Unit 6 How do you feel（写作突破专项训练）英语人PEP版六年级上册

六年级上册Unit 6 How do you feel?写作专项练习 一、写作方法指引 三要素法描述心情: 要素一:人物或主角 要素二:事件，起因 要素三:心情或感受 将这三个要素凑齐了，再加上平时的知识储备,我们就可以非常流畅地写出自己想要表达的文章！ 【主题速览】本单元教学内容为人教版英语六年级上册,属于人与自然主题范畴，涉及“情绪与情感、情绪与行为的调节与管理。 【信息解读】 二、句子结构精讲 【重点句型复习】 【句子结构精讲】 1. They're afraid of him.他们很害怕他。 【讲解】be afraid of ...意为“害怕.....”,后面可接人或物。 【例句】Tom is afraid of his father.汤姆害怕他爸爸。 Sarah is afraid of mice.萨拉害怕老鼠。 2. The cat is angry with them.猫(警察)很生他们的气。 【讲解】be angry with ...意为“对......生气;生.....的气”。其中 with是介词,如果后面接的是人称代词,要用其宾格形式。 【例句】John is late again. The teacher is very angry with him. 约翰又迟到了。老师很生他的气。 3. What's wrong?怎么了? 【功能】用于询问出了什么问题或发生了什么事。 【注意】如果是要问某人发生了什么事,则要用句型“What's wrong with.?” 【例句】—What's wrong with Amy?埃米怎么了? —She hurts her finger.她弄伤手指了。 4. He should see a doctor this morning, so we can't go to the zoo today. 他今天早上应该去看病，所以我们今天不能去动物园了 【讲解】(1)should意为“应该”,是情态动词,没有人称和数的变化,后面接动词原形。 【例句】If he wants to stay healthy, he should do more exercise. 如果他想要保持健康,他应该多锻炼。 (2)so在这里表示“因此，所以”,连接并列句。前一分句表示原因，后一分句表示结 果。汉语习惯将“因为....所以......”一起用,但在英语里,because(因为)不可 以和 so(所以)同时使用。 【例句】Jim is ill, so his mother takes him to see a doctor. 因为吉姆生病了，所以他妈妈带他去看病。 【句子拓展练习】 1. 萨拉生气了。_________________________________ 2. 猫害怕了。 __________________________________ 3. 猫生病了。_______________________________ 4. 萨拉很伤心。_________________________________ 5. 萨拉和猫都很担心。________________________________ 6. 他们很开心。________________________________ 7. 你应该看医生。_________________________________ 8. 你应该多做运动。_________________________________ 9. 你应该穿暖和的衣服。_________________________________ 10. 你应该深呼吸，数到十。___________________________________ 【答案】 1.Sarah is angry. 2.The cat is afraid. 3.The cat is ill. 4.Sarah is sad. 5.Sarah and the cat are worried. 6.They are happy. 7.You should see a doctor. 8.You should do more exercise. 9.You should wear warm clothes. 10.You should take a deep breath and count to ten. 三、写作随堂练习 【练习1】 假如你是图片中的孩子张梅，请根据图片和文字提示写一篇50词左右的短文，可以适当发挥。 【信息解读】该题目要求作为图片中的孩子张梅，根据图片和文字提示写一篇短文。根据所给图片和文字提示，可知文章大意为张梅生病了，妈妈很担心，去看医生后，感觉很好，张梅和妈妈很开心。时态用一般过去时和一般现在时，注意单词数量要符合要求。 【参考词汇】ill生病的；be worried about sb担心某人；see a doctor看医生；drink more water多喝水；have a good rest好好休息；feel well感觉良好；happy开心的 【参考句型】I was ill...；My mother was...；We went to...；I should...；I feel...； 范文1 I’m Zhang Mei. I was ill yesterday morning. So I didn’t go to school. My mother was very worried about me. Then we went to see a doctor together. I took some medicine. I should drink more water and have a good rest. Today I feel well. We are very happy now. 练习2 【题目】好朋友是一生的财富。当朋友有困难的时候，给他提出好的建议，当他快乐的时候，与他分享喜悦。请你根据提示，参照例句，写一篇短文，字数不少于30词，句子通顺，书写工整。 【信息解读】该题目要求介绍当朋友有困难的时候，给他提出好的建议，当他快乐的时候，与他分享喜悦。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。 【参考词汇】ill生病的；see a doctor看医生；stay in bed卧床休息；angry生气的；take a deep breath做深呼吸；count to ten数到十；happy高兴的；sing and dance唱歌跳舞；sad伤心的；read stories读故事；worried担心的； 【参考句型】If Amy feels…；she should…； 范文2 If John feels ill, he should see a doctor and stay in bed. If Amy feels angry, she should take a deep breath and count to ten. If Zhang Peng feels happy. He should sing and dance and share happiness. If Olive feels sad. He should read stories and sing. If Mike feels worried. He should listen to music and go to bed. 四、真题实战演练 【实战演练】请从下面两幅图中选择一幅图进行描写。 要求：1. 认真观察图片，展开想象，写出通顺的语篇。可以给图中人物命名，有总起句，有细节描写。 2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。 3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。 【信息解读】该题目要求选择一幅图进行描写，可以给图中人物命名，有总起句，有细节描写。展开想象，作文内容要逻辑合理。句子要符合数量要求。 【参考词汇】tired累的，have a fever发烧，see a doctor看医生，medicine药，have a good rest好好休息，serious严重的，be well soon早日康复。 【参考句型】Lingling didn't go to school yesterday, because she...；She had a...；The doctor gave her...；The doctor told her...；It was...；She feels...；She hope... 参考范文： Lingling didn’t go to school yesterday, because she felt very tired. She had a fever and her mother took her to see a doctor. The doctor gave some medicine and told her to have a good rest at home. It was not too serious. Lingling feels much better now. She hopes she can be well soon. 第 1 页 共 7 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$