Unit 1 The king's new clothes写作提优-2024-2025学年六年级英语上册提优练习（译林版三起）

译林版六年级上册Unit 1写作提优专训 描述配图故事 1、 方法指导 描述配图故事，可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步开头，引出故事时间； 第二步正文，具体说明其地点、人物以及故事经过； 第三步结尾，介绍故事的结局。 2、 素材积累 必备词汇 必备句型 开头 时间: long long ago, one day... • Long long ago, there was a little girl. 正文 地点: house, mountain... 人物: an old man, a little boy... 故事经过: told a story, cooked nice food... • I lived in a small house then. • The old man told the boy a story and cooked nice food. • The two men showed the clothes to the king. 结尾 结尾: happy, glad... • They had a happy life. 3、 以读促写(选择合适的句子补全范文，体悟写法) 1. ________ Her name was Little Red Riding Hood. One morning, Little Red Riding Hood went to visit her grandmother.2. ________ The wolf lied to her and went to the grandmother's home.3. ________ A few minutes later, Little Red Riding Hood knocked on the door. The wolf jumped into the bed and pulled the covers over his nose. Little Red Riding Hood found Grandma’s ears, eyes and mouth were very big.4. ________ Then the wolf slept. A hunter saw the wolf. He killed the wolf and opened the wolf's belly (肚子).5. ________ A. He ate the grandmother. B. On the way, she met a wolf. C. The wolf ate Little Red Riding Hood, too. D. Long long ago, there was a little girl. E. He saved Little Red Riding Hood and her grandmother. 4、 小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 根据图片及提示，围绕“吃不到葡萄说葡萄酸”的寓言故事写一篇短文，不少于七句话。 提示: When: one day Who:a fox Where: in the garden How: hungry What: wanted to pick grapes; couldn't reach(够不着); thought(认为); sour(酸的); went away(离开) One day, [提分练1] “一只小鸟渴了，要喝瓶子里的水。瓶颈太长了，小鸟喝不到水。于是……”根据提示，展开你想象的翅膀，编写一个小故事。 要求：用一般过去时讲述；书写规范，不少于50个单词。 [提分练2] 根据所给表格提示，发挥想象，编写故事，至少6 句话。 When Where many years ago behind two mountains Who What an old man and his family work hard How busy, tired, happy [提分练3] 请根据所给图片和提示，描述《狐假虎威》的小故事。 参考词汇: there were / was..., be afraid of..., catch, say, run away, the king of the forest, walk要求：1.时态使用一般过去时。2.语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 Long long ago, there was a tiger. He was very hungry. [提分练4] 请你根据以下图片及提示，以“A foolish dog'”为题写一则英语小故事。 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于50词。 提示：long long ago, a piece of meat, a small bridge, saw himself(他自己), thought(think的过去式), barked at the dog, fell into the water A foolish dog 参考答案 单元写作提优专训 1. D 2. B 3. A 4. C 5. E 范文： One day, a fox went out for a walk in the garden. He was very hungry. He wanted to find some things to eat. There was a grape tree in front of him. The fox wanted to pick some grapes. But the tree was so high that he couldn't reach the grapes. He thought the grapes were sour. So he went away. [提分练1] Long long ago, there was a bird. He was very thirsty. He wanted to drink some water. He found a bottle, but there wasn't much water in it. He couldn't drink the water. He thought hard, but he still had no idea. Suddenly(突然地), he saw a boy. The boy was drinking the milk with a straw. The bird went to look for a straw. Then he put the straw in the bottle. And he could drink the water now. He is clever. (仅供参考) [提分练2] Many years ago, there was an old man. He and his family lived behind two mountains. He wanted to move the two mountains away. So he and his family worked hard. They were busy every day. They were also tired and happy. At last, they moved the mountains away.(仅供参考) [提分练3] 范文： Long long ago, there was a tiger. He was very hungry. He caught a little fox and wanted to eat him. The fox said,“I'm the king of the forest and all the animals are afraid of me.”The tiger didn't believe that. Then the little fox asked the tiger to walk after him. When the animals saw them, they ran away quickly. [提分练4] 示例： A foolish dog Long long ago,there was a dog.One day,he had a large piece of meat in his mouth.When he walked on a small bridge,he looked down and saw himself in the water.He thought it was another dog and that dog also had a large piece of meat in his mouth.He said to himself,"I want to get his meat.Then I can have two pieces of meat."Then he opened his mouth and barked at the dog in the water.But his meat fell into the water.How foolish the dog was! 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$