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期中复习之书面表达16篇 (上海期中真题) 1．（23-24八年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A challenge in my life” （请以“我生活中的一次挑战“为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中充满了各种各样的挑战，请结合你自己的生活实际和经历，谈谈在你的生活中所经历的一次挑战，以及这次挑战带给你的成长。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “One of my great moments”. （请以“我的精彩一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） ●When was your great moment? ●How did you make it? ●What can you get from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A helping hand I gave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格） 帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。 （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An interesting story in my family” (请以“一件家庭趣事”为题写不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the situation given.（根据所给情景写一篇短文，字数不少于60词。） Situation: Suppose your class are having a discussion about what kind of pen friend you would like to have. Please write about your opinions and give reasons.（假设你们班里正在进行一项讨论，主题是关于希望拥有怎样的笔友，请谈谈你的想法和理由。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting, special...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考） 1.    When and where did it happen? 2.    What happened? 3.    How did you feel about it? 4.    Why did you think so? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（22-23八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Based on your own experience, write at least 80 words on the given situation “This time I was brave”. 以“这次我很勇敢”为题，根据自身的经历写一篇不少于80词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（22-23八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Everyone has some challenges in his life. How can you deal with challenges when you face them? Think about one of the challenges you have faced and write at least 60 words about the topic “facing challenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。） 1. What was your challenge? 2. How did you feel when you faced the challenge? 3. How did you deal with the challenge? 4. What did you learn from the experience? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（21-22八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My ______ moment with my father/ mother”. (以《我和父亲/母亲的_______ 时光》为题，结合你们的故事，写一篇短文，谈一谈你对父母的印象和感受。字数不少于60个，标点符号不占格) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（21-22八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My success”.(根据短文内容提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Use the following points as a reference(以下提示仅供参考) 1.When did you have your success? 2.What did you do to have it?(write at least 2 things) 3.How did you feel after having it? My success ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（21-22八年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A special thing in my life”. (以“对我来说特别的一次经历”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 提示：每个人在生活中都经历过一些特别的事情，请结合自己的亲身经历，选取一件特别的事情，谈谈你的感受。 （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（20-21八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic“There’s Always Hope”（以“常怀希望”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 面临困惑的时候、经历变化的时候、感觉挫败的时候、遭遇逆境的时候……来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等，总能让人常怀希望。请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解（可结合自身的经历）。 The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考） ※get out of difficulty ※give … a hand ※never lose hope （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） There’s Always Hope _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（20-21八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Helping others”. (根据内容提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Use the following points as a reference (以下提示仅供参考) 1. Why should we help others? 2. What did you do in the past to help others? (write at least 2 examples) 3. What did you feel after helping others? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（20-21八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格，My favourite school club 我们学校有很多社团，根据自己的情况写一篇文章。 What is your favourite school club? Why do you choose it? (at least two reasons) What have you learnt from this club? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（20-21八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文). Use the following points as a reference. 1. What was the experience? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. Why do you think it was …? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（20-21八年级上·上海·期中）Write a passage of at least 55 words on the topic “I enjoyed the happy moment with my __________”. （以“我享受和……在一起的快乐时刻”为题写一篇不少于55个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Suggested outlines: 1. Who did you spend the moment with? 2. Why did you think it was a happy moment? ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 期中复习之书面表达16篇 (上海期中真题) 1．（23-24八年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A challenge in my life” （请以“我生活中的一次挑战“为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中充满了各种各样的挑战，请结合你自己的生活实际和经历，谈谈在你的生活中所经历的一次挑战，以及这次挑战带给你的成长。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A challenge in my life In my life, one of the most significant challenges I faced was when I decided to move to a new city for further studies. As an introvert, I found it difficult to adjust to the new environment and make new friends. However, I knew that I had to overcome this challenge if I wanted to succeed in my studies and personal life. I started by joining some clubs and taking part in social events, which helped me meet new people and make friends. I also forced myself to step out of my comfort zone and try new things. Although the process was filled with difficulties, I overcame this challenge. This experience taught me how to adapt to new environments, communicate and interact with others, and conquer fear and self-doubt. 【详解】[总体分析]       ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；       ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；       ③提示：以“我生活中的一次挑战”为题，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。       [写作步骤]       第一步，具体介绍自己生活中所经历的一次挑战；       第二步，书写自己的收获。     [亮点词汇]     ①make friends交朋友 ②succeed in成功 ③take part in参加 ④fill with充满 ⑤adapt to适应 [高分句型]       ①In my life, one of the most significant challenges I faced was when I decided to move to a new city for further studies.(表语从句)    ②However, I knew that I had to overcome this challenge if I wanted to succeed in my studies and personal life.(宾语从句；条件状语从句) ③I started by joining some clubs and taking part in social events, which helped me meet new people and make friends.(非限制性定语从句) 2．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “One of my great moments”. （请以“我的精彩一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） ●When was your great moment? ●How did you make it? ●What can you get from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 One of my great moments When I was in seventh grade, I once participated in the 1000 meter race at the school sports meet. When I ran to 500 meters, I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue running. At this moment, I saw my classmates and teachers cheering me on. I kept on running again. I chased the athletes in front little by little. Finally, I achieved a good score of second place. Through this incident, I understand that no matter what we do, as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve success. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“精彩一刻”是何时； 第二步，具体阐述如何成功实现的“精彩一刻”； 第三步，此次经历的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①participate in参加 ②cheer sb. on为某人加油 ③keep on doing继续做某事 [高分句型] ①When I ran to 500 meters, I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue running.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I understand that no matter what we do, as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve success.（that引导宾语从句） 3．（23-24八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A helping hand I gave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格） 帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。 （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A helping hand I gave Helping others brings me happiness and makes my life meaningful. I grow up a lot by helping others. I am good at English and can always get good grades in English exams. Then one day, my best friend Tina asked me to help her with her English. So I shared some useful ways to learn English. Each time she has trouble with her homework, I’ll try my best to explain as clearly as possible. I’m glad that Tina has made great progress in English. I feel a strong feeling of satisfaction when helping others. It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，帮助别人能够带给我快乐，让我的生活更有意义； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细说明如何提供帮助； 第三步，书写结语，帮助别人能够给我带来满足感。 [亮点词汇] ①get good grades in English exams 英语考试取得好成绩 ②try one’s best to do 尽最大努力去…… [高分句型] It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be.(宾语从句) 4．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An interesting story in my family” (请以“一件家庭趣事”为题写不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An interesting story in my family My father is a doctor. Sometimes he works so hard that he can’t remember the date. One day, my father wanted to get up early as usual, but he wasn’t able to do that, because he hadn’t set the alarm clock the night before. So when he got up, he did everything in a hurry. After my father left, my mother said to me mysteriously, “He will come back soon.” “Why?” I was greatly surprised. “Because today is Sunday, his holiday!” Just as mother said, my father came back home soon, and went to bed again, because he was too tired. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据An interesting story in my family为题，可围绕家庭生活展开。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍作者的家庭成员、职业及性格等； 第二步，简述一件家庭趣事发生的背景、起因和过程等，需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 [亮点词汇] ①so…that如此……以至于 ②set the alarm定闹铃 ③in a hurry匆忙 [高分句型] ①One day, my father wanted to get up early as usual, but he wasn’t able to do that, because he hadn’t set the alarm clock the night before.（because引导原因状语从句） ②So when he got up, he did everything in a hurry.（when引导时间状语从句） 5．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the situation given.（根据所给情景写一篇短文，字数不少于60词。） Situation: Suppose your class are having a discussion about what kind of pen friend you would like to have. Please write about your opinions and give reasons.（假设你们班里正在进行一项讨论，主题是关于希望拥有怎样的笔友，请谈谈你的想法和理由。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： All kinds of friends play an important role in our life. I am willing to have such a pen friend who shares the same interests with me and has a kind personality so that we can encourage each other when facing difficulties. Although we can’t meet frequently, we still can exchange our ideas happily if we have the same interests and can talk about something we both like, which makes our friendship stronger. A friend in need is a friend indeed. There is no doubt that when I am in trouble, my pen friend’s comfort and advice will help me cheer up again. I wish I will have such a pen friend in the near future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：围绕主题进行发挥，适当拓展，注意语言流畅，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述朋友的重要性； 第二步，讲述自己想要拥有的笔友是怎么样的； 第三步，表达希望能拥有这样的笔友。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中起重要作用 ②be willing to do sth.愿意做某事 ③cheer up振作起来 [高分句型] ①I am willing to have such a pen friend who shares the same interests with me and has a kind personality so that we can encourage each other when facing difficulties.（who引导的限制性定语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句） ②Although we can’t meet frequently, we still can exchange our ideas happily if we have the same interests and can talk about something we both like, which makes our friendship stronger.（although引导的让步状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句） ③There is no doubt that when I am in trouble, my pen friend’s comfort and advice will help me cheer up again.（that引导的同位语从句；when引导的时间状语从句） 6．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting, special...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考） 1.    When and where did it happen? 2.    What happened? 3.    How did you feel about it? 4.    Why did you think so? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A successful experience in my life In my memory, there are full of successful experiences. The most unforgettable one happened at school last term. I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn’t get good marks in exams. I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder. I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class. What’s more, I often asked my teachers for help. Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. Now I have done better in my study. I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it. If I meet with difficulties in my life, I should try my best to overcome them. In a word, only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；描述经历用“一般过去时” ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要描述什么样的经历及发生的时间和地点； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了这次经历的过程； 第三步，描述自己的感受和启发。 [亮点词汇] ①are full of充满 ②the most unforgettable one最难以忘怀的 ③difficulty困难 ④overcome克服 [高分句型] ①I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class. （比较级） ②Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. （让步状语从句） 7．（22-23八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Based on your own experience, write at least 80 words on the given situation “This time I was brave”. 以“这次我很勇敢”为题，根据自身的经历写一篇不少于80词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 This time I was brave In our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher’s encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public. Don’t let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应介绍自身的一段经历，注意细节的描写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体点名克服困难，会让我们更自信，作为开头； 第二步，介绍具体的事情； 第三步，以鼓励作为结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①more and more confident 越来越自信 ②be afraid of 害怕 [高分句型] ①Don’t let the fear take you.（祈使句） ②Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.（现在完成时） 8．（22-23八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Everyone has some challenges in his life. How can you deal with challenges when you face them? Think about one of the challenges you have faced and write at least 60 words about the topic “facing challenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。） 1. What was your challenge? 2. How did you feel when you faced the challenge? 3. How did you deal with the challenge? 4. What did you learn from the experience? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例： Facing challenges Life is filled with challenges. In my study, I always meet with new challenges. When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams. This was a serious problem because math is a very important subject. However, I did not quit. I listened to the teacher carefully in class. I also did as many exercises as I could. Besides, I turned to my teacher and classmates for help. In the end, after several months’ hard work, I passed the final exam. Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over. What’s more, those challenges make me who I am. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点以问题的方式给出，考生应注意不要遗漏；适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写作主题“生活充满挑战”； 第二步，阐述具体写作内容。从挑战的内容、面对挑战的感受、解决措施三方面阐述面对挑战的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，总结面对挑战学习到的经验。 [亮点词汇] ①be filled with 充满 ②as…as sb. could 尽可能…… ③turn to sb. for help 向某人求助 ④spare no efforts 不遗余力 [高分句型] ①When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams.(used to) ②Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over.(动名词作主语；if引导的条件状语从句) 9．（21-22八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My ______ moment with my father/ mother”. (以《我和父亲/母亲的_______ 时光》为题，结合你们的故事，写一篇短文，谈一谈你对父母的印象和感受。字数不少于60个，标点符号不占格) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My happy moment with my mother My mother is a doctor. She is very nice and easy-going. My mother loves me very much and it always be happy for me along with her. One day, it was my mother’s birthday, but I don’t know what to buy for her. Then I decided to buy a birthday cake and cook some food. When she got home and saw the dishes I prepared, she was so happy. She gave me a big hug and said, “This is the most expensive present in the world.” I will never forget the smile on mother’s face when we were having dinner together. I love my mother so much. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，标题为“我和父亲/母亲的_______ 时光”。在写作时应首先补全标题；第一段可简要介绍自己的父亲或母亲；第二段讲述自己和父亲或母亲之间的_______ 时光，可结合具体事例；第三段表达对父母的印象和感受。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主，并用一般过去时描述具体事例；描述事例时，将事情发生的过程写清楚，写完整，保证条理清晰。 10．（21-22八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My success”.(根据短文内容提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Use the following points as a reference(以下提示仅供参考) 1.When did you have your success? 2.What did you do to have it?(write at least 2 things) 3.How did you feel after having it? My success ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My success In my memory, there are many success experiences. The most unforgettable one happened last term. I was not good at English at school and I couldn’t get good marks in exams. I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder. I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercise after class. What’s more, I often asked my teachers for help. Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. Now I have done better in my study. I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it. If I meet with difficulties in my life, I should try my best to overcome them. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“My success”为主题，写一篇介绍自己成功经历的文章，题干中给出了相关提示要点，写作时不要遗漏，也可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，描述自己的成功经历时用一般过去时，描述感受时用一般现在时。写作时要运用不同的短语和句式使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。 11．（21-22八年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A special thing in my life”. (以“对我来说特别的一次经历”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 提示：每个人在生活中都经历过一些特别的事情，请结合自己的亲身经历，选取一件特别的事情，谈谈你的感受。 （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A special thing in my life Everybody has something unforgettable. For me, I still remember the day when my deskmate taught me how to ride a bike. I was afraid to ride a bike. But my deskmate’s encouragement made me determined to learn it. At first, I thought he was always behind me, holding the seat in order to keep me from falling down. I was happy with this, but he realized he couldn’t hold me up all my life. And he told me that one day he would have to leave, so I must be independent. After a long time, I finally made it. This unforgettable experience told me we can’t depend on anyone else but ourselves. That is a very special thing in my life. 【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求写自己经历过的一件特别的事情，并就这次经历表达感受。写作时，应围绕所给话题描述具体事件，并点明它的特别之处。 2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称进行写作，叙事时时态采用一般过去时。分为两段，第一段先点题，然后描述具体经历；第二段表达感想并收尾。写作时要注意保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 12．（20-21八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic“There’s Always Hope”（以“常怀希望”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 面临困惑的时候、经历变化的时候、感觉挫败的时候、遭遇逆境的时候……来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等，总能让人常怀希望。请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解（可结合自身的经历）。 The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考） ※get out of difficulty ※give … a hand ※never lose hope （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） There’s Always Hope _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】[例文] There’s Always Hope Difficulties and failures are unavoidable in our lives. However, I believe there’s always hope as long as you don’t give up. I used to be poor in English. The grammar, the vocabulary, the pronunciation and writing were continuously torturing me. I almost lost my heart and thought about giving up. Luckily, I met a good teacher who was so kind that he spent hours helping me to correct my mistakes and teaching me excellent methods. He always gave me generous praise for any minor progress of mine. With his encouragement, I gained confidence and tried my best to overcome all the difficulties. Day by day, I have made substantial progress. Not only can I read English novels now, but also I can speak English fluently. As an old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” No matter how difficult things seem to be, let’s cherish hope and never give up. 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“There’s Always Hope”为题写一篇作文，文章中要结合自己的经历谈谈自己的感悟。 2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态方面，在描述过去的经历时应用过去时，谈个人感想部分可用一般现在时。文章应做到层次分明、思路清晰、叙述流畅，不要出现单词拼写及语法时态使用方面的错误。 13．（20-21八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Helping others”. (根据内容提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Use the following points as a reference (以下提示仅供参考) 1. Why should we help others? 2. What did you do in the past to help others? (write at least 2 examples) 3. What did you feel after helping others? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文： Helping others In our lives, when we are in trouble, we can’t do it by ourselves, we should need help. I help others who need help. And I also get a lot of help from others. Now I’ll give two examples. Once I went hiking in a mountain with my friends. The sights were so beautiful that we forgot the time. It was getting dark. We began to walk down. We walked for about an hour, but we couldn’t get to the mountain foot. We realized that we were lost. We began to get scared. Luckily, we met a woman who lived in the mountain village. She led us to the mountain foot. We said thanks to her, but she said we must also help her if she needed help. What a kind woman! Another example, when I went to school, I saw a little boy. He didn’t find his home and he cried on the road. So I helped him get home. Everyone needs help. If we help each other, the world will be full of love. 【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。题干要求根据所给要点提示以“Helping others”为题写一篇短文，谈谈为什么要帮助他人，结合自身经历并谈谈自己的感受。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来叙述，时态用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合。写作时注意保持主谓一致性，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。 14．（20-21八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格，My favourite school club 我们学校有很多社团，根据自己的情况写一篇文章。 What is your favourite school club? Why do you choose it? (at least two reasons) What have you learnt from this club? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favourite school club There are many kinds of clubs in our school. I like English very much, so I take part in the English Club. In the club, we speak English as much as possible. We often listen to some English songs or watch movies. It is very useful for us to improve our listening ability. Sometimes we also do team activities. When we do the activities, everyone has to be clear about his or her role and cooperate with all other members. I really have fun working with my group members. Joining the English club can not only help me enjoy my free time, but also allow me to make many new friends. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出自己参加的俱乐部的情况，包括选择什么俱乐部，喜欢的理由以及从中学到了什么等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 15．（20-21八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文). Use the following points as a reference. 1. What was the experience? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. Why do you think it was …? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A successful experience in my life In my memory, it is full of successful experiences. The most unforgettable one happened at school last term. I was not good at subjects and I couldn’t get good marks in some exams. I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder. I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class. What’s more, I often asked my teachers and classmates for help. Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. Now l have done better in my study. I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it. If I meet with difficulties in my life, I should try my best to overcome them. In a word, only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful. 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“An/A __________ (unusual, interesting...) experience in my life”为题，根据要点提示，谈一谈自己难忘的经历，属于话题作文。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般过去时为主，以一般现在时为辅来叙述。写作时需紧紧围绕提示的要点，要写出经历了什么事，什么时间、什么地点发生的，自己是如何做的，最后谈一谈自己的感受。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 16．（20-21八年级上·上海·期中）Write a passage of at least 55 words on the topic “I enjoyed the happy moment with my __________”. （以“我享受和……在一起的快乐时刻”为题写一篇不少于55个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Suggested outlines: 1. Who did you spend the moment with? 2. Why did you think it was a happy moment? ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： I enjoyed the happy moment with my classmates. I enjoyed the happy moment with my classmates when we had a spring outing last year. On that day, we went to the Happy Valley. We had planned to take the roller coaster before, but when we got there, how surprised we were! It was like a huge wooden dragon flying in the sky. When we were taking the roller coaster, we felt that our hearts almost jumped out of our bodies and we could hear the wind fly past our ears. What a happy moment! I think I will remember this moment forever. 【详解】1.题干解读：这里是一篇命题作文，“我享受和……在一起的快乐时刻” 文中必须包括以下两点：1. Who did you spend the moment with? 你和谁在一起？2. Why did you think it was a happy moment? 你为什么认为那是一个快乐的时刻？ 2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：enjoy the happy moment；have a spring outing；plan to do sth.；take the roller coaster；jump out of； 句型：we felt that our hearts almost jumped out of our bodies and we could hear the wind fly past our ears.；What a happy moment! I think I will remember this moment forever. 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$