Unit4 Computers 单元话题写作（电脑技术）满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津上海版）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课系列资料，已编校！ Unit 4 Computers 单元话题写作（电脑技术）满分范文15篇 1．假定你是李华，学校将举行主题为“Computers are useful in our daily lives”的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。 内容包括： 1. 说明原因； 2. 阐述电脑的用途； 3. 发出好好利用电脑的号召。 要求： 1. 词数60-80开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文需要包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Good afternoon, everyone, I’m so glad to stand here and give my speech. My name is Li Hua. The topic of my speech is “Computers are useful in our daily lives”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thanks for your attention. 2．21世纪英语报将开展关于“计算机与学生生活”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以“The Computer in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，简述计算机在你生活中的功能用途，并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。 要求：1.词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 参考词汇：message消息；function功能；influence影响。 The Computer in My Life The computer becomes an important part of my life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．日常生活中，当我们在使用电脑的时候，不禁会感叹它的方便快捷、功能超强。请以“The Great Invention—Computer”为题谈谈你的看法吧！80 词左右。 温馨提示： 1.What do you think of it? 2. What do you usually do on it? 3. Why is it useful? 4. Let’s imagine what it looks like in the future. The Great Invention—Computer ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．科技的发展不仅使我们的国家更加强大，也给我们带来了许多便利。其中，电脑技术在科技发展中起了非常重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，谈谈电脑的用途，并谈谈你自己对此的看法。90 词左右。（文章开头已给出， 不计入总词数） With the development of science and technology, computers are widely used in many different fields.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．随着电脑技术的飞速发展，电脑已经进入各行各业、千家万户，成为现代社会不可缺少的重要角色。请以“The Great Invention — Computer”为题，写一篇英语短文， 说明电脑在工作、生活中的应用。 内容要点： 1. 医生需要电脑为病人检查 (look over) 身体； 2. 老师需要电脑教学生； 3. 学生需要电脑学习…… 注意：100词以上，可适当发挥。文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。 The Great Invention — Computer _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是Alan，请你根据表格提示，介绍你最喜欢的礼物——电脑。 The best present in my life—a computer When I got it on my thirteenth birthday From my father Features（特征） black with a white logo; very thin; a 14-inch screen; a large memory（内存） What I use it for searching for information; playing games on weekends; relaxing 要求：1.参考所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） The best present in my life—a computer On my thirteenth birthday, I got the best present in my life—a computer from my father. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你们学校校报将出版一期以computer为主题的专刊，号召全体同学积极投稿。请你根据以下所给的内容提示，写一篇英语短文。 电脑的地位 最伟大的发明之一；在我们的日常生活中越来越重要。 电脑的用途 1. 搜索信息，获得更多新知识（knowledge），有助于我们学习; 2. 可以听歌、看电影等有利于我们放松心情； 3. 可以结交来自全世界的朋友，与他人保持联系。 你的观点或建议 （合理使用电脑） 不少于两点。 注意： ①不少于 80 词（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； ②不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Nowadays, the computer plays a very important role in our society. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．当今社会，电脑被广泛使用。我们平时可以用电脑做什么呢？过度使用电脑又会带来哪些问题呢？请根据提供的思维导图用英语以“Computers”为题，谈谈你的看法。 要求语句连贯，表达准确， 80词左右，短语开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Computers Nowadays computers are widely used in our daily life. What can we do with computers? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．如今，电脑被广泛使用。而中学生沉迷网络游戏的问题也越来越严重，这影响了学生的身心健康。请你写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 电脑带来的好处：查找信息、帮助学习、在网上看电影等； 2. 过度使用电脑的弊端：花太多时间上网玩游戏或聊天，影响健康与学习； 3. 你的看法。 注意： 1. 词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包含上面所提供的所有信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 4. 请在答卷规定范围内写作，超出范围的内容无效。 Computers are more and more useful in our lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假定你是李华，参加学校的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿，谈论有关电脑使用的问题。 内容包括： 1.讲述电脑在生活中的重要性； 2.说一说在生活中使用电脑有哪些益处和坏处； 3.倡导同学们正确、合理使用电脑。 (参考词汇： advantage 优点； disadvantage 缺点) 注意： 1.词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.短文须包括所给内容信息， 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯； 3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 Dear fellow students, Computers have become part of our life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 11．伟大的发明改变世界。电脑等科技产品的发明改变了人们的生活方式，促进了社会的发展。请你以“The Great Invention—the Computer”为题写一篇文章。 内容包括： 1. 发明对于人类历史的重要性； 2. 电脑的用途； 3. 如何恰当使用电脑。 要求： 1. 词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所给内容信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Great Invention—the Computer Inventions have played an important role in human history. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．计算机在我们的工作、生活中的作用越来越大，你知道计算机的起源于发展吗？请就计算机的发明时间（1946年）、大小、用途等方面，谈一下它的发展变化，并说明你对未来计算机的畅想。 要求： 1.意见连贯，语句通顺； 2.词数不少于80词；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。 Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers? 13．科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如computers，cars，smart phones，e-books，robots，Internet...请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。 要求: 1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————. 14．假定你是李华，你的父母在你的生日即将到来之际，给你买了一台电脑，你非常开心。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信介绍它的相关情况。 内容包括： 1. 对电脑的外观进行总体描述； 2. 谈谈电脑的用途（存储信息；辅助学习；给生活带来便利、增添乐趣等）； 3. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文必须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 在文中不要出现考生和相关任务的真实校名和姓名； Dear Peter, I have got a nice computer recently. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 15．随着电脑技术的飞速发展，电脑已经进入各行各业、千家万户，已经成为了现代社会不可缺少的重要角色。请以 “The Most Useful Invention—Computer” 为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，说明电脑在工作、生活中的应用等。 提示：1.医生需要电脑为病人检查身体； 2.老师需要电脑教学生； 3.学生需要电脑学习…… 注意:1. 短文必须包括所给提示中1-3项的内容，可展开思路，适当发挥； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名； 3. 80词左右，语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课系列资料，已编校！ Unit 4 Computers 单元话题写作（电脑技术）满分范文15篇 1．假定你是李华，学校将举行主题为“Computers are useful in our daily lives”的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。 内容包括： 1. 说明原因； 2. 阐述电脑的用途； 3. 发出好好利用电脑的号召。 要求： 1. 词数60-80开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文需要包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Good afternoon, everyone, I’m so glad to stand here and give my speech. My name is Li Hua. The topic of my speech is “Computers are useful in our daily lives”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thanks for your attention. 【答案】例文 Good afternoon, everyone, I’m so glad to stand here and give my speech. My name is Li Hua. The topic of my speech is “Computers are useful in our daily lives”. Now computers are useful in our daily lives. They are playing an important role in our lives. So I want to talk about computers. Computers have many uses in our life. When we have problems in our  study, we can check online. We also use computers to chat with our friends. If we are tired of studying, we also use them to listen to music and watch movies. We should make good use of computers. That’s all! Thanks for your attention. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据写作要点进行写作，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍演讲的主题及原因； 第二步，介绍电脑的用途； 第三步，发出好好利用电脑的号召。 [亮点词汇] ①be useful in在……中有用 ②talk about谈论 ③chat with sb与某人聊天 [高分句型] ①When we have problems in my study, we can check online.（when引导时间状语从句） ②If we are tired of studying, we also use them to listen to music and watch movies.（if引导条件状语从句） 2．21世纪英语报将开展关于“计算机与学生生活”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以“The Computer in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，简述计算机在你生活中的功能用途，并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。 要求：1.词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 参考词汇：message消息；function功能；influence影响。 The Computer in My Life The computer becomes an important part of my life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Computer in My Life The computer becomes an important part of my life. Usually, I use computer to search for some useful information and do further reading. With the help of computer, I can get more knowledge easily in my free time. By receiving and sending e-mails, I can communicate with my classmates and discuss problems with them. What’s more, I can enjoy music online to relax myself. I can even buy all kinds of things online. It can save not only time but also money. Moreover, I can take part in some kinds of activities online. In a word, the computer really helps me a lot. It brings me a more meaningful and colourful life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求根据图示信息介绍计算机在生活的功能用途，以及对我的生活的影响，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，根据图示信息介绍计算机在我的生活中的功能用途及影响； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①search for搜索 ②with the help of在……的帮助下 ③all kinds of各种各样的 ④in a word总之 [高分句型] By receiving and sending e-mails, I can communicate with my classmates and discuss problems with them. (动名词作宾语) 3．日常生活中，当我们在使用电脑的时候，不禁会感叹它的方便快捷、功能超强。请以“The Great Invention—Computer”为题谈谈你的看法吧！80 词左右。 温馨提示： 1.What do you think of it? 2. What do you usually do on it? 3. Why is it useful? 4. Let’s imagine what it looks like in the future. The Great Invention—Computer ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： There are many inventions in the world. I think computer is one of the greatest inventions in the world. It is widely used in hospitals, schools and so on. It can help people do lots of work. Computers are so useful that we can see them everywhere. For example, with a computer, doctors can examine patients more quickly. Thanks to computers, we can get news around the world in a short time. As for myself, I often search information on the Internet when I meet problems that I can’t solve. Computer is our good friend. In the future, it will be smarter and more powerful. The size of a computer can be much smaller. Maybe it will look like a phone and people can carry it everywhere to do their work. 【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求以“伟大的发明——电脑”为题，发表自己对于电脑的看法，讲述自己常用电脑做什么，说明电脑为什么是有用的，并设想电脑未来的样子。 2.写作指导：写作时应紧扣主题，主要以第三人称进行陈述，时态采用一般现在时为主，最后用一般将来时设想未来；分为三段，第一段引出主题并表达自己的看法，第二段说明电脑有用的原因以及自己常用电脑做的事情，第三段设想电脑未来的样子；力求行文连贯，语言准确，条理清晰。 4．科技的发展不仅使我们的国家更加强大，也给我们带来了许多便利。其中，电脑技术在科技发展中起了非常重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，谈谈电脑的用途，并谈谈你自己对此的看法。90 词左右。（文章开头已给出， 不计入总词数） With the development of science and technology, computers are widely used in many different fields.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of science and technology, computers are widely used in many different fields. In medical care, doctors can find diseases easily with the help of computers. In factories, robots are controlled by computers to do work that is hard or dangerous for humans. In the space industry, computers have been used to control the speed and direction of spaceships. In business, computers are used to place and cancel orders. Computers also play an important role in our daily lives. For instance, we can do online shopping and take online classes at home. Computers help us at work and at home, so we should work hard and master computer skills to make them serve us better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，结合医疗、工厂、航空业、商业、生活谈谈电脑的用途； 第二步，书写结语，谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①For instance例如 ②with the help of在……的帮助下 ③play a role in发挥作用 [高分句型] ①In the space industry, computers have been used to control the speed and direction of spaceships.（被动语态） 5．随着电脑技术的飞速发展，电脑已经进入各行各业、千家万户，成为现代社会不可缺少的重要角色。请以“The Great Invention — Computer”为题，写一篇英语短文， 说明电脑在工作、生活中的应用。 内容要点： 1. 医生需要电脑为病人检查 (look over) 身体； 2. 老师需要电脑教学生； 3. 学生需要电脑学习…… 注意：100词以上，可适当发挥。文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。 The Great Invention — Computer _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Great Invention — Computer There are many inventions in the world. I think computer is the most useful invention today. It is widely used in hospitals, schools and so on. It can help people do lots of work. First, the computer is necessary when the doctors look over patients’ illness. Second, our teachers need it to teach students and also they can correct our homework on computers. What’s more, we students can study our subjects with computers. If we have problems when studying, we can search information on the Internet. Computer is our good friend. It will be used by everyone in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己对电脑的看法； 第二步，具体阐述电脑在工作、生活中的应用； 第三步，总结。 [亮点词汇] ①and so on等等 ②what’s more而且 [高分句型] ①I think computer is the most useful invention today.（省略that的宾语从句） ②First, the computer is necessary when the doctors look over patients’ illness.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③If we have problems when studying, we can search information on the internet.（if引导的条件状语从句） 6．假如你是Alan，请你根据表格提示，介绍你最喜欢的礼物——电脑。 The best present in my life—a computer When I got it on my thirteenth birthday From my father Features（特征） black with a white logo; very thin; a 14-inch screen; a large memory（内存） What I use it for searching for information; playing games on weekends; relaxing 要求：1.参考所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） The best present in my life—a computer On my thirteenth birthday, I got the best present in my life—a computer from my father. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The best present in my life—a computer On my thirteenth birthday, I got the best present in my life—a computer from my father. It is black with a white logo in the middle of the cover. It is very thin and has a 14-inch screen. With a large memory, it can store a lot of documents, pictures and videos. The computer is amazing. However, my father doesn’t allow me to use it for a long time. I usually use it when I need to search for some information about my homework. When the weekend comes, I can play games on it for an hour. Sometimes, I watch a movie or listen to some music on it to relax myself. I think the computer is very useful in my life. I will surely cherish the wonderful present forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时、一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的。开头已给出； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“特征、用处”两方面分别描述电脑的特点； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①with a large memory有大内存 ②allow sb to do允许某人做某事 [高分句型] ① When the weekend comes, I can play games on it for an hour.（时间状语从句） ②I think the computer is very useful in my life.（宾语从句） 7．你们学校校报将出版一期以computer为主题的专刊，号召全体同学积极投稿。请你根据以下所给的内容提示，写一篇英语短文。 电脑的地位 最伟大的发明之一；在我们的日常生活中越来越重要。 电脑的用途 1. 搜索信息，获得更多新知识（knowledge），有助于我们学习; 2. 可以听歌、看电影等有利于我们放松心情； 3. 可以结交来自全世界的朋友，与他人保持联系。 你的观点或建议 （合理使用电脑） 不少于两点。 注意： ①不少于 80 词（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； ②不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Nowadays, the computer plays a very important role in our society. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Nowadays, the computer plays a very important role in our society. As one of the greatest inventions, computer is becoming more and more important in our daily life. We can use them to search for information and get more new knowledge. They help us learn. The students think they can chat online, make friends and shop on the computer. They can play computer games and listen to music to relax. They can also make friends from all over the world and keep in touch with others.   We should not use it for too long every day and pay attention to protecting our eyes. Remember not to spend too much time playing computer games. I think using a computer is helpful. We can send and receive e-mails and see the films and so on. But we can’t always play computer games, or it will influence our study. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，表明电脑的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍电脑的用处； 第三步，表达自己的观点和建议。 [亮点词汇] ①in our daily life在我们日常生活中 ②search for查找 ③listen to music听音乐 ④all over the world全世界 ⑤keep in touch with与某人保持联系 [高分句型] ①As one of the greatest inventions, computer is becoming more and more important in our daily life.（比较级句型） ②The students think they can chat online, make friends and shop on the computer.（宾语从句） 8．当今社会，电脑被广泛使用。我们平时可以用电脑做什么呢？过度使用电脑又会带来哪些问题呢？请根据提供的思维导图用英语以“Computers”为题，谈谈你的看法。 要求语句连贯，表达准确， 80词左右，短语开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Computers Nowadays computers are widely used in our daily life. What can we do with computers? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Computers Nowadays computers are widely used in our daily life. What can we do with computers? We can use computers to do many things. For example, we can use them to type and draw. We can go online and search for information. We can talk with our friends from different cities. The computer is very useful, but it’s not good for our eyes. We shouldn’t spend too much time on it. There may be false information on the Internet and we should be careful with it. In my opinion, computers are of great importance and it helps me a lot. I strictly control how long I use the computer and what I do with it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Computers”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出对话题的介绍； 第二步，分别介绍使用电脑的利弊； 第三步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①For example例如 ②search for information搜索信息 ③be careful with小心 ④In my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①There may be false information on the Internet and we should be careful with it.（并列句） ②I strictly control how long I use the computer and what I do with it.（宾语从句） 9．如今，电脑被广泛使用。而中学生沉迷网络游戏的问题也越来越严重，这影响了学生的身心健康。请你写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 电脑带来的好处：查找信息、帮助学习、在网上看电影等； 2. 过度使用电脑的弊端：花太多时间上网玩游戏或聊天，影响健康与学习； 3. 你的看法。 注意： 1. 词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包含上面所提供的所有信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 4. 请在答卷规定范围内写作，超出范围的内容无效。 Computers are more and more useful in our lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Computers are more and more useful in our lives. We can see the movies, listen to music and chat with friends through computers. We can use the computer to learn, find useful information and broaden our horizons. So I think playing games properly can relax the mood. Of course, there are also some shortcomings. Some students spend too much time playing computer games and have no time to do homework, which affects their study. It’s bad for your health, especially your eyes. In my opinion, we should use the Internet in a correct way so that it can help us a lot. Everyone should be careful and use the computer safely. It is only used for learning or looking for useful information. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍电脑带来的好处； 第二步，介绍过度使用电脑的弊端； 第三步，表明自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①chat with与某人聊天 ②too much太多 ③be bad for对……有害 ④In my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①Some students spend too much time playing computer games and have no time to do homework, which affects their study.（which引导的定语从句） ②In my opinion, we should use the Internet in a correct way so that it can help us a lot.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 10．假定你是李华，参加学校的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿，谈论有关电脑使用的问题。 内容包括： 1.讲述电脑在生活中的重要性； 2.说一说在生活中使用电脑有哪些益处和坏处； 3.倡导同学们正确、合理使用电脑。 (参考词汇： advantage 优点； disadvantage 缺点) 注意： 1.词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.短文须包括所给内容信息， 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯； 3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 Dear fellow students, Computers have become part of our life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear fellow students,   Computers have become part of our life. We use them for work, entertainment, communication, and so much more. Without computers, it would be difficult to imagine how we would manage our tasks and stay connected with the world.   Many students like getting online very much. They can gain much more knowledge from the Internet. It can make them clever by playing some different kinds of games. But some students spend too much time playing games. It does harm to their bodies or their studies. Some even make friends online. They don’t know the friends well. These take them too much time to write too many letters to each other and influence their studies too. So they do worse in their lessons and their health in the end.   I think they mustn’t get online when they’re studying at school. They can do a plan to do it in summer or winter holidays. I appeal to everyone to use computers correctly and reasonably. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述电脑在生活中的重要性； 第二步，说一说在生活中使用电脑有哪些益处和坏处； 第三步，倡导同学们正确、合理使用电脑。 [亮点词汇] ①entertainment娱乐 ②do harm to损害 ③plan to do sth.计划做某事 [高分句型] I think they mustn’t get online when they’re studying at school. (省略that的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句) 11．伟大的发明改变世界。电脑等科技产品的发明改变了人们的生活方式，促进了社会的发展。请你以“The Great Invention—the Computer”为题写一篇文章。 内容包括： 1. 发明对于人类历史的重要性； 2. 电脑的用途； 3. 如何恰当使用电脑。 要求： 1. 词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所给内容信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Great Invention—the Computer Inventions have played an important role in human history. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Great Invention—the Computer     Inventions have played an important role in human history. Inventions promote people to develop faster and make people’s life more convenient. Of all the inventions, I think computer is the most useful for the following reasons. First, the computer provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world. Second, it can help us with our study. And we can receive and send e-mails and messages. Last but not least, if you want to buy something, you can also do some shopping online. But if you use the computer too much, it will be harmful to our health. Therefore, we must use the computer properly, such as using it at a definite time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍发明的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍电脑的用途； 第三步，建议恰当使用电脑。 [亮点词汇] ①provide...with... 把某物提供给某人 ②last but not least 最后的但并非最不重要的 [高分句型] ①First, the computer provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world.（so that引导目的状语从句） ②I think computer is the most useful for the following reasons.（宾语从句） 12．计算机在我们的工作、生活中的作用越来越大，你知道计算机的起源于发展吗？请就计算机的发明时间（1946年）、大小、用途等方面，谈一下它的发展变化，并说明你对未来计算机的畅想。 要求： 1.意见连贯，语句通顺； 2.词数不少于80词；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。 Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers? 【答案】[例文] Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers? Computer was invented in 1946. At that time, the machine was huge and it was as large as a big house. It weighed about 30 tons. Computer is a very useful tool in our life, in our study as well as works. For example, computer can send some messages to foreign friends by e-mail. The computer can open our eyes to let us know more. Computer is the most helpful invention in the world. Computer can help us in study or work. There are many computer functions (功能). We can listen to music or play the game on computer. It makes us relax. It’s hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life. And in my opinion, computers are going to change our life completely in the near future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题为话题作文； ②时态：介绍电脑发明故事时，时态应用过去时，叙述其他内容时态应用现在时； ③提示：本文是写计算机的有关情况，内容包括计算机在我们生活中的作用，计算机的发明时间、地点、大小和用途、计算机的改变，以及个人对计算机的看法和未来的想象。在写作时应注意使用多种不同时态，同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍电脑的发明； 第二步，介绍电脑的用途； 第三步，谈谈自己对电脑的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as也 ②for example例如 ③in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①Computer was invented in 1946.（被动语态） ②There are many computer functions (功能).（there be句型） ③It’s hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life.（if引导条件状语从句） 13．科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如computers，cars，smart phones，e-books，robots，Internet...请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。 要求: 1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————. 【答案】One possible version: Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, the computer has become an important part. And it changed me a lot. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet. If I feel stressed from time to time, I can listen to music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online. But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the Internet. This makes me lazy and too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。 ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：从题干所给的科技中选择一种，谈谈这个发明对自己的影响以及是如何改变自己的生活的。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，是哪一个发明改变了自己； 第二步，介绍这项发明是如何改变自己的生活的； 第三步，介绍自己的感受总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①with the help of 在……的帮助下 ②search for 寻找 ③from time to time 不时 [高分句型] ①If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.（省略that的宾语从句） 14．假定你是李华，你的父母在你的生日即将到来之际，给你买了一台电脑，你非常开心。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信介绍它的相关情况。 内容包括： 1. 对电脑的外观进行总体描述； 2. 谈谈电脑的用途（存储信息；辅助学习；给生活带来便利、增添乐趣等）； 3. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文必须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 在文中不要出现考生和相关任务的真实校名和姓名； Dear Peter, I have got a nice computer recently. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter,     I have got a nice computer recently. It’s not big, but it’s very beautiful. It’s white. Every time I encounter problems in my study, I check online. Sometimes I also use it to chat with my classmates. Of course, I also downloaded a lot of learning materials. If I am tired of studying, I also use it to listen to music and watch movies. I also like online shopping, which makes me buy a lot of things I like without going out. I hope computers will become smaller and more functional in the future. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：根据题干中的提示介绍电脑的相关情况。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据所给的材料，给你的英国朋友Peter写封信介绍你的新电脑的情况。 第二步，直入主题， 对电脑的外观进行总体描述； 谈谈电脑的用途。 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①chat with与聊天 ②a lot of很多 ③be tired of厌倦 ④listen to听 ⑤in the future未来 [高分句型] ①If I am tired of studying, I also use it to listen to music and watch movies.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②I also like online shopping, which makes me buy a lot of things I like without going out.（which引导的定语从句） ③I hope computers will become smaller and more functional in the future.（省略that的宾语从句） 15．随着电脑技术的飞速发展，电脑已经进入各行各业、千家万户，已经成为了现代社会不可缺少的重要角色。请以 “The Most Useful Invention—Computer” 为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，说明电脑在工作、生活中的应用等。 提示：1.医生需要电脑为病人检查身体； 2.老师需要电脑教学生； 3.学生需要电脑学习…… 注意:1. 短文必须包括所给提示中1-3项的内容，可展开思路，适当发挥； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名； 3. 80词左右，语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Most Useful Invention—Computer There are many inventions in the world. I think computer is the most useful invention today. It is widely used in hospitals, schools and so on. It can help people do lots of work. First, the computer is necessary when the doctors look over patients’ illness. Second, our teachers need it teach students and also they can correct our homework on computers. What’s more, we students can study our subjects with computers. If we have problems when studying, we can search information on the internet. Computer is our good friend. It will be used by everyone in the future. 【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求根据提示写出电脑在工作生活中的应用，可适当发挥，在写作中要运用正确的英语表达，选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2.写作指导：写作时紧扣主题，本文主要以第三人称口吻；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时相结合，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$