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第十二讲 读后续写之情感描写——生气
专项提能 循序写作
◆ 积累素材 ◆
必备
单词 angry adj.生气的
mad adj.很生气
annoyed adj.烦恼的
cross adj.恼怒的
fury n.狂怒;暴怒
必备单词 furious/'fjʊriəs/ adj.狂怒的
irritation/ˌIrI'teIʃ(ə)n/n.恼怒
wrath/rɒθ/n.愤怒;盛怒
indignation /ˌIndIɡ'neIʃ(ə)n/n.愤慨
glare/ɡleə(r)/v.怒目而视
disgruntled/dIs'ɡrʌnt(ə)ld/adj.不满的;不高兴的
rage/reIdʒ/n.狂怒
roar/rɔː(r)/v.& n.吼叫;咆哮
高级词块 in anger生气地,愤怒地
in a burst of anger怒气冲冲
be in a passion 在盛怒中
be angry with sb. at/about sth.因某事生某人的气
glare at sb.怒目而视
be mad with/at sb. for doing sth.因做某事生某人的气
fly into a fury 勃然大怒
be annoyed with sb. about sth.因某事生某人的气
fly/get into a passion 勃然大怒
高级词块 be cross with sb. for doing sth.因做某事生某人的气
fly off the handle大发雷霆
be furious with sb. at sth.因某事对某人大发雷霆
shine with irritation 充满愤怒
burn with rage/anger怒火中烧
tremble with rage/fury气得打哆嗦
be beside oneself with anger气得发狂
make one's blood boil使某人大动肝火
erupt like a volcano像火山一样爆发
句子
赏析 1.Sam stamped his foot in anger.萨姆气得直跺脚。
2.Clare felt furious with Tess,because she had forced him to deceive his parents.克莱尔对苔丝感到非常愤怒,因为她逼他欺骗他的父母。
3.He cast around for a topic to change the subject of Dumbledore,the very thought of whom made Harry's inside burn with anger again.他想赶紧换一个话题来转移邓布利多的话题,每次一想到邓布利多,哈里的内心就又燃起了怒火。
句子赏析 4.Finally,he could no longer stand it.He stopped,his voice trembling with rage.他终于按捺不住,停了下来, 气得声音发颤。
5.He flew into a fury and hit his chest,glaring at us aggressively.他勃然大怒,捶打着胸口, 咄咄逼人地瞪着我们。
精彩片段 Harry tried to concentrate on his food,but his hands shook and his face was starting to burn with anger.“Remember the form,”he told himself.“Think about Hogsmeade.Don't say anything.”哈里努力把注意力集中在他的食物上,但是他的手在颤抖,他的脸因愤怒而涨得通红。“记住礼节,”他告诉自己。“想想霍格莫德。不要说任何东西。”
◆ 运用素材 ◆
一、完成句子
运用表格中的必备单词/高级词块,把下面的句子补充完整。
1.她的回复加剧了汤姆的愤怒,他像火山一样爆发了。
Her reply fueled Tom's anger and he ______________________.
erupted like a volcano
2.他气得浑身发抖,向我挥舞着拳头。
________________________,he shook his fist at me.
3.他是如此生气,用灼热的目光怒视着我。
He was so angry that he _____________________me with burning eyes.
Trembling with rage
glared at
4.她像火山爆发了一样,眼泪哗哗地流下来,眼睛里闪着愤怒的光芒。(分词短语作状语)
She erupted like a volcano,tears streaming down and
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5.她怒吼着,抓起桌子上的画,将其撕成两半。
She ______________,grabbed the painting on the table and tore it in half.
eyes shining with irritation
roared
二、篇章练习
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
With a broad smile on her lips,15-year-old Sirin rushed to her mom to show off her new painting.But Mom raised her eyebrows with eyes wide open,and spoke in an impatient tone,“No time,baby.Right now I am busy with an important talk.Just wait for some time,OK?”
Holding her oil painting,she frowned (皱眉),and then searched for her dad.
“Dad,see what I have done,” Sirin announced aloud in a thrilling voice. Her dad turned around while adjusting his tie,grinned at her,and showed his thumbs up!
Immediately,blowing her two cheeks,Sirin replied angrily,“Dad,you haven't seen it yet.”
He smiled at her saying,“No time,baby.I will see it later.”He just patted her back lovingly,kissed her forehead,and rushed for his office.
She was not a kid to be pleased with a simple gesture or smile.She stood there for a few seconds,and then stormed off to her own bedroom.Hot air was blowing from her nostrils (鼻孔);her face turned into apple red.She threw the painting on the table,slammed the door and threw herself on her bed.
“Why is everybody so busy?” She recalled thousands of incidents that hurt her in pre-school,middle school and even in high school too!She assumed at least her own family members would give some values to her thoughts,but they were no exception.Unconsciously,her eyes were filled with tears.
The knocking sound on the door put a sudden brake to her thought.Her mom was calling her for dinner.Sirin deliberately came late to join them. She kept silent and didn't look at anyone, scratching the table mat with her nail.Her mom was puzzled at the unusual behaviour.Suddenly,the morning incident clicked in her mind.Softly,she asked,“Honey,did I do anything wrong?”
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
At this very moment,Sirin could no longer resist her anger.
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When back from school the next day, Sirin was surprised to see her beautifully-decorated painting on the wall._______________________
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[参考范文]
At this very moment,Sirin could no longer resist her anger.“You are always busy!”she erupted like a volcano,tears streaming down and eyes shining with irritation.She assumed that her parents would feel proud of her great talent but they only said “no time” to her.“I hate you!” She roared,grabbed the painting on the table and tore it in half.Shocked and guilty,Mom and Dad couldn't say a word.Sirin went back to her room and kept her door shut the whole night.
When back from school the next day,Sirin was surprised to see her beautifully-decorated painting on the wall.Not only was it beautifully framed (裱框) but there were some words below the painting,saying“We are proud of you,Baby!” On reading them,Sirin burst out crying.She ran to her parents and hugged them tightly. Recalling her parents' stress from work and daily life,she deeply regretted her previous behaviour. She ducked her head, apologizing,“Daddy,Mommy,I'm so sorry!”It dawned on them that though everything came and went,mutual (相互的) understanding would stay forever in their family.
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