Unit 4 Writing (课件+导学案+教案）2024-2025学年人教版英语九年级全册

Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark. Topic writing Tina ①review the key words ,phrases and sentences that describe people’s changes. ②use the simple past tense and the simple present tense to write an article about people’s changes. ③have good changes and be a better man Learning Objectives Learning Objectives By the end of this class,you are able to 2 Lihe Middle School Studio Jia Ling Jia Ling’s changes. Good News!!! Li He Middle School’s Studio is interviewing a Chinese comedy star——Jia Ling. Let’s watch it together and think about what the interview is about? She used to be/have/wear/like_, but now _. She didn’t use to be/have/wear/like_, but now_. Free talk What are Jia Ling's changes? Appearance Personality Hobbies and living habits Li He Middle School Studio Report After interviewing Jia Ling, Li He Middle School English Club wrote a report about it. Let’s read it carefully together! Go Three years after her breakthrough (突破)with the self-written, self-directed,and self-starring comedy film Hi, Mom, the comedian Jia Ling returned with her encouraging comedy YOLO. In the past few years, she has changed a lot. In fact, Jia Ling used to be so short and heavy that she had no chance to be an actress. However, she never gave up but bravely showed herself on various stages. She made good use of her humor and sincerity(真诚) to make tons of fans love her. Now from the latest interview, Jia Ling looks very different. She is thin and beautiful. Moreover, she has strength and courage which makes her seem to be a boxing queen. Because she has been having a balanced diet and practicing boxing in the past one year. As for hobbies, she used to focus mainly on comedy performances. Now, besides comedies, she has developed a passion(热情) for film-making and boxing.What influences have these Changes had on her? These changes not only make Jia Ling change her shape but also turn her into a confident (自信的) person who finds herself and enjoys her own life. What great changes Jia Ling has made! Her changes tell all the young people a lesson that as long as you have courage, you can finally achieve success. From Fat Girl to Boxing Queen 1.What's the passage mainly about ? _. 2.What did Jia Ling use to look like? How about now? _. 3.What are Jia Ling’s hobbies now? _. 4.Do you think Jia Ling’s Changes are good or bad? Why? _ Answer Questions. Jia Ling’s Changes She used to be short and heavy , but now she is thin and beautiful Comedies ,film-making and boxing Go Three years after her breakthrough (突破)with the self-written, self-directed,and self-starring comedy film Hi, Mom, the comedian Jia Ling returned with her encouraging comedy YOLO. In the past few years, she has changed a lot. In fact, Jia Ling used to be so short and heavy that she had no chance to be an actress. However, she never gave up but bravely showed herself on various stages. She made good use of his humor and sincereness(真诚) to make tons of fans love her. Now from the latest interviews, Jia Ling looks very different. She is thin and beautiful. Moreover, she has strength and courage which makes her seem to be a boxing queen. Because she has been having a balanced diet and practicing boxing in the past one year .As for hobbies, she used to focus mainly on comedy performances. Now, besides comedies, she has developed a passion(热情) for film-making and boxing. What influences have these Changes had on her ? These changes not only make Jia Ling change her shape, but also turn her into a confident (自信的) person who finds herself and enjoys her own life. What great changes Jia Ling has made! Her changes tell all the young people a lesson that as long as you have courage, you can finally achieve success. From Fat Girl to Boxing Queen 4.Do you think Jia Ling’s Changes are good or bad? Why? _ _ _ _ _ Answer Questions. Good. Because these changes not only make her change her shape but also turn her into a confident person who finds herself and enjoys her own life. Go Three years after her breakthrough (突破)with the self-written, self-directed, and self-starring comedy film Hi, Mom, the comedian Jia Ling returned with her encouraging comedy YOLO. In the past few years, she has changed a lot. In fact, Jia Ling used to be so short and heavy that she had no chance to be an actress. However, she never gave up but bravely showed herself on various stages. She made good use of his humor and sincereness(真诚) to make tons of fans love her. Now from the latest interviews, Jia Ling looks very different. She is thin and beautiful. Moreover, she has strength and courage which makes her seem to be a boxing queen. Because she has been having a balanced diet and practicing boxing in the past one year .As for hobbies, she used to focus mainly on comedy performances. Now, besides comedies, she has developed a passion(热情) for film-making and boxing. What influences have these Changes had on her ? These changes not only make Jia Ling change her shape, but also turn her into a confident (自信的) person who finds herself and enjoys her own life. What great changes Jia Ling has made! Her changes tell all the young people a lesson that as long as you have courage, you can finally achieve success. From Fat Girl to Boxing Queen 5.Group –work Read the passage again and find the answers to the two questions 1) Discuss the structure of the passage. A.①/②/③ B.①②/③ C.①/②③ 2) Underline the good phrases and sentences to describe people’s changes. _ _ Answer Questions. Go Three years after her breakthrough (突破)with the self-written, self-directed,and self-starring comedy film Hi, Mom, the comedian Jia Ling returned with her encouraging comedy YOLO. In the past few years, she has changed a lot. In fact, Jia Ling used to be so short and heavy that she had no chance to be an actress. However, she never gave up but bravely showed herself on various stages. She made good use of his humor and sincereness(真诚) to make tons of fans love her. Now from the latest interviews, Jia Ling looks very different. She is thin and beautiful. Moreover, she has strength and courage which makes her seem to be a boxing queen. Because she has been having a balanced diet and practicing boxing in the past one year . As for hobbies, she used to focus mainly on comedy performances. Now, besides comedies, she has developed a passion(热情) for film-making and boxing. What influences have these Changes had on her ? These changes not only make Jia Ling change her shape, but also turn her into a confident (自信的) person who finds herself and enjoys her own life. What great changes Jia Ling has made! Her changes tell all the young people a lesson that as long as you have courage, you can finally achieve success. Go From Fat Girl to Boxing Queen Answer Questions. Jia Ling’s Changes! ① Discuss the structure of the passage. Beginning (topic) Body (changes and influences) Ending (sum-up and feelings) A.①/②/③ B.①②/③ C.①/②③ Three years after her breakthrough (突破)with the self-written, self-directed, and self-starring comedy film Hi, Mom, the comedian Jia Ling returned with her encouraging comedy YOLO. In the past few years, she has changed a lot. In fact, Jia Ling used to be so short and heavy that she had no chance to be an actress. However, she never gave up but bravely showed herself on various stages. She made good use of his humor and sincerity(真诚) to make tons of fans love her. Now from the latest interviews, Jia Ling looks very different. She is thin and beautiful. Moreover, she has strength and courage which makes her seem to be a boxing queen. Because she has been having a balanced diet and practicing boxing in the past one year . As for hobbies, she used to focus mainly on comedy performances. Now, besides comedies,she has developed a passion(热情) for film-making and boxing. What influences have these Changes had on her ?These changes not only make Jia Ling change her shape, but also turn her into a confident (自信的) person who finds herself and enjoys her own life. What great changes Jia Ling has made! Her changes tell all the young people a lesson that as long as you have courage, you can finally achieve success. ② Summarize the good sentences to describe people’s changes. Writing Practice (写作练习) 时光飞逝,同学们来礼和中学已经两年多了。跟两年前的自己相比,你一定有了很大的变化。请根据以下要求与提示,完成写作任务。 要求:1. 不少于80词。 2. 短文要包含所有要点,可适当发挥。 Pre-writing 细心审题 I’ve Changed a Lot 过去两年我发生了很多变化。 我的变化以及影响。 1.外貌 2. … 3. … 我对这些变化的感受 12 I Have Changed a Lot! My life has changed a lot in the last two years. First of all ,as for my appearances, I used to_. but now I‘m _. At the same time, I _ in the past , but now_. At last, as for _, my biggest change is that I liked when I was young. However, I _now..I think these changes make me_. In a word,_ _ While-writing Tips: Group A &B write by yourselves. Group C write after the sample. 阅读自己的文章,并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。 Post-writing: 自查与互查 自查 ①欣赏与修正:A1&C——A2&B A2&B——A1&C 请交换习作欣赏,用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句 , 并运 用改错符号找出不足,进行适当修改。 ②评分:以满分15分为标准,给同伴的习作打分。 ③点评:欣赏亮点,修正不足(篇章结构分析和细节点评) 互查 4 mins Challenge 1: Do the self-check 自评时请务必在作文处按照要求做好标注,并完成自评表,填好自评分数 评价维度 细则 是 否(请在原文标出并修改) 得分 写作规范(1分) Standard 1. 我的短文写作是否规范?(书写、大小写、标点符号) 结构(1分) Structure 2. 我的短文结构是否清晰?(分段) 内容 (8分) Content 3. 我的短文内容要点是否齐全?(要有细节支撑并标注出要点;要点1-1分,要点2-6分,要点3-1分) 语言 (5分) Language 4. 我的短文没有拼写或语法错误?(3分)如有,请标注;一类错误扣0.5分。 5. 我的短文是否使用了丰富的词语和句型?(2分)请标注出高级词汇和所使用的复合句 自评反思:我做得好的方面是_, 我做得不足的地方是_。 我打算这样改进:_。 总分: 评价维度 细则(互评重点:为自评查漏补缺,且关注哪些词句可以进行美化升华。) 得分 写作规范(1分)Standard 1. 短文写作是否规范?(书写、大小写、标点符号) 结构(1分)Structure 2. 短文结构是否清晰?(分段) 内容 (8分) Content 3. 短文内容要点是否齐全?(要有细节支撑)请检查核对要点分数 语言 (5分)Language 4. 短文没有拼写或语法错误?(3分)如有错误,请标注并教其修改 5. 短文是否使用了丰富的词语和句型?(2分)如否,请教其使用高级词汇和复合句 总分: 小组讨论汇总表(英语组长完成) 小组互评总体情况反馈 我们在互评过程中发现的亮点有 我们在互评过程中发现的常见的拼写及语法错误有 小组推选的优秀作文及推荐原因 Group work: Do the peer-check 在写作自评表基础上完成互评。 5 mins 互评组内分工: 1.A1&C评A2&B层同学,A2&B评A1&C层同学。请务 必在原文做好标注。 2.被评同学需按照意见修改作文。 3.各小组派一名代表上来展示。 Practice Show time Please polish your writing based on the self-check and peer-check. 根据自评与同伴互评完成作文二稿。 Homework $$ 人教版 九年级英语上 课题：Unit4 I used to be afraid of dark. （Topic： Writing） 教学目标 By the end of the class, you are able ① to review the key words, phrases and sentences that describe people’s changes. ②to use the simple past tense and the simple present tense to write an article about people’s changes. ③ to have good changes and be a better man. 教学 重难点 ①Master the key words, phrases and sentences that describe people’s changes. ② Use the simple past tense and the simple present tense to write an article about people’s changes. 教学方法 1.Task-based Teaching Method 2.Communicative Teaching Method 3.Cooperative Learning Method 教学过程 教学环节 教学活动 Before writing Activity1. watch a video. Li He Middle School’s Studio is interviewing a Chinese comedy star——Jia Ling. Let’s watch it together and think about what the interview is about ? Question：What’ s the interview about ? Ss: Jia Ling’s changes. 教学设计说明：视频导入本节课写作的主题，一是让学生提起本节课学习的兴趣，同时能更加直接地进入到本节课的写作主题。一举两得。 Activity2. Free talk. After watching the interview, the teacher show students two pictures of Jia Ling before and now.And then let them have a free talk : what are Jia Ling’s changes? Ss answer: She used to be/have/like__________, but now ________. She didn’t use to be/ have/like______, but now_______. (appearances, personality, hobbies and living habits) 教学设计说明：复习本节课写作学生可能会用到的描述人物各方面变化的单词，短语。激活学生思维，充分进行写前输入。 Activity3： Answer Questions Report: After interviewing Jia Ling, Li He Middle School English Club wrote a report about it. Let’s read it together carefully! 1.What’ s the passage mainly about ? __________________________. 2.What did Jia Ling use to look like? How about now? __________________________. 3.What are Jia Ling’s hobbies now? __________________________. 4.Do you think Jia Ling’s Changes are good or bad? Why? __________________________ 5.Group work Read the passage again and find the answers to the two questions Choose the structure of the passage. A.①/②/③ B.①②/③ C.①/②③ 2) Underline the good phrases and sentences to describe people’s changes. 教学设计说明：由语篇导入，而且语篇与主题写作内容相关。学生在阅读的过程中，可以了解本节课写作的基本内容，结构和一些优美的句子。同时，通过小组讨论，让学生动起来，课堂活跃起来，同时对于不会的同学也可以起到帮助的作用。 While writing Activity1: writing practice After reviewing the words ,phrases sentences and structure about one’s changes. Show a video to the Ss to recall their memory about their own changes. Then ask the Ss to practice writing by themselves. 教学设计说明：以视频导入写作部分，直观又有趣。同时本次作文练习的内容基本跟写前部分活动三的阅读文章内容基本一致。这样不但可以检测学生是否有掌握本单元写作主题的重要单词，短语，句子和结构，而且还能让同学们充分运用自己以学的知识，进行创作和提升。 Post——writing Activity1: Do the self-check. Ask the Ss to check their own composition by themselves and then fill in the chart to give a grade. Activity2: Do the peer-check. Ask the Ss to do the peer-check and then ask some groups to show their compositions. 教学设计说明: 通过自查和互查，不但可以让同学们找出自己的问题，也可以学习别人的优美句子和写作思路，更重要的是小组合作和展示锻炼的学生的合作意识的综合运用语言的能力。 Activity3: Summary Summarize the key words,phrases ,sentences and structure of this lesson. Give their some useful sentences to learn to have good changes and be a better man. 教学设计说明: 再次强调本单元重点单词，短语，句子和写作结构。为今后的写作课打好基础。 Homewor-k Please polish your writing based on the self-check and peer-check. 板书设计 Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark. (Topic Writing) 教学反思 $$____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit4 I used to be afraid of dark ( Section B Writing) Learning Objectives： By the end of the class ,you are able ① to review the key words ,phrases and sentences that describe people’s changes. ②to use the simple past tense and the simple present tense to write an article about people’s changes. ③to have good changes and be a better man 【预习案】 预习一：Write down the words and phrases.(AB组做到会读会默写，C组熟读）。 Appearance: I used to be/have/wear______________ , but now I_______________. I didn't use to be/have/wear___________, but now I_____________. 胖的 ____________瘦的________________高的 _________ 矮的 __________ 年轻的 __________年迈的 ____________ 帅气的________ 强壮的__________ 长/短发的 __________________________ 卷/直发的 ______________________ 中等身高_____________________________ 戴眼镜________________________ 圆圆的脸___________________________中等身材的 ______________________ Personality：As for my personality, I used to be _______________ when I was young .Now I become _______________ . 外向的 ______ 害羞的 _______ 安静的 ____ 活跃的 ______ 勤奋的 ______ 懒惰的 _______ 认真的 ______ 粗心的 ______ 幽默的 _______ 乐于助人的 ________ 勇敢的 ______ 有耐心的 _______ 友好的的 ________ 聪明的________ 可爱的 _______ 自信的 ______ Hobby: As for hobbies, I used to be interested in __________ , but now I like__________ . I didn't use to be interested in _______, but now I like__________ 运动 ______ 唱歌_______________ 跳舞 _________ 画画______ 拍照 _______ 读书 _______________打篮球 ______________________ 踢足球 _________ 弹钢琴__________ 游泳______________________ 预习二：翻译下列句子 1.她过去常常很胖但是现在她又高又瘦。 _____________________________________________________________________ 2.我是如此活泼，以至于我在学校参加了很多活动。 _____________________________________________________________________ 3.他过去是一个戴着眼镜的矮个子男孩。 ___________________________________________________________________ 4.但是现在我喜欢打篮球因为有益于身体健康，而且我认为很有趣。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 5.Tina喜欢唱歌并且经常听英文歌曲在空闲的时候。 _________________________________________________________________________ 【对分单】 Task 1：Answer questions. Three years after her breakthrough (突破)with the self-written, self-directed,and self-starring comedy film Hi, Mom, the comedian Jia Ling returned with her encouraging comedy YOLO. In the past few years, she has changed a lot. In fact, Jia Ling used to be so short and heavy that she had no chance to be an actress. However, she never gave up but bravely showed herself on various stages. She made good use of her humor and sincerity(真诚) to make tons of fans love her. Now from the latest interview, Jia Ling looks very different. She is thin and beautiful. Moreover, she has strength and courage which makes her seem to be a boxing queen. Because she has been having a balanced diet and practicing boxing in the past one year . As for hobbies, she used to focus mainly on comedy performances. Now, besides comedies, she has developed a passion(热情) for film-making and boxing. What influences have these Changes had on her ? These changes not only make Jia Ling change her shape but also turn her into a confident (自信的) person who finds herself and enjoys her own life. What great changes Jia Ling has made! Her changes tell all the young people a lesson that as long as you have courage, you can finally achieve success. 1.What's the passage mainly about ? _______________________________________________________________________. 2.What did Jia Ling use to look like?How about now? _______________________________________________________________________. 3.What are Jia Ling’s hobbies now? _______________________________________________________________________. 4.Do you think Jia Ling’s Changes are good or bad? Why? _____________________________________________________________________ Task 2：Group work. ① Choose the structure of the passage ? A.①/②/③ B.①②/③ C.①/②③ ② Underline the good phrases and sentences that describe people’s changes. Task 3：Writing practice. I Have Changed a Lot! How time flies!It has been two years since I studied in Li He middle  school .______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Group C 可根据模板完成作文。 How time flies! It has been two years since I studied in Li He middle school. My life has changed a lot in the last two years. First of all ,as for my appearances, I used to________________________________. but now I’ m______________________________________________. At the same time, I _____________________________________ in the past , but now______________________. At last, as for _______________,the biggest change is that I liked when I was young. However, I _______________________now . I think these changes make me______________________. In a word,_______________________________________________________ Task 4: Do the self-check 评价维度 细则 是 否（请在原文标出并修改） 得分 写作规范 (1分) Standard 1. 我的短文写作是否规范？（书写、大小写、标点符号） 结构（1分） Structure 2. 我的短文结构是否清晰？（分段） 内容 （8分） Content 3. 我的短文内容要点是否齐全？（要有细节支撑并标注出要点；要点1-1分，要点2-6分，要点3-1分） 语言 （5分） Language 4. 我的短文没有拼写或语法错误？(3分）（如有，请标注；一类错误扣0.5分，共3分） 5. 我的短文是否使用了丰富的词语和句型？（2分）（请标注出高级词汇和所使用的复合句，共2分。） 自评反思：我做得好的方面是___________________________________________________________。 我做得不足的地方是__________________________________________________________。 我打算这样改进：____________________________________________________________。 总分： Task 5: Do the peer-check 互评组内分工： 1.A1&C评A2&B层同学, A2&B评A1&C层同学。请务必在原文做好标注 2.被评同学需按照意见修改作文 3.各小组派代表上来展示(人数不限） 评价维度 细则（互评重点：为自评查漏补缺，且关注哪些词句可以进行美化升华。) 得分 写作规范（1分） Standard 1. 短文写作是否规范？（书写、大小写、标点符号） 结构（1分） Structure 2. 短文结构是否清晰？（分段） 内容 （8分） Content 3. 短文内容要点是否齐全？（要有细节支撑）请检查核对要点分数 语言 （5分）Language 4. 短文没有拼写或语法错误？（3分）如有错误，请标注并教其修改 5. 短文是否使用了丰富的词语和句型？（2分）如否，请教其使用高级词汇和复合句 总分： 小组讨论汇总表（英语组长完成） 小组互评总体情况反馈 我们在互评过程中发现的亮点有 我们在互评过程中发现的常见的拼写及语法错误有 小组推选的优秀作文及推荐原因 $$