08 江苏连云港-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

08 江苏连云港 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题思路和意图主要有以下几点： 1. 考查学生的书信写作能力，包括格式、语言表达和逻辑组织。 2. 引导学生对传统文化的了解和介绍，通过描述中国剪纸这一传统礼物，加深对本国文化的认知和传承。 3. 测试学生用英语清晰阐述事物的能力，比如礼物是什么、送礼物的原因以及制作过程。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 词汇和语法知识，要能准确运用相关词汇和句型来表达想法。 2. 逻辑思维能力，使回信内容条理清晰、层次分明。 3. 文化知识，对中国传统文化元素的理解和表达。 （2024·江苏连云港·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）你送的礼物是什么； （2）你送此礼物的原因； （3）制作的方法或过程。 注意: （1）词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文1】 Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. As the Dragon Boat Festival was coming, I decided to make a Xiang Bao for you. People in China, especially children wear it at the festival. We believe it can bring us good luck. To make it, I prepared some string and a small bag that looks like a rice dumping. I also collected some leaves of a special plant called Ai Cao. Then, I put Ai Cao into the bag and tied it with the string. Next time you come to China, I’ll show you how to make it. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文2】 Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. It’s an unusual picture of us. I hope it can remind you of the happy time we were together. Here is how to make it. First, choose a picture you like. It should be large and clear. Second, cover the picture with a piece of paper and draw along the lines. Then stick colorful beans and rice on the paper according to the drawing. Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural. Hope you enjoy it. Looking forward to your work. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】DIY 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息。可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己送的礼物是什么； 第二步，介绍自己为什么送这件礼物，阐明原因； 第三步，着重介绍制作这份礼物的方法或过程。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth.决定做某事 ②remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事 ③so that以便 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①We believe it can bring us good luck.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.（so that引导目的状语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题思路和意图主要有以下几点： 1. 考查学生对地理位置、天气、名胜古迹、文化以及友好待人等方面的英语表达能力。 2. 意图是让学生能够运用所学的英语知识，有条理地介绍一个地方，包括其基本信息和特色。 3. 所考查的知识包括词汇（如地名、天气词汇、名胜相关词汇等）、语法（如一般现在时的正确使用）和句子结构的组织。 4. 能力方面，考查学生的信息整合能力、语言组织能力和逻辑思维能力，让学生能够清晰、准确地用英语传达信息，并吸引读者的兴趣。 （2023·江苏连云港·中考真题）走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。 注意： （1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Welcome to Lianyungang I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Welcome to Lianyungang I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. Lianyungang lies in the north-east of Jiangsu. It’s famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It’s cool in summer. Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I’m sure you will enjoy it. Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”. Welcome to our hometown. We’re looking forward to meeting you soon. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】城市 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明连云港的地理位置以及著名的景点； 第二步，介绍连云港丰富的文化和当地的人们以及食物； 第三步，最后邀请大家来连云港做客。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②moreover而且 ③look forward to doing期待做 [高分句型] Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”.（when引导的时间状语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题思路和意图： 1. 它以“双减”后的暑假生活为背景，贴近同学们的现实生活，让大家能够有话可说，有想法可表达。 2. 考查同学们对英语语言的运用能力，包括词汇（比如“housework”“knowledge”等）、短语（像“keep healthy”“look after”“open up”等）和句型（例如“It's necessary for us to...”）的掌握。 3. 引导同学们思考如何合理安排暑假生活，培养规划和表达自己观点的能力 所考查的知识和能力主要有： 1. 词汇知识：要求同学们熟悉与日常生活、活动相关的单词。 2. 语法知识：正确使用一般现在时等时态来描述日常活动。 3. 写作能力：能够有条理地组织语言，清晰地表达自己的建议和理由。 （2022·江苏连云港·中考真题）“双减”之后，如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义？请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。 注意： （1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Happy Summer Vacation The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Happy Summer Vacation The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice. First, we can do some sports. We can go running every morning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can do some housework at home. It’s necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves. What’s more, we need to read some books. Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new world to us. We can also join some clubs, such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club. It can help us develop our hobbies. I hope you can have a colourful vacation. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】假日活动、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从运动，做家务，阅读和参加俱乐部四方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题思路和意图主要有以下几点： 1. 考查学生对人物描述的英语表达能力，包括对人物品质、事迹的描述。 2. 引导学生运用所学的英语词汇和句型，如“polite”“be ready to do sth.”“be willing to do sth.”“participate in”“such...that...”等，来准确地表达人物的特点和行为。 3. 培养学生的逻辑思维和组织语言的能力，使学生能够有条理地介绍一个人的品质和事迹，并给出合理的评价。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 词汇方面，考查学生对描述人物品质、活动等相关词汇的掌握，如“polite”“kind”“patient”“clean”“carry”“recommend”等。 2. 语法方面，考查了一般现在时、一般过去时的运用，以及形容词、动词短语的正确使用。 3. 能力方面，考查学生的阅读理解能力，能否理解题目要求；写作能力，能否根据要求组织语言，写出一篇连贯、逻辑清晰的短文；以及知识运用能力，能否将所学的词汇、语法知识灵活运用到写作中。 （2021·江苏连云港·中考真题）我市第八届 “最美港城人”系列评选活动正在进行，你班决定推荐李华参加其类别之一“最美志愿者”的评选。请你以 “The Most Beautiful Volunteer为题，给校英文报写一篇短文介绍李华，内容包括： （1）品质： 礼貌、善良、有耐心； （2）事迹：乐于帮助老师和同学；周末参加各类活动，如去街道打扫卫生；另举两例； （3）你的评价：至少两条。 注意： （1）词数 90 左右； （2）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 The Most Beautiful Volunteer _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The Most Beautiful Volunteer Li Hua is a polite boy. He is both kind and patient. He is a helpful volunteer. At school, he is ready to help teachers and classmates. At weekends, he takes part in lots of activities. He often does some cleaning in the street. Besides, he goes to the library to help carry books. Also, he looks after old people in the nursing home. We all think Li Hua is such an excellent boy that we should learn from him. We’d like to recommend him for The Most Beautiful Volunteer. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】学校人员、志愿服务 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“最美丽的志愿者”为题，介绍李华的相关事迹。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段介绍他的具体事迹；第三段表达推荐李华参加这个评选的意愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020这道题的命题思路在于将《西游记》的文化元素与英语写作相结合，意图是考查学生的英语表达能力、对文化的理解以及组织信息的能力。所考查的知识包括英语书信的格式、词汇和语法，以及对《西游记》相关内容的了解。能力方面，重点考查学生的语言运用、逻辑思维和跨文化交际能力。 （2020·江苏连云港·中考真题）2020年6月，我市西游文化嘉年华（carnival）活动全面启动。为了鼓励同学们更好地阅读与理解《西游记》，你校组织了“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一封信，邀请外籍教师Nick参与评选。内容包括： （1）活动名称及目的； （2）时间地点：7月20日下午6:00前，学校网站； （3）参与方式：观看唱歌、故事讲述、短剧表演等视频作品，投票选择“最佳美猴王”； （4）希望他…… 注意： （1）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； （4）参考词汇：《西游记》Journey to the West   才艺展示 talent show Dear Nick, The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Nick, The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. To encourage students to better read and understand Journey to the West, our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King. I’m writing to invite you to vote for us. You’re expected to visit our school’s website before 6 p.m. on July 20. There are not only videos of songs, stories but also short plays. You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well. We’d like you to vote for the best Monkey King. I hope you’ll like these works and learn more about Journey to the West. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.4 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、教育 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求以李华的名义，用英语写一封信，邀请外籍教师Nick参与评选你校组织的“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、二人称。书信第一段提出了活动的名称及目的，第二段提到了活动的时间及参与方式，第三段提出了希望；文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：encourage…to…；write to；be expected to；not only…but also…；as well；would like sb to do sth；learn more about。 句型：1. To encourage students to better read and understand Journey to the West, our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King. 2. There are not only videos of songs, stories but also short plays. 3. You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well. 4. I hope you’ll like these works and learn more about Journey to the West. 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）作为一名中学生，我们担负着弘扬中国传统文化的责任。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友吉姆对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你根据提示内容写封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的端午节的情况。 要点提示： 1.节日时间及目的：农历的五月第五天，纪念 (in memory of) 诗人屈原。 2.喜欢原因：家人团聚，…… 3.庆祝方式：包粽子，…… 4.…… （1）短文必须包含提示中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 （3）词数：90~100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to know that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce my favourite one, the Dragon Boat festival to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·江苏连云港·三模）在生活的长河中，每个人都是一名独特的航行者，追寻着属于自己的梦想和荣光。在这段旅程中，我们经历了无数的挑战和困难，也收获了无数的欢笑和泪水。其中，总会有一件事情，让我们深感骄傲与自豪。校报英语编辑部正开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的征文活动。请你结合提示中的问题写一篇短文投稿。 1. What is the thing you are proud of? 2. When did it happen and what did you do? 3. Why does it make you proud? 注意事项： （1）词数100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； One Thing I’m Proud of The thing I am proud of is that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）美好生活，健康同行。如何丰富校园生活，促进同学们的身心健康？目前，你校英语网站“VOICE OF TEENS”正在征集同学们的建议。请你根据下图提示，以“How to keep healthy”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享你的建议。 注意： （1）词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 How to keep healthy Health is the base of everything. Then how can we keep healthy? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Follow these tips, and we will surely be in good health. 4．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）生活技能对于个人的成长和成功起着重要的作用。掌握常用生活技能，可以把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。21st Century英文报社现征集题为 “Life skills” 的英语演讲稿，假如你是林涛，请根据下面的思维导图，用英语写一篇演讲稿，描述你应该具备的生活技能以及如何提高这些技能。 注意： 1. 词数90左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容包含思维导图所含提示，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Learning life skills is necessary for our growth and success. What kind of life skills should we learn? And how to improve them? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）学校英语网站近日将举办中国传统文化展。请你根据以下提示，给你们的外教MissTailor写一封邮件，邀请她参加。 Time & Place next Friday afternoon; school hall People the teachers, the students Activities display some books and works of art; ... Purpose feel the beauty of Chinese culture; ... Hope 注意： (1)邮件应包括所给信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (2)词数90左右，邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 (4)参考词汇：the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair 传统文化展 Dear Miss Tailor, I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair in our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 6．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）假如你是李华，上周你校举行了“Enjoy culture, enjoy life!”为主题的校园文化周活动，请你根据以下提示信息，为校英文报写一篇活动报道。 注意： （1）短文应包括所给提示信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Enjoy culture, enjoy life! The Culture Week took place in our school last week. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）习主席曾说：“民之所忧，我必念之；民之所盼，我必行之。”作为中学生的我们，应该如何对自己、家庭和社会负责呢？请以“How to Be a Responsible (有责任心的) Student?”为题写一篇短文。 注意： 1. 短文须包含所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 How to be a responsible student In the school study hard; At home do some dishes; In public help the elderly cross the road; ... Your hope How to Be a Responsible Student? As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we need to be responsible._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）离别是“桃花潭水深千尺”的不舍，是“莫愁天下无知己”的期盼。在毕业匆匆的日子里，你们肯定有许多关于学校的美好记忆。现21世纪英语网站正在举行以“A Special School Memory”为主题的英语征文活动，请根据下面的思维导图，写一篇英语短文。 When did it happen? A Special School Memory How did you feel? Who was in your memory? What do you think of the memory? What happened? (a Reading Week /a sports meeting /an exam /a singing competition…) Why do you still remember it? 注意: 1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 2. 内容必须包括表格中的要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。 A Special School Memory Time flies by quickly. Soon I will graduate from this school soon. In the past these days, I have had many great memories. Here is one of my special memories. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·江苏连云港·一模）母亲节即将到来，你校英语角将举行以“My plan for Mother’s Day”为题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下问题提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的计划，感恩母爱。 注意：(1)短文应包括所给问题提示，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 My plan for Mother’s Day Mother’s day is coming. It is a day to express our thanks to our mother. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·江苏连云港·一模）享受阅读，享受生活。为了迎接世界读书日，学校英语俱乐部上个星期组织了“Enjoy reading, enjoy life”为主题的校园读书节系列活动。请你根据以下提示，为校英文报写一篇活动报道。 注意: (1)词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Enjoy reading, enjoy life! To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 08 江苏连云港 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题思路和意图主要有以下几点： 1. 考查学生的书信写作能力，包括格式、语言表达和逻辑组织。 2. 引导学生对传统文化的了解和介绍，通过描述中国剪纸这一传统礼物，加深对本国文化的认知和传承。 3. 测试学生用英语清晰阐述事物的能力，比如礼物是什么、送礼物的原因以及制作过程。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 词汇和语法知识，要能准确运用相关词汇和句型来表达想法。 2. 逻辑思维能力，使回信内容条理清晰、层次分明。 3. 文化知识，对中国传统文化元素的理解和表达。 （2024·江苏连云港·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）你送的礼物是什么； （2）你送此礼物的原因； （3）制作的方法或过程。 注意: （1）词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文1】 Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. As the Dragon Boat Festival was coming, I decided to make a Xiang Bao for you. People in China, especially children wear it at the festival. We believe it can bring us good luck. To make it, I prepared some string and a small bag that looks like a rice dumping. I also collected some leaves of a special plant called Ai Cao. Then, I put Ai Cao into the bag and tied it with the string. Next time you come to China, I’ll show you how to make it. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文2】 Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. It’s an unusual picture of us. I hope it can remind you of the happy time we were together. Here is how to make it. First, choose a picture you like. It should be large and clear. Second, cover the picture with a piece of paper and draw along the lines. Then stick colorful beans and rice on the paper according to the drawing. Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural. Hope you enjoy it. Looking forward to your work. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】DIY 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息。可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己送的礼物是什么； 第二步，介绍自己为什么送这件礼物，阐明原因； 第三步，着重介绍制作这份礼物的方法或过程。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth.决定做某事 ②remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事 ③so that以便 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①We believe it can bring us good luck.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.（so that引导目的状语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题思路和意图主要有以下几点： 1. 考查学生对地理位置、天气、名胜古迹、文化以及友好待人等方面的英语表达能力。 2. 意图是让学生能够运用所学的英语知识，有条理地介绍一个地方，包括其基本信息和特色。 3. 所考查的知识包括词汇（如地名、天气词汇、名胜相关词汇等）、语法（如一般现在时的正确使用）和句子结构的组织。 4. 能力方面，考查学生的信息整合能力、语言组织能力和逻辑思维能力，让学生能够清晰、准确地用英语传达信息，并吸引读者的兴趣。 （2023·江苏连云港·中考真题）走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。 注意： （1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Welcome to Lianyungang I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Welcome to Lianyungang I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. Lianyungang lies in the north-east of Jiangsu. It’s famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It’s cool in summer. Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I’m sure you will enjoy it. Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”. Welcome to our hometown. We’re looking forward to meeting you soon. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】城市 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明连云港的地理位置以及著名的景点； 第二步，介绍连云港丰富的文化和当地的人们以及食物； 第三步，最后邀请大家来连云港做客。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②moreover而且 ③look forward to doing期待做 [高分句型] Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”.（when引导的时间状语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题思路和意图： 1. 它以“双减”后的暑假生活为背景，贴近同学们的现实生活，让大家能够有话可说，有想法可表达。 2. 考查同学们对英语语言的运用能力，包括词汇（比如“housework”“knowledge”等）、短语（像“keep healthy”“look after”“open up”等）和句型（例如“It's necessary for us to...”）的掌握。 3. 引导同学们思考如何合理安排暑假生活，培养规划和表达自己观点的能力 所考查的知识和能力主要有： 1. 词汇知识：要求同学们熟悉与日常生活、活动相关的单词。 2. 语法知识：正确使用一般现在时等时态来描述日常活动。 3. 写作能力：能够有条理地组织语言，清晰地表达自己的建议和理由。 （2022·江苏连云港·中考真题）“双减”之后，如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义？请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。 注意： （1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Happy Summer Vacation The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Happy Summer Vacation The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice. First, we can do some sports. We can go running every morning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can do some housework at home. It’s necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves. What’s more, we need to read some books. Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new world to us. We can also join some clubs, such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club. It can help us develop our hobbies. I hope you can have a colourful vacation. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】假日活动、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从运动，做家务，阅读和参加俱乐部四方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题思路和意图主要有以下几点： 1. 考查学生对人物描述的英语表达能力，包括对人物品质、事迹的描述。 2. 引导学生运用所学的英语词汇和句型，如“polite”“be ready to do sth.”“be willing to do sth.”“participate in”“such...that...”等，来准确地表达人物的特点和行为。 3. 培养学生的逻辑思维和组织语言的能力，使学生能够有条理地介绍一个人的品质和事迹，并给出合理的评价。 所考查的知识和能力包括： 1. 词汇方面，考查学生对描述人物品质、活动等相关词汇的掌握，如“polite”“kind”“patient”“clean”“carry”“recommend”等。 2. 语法方面，考查了一般现在时、一般过去时的运用，以及形容词、动词短语的正确使用。 3. 能力方面，考查学生的阅读理解能力，能否理解题目要求；写作能力，能否根据要求组织语言，写出一篇连贯、逻辑清晰的短文；以及知识运用能力，能否将所学的词汇、语法知识灵活运用到写作中。 （2021·江苏连云港·中考真题）我市第八届 “最美港城人”系列评选活动正在进行，你班决定推荐李华参加其类别之一“最美志愿者”的评选。请你以 “The Most Beautiful Volunteer为题，给校英文报写一篇短文介绍李华，内容包括： （1）品质： 礼貌、善良、有耐心； （2）事迹：乐于帮助老师和同学；周末参加各类活动，如去街道打扫卫生；另举两例； （3）你的评价：至少两条。 注意： （1）词数 90 左右； （2）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 The Most Beautiful Volunteer _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The Most Beautiful Volunteer Li Hua is a polite boy. He is both kind and patient. He is a helpful volunteer. At school, he is ready to help teachers and classmates. At weekends, he takes part in lots of activities. He often does some cleaning in the street. Besides, he goes to the library to help carry books. Also, he looks after old people in the nursing home. We all think Li Hua is such an excellent boy that we should learn from him. We’d like to recommend him for The Most Beautiful Volunteer. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】学校人员、志愿服务 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“最美丽的志愿者”为题，介绍李华的相关事迹。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段介绍他的具体事迹；第三段表达推荐李华参加这个评选的意愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020这道题的命题思路在于将《西游记》的文化元素与英语写作相结合，意图是考查学生的英语表达能力、对文化的理解以及组织信息的能力。所考查的知识包括英语书信的格式、词汇和语法，以及对《西游记》相关内容的了解。能力方面，重点考查学生的语言运用、逻辑思维和跨文化交际能力。 （2020·江苏连云港·中考真题）2020年6月，我市西游文化嘉年华（carnival）活动全面启动。为了鼓励同学们更好地阅读与理解《西游记》，你校组织了“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一封信，邀请外籍教师Nick参与评选。内容包括： （1）活动名称及目的； （2）时间地点：7月20日下午6:00前，学校网站； （3）参与方式：观看唱歌、故事讲述、短剧表演等视频作品，投票选择“最佳美猴王”； （4）希望他…… 注意： （1）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； （4）参考词汇：《西游记》Journey to the West   才艺展示 talent show Dear Nick, The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Nick, The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. To encourage students to better read and understand Journey to the West, our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King. I’m writing to invite you to vote for us. You’re expected to visit our school’s website before 6 p.m. on July 20. There are not only videos of songs, stories but also short plays. You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well. We’d like you to vote for the best Monkey King. I hope you’ll like these works and learn more about Journey to the West. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.4 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、教育 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求以李华的名义，用英语写一封信，邀请外籍教师Nick参与评选你校组织的“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、二人称。书信第一段提出了活动的名称及目的，第二段提到了活动的时间及参与方式，第三段提出了希望；文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：encourage…to…；write to；be expected to；not only…but also…；as well；would like sb to do sth；learn more about。 句型：1. To encourage students to better read and understand Journey to the West, our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King. 2. There are not only videos of songs, stories but also short plays. 3. You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well. 4. I hope you’ll like these works and learn more about Journey to the West. 最新模拟 1．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）作为一名中学生，我们担负着弘扬中国传统文化的责任。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友吉姆对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你根据提示内容写封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的端午节的情况。 要点提示： 1.节日时间及目的：农历的五月第五天，纪念 (in memory of) 诗人屈原。 2.喜欢原因：家人团聚，…… 3.庆祝方式：包粽子，…… 4.…… （1）短文必须包含提示中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 （3）词数：90~100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to know that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce my favourite one, the Dragon Boat festival to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·江苏连云港·三模）在生活的长河中，每个人都是一名独特的航行者，追寻着属于自己的梦想和荣光。在这段旅程中，我们经历了无数的挑战和困难，也收获了无数的欢笑和泪水。其中，总会有一件事情，让我们深感骄傲与自豪。校报英语编辑部正开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的征文活动。请你结合提示中的问题写一篇短文投稿。 1. What is the thing you are proud of? 2. When did it happen and what did you do? 3. Why does it make you proud? 注意事项： （1）词数100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； One Thing I’m Proud of The thing I am proud of is that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）美好生活，健康同行。如何丰富校园生活，促进同学们的身心健康？目前，你校英语网站“VOICE OF TEENS”正在征集同学们的建议。请你根据下图提示，以“How to keep healthy”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享你的建议。 注意： （1）词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 How to keep healthy Health is the base of everything. Then how can we keep healthy? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Follow these tips, and we will surely be in good health. 4．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）生活技能对于个人的成长和成功起着重要的作用。掌握常用生活技能，可以把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。21st Century英文报社现征集题为 “Life skills” 的英语演讲稿，假如你是林涛，请根据下面的思维导图，用英语写一篇演讲稿，描述你应该具备的生活技能以及如何提高这些技能。 注意： 1. 词数90左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容包含思维导图所含提示，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Learning life skills is necessary for our growth and success. What kind of life skills should we learn? And how to improve them? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）学校英语网站近日将举办中国传统文化展。请你根据以下提示，给你们的外教MissTailor写一封邮件，邀请她参加。 Time & Place next Friday afternoon; school hall People the teachers, the students Activities display some books and works of art; ... Purpose feel the beauty of Chinese culture; ... Hope 注意： (1)邮件应包括所给信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (2)词数90左右，邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 (4)参考词汇：the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair 传统文化展 Dear Miss Tailor, I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair in our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 6．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）假如你是李华，上周你校举行了“Enjoy culture, enjoy life!”为主题的校园文化周活动，请你根据以下提示信息，为校英文报写一篇活动报道。 注意： （1）短文应包括所给提示信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Enjoy culture, enjoy life! The Culture Week took place in our school last week. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）习主席曾说：“民之所忧，我必念之；民之所盼，我必行之。”作为中学生的我们，应该如何对自己、家庭和社会负责呢？请以“How to Be a Responsible (有责任心的) Student?”为题写一篇短文。 注意： 1. 短文须包含所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 How to be a responsible student In the school study hard; At home do some dishes; In public help the elderly cross the road; ... Your hope How to Be a Responsible Student? As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we need to be responsible._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）离别是“桃花潭水深千尺”的不舍，是“莫愁天下无知己”的期盼。在毕业匆匆的日子里，你们肯定有许多关于学校的美好记忆。现21世纪英语网站正在举行以“A Special School Memory”为主题的英语征文活动，请根据下面的思维导图，写一篇英语短文。 When did it happen? A Special School Memory How did you feel? Who was in your memory? What do you think of the memory? What happened? (a Reading Week /a sports meeting /an exam /a singing competition…) Why do you still remember it? 注意: 1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 2. 内容必须包括表格中的要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。 A Special School Memory Time flies by quickly. Soon I will graduate from this school soon. In the past these days, I have had many great memories. Here is one of my special memories. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·江苏连云港·一模）母亲节即将到来，你校英语角将举行以“My plan for Mother’s Day”为题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下问题提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的计划，感恩母爱。 注意：(1)短文应包括所给问题提示，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 My plan for Mother’s Day Mother’s day is coming. It is a day to express our thanks to our mother. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·江苏连云港·一模）享受阅读，享受生活。为了迎接世界读书日，学校英语俱乐部上个星期组织了“Enjoy reading, enjoy life”为主题的校园读书节系列活动。请你根据以下提示，为校英文报写一篇活动报道。 注意: (1)词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Enjoy reading, enjoy life! To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Jim, I’m glad to know that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce my favourite one, the Dragon Boat festival to you. The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It is on the fifth day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. The Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan. I like the festival because people often get together with their family to make zongzi and enjoy other delicious food on that day. In southern part of China, people often have the Dragon Boat races. We also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. How interesting the festival is and I really like it. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】庆祝活动、传统节日 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体指出要介绍端午节； 第二步，具体介绍端午节的日期以及来历等； 第三步，最后介绍喜欢端午节的原因以及一些活动等。 [亮点词汇] ① one of...其中之一…… ② in southern part of在……南部 ③ in honor of纪念 [高分句型] ① The Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.（which引导的非限定性定语从句） ② How interesting the festival is and I really like it.（感叹句） 2．【满分优秀范文】 One Thing I’m Proud of The thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy. It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was still a teenager. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that all the old women’s sons and daughters were far away from her, making their lives in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly. I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit these old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. Caring for those around us and passing our happiness to others are what we have learnt that day. I made it, and I feel really proud of myself that I gave comfort to those who needed most. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己引以为傲的事情； 第二步，介绍事情发生的时间以及自己做了什么； 第三步，介绍自己以此为傲的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①notice注意 ②get to know了解 ③sympathetic同情的 ④occur to被想起 ⑤feel proud of感到自豪 [高分句型] We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.(which引导非限制性定语从句) 3．【满分优秀范文】 How to keep healthy Health is the base of everything. Then how can we keep healthy? Here are some tips. Firstly, it is necessary to have a healthy lifestyle. We should keep away from junk food. We had better eat more fruit and vegetables every day. Secondly, we should do exercise one hour a day in order to keep healthy. Thirdly, we should have a good living habit. At the same time, we should go to bed early and get up early every day. We should also maintain mental health. We can relax ourselves when we are under great pressure to study. Besides, we should think of nice things and stay in a good mood. Follow these tips, and we will surely be in good health. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题、健康与运动、健康饮食 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。第一段总述健康的重要性，进而引出保持健康的建议； 第二步，具体介绍如何保持健康。从“饮食、睡眠、运动、心态”等几个方面给出保持健康的方法； 第三步，书写结语。进一步号召同学们重视健康，保持健康。 [亮点词汇] ①keep away from远离 ②had better do sth.最好做某事 ③in order to为了 ④stay in a good mood保持好心情 [高分句型] ①Firstly, it is necessary to have a healthy lifestyle.（It is+形容词+to do sth.） ②We can relax ourselves when we are under great pressure to study.（when引导状语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 Learning life skills is necessary for our growth and success. What kind of life skills should we learn? And how to improve them? First, we should try our best to keep healthy. It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and do daily exercise. And be happy every day. Second, working with others is important. Sometimes, we need to work as a team. When we communicate with others, we try to understand them. Third, solve problems in different ways. We are able to find out the problem, find solutions alone or with others and then solve it. Besides, learn to manage time. We can make a list of things to do every morning. Get up early and never be late for school. Finally, learn some basic skills, such as cooking. We can ask our family for help or search the Internet. Then practice making some dishes. All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】自我管理、哲理感悟、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出学习生活技能的重要性； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从几个方面讲述 应该具备的生活技能以及如何提高这些技能； 第三步，书写结语。总结提高生活技能的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事 ②communicate with sb.与某人交流 ③ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 [高分句型] ①It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and do daily exercise. (it作形式主语) ②When we communicate with others, we try to understand them. (when引导时间状语从句) ③Get up early and never be late for school. (祈使句） ④All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life. (if引导条件状语从句) 5．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Miss Tailor, I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair in our school. It will be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon. The teachers and the students are welcome to attend. At the Fair, different books, some beautiful works of art will be displayed. These works are all created by the teachers and the students in our school. Also, there will be an interesting cultural show. Through these activities, you will not only feel the beauty of Chinese culture but also understand traditional Chinese culture better. If you’re interested, please come and enjoy it. And I’d be glad to offer any help. Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据所给表格完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，根据表格，介绍中国传统文化展的相关信息； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also不仅……而且 ②offer help提供帮助 ③looking forward to期待 [高分句型] If you’re interested, please come and enjoy it. (if引导条件状语从句) 6．【满分优秀范文】 Enjoy culture, enjoy life! The Culture Week took place in our school last week. It started from Monday and ended on Friday in our school hall. During the week, we watched culture shows, learned to sing operas and made speeches on different subjects. What’s more, we told many Chinese stories in English and experienced traditional culture classes. The Culture Week is very meaningful for me. It is a great chance for me to make more friends and learn from each other. Besides, it can help me learn and understand Chinese culture better. I hope everyone can try their best to spread Chinese great culture! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：描述活动用“一般过去时”，谈感受用“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍文化周的时间和地点； 第二步，介绍文化周的活动内容，注意涵盖要点及补充内容； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①experience体验 ②meaningful有意义的 ③spread传播 [高分句型] I hope everyone can try their best to spread Chinese great culture! (宾语从句) 7．【满分优秀范文】 How to Be a Responsible Student? As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we need to be responsible. What should we do? I think as a good student, we should study hard and have good studying habits. In class, we need to listen to teachers carefully and be active in class. After school, we should finish our homework on time and do some reading. At home, it’s necessary for us to share the housework. We can do the dishes after dinner. Respecting parents is also important. In society, we can do some volunteer work like helping the elderly cross the road. Besides, we should be nice to others and follow the rules. By doing these things, we can make our family and society better. Let’s all be responsible and make a difference! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、教育、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，强调青少年作为国家的未来应该有责任心，引出如何做的话题； 第二步，具体提出一些合理的建议； 第三步，书写总结，表达期待。 ［亮点词汇］ ① do some reading 阅读 ② make a difference  产生影响 ［高分句型］ ① At home, it’s necessary for us to share the housework. (it作形式主语) ② Respecting parents is also important. (动名词作主语) 8．【满分优秀范文】 A Special School Memory Time flies by quickly. Soon I will graduate from this school soon. In the past these days, I have had many great memories. Here is one of my special memories. We took part in a voluntary project when we were in Grade 8. The purpose of the project was to raise something necessary for children in poor areas, such as warm clothes, stationery and so on. On that day, I gave out leaflets to call on more people to care about poor children so that they could have a brighter future. It is the special experience that gave me a strong sense of achievement. I will value my special memory of my junior high school forever. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己特别的学校记忆，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己特别的记忆； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②such as例如 ③give out分发 [高分句型] ①We took part in a voluntary project when we were in Grade 8. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②It is the special experience that gave me a strong sense of achievement. (强调句) 9．【满分优秀范文】 My plan for Mother’s Day Mother’s day is coming. It is a day to express our thanks to our mother. I really want to say, “Mum, you are my hero. I love you. ” I want to do something meaningful for my mother. I can cook a nice meal for her. My mother is very busy but she always makes delicious food for me. Also, I plan to make a beautiful card by myself. I can write what I want to say to her. Besides, I’ll have a short trip with her so that she can relax herself. I think everyone should do something to show the love for our mother. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】计划、庆祝活动、家人和亲人 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题； 第二步，介绍自己将为妈妈做的事及为什么要那样做； 第三步，介绍自己想对妈妈说的话。 [亮点词汇] ①something meaningful一些有意义的事 ②have a short trip with her和她进行短途旅行 ③besides除此之外 [高分句型] ①I can write what I want to say to her. （what引导宾语从句） ②I think everyone should do something to show the love for our mother.（think 后接省略引导词that的宾语从句） 10．【满分优秀范文】 Enjoy reading, enjoy life! To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club organized a reading festival last week. During the festival, we enjoyed colourful activities. Sharing a good book was one of them. We shared our favourite books with other students. We also held a writing competition called“My favourite book”. Moreover, we acted out what we read. We put on the plays in the school hall. We all welcomed these exciting activities. The reading festival creates a good reading environment. It also provides us with chances to learn more about the world and ourselves. The festival is over, but our reading never ends. (92 words) 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动、阅读、社团/俱乐部 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏，写作过程中可以适当增加细节描述，并且要突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动时间和地点； 第二步，具体阐述活动内容； 第三步，说明活动的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①share…with和……分享 ②moreover此外 ③put on上演 [高分句型] ①Sharing a good book was one of them. (动名词作主语） ②Moreover, we acted out what we read. (what引导的宾语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$