力。同时，也引导学生关注世界读书日的主题，培养阅读兴趣。 能力考查：主要考查学生用英语清晰、准确地描述书籍的能力，包括书名、作者、故事内容、受欢迎程度等方面，还考查了学生组织语言和逻辑思维的能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励学生运用所学的英语知识进行书面表达，提高语言综合运用能力，并且能够在介绍书籍的过程中，培养文化意识和跨文化交流的能力。 （2020·江苏无锡·中考真题）今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求介绍你所读过的一本书。你草拟了写作流程图，请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。 Choose a book "Alice in Wonderland" "Gulliver's Travels" ... ↓ Describe the book Who is it about? What happened? What kind of book? ↓ Tell the reason Why do I like it? ... 注意事项： 1.短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.提供的书名非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3.词数在90个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the shark and the sea. What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book. Man is not made for defeat. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、阅读 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求根据草拟的写作流程图，介绍你所读过的一本书，用英语写一篇短文参加活动。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：share with，tell about，fight against，on the way back，give up。 句型：This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea. 这本书讲述了一位渔夫的故事，他幸运地在海上捕到了一条大鱼。who在句中引导定语从句，修饰前面的a fisherman。 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏无锡·三模）假设你是无锡某所中学的莉莉，你的英国笔友珍妮想了解中国学生课外阅读的情况。根据下图提示，给她回一封电子邮件。 注意事项： 1. 回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 2. 流程图中的提示为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在100个左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 回复的邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 5. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Jenny, Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Lily 2．（2024·江苏无锡·三模）莫言说，任何一个梦想，都可能因为读书而产生。为了号召青少年多读书、读好书，学校英语报Teens正在开展以“Growing up with reading”为主题的征文活动。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意事项： 1. 短文需自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在 100 个左右，短文标题已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 5. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Growing up with reading ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）中华文化源远流长，博大精深。我校学生会特组织用英语讲好中国故事活动，邀请同学们分系列介绍中国文化。本期主题是“我最喜欢的城市”，请介绍你最喜欢的城市并陈述理由。 注意事项： 1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在100个左右，文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 My Favourite City My favourite city is ___________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can visit it some day. 4．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）心若芬芳花自开。生活中总有一些瞬间让我们心生欢喜，一杯热茶、一次偶遇、亦或是一次成功…… 某英文网站正在开展以“我的小欢喜”为主题的征文活动。请你根据提示问题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次让你心生欢喜的经历。谈一谈为什么让你欢喜以及你的收获。 注意： 1. 内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在 100个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置。 提示问题： * What happened? * Why were you happy then? *What have you learned from the experience? Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏无锡·三模）2024无锡马拉松备受关注。迷人的春日美景与精彩的奔跑盛会完美相融。以一赛，见一城。锡马的十年，也是无锡快速发展的十年。在衣食住行等方面，无锡都呈现出了崭新的面貌。2025年，锡马将开启它的第二个十年。请你结合无锡的城市优势和马拉松给人们带来的积极影响，写一篇演讲稿，号召更多的人来参加明年3月的锡马，体验奔跑在最美樱花赛道上的幸福愉悦。 注意事项：1. 词数100个左右，演讲稿开头与结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 2. 图中内容为非限定性内容，可作参考； 3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置。 Dear friends, The 2024 Wuxi Marathon was successfully held on March 24, 2024. Over 260,000 people from 48 countries and areas attended the event. It’s an ideal choice for both first-time runners and experienced athletes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can take part in the 2025 Wuxi Marathon! Thanks for your listening. 6．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）为配合“全国文明城市”创建活动，你校英语俱乐部发起了创建“全国文明校园(National Civilised Campus)”的征文活动，倡议全校同学为创建文明校园贡献自己的力量。你草拟了写作流程图，请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。 注意事项： 1．短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2．流程图中方框部分非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3．词数在100个左右，短文的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4．短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）初中三年，我们身边也许都有这样一位好朋友。当我们需要的时候，给予温暖和力量；当我们身处黑暗的时候，他/她如一束光指引前进的方向。近来，学校英文报特辟了主题为“Five-Star Friend”的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。短文请包含以下要点： 1. His/Her personal information (name, age, hobbies & personalities) 2. A story (how your friend helped you) 3. Your thought and hope about your friendship 注意事项：1. 短文内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在 100 个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）童年是每个人的生命里最具有怀念意义的片段。六一将至，你校英语俱乐部即将举行主题为“回首童年定格美好”的展览，邀请俱乐部成员提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍，分享你与它的故事。假设你是俱乐部的一名成员，请根据你的展品写一篇英文介绍。 注意事项： 1.介绍须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.词数在100个左右，介绍首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 3.介绍中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4.介绍必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）成长对于青少年有着重大的意义。日前，学校公众号英语专栏以“Growing Up”为题，面向全体学生开展征文活动。请你参考下面提示图（图片为非限定性内容），从你对成长的认识出发，结合自己初中阶段的某个故事或某次经历，写一篇短文，谈谈你对成长的感受。 注意事项： 1.征文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.词数在100个左右，征文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.征文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4.征文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）学生更喜欢纸质书还是电子书? 学生最喜欢什么类型的书籍? 假如你是李华，就相关问题在班里做了调查，结果见下图。学校英语社团将举办“Reading Habits”主题活动，请你准备一份英文交流稿，包含以下内容：  (1)基于以下图表，简要叙述你的调查结果；  (2)陈述你自己的阅读喜好及原因；  (3)分享一本你最喜欢的书籍。 注意事项： 1.词数在 100个左右，交流稿开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.交流稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4.交流稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new word。 ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 11 江苏无锡 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写邮件的方式，介绍中国传统节日，加深对中华文化的理解和传承，同时提高英语书面表达能力和跨文化交流意识。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、词汇运用能力、语法掌握能力以及对中西方文化差异的了解。比如，能否准确描述节日的时间、庆祝方式，能否正确使用相关的英语词汇和句型。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的观点和想法，增强文化意识。 （2024·江苏无锡·中考真题）传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项： 1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival. Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】传统节日 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①put up couplets贴春联 ②set off the fireworks燃放烟花 [高分句型] ①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句) ②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写邮件的方式，锻炼用英语表达自己的烦恼和寻求建议的能力，同时培养学生的语言组织和逻辑思维能力。 能力考查：考查学生对一般现在时的运用，以及能否清晰、准确地描述自己的感受和问题。还考查学生是否能够根据题目要求，合理组织邮件的结构和内容。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力和书面表达能力的培养要求，让学生能够在实际情境中运用所学的英语知识进行交流和表达。 （2023·江苏无锡·中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。 注意事项： （1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； （2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Mr. Friend, I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】： Dear Mr. Friend, I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents? Can you give me some advice? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。 第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。 第三步，书写结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①argue with和某人争吵 ②care about关心 ③take painting lessons上绘画课 [高分句型] ①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作) ② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写演讲稿的形式，锻炼英语表达能力，学会感恩身边对自己有影响的人，同时培养学生对人物的描述和事件的叙述能力。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力、词汇运用能力以及对英语语法的掌握程度。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的培养要求，强调语言的实际运用和情感表达。通过这样的题目，引导学生关注身边的人和事，并用英语准确、流畅地表达自己的感受和想法。 （2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。 注意事项： 1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The Person I Want to Thank In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee. Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】学校人员、情感、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。 2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述自己最敬佩的人，锻炼用英语进行人物介绍和表达观点的能力。 能力考查：考查同学们的英语语言组织能力、对人物信息的描述能力，还有对所学词汇和语法的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的培养要求，让同学们能够用英语清晰、准确地表达自己的想法和感受。 （2021·江苏无锡·中考真题）今年以来，数位中科院院士相继离世，在社会各界纷纷表达惋惜之余，“谁是真正的偶像”的话题被再度热议。为此，Teens英文报特辟了主题为“Who You Admire Most”的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容，仅供参考。 Actors/Singers/… Scietists/Doctors/… ●Jackie Chan (Chinese kung fu superstar) ●Date of birth: Apr.7,1954(Hong Kong) ●Achievements: act in mearly 100 films; many awards; many years of charity work; help people in over 30 countries ●Yuan Longping (Father of Hybrid Rice) ●Date of firth: Sept.7, 1930 (Beijing) ●Achievements: develop a new type of hybrid rice (1970s; 20% more per unit); the World Food Prize(2004); save millions of lives 注意事项： 1. 短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在90个左右，短文标题已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among whom, Jackie Chan has impressed me most. He is the person I admire most. He is a Chinese kung fu superstar. He was born in Hong Kong on Apr. 7th, 1954. He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. His movies are very exciting. In order to make the movies real and excellent, he plays the roles of the movies carefully. So l admire him very much. Sometimes, he can hurt himself. He does many years of charity work. He helps people in over 30 countries. I should learn strong spirits from him. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】其他人、其他著名人物 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出自己最敬佩的一个人，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与主题紧密结合，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图在于通过让学生介绍读过的一本书，考查学生的英语表达能力和对书籍内容的理解与概括能力。同时，也引导学生关注世界读书日的主题，培养阅读兴趣。 能力考查：主要考查学生用英语清晰、准确地描述书籍的能力，包括书名、作者、故事内容、受欢迎程度等方面，还考查了学生组织语言和逻辑思维的能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励学生运用所学的英语知识进行书面表达，提高语言综合运用能力，并且能够在介绍书籍的过程中，培养文化意识和跨文化交流的能力。 （2020·江苏无锡·中考真题）今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求介绍你所读过的一本书。你草拟了写作流程图，请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。 Choose a book "Alice in Wonderland" "Gulliver's Travels" ... ↓ Describe the book Who is it about? What happened? What kind of book? ↓ Tell the reason Why do I like it? ... 注意事项： 1.短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.提供的书名非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3.词数在90个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the shark and the sea. What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book. Man is not made for defeat. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、阅读 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求根据草拟的写作流程图，介绍你所读过的一本书，用英语写一篇短文参加活动。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：share with，tell about，fight against，on the way back，give up。 句型：This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea. 这本书讲述了一位渔夫的故事，他幸运地在海上捕到了一条大鱼。who在句中引导定语从句，修饰前面的a fisherman。 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏无锡·三模）假设你是无锡某所中学的莉莉，你的英国笔友珍妮想了解中国学生课外阅读的情况。根据下图提示，给她回一封电子邮件。 注意事项： 1. 回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 2. 流程图中的提示为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在100个左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 回复的邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 5. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Jenny, Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Lily 2．（2024·江苏无锡·三模）莫言说，任何一个梦想，都可能因为读书而产生。为了号召青少年多读书、读好书，学校英语报Teens正在开展以“Growing up with reading”为主题的征文活动。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意事项： 1. 短文需自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在 100 个左右，短文标题已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 5. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Growing up with reading ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）中华文化源远流长，博大精深。我校学生会特组织用英语讲好中国故事活动，邀请同学们分系列介绍中国文化。本期主题是“我最喜欢的城市”，请介绍你最喜欢的城市并陈述理由。 注意事项： 1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在100个左右，文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 My Favourite City My favourite city is ___________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can visit it some day. 4．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）心若芬芳花自开。生活中总有一些瞬间让我们心生欢喜，一杯热茶、一次偶遇、亦或是一次成功…… 某英文网站正在开展以“我的小欢喜”为主题的征文活动。请你根据提示问题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次让你心生欢喜的经历。谈一谈为什么让你欢喜以及你的收获。 注意： 1. 内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在 100个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置。 提示问题： * What happened? * Why were you happy then? *What have you learned from the experience? Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏无锡·三模）2024无锡马拉松备受关注。迷人的春日美景与精彩的奔跑盛会完美相融。以一赛，见一城。锡马的十年，也是无锡快速发展的十年。在衣食住行等方面，无锡都呈现出了崭新的面貌。2025年，锡马将开启它的第二个十年。请你结合无锡的城市优势和马拉松给人们带来的积极影响，写一篇演讲稿，号召更多的人来参加明年3月的锡马，体验奔跑在最美樱花赛道上的幸福愉悦。 注意事项：1. 词数100个左右，演讲稿开头与结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 2. 图中内容为非限定性内容，可作参考； 3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置。 Dear friends, The 2024 Wuxi Marathon was successfully held on March 24, 2024. Over 260,000 people from 48 countries and areas attended the event. It’s an ideal choice for both first-time runners and experienced athletes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can take part in the 2025 Wuxi Marathon! Thanks for your listening. 6．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）为配合“全国文明城市”创建活动，你校英语俱乐部发起了创建“全国文明校园(National Civilised Campus)”的征文活动，倡议全校同学为创建文明校园贡献自己的力量。你草拟了写作流程图，请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。 注意事项： 1．短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2．流程图中方框部分非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3．词数在100个左右，短文的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4．短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）初中三年，我们身边也许都有这样一位好朋友。当我们需要的时候，给予温暖和力量；当我们身处黑暗的时候，他/她如一束光指引前进的方向。近来，学校英文报特辟了主题为“Five-Star Friend”的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。短文请包含以下要点： 1. His/Her personal information (name, age, hobbies & personalities) 2. A story (how your friend helped you) 3. Your thought and hope about your friendship 注意事项：1. 短文内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在 100 个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）童年是每个人的生命里最具有怀念意义的片段。六一将至，你校英语俱乐部即将举行主题为“回首童年定格美好”的展览，邀请俱乐部成员提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍，分享你与它的故事。假设你是俱乐部的一名成员，请根据你的展品写一篇英文介绍。 注意事项： 1.介绍须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.词数在100个左右，介绍首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 3.介绍中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4.介绍必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）成长对于青少年有着重大的意义。日前，学校公众号英语专栏以“Growing Up”为题，面向全体学生开展征文活动。请你参考下面提示图（图片为非限定性内容），从你对成长的认识出发，结合自己初中阶段的某个故事或某次经历，写一篇短文，谈谈你对成长的感受。 注意事项： 1.征文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.词数在100个左右，征文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.征文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4.征文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）学生更喜欢纸质书还是电子书? 学生最喜欢什么类型的书籍? 假如你是李华，就相关问题在班里做了调查，结果见下图。学校英语社团将举办“Reading Habits”主题活动，请你准备一份英文交流稿，包含以下内容：  (1)基于以下图表，简要叙述你的调查结果；  (2)陈述你自己的阅读喜好及原因；  (3)分享一本你最喜欢的书籍。 注意事项： 1.词数在 100个左右，交流稿开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.交流稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4.交流稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new word。 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Jenny, Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about the after-class reading in our school. In fact, most students in our school haven’t realized the importance of after-class reading. Some students prefer comic books to classic reading materials. Here are the reasons. Some students are too busy with after-school classes to do after-school reading. Some students haven’t formed a good habit of reading. Others have so little interest in reading that they don’t spend time reading at all. In the past few years, I have read many world classics. I have learned a lot from the books. In my opinion, books can open up a new world to us. So I suggest that everyone should have the habit of after-school reading. Best wishes! Yours, Lily 【难度】0.85 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文为一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和现在完成时； ③提示：邮件开头及写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，介绍中国学生课外阅读的现状，接着介绍学生不喜欢阅读的原因； 第三步，介绍自己的经历和建议。 [亮点词汇] ①in fact事实上 ②prefer…to…更喜欢…… ③too…to…太……以至于不能…… ④in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①Others have so little interest in reading that they don’t spend time reading at all.（so…that…引导的结果状语从句） 2．【满分优秀范文】 Growing up with reading Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can help us relax and open up our minds. Treasure Island is my favourite. It tells a story of a young boy. He sails on the sea to look for hidden treasure. His story gives me much confidence. I’m not as shy as before. I want to travel and have more exciting experiences in the future. I suggest that everyone should read Chinese ancient books, especially classical novels so that we can introduce our Chinese traditional culture to the world. The more we read, the brighter our future will become. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、阅读 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示内容；不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明阅读的重要性及好处； 第二步，介绍最喜欢的书及带给你的启发； 第三步，关于阅读的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①look for寻找 ②as ... as before像之前一样…… ③traditional culture传统文化 [高分句型] ①I suggest that everyone should read Chinese ancient books, especially classical novels so that we can introduce our Chinese traditional culture to the world. (that引导的宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句) ②The more we read, the brighter our future will become. (“The+比较级...，the+比较级...”句型) 3．【满分优秀范文】 My Favourite City My favourite city is Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, has a long history and culture. This city is famous in the world for its spectacular historical sites, modern buildings and rich cultural activities. Beijing is a city with multi-ethnic cultures, with colorful folk culture and delicious food, so that people can feel the charm of Chinese culture. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. Also, you can try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit. I hope you can visit it some day. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】城市、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我最喜欢的城市”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“地理位置、景点、美食、文化”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①the capital of……的首都 ②such as例如 ③learn about了解 [高分句型] ①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②I think Beijing is worth a visit.（省略that的宾语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it. In the final exam of last term, I failed my English exam. I was so depressed that I haven’t talked to anyone for two days. My parents worried about me and they tried to comfort me. They told me failure didn’t mean the end of the world. I could use this opportunity to improve my English and learn a lot from the failure. I was moved by them and promised I would do better next time. I felt my parents’ deep love and got power from their words from this experience. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题为材料作文； ②时态：文章主要是对过去经历的回忆，时态应用一般过去时； ③提示：写作行文思路应根据所给问题提示展开。 [写作步骤] 第一步，叙述自己的一次经历； 第二步，描述当时的心情； 第三步，谈谈自己对此次经历的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①worry about担心 ②learn a lot from从……学习 [高分句型] ①I was so depressed that I haven’t talked to anyone for two days.（so...that引导结果状语从句） ②I was moved by them and promised I would do better next time.（宾语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】 Dear friends, The 2024 Wuxi Marathon was successfully held on March 24, 2024. Over 260,000 people from 48 countries and areas attended the event. It’s an ideal choice for both first-time runners and experienced athletes. Wuxi is a beautiful city which is located in Jiangsu Province, China. The city is famous for its natural scenery. One of the most popular attractions in Wuxi is Lake Taihu, a large freshwater lake. Besides, the climate in Wuxi is fit for a happy living. The weather here is always warm and there is much rain. Moreover, Wuxi is a remarkable place that produces outstanding people. Many famous persons were born here, such as Xu Xiake, Xu Beihong, etc.   By the way, running a marathon is a challenging but beneficial experience that can have a huge impact on our physical and mental health. I hope all of you can take part in the 2025 Wuxi Marathon! Thanks for your listening. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】城市、健康与运动 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据思维导图中的内容进行介绍，号召更多的人来参加明年3月的锡马，可适当添加细节，但要突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出演讲主题，介绍无锡城市的一些优势； 第二步，介绍马拉松给人们带来的积极影响； 第三步，书写结语。希望更多的人来参加2025年3月的锡马。 [亮点词汇] ① be located in位于 ② be fit for适合 ③ moreover除此之外 ④ produce outstanding people培养优秀人才 ⑤ by the way顺便一提 ⑥ have a huge impact on...对……有积极影响 [高分句型] ① One of the most popular attractions in Wuxi is Lake Taihu, a large freshwater lake.（“one of the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数”句型） ② Moreover, Wuxi is a remarkable place that produces outstanding people.（that引导定语从句） ③ By the way, running a marathon is a challenging but beneficial experience that can have a huge impact on our physical and mental health.（动名词短语作主语及that引导定语从句） 6．【满分优秀范文】： In order to make our school become a national civilised campus, it’s necessary for us students to know what we should do and what we shouldn’t do. Firstly, as a student, we must study hard. We should listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time. Secondly, it’s important to follow the school rules. We shouldn’t fight with others or speak loudly in public. We can’t write or draw on the books or magazines borrowed from the school library. Besides, it’s much better to take action to protect the environment. Don’t throw rubbish or pick flowers. Last but not least, we should be willing to help people in need. For example, we can help our classmates with their lessons. In a word, let’s try our best to build our school into a civilised one. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是说明文； ② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：流程图即是要点内容，应不遗漏每个要点提示，结合实际展开阐述，并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述如何为创建文明校园贡献自己的力量； 第三步，总结，并号召为创建文明校园贡献自己的力量。 [亮点词汇] ①in order to do为了 ②in public当众 ③be willing to do乐意做某事 ④in a word总之 [高分句型] Secondly, it’s important to follow the school rules.（it的固定句型） 7．【满分优秀范文】 Five-Star Friend Friends can share our joy and sadness. So friendship plays an important role in our life. My best friend is Tom. He is fourteen. He likes doing sports. As a student, he is hard-working. As a friend, he is helpful. Once I had to make a speech in public. I was too shy to show myself. Tom kept encouraging me and teaching me useful skills. It was Tom who helped me practice again and again. He cheered for me when I spoke. That really touched me,   Tom is really a five-star friend in my mind. He is just like a candle to me. I hope we can support each other and our friendship will last long. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧、朋友 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的一个好朋友，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍朋友的个人信息； 第二步，介绍发生在和朋友之间的一个故事； 第三步，介绍自己对友谊的想法和希望。 [亮点词汇] ①too...to...太……而不能 ②again and again一次又一次 ③cheer for为……欢呼 [高分句型] ①It was Tom who helped me practice again and again. (强调句) ②He cheered for me when I spoke. (when引导的时间状语从句) 8．【满分优秀范文】 I’m happy to take part in the “Happy Childhood” show. For this show, I have chosen to provide a bamboo flute. The flute was a gift from my mother on my seventh birthday. It is an instrument made out of a single piece of bamboo. It is dark brown and has eight holes, which help make beautiful music. I chose this flute because it carries many memories from my childhood. I remember playing it for hours and hours. The music is so peaceful and calming that it holds a special place in my heart. The flute helps me learn a lot about music, culture and history. It is my friend. I hope everyone to the show will have a good time. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】个人经历、家具与家庭用品 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：介绍自己与参展作品之间的故事，注意要突出重点，保证逻辑清晰，语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出参展话题，以及参展的作品； 第二步，详细介绍参展的作品； 第三步，讲述自己参展作品之间的故事； 第四步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①be made out of由……制成 ②carries many memories from my childhood承载了许多童年的回忆 ③learn a lot about...学习很多关于……的知识 [高分句型] ①It is dark brown and has eight holes, which help make beautiful music.(定语从句) ②I chose this flute because it carries many memories from my childhood.(原因状语从句) ③The music is so peaceful and calming that it holds a special place in my heart.(结果状语从句) 9．【满分优秀范文】 Growing Up Growing up is meaningful to teenagers. In my opinion, I grow up in changes. The biggest change I’ve ever made is that I am not afraid of speaking to others any more. I used to be shy when I entered the middle school. It lasted for one year until I read the saying “It’s never too late to change” in my English book. I realized it’s time to change, so I began to communicate more with others and tried to speak louder when answering questions in class. Now my life is much more meaningful and colourful. I should be brave to improve myself when growing up. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——成长对青少年来说很有意义； 第二步，介绍自己在初中阶段关于成长的故事； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①In my opinion依我之见 ②be afraid of害怕…… ③not…any more不再 ④begin to do sth.开始做某事 [高分句型] ①Growing up is meaningful to teenagers.(动名词作主语) ②I used to be shy when I entered the middle school.(when引导的时间状语从句) 10．【满分优秀范文】 Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits. Here are my findings. Most students like reading paper books. Only 24.4% students use eBooks to read articles. They like reading novels best. Next comes the history books, taking up 22%. About 14% students like reading science books. As far as I’m concerned, I like reading magazines. There are many kinds of article types in magazines, and I can choose whatever I like to read. It can satisfy my desire to explore the world. My favourite magazine is Newboy. It is published every month. It’s really a good book to read. Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new world. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】阅读、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为交流稿； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候并引入文章主题； 第二步，介绍调查结果及自身的阅读喜好； 第三步，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①share sth with sb与某人分享某事 ②like...best最喜欢 ③take up占据 ④as far as sb’s concerned就某人而言 [高分句型] ①It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. (It作形式主语) ②There are many kinds of article types in magazines, and I can choose whatever I like to read. (whatever引导的宾语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$