考点25 高考高频考点应用文写作（核心考点精讲精练））-备战2025年高考英语一轮复习考点帮（北京专用）

考点25 高考高频考点应用文写作征文投稿（核心考点精讲精练） 北京近三年高考真题考点分布 征文投稿 2024 主题语境 内容 学校生活 外国好友Jim准备给校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。 2023 ————— --------------- 2022 ————— ---------------- 其他省份高考真题考点分布 年份 卷别 体裁 话题 内容 2024 浙江1月卷 投稿 学校生活 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 2023 全国甲卷 投稿 历史文化 介绍中国历史人物 2023 全国乙卷 投稿 生活学习 假期习得新技能 2022 全国甲卷 征文 世界海洋日 举办英语征文比赛 2022 全国乙卷 投稿 调查结果 英语学习方式的调查 2. 命题规律及备考策略 【命题规律】 1. 近三年北京卷对中国传统文化种类的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查； 2. 体现个人成长与时代发展相融合； 3. 体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文； 4. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制，学生仍有较大的自由发挥空间（自己的感想），以展示自己的个性和创意 【备考策略】 1. 熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架； 2. 积累基本词汇和句式，尤其是简单基本句式，写好简单句； 3. 背诵优美的段落和范文，模仿高级句式和表达； 4. 加强审题（主题、时态）训练； 5. 练习书写，达到整洁美观的程度。 【命题预测】 预测2025年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。 征文、投稿，区别与书信，一般会给出特定的主题。如庆祝英文栏目创刊十周年，你最敬爱的人等等。不要在开头和结尾生搬硬套如“I’ writing to...”等书信格式。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。 文章框架结构“引出话题-要点展开-总结全文”。主次分明，逻辑清晰。主题句要出现关键点，如现状、原因、看法、影响、意义、措施、建议等。拓展句具体详细，有意识使用逻辑衔接词。 能力提升短语表达 1.精通知识 have a good command of knowledge 2.不遗余力地做某事 spare no efforts to do ... 3.共同努力做某事 make joint effort to do... 4. 对...…有害 do harm to/be harmful to... 5. 谈到、提到 When it comes to... 6. 不可否认...... There is no denying that... 7. 随着新学期的临近 With the new term approaching 8. 面临考试 be faced with challenge exams 9. 人们普遍认为.... It is universally acknowledged that... 10.很明显，明显地 It is obvious that.../obliviously 11.极为重要；强调...…的重要性... of great/crucial/vital significance/importance; emphasize the importance of...; put/place the stress of...; highlight the significance of...; attach importance to......… 开头句式能力提升表达 1)．An article in the newspaper caught my attention. 报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意。 2)．I want to talk about “How Social Media affect People's live” in your column. 我想在你的专栏里谈谈“社交媒体如何影响人们的生活”。 主体段落句式能力提升表达 1)．My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework. 我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。 2)．Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns. 如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。 3)．Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。 4)．Not only does playing table tennis build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others. 打乒乓球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。 5)．As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。 7)．In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us during this bitter but sweet year.总之，在这苦乐参半的一年里，适当的饮食、规律的锻炼和积极的态度对我们是有益的。 结尾句式能力提升表达 1)．I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future. 我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。 2)．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. 如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。 写作模板 Dear Editor, I’d like to submit an article entitled______________ which I’m sure will catch your attention. Nowadays, when _________ ,_____________appeared in our view. More and more __________ are becoming increasingly interested in ___________The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows. For one thing_______ . For another, _______ Even more impressive is that ___________ . In my view, it’s ___________ that ______________. 假定你是李华，你校将举办一场面向留学生的中国传统美食节。请你向学校英文报投稿，介绍并宣传此次活动，内容包括： （1）活动内容； （2）活动意义； （3）邀请留学生参与。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Chinese Traditional Food Festival _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（2024·福建泉州·二模）你校英文报正在开展以smile为题的征文比赛。请你以“The power of smile”问题，结合自己经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.自身经历；2.你的感悟。注意：词数100左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李华。为丰富校园生活，你校在上周举办了一年一度的校园艺术节，请你向学校校报投稿，写一篇短文介绍这次活动。内容主要包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 活动意义。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报栏目“Growing Pains”正在面向全校学生征稿，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： 1.简述一次成长中遇到的烦恼和解决方法； 2.提出建议。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·湖南岳阳·三模）你校英文报正面向学生征集“传播中国传统文化”的活动提案。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 提议并介绍1-2个活动； 2. 说明你的理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·广东汕头·二模）你校英文报五月份的主题是“新时代青年”，请你写一篇短文投稿， 内容包括： 1.新时代青年的品格; 2.如何成为新时代好青年。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Teens In The New Era_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·山东泰安·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期社会实践活动的方案。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 你的方案; 2. 你的理由。 注意： 1. 词数80词左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 7．（2024·山东济南·模拟预测）4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英文报将以“My Reading Story”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 你的阅读经历或体验； 2. 鼓励读书的倡议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请在答题卡相应位置作答。 My Reading Story ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·广东·二模）你校将以“Enhancing Social Skills in Students”为主题举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 社交能力的重要性； 2. 提高学生社交能力的建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Enhancing Social Skills in Students _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·山东·二模）为庆祝世界旅游日，让世界了解中国，你校英文报将以“中国魅力城市”为主题，举办征文比赛，请你选择一个中国旅游城市并写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.推荐城市； 2.推荐理由。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Charming Tourist City in China____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·河北沧州·三模）随着高考日益临近，有些学生缺乏自信，害怕失败，因此你校举办以“提升自信心”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以Boost Our Confidence为题写一篇短文投稿。要点如下： 1.自信的重要性； 2.具体建议。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Boost Our Confidence ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（2024·河南南阳·模拟预测）假定你是校英文报编辑李华，最近你校想开设一个名为“Your Respected Person and You”的栏目，请你写一则征稿启事，向全校学生征稿，内容包括： 1．栏目介绍； 2．稿件要求。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Contributions Wanted ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ School English Newspaper 2．（2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，近期你校组织了经典唐诗诵读活动，请你以“Appreciating the elegance of Tang Poetry”为题给校英文报写一篇稿件， 内容包括： 1. 活动介绍； 2. 你的收获。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Appreciating the elegance of Tang Poetry ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·广东梅州·二模）又到凤凰花开时，又是一年毕业季。你校英文报正在举行以“校园最美瞬间”为主题的征文活动，请你按照以下要点写一篇短文投稿： 1. 你的回忆； 2. 你的感受。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 The Most Beautiful Moment on Campus _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Most Beautiful Moment on Campus From the trees sprouting leaves to the library at sunset, there are many beautiful moments on campus. The most impressive one for me happened in the school sports meeting. In the 800-meter race, I noticed a girl, who was left far behind, run hard to keep up. Then she fell down accidentally, bleeding from the knees. Instead of giving up, she stood up and continued though she almost had no chance to win. That moment touched me. I realize lovely gardens, clean pathways and splendid buildings do make our campus nice-looking, but it’s the whole school’s behavior that adds its inner and true beauty. 【导语】本文是一篇投稿。校英文报正在举行以“校园最美瞬间”为主题的征文活动，要求考生按照要点写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 意外地：accidentally→ by chance 机会：chance→ opportunity 打动：touch→ impress 意识到：realize→ be aware of 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The most impressive one for me happened in the school sports meeting. 拓展句：A moment, which impressed me most, happened in the school sports meeting. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In the 800-meter race, I noticed a girl, who was left far behind, run hard to keep up. (运用了关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Instead of giving up, she stood up and continued though she almost had no chance to win. (运用了though引导的让步状语从句) 4．（2024·浙江温州·三模）你校英文报就最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”(When English Meets The Arts)系列活动开展征文，请你写一篇短文，分享其中让你印象深刻的一项活动，内容包括： 1.活动介绍;2.你的感想 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 When English Meets The Arts _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】When English Meets The Arts Recently, our school organized a series of activities titled ”When English Meets The Arts". Among them, the activity that left a deep impression on me was the English drama performance. During the activity, students from different grades cooperated to produce and perform short English dramas. Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, providing a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. Personally, I was deeply impressed by the dedication and teamwork displayed by the students. Despite the challenges of language learning and stage fright, they demonstrated confidence and enthusiasm on stage. Moreover, the dramas not only entertained the audience but also encouraged language learning in a fun and interactive way. Overall, the English drama performance was a memorable and inspiring experience, highlighting the synergy between language learning and artistic expression. It reinforced the importance of creative approaches in language education and provided valuable opportunities for students to shine on stage. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇征文，分享学校英文报最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”系列活动中让你印象深刻的一项活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 一系列：a series of →a suite of 合作：cooperate→collaborate 展示：showcase→display 提供：provide→offer 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, providing a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. 拓展句：Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, which provided a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Among them, the activity that left a deep impression on me was the English drama performance.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Overall, the English drama performance was a memorable and inspiring experience, highlighting the synergy between language learning and artistic expression.(运用了现在分词作状语) 5．（2024·河北·二模）你校英文报“Morals and Virtues”栏目正在举办征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，跟同学们分享一则暖心故事，内容包括： 1. 简述这个故事； 2. 你的收获与启发。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Heartwarming Story ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: A Heartwarming Story Recently, I came across a beautiful display of sympathy that I felt it worthwhile to share. While waiting at a crowded bus stop, I noticed an elderly woman struggling to carry her groceries. Despite the rush hour, a young man stepped forward, offering his assistance without hesitation. Witnessing his selfless act reminded me of the marked impact of kindness in our daily lives. It taught me that sympathy knows no boundaries of age or circumstance. In our fast-paced world, such gestures serve as gentle reminders of our shared humanity, inspiring us to extend a helping hand whenever possible. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生参与校英文报“Morals and Virtues”栏目的征文活动，写一篇有关暖心故事的短文，需涵盖故事经过、收获与启发两方面的内容。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 展示：display→show, demonstration 注意到：notice→observe, see 尽管：despite→in spite of 显著的：marked→noticeable, pronounced 激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do→encourage sb. to do, motivate sb. to do 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Witnessing his selfless act reminded me of the marked impact of kindness in our daily lives. 拓展句：Witnessing his selfless act reminded me of the marked impact that kindness has in our daily lives. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, I came across a beautiful display of sympathy that I felt it worthwhile to share. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] It taught me that sympathy knows no boundaries of age or circumstance. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型3] In our fast-paced world, such gestures serve as gentle reminders of our shared humanity, inspiring us to extend a helping hand whenever possible. (运用了现在分词短语inspiring…作状语) 6．（2024·江苏盐城·模拟预测）最近，“搭子文化（the companion culture）”受到了越来越多的人的关注，人们为了寻找陪伴而选择“暂时性搭子”。你校英文报就“青少年是否应该寻找学习搭子”向全校学生征稿，请你写一篇短文投稿。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Should teens pursue study partners? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Should teens pursue study partners? The companion culture trend is gaining notice as people opt for short-term partnerships to fulfill immediate needs for cooperation, knowledge exchange, and shared experiences. I am in favor of teens’ pursuing study partners, because these partnerships can help develop essential skills like resilience and teamwork, which are not only crucial for study but also for life in general. Although having study partners can encourage lively idea exchange and collaborative learning, it’s crucial to be careful and avoid distractions. It’s important for teens to find study partners that match their learning style, creating a relationship that benefits both. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“青少年是否应该寻找学习搭子”为题写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 支持：be in favor of→approve 满足：fulfill→meet 追求：pursue→go after 重要的：crucial/important→vital 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：It’s important for teens to find study partners that match their learning style, creating a relationship that benefits both. 拓展句：It’s important for teens to find study partners that match their learning style, so that they can create a relationship that benefits both. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am in favor of teens’ pursuing study partners, because these partnerships can help develop essential skills like resilience and teamwork, which are not only crucial for study but also for life in general. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型】Although having study partners can encourage lively idea exchange and collaborative learning, it’s crucial to be careful and avoid distractions. (运用了although引导让步状语从句，动名词作主语，it作形式主语以及不定式作真正主语) 7．（2024·广东广州·一模）你校英文报举办主题为“我最喜爱的课外活动”的征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 课外活动简介； 2. 你喜爱的理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Favourite Extracurricular Activity ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 My Favourite Extracurricular Activity Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, I like dancing best. I have been in a school dance club since the first week I came studying here. After school we practise dancing on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and greatly enriches my campus life. I love dancing because it is more than just moving my body for fun and joy. It is a way to relieve stress and enjoy life. Besides, mastering any style of dance takes hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person. I would not be who I am today without dancing after school. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇短文参加“我最喜爱的课外活动”征文比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 丰富的：colorful→abundant 丰富，扩大：enrich→enlarge 缓解：relieve→alleviate 而且：besides→furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, I like dancing best. 拓展句：Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, I like dancing best, which helps me a lot. 【点睛】[高分句型1]After school we practise dancing on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and greatly enriches my campus life.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2]Besides, mastering any style of dance takes hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 8．（23-24高三上·广东·期末）假如你校英文报正在开展“More Housework, Less Pressure”主题征文活动，鼓励同学们参加家务劳动。请你写一篇征文。内容包括： 1. 陈述观点； 2. 分享经验； 3. 提出倡议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 More Housework, Less Pressure _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: More Housework, Less Pressure Undoubtedly, participating in housework can bring numerous benefits to students. Firstly, it helps cultivate a sense of responsibility and independence. By taking care of our living environment, we learn to appreciate the efforts that it takes to maintain a clean and tidy home. Additionally, balancing academic responsibilities with household chores teaches us how to prioritize tasks and manage our time effectively. I regularly assist my parents with tasks such as cleaning, cooking, and laundry. It allows me to develop practical life skills. Moreover, contributing to the household responsibilities reduces the burden on my parents and creates a harmonious atmosphere at home. Let’s take the initiative to help our families and create a more harmonious living environment. Remember, by doing so, we can live a more balanced and fulfilling life. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生写一篇短文，参加学校英文报开展的“More Housework, Less Pressure”主题征文活动，需陈述自己对于参加家务劳动的观点，分享自己做家务劳动的经验，并向同学们发出倡议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 许多：numerous→innumerable 培养：cultivate→develop/nurture 让某人可以做某事：allow sb. to do sth.→enable sb. to do sth. 减少：reduce→decrease 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Undoubtedly, participating in housework can bring numerous benefits to students. 拓展句：There is no doubt that participating in housework can bring numerous benefits to students. 【点睛】[高分句型1] By taking care of our living environment, we learn to appreciate the efforts that it takes to maintain a clean and tidy home. (运用了动名词作宾语，that引导限制性定语从句，不定式作真正的主语) [高分句型2] Additionally, balancing academic responsibilities with household chores teaches us how to prioritize tasks and manage our time effectively. (运用了动名词短语balancing…作主语) 9．（2023·浙江·模拟预测）假定你是李华，某国际学校学生会主席。你校学生会正在向全体学生征集以“中国科学家精神”(The Spirit of Chinese Scientists)为主题的短视频。请你用英文拟一则征稿启事， 内容包括：1.活动目的；2.作品要求；3.投稿方式及截止时间 Contributions Wanted ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Student Union 【答案】Contributions Wanted Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union of our school. Our school is collecting some short videos on the theme of “The Spirit of Chinese Scientists”. Here is some useful information about this activity. The purpose of this activity is to spread the spirit of perseverance to people. In addition, the most important thing is that the submitted work should include a scientist. Finally, if you want to submit a short video, please send it to our school website, and note that the deadline is October 1st. I hope you can actively participate in our school activities. The Student Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，某国际学校学生会主席。你校学生会正在向全体学生征集以“中国科学家精神”(The Spirit of Chinese Scientists)为主题的短视频。请你用英文拟一则征稿启事，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.作品要求；3.投稿方式及截止时间。 【详解】1.词汇积累 目的：purpose→aim 此外：besides → what’s more→/in addition 最后：finally→in the end→at last 参加：participate in→take part in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Our school is collecting some short videos on the theme of “The Spirit of Chinese Scientists”. 拓展句：Our school is collecting some short videos which should be on the theme of “The Spirit of Chinese Scientists”. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The purpose of this activity is to spread the spirit of perseverance to people.（运用了动词不定式作表语） 【高分句型2】In addition, the most important thing is that the submitted work should include a scientist.（运用了that引导的表语从句） 10．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模）你校英文报社正在组织以“感恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”为关键词的征稿活动，请你结合自己经历，选择至少一个关键词投稿表达自己对高中生活的感悟。 注意： 1.将题目补充完整： 2.词数100词左右。 _____: the key word (s) of my high school life __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Sample 1: Gratitude and youth: the key word(s) of my high school life My high school life is so fascinating that it is beyond the description. Nothing can represent it better than “gratitude” and “youth”. The first day of my high school is still fresh in my mind. With youth and ignorance, I was completely at a loss and had nothing to expect. I cannot imagine how long this phenomena would last, which upset me seriously. It was the teachers’ and classmates’ concern that led me out of the initial confusion. Gradually, I deeply realize that my high school life is full of brilliant sunshine. The journey from confusion to getting the direction to persist in has taught me a lot. That is, youth lives for diligence and we should always be grateful! There is no youth without diligence, and gratitude makes my school life full of sunshine. Sample 2: When it comes to my high school life, nothing can be better than “youth” and “gratitude” to describe it. The first day of my high school is still fresh in my mind. With passion and dream, I entered the promising campus, seeing faces full of youth and energy. Hopefully, my heart was full of strength of striving for my dreams. However, youth can also have confusion. I remember once I failed the exam and felt so disappointed that I even couldn’t cheer up for long. It was the teachers’ and classmates’ help and concern that pulled me out of the dilemma. With encouragement and gratitude, I’ve been working hard to make progress. Cherishing youth and learning gratitude, I believe I will achieve my dream. Sample 3: Independence: the key word(s) of my high school life Before high school, I lived a sheltered life, with my parents taking care of most things. However, as I entered high school, a boarding one, I had to adapt to a new environment and way of life, which forced me to become self-reliant. With less supervision, I had to learn to manage my time effectively. Creating a study schedule and sticking to it helped me keep organized. Besides, learning to make decisions was another challenge: Which subject to choose? Whether to join a club? I had to consider my preferences and interests. Making these choices allowed me to discover who I was and what I was passionate about, which furthered my personal growth. As a conclusion, high school is a transformative period when I developed a sense of independence. It teaches me invaluable skills that I will carry through to my future life. 【导语】本文是一篇报社征稿。要求考生表达对自己高中生活的感悟。考生需要扣题，把“感恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”三个关键词囊括在文中，还需要添加适合细节使文章真实自然。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 受保护的：sheltered → protected/guarded 监督：supervision → oversight/monitoring 困境：dilemma → predicament/puzzle 感激：appreciation → gratitude/acknowledgment 2. 句式拓展： 简单句变复合句 原句：With passion and dream, I entered the promising campus, seeing faces full of youth and energy. 拓展句：When I entered the promising campus with passion and dream, I saw faces full of youth and energy. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It was the teachers’ and classmates’ concern that led me out of the initial confusion. （it was...that引导的强调句型） 【高分句型2】Cherishing youth and learning gratitude, I believe I will achieve my dream.（现在分词作伴随状语） 【高分句型3】Making these choices allowed me to discover who I was and what I was passionate about, which furthered my personal growth.（who和what引导的宾语从句，which引导的定语从句） 【2024.北京高考真题】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article. To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view. Looking forward to reading your article! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很好的：great →wonderful 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：In addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 句式变换 原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） （2024年浙江卷1月） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动； 2. 说明推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答： Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons. First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 厌倦：be tired of→be fed up with 首先：first→above all 减轻：combat→relieve 提高：improve→enhance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语) [高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句) （2023年全国甲卷） 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond. Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。 详解】1. 词汇积累 著名的：well-known → famous 人物：figure → person 强调：emphasize → stress 基础：foundation → basis （2023年全国乙卷） 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 机会：opportunity → chance 使沮丧：demoralize → discourage 满意的：satisfied → content 空闲的：leisure → spare 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 点睛 【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句) （2022年全国乙卷） 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 学习活动状况描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 【答案】 Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 缺乏：lack→shortage 加强：strengthen→enhance 各种各样的：various→all kinds of 就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. 拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句) （2022年全国乙卷） 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性； 2. 保护海洋的倡议。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is. All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves. 【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 越来越：more and more→increasingly 重视：place importance on→attach importance to 重要的：key→significant 此外：what’s more→furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. 拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构) [高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型) [高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句) ( 2 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 考点25 高考高频考点应用文写作征文投稿（核心考点精讲精练） 北京近三年高考真题考点分布 征文投稿 2024 主题语境 内容 学校生活 外国好友Jim准备给校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。 2023 ————— --------------- 2022 ————— ---------------- 其他省份高考真题考点分布 年份 卷别 体裁 话题 内容 2024 浙江1月卷 投稿 学校生活 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 2023 全国甲卷 投稿 历史文化 介绍中国历史人物 2023 全国乙卷 投稿 生活学习 假期习得新技能 2022 全国甲卷 征文 世界海洋日 举办英语征文比赛 2022 全国乙卷 投稿 调查结果 英语学习方式的调查 2. 命题规律及备考策略 【命题规律】 1. 近三年北京卷对中国传统文化种类的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查； 2. 体现个人成长与时代发展相融合； 3. 体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文； 4. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制，学生仍有较大的自由发挥空间（自己的感想），以展示自己的个性和创意 【备考策略】 1. 熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架； 2. 积累基本词汇和句式，尤其是简单基本句式，写好简单句； 3. 背诵优美的段落和范文，模仿高级句式和表达； 4. 加强审题（主题、时态）训练； 5. 练习书写，达到整洁美观的程度。 【命题预测】 预测2025年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。 征文、投稿，区别与书信，一般会给出特定的主题。如庆祝英文栏目创刊十周年，你最敬爱的人等等。不要在开头和结尾生搬硬套如“I’ writing to...”等书信格式。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。 文章框架结构“引出话题-要点展开-总结全文”。主次分明，逻辑清晰。主题句要出现关键点，如现状、原因、看法、影响、意义、措施、建议等。拓展句具体详细，有意识使用逻辑衔接词。 能力提升短语表达 1.精通知识 have a good command of knowledge 2.不遗余力地做某事 spare no efforts to do ... 3.共同努力做某事 make joint effort to do... 4. 对...…有害 do harm to/be harmful to... 5. 谈到、提到 When it comes to... 6. 不可否认...... There is no denying that... 7. 随着新学期的临近 With the new term approaching 8. 面临考试 be faced with challenge exams 9. 人们普遍认为.... It is universally acknowledged that... 10.很明显，明显地 It is obvious that.../obliviously 11.极为重要；强调...…的重要性... of great/crucial/vital significance/importance; emphasize the importance of...; put/place the stress of...; highlight the significance of...; attach importance to......… 开头句式能力提升表达 1)．An article in the newspaper caught my attention. 报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意。 2)．I want to talk about “How Social Media affect People's live” in your column. 我想在你的专栏里谈谈“社交媒体如何影响人们的生活”。 主体段落句式能力提升表达 1)．My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework. 我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。 2)．Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns. 如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。 3)．Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。 4)．Not only does playing table tennis build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others. 打乒乓球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。 5)．As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。 7)．In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us during this bitter but sweet year.总之，在这苦乐参半的一年里，适当的饮食、规律的锻炼和积极的态度对我们是有益的。 结尾句式能力提升表达 1)．I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future. 我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。 2)．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. 如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。 写作模板 Dear Editor, I’d like to submit an article entitled______________ which I’m sure will catch your attention. Nowadays, when _________ ,_____________appeared in our view. More and more __________ are becoming increasingly interested in ___________The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows. For one thing_______ . For another, _______ Even more impressive is that ___________ . In my view, it’s ___________ that ______________. 假定你是李华，你校将举办一场面向留学生的中国传统美食节。请你向学校英文报投稿，介绍并宣传此次活动，内容包括： （1）活动内容； （2）活动意义； （3）邀请留学生参与。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Chinese Traditional Food Festival _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible version: Chinese Traditional Food Festival Our school is thrilled to announce the Chinese Traditional Food Festival, a cultural activity designed for international students. This event will showcase a diverse array of traditional Chinese dishes, each representing a unique culinary style and region. From spicy Sichuan to delicate Cantonese, students will set off on a food journey, exploring the rich flavors and historical significance of Chinese food. It’s an immersive experience that will broaden cultural horizons and create unforgettable memories. We invite all international students to join us for this delicious adventure. For more details, contact the organizing committee. We look forward to your participation in this exciting event! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报投稿，介绍并宣传面向留学生的中国传统美食节活动，介绍活动内容、说明活动意义并邀请留学生参与。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 兴奋的：thrilled→excited 展示：showcase→display, exhibit 各种各样的：a diverse array of→a wide range of, different kinds of 代表：represent→stand for 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This event will showcase a diverse array of traditional Chinese dishes, each representing a unique culinary style and region. 拓展句：This event will showcase a diverse array of traditional Chinese dishes, each of which is to represent a unique culinary style and region. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Our school is thrilled to announce the Chinese Traditional Food Festival, a cultural activity designed for international students. (运用了过去分词短语作后置定语) [高分句型2] It’s an immersive experience that will broaden cultural horizons and create unforgettable memories. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句) 1．（2024·福建泉州·二模）你校英文报正在开展以smile为题的征文比赛。请你以“The power of smile”问题，结合自己经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.自身经历；2.你的感悟。注意：词数100左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A possible version The Power of Smile There are times when a gesture as simple as a smile can do wonders, lighting up someone in the darkness and even healing the soul. Overwhelmed by the stress from my poor academic performance, I was on the verge of breaking down. Noticing my frustration, Shelly, my best friend came to offer a few words of comfort but I was in such low spirits that I blurted out some sharp words and she ran away weeping. Regrettably, I was too ashamed to apologize and I couldn’t feel worse, which threw me into a world of darkness. The moment I saw her approaching the next day, I lowered my head immediately, trying to avoid her deliberately. However, she stopped me and gave me a hug. When I looked up, I met a smiling face, as gentle as a summer breeze. At that moment, all my anxiety and depression melted away. When words fail, smile speaks. 【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生以“The power of smile”问题，结合自己经历写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 压力：stress→pressure 立刻：immediately→instantly 注意到：notice→spot 拥抱：hug→embrace 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Overwhelmed by the stress from my poor academic performance, I was on the verge of breaking down. 拓展句：Since I was overwhelmed by the stress from my poor academic performance, I was on the verge of breaking down. 【点睛】[高分句型1] There are times when a gesture as simple as a smile can do wonders, lighting up someone in the darkness and even healing the soul.（运用了when引导定语从句） [高分句型2] Noticing my frustration, Shelly, my best friend came to offer a few words of comfort but I was in such low spirits that I blurted out some sharp words and she ran away weeping.（运用了现在分词作状语，such…that…引导结果状语从句） 2．（2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李华。为丰富校园生活，你校在上周举办了一年一度的校园艺术节，请你向学校校报投稿，写一篇短文介绍这次活动。内容主要包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 活动意义。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】In order to enrich our school life and broaden the students’ horizons, our school held the annual School Art Festival last week. As scheduled, the festival started with a singing competition, attracting dozens of students who had a talent for music. Ten contestants stood out and won the prizes in the end. Then followed the school art show, in which many works from both the students and teachers were on exhibition, ranging from calligraphy to paintings. The art festival provided a platform for us students to showcase our talents and passions, whether it be through music, dance, drama, or visual arts. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校在上周举办了一年一度的校园艺术节这一情况，向学校校报投稿，写一篇短文介绍这次活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 开阔：broaden→ widen 吸引：attract → draw 提供：provided→ offered 展示：showcase→ demonstrate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In order to enrich our school life and broaden the students’ horizons, our school held the annual School Art Festival last week. 被动句式：Our school held the annual School Art Festival last week, whose aim was to enrich our school life and broaden the students’ horizons. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As scheduled, the festival started with a singing competition, attracting dozens of students who had a talent for music.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语以及关系代词who引导的定语从句。） 【高分句型2】The art festival provided a platform for us students to showcase our talents and passions, whether it be through music, dance, drama, or visual arts.（运用了whether引导的让步状语从句。） 3．（2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报栏目“Growing Pains”正在面向全校学生征稿，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： 1.简述一次成长中遇到的烦恼和解决方法； 2.提出建议。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Growing up is not always enjoyable, with possibilities and challenges interwoven. I still remember a period in high school when I was on tense terms with my parents. Arguments emerged and a gulf grew between us. It was only when we put ourselves in each other’s shoes and had a thorough talk that our relationship began to change for the better. From my perspective, we should take a positive attitude towards teenage challenges. These pains are part of learning how to get on with other people and gaining a sense of identity. Therefore, with growing pains come growing gains. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生讲述自己成长中遇到的一次烦恼及解决办法，并提出建议。 【详解】词汇积累 交织：interwoven → intertwined 紧张的：on tense terms → in a tense state 出现：emerged → occurred 提出建议：give advice → propose suggestions 句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：Arguments emerged and a gulf grew between us. 拓展句：Discord surfaced and a chasm progressively widened in our relationship. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】I still remember a period in high school when I was on tense terms with my parents.（使用了when引导的定语从句先行词为a period） 【高分句型 2】It was only when we put ourselves in each other’s shoes and had a thorough talk that our relationship began to change for the better.（使用了强调句型） 4．（2024·湖南岳阳·三模）你校英文报正面向学生征集“传播中国传统文化”的活动提案。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 提议并介绍1-2个活动； 2. 说明你的理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    Knowing that a series of activities themed Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture will be held in our school, I can’t wait to propose two of my desired activities as follows. One is the Poetry Festival, which offers opportunities for students to recite their favorite poems and feel the charm of classic Chinese poetry. The other is the Calligraphy Show, where students can have access to some masterpieces and create our own. As is known, Chinese poetry and calligraphy are unique art treasure in traditional Chinese culture. Both of the activities will surely attract us students to get involved, thus inspiring our national pride deep down. Hopefully, my proposal will be taken into serious consideration. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英文报正面向学生征集“传播中国传统文化”的活动提案，请考生写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 提议：propose →recommend 期望得到的：desired →expected 机会：opportunities →chances 吸引：attract →draw 2.句式拓展 简单句变倒装句 原句：Both of the activities will surely attract us students to get involved, thus inspiring our national pride deep down. 拓展句：Not only will the activities surely attract us students to get involved, but also inspire our national pride deep down. 【点睛】【高分句型1】One is the Poetry Festival, which offers opportunities for students to recite their favorite poems and feel the charm of classic Chinese poetry. (使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Both of the activities will surely attract us students to get involved, thus inspiring our national pride deep down. (使用了现在分词作状语) 5．（2024·广东汕头·二模）你校英文报五月份的主题是“新时代青年”，请你写一篇短文投稿， 内容包括： 1.新时代青年的品格; 2.如何成为新时代好青年。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Teens In The New Era____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                                          Teens In The New Era In the new era, youths are expected to possess virtues such as responsibility, innovation, and resilience. They are the driving force behind social progress, constantly challenging traditional boundaries and pushing forward with novel ideas. To be a good youth in this era, one must continuously learn and adapt to the changing world. Active participation in community activities, fostering a positive mindset, and contributing to society through one's talents and efforts are crucial. By doing so, we can shape a better future for ourselves and for generations to come. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，主题是“新时代青年”。 【详解】1.词汇积累 具备：possess→be equipped with 适应：adapt to→adjust to 重要：crucial→vital 培养：foster→develop 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：They are the driving force behind social progress, constantly challenging traditional boundaries and pushing forward with novel ideas. 拓展句：They are the driving force behind social progress, who constantly challenge traditional boundaries and push forward with novel ideas. 【点睛】[高分句型1] They are the driving force behind social progress, constantly challenging traditional boundaries and pushing forward with novel ideas. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] By doing so, we can shape a better future for ourselves and for generations to come. (运用了动名词作宾语) 6．（2024·山东泰安·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期社会实践活动的方案。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 你的方案; 2. 你的理由。 注意： 1. 词数80词左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Editor, To make our summer vacation fulfilling, I would like to propose a social practice activity called “Get Your Hands Dirty in Hiking” in which students should combine hiking with cleaning up trails. In this eco-friendly hike, students are encouraged to bring recycled bags to pick up trash along the hiking trails, which can not only promote their physical health but also foster their sense of social responsibility. By actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognize themselves as essential members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation. It is through these hands-on experiences that we students can be inspired to make a difference in nature and beyond. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇关于暑期社会实践活动的方案投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 令人满意：fulfilling→satisfying 加强：strengthen→enhance 参加：participate in→take part in 重要的：essential→crucial 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：By actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognize themselves as essential members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation. 拓展句：If students can actively participate in the cleanup process, they will recognize themselves as essential members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation. 【点睛】[高分句型1] To make our summer vacation fulfilling, I would like to propose a social practice activity called “Get Your Hands Dirty in Hiking” in which students should combine hiking with cleaning up trails.(运用了介词+关系代词结构非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] By actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognize themselves as essential members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation. (运用了动名词作宾语) 7．（2024·山东济南·模拟预测）4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英文报将以“My Reading Story”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 你的阅读经历或体验； 2. 鼓励读书的倡议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请在答题卡相应位置作答。 My Reading Story ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Reading Story Reading has always been a significant part of my life. I remember the first time I was captivated by a book; it was “Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone”. The magical world opened my imagination and ignited a lifelong passion for reading. Books have taught me about different cultures, sparked my creativity, and provided comfort in tough times. I strongly advocate for reading as a habit. Let us make time in our busy schedules to pick up a book in the reading corner and immerse ourselves in its world. Let us share our favorite books with friends and family, discussing and debating the ideas we encounter. Together, let’s cultivate a culture of reading that fosters knowledge, understanding, and the joy of learning. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My Reading Story”为主题写一篇短文参加英语征文比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 热情：passion→enthusiasm 点燃：ignite→light 不同的：different→diverse 提供：provide→offer 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Reading has always been a significant part of my life. 拓展句：Reading, which has always been a significant part of my life, opens up new worlds of knowledge and imagination for me. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Let us share our favorite books with friends and family, discussing and debating the ideas we encounter.  (运用了现在分词作状语和省略that的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Together, let’s cultivate a culture of reading that fosters knowledge, understanding, and the joy of learning. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句) 8．（2024·广东·二模）你校将以“Enhancing Social Skills in Students”为主题举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 社交能力的重要性； 2. 提高学生社交能力的建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Enhancing Social Skills in Students _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Enhancing Social Skills in Students Good social skills are essential for personal and professional success. They enable effective communication and help form strong relationships. To enhance these skills in students, schools should focus on group activities. Participating in team sports or collaborative projects can improve team work and communication abilities. Additionally, incorporating classes on effective communication, including listening and expressing oneself clearly, would be beneficial. Hosting social events and encouraging involvement in community services can also provide practical experience in diverse social settings. Developing these skills is crucial for students to navigate life’s challenges and build a supportive community. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇投稿，要求考生以“Enhancing Social Skills in Students”为题，写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助：help→assist 集中于：focus on→concentrate on 此外：additionally→in addition 鼓励：encourage→inspire 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Good social skills are essential for personal and professional success. They enable effective communication and help form strong relationships. 拓展句：Good social skills are essential for personal and professional success, which enables effective communication and help form strong relationships. 【点睛】[高分句型1] To enhance these skills in students, schools should focus on group activities.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语） [高分句型2] Developing these skills is crucial for students to navigate life’s challenges and build a supportive community.（运用了现在分词短语作主语） 9．（2024·山东·二模）为庆祝世界旅游日，让世界了解中国，你校英文报将以“中国魅力城市”为主题，举办征文比赛，请你选择一个中国旅游城市并写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.推荐城市； 2.推荐理由。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Charming Tourist City in China____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A Charming Tourist City in China Xi’an, home to the world-famous Terracotta Army, stands out as a charming tourist destination in China. With its rich history spanning over thousands of years, Xi’an offers visitors a glimpse into ancient Chinese civilization. The city’s landmarks, such as the ancient city wall and the Big Wild Goose Pagoda, showcase its cultural heritage. Moreover, Xi’an’s delicious cuisine, featuring tasty dumplings and savory noodles, delights the taste buds of travelers. Exploring Xi’an promises an immersive experience blending history, culture, and culinary delights, making it a must-visit destination for tourists seeking an authentic Chinese adventure. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。校英文报将以“中国魅力城市”为主题，举办征文比赛，要求考生选择一个中国旅游城市并写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 举世闻名的：world-famous → world-renowned 迷人的：charming → fascinating 提供：offer → provide 展示：showcase → exhibit/demonstrate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Xi’an, home to the world-famous Terracotta Army, stands out as a charming tourist destination in China. 拓展句：Xi’an, which is home to the world-famous Terracotta Army, stands out as a charming tourist destination in China. 【点睛】[高分句型1] With its rich history spanning over thousands of years, Xi’an offers visitors a glimpse into ancient Chinese civilization. (运用了with复合结构作原因状语) [高分句型2] Exploring Xi’an promises an immersive experience blending history, culture, and culinary delights, making it a must-visit destination for tourists seeking an authentic Chinese adventure.(运用了现在分词短语作结果状语) 10．（2024·河北沧州·三模）随着高考日益临近，有些学生缺乏自信，害怕失败，因此你校举办以“提升自信心”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以Boost Our Confidence为题写一篇短文投稿。要点如下： 1.自信的重要性； 2.具体建议。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Boost Our Confidence ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Boost Our Confidence With the college entrance examination approaching, some students are getting more and more nervous. As a senior 3 student, I used to lack confidence, often thinking I couldn’t do anything well. But now I realize suffering failure is a vital part in life. More importantly, it is our attitude that plays a crucial role. So we should take a positive attitude to the exam. Besides, a proper timetable can help us concentrate more on our studies. We can boost our confidence this way. I do hope that all of us can keep confident about the coming examination. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以Boost Our Confidence为题写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 紧张：nervous→stressed 此外：besides→in addition 专心：concentrate on→focus on 促进：boost→stimulate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With the college entrance examination approaching, some students are getting more and more nervous. 拓展句：As the college entrance examination is approaching, some students are getting more and more nervous. 【点睛】[高分句型1] With the college entrance examination approaching, some students are getting more and more nervous. (运用了with的复合结构) [高分句型2] I do hope that all of us can keep confident about the coming examination. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 1．（2024·河南南阳·模拟预测）假定你是校英文报编辑李华，最近你校想开设一个名为“Your Respected Person and You”的栏目，请你写一则征稿启事，向全校学生征稿，内容包括： 1．栏目介绍； 2．稿件要求。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Contributions Wanted ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ School English Newspaper 【答案】参考范文 Contributions Wanted Recently, our English newspaper plans to launch a column named “Your Respected Person and You”. We are eagerly waiting for your contributions themed on it. As is known to all, each of us has someone to admire. Although they are from all walks of life, they set a good example to us in some way. So write down the stories between you and the person you respect. Please limit your essay to 300 words and the deadline for submission is 15th May. Your entries must be original. Looking forward to your participation. School English Newspaper 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校英文报编辑李华的身份，就最近你校想开设一个名为“Your Respected Person and You”的栏目一事，写一则征稿启事，向全校学生征稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 名称为：named→ titled 渴望的：eager → thrilled 好的：good→ outstanding 期待：look forward to→ be in a state of anticipation 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：Your entries must be original. 拓展句：Your submissions are required to be authentically created. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, our English newspaper plans to launch a column named “Your Respected Person and You”.（运用了过去分词短语作定语） 【高分句型2】As is known to all, each of us has someone to admire.（应用了关系代词as引导的非限制性定语从句） 2．（2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，近期你校组织了经典唐诗诵读活动，请你以“Appreciating the elegance of Tang Poetry”为题给校英文报写一篇稿件， 内容包括： 1. 活动介绍； 2. 你的收获。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Appreciating the elegance of Tang Poetry ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Appreciating the elegance of Tang Poetry Recently, our school organized an activity of reciting classic Tang poetry. All the students actively participated in it. In the activity, we not only recited Tang poetry but also learned about the history and culture behind it. It was a great opportunity for us to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Tang poetry. I gained a lot from this activity. It helped me improve my language skills and appreciate the charm of traditional Chinese culture. I also made new friends who shared the same interest in Tang poetry with me. In short, this activity was very meaningful and I really enjoyed it. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的稿件。要求考生以“Appreciating the elegance of Tang Poetry”为题给校英文报写一篇稿件，介绍学校组织的经典唐诗诵读活动。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 近来：recently→ lately/of late 参加：participate in→ take part in 机会：opportunity→ chance 提高：improve→ enhance 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I gained a lot from this activity. It helped me improve my language skills and appreciate the charm of traditional Chinese culture. 拓展句：I gained a lot from this activity, which helped me improve my language skills and appreciate the charm of traditional Chinese culture. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In the activity, we not only recited Tang poetry but also learned about the history and culture behind it.（运用了not only…but also…连接的并列谓语） 【高分句型2】I also made new friends who shared the same interest in Tang poetry with me.（运用了who引导的定语从句） 3．（2024·广东梅州·二模）又到凤凰花开时，又是一年毕业季。你校英文报正在举行以“校园最美瞬间”为主题的征文活动，请你按照以下要点写一篇短文投稿： 1. 你的回忆； 2. 你的感受。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 The Most Beautiful Moment on Campus _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Most Beautiful Moment on Campus From the trees sprouting leaves to the library at sunset, there are many beautiful moments on campus. The most impressive one for me happened in the school sports meeting. In the 800-meter race, I noticed a girl, who was left far behind, run hard to keep up. Then she fell down accidentally, bleeding from the knees. Instead of giving up, she stood up and continued though she almost had no chance to win. That moment touched me. I realize lovely gardens, clean pathways and splendid buildings do make our campus nice-looking, but it’s the whole school’s behavior that adds its inner and true beauty. 【导语】本文是一篇投稿。校英文报正在举行以“校园最美瞬间”为主题的征文活动，要求考生按照要点写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 意外地：accidentally→ by chance 机会：chance→ opportunity 打动：touch→ impress 意识到：realize→ be aware of 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The most impressive one for me happened in the school sports meeting. 拓展句：A moment, which impressed me most, happened in the school sports meeting. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In the 800-meter race, I noticed a girl, who was left far behind, run hard to keep up. (运用了关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Instead of giving up, she stood up and continued though she almost had no chance to win. (运用了though引导的让步状语从句) 4．（2024·浙江温州·三模）你校英文报就最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”(When English Meets The Arts)系列活动开展征文，请你写一篇短文，分享其中让你印象深刻的一项活动，内容包括： 1.活动介绍;2.你的感想 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 When English Meets The Arts _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】When English Meets The Arts Recently, our school organized a series of activities titled ”When English Meets The Arts". Among them, the activity that left a deep impression on me was the English drama performance. During the activity, students from different grades cooperated to produce and perform short English dramas. Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, providing a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. Personally, I was deeply impressed by the dedication and teamwork displayed by the students. Despite the challenges of language learning and stage fright, they demonstrated confidence and enthusiasm on stage. Moreover, the dramas not only entertained the audience but also encouraged language learning in a fun and interactive way. Overall, the English drama performance was a memorable and inspiring experience, highlighting the synergy between language learning and artistic expression. It reinforced the importance of creative approaches in language education and provided valuable opportunities for students to shine on stage. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇征文，分享学校英文报最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”系列活动中让你印象深刻的一项活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 一系列：a series of →a suite of 合作：cooperate→collaborate 展示：showcase→display 提供：provide→offer 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, providing a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. 拓展句：Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, which provided a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Among them, the activity that left a deep impression on me was the English drama performance.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Overall, the English drama performance was a memorable and inspiring experience, highlighting the synergy between language learning and artistic expression.(运用了现在分词作状语) 5．（2024·河北·二模）你校英文报“Morals and Virtues”栏目正在举办征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，跟同学们分享一则暖心故事，内容包括： 1. 简述这个故事； 2. 你的收获与启发。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Heartwarming Story ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: A Heartwarming Story Recently, I came across a beautiful display of sympathy that I felt it worthwhile to share. While waiting at a crowded bus stop, I noticed an elderly woman struggling to carry her groceries. Despite the rush hour, a young man stepped forward, offering his assistance without hesitation. Witnessing his selfless act reminded me of the marked impact of kindness in our daily lives. It taught me that sympathy knows no boundaries of age or circumstance. In our fast-paced world, such gestures serve as gentle reminders of our shared humanity, inspiring us to extend a helping hand whenever possible. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生参与校英文报“Morals and Virtues”栏目的征文活动，写一篇有关暖心故事的短文，需涵盖故事经过、收获与启发两方面的内容。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 展示：display→show, demonstration 注意到：notice→observe, see 尽管：despite→in spite of 显著的：marked→noticeable, pronounced 激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do→encourage sb. to do, motivate sb. to do 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Witnessing his selfless act reminded me of the marked impact of kindness in our daily lives. 拓展句：Witnessing his selfless act reminded me of the marked impact that kindness has in our daily lives. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, I came across a beautiful display of sympathy that I felt it worthwhile to share. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] It taught me that sympathy knows no boundaries of age or circumstance. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型3] In our fast-paced world, such gestures serve as gentle reminders of our shared humanity, inspiring us to extend a helping hand whenever possible. (运用了现在分词短语inspiring…作状语) 6．（2024·江苏盐城·模拟预测）最近，“搭子文化（the companion culture）”受到了越来越多的人的关注，人们为了寻找陪伴而选择“暂时性搭子”。你校英文报就“青少年是否应该寻找学习搭子”向全校学生征稿，请你写一篇短文投稿。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Should teens pursue study partners? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Should teens pursue study partners? The companion culture trend is gaining notice as people opt for short-term partnerships to fulfill immediate needs for cooperation, knowledge exchange, and shared experiences. I am in favor of teens’ pursuing study partners, because these partnerships can help develop essential skills like resilience and teamwork, which are not only crucial for study but also for life in general. Although having study partners can encourage lively idea exchange and collaborative learning, it’s crucial to be careful and avoid distractions. It’s important for teens to find study partners that match their learning style, creating a relationship that benefits both. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“青少年是否应该寻找学习搭子”为题写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 支持：be in favor of→approve 满足：fulfill→meet 追求：pursue→go after 重要的：crucial/important→vital 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：It’s important for teens to find study partners that match their learning style, creating a relationship that benefits both. 拓展句：It’s important for teens to find study partners that match their learning style, so that they can create a relationship that benefits both. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am in favor of teens’ pursuing study partners, because these partnerships can help develop essential skills like resilience and teamwork, which are not only crucial for study but also for life in general. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型】Although having study partners can encourage lively idea exchange and collaborative learning, it’s crucial to be careful and avoid distractions. (运用了although引导让步状语从句，动名词作主语，it作形式主语以及不定式作真正主语) 7．（2024·广东广州·一模）你校英文报举办主题为“我最喜爱的课外活动”的征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 课外活动简介； 2. 你喜爱的理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Favourite Extracurricular Activity ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 My Favourite Extracurricular Activity Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, I like dancing best. I have been in a school dance club since the first week I came studying here. After school we practise dancing on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and greatly enriches my campus life. I love dancing because it is more than just moving my body for fun and joy. It is a way to relieve stress and enjoy life. Besides, mastering any style of dance takes hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person. I would not be who I am today without dancing after school. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇短文参加“我最喜爱的课外活动”征文比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 丰富的：colorful→abundant 丰富，扩大：enrich→enlarge 缓解：relieve→alleviate 而且：besides→furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, I like dancing best. 拓展句：Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, I like dancing best, which helps me a lot. 【点睛】[高分句型1]After school we practise dancing on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and greatly enriches my campus life.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2]Besides, mastering any style of dance takes hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 8．（23-24高三上·广东·期末）假如你校英文报正在开展“More Housework, Less Pressure”主题征文活动，鼓励同学们参加家务劳动。请你写一篇征文。内容包括： 1. 陈述观点； 2. 分享经验； 3. 提出倡议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 More Housework, Less Pressure _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: More Housework, Less Pressure Undoubtedly, participating in housework can bring numerous benefits to students. Firstly, it helps cultivate a sense of responsibility and independence. By taking care of our living environment, we learn to appreciate the efforts that it takes to maintain a clean and tidy home. Additionally, balancing academic responsibilities with household chores teaches us how to prioritize tasks and manage our time effectively. I regularly assist my parents with tasks such as cleaning, cooking, and laundry. It allows me to develop practical life skills. Moreover, contributing to the household responsibilities reduces the burden on my parents and creates a harmonious atmosphere at home. Let’s take the initiative to help our families and create a more harmonious living environment. Remember, by doing so, we can live a more balanced and fulfilling life. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生写一篇短文，参加学校英文报开展的“More Housework, Less Pressure”主题征文活动，需陈述自己对于参加家务劳动的观点，分享自己做家务劳动的经验，并向同学们发出倡议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 许多：numerous→innumerable 培养：cultivate→develop/nurture 让某人可以做某事：allow sb. to do sth.→enable sb. to do sth. 减少：reduce→decrease 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Undoubtedly, participating in housework can bring numerous benefits to students. 拓展句：There is no doubt that participating in housework can bring numerous benefits to students. 【点睛】[高分句型1] By taking care of our living environment, we learn to appreciate the efforts that it takes to maintain a clean and tidy home. (运用了动名词作宾语，that引导限制性定语从句，不定式作真正的主语) [高分句型2] Additionally, balancing academic responsibilities with household chores teaches us how to prioritize tasks and manage our time effectively. (运用了动名词短语balancing…作主语) 9．（2023·浙江·模拟预测）假定你是李华，某国际学校学生会主席。你校学生会正在向全体学生征集以“中国科学家精神”(The Spirit of Chinese Scientists)为主题的短视频。请你用英文拟一则征稿启事， 内容包括：1.活动目的；2.作品要求；3.投稿方式及截止时间 Contributions Wanted ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Student Union 【答案】Contributions Wanted Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union of our school. Our school is collecting some short videos on the theme of “The Spirit of Chinese Scientists”. Here is some useful information about this activity. The purpose of this activity is to spread the spirit of perseverance to people. In addition, the most important thing is that the submitted work should include a scientist. Finally, if you want to submit a short video, please send it to our school website, and note that the deadline is October 1st. I hope you can actively participate in our school activities. The Student Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，某国际学校学生会主席。你校学生会正在向全体学生征集以“中国科学家精神”(The Spirit of Chinese Scientists)为主题的短视频。请你用英文拟一则征稿启事，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.作品要求；3.投稿方式及截止时间。 【详解】1.词汇积累 目的：purpose→aim 此外：besides → what’s more→/in addition 最后：finally→in the end→at last 参加：participate in→take part in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Our school is collecting some short videos on the theme of “The Spirit of Chinese Scientists”. 拓展句：Our school is collecting some short videos which should be on the theme of “The Spirit of Chinese Scientists”. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The purpose of this activity is to spread the spirit of perseverance to people.（运用了动词不定式作表语） 【高分句型2】In addition, the most important thing is that the submitted work should include a scientist.（运用了that引导的表语从句） 10．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模）你校英文报社正在组织以“感恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”为关键词的征稿活动，请你结合自己经历，选择至少一个关键词投稿表达自己对高中生活的感悟。 注意： 1.将题目补充完整： 2.词数100词左右。 _____: the key word (s) of my high school life __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Sample 1: Gratitude and youth: the key word(s) of my high school life My high school life is so fascinating that it is beyond the description. Nothing can represent it better than “gratitude” and “youth”. The first day of my high school is still fresh in my mind. With youth and ignorance, I was completely at a loss and had nothing to expect. I cannot imagine how long this phenomena would last, which upset me seriously. It was the teachers’ and classmates’ concern that led me out of the initial confusion. Gradually, I deeply realize that my high school life is full of brilliant sunshine. The journey from confusion to getting the direction to persist in has taught me a lot. That is, youth lives for diligence and we should always be grateful! There is no youth without diligence, and gratitude makes my school life full of sunshine. Sample 2: When it comes to my high school life, nothing can be better than “youth” and “gratitude” to describe it. The first day of my high school is still fresh in my mind. With passion and dream, I entered the promising campus, seeing faces full of youth and energy. Hopefully, my heart was full of strength of striving for my dreams. However, youth can also have confusion. I remember once I failed the exam and felt so disappointed that I even couldn’t cheer up for long. It was the teachers’ and classmates’ help and concern that pulled me out of the dilemma. With encouragement and gratitude, I’ve been working hard to make progress. Cherishing youth and learning gratitude, I believe I will achieve my dream. Sample 3: Independence: the key word(s) of my high school life Before high school, I lived a sheltered life, with my parents taking care of most things. However, as I entered high school, a boarding one, I had to adapt to a new environment and way of life, which forced me to become self-reliant. With less supervision, I had to learn to manage my time effectively. Creating a study schedule and sticking to it helped me keep organized. Besides, learning to make decisions was another challenge: Which subject to choose? Whether to join a club? I had to consider my preferences and interests. Making these choices allowed me to discover who I was and what I was passionate about, which furthered my personal growth. As a conclusion, high school is a transformative period when I developed a sense of independence. It teaches me invaluable skills that I will carry through to my future life. 【导语】本文是一篇报社征稿。要求考生表达对自己高中生活的感悟。考生需要扣题，把“感恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”三个关键词囊括在文中，还需要添加适合细节使文章真实自然。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 受保护的：sheltered → protected/guarded 监督：supervision → oversight/monitoring 困境：dilemma → predicament/puzzle 感激：appreciation → gratitude/acknowledgment 2. 句式拓展： 简单句变复合句 原句：With passion and dream, I entered the promising campus, seeing faces full of youth and energy. 拓展句：When I entered the promising campus with passion and dream, I saw faces full of youth and energy. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It was the teachers’ and classmates’ concern that led me out of the initial confusion. （it was...that引导的强调句型） 【高分句型2】Cherishing youth and learning gratitude, I believe I will achieve my dream.（现在分词作伴随状语） 【高分句型3】Making these choices allowed me to discover who I was and what I was passionate about, which furthered my personal growth.（who和what引导的宾语从句，which引导的定语从句） 【2024.北京高考真题】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article. To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view. Looking forward to reading your article! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很好的：great →wonderful 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：In addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 句式变换 原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） （2024年浙江卷1月） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动； 2. 说明推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答： Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons. First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 厌倦：be tired of→be fed up with 首先：first→above all 减轻：combat→relieve 提高：improve→enhance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语) [高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句) （2023年全国甲卷） 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond. Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。 详解】1. 词汇积累 著名的：well-known → famous 人物：figure → person 强调：emphasize → stress 基础：foundation → basis （2023年全国乙卷） 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 机会：opportunity → chance 使沮丧：demoralize → discourage 满意的：satisfied → content 空闲的：leisure → spare 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 点睛 【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句) （2022年全国乙卷） 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 学习活动状况描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 【答案】 Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 缺乏：lack→shortage 加强：strengthen→enhance 各种各样的：various→all kinds of 就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. 拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句) （2022年全国乙卷） 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性； 2. 保护海洋的倡议。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is. All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves. 【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 越来越：more and more→increasingly 重视：place importance on→attach importance to 重要的：key→significant 此外：what’s more→furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. 拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构) [高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型) [高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句) ( 8 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$