Unit 8 单元写作指导与演练-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）

Unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake？ 单元写作指导与演练 【单元话题解读】 本单元写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“做人与做事”这一主题群,涉及子主题“劳动实践”以及“勤于动手,乐于实践”。此类作文要求能谈论制作食物时所需的材料、制作步骤、制作方法和注意事项。在写作中,要能正确使用步骤连接词first,next,then,after that,finally等来表示做某事的先后顺序；同时要学会运用祈使句来描述步骤。常见的写作任务是描述某种食物的制作过程,体裁多为说明文。 【写作目标】 写作时常要用表示顺序的副词first，next，then，finally等，以使整篇文章更有条理；因为是介绍方式方法的说明文，要用一般现在时作为主要时态。 ⑴ 那么首先要审题，确定时态为一般一般过去式或一般现在时，人称为第一人称，开头要开篇点题，叙述制作这种食物的原因。 ⑵ 正文要介绍做这种食物整个过程。用上first, next, then, finally表示先后顺序的副词。 ⑶ 结尾要对自己做这种食物进行评价。 写作技巧 ◆ 第一步：概述所要表达的话题； ◆第二步：按顺序描述制作方法： 首先做什么； 其次做什么； 然后做什么； 接下来做什么； …… 最后做什么。 ◆第三步：制作好的感受 【单元素材积累】 【词汇积累】 1. machine 机器　　　　 2. blender 食物搅拌器 3. spoon 勺；调羹 4. oven 烤箱；烤炉 5. plate 盘子；碟子 6. pot 锅 7. salt 食盐 8. sandwich 三明治 9. butter 黄油；奶油 10. peel 剥皮；去皮 11. pour the milk into the blender把牛奶倒入搅拌机 12. cut up the apples切碎苹果 13. put the turkey into the oven　把火鸡放入烤箱 14. cook for 15 minutes煮15分钟 15. don’t forget to add some salt别忘记加盐 16. turn on 接通（电流、煤气、水等）；打开 17. give thanks for… 因……而感谢 18. mix together 融合在一起 19. fill cup with water用水填满杯子 句型积累 1. How do you make a banana milk shake? 你怎样做香蕉奶昔？ 2. Turn on the blender. 打开搅拌器。 3. Pour the milk into the blender. 把牛奶倒进搅拌器中。 4. To make a cake, you need eggs, butter and sugar. 5. I want to make Russian soup for a party on Saturday. 我想为周六的聚会制作俄式汤。 6. First, mix together some bread pieces, onions, salt and pepper. 首先，将一些面包片、洋葱、盐和胡椒粉混合在一起。 7. To share the cake, please cut it into six pieces. 8. Next, fill the turkey with this bread mix. 接下来，将这份面包混合物填在火鸡里。 9. Cook it at a very high temperature for a long time. 在高温下将它煮好长时间。 10. Cooking delicious meals can bring a lot of fun to your life. 11. In most countries, people usually eat traditional food on special holidays. 在特殊的日子里吃传统的食物是一个传统。 11. The Dragon Boat Festival is on the fifth day in the fifth month of Chinese calendar. It’s also a time for family to get together.　 端午节在农历五月初五，是全家团结的时刻。 13. People celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival by eating zongzi and watching the Dragon Boat races.　 人们通过吃粽子和观看龙舟的方式欢度端午。 ◆开头句 ①Now let me tell you how to make zongzi. ②Here is one way to cook it. ③To make fruit salad,we need one apple,two oranges,one watermelon,three teaspoons of honey and one cup of yogurt. ◆中间句 ①To make zongzi,you should prepare everything you need,such as some sticky rice,red dates,bamboo leaves and strings. ②First,peel the apple and oranges and cut them up. ③Next,wash some bamboo leaves and red dates. ④Then,fill the bamboo leaves with the sticky rice and red dates. ⑤Finally,cook them for about one hour. ◆结尾句 ①Now,it's time to enjoy it. ②Now you are able to have it. ③They taste delicious,don't they? ④Now the fruit salad is OK.It is so delicious。/Now you can enjoy the traditional food. ⑤Please come and smell it! 【名言积累】 ①Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 ②It is difficult to cater for all tastes.众口难调。 ③Food is the first necessity of people.民以食为天。 ④Some soup before dinner，healthy body forever.饭前喝口汤，永远没灾殃。 【连词】 first, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye 【实例讲解1】 如何介绍一道美食的制作方法 【写作任务】（Section B 3c） 英语老师让你们在下节口语课上介绍自己擅长做的一道美食的制作方法。请你用英语写一篇短文为此做准备。 【审清题目】 内容：按照制作先后顺序描述一道美食的制作方法。 文体：说明文。 时态：一般现在时。 句式：介绍食物制作方法时常用祈使句。 【头脑风暴】 【提供素材】 ◆常用单词和短语 在横线上填写单词或短语。 dishes hot pot, (1)______________(北京烤鸭), Lanzhou beef noodles, Yangzhou fried rice (扬州炒饭), Yunnan rice noodles, gongbao chicken, mapo tofu ... ingredients (原料) Fruits: apples, bananas, oranges, (2)______________(西瓜), strawberries, pears ... Vegetables: cabbages, carrots, (3)______________(生菜), onions, potatoes, peas (豌豆), tomatoes, green peppers, green onions ... Meat: beef, (4)______________(鸡肉), mutton, pork (猪肉), ham (火腿) ... Seafood: fish, shrimp (虾) ... Seasoning (调味品): (5)______________(食盐), sugar, vinegar (醋), light soy sauce (生抽), ginger (姜), pepper ... Others: cooking oil (油), eggs, butter, honey, cheese, milk, yogurt, flour (面粉), rice ... utensils (用具) a blender, a bowl, a cup, a glass, a knife (刀), an oven, a pan (平底锅), a plate, a pot, (6)______________(一个勺), a wok (炒菜锅) ... sequences (顺序) first of all, first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, next, then, after that, (7)______________(最后), in the end ... how to do prepare, wash, peel, pour, add, cut up, (8)______________(混在一起), mash (捣碎), cook, cover, stir (搅拌), cool, heat (加热), fry (油炸；油煎；油炒), stir-fry (翻炒), steam (蒸), bake (烤), boil (煮) ... Key:  1. Beijing duck  2. watermelons   3. lettuces   4. chicken   5. salt   6. a spoon   7. finally / at last   8. mix together   ◆常用句型 • Here is one way to make ... • To make ..., you need to have ... • Cut ... into (small) pieces. • Fill ... with ... • Put ... into ... • You can / have to add some ... • Mix together ... • Cook ... for ... minutes. • Place ... on the plate. • It takes about ... minutes to prepare ... • If you have all the things, you can easily cook ... 【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 ◆ 介绍“我”擅长做的一道家乡美食的制作方法 ◆ 引出话题，点明擅长做的家乡美食 Hello, everyone. I'm good at cooking Yangzhou fried rice. (1)_________________________(这是一种制作它的方法). 介绍制作步骤 To make Yangzhou fried rice, first you need to have a bowl of cooked rice, one carrot, some peas, some ham, two eggs, one green onion, some shrimp, half a spoon of salt, one spoon of light soy sauce and two spoons of cooking oil. Next, (2)_________________________(将胡萝卜、火腿和大葱切碎). Break the eggs into a bowl and add some salt and stir. Then, (3)_________________________(往锅里加两杯水) and when it boils (沸腾), add the carrot and peas. Cook for half a minute. Add the shrimp and let everything cook for three minutes. Take them out of the pot and dry them up. After that, put the cooking oil into the hot wok and heat the oil. (4)_________________________(将鸡蛋倒进炒菜锅中) and cook for only fifteen seconds (秒) before adding the cooked rice. Stir-fry the rice and eggs for three minutes at a high temperature. Put ham, carrot, peas, green onion and shrimp into the wok and mix everything together. Add some salt and light soy sauce. Finally, when the dish is ready, (5)__________________________(将它放入盘中并享用它). Key:  1. Here is one way to make it 2. cut up the carrot, ham and green onion 3. add two cups of water into a pot 4. Pour the eggs into the wok 5. put it on a plate and enjoy it 【实例解析2】 端午节是中国的传统节日。吃粽子是中国的一种传统习俗。为此,你们班开展了“走进端午——包粽子”的活动。现在请你根据提示，以“Learn to Make Zongzi”为题写一篇英语短文,描述制作粽子的过程和感受。 提示： Ingredients sticky rice糯米;bamboo leaves竹叶;red dates红枣;strings线 Steps put…into the water;wash;soak浸泡；fill…with…;tie （捆；扎）…with;steam蒸 Feeling … 要求：词数80词左右（开头已给出,不计入总词数）。 ►►审题指导 1.文体：说明文 2.人称：第二人称和第一人称 3.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时 4.写作要点：明确写作要点,所给的要点要全,并加入自主发挥的部分。 ►►思路点拨 Learn to Make. .Zongzi Last Saturday,my classmates and I made zongzi. .to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.Now let me tell you how to make. .zongzi. ①To make zongzi,you should prepare ②everything you need,such as some sticky rice,red dates,bamboo leaves and strings.③Firstly,put the sticky rice into the water and soak it for two hours. At the same time,wash some bamboo leaves and red dates.④Secondly,mix sticky rice and red dates.⑤When everything is ready,it's time to fill the bamboo leaves with the sticky rice and red dates and tie them with strings by hand.⑥ Finally,steam them for about thirty minutes and then enjoy the delicious zongzi.⑦If you like to eat sweet food,don't forget to add some sugar. There is a saying that ⑧practice makes perfect.To be a good cook really needs a lot of practice. 点评: ①不定式To make zongzi,②定语从句 everything you need,步骤连接词③Firstly,④Secondly和⑥Finally,⑤ When引导的时间状语从句和⑦if引导的条件状语从句的使用让文章的表 达更高级。 ⑧谚语“Practice makes perfect.”的使用让文章更富含哲理。 本篇范文语言丰富、句式多样,同时能够灵活运用本单元所学单词和短语，如 prepare,add,fill…with等。 写作练笔 【写作任务】  假如你是李华,你校英语专栏正在寻找校园美食家，并向全校师生征集关于“美食”的文章。请你根据提示内容写一篇文章投稿,介绍你最喜欢的美食及其制作方法。词数80左右。 提示： 1.What's your favorite food? 2.Why do you like it? 3.How should you cook it? ►►审题指导 1.文体：________ 2.人称：__________ 3.时态：____________ 4.写作要点：①____________________；②______________； ③_________________。 ►►思路点拨 Different people like different food. As for me,my favorite food is tomatoes with eggs. It is a home-cooked food,and it is both delicious and easy to cook. Here is one way to cook it. To cook it,you need two eggs,two tomatoes,some oil,sugar and salt. Now let's practice together. First,you should mix the two eggs. Next,clean and cut up the tomatoes. Then,pour some oil into the pan. After a while,put the eggs in the pan,and then put the tomatoes. Cook them for about three minutes. Finally,add a little salt and sugar. Now,it's time to enjoy it. It's very delicious,isn't it? 【小试身手】 （一） 1．学校微信平台正在举行“生活中的DIY”征文比赛。小明打算写一篇如何制作水果沙拉的英语小短文参赛。小明总结了部分制作。 要点如下： 1. 准备一个大碗。 2. 把两个苹果洗净切成小块，放入大碗。 3. 把其他喜欢吃的水果 (例如梨和香蕉) 切成小块，放入大碗。 4.……. 要求： 内容须包括以上要点；将第4点补充完整；词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to make a fruit salad A fruit salad is quick and easy to make. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to make a fruit salad A fruit salad is quick and easy to make. First, you have to get a big bowl ready. Wash two apples, and cut them into small pieces. Next, put them into the big bowl. You can also choose some other fruits you like, such as, pears and bananas. Cut them into small pieces too and put them into the bowl. Take out a bottle of cream and pour some in the bowl. Mix the fruit and cream together. Now a fruit salad is finished! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的做沙拉步骤，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先整体表明沙拉是易做的，而且做起来很快（原文已给出）。 第二步，具体阐述做沙拉的步骤，从“食材准备，切主要水果和配菜”几个方面重点介绍沙拉的制作步骤。 [亮点词汇] ① get……ready准备好…… ② for example 例如 ③ take out拿出 ④ pour倾倒 [高分句型] ① You can also choose some other fruit you like.(定语从句修饰前面的“some other fruit”) ② Now a fruit salad is finished!（一般现在时的被动语态） （二） 2．假如你是李明，上周你做了沙拉。你想写信把这件事和你的朋友Nick分享。请你根据以下提示和要求，写一封信告诉他制作的全部过程。 提示:1. 将准备好的水果洗干净，去皮并切成小块放进大碗里；2. 倒入酸奶；3. 将所有材料混合搅拌均匀。 要求:1. 语句通顺，条理清晰；2. 包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；3. 不少于65词（信的开头及格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Nick, Last week, I made delicious fruit salad. Do you want to learn how to make it? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Nick, Last week, I made delicious fruit salad. Do you want to learn how to make it? First, you need some kinds of fruit, such as apples, bananas, oranges and so on. Then you have to wash and peel them. You should cut them into small pieces. After that, you can put them into a large bowl. You should also prepare some yogurt. Yogurt is good for us. Pour the yogurt into the bowl. Then you can mix them up. That is all. You can have a try and make it for your parents. They must be very happy. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达属于材料作文。要求以李明的身份给朋友Nick写一封信，把制作沙拉的全部过程告诉他；文章的开头已经给出，内容要围绕三个题目中给出的步骤提示，描述做沙拉的具体步骤；学生们应用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象，写出自己的观点，把文章写得更具体、更充实。 2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：文章时态应采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要采用第一人称和第二人称，注意主谓一致，格式要规范，符合书信的语境表达。第二点：看清题目的要求和提示要点，不可遗漏，并在提示基础上选用合适的连词，短语和句型来进行串联和拓展。第三点：文章做到思路清晰，条理清晰，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。 （三） 3．不同的地区有不同的饮食文化。假如你是八（1）班的李萍，在一年一度的校园文化美食节上，你做的食物赢得了大家的一致好评，请你给同学们介绍一下它的做法。 步骤∶ 1. 面粉（flour）+食盐（salt）+酵母（yeast）+橄榄油（oliver oil）+水→披萨面（pizza dough）； 2. 番茄（tomato sauce）； 3. 青椒（green peppers）、香肠（sausage）切片； 4. 番茄酱的上面铺青椒、香肠和一层芝士（cheese）； 5. 烘烤（bake）。 作文要求∶ （1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 （2）语句连贯，词数70个左右。短文的开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。 （3）适当使用连接词 first、then、after that、next、finally等。 Hello, I’m Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m very happy that many students like my pizza. I want to tell you how to make it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. It’s not hard. I am sure if you have a try at home, you’ll enjoy it. 【答案】例文： Hello, I’m Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m very happy that many students like my pizza. I want to tell you how to make it. We’ll need cheese, three sausages, two green peppers, water, olive oil, yeast, some tomato sauce and flour. First, make the pizza dough. Mix three cups of flour, two spoons of salt, one cup of water and one cup of olive oil together. Remember to add half a spoon of yeast. Second, put the tomato sauce on the dough. After that, cut the peppers and sausages into pieces. Next, put them and the cheese on the top of the tomato sauce. Finally, turn on the oven. Bake the pizza in a hot oven for 20 minutes. Then you can enjoy it. That’s all. It’s not hard. I am sure if you have a try at home, you’ll enjoy it. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时注意要承接短文的开头和结尾。根据汉语提示的五个步骤，介绍每一步需要的材料和过程，以及材料的数量和烘烤的时间等。 2.写作指导：本文应该用祈使句为主来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时。在介绍内容时，力求语言简洁，语法正确，适当使用表示顺序的连接词，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。 【真题解析】 教育部最新发布的《义务教育劳动课程标准（2022年版）》中提到，初中阶段学生要承担一定的家庭日常烹饪劳动，能设计一日三餐食谱，独立制作3至4道菜。 今天，家人都很忙。我为他们做午餐。请根据提示写一篇短文，不少于70词，可适当发挥。 要点提示： 1.今天，我为家人做午餐——米饭、炒肉、蔬菜和鸡蛋汤。2.首先，清洗大米，煮饭。3.然后，清洗肉和蔬菜；切肉和蔬菜。4.接下来，炒菜，做鸡蛋汤。5.最后，午餐准备好了。父母很喜欢这顿健康、美味的午餐，也因为我热爱劳动（labor）而感到骄傲。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Today, my family is very busy. I cooked lunch for them. I cooked rice, fried meat, vegetables and egg soup. First, I washed rice and cooked it. Then, I washed meat and vegetables. I cut them into pieces. Next, I mixed the meat with the vegetables and cooked them together. I also made egg soup. Finally, lunch was ready. My parents liked the healthy, delicious lunch and were proud of my love of labor. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍自己给家人做午餐，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文要分别介绍做饭的过程以及父母的感受和评价。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 学校微信平台正在举行“生活中的DIY”征文比赛。小明打算写一篇如何制作水果沙拉的英语小短文参赛。小明总结了部分制作。 要点如下： 1. 准备一个大碗。 2. 把两个苹果洗净切成小块，放入大碗。 3. 把其他喜欢吃的水果 (例如梨和香蕉) 切成小块，放入大碗。 4.……. 要求： 内容须包括以上要点；将第4点补充完整；词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to make a fruit salad A fruit salad is quick and easy to make. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to make a fruit salad A fruit salad is quick and easy to make. First, you have to get a big bowl ready. Wash two apples, and cut them into small pieces. Next, put them into the big bowl. You can also choose some other fruits you like, such as, pears and bananas. Cut them into small pieces too and put them into the bowl. Take out a bottle of cream and pour some in the bowl. Mix the fruit and cream together. Now a fruit salad is finished! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的做沙拉步骤，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先整体表明沙拉是易做的，而且做起来很快（原文已给出）。 第二步，具体阐述做沙拉的步骤，从“食材准备，切主要水果和配菜”几个方面重点介绍沙拉的制作步骤。 [亮点词汇] ① get……ready准备好…… ② for example 例如 ③ take out拿出 ④ pour倾倒 [高分句型] ① You can also choose some other fruit you like.(定语从句修饰前面的“some other fruit”) ② Now a fruit salad is finished!（一般现在时的被动语态） 寒假即将到来，你将有更多的时间为父母做一些力所能及的事情，比如为他们献上你亲手制作的奶昔。下面请你描述一下制作一份草莓奶昔的过程。 提示：将草莓切碎；将草莓和冰淇淋放进搅拌器；将牛奶倒入搅拌器；打开搅拌器；将草莓奶昔倒入杯子中。 要求：要点齐全，语法正确，40词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Do you know how to make a strawberry milk shake? Let me tell you. First wash the strawberries. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Do you know how to make a strawberry milk shake? Let me tell you. First wash the strawberries. And chop up the strawberries. Next, put the strawberries and ice-cream in the blender. After that, pour the milk into the blender and mix them up.Two minutes later, it’s ready.Then, turn on the blender.Finally, pour the strawberry milk shake into a glass and drink it. Now you can have a try. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据参考信息写一篇英语短文，描述一下制作一份草莓奶昔的过程，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时。多采用祈使句。短文需要按照参考顺序描述制作草莓奶昔的步骤，写作时要有逻辑性。文章整体要通顺连贯，无语法和标点错误。 假如你是李明，上周你做了沙拉。你想写信把这件事和你的朋友Nick分享。请你根据以下提示和要求，写一封信告诉他制作的全部过程。 提示:1. 将准备好的水果洗干净，去皮并切成小块放进大碗里；2. 倒入酸奶；3. 将所有材料混合搅拌均匀。 要求:1. 语句通顺，条理清晰；2. 包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；3. 不少于65词（信的开头及格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Nick, Last week, I made delicious fruit salad. Do you want to learn how to make it? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Nick, Last week, I made delicious fruit salad. Do you want to learn how to make it? First, you need some kinds of fruit, such as apples, bananas, oranges and so on. Then you have to wash and peel them. You should cut them into small pieces. After that, you can put them into a large bowl. You should also prepare some yogurt. Yogurt is good for us. Pour the yogurt into the bowl. Then you can mix them up. That is all. You can have a try and make it for your parents. They must be very happy. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达属于材料作文。要求以李明的身份给朋友Nick写一封信，把制作沙拉的全部过程告诉他；文章的开头已经给出，内容要围绕三个题目中给出的步骤提示，描述做沙拉的具体步骤；学生们应用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象，写出自己的观点，把文章写得更具体、更充实。 2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：文章时态应采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要采用第一人称和第二人称，注意主谓一致，格式要规范，符合书信的语境表达。第二点：看清题目的要求和提示要点，不可遗漏，并在提示基础上选用合适的连词，短语和句型来进行串联和拓展。第三点：文章做到思路清晰，条理清晰，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。 6．不同的地区有不同的饮食文化。假如你是八（1）班的李萍，在一年一度的校园文化美食节上，你做的食物赢得了大家的一致好评，请你给同学们介绍一下它的做法。 步骤∶ 1. 面粉（flour）+食盐（salt）+酵母（yeast）+橄榄油（oliver oil）+水→披萨面（pizza dough）； 2. 番茄（tomato sauce）； 3. 青椒（green peppers）、香肠（sausage）切片； 4. 番茄酱的上面铺青椒、香肠和一层芝士（cheese）； 5. 烘烤（bake）。 作文要求∶ （1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 （2）语句连贯，词数70个左右。短文的开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。 （3）适当使用连接词 first、then、after that、next、finally等。 Hello, I’m Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m very happy that many students like my pizza. I want to tell you how to make it.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. It’s not hard. I am sure if you have a try at home, you’ll enjoy it. 【答案】例文： Hello, I’m Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m very happy that many students like my pizza. I want to tell you how to make it. We’ll need cheese, three sausages, two green peppers, water, olive oil, yeast, some tomato sauce and flour. First, make the pizza dough. Mix three cups of flour, two spoons of salt, one cup of water and one cup of olive oil together. Remember to add half a spoon of yeast. Second, put the tomato sauce on the dough. After that, cut the peppers and sausages into pieces. Next, put them and the cheese on the top of the tomato sauce. Finally, turn on the oven. Bake the pizza in a hot oven for 20 minutes. Then you can enjoy it. That’s all. It’s not hard. I am sure if you have a try at home, you’ll enjoy it. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时注意要承接短文的开头和结尾。根据汉语提示的五个步骤，介绍每一步需要的材料和过程，以及材料的数量和烘烤的时间等。 2.写作指导：本文应该用祈使句为主来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时。在介绍内容时，力求语言简洁，语法正确，适当使用表示顺序的连接词，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。 万圣节快要到了，你准备亲手做一个南瓜灯，写出DIY的过程，字数70个左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to make a pumpkin lantern Halloween is coming soon. I want to make a pumpkin lantern myself. Do you know how to make a pumpkin lantern? Let me tell you briefly. First, select a big, round and nice pumpkin, wash it up and dry it up. Second, put it on a piece of paper. Dig a hole from the top of the pumpkin with a knife. Put a hand into it and clean up the pulp and seeds. Then, cut out the eyes, the nose, the mouth and sharp teeth. At last, put a candle in it. That’s it. If you like DIY, you can try it by yourself to make a special pumpkin. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，写DIY南瓜灯的过程； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，写出制作南瓜灯的具体步骤过程。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出要介绍制作南瓜灯的过程； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，分步骤介绍制作的过程； 第三步，最后总结，希望喜欢DIY的朋友能自己制作南瓜灯。 [亮点词汇] ① wash up清洗 ② clean up清理 ③ a piece of一张 [高分句型] ① Do you know how to make a pumpkin lantern? （疑问词+不定式的结构） ② If you like DIY, you can try it by yourself to make a special pumpkin. （if引导的条件状语从句） 假如你是抖音美食博主，有许多粉丝向你求助制作蛋糕的简易过程，现在需要你筹备一篇蛋糕制作过程的小短文，准备直播用。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Hello, my friends! Thanks for your coming. Today I am going to teach you how to make a cake. Here is a simple way to make a cake. At first, we need two cups of flour, 1 cup of sugar, 1 spoon of baking soda, 1 cup of fresh water and two eggs. First, mix flour, baking soda and sugar together. Put them in a bowl and shake them a few minutes. Next, pour some water and add two eggs to the bowl and mix them. Then, bake it at a temperature of 175 degree for half an hour. Finally, let the cake cool for 5 minutes. Now a delicious cake is OK. Enjoy yourself! In order to live such a wonderful life in the future, I am going to study art in the university and work hard to make my dream life come true. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧扣“蛋糕”这个主题，合理地引出“如何制作”这个重点内容；注意开头的招呼语，要亲切自然。 2.写作指导：本文应该注意人称的切换，表达时要有交流感；时态采用一般现在时为主，描述制作过程时，使用祈使句更方便直观；写作时，需要保证过程完整、细致；同时注意衔接自然，条理清晰。 某英文杂志新设栏目《在线烹饪》公开征集稿件，要求介绍你最喜欢的食物及制作方法。假如你最喜欢蛋炒饭，请以How to Make Rice Fried with Eggs为题，写一篇80词左右的短文向该栏目投稿。 How to Make Rice Fried with Eggs ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： How to Make Rice Fried with eggs My favorite food is rice fried with eggs. Let me tell you how to make it. First, get everything ready. You need some cooked rice, two eggs, some oil, some beef pieces and an onion. Next, break the eggs into a bowl and stir. And cut up the onion. Then, pour some oil into the pan. When it’s hot, pour the eggs into it. After that, add the cooked rice, the onion and beef pieces and mix them together. Finally, add some salt. Your rice fried with eggs is OK. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时要根据题目要求，介绍怎样做蛋炒饭，包括需要的原料和步骤等。 2.写作指导：本文应该主要用祈使句来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，步骤完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。 假如你是玛丽，不久前，你在电视上学会了奶酪三明治（cheese sandwich）的制作方法。请你给阿曼达回信，并向她介绍奶酪三明治的做法。 写作要求： 1.制作材料：some butter, two pieces of bread, a tomato, an onion, some cheese, some lettuce； 2.结合所学知识和生活实践，介绍做法，至少包含5个步骤； 3.条理清晰，语句通顺，80词左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Amanda, Thanks for your letter. I have tried the recipe you told me. I like it so much. I learned to make a cheese sandwich from TV not long ago. I would like you to try it. Let me tell you how to make it. Before starting, we should have ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I have tried it. It’s easy. Tomorrow is Saturday, so you can try it at home by yourself. Have a nice weekend! Yours, Mary 【答案】One possible version: Dear Amanda, Thanks for your letter. I have tried the recipe you told me. I like it so much. I learned to make a cheese sandwich from TV not long ago. I would like you to try it. Let me tell you how to make it. Before starting, we should have some butter, two pieces of bread, some cheese and some vegetables, like a tomato, an onion and some lettuce. Now we can start. First, put some butter on a piece of bread, about one spoon of butter. Next, cut up the tomato and the onion, and put them on the butter. Then, put some cheese on them. After that, put some lettuce on the cheese. Finally, put another piece of bread on the top. Now you can eat the cheese sandwich. I have tried it. It’s easy. Tomorrow is Saturday, so you can try it at home by yourself. Have a nice weekend! Yours, Mary 【详解】 1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文，要求所给的制作材料结合生活实践，给阿曼达回信，向她介绍奶酪三明治的做法，至少包含5个步骤。可以适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来写；时态采用一般现在时，写作时可以使用“First...Next...Then...”使文章看起来层次分明。同时语言的表达也要符合语法结构，注意思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，通俗易懂。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$