09 江苏苏州-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

09 江苏苏州 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题思路和意图： 1. 鼓励同学们深入理解所读的英文小说，培养阅读理解和思考能力。 2. 通过选择标题并写作读后感，考查同学们对主题的把握和理解能力。 3. 要求结合实际生活举例，考查同学们将书中的道理与自身经历相结合的能力，以及对生活的观察和反思。 4. 规定词数、不能照抄阅读语篇等要求，考查同学们的语言组织和表达能力，以及对规则的遵守。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 对英语语言的运用能力，如词汇、语法的正确使用。 2. 逻辑思维能力，能够清晰地阐述对标题的理解、举例和启发。 3. 联系实际的能力，将书中的内容与个人生活经验相联系。 （2024·江苏苏州·中考真题）你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。 选择一：以Sometimes people surprise us为题，内容包括： 1．你对这句话的理解； 2．结合实际生活举例说明； 3．你得到的启发。 选择二：以Trouble is a friend为题，内容包括： 1．你对这句话的理解； 2．结合实际生活举例说明； 3．你得到的启发。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章； 3．照抄阅读语篇不得分； 4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Title: ____________ After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Title: Trouble is a friend After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend. The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend. In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly. In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】哲理感悟、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解； 第二步，结合实际生活举例说明； 第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。 [亮点词汇] ① thanks to多亏 ② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③ in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句） ②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.（原因状语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 通过让学生以特定的题目写一篇发言稿，来考查学生的语言综合运用能力。 它所考查的知识包括： 1. 词汇和语法的正确运用，比如各种时态（一般现在时、一般过去时）的使用。 2. 不同人称的恰当表述（第一人称“我”和第三人称“a couple”）。 所考查的能力有： 3. 观察和思考生活中现象的能力，就像题目中提到的被捡垃圾的夫妇触动这件事。 4. 逻辑思维能力，要把自己的想法有条理地组织起来，包括讲述经历、得出启示和发出倡议。 5. 语言表达能力，要用准确、流畅的英语把内容表达清楚。 （2023·江苏苏州·中考真题）Happy Home Club本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”，你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括： 1. 触动你的一件事情； 2. 这件事给你的启示； 3. 你的倡议。 注意： 1. 词数：100左右。 2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分） 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Starting from me and now ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Starting from me and now Last weekend, I went to the city park with my classmates. When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground. We felt very sad about that. The city is our home, so we should try our best to keep the city clean. First of all, we should protect our environment. Don’t throw rubbish around or spit anywhere. We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. Second, we are supposed to be friendly and helpful to others. Third, we ought to obey the traffic rules. Don’t ride too fast or play on the street. Last but not least, remember to save energy. Turn off the lights and taps in time. As long as we try our best and starting from me and now, I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】方法/策略、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示； 第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of 各种各样的 ②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事 ③remember to do sth. 记得做某事 ④in time 及时 [高分句型] ①When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground.（when引导时间状语从句） ②We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. （“sb. had better do sth.”表建议的句型） ③I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.（宾语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 1. 引导同学们深入理解和思考常见的英语谚语，培养对英语语言文化的理解和感悟能力。 2. 通过要求讲述对谚语的理解、结合生活事例以及个人感悟，考查同学们的语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对所学知识的实际运用能力。 3. 鼓励同学们从日常生活中寻找与英语学习相关的素材，锻炼观察和总结的能力。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 对英语谚语的理解和解释，这涉及到词汇、语法和对英语文化的了解。 2. 运用所学的英语词汇和语法来清晰、准确地表达自己的观点和想法。 3. 组织文章结构，使短文有清晰的开头、中间的事例阐述和结尾的总结感悟，展现良好的逻辑思维。 4. 考查同学们能否将所学的英语知识与实际生活相结合，做到学以致用。 （2022·江苏苏州·中考真题）《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 你对该谚语的理解； 2. 你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）； 3. 你的感悟， 注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Practice makes perfect Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Practice makes perfect Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able to perform it perfectly. The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. You can’t master English just by sitting at your desk. As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it. Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect. 【难度】0.15 【知识点】哲理感悟、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 这道题的命题思路和意图主要有以下几点： 1. 引导学生关注日常生活中的人际交往和冲突处理，培养学生的观察和思考能力。 2. 考查学生用英语描述事件的能力，包括清晰地叙述事情的经过、原因和结果。 3. 要求学生运用所学的英语词汇、语法和句型来表达自己的想法和感受。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 词汇方面，如“conflict”“organize”“quarrel”“apologize”等相关词汇的理解和运用。 2. 语法方面，像时间状语从句“When he arrived, I had a quarrel with him.”，条件状语从句“only if we all respect each other can we have a peaceful and pleasant atmosphere.”的正确使用。 3. 能力方面，考查学生的逻辑思维能力，能否有条理地讲述冲突的发生和解决；以及语言组织能力，能否用准确、流畅的英语表达出来。 （2021·江苏苏州·中考真题）在日常生活中, 冲突难免发生。请以 “A conflict with…”为题。用英语写下你与他人（如：家人, 老师, 同学等）或自己内心发生过的冲突故事。故事需包括冲突的发生和解决。 注意： 1. 词数：100左右; 2. 请先将标题填写完整，再写文章； 3文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名， 校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。 参考词汇：conflict 冲突 A conflict with ________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 A conflict with my mother In daily life, conflicts often occur. I sometimes have conflicts with my mother. When I got home, she always said a lot. She would ask me about my performance in class, how I got along with my classmates and so on. I felt really bored sometimes. I was very tired after a day’s class. When I got home, I just wanted to rest and didn’t want to talk. So whenever my mother asked me something, we always had some conflicts. Later, I told my good friend what I thought, and she suggested that I talk to my mother about what I really thought. I did as she suggested. I had a heart-to-heart talk with my mother. I explained my thoughts in detail to my mother. Instead of talking about it endlessly, my mother gave me more space and made me more independent. In the end, my relationship with my mother became very harmonious. We all became happier and more relaxed. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】叙事忆旧、家庭关系、个人经历 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己和谁发生了冲突，包括冲突的发生和解决，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 这道题的命题思路和意图主要有以下几点哦： 1. 考查学生的英语写作能力，包括语言组织、逻辑表达和词汇运用。 2. 引导学生关注环保主题，培养环保意识。 3. 测试学生对俱乐部活动相关词汇和表达的掌握，比如“DIY workshop”“recycled bottles”“hand out leaflets”等。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 词汇方面，像各种环保活动、俱乐部相关的词汇。 2. 语法方面，要求学生能正确使用一般现在时来描述俱乐部的常规活动。 3. 逻辑能力，要能清晰、有条理地介绍俱乐部的各项活动。 （2020·江苏苏州·中考真题）下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习，他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛，是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人，请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容，用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。 注意: 1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.文中须包括所有要点，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺； 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇: workshop  n. 工作坊 Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you! 【满分优秀范文】 Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you. All our club members meet every Friday afternoon to do something meaningful. We have DIY workshops. Here, old clothes can be made into handbags. It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks. Working as volunteers is our task as well. We hand out leaflets and tell people the importance of living a green life. Sometimes, we teach people how to separate waste in communities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we look after flowers and trees in our school. Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】社团/俱乐部 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求就所给提示介绍学校的绿色星球俱乐部，写一篇发言稿。文章时态用现在时，人称用第一人称。 2.例文点评：例文开头结尾都已给出，需要写作的部分只是画报上的关于俱乐部的简介。例文已包含题目所给全部要点，并进行了适当发挥，文章词句连贯、通顺，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的作文。 3.高分亮点： 短语：be made into，work as，hand out，clean up，look after。 句型： （1）Here, old clothes can be made into handbags.（被动语态） （2）It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.（it作形式主语） （3）Working as volunteers is our task as well.（动名词作主语） 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）Different people have different lives. The richness of life depends on ourselves. There are so many things we can do to better ourselves. Let’s find out what we can do and try to be a better self. 要点：What can we do and why? 要求：1. 条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确，字迹工整； 2. 100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 To be a better self Different people have different lives. The richness of life depends on ourselves. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s try to be a better self. 2．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）在初中三年的学习生活中，你迎难而上，勇于担当，逐渐成长为“眼中有光，心中有爱”的新时代中国青少年。作为初三年级的学生代表，请你根据以下中文提示写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享你身上的优秀品质和心路历程。 1.优秀品质     2.心路历程 (勤学好问，克服困难)      3.展望未来 要求: 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；   2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：90词左右 (征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）为创造美好的生活，学习基本的生活技能 (swimming, cooking, fixing, cleaning...) 在青少年的成长过程中十分必要。为鼓励青少年争做积极的生活者，校园广播“西附之声”特举办征文活动。请根据流程图的提示，围绕你选择的某项技能,以“A Little Life Skill Is A Big Help”为题写一篇征文。 注意事项： 1.观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名或校名等信息； 3.100词左右，已给部分不计入总词数。 A Little Life Skill Is A Big Help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now. 4．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）学生更喜欢纸质书还是电子书？学生最喜欢什么类型的书籍？假如你是李华，就相关问题在班里做了调查，结果见下图。学校英语社团将举办“Reading Habits”主题活动，请你准备一份英文交流稿，包含以下内容： 1. 基于以下图表，简要叙述你的调查结果； 2. 陈述你自己的阅读喜好及原因； 3. 分享一本你最喜欢的书籍。 注意事项： 1. 词数 100 左右，交流稿开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new world. 5．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）现在社会上存在过度溺爱孩子的现象，导致孩子们不懂关爱，不懂如何与人交往。请根据下图和提示以“Too Much Care Spoils (宠坏) a Child”为题写一篇100词左右的文章。 要点： 1. 简要描写图片内容； 2. 说明图片含义； 3. 表达你的观点。 参考词汇：blooming adj.盛开的      destroy v.摧毁 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）时间如白驹过隙，三年初中的学习生活即将过去，回顾你的这段学习生涯，你最想对自己说的一句话是什么？请你以这句话为标题，写一篇英语作文，内容包括： 1.你最想对自己说的一句话； 2.什么经历让你想对自己说这句话； 3.你的感受。 注意： 1.词数：100左右。 2.内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）。 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·江苏苏州·一模） 亲爱的十年后的自己： 你好！当你打开这封信的时候，我们已经相隔了整整十年的时光。 现在的我，正坐在考场里，提笔给未来的你写这封信，心中充满了感慨。 …… 内容要求：在这封信中，你可以谈谈自己现在的生活状态、学习情况，分享你的梦想和追求，也可以向未来的自己提出期望和建议。请充分发挥你的想象力，用英文书写这封跨越时空的信件。 注意： 1. 词数：100左右； 2. 内容完整（照抄试卷内容不得分）； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Dear future me, How are you! I am sitting in an exam classroom, pen in hand, writing a letter to you. By the time you open this letter, ten years will have passed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Love, Present me 8．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）从生物的解构、科幻小说的涌现、太极奥秘的探索、“嫦娥四号与玉兔”的中国式太空浪漫再到智能家居的日益普及。从古至今，人类对科学的追求从未止步。科学的不断发展给你的生活带来了怎样的影响？请以“Science Shapes Our Life”为题写一篇英语文章。内容应包括： 1.你对该问题的理解； 2.你的一次亲身经历； 3.你对未来科学的畅想。 注意： 1.词数100； 2.内容涵盖要点，照抄本卷语篇不得分； 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Science Shapes Our Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）中考将至，不同的同学在面对中考时有不同的情绪表现，因此你校将举行一次以“调节情绪，迎战中考”为主题的班会课，来探讨如何调节自己的情绪，请你为这次的班会课准备一份演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 简述面对中考，同学们不同的情绪及表现； 2. 提出调节情绪的方法（至少三点）； 3. 鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。 注意事项： 1. 词数：100左右（首尾不计入总字数）。 2. 围绕主题，表达内容积极向上（照抄阅读语篇不得分）。 3. 作文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. 10．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）2024年，苏州工业园区（Suzhou Industrial Park）迎来开发建设30周年。三十而立，繁花似锦。值此建区30周年之际，学校微信公众号拟举行征文比赛。请以“SIP in my eyes”为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1．Choose a word to describe SIP and explain why. 2．Introduce a place you like best in SIP and tell what people can do there. 3．Offer 1 or 2 suggestions for a better SIP. 注意： 1．词数100词左右； 2．内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 SIP in my eyes ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 09 江苏苏州 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题思路和意图： 1. 鼓励同学们深入理解所读的英文小说，培养阅读理解和思考能力。 2. 通过选择标题并写作读后感，考查同学们对主题的把握和理解能力。 3. 要求结合实际生活举例，考查同学们将书中的道理与自身经历相结合的能力，以及对生活的观察和反思。 4. 规定词数、不能照抄阅读语篇等要求，考查同学们的语言组织和表达能力，以及对规则的遵守。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 对英语语言的运用能力，如词汇、语法的正确使用。 2. 逻辑思维能力，能够清晰地阐述对标题的理解、举例和启发。 3. 联系实际的能力，将书中的内容与个人生活经验相联系。 （2024·江苏苏州·中考真题）你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。 选择一：以Sometimes people surprise us为题，内容包括： 1．你对这句话的理解； 2．结合实际生活举例说明； 3．你得到的启发。 选择二：以Trouble is a friend为题，内容包括： 1．你对这句话的理解； 2．结合实际生活举例说明； 3．你得到的启发。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章； 3．照抄阅读语篇不得分； 4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Title: ____________ After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Title: Trouble is a friend After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend. The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend. In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly. In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】哲理感悟、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解； 第二步，结合实际生活举例说明； 第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。 [亮点词汇] ① thanks to多亏 ② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③ in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句） ②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.（原因状语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 通过让学生以特定的题目写一篇发言稿，来考查学生的语言综合运用能力。 它所考查的知识包括： 1. 词汇和语法的正确运用，比如各种时态（一般现在时、一般过去时）的使用。 2. 不同人称的恰当表述（第一人称“我”和第三人称“a couple”）。 所考查的能力有： 3. 观察和思考生活中现象的能力，就像题目中提到的被捡垃圾的夫妇触动这件事。 4. 逻辑思维能力，要把自己的想法有条理地组织起来，包括讲述经历、得出启示和发出倡议。 5. 语言表达能力，要用准确、流畅的英语把内容表达清楚。 （2023·江苏苏州·中考真题）Happy Home Club本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”，你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括： 1. 触动你的一件事情； 2. 这件事给你的启示； 3. 你的倡议。 注意： 1. 词数：100左右。 2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分） 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Starting from me and now ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Starting from me and now Last weekend, I went to the city park with my classmates. When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground. We felt very sad about that. The city is our home, so we should try our best to keep the city clean. First of all, we should protect our environment. Don’t throw rubbish around or spit anywhere. We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. Second, we are supposed to be friendly and helpful to others. Third, we ought to obey the traffic rules. Don’t ride too fast or play on the street. Last but not least, remember to save energy. Turn off the lights and taps in time. As long as we try our best and starting from me and now, I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】方法/策略、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示； 第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of 各种各样的 ②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事 ③remember to do sth. 记得做某事 ④in time 及时 [高分句型] ①When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground.（when引导时间状语从句） ②We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. （“sb. had better do sth.”表建议的句型） ③I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.（宾语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 1. 引导同学们深入理解和思考常见的英语谚语，培养对英语语言文化的理解和感悟能力。 2. 通过要求讲述对谚语的理解、结合生活事例以及个人感悟，考查同学们的语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对所学知识的实际运用能力。 3. 鼓励同学们从日常生活中寻找与英语学习相关的素材，锻炼观察和总结的能力。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 对英语谚语的理解和解释，这涉及到词汇、语法和对英语文化的了解。 2. 运用所学的英语词汇和语法来清晰、准确地表达自己的观点和想法。 3. 组织文章结构，使短文有清晰的开头、中间的事例阐述和结尾的总结感悟，展现良好的逻辑思维。 4. 考查同学们能否将所学的英语知识与实际生活相结合，做到学以致用。 （2022·江苏苏州·中考真题）《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 你对该谚语的理解； 2. 你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）； 3. 你的感悟， 注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Practice makes perfect Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Practice makes perfect Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able to perform it perfectly. The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. You can’t master English just by sitting at your desk. As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it. Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect. 【难度】0.15 【知识点】哲理感悟、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 这道题的命题思路和意图主要有以下几点： 1. 引导学生关注日常生活中的人际交往和冲突处理，培养学生的观察和思考能力。 2. 考查学生用英语描述事件的能力，包括清晰地叙述事情的经过、原因和结果。 3. 要求学生运用所学的英语词汇、语法和句型来表达自己的想法和感受。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 词汇方面，如“conflict”“organize”“quarrel”“apologize”等相关词汇的理解和运用。 2. 语法方面，像时间状语从句“When he arrived, I had a quarrel with him.”，条件状语从句“only if we all respect each other can we have a peaceful and pleasant atmosphere.”的正确使用。 3. 能力方面，考查学生的逻辑思维能力，能否有条理地讲述冲突的发生和解决；以及语言组织能力，能否用准确、流畅的英语表达出来。 （2021·江苏苏州·中考真题）在日常生活中, 冲突难免发生。请以 “A conflict with…”为题。用英语写下你与他人（如：家人, 老师, 同学等）或自己内心发生过的冲突故事。故事需包括冲突的发生和解决。 注意： 1. 词数：100左右; 2. 请先将标题填写完整，再写文章； 3文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名， 校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。 参考词汇：conflict 冲突 A conflict with ________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 A conflict with my mother In daily life, conflicts often occur. I sometimes have conflicts with my mother. When I got home, she always said a lot. She would ask me about my performance in class, how I got along with my classmates and so on. I felt really bored sometimes. I was very tired after a day’s class. When I got home, I just wanted to rest and didn’t want to talk. So whenever my mother asked me something, we always had some conflicts. Later, I told my good friend what I thought, and she suggested that I talk to my mother about what I really thought. I did as she suggested. I had a heart-to-heart talk with my mother. I explained my thoughts in detail to my mother. Instead of talking about it endlessly, my mother gave me more space and made me more independent. In the end, my relationship with my mother became very harmonious. We all became happier and more relaxed. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】叙事忆旧、家庭关系、个人经历 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己和谁发生了冲突，包括冲突的发生和解决，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 这道题的命题思路和意图主要有以下几点哦： 1. 考查学生的英语写作能力，包括语言组织、逻辑表达和词汇运用。 2. 引导学生关注环保主题，培养环保意识。 3. 测试学生对俱乐部活动相关词汇和表达的掌握，比如“DIY workshop”“recycled bottles”“hand out leaflets”等。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 词汇方面，像各种环保活动、俱乐部相关的词汇。 2. 语法方面，要求学生能正确使用一般现在时来描述俱乐部的常规活动。 3. 逻辑能力，要能清晰、有条理地介绍俱乐部的各项活动。 （2020·江苏苏州·中考真题）下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习，他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛，是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人，请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容，用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。 注意: 1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.文中须包括所有要点，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺； 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇: workshop  n. 工作坊 Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you! 【满分优秀范文】 Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you. All our club members meet every Friday afternoon to do something meaningful. We have DIY workshops. Here, old clothes can be made into handbags. It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks. Working as volunteers is our task as well. We hand out leaflets and tell people the importance of living a green life. Sometimes, we teach people how to separate waste in communities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we look after flowers and trees in our school. Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】社团/俱乐部 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求就所给提示介绍学校的绿色星球俱乐部，写一篇发言稿。文章时态用现在时，人称用第一人称。 2.例文点评：例文开头结尾都已给出，需要写作的部分只是画报上的关于俱乐部的简介。例文已包含题目所给全部要点，并进行了适当发挥，文章词句连贯、通顺，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的作文。 3.高分亮点： 短语：be made into，work as，hand out，clean up，look after。 句型： （1）Here, old clothes can be made into handbags.（被动语态） （2）It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.（it作形式主语） （3）Working as volunteers is our task as well.（动名词作主语） 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）Different people have different lives. The richness of life depends on ourselves. There are so many things we can do to better ourselves. Let’s find out what we can do and try to be a better self. 要点：What can we do and why? 要求：1. 条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确，字迹工整； 2. 100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 To be a better self Different people have different lives. The richness of life depends on ourselves. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s try to be a better self. 2．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）在初中三年的学习生活中，你迎难而上，勇于担当，逐渐成长为“眼中有光，心中有爱”的新时代中国青少年。作为初三年级的学生代表，请你根据以下中文提示写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享你身上的优秀品质和心路历程。 1.优秀品质     2.心路历程 (勤学好问，克服困难)      3.展望未来 要求: 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；   2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：90词左右 (征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）为创造美好的生活，学习基本的生活技能 (swimming, cooking, fixing, cleaning...) 在青少年的成长过程中十分必要。为鼓励青少年争做积极的生活者，校园广播“西附之声”特举办征文活动。请根据流程图的提示，围绕你选择的某项技能,以“A Little Life Skill Is A Big Help”为题写一篇征文。 注意事项： 1.观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名或校名等信息； 3.100词左右，已给部分不计入总词数。 A Little Life Skill Is A Big Help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now. 4．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）学生更喜欢纸质书还是电子书？学生最喜欢什么类型的书籍？假如你是李华，就相关问题在班里做了调查，结果见下图。学校英语社团将举办“Reading Habits”主题活动，请你准备一份英文交流稿，包含以下内容： 1. 基于以下图表，简要叙述你的调查结果； 2. 陈述你自己的阅读喜好及原因； 3. 分享一本你最喜欢的书籍。 注意事项： 1. 词数 100 左右，交流稿开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new world. 5．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）现在社会上存在过度溺爱孩子的现象，导致孩子们不懂关爱，不懂如何与人交往。请根据下图和提示以“Too Much Care Spoils (宠坏) a Child”为题写一篇100词左右的文章。 要点： 1. 简要描写图片内容； 2. 说明图片含义； 3. 表达你的观点。 参考词汇：blooming adj.盛开的      destroy v.摧毁 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）时间如白驹过隙，三年初中的学习生活即将过去，回顾你的这段学习生涯，你最想对自己说的一句话是什么？请你以这句话为标题，写一篇英语作文，内容包括： 1.你最想对自己说的一句话； 2.什么经历让你想对自己说这句话； 3.你的感受。 注意： 1.词数：100左右。 2.内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）。 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·江苏苏州·一模） 亲爱的十年后的自己： 你好！当你打开这封信的时候，我们已经相隔了整整十年的时光。 现在的我，正坐在考场里，提笔给未来的你写这封信，心中充满了感慨。 …… 内容要求：在这封信中，你可以谈谈自己现在的生活状态、学习情况，分享你的梦想和追求，也可以向未来的自己提出期望和建议。请充分发挥你的想象力，用英文书写这封跨越时空的信件。 注意： 1. 词数：100左右； 2. 内容完整（照抄试卷内容不得分）； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Dear future me, How are you! I am sitting in an exam classroom, pen in hand, writing a letter to you. By the time you open this letter, ten years will have passed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Love, Present me 8．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）从生物的解构、科幻小说的涌现、太极奥秘的探索、“嫦娥四号与玉兔”的中国式太空浪漫再到智能家居的日益普及。从古至今，人类对科学的追求从未止步。科学的不断发展给你的生活带来了怎样的影响？请以“Science Shapes Our Life”为题写一篇英语文章。内容应包括： 1.你对该问题的理解； 2.你的一次亲身经历； 3.你对未来科学的畅想。 注意： 1.词数100； 2.内容涵盖要点，照抄本卷语篇不得分； 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Science Shapes Our Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）中考将至，不同的同学在面对中考时有不同的情绪表现，因此你校将举行一次以“调节情绪，迎战中考”为主题的班会课，来探讨如何调节自己的情绪，请你为这次的班会课准备一份演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 简述面对中考，同学们不同的情绪及表现； 2. 提出调节情绪的方法（至少三点）； 3. 鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。 注意事项： 1. 词数：100左右（首尾不计入总字数）。 2. 围绕主题，表达内容积极向上（照抄阅读语篇不得分）。 3. 作文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. 10．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）2024年，苏州工业园区（Suzhou Industrial Park）迎来开发建设30周年。三十而立，繁花似锦。值此建区30周年之际，学校微信公众号拟举行征文比赛。请以“SIP in my eyes”为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1．Choose a word to describe SIP and explain why. 2．Introduce a place you like best in SIP and tell what people can do there. 3．Offer 1 or 2 suggestions for a better SIP. 注意： 1．词数100词左右； 2．内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 SIP in my eyes ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 To be a better self Different people have different lives. The richness of life depends on ourselves.   There are so many things we can do to better ourselves, such as reading, traveling and helping others. Reading is always a wonderful time. Good books are good friends. They can not only help me relax after a busy day but also open up a whole new world to me. Besides, seeing is believing. We should also travel to different places to learn about different cultures. Reading and travelling make a full man. To make ourselves better, we can also try our best to help others. Helping others is helping ourselves. If everyone gives a helping hand, our world will be more beautiful.        Let’s try to be a better self. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】意见/建议、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，引出主题； 第二步，具体阐述通过做什么来让自己变得更好； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②open up打开 ③learn about了解 ④not only…but also…不仅……而且 [高分句型] If everyone gives a helping hand, our world will be more beautiful. (if引导的条件状语从句) 2．【满分优秀范文】 During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities. Firstly, I tried to overcome all kinds of problems. When facing the difficulties that I couldn’t solve, I would turn to my classmates or teachers for help. I believed I could learn a lot from them. Secondly, I learned to be confident. Confidence can make one shine like the sunshine. Many friends told me that I encouraged them in life and studies by my confident smile. It also helped me make many friends.    As a teenager in the new times, I often help people who need help in daily life. I find I love my life more after helping others. At the same time, I will keep studying and go towards a wider world. I hope we can grow together. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】精神品质、个人经历、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的优秀品质和经历； 第二步，简要介绍心路历程及体会； 第三步，表达未来期望。 [亮点词汇] ①a wider world更广阔的世界 ②grow together一起成长 [高分句型] ①When facing the difficulties that I couldn’t solve, I would turn to my classmates or teachers for help. (定语从句) ②I find I love my life more after helping others. (宾语从句) 3．【满分优秀范文】 Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills. As for me, I would like to choose cooking which is a basic skill in our daily life. It’s wonderful to create my own dishes. I hope I can take care of myself when my parents are not at home. Besides, learning to look after my family is also my wish. In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. There are many short videos about cooking on the Internet. Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】劳动实践、计划、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料提示写作要点不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出话题； 第二步，阐述自己想学习的生活技能、原因以及学习方式； 第三步，书写结语，发出号召。 [亮点词汇] ①be supposed to应该 ②as for me对我来说 ③look after照顾 [高分句型] ①As for me, I would like to choose cooking which is a basic skill in our daily life.（定语从句） ②I hope I can take care of myself when my parents are not at home. （宾语从句；时间状语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits. Here are my findings. Most students like reading paper books. Only 24.4% students use e-Books to read articles. They like reading novels best. Next comes the history books, taking up 22%. About 14% students like reading science books. As far as I’m concerned, I like reading magazines. There are many kinds of article types in magazines, and I can choose whatever I like to read. It can satisfy my desire to explore the world. My favourite magazine is Newboy. It is published every month. It’s really a good book to read. Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new world. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】阅读、爱好 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意仔细观察图表内容并合理描述，需包含所有要点，可适当发挥使行文更连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己，引出主题； 第二步，分析图表，简述调查结果； 第三步，陈述自己的阅读喜好及原因，并分享最喜欢的书籍。 [亮点词汇] ① take up占据 ② as far as I’m concerned就我而言 [高分句型] ① There are many kinds of article types in magazines, and I can choose whatever I like to read.（并列句+宾语从句） ② It is published every month.（被动语态） 5．【满分优秀范文】   As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over­watering. Often people do things with good intentions, but the result may be quite different. Such can also be the case with us while we grow up.   To spare us the kind of hardships they had in their childhood, our parents tend to offer us too much care, for example, making beds, washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us. They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us. As children, what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent. Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】青少年问题 【详解】总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图片和参考词汇，围绕话题完成写作，注意语句通顺连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描写图片内容，说明图片含义； 第二步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be destroyed by被……破坏 ②intention意图 ③hardship困难 ④tend to do sth倾向于做…… ⑤offer sb sth为某人提供某物 ⑥spoil溺爱 ⑦independent独立的 ⑧shoulder one’s due responsibilities承担某人应有的责任 [高分句型] ①As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over­watering. (被动语态) ②As children, what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent. (what引导主语从句，so that引导目的状语从句) ③Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities. (部分倒装) 6．【满分优秀范文】 Learn to Smile Though many words are encouraging, what I would like to say to myself is “learn to smile”. As the saying goes, attitude decides everything. Since smiling is a positive attitude, I often smile to myself to become confident and happy. In my daily life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, I don’t do well in all the subjects, or I’m misunderstood by friends. Then I say to myself, “Learn to smile.” Smiling to myself can really bring confidence back to me and beat the unhappy feelings. In a word, smiling is a language which can make me understood by others. I believe the more I smile, the happier life I will live. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】个人经历、个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图：最想对自己说的话是什么； 第二步，介绍自己的经历，为什么想对自己说这句话； 第三步，书写结语。描述自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①For example例如 ②learn to smile学会微笑 ③In a word总之 ④do well in擅长 [高分句型] ①Since smiling is a positive attitude, I often smile to myself to become confident and happy. (原因状语从句) ②In a word, smiling is a language which can make me understood by others. (定语从句) 7．【满分优秀范文】 Dear future me, How are you! I am sitting in an exam classroom, pen in hand, writing a letter to you. By the time you open this letter, ten years will have passed. As I write to you from the past, I can’t quite imagine what kind of person you’ve become. Right now, I’m a teenager who loves trying new things. I dream of exploring new places, where each step takes me closer to understanding the world. I want to be someone who makes the world a better place. I know the years ahead will be filled with ups and downs, but each experience is a valuable lesson, isn’t it? Dear future me, wherever you are and whatever you’re doing, I hope you’ve learned to love yourself. Remember, I am always here with you. Love, Present me 【难度】0.65 【知识点】愿望、个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据内容要求进行写作，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，注意无单词及语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达此刻正在给十年后的自己写信； 第二步，介绍自己现在的状况，并分享自己的梦想和追求； 第三步，对未来的自己提出期望及建议。 [亮点词汇] ①dream of doing sth梦想做某事 ②be filled with充满 ③ups and downs起伏 [高分句型] ①As I write to you from the past, I can’t quite imagine what kind of person you’ve become. (what引导宾语从句) ②Right now, I’m a teenager who loves trying new things. (who引导定语从句) 8．【满分优秀范文】 Science Shapes Our Life In the last few decades, science has developed at high speed, and played an important role in our daily lives. It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better. Recently, my family decided to embrace the future of transportation by purchasing a new energy vehicle. I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car. Furthermore, new energy vehicles use electric energy as a power source. Electricity can be obtained through a variety of ways, including renewable energy such as solar and wind energy, so the popularity of electric vehicles has a positive impact on the environment. Looking ahead, the future of science appears promising, with endless possibilities waiting to be explored and discovered. Advances in fields such as artificial intelligence, biotechnology, and space exploration hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】个人经历、畅想未来、科学技术 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍科学发展带给生活什么样的影响； 第二步，讲述科学发展影响自身生活的经历； 第三步，表达对未来科学的畅想。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中起重要作用 ②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ③compared with与……相比 ④have a positive impact on对……有积极的影响 [高分句型] ①It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.（强调句） ②I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car.（省略that的宾语从句） ③…hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.（省略that的定语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】     Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently.     Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exam?     First, it is important for us to be in a good mood. Second, we should have proper aims. Third, we should have enough sleep instead of staying up late. Fourth, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates. Last but not least, we should face the High School Entrance Exam positively and optimistically.     Thank you for your listening. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述面对中考，同学们不同的情绪及表现，比如有些同学感到自信和兴奋，而有些同学感到紧张、压力过大，这导致他们吃不好也睡不好； 第二步，具体提出调节情绪的方法，例如保持心情愉悦、制定合适的目标、保证充足的睡眠、多和父母、老师、同学们沟通交流等； 第三步，书写结束语，鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。 [亮点词汇] ①try their best to 尽他们最大的努力 ②stressed out 极度焦虑的 ③in order to 为了 ④be in a good mood 心情愉悦 ⑤instead of 代替，而不是 ⑥stay up late 熬夜 ⑦Last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点 ⑧positively and optimistically 积极乐观地 [高分句型] ①Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. （and连接的并列句） ②While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句） 10．【满分优秀范文】 SIP in my eyes Great changes have taken place in Suzhou Industrial Park since it was built 30 years ago. I think it is modern because it is equipped with different kinds of high technology and it also has many tall buildings. I like the Jinji Lake best in SIP. I think it is very beautiful. There are some places of interest so people can enjoy beautiful views there. People can buy different kinds of art works in the Chengpin Bookstore. People can also take a walk or run in the morning because there is a 14-kilometer-long trail along the lake. I think the government should build more libraries so that people there can read more books. I hope everyone can make efforts to build a better SIP. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】景点/建筑 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己眼中的苏州工业园区，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用一个词描述苏州工业园区； 第二步，接受苏州工业园区的一个地方以及在那里人们可以做什么； 第三步，为更好的苏州工业园区提供1到2条建议。 [亮点词汇] ①take place发生 ②be equipped with装备有 ③places of interest名胜古迹 ④make efforts to do sth.努力做某事 [高分句型] ①I think it is modern because it is equipped with different kinds of high technology and it also has many tall buildings. 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