Unit 7 单元写作指导与演练-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）

Unit 7 Will people have robots？ 单元写作指导与演练 【单元话题解读】 本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群,涉及子主题“对未来的畅想”。常见的写作任务是预测自己或他人未来的理想生活,体裁多为说明文。 本单元话题是预测未来。写有关预测未来的作文时，需用到一般将来时，同时可以用比较级结构，以增强对比效果。常见的预测未来的话题有：机器人、电脑、环境、旅行、工作和生活等。 【写作目标】 本单元的话题是“未来的生活”，主要谈论对未来的看法和打算等。在写作过程中，学生应注意以下几点： 1.在描写未来的生活时，要重点描述与现在相比发生的变化以及这些变化给生活带来的影响； 2.注意正确使用一般将来时，合理展开想象； 能描述未来的生活 1.能用“will"描述未来的生活，内容包括居住环境、职业情况、生活水平、出行方式、日常饮食、科技发明等; 2.能使用because ，however, but,so,so that 等连词拓展句子; 3.能正确使用“there will( not) be” 句型对未来的生活进行预测; 4.能正确使用more/less/fewer和其他形容词的比较级描述将来的变化; 5.写作微技能:善用连词，使文章逻辑清晰,思路流畅。 写作技巧 ◆ 第一段可以提出论点 ◆第二段可以进行细节描写，围绕题干要点进行展开和叙述。 ◆第三段可以进行适当总结和展望，并结尾。 【单元素材积累】 【词汇积累】 1. prediction 预言;预测　　 2. future未来 3. pollution污染 4. environment 环境 5. impossible 不可能的 6. play a part/role ( in ) 参与；发挥作用 7. fall down 跌倒;倒塌 8. over and over again 多次；反复地 9. hundreds of 许多;大量 10. look for 寻找；寻求 11. in great danger 处于极大的危险之中 12. on the earth 在地球上 13. world peace 世界和平 14. live on a space station 住在太空站上 15. fall down 突然倒下；跌倒；倒塌 16. stay at home on computers 在家电脑上学习 17. do the same job as people 和人们做一样的工作 18. build more tall buildings 建更多的高楼 19. fly rockets to the moon 乘火箭飞往月球 三、句型积累 1. I will be a pilot by then. 到那时我将会成为一名飞行员。 2. There will be a robot in my house that helps me do housework. 在我家里将会有一个机器人帮我做家务。 3. In fifty years, there will be lots of people living in underwater houses. 4. People will live to be 200 years old. 人们将活到200岁。 5. Cities will be more crowded and polluted. 城市将来加拥挤，污染会更多。 6. We can use less water and plant more trees. 我们可以少用水，多种树。 7. What’s more,there is no need for children to go to school every day and they will learn at home. 8. Your house can turn into a flying machine when you want to travel. 9. In the future,people will travel everywhere by spaceship. 10. There are already robots working in factories. 已经有机器人在工厂里工作了。 11. The environment will be in great danger. 环境将处于极大的危险中。 12. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth. 每个人都应该参与拯救地球。 ◆开头句 1.What will the life be like in the near future?/ in 20 years/ in 10 years?Different people have different ideas. 未来将会什么样子呢？不同的人有不同的想法。20年后生活应该是什么样子呢？10年后生活应该是什么样子呢？ 2.My life in 20 years will be quite different from now.20年后我的生活将会和现在大有不同。 3.In the future, life will be very different from today. 在未来，生活将会和现在完全不同。 4.I think I will have a wonderful and fantastic life in 20 years.我觉得20年后我将有一个精彩的生活。 5.Here are some predictions about the life in the future. 这有一些对未来生活的预测。 ◆中间句 1.Places to live (Where will you live?) In 20 years, I think I will live in Beijing. There will be more free time for me because robots can help people do different kinds of housework. 2.Jobs (What will you be in the future?) I believe I will be an English teacher, I will try my best to make every students learn something usful for their future and let them know the world. 3. Transportation (How will you go to work?) Life in 20 years will be more interesting than now. Some people may fly rockets to the moon to work or take a holiday. others probably are able to live on a space station on another planet. 4.Hobby (What will you do in your free time?) In my free time, I will have more time to relax with my family and friends, we can travel different planets by rockets.  ◆结尾句 1.I am sure I will have a/an… life. 2.This is my life in ... years. What about you? 3.I will try my best to make my dream come true. 4.All the differences will make people's life very different. 5.Our life will be better and better. 6.I think life in 20 years will be different but exciting. 7.In a word, I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life. 【名言积累】 1. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 2.Hold on your dream and never give up. 坚持梦想，永不言弃。 3. Never give up is the only secret of your dream to come true. 永不言弃是梦想实现的秘诀。 4.A man who can dream of dreams, is a successful man. 一个实现梦想的人就是一个成功的人。 5. Action speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。 6. Rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日之功！ 7. No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有回报。 8. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 9.There is no royal road to learning. 书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。 【连词】 first, second, third, Finally, as long as, so...that..., Although, though, because, so, all in all，both...and..., both of, however, but, or, then, that's why/ one of the main reasons, too...to..., what's more, in addition, in my opinion, as for me, in my eye 【实例讲解1】 【写作任务】（Section B 3c） 假如你喜欢的中学生英文杂志正在举办以My life in 20 years为题的征文活动，你对此非常感兴趣，请写一篇短文参加此次征文活动。 【审清题目】 内容：从工作、居住地、交通方式、环境、业余活动等方面畅想自己二十年后的生活。 文体：说明文。 时态：以一般将来时为主。 人称：以第一人称为主。 【头脑风暴】 【提供素材】 ◆常用单词、短语和句子 在横线上填写单词、短语或句子。 What will my life be like in 20 years? 1. Jobs: teacher, (1)_____________(科学家), engineer, astronaut, pilot, computer programmer, dentist, doctor, nurse (护士), cook, musician, (2)_____________(赛车手), violinist, pianist, newspaper reporter, artist, actor / actress, singer, dancer, policeman  / policewoman, basketball  / volleyball / ... player • I think I'll be a doctor / teacher / ...    • I'm going to be a pilot / singer / ... 2. Places to live: build houses under the sea, build more space stations, look for another planet to live on, (3)_____________(搬到其他星球), live on the moon • There'll be more than one robot in my house. • (4)___________________(我将会住在一个智能房子里). • Cities will be cleaner / more crowded / ... 3. Transportation: self-driving cars, more high-speed trains (高铁), some new kinds of vehicles (交通工具) • I will have my own small plane. • (5)___________________(小汽车和公共汽车将能够在城市到处飞). • I will use space rockets to fly from one planet to another. 4. Environment: be short of water, (6)___________ (处于极大危险之中), more / less air pollution, less clean air, fewer  / more trees, more tall buildings, more beautiful, fresh air • The weather will be hotter / worse / ...    • There will be more / fewer people / cars / trees / ... 5. Free time activities: go to the moon for a vacation, (7)_____________(在太空散步), spend some time with my friends in the metaverse (元宇宙), play VR (虚拟现实) games at home • I will have more free time / have more holidays / have talking animal friends / ... 6. Other aspects: (8)_____________(世界和平), no more paper money / books, no more disease (疾病), work more / less, live to be over 150 years old, work at home, work at most three days a week • Students will study on the Internet.    • (9)___________________(学生将不必去学校). • E-books (电子书) will take the place of paper books. • I will wear smart clothes. • (10)___________________(一切都是免费的). Key:  1. scientist  2. race car driver  3. move to other planets  4. I will live in a smart house  5. Cars and buses will be able to fly around the city 6. be in great danger  7. go for / take walks in space  8. world peace  9. Students won't have to go to school   10. Everything will be free 【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 My life in 20 years 引出话题 In 20 years, I think my life will be easier. 具体介绍 (1)___________________(我将会成为一名航天员). I will fly to other planets often and help look for another planet to live on. Also, (2)___________________(我将帮助工程师们建造更多的空间站). When I am free, (3)___________________(我将住在一个小村庄里) because there will be cleaner air there and people will live a slower life. (4)___________________(我将和我的家人乘着我们自己的飞机环游世界). It won't take much time because it will be really fast. What's more, (5)___________________(也许有一天我将搬到另一个星球). I will spend some time with my friends in the metaverse. It will be exciting. 总结全文 All in all, I believe my life in 20 years will be full of fun. Key: 1. I will be / become an astronaut 2. I will help the engineers build more space stations 3. I will live in a small village 4. I will travel around the world with my family in our own plane 5. maybe I'll move to another planet one day 【实例解析2】 近期,某英文报开辟了“畅想未来”专栏。假如你是李华,请以“What Will Our Life Be like in the Future?”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文向该专栏投 稿,从不同角度畅谈你对未来生活的展望。 ►►审题指导 1.文体：说明文 2.人称：第一人称 3.时态：一般将来时 4.写作要点：明确写作要点,所给的要点要全,并加入自主发挥的部分。 ►►思路点拨 What Will Our Life Be like in the Future? I don't think that life in the future will be ①the same as it is today. ②First of all,the environment will become worse ③because of the air pollution.④Besides,⑤there will be robots helping at home. They will make it possible for people to see a doctor without going out.⑥Speaking of study,there won't be any schools,because students will study on computers at home.⑦As for free time activities,more young kids will do some sports at home with AI.⑧As the population is growing quickly,building houses on the sea will be possible. We never know ⑨what will happen in the future.But everyone should ⑩play a part in making it better. 点评: ②First of all,④Besides,⑥ Speaking of和⑦As for的使用 使文章的逻辑清晰，有条 理。 ①the same as,③because of和 ⑩play a part in的使用使文 章的语言丰富多样。 ⑧As引导的原因状语从句和 ⑨what引导的宾语从句的使用 让文章的表达更高级。 本篇范文语言丰富，逻辑性 强,同时能够灵活运用本单元 所学语法——一般将来时和 重点短语及句型,如the same as,there will be robots helping和play a part in等。 写作练笔 【写作任务】  你们学校下周将要举行主题为“我的小发明”的英语演讲比赛,你将发明一款人工智能机器人,请你写一篇演讲稿,简单介绍这款人工智能机器人 （AI robot）。内容包括： 1.What's the name of your robot? 2.What does it look like? 3.What can it do for you in your study and life? 要求： 1.词数80左右（开头已给出,不计入总词数）,可适当发挥； 2.不得透露校名、姓名等任何个人信息。 ►►审题指导 1.文体：________ 2.人称：__________ 3.时态：________________________ 4.写作要点：①________________________；②__________________；③ ____________________。 ►►思路点拨 Ladies and gentlemen, Good morning!It's my great pleasure to be here to introduce my robot.In the future I will have an AI robot called Superman. He will be very human-like,and he will have a round head and blue eyes,with long legs and arms. Superman can do many things for me. When I feel sad,it will talk with me like a friend and make me happy. Also,he will be able to cook different kinds of delicious food for me. That way,my mom won't get verytired. He will be so good at education that he can always teach me to learn Chinese,English and other subjects. With his help,I will become moreinterested in study. The AI robot will play a great part in my life and study. He will make a big difference to me. 【真题解析】 1.（江苏徐州·中考真题）假定你是李华。你班交换留学生Simon即将返校，他对“校园科技周”非常感兴趣，他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信。 注意： 1.词数90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.邮件需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺； 3.邮件中不得泄露个人信息； 4.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Hi Simon, I’m very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure you will enjoy the Technology Week. Li Hua 【解题思路】 ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，根据开头，介绍科技周开始的时间； 第二步，根据Simon的问题提示，介绍科技周的活动； 第三步，介绍Simon感兴趣的机器人活动。 【满分作文】 Hi Simon, I’m very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week. It will be held in the No. 2 building in two weeks. There are many different kinds of activities in the Week. First, you can watch science fiction films like The Wandering Earth. Second, some students will tell stories about scientists like Deng Jiaxian. What’s more, our school will share the latest news about technology and show creative ideas about robots. You are crazy about robots, right? Great, there are some smart robot shows you can take part in here. Then you can see and experience how excellent they are. I’m sure you will enjoy the Technology Week. Li Hua 【亮点词汇】 ①different kinds of不同种类的 ②take part in参加 【高分句型】 Then you can see and experience how excellent they are.(感叹句作宾语) 2.（湖南娄底·统考中考真题）Sophia的问世，引起了大家极大的兴趣。如果将来你有一个机器人，你想用它来干什么呢？为此，你们班在英语活动课上进行了热烈的讨论，请根据下面的图表，用英语写一篇短文，总结讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的想法。 1.要点： 2.要求： (1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等； (2)语言要通顺，表达要正确； (3)要求包含所有要点提示，为了行文需要，可适当增加要点； (4）词数不少于60个英语单词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.参考词汇： 聊天娱乐chat and play Sophia, a robot woman, has come into the world. It caused a heated discussion in our English class. If we have a robot, what shall we ask it to do? Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解题思路】 本文主要以第三人称写作，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。通过所给图表介绍讨论的结果，叙述每种情况所占的比例以及想要机器人做的事情。可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 【满分作文】 Sophia, a robot woman, has come into the world. It caused a heated discussion in our English class. If we have a robot, what shall we ask it to do? Here are the results. Fifty percent of the students say they will ask the robot to help with the housework or help to look after old people. Thirty percent of the students say they will ask the robot to help with their study. When they’re tired, they will use the robot for chatting and playing. Twenty percent of the students will ask the robot to do more interesting things. Some of them say they will ask the robot to do volunteer work with them. And some of them say they will use the robot to pick up the litter on the street to protect our environment. In my opinion, there are advantages of robots and trouble as well. But it is certain that our life will be better with the development of science and technology.一、材料作文 以“The life in the future”为题写一篇文章，按下列提示完成。 1. 我们已经过着很美好的生活； 2. 想象未来的生活：每个家庭会有电脑和机器人；电脑帮助我们更好的了解世界；机器人帮我们做大多数的家务；我们可以足不出户购物和看病；孩子们可以在家上网课；人们可以活到200岁等； 3. 为了未来的生活，我们现在应该努力学习，实现理想。80词左右。 提示词：想象：imagine；机器人：robot；活到……：live to... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The life in the future We have lived a happy life. Let me imagine the life in the future. Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us learn more about the world. Robots will help us do most of the housework. We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. Students can study at home on computers. People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care. Our life will be better and better. For this, we should study hard. We’ll make the goal come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍未来的生活，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出要想象未来的生活； 第二步，根据提示要点详细阐述想象的未来生活是什么样的； 第三步，书写结语，表达为了实现这些梦想，要努力学习。 [亮点词汇] ①most of大多数 ②do some shopping购物 ③because of因为 [高分句型] ①Computers will help us learn more about the world. (省略to的动词不定式作宾语补足语) ②We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. (动名词作宾语) 2．科技发展日新月异，我们对未来的构想或许能够在几十年后一一实现。某青少年英语网站“Life in 2050”专栏正开展征稿活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 2050年的生活将会是怎样的？为什么？ 2. 2050年的你将会是怎样的？ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Life in 2050 will be quite different from now. Firstly, because the medicine technology keeps improving, people will live longer than now. Secondly, there will be more robots in the world and they will help with all kinds of jobs, so people will work fewer hours and have more free time. What’s more, planes will travel faster in the future. As a result, people will be able to take a holiday in other countries more easily. As for me, I think I’ll be a reporter in 2050. I’ll visit many places and find something new. Then I will share them on the Internet so that everyone can know about them. I believe life in 2050 will be more interesting than now. 【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给的内容提示，围绕“Life in 2050”该主题，畅想2050年的生活会是什么样的。 2.写作指导：本文应以第一、三人称和一般将来时为主来行文。写作中要清楚地介绍未来生活的变化，以及为什么会有这些变化，并畅想2050年的你会是什么样的，注意时态和人称的变化，保持主谓一致；保证内容齐全，行文连贯，文中无单词和语法错误。 随着科技的发展，未来人们的生活将会发生很大的变化。Shenzhen Daily正开展以“Our Future Life”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包含以下要点： 1.交通不再拥挤，因为人们拥有可以飞的摩托车； 2.越来越多的人去月球度假； 3.越来越多的机器人为我们服务，例如：①……；②……； 4.为了未来的美好生活，你会做些什么准备。（至少2点） 要求： 1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 提示词：拥挤的heavy；摩托车motorbike Our Future Life With the development of science and technology. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                                Our Future Life       With the development of science and technology. People’s lives will change a lot in the future.       In the future, there will be in the world. So there may not be enough food and water for so many people. But the traffic will not be heavy any more because people can go by flying motorbikes. And more and more people will go on a vacation to the Moon by spaceship. Houses, hospitals, schools will be built on other planets, too. People will do less work in the future, too. Robots will do the dangerous and hard work for people.       To have a better in the future, I’m going to study harder to have more knowledge. At the same time, I also want to have more time for sports to have a healthier body. I believe our life will be better and better. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时，第一段应承接短文开头，交代题目中的“未来人们的生活将会发生很大的变化”；第二段要包含前三个要点的内容，交代未来生活的样子；第三段写要点四，说明“会为未来的美好生活做些什么准备”。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来描述未来生活；时态采用一般将来时；要包含所有要点，并适当发挥，写出自己的准备内容，同时各要点间要保证条理清晰。 亲爱的同学们，你对未来的生活有着怎样的期待呢？15年后的你将会从事什么职业，过着怎样的生活呢？请以“My Life in Fifteen Years”为主题，综合以下提示写一篇英语短文，畅想未来的生活吧。 提示： （1）想象15年后你将从事的职业； （2）想象15年后你的生活，包括衣、食、住、行等； （3）你将怎么做来实现这种生活。 要求： （1）80词左右； （2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! My name is Yang Fang. I am a student and I study at school now. I like playing basketball and surfing on the Internet. I go to school by bike every day. I often go to the country for my vacation. I think I will change greatly in 15 years. Then I will be a doctor. I will enjoy reading books. I will go to work by car. I will go to Europe to spend my holiday. I will make a lot of money. I will have a beautiful building with garden. I think my life will be more interesting and wonderful in the future. I think it will come true if I work hard. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己十五年后的生活。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般将来时。先描述自己目前的生活，再从职业、生活等方面来阐述自己对未来的畅想。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 未来总是让人充满幻想，请根据下列提示，以“The Life in the Future”为题写一篇80个词左右的英语短文。 提示：1. 想象一下未来的生活会是什么样子； 2. 具体介绍一下未来的生活：很多事情都由电脑和机器人完成。例如：料理家务、购物、看病，孩子们通过网络把课堂搬到家里，人们可以活到200岁等； 3. 为了未来的生活，我们现在应该努力学习，实现理想。 要求: 1. 语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确；2. 不要逐字翻译提示的内容，想象内容要合情合理。 The Life in the Future ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Life in the Future What do you think the life in the future will be like? Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us know a lot about the world. Robots will help us do most of the housework. They can help us do some cleaning, cooking or washing. We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. Students can study at home on computers. People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care. Our life will become better and better. For this, we should study hard. I believe we will be able to do this. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是介绍未来的生活，题干中给出了相关的细节，写作时不要遗漏，也可适当增加细节，使文章更加流畅。 2.写作指导：本文介绍未来的生活，以一般将来时和第三人称为主。第一段主要介绍未来的生活，第二段讲述我们要为之付出努力。写作中运用不同的句式和短语，使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，无语法和拼写错误。 二、讲稿 7．高科技对学校和学生的生活也产生了很多影响，未来的学生会是什么样子呢？学习会是什么样子呢？假如你叫李华，请据此写一篇英语演讲稿，在英语角活动上发表自己的演讲。80词左右。 Students in the future _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Students in the future Hi，everyone. I am Li Hua. I think the students’ life in the future will be quite different from ours today. Students will not go to school to have classes. They will stay at home to study on computers. They will ask their teachers or classmates for help by chatting on the Internet. They won’t use papers,pens or exercise books. They will do homework online.However,they have to play sports and games together in the school. In fact,I don’t like that kind of life at all.I like to meet my teachers and classmates every day. I want to talk with them face to face. Thanks. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿。在写作时首先点明主旨；第二段说明科技对学生的学习产生的影响；第三段阐明自己的观点。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来说明科技对学生产生的影响；时态采用一般将来时为主，用一般现在时阐明自己的观点；说明影响时，应说明清晰一点，应该有具体的体现；并且阐明自己的观点时，说明其原因。另外，文章要条理清晰、层次分明。 三、话题作文 “AI，人工智能，无人驾驶，智能机器人....”最近几年科技掀起一波又一波高潮，给我们生活的方方面面带来着巨大的影响，未来可期，未来又会是什么样子呢？每个人都有自己不同的想象。请以“What will our life be like in the future？”为题目，从不同角度谈谈你和你的家人对未来生活的展望。80词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： What will our life be like in the future? Everyone has an idea about the future. My parents and I have different ideas about our future life. My father believes that there will be more e-cars in the city.So there will be less air pollution and our environment will be better.My mother thinks it will be possible for each family to have a robot. It can help with the housework. I think students will study at home on computers. They will have classes and take exams online. In the end,we hope our future life will be wonderful and colorful. 【详解】1.题干解读：最近几年科技掀起一波又一波高潮，给我们生活的方方面面带来巨大的影响，每个人都有自己不同的想象。以“What will our life like in the future？”为题目，从不同的角度谈谈你和你家人对未来生活的展望。 2.写作指导：本文是基于目前现状而对未来进行展望，所以在时态上用一般现在时和一般将来时为主。可以先总写自己和家人对未来有不同的想法，再写个人的具体想法，最后写我和父母对未来的向往。 你认为未来的世界会怎么样的？请以“The Future World”为题写一篇短文描述一下未来的世界，内容包括交通方式、生活及工作方式、居住环境、人们的健康状况等方面。词数80个左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Future World I think we will have a more beautiful and better world in the future. There will be more tall buildings, flowers and trees in the world. There will be less pollution because we’re going to protect the environment. Cars are important, so there will be more cars in the future. People will no longer go to the office in the building but directly at home. People can not go to the supermarket shopping but online directly. People will live to be 200 years old. And everyone will be healthier than now. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The Future World”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般将来时。作文要从交通方式、生活及工作方式、居住环境、人们的健康状况等方面描述未来的世界。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 未来总是让人充满幻想，请根据下列提示，以“The Life in the Future”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 要求： 1.语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确； 2.想象内容要合情合理。 提示： 1.将来每个家庭都有机器人和电脑，它们将帮助人类做很多事情。例如：料理家务、购物、看病。孩子们将不用去学校，他们将通过电脑在家里学习。人们将活到200岁。 2.未来我将会……/未来将会是……（适当合理展开想象）。 3.为了未来的生活，我们现在应该努力学习，实现理想。 The Life in the Future ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Life in the Future What do you think our life in the future will be like? Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us know a lot about the world. Robots will help us do a lot of work. They can help us do some cleaning, cooking and washing. We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. Children can study at home on computers. People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care. Our life will be better and better. We should study hard to realize our dreams. 【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，要求考生以“The Life in the Future”为题写一篇关于未来的生活情况。根据所给的提示，围绕中心写作，可以适当的发挥自己的想象。 2.写作指导：本文人称主要用第三人称和第一人称，时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时。在介绍未来生活时，语句要通顺，语法正确，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$