读后续写 Eight An Orphaned Baby Squirrel 孤儿小松鼠 导学案-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

Writing Eight 主题语境:人与自然 语篇类型: 个人故事 关键词:baby squirrel 322w, 20min 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It's amazing to watch as they discover their world. While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel. We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait-and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother--we realized the tiny squirrel was lost. Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order. More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean(断奶 ) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own. Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt". Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds. To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter(吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn't long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild. His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150个左右。 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. "______________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard. "______________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 思路点拨 第1段我们可以尝试问这些问题: ①How did Squirt get along with the other squirrels? ②How did we react to the current situation? ③What did Squirt do afterwards? ④What decision did we make? 然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段话: One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. "______________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 第2段我们可以尝试问这些问题: ①How did we feel about Squirt's disappearance? ②What happened to Squirt later? ③How did the story end? ④What was my reflection? 然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段话: One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard. "______________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 高分表达(激动心理及表情描写) 完成句子/翻译句子 1.当他好奇地看到与自己颜色不同的同类时，一种自然的亲密感在他的身体里油然而生。(运用无灵主语) ____________________________________________ rising in his body when he was curious to see creatures of his kind with just a different color. 2.Squirt 既惊讶又兴奋，他把鼻子凑到它们跟前，慢慢地、小心翼翼地靠近。(运用形容词短语作状语) ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________. 3.Squirt高兴得尖叫起来，他这辈子从来没有这么高兴过。(运用倒装句) ____________________________________________________________________. 4.我们松了一口气，因为他终于回到了他的自然世界;同时，我们也很难过，因为我们已经把他当成我们家庭的一员，没有他，我们的生活将会少了很多活力。(运用介词结构) We were relieved that he finally returned to his natural world, meanwhile, we were sad because we had already made him a member of our family, ______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________. 5.看到这里，我们松了一口气，笑了笑，远远地看着它们，希望Squirt能自己活下来，回归野外。(运用同位语从句) Seeing this, we smiled in relief and watched them from a distance,_________________________ ________________________________________ and back to the wild. 6.我们担心他的安全，不知道他是否找到了一个温暖又干燥的地方避雨。(运用宾语从句) We worried about his safety, wondering ______________________________________________ ______________________________________ to shelter from the heavy rain. 7.虽然有点难过，但我和丈夫交换了一个理解的笑容，为这段苦乐参半的经历能够帮助我们的孩子在Squirt的陪伴下找到爱的世界而感到高兴。(呼应原文首句) Though a little sad, I exchanged an understanding smile with my husband, really glad that the bitter- sweet experience ___________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________. 8.每次我们在森林里散步，我总觉得附近有一个红色的身影，好像Squirt一直陪伴着我们，从来没有真正离开过。(运用方式状语从句) Every time we took a walk in the forest, I always felt there was a red figure nearby, ___________________________________________________________, ever really departing. 9.如果没有他，我们就不会学会如何照顾松鼠，我们的女儿们也不会学到如此多的责任和同理心。(运用虚拟语气) Without him, ___________________________________________________________________ and our daughters would not have learned so much about responsibility and empathy. 语料积累 重点词汇 名词: interaction 互动 solace 安慰 companion 同伴 动词: chase追逐 scour (彻底地)搜寻 huddle 蜷缩 integrate融入群体 befall 降临到(某人)头上 形容词: playful 爱嬉戏的 faint微弱的 immense极大的 副词: punctually 准时地 indefinitely 无限期地 truly 真实地 重要短语:win sb. over 赢得某人支持 wash over 彻底深入地影响 lie ahead 在未来 rage on 猛烈地继续 bring oneself to do sth.强迫自己做某事 embark on开始 safe and sound 安然无恙 高级句型 1. Unfortunately, they were not pleased with his presence and scolded him, swatting him away,不幸的是，他们不喜欢他的出现，并斥责他，把他赶走。 2. Squirt's visits to the trees became a regular occurrence, and he soon became familiar with the family of squirrels. Squirt经常去树上玩，很快就熟悉了松鼠家族。 3. The girls and I watched in amazement as he chased them up and down the tree trunks and branches.我和女孩们惊讶地看着他在树干和树枝上追着他们跑。 4. Day after day, Squirt would hang out with his peers and day by day he seemed less attached to us.一天天过去，Squirt会和他的同伴们一起出去玩，他似乎对我们不那么依恋了。 5. Mostly he played in the trees, chattering away to anyone who happened to cross his path and occasionally swiping snacks from our toddler boys. 大部分时间他都在树上玩要，对着碰巧经过他的人吱吱叫，偶尔从我们蹒珊学步的儿子那里偷吃零食。 6.We were worried about him and thought that he might have gotten lost again, but the next morning he appeared at the door soaking wet and shivering. 我们都很担心他，以为他可能又迷路了，但第二天早上，他出现在门口，浑身湿透，颤抖着。 7. Not wanting to give up the hope of finding him, we opened our umbrellas and with headlights headed for the place where they used to play together. 我们不想放弃找到他的希望，我们打开雨伞，戴着头灯，向他们曾经一起玩耍的地方走去。 8. Although we missed him, we knew that this was a good thing and that he was finally able to live his life in the wild, where he belonged. 虽然我们很想念他，但我们知道这是一件好事，他终于可以在属于他的野外生活了。 9. In the wild and even somewhat silly moments of raising a baby squirrel, our children learned to value and| appreciate life. 在抚养小松鼠的那些高兴的甚至有时有些愚蠢的时刻里，我们的孩子学会了珍惜和感激生活。 Paragraph 1: One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. "______________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard. 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