01 北京市-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

01 北京市 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年北京市中考英语作文继续采用二选一的形式。具有以下特点： • 育人导向明确：题目①让考生为国外学生代表团设计交流活动，考生既可以选择介绍我国优秀的传统文化，也可涉及近年来的发展成就，这有助于厚植家国情怀，增强民族自豪感，同时激励考生努力提升自我，为祖国建设贡献力量。题目②以“记好友，叙友情”为主题，引导考生关注身边的友情，培养积极的情感。 • 强调基础与应用：两道题均要求考生在特定情境下进行英语文段写作，考查了考生对基础语言知识和基本语言技能的掌握，以及在语境中准确运用语言的能力。例如，在题目①中要清晰地表达活动设计及理由，题目②中需准确描述朋友的特点和难忘经历。 • 体现开放性与综合性：给予考生一定的选择空间，能让不同水平和层次的考生充分发挥，体现了试题设计的开放性。同时，试题也有一定的综合性，如题目①的交流活动设计需要考生综合考虑多种因素，题目②在描述朋友和经历时也可能涉及到多种品质和场景。 • 贴近学生生活实际：素材贴近考生的年龄特点和生活经历，使考生能够结合自身实际进行思考和表达。例如，很多学生都有与朋友相处的经历，能够有话可说、有感而发。 • 注重思维品质考查：题目具有一定的思维深度，如题目①需要考生思考如何通过活动展示中国文化或发展成就，题目②要求考生回忆并描述难忘经历，这都需要考生进行分析、推理和总结，有助于培养考生的多元思维和批判性思维能力。 总体而言，2024年北京中考英语作文命题紧密联系教材和课堂教学，在考查学生英语语言运用能力的同时，也关注学生的文化意识、思维品质和学习能力，体现了“双减”背景下以学定考、素养立意的命题方向。 1．（2024·北京·中考真题）假设你是李华，你校英语社团将接待国外学生代表团来访，届时举办一次交流活动，为此在校内征集师生的建议。请你给英语社团公众号留言，提供一个交流活动设计并说明理由。 提示词语：visit, performance, make, opportunity, culture 内容提示： ·What do you suggest for the activity? ·Why do you suggest doing that? I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks. [写作总体分析] ①题材：本文属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，介绍建议什么类型的交流活动； 第二步，具体说明活动的内容以及建议举办此类活动的理由，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，表达希望方案能被考虑并书写结语。 【满分范文】 I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. For the foreign students visiting our school, I’d suggest a workshop on paper cutting. A teacher can first introduce its history and artistic value. Then we can help them to make paper cuttings. This activity will give them an opportunity to have a try at a traditional Chinese art form. What’s more, when they take these paper cuttings back to their home country and give them to their families as gifts, more people there may enjoy the beauty of Chinese culture. I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks. 【解析】 [亮点词汇] ①give sb an opportunity to do sth给某人一个做某事的机会 ②give sth to sb as gifts把某物作为礼物送给某人 [高分句型] ①What’s more, when they take these paper cuttings back to their home country and give them to their families as gifts, more people there may enjoy the beauty of Chinese culture.（when引导的时间状语从句） 2．（2024·北京·中考真题）某英文网站正在开展以“记好友，叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最好的一位朋友，并记述你们之间一段难忘的经历。 提示词语：kind, helpful, encourage, practice, support 内容提示： ·Who is your best friend? Please describe him/ her. ·Share an unforgettable experience you had with him/ her. I’m glad to say something about my best friend. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [写作总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，介绍经历用“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你最好的朋友并进行描述； 第二步，分享你们之间发生的一次难忘的经历。 【满分作文】 I’m glad to say something about my best friend. Her name is Alice. She is helpful and always has a sweet smile on her face. She is really good at dancing. Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. She encouraged me a lot and helped me practice the moves. Together, we gave a very successful performance. I will never forget this experience. 【详解】 [亮点词汇] ①have a smile on one’s face面带微笑 ②sign up for报名参加 ③a large crowd of一大群 ④a very successful performance一个非常成功的表演 [高分句型] ①Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. (There be句型) ②We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. (并列句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 • 2023年：作文二选一，主题分别为“有意义的校园活动”和“社团活动”。第一个题目要求考生写一封电子邮件，介绍一项有意义的校园活动；第二个题目要求考生记述在社团活动中的经历和收获。这一年的作文主题以“双减”为背景，反映新时期校园生活，强调劳动教育、感恩教育、发展兴趣爱好、积极参加体育锻炼等价值观念。 9．（2023·北京·中考真题）假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事，如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。 提示词语：invite, plant, meaningful, beautiful, library 提示问题：What activity do you plan to do? Why do you want to organize this activity? When and where will you have this activity? Dear Peter, How is everything going? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua [写作总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题中包含的关键信息，写邮件告诉Peter活动内容、意义及安排。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写电子邮件的目的是邀请Peter参加活动； 第二步，介绍计划什么活动、组织这一活动的原因及具体安排； 第三步，期待收到回复。 【满分作文】 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to join us. As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together. We all know that trees can stop the wind from blowing the sand, and they can also make our school beautiful. So we decide to plant a tree for our school. Next Sunday, we will meet at the gate of the school and then go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant the tree and then water it. I believe we all will have a great time. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 [亮点词汇] ①invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事 ②join sb. 加入某人 ③stop ... from doing sth. 阻止……做某事 [高分句型] ①As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together.（as引导原因状语从句） ②I believe we all will have a great time.（省略that的宾语从句） 10．（2023·北京·中考真题）同学们参加过各种各样的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。 假设你是李华。请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一个你参加过的社团，谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。 提示词语：take part in, practice, skill, benefit, progress 提示问题：What club did you join? What did you do in the club? What have you learned from the experience? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [写作总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题涉及的关键信息，写短文谈谈自己参加过的社团、这个社团的活动内容及你考生的收获。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明参加了什么社团； 第二步，介绍社团中的活动； 第三步，谈谈从社团活动中学到了什么。 【满分作文】 I have been in the basketball club for three years. We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams. During the three years, my skill of playing basketball improved a lot. And I also made a lot of friends. Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit, but also helps me understand the importance of teamwork. I will keep playing and try to be good at it. 【详解】 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ②on the weekend 在周末 ③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且…… ④be good at 擅长 [高分句型] We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams.（and连接表等同关系的并列句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 • 2022年：作文二选一，主题分别为“传统礼仪”和“提升学习效率”。第一个题目要求考生用英语思考和感悟中国传统礼仪规则及内在文化价值；第二个题目要求考生用英语思考并解决日常生活中的常见问题。这一年的作文主题体现了对传统文化的重视和学以致用的命题思想，强调考生的实际应用能力和知识迁移能力。 7．（2022·北京·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks 提示问题：· What do we do when we meet people for the first time? · How do we behave properly at table? Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua 【满分作文】 Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them. Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup. I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示问题，给Chris介绍中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从待人接物、餐桌礼仪方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 8．（2022·北京·中考真题） 某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的，取得了什么效果。提示词语：plan, task, attention, make use of, progress 提示问题：How do you increase your efficiency(效率)? What have you achieved? High efficiency is important for a busy student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 High efficiency is important for a busy student. It is necessary for everyone to learn how to increase efficiency. I have tried many ways to increase my efficiency since I was a middle school student. Before the beginning of a day, I always think about my goals and make a list of things I need to do. Then, I organize my to-do list to make an effective plan for the day. I always spend time doing important tasks first and make good use of the rest of the time. By managing my time well, I have made progress. I usually finish my homework on time and still have time to relax myself. High efficiency and time management have helped me be successful in various areas of my life. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“提升效率”为主题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己是如何提高效率的以及取得了什么成就；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 • 2021年：作文二选一，主题分别为“北京文化标志”和“适应变化”。第一个题目要求考生推荐一个北京文化标志，并描述和说明推荐理由；第二个题目要求考生描述生活中的一个变化，以及如何应对和收获。这一年的作文主题更加注重文化和个人成长，强调考生对社会和生活的观察与思考。 5．（2021·北京·中考真题）北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等，都有文化的印记。 假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送，现就 “Cultural Symbols of Beijing(北京文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。 提示词语：show, traditional, love, treasure, important 提示问题：In your opinion, what’s the cultural symbol of Beijing? Please describe it. Why do you think it can be a symbol? I’m Li Hua, from Class I, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks! 【满分作文】例文 I’m Li Hua. from Class I, Grade 9. I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing. Jingju tells time-honored stories through singing and movements, showing us what life was like in the past. The performers are in beautiful clothes and with colorful faces. Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages. Besides, as a national treasure, it plays an important role in Chinese culture. That’s why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing. I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks! 【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍北京文化标志，根据提示介绍什么是北京的文化标志，并叙述原因。注意理由合理，内容符合客观事实。 2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。可使用宾语从句和非谓语动词，为文章增色，上下文多使用连词或副词，使行文流畅。 6．（2021·北京·中考真题）现实中，大到自然环境和社会环境，小到个人生活和学习，变化无处不在，面对变化，唯有积极适应，才能有所进步和收获。 某英文网站正在开展以“适应变化”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。 提示词语：help, enjoy, new, challenge, take action 提示问题：What is the change that happened in your life? How did you deal with it? What have you learned from the experience? There are many changes in a person’s life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 There are many changes in a person’s life. When I entered middle school, I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. I offered help to my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party.  Gradually, I made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates. From this experience, I get to know change brings challenges as well as opportunities.  When change comes, we should face it and take action. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己在生活中的一个变化，以及如何应对这个变化，有什么收获等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 • 2020年：作文二选一，主题分别为“丢书道歉”和“积累知识”。第一篇作文要求考生写一封邮件向Peter道歉并提出弥补办法；第二篇作文要求考生谈谈在积累知识方面的做法和收获。这一年的作文主题贴近学生生活，强调实际应用和情感表达。 3．（2020·北京·中考真题）“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。 某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。 提示词语：accumulate（积累）, read, keep, make progress 提示问题：●What did you do to accumulate knowledge?                     ●What have you learned from doing so? Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly. In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示词语和提示问题来写一篇短文，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。 2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。 3. 高分亮点： 单词和短语：as for；take lots of measures to do sth.；first of all；provide sb. with sth.；used to do sth.；at the same time；last but not least；in a word；step by step；make progress。 句型：who引导的限制性定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句；以only开头的倒装句。 4．（2020·北京·中考真题）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假如你是李华，你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意，请用英语给他写一封邮件，告知此事，并提出弥补的办法。 提示词语：lose, make up（弥补）, buy, send 提示问题： What happened to the book? What will you do to make up for it? Dear Peter, How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分作文】 Dear Peter, How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry, because I lost the book which I borrowed from you a week ago. I want to make up for my error. I will buy the same one from the bookstore and send it to you. What do you think of my method? I hope that you can forgive me. I am looking forward to your early reply.                                                                        Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。开头介绍我写信的目的；接下来介绍我打算如何弥补我的过失；最后希望你能原谅我。 2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，用一般将来时介绍我提出的弥补办法，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：borrow from；want to do sth；send…to…；look forward to。 句型：定语从句which I borrowed from you a week ago；宾语从句that you can forgive me。 总体来说，北京中考英语作文的命题趋势是越来越贴近学生的生活实际，强调学生的语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识。 最新模拟 1．（2024·北京朝阳·二模）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter受邀到一位中国朋友家做客吃饭。他不知道去中国家庭做客的一些礼仪，向你发邮件求助。请你用英文给他回复。告诉Peter一些基本的礼仪以及你的具体建议。 提示词语：shake hands, serve tea, use chopsticks, wait to eat 提示问题：·What are some manners about visiting a Chinese family? ·What’s your advice to help Peter? Dear Peter, How is it going?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope this is helpful. Email me if you have any other questions. Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·北京平谷·二模）坚持是成功的钥匙！ 某英文网站正在开展以“坚持使我成功”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次因为你不懈坚持取得胜利的经历，并谈谈你的收获。 提示词语： persistence ( 坚持 )，fail，worried，give  up，stick  to，confident 提示问题： ●What experience can you share about persistence? ● What have you learned from it? Persistence is one of the keys to success. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·北京丰台·二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国传统节日很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件， 想了解中国的传统节日以及庆典习俗。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的一个中国传统节日以及人们是如何庆祝这一节日的。 提示词语：clean, get together, eat 提示问题：● What is your favorite traditional festival in China? ● What do people do to celebrate it?   Dear Chris, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·北京西城·二模）假设你是李华。你校将开展“旧物漂流”主题校园活动，旨在重现闲置物品的价值。校学生会现向全体学生征集相关物品，如：教材、练习册、文具、玩具和校服等。作为校英语广播站站长，请你用英文写一篇广播稿，说明此次活动的目的，告知同学们需要做什么前期准备，号召大家踊跃参加。 提示词语：reuse, donate (捐赠), benefit, collect, textbooks 提示问题：● Why should we hold this activity? ● What preparations should we make? Dear schoolmates, I’m giving this speech to call on you to donate the things you don’t need. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your support. 5．（2024·北京大兴·二模）假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将在下周举办校园安全日活动。你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请你用英文给他写封邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点和活动内容，以及对参加本次活动的建议。 提示词语：school safety, put out the fire, poster, notebook 提示问题：When and where will you have the activity? 要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 • What will you do during the activity? • What advice can you give Peter? Dear Peter, I’m glad to invite you to take part in our activity about school safety.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to seeing you next week. Yours, Li Hua 6．（2024·北京顺义·二模）某英文网站正在开展以“做更好的自己”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了成就更好的自己，你做过什么，有什么收获。 提示词语：challenge, take action, improve, confident 提示问题： (1) What did you do to make you better?   (2) What have you learned from doing so? Everyone may look forward to being better. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·北京房山·二模）中华民族有五千年的文明，积淀了丰富多彩的传统文化，有精美的民间工艺如剪纸、风筝，有古老的民族艺术如京剧、国画等。 假设你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在进行“中国传统文化”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜爱的一种中国传统民间工艺或民族艺术以及你是如何传承的。提示词语：paper cutting, practice, make videos, introduce, foreigner 提示问题：● What traditional Chinese culture do you like best? ● What can you do to pass it on? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·北京朝阳·二模）某英文网站正在开展以“为了梦想而努力”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对梦想以及如何实现梦想的看法。 提示词语：drive us to achieve, take action, set goals, overcome difficulties 提示问题：·What do you think of dreams? ·How can we make our dreams come true? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·北京石景山·二模）假如你是李华，你的学校下周日将组织全校师生去香山 (Fragrant Hills Park)徒步，请你给交换生Tom写一封邮件，通知他集合的时间，地点，需要做什么准备及原因。 提示词语： gate, lunch, picnic, water 提示问题： ● When and where are you going to meet? ● What does Tom need to prepare? Why?Dear Tom, How is everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hiking with you. Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·北京海淀·二模）培育提升青少年网络素养，是我国网络强国战略的重要组成部分。 假设你是李华。你校正在举行“提升网络素养，争做校园好网民(Be a Good Teen Netizen)”的主题教育活动，请你用英文写一篇短文向学校英文网站投稿，阐述提升青少年网络素养的重要性，并说明具体做法。 注意：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语： online community, benefit, polite, protect, personal 提示问题： Why do you think it is important to be a good teen netizen? What would you advise students to do to be a good teen netizen? As the Internet has become part of our lives, it’s important to be a good teen netizen. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 01 北京市 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年北京市中考英语作文继续采用二选一的形式。具有以下特点： • 育人导向明确：题目①让考生为国外学生代表团设计交流活动，考生既可以选择介绍我国优秀的传统文化，也可涉及近年来的发展成就，这有助于厚植家国情怀，增强民族自豪感，同时激励考生努力提升自我，为祖国建设贡献力量。题目②以“记好友，叙友情”为主题，引导考生关注身边的友情，培养积极的情感。 • 强调基础与应用：两道题均要求考生在特定情境下进行英语文段写作，考查了考生对基础语言知识和基本语言技能的掌握，以及在语境中准确运用语言的能力。例如，在题目①中要清晰地表达活动设计及理由，题目②中需准确描述朋友的特点和难忘经历。 • 体现开放性与综合性：给予考生一定的选择空间，能让不同水平和层次的考生充分发挥，体现了试题设计的开放性。同时，试题也有一定的综合性，如题目①的交流活动设计需要考生综合考虑多种因素，题目②在描述朋友和经历时也可能涉及到多种品质和场景。 • 贴近学生生活实际：素材贴近考生的年龄特点和生活经历，使考生能够结合自身实际进行思考和表达。例如，很多学生都有与朋友相处的经历，能够有话可说、有感而发。 • 注重思维品质考查：题目具有一定的思维深度，如题目①需要考生思考如何通过活动展示中国文化或发展成就，题目②要求考生回忆并描述难忘经历，这都需要考生进行分析、推理和总结，有助于培养考生的多元思维和批判性思维能力。 总体而言，2024年北京中考英语作文命题紧密联系教材和课堂教学，在考查学生英语语言运用能力的同时，也关注学生的文化意识、思维品质和学习能力，体现了“双减”背景下以学定考、素养立意的命题方向。 1．（2024·北京·中考真题）假设你是李华，你校英语社团将接待国外学生代表团来访，届时举办一次交流活动，为此在校内征集师生的建议。请你给英语社团公众号留言，提供一个交流活动设计并说明理由。 提示词语：visit, performance, make, opportunity, culture 内容提示： ·What do you suggest for the activity? ·Why do you suggest doing that? I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks. [写作总体分析] ①题材：本文属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，介绍建议什么类型的交流活动； 第二步，具体说明活动的内容以及建议举办此类活动的理由，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，表达希望方案能被考虑并书写结语。 【满分范文】 I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. For the foreign students visiting our school, I’d suggest a workshop on paper cutting. A teacher can first introduce its history and artistic value. Then we can help them to make paper cuttings. This activity will give them an opportunity to have a try at a traditional Chinese art form. What’s more, when they take these paper cuttings back to their home country and give them to their families as gifts, more people there may enjoy the beauty of Chinese culture. I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks. 【解析】 [亮点词汇] ①give sb an opportunity to do sth给某人一个做某事的机会 ②give sth to sb as gifts把某物作为礼物送给某人 [高分句型] ①What’s more, when they take these paper cuttings back to their home country and give them to their families as gifts, more people there may enjoy the beauty of Chinese culture.（when引导的时间状语从句） 2．（2024·北京·中考真题）某英文网站正在开展以“记好友，叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最好的一位朋友，并记述你们之间一段难忘的经历。 提示词语：kind, helpful, encourage, practice, support 内容提示： ·Who is your best friend? Please describe him/ her. ·Share an unforgettable experience you had with him/ her. I’m glad to say something about my best friend. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [写作总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，介绍经历用“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你最好的朋友并进行描述； 第二步，分享你们之间发生的一次难忘的经历。 【满分作文】 I’m glad to say something about my best friend. Her name is Alice. She is helpful and always has a sweet smile on her face. She is really good at dancing. Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. She encouraged me a lot and helped me practice the moves. Together, we gave a very successful performance. I will never forget this experience. 【详解】 [亮点词汇] ①have a smile on one’s face面带微笑 ②sign up for报名参加 ③a large crowd of一大群 ④a very successful performance一个非常成功的表演 [高分句型] ①Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. (There be句型) ②We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. (并列句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 • 2023年：作文二选一，主题分别为“有意义的校园活动”和“社团活动”。第一个题目要求考生写一封电子邮件，介绍一项有意义的校园活动；第二个题目要求考生记述在社团活动中的经历和收获。这一年的作文主题以“双减”为背景，反映新时期校园生活，强调劳动教育、感恩教育、发展兴趣爱好、积极参加体育锻炼等价值观念。 9．（2023·北京·中考真题）假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事，如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。 提示词语：invite, plant, meaningful, beautiful, library 提示问题：What activity do you plan to do? Why do you want to organize this activity? When and where will you have this activity? Dear Peter, How is everything going? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua [写作总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题中包含的关键信息，写邮件告诉Peter活动内容、意义及安排。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写电子邮件的目的是邀请Peter参加活动； 第二步，介绍计划什么活动、组织这一活动的原因及具体安排； 第三步，期待收到回复。 【满分作文】 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to join us. As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together. We all know that trees can stop the wind from blowing the sand, and they can also make our school beautiful. So we decide to plant a tree for our school. Next Sunday, we will meet at the gate of the school and then go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant the tree and then water it. I believe we all will have a great time. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 [亮点词汇] ①invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事 ②join sb. 加入某人 ③stop ... from doing sth. 阻止……做某事 [高分句型] ①As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together.（as引导原因状语从句） ②I believe we all will have a great time.（省略that的宾语从句） 10．（2023·北京·中考真题）同学们参加过各种各样的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。 假设你是李华。请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一个你参加过的社团，谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。 提示词语：take part in, practice, skill, benefit, progress 提示问题：What club did you join? What did you do in the club? What have you learned from the experience? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [写作总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题涉及的关键信息，写短文谈谈自己参加过的社团、这个社团的活动内容及你考生的收获。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明参加了什么社团； 第二步，介绍社团中的活动； 第三步，谈谈从社团活动中学到了什么。 【满分作文】 I have been in the basketball club for three years. We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams. During the three years, my skill of playing basketball improved a lot. And I also made a lot of friends. Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit, but also helps me understand the importance of teamwork. I will keep playing and try to be good at it. 【详解】 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ②on the weekend 在周末 ③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且…… ④be good at 擅长 [高分句型] We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams.（and连接表等同关系的并列句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 • 2022年：作文二选一，主题分别为“传统礼仪”和“提升学习效率”。第一个题目要求考生用英语思考和感悟中国传统礼仪规则及内在文化价值；第二个题目要求考生用英语思考并解决日常生活中的常见问题。这一年的作文主题体现了对传统文化的重视和学以致用的命题思想，强调考生的实际应用能力和知识迁移能力。 7．（2022·北京·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks 提示问题：· What do we do when we meet people for the first time? · How do we behave properly at table? Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua 【满分作文】 Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them. Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup. I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示问题，给Chris介绍中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从待人接物、餐桌礼仪方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 8．（2022·北京·中考真题） 某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的，取得了什么效果。提示词语：plan, task, attention, make use of, progress 提示问题：How do you increase your efficiency(效率)? What have you achieved? High efficiency is important for a busy student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 High efficiency is important for a busy student. It is necessary for everyone to learn how to increase efficiency. I have tried many ways to increase my efficiency since I was a middle school student. Before the beginning of a day, I always think about my goals and make a list of things I need to do. Then, I organize my to-do list to make an effective plan for the day. I always spend time doing important tasks first and make good use of the rest of the time. By managing my time well, I have made progress. I usually finish my homework on time and still have time to relax myself. High efficiency and time management have helped me be successful in various areas of my life. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“提升效率”为主题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己是如何提高效率的以及取得了什么成就；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 • 2021年：作文二选一，主题分别为“北京文化标志”和“适应变化”。第一个题目要求考生推荐一个北京文化标志，并描述和说明推荐理由；第二个题目要求考生描述生活中的一个变化，以及如何应对和收获。这一年的作文主题更加注重文化和个人成长，强调考生对社会和生活的观察与思考。 5．（2021·北京·中考真题）北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等，都有文化的印记。 假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送，现就 “Cultural Symbols of Beijing(北京文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。 提示词语：show, traditional, love, treasure, important 提示问题：In your opinion, what’s the cultural symbol of Beijing? Please describe it. Why do you think it can be a symbol? I’m Li Hua, from Class I, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks! 【满分作文】例文 I’m Li Hua. from Class I, Grade 9. I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing. Jingju tells time-honored stories through singing and movements, showing us what life was like in the past. The performers are in beautiful clothes and with colorful faces. Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages. Besides, as a national treasure, it plays an important role in Chinese culture. That’s why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing. I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks! 【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍北京文化标志，根据提示介绍什么是北京的文化标志，并叙述原因。注意理由合理，内容符合客观事实。 2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。可使用宾语从句和非谓语动词，为文章增色，上下文多使用连词或副词，使行文流畅。 6．（2021·北京·中考真题）现实中，大到自然环境和社会环境，小到个人生活和学习，变化无处不在，面对变化，唯有积极适应，才能有所进步和收获。 某英文网站正在开展以“适应变化”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。 提示词语：help, enjoy, new, challenge, take action 提示问题：What is the change that happened in your life? How did you deal with it? What have you learned from the experience? There are many changes in a person’s life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 There are many changes in a person’s life. When I entered middle school, I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. I offered help to my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party.  Gradually, I made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates. From this experience, I get to know change brings challenges as well as opportunities.  When change comes, we should face it and take action. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己在生活中的一个变化，以及如何应对这个变化，有什么收获等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 • 2020年：作文二选一，主题分别为“丢书道歉”和“积累知识”。第一篇作文要求考生写一封邮件向Peter道歉并提出弥补办法；第二篇作文要求考生谈谈在积累知识方面的做法和收获。这一年的作文主题贴近学生生活，强调实际应用和情感表达。 3．（2020·北京·中考真题）“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。 某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。 提示词语：accumulate（积累）, read, keep, make progress 提示问题：●What did you do to accumulate knowledge?                     ●What have you learned from doing so? Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly. In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示词语和提示问题来写一篇短文，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。 2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。 3. 高分亮点： 单词和短语：as for；take lots of measures to do sth.；first of all；provide sb. with sth.；used to do sth.；at the same time；last but not least；in a word；step by step；make progress。 句型：who引导的限制性定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句；以only开头的倒装句。 4．（2020·北京·中考真题）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假如你是李华，你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意，请用英语给他写一封邮件，告知此事，并提出弥补的办法。 提示词语：lose, make up（弥补）, buy, send 提示问题： What happened to the book? What will you do to make up for it? Dear Peter, How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分作文】 Dear Peter, How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry, because I lost the book which I borrowed from you a week ago. I want to make up for my error. I will buy the same one from the bookstore and send it to you. What do you think of my method? I hope that you can forgive me. I am looking forward to your early reply.                                                                        Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。开头介绍我写信的目的；接下来介绍我打算如何弥补我的过失；最后希望你能原谅我。 2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，用一般将来时介绍我提出的弥补办法，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：borrow from；want to do sth；send…to…；look forward to。 句型：定语从句which I borrowed from you a week ago；宾语从句that you can forgive me。 总体来说，北京中考英语作文的命题趋势是越来越贴近学生的生活实际，强调学生的语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识。 最新模拟 1．（2024·北京朝阳·二模）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter受邀到一位中国朋友家做客吃饭。他不知道去中国家庭做客的一些礼仪，向你发邮件求助。请你用英文给他回复。告诉Peter一些基本的礼仪以及你的具体建议。 提示词语：shake hands, serve tea, use chopsticks, wait to eat 提示问题：·What are some manners about visiting a Chinese family? ·What’s your advice to help Peter? Dear Peter, How is it going?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope this is helpful. Email me if you have any other questions. Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·北京平谷·二模）坚持是成功的钥匙！ 某英文网站正在开展以“坚持使我成功”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次因为你不懈坚持取得胜利的经历，并谈谈你的收获。 提示词语： persistence ( 坚持 )，fail，worried，give  up，stick  to，confident 提示问题： ●What experience can you share about persistence? ● What have you learned from it? Persistence is one of the keys to success. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·北京丰台·二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国传统节日很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件， 想了解中国的传统节日以及庆典习俗。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的一个中国传统节日以及人们是如何庆祝这一节日的。 提示词语：clean, get together, eat 提示问题：● What is your favorite traditional festival in China? ● What do people do to celebrate it?   Dear Chris, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·北京西城·二模）假设你是李华。你校将开展“旧物漂流”主题校园活动，旨在重现闲置物品的价值。校学生会现向全体学生征集相关物品，如：教材、练习册、文具、玩具和校服等。作为校英语广播站站长，请你用英文写一篇广播稿，说明此次活动的目的，告知同学们需要做什么前期准备，号召大家踊跃参加。 提示词语：reuse, donate (捐赠), benefit, collect, textbooks 提示问题：● Why should we hold this activity? ● What preparations should we make? Dear schoolmates, I’m giving this speech to call on you to donate the things you don’t need. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your support. 5．（2024·北京大兴·二模）假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将在下周举办校园安全日活动。你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请你用英文给他写封邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点和活动内容，以及对参加本次活动的建议。 提示词语：school safety, put out the fire, poster, notebook 提示问题：When and where will you have the activity? 要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 • What will you do during the activity? • What advice can you give Peter? Dear Peter, I’m glad to invite you to take part in our activity about school safety.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to seeing you next week. Yours, Li Hua 6．（2024·北京顺义·二模）某英文网站正在开展以“做更好的自己”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了成就更好的自己，你做过什么，有什么收获。 提示词语：challenge, take action, improve, confident 提示问题： (1) What did you do to make you better?   (2) What have you learned from doing so? Everyone may look forward to being better. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·北京房山·二模）中华民族有五千年的文明，积淀了丰富多彩的传统文化，有精美的民间工艺如剪纸、风筝，有古老的民族艺术如京剧、国画等。 假设你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在进行“中国传统文化”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜爱的一种中国传统民间工艺或民族艺术以及你是如何传承的。提示词语：paper cutting, practice, make videos, introduce, foreigner 提示问题：● What traditional Chinese culture do you like best? ● What can you do to pass it on? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·北京朝阳·二模）某英文网站正在开展以“为了梦想而努力”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对梦想以及如何实现梦想的看法。 提示词语：drive us to achieve, take action, set goals, overcome difficulties 提示问题：·What do you think of dreams? ·How can we make our dreams come true? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·北京石景山·二模）假如你是李华，你的学校下周日将组织全校师生去香山 (Fragrant Hills Park)徒步，请你给交换生Tom写一封邮件，通知他集合的时间，地点，需要做什么准备及原因。 提示词语： gate, lunch, picnic, water 提示问题： ● When and where are you going to meet? ● What does Tom need to prepare? Why?Dear Tom, How is everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hiking with you. Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·北京海淀·二模）培育提升青少年网络素养，是我国网络强国战略的重要组成部分。 假设你是李华。你校正在举行“提升网络素养，争做校园好网民(Be a Good Teen Netizen)”的主题教育活动，请你用英文写一篇短文向学校英文网站投稿，阐述提升青少年网络素养的重要性，并说明具体做法。 注意：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语： online community, benefit, polite, protect, personal 提示问题： Why do you think it is important to be a good teen netizen? What would you advise students to do to be a good teen netizen? As the Internet has become part of our lives, it’s important to be a good teen netizen. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考满分作文： 1． Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m glad to introduce some manners when visiting a Chinese family. We usually shake hands with people and smile when we meet them for the first time. We always serve fruit and tea to show our politeness when visitors come to our home. I’d like to give you some advice. First, as you know, we Chinese use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. It’s a good idea to get some practice beforehand. Second, when the food is served, you should wait until you’re invited to eat. Third, you’d better join the conversation about the big meal and say how much you like it. I hope this is helpful. Email me if you have any other questions. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍来中国家庭做客的一些礼仪”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示乐意提供建议； 第二步，根据题干中的要点，详细介绍一些做客需要注意的事项； 第三步，给出建议，表示欢迎提问并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①for the first times第一次 ②instead of而不是 [高分句型] ①We usually shake hands with people and smile when we meet them for the first time.（when引导时间状语从句） ②It’s a good idea to get some practice beforehand.（it is+名词+to do sth句型） 2．     Persistence is one of the keys to success. It’s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.     I love running and I have kept running for three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my headache. I often failed in my running test. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school. Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could make it. No matter what kind of difficulties I faced, I tried my best to keep running. I passed the test finally. Now I do much better in running. I feel more confident and I’m ready for any challenges in the future.     I have learned a lot from my experience. Everone may meet with problems in study or life, but we should never give it up. It works better than we think of good ways to deal with them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”。 ③提示：写作时必须包括提示内容，根据提示问题写出一次因为坚持而成功的经历并且分享你从中的收获。写作时可以适当增加内容，但要注意语句通顺、意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，表达写作目的——坚持使我成功； 第二步，介绍自己因为坚持而成功的经历； 第三步，表达自己的收获及感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①keep doing sth一直做某事 ②be good at 擅长 ③In order to 为了 ④catch up with 追上 [高分句型] ① I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） ② No matter what kind of difficulties I faced, I tried my best to keep running.（no matter what引导的让步状语从句） ③It works better than we think of good ways to deal with them.（含有比较级的句式） 3． Dear Chris, How is everything going? I’m very glad to tell you something about my favorite traditional festival in China. I like the Spring Festival best. The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, people do a lot of preparations, such as cleaning the house, decorating the rooms, buying new clothes and so on. On the eve of the festival, family members get together to have a big dinner. We eat traditional food like dumplings. After dinner we watch TV together, and then play fireworks. During the festival, people often visit the relatives and they give best wishes to each other. Old people give children red packets to show their love. We enjoy ourselves very much. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图是介绍最喜欢的传统节日； 第二步，介绍该节日的庆祝方式； 第三步，书写结语。表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①such as比如 ②each other互相 ③enjoy oneself玩得开心 [高分句型] ①On the eve of the festival, family members get together to have a big dinner. (to do不定式作目的状语状语) ②During the festival, people often visit the relatives and they give best wishes to each other. (and并列句) 4． Dear schoolmates, I’m giving this speech to call on you to donate the things you don’t need. Our school will carry out a campus activity with the theme of “Drifting of Old Things”, which aims to recreate the value of unused items. At the same time, the reuse of old things can also save resources. You can collect the things you want to donate in advance, such as textbooks, workbooks, stationery, toys, school uniforms and so on. Please be sure to keep them clean and tidy. I hope that the active participation of all of us can make this event a complete success. Looking forward to your support. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示问题进行写作，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍此次活动的目的； 第二步，介绍同学们需要做的前期准备； 第三步，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①carry out开展 ②be sure to do sth.务必做某事 ③in advance提前 [高分句型] ①Our school will carry out a campus activity with the theme of “Drifting of Old Things”, which aims to recreate the value of unused items.（which引导的定语从句） ②I hope that the active participation of all of us can make this event a complete success.（that引导的宾语从句） 5． Dear Peter, I’m glad to invite you to take part in our activity about school safety. It will be held in our school hall at 15:30 next Friday. There will be many kinds of activities. First, a firefighter will teach us how to put out the fire and escape from a fire. Next, we will have a group discussion and make school safety rules together. Finally, we will make safety posters together to call on more people to pay attention to school safety. Don’t forget to bring your notebook and crayons. I am looking forward to seeing you next week. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动举行的时间和地点；； 第二步，具体阐述活动内容； 第三步，最后给出对方建议。 [亮点词汇] ① many kinds of许多种类的 ② put out扑灭 ③ pay attention to关注 [高分句型] ①Finally, we will make safety posters together to call on more people to pay attention to school safety.（不定式作目的状语） ②Don’t forget to bring your notebook and crayons.（祈使句的否定形式） 6． Everyone may look forward to being better. I also try my best to face challenges in my life. Three months ago, I was not good at running and felt sad. To change myself, firstly, I asked my PE teacher for help. He told me some running skills. Then I ran 5 km every evening to practice them. Sometimes I felt so tired, but I told myself “where there is a will, there is a way”. Day after day, I improved my speed of running. Finally, I got a perfect score in the running race last week. From this experience, I learned that if you try hard, you will improve yourself and become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍为了成就更好的自己，做过什么； 第二步，阐述从中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①try one’s best尽某人最大努力 ②be good at擅长 ③ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 ④where there is a will, there is a way有志者事竟成 [高分句型] ①Sometimes I felt so tired, but I told myself “where there is a will, there is a way”. (名言警句) ②From this experience, I learned that if you try hard, you will improve yourself and become better and better. (if条件状语从句) 7． As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese folk craft is our obligation. My favourite traditional Chinese folk craft is paper cutting. Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings and so on. Paper cutting is an important part of Chinese culture. People often put them up on the walls. Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck. I try my best to protect this traditional skill. I take part in the school paper cutting club and I teach members how to design their own works. I think I can also make some videos online so that more and more people are able to know about it. Let’s work together to protect this traditional folk craft and keep it alive. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，保护和传承中国传统技艺是我们的义务； 第二步，介绍自己最喜爱的传统技艺； 第三步，介绍自己可以做什么来传承。 [亮点词汇] ①such as 例如 ②put up 张贴 ③try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事 [高分句型] ①Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings and so on.（含情态动词can的被动语态） ②Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck.（because引导的原因状语从句） ③I think I can also make some videos online so that more and more people are able to know about it.（省略that的宾语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句） 8． Dreams are important for our future. They can drive us to achieve great things. Dreams can be big or small, but they have one thing in common: they encourage us to work hard. However, dreams alone are not enough. In order to make our dreams come true, we must take action. This means setting goals, making plans and working tirelessly to achieve them. It also means facing challenges and overcoming difficulties along the way. In addition to taking action, it is also necessary to focus on our dreams. Finally, it’s important to remember that achieving our dreams takes time. It may take years or even longer. With hard work, we can realize our dreams. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：可根据提示词语和提示问题组织内容，注意不要遗漏提示问题的内容；可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，谈论梦想的重要性及作用； 第二步，阐述如何实现梦想； 第三步，总结梦想的实现需要花时间和努力。 [亮点词汇] ①have...in common有共同之处 ②in order to为了 ③come true实现 ④take action采取措施 ⑤focus on关注 [高分句型] ①It is also necessary to focus on our dreams. (It作形式主语) ②It’s important to remember that achieving our dreams takes time. (It作形式主语；that引导宾语从句) 9． Dear Tom, How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you something about our school hiking in the Fragrant Hills Park next Sunday. We are going to meet at the school gate at 7:30 am. For this trip, we all need to take lunch because there are no restaurants on the way. We will have a picnic together in the mountains because it is an opportunity for us to stay together since we are leaving school soon. How fun it will be! Also, please remember to take some water since you are sure to need it during the long hiking. I am looking forward to hiking with you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍见面的时间和地点； 第二步，具体描述需要准备什么以及这样做的原因。 [亮点词汇] ① need to do sth需要做某事 ② have a picnic野餐 ③ remember to do sth记得做某事 [高分句型] ①For this trip, we all need to take lunch because there are no restaurants on the way.（原因状语从句） ②Also, please remember to take some water since you are sure to need it during the long hiking.（原因状语从句） 10． As the Internet has become part of our lives, it’s important to be a good teen netizen. For one thing, being a good netizen benefits ourselves because it helps us to win acceptance and respect from others. For another, if everyone behaves properly online, we can help to build a safer and more positive online community. To be a good teen netizen, here are some useful tips. First, we need to communicate in a polite way. It helps everyone feel good and respected. Second, we’d better be careful about the personal information we share online. If it ends up in the hands of the wrong people, we could face unexpected problems. Finally, we should use the Internet to our benefit, for education and self-improvement, not just to kill time. I believe that by working together, each one of us can contribute to building a positive and responsible online community, while enjoying the benefits of the Internet. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：内容提示已给出，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作的重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述为什么成为一名优秀的青少年网民很重要； 第二步，写出如何成为一名优秀的青少年网民； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb to do帮助某人做某事 ②had better最好 ③end up最终 [高分句型] For another, if everyone behaves properly online, we can help to build a safer and more positive online community.（if引导的条件状语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$