读后续写 Writing two 导学案-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

Writing Two 主题语境: 关爱动物 语篇类型: 个人故事 关键词: dolphin Maya 351w, 20分钟 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya. The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear(水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn't surprised when she surfaced empty-handed. During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter(过滤 ) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there? Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya's path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb(梳子)in her mouth waiting for her treat. “Maya! Where did you get that?” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it," declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What's all this?" Katherine asked, obviously confused. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150个左右。 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: "This is Maya's. secret," Hilda said with a big smile. ______________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Now Katherine realized what had been going on. ________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 思路点拨 第1段我们可以尝试问这些问题: ①How did Hilda find out Maya's secret? ②What's Maya's secret? ③How did Katherine react? 然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段话: "This is Maya's. secret," Hilda said with a big smile. ______________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ▶第2段我们可以尝试问这些问题: ①How did Katherine feel about Maya? ②What did Katherine do to Hilda? ③What did Katherine and Hilda agree to do? 然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段话: Now Katherine realized what had been going on. ________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 实战演练 高分表达(人物表情描写) 完成句子/句型转换 下点 1.“这真是难以置信。”Katherine摇了摇头，咧嘴一笑。(运用连续动作描写) "That was incredible.” Katherine ___________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________. 2.Hilda大笑着，默默地抚摸着Maya的头。(运用非谓语动词结构) 部或要重 ________________________________________________________________, Hilda was stroking Maya's head with no words. 3.“你知道为什么 Maya 要这么做吗?”Hilda问。她的眼睛里闪着狡黠的光。(运用there be结构) “Do you know why Maya has done all this stuff?” asked Hilda. __________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________. 4.Hilda 的脸上绽开了神秘的笑容,她眯缝着眼睛,笑眯眯地看着Katherine,但没有出声。(运用with结构) __________________________________________________ spreading over her face, Hilda beamed at Katherine, eyes narrowed, but kept silent. 5.Katherine在审视这些物品时目瞪口呆，她最初的怀疑转变为对Hilda敏锐观察能力的赞赏。(运用无灵主语) Katherine's _______________________________________________ as she examined the array of objects, her initial skepticism melting into admiration for Hilda's keen observation. 6.Katherine 惊讶地望着Maya，眼睛好似星星在闪耀。(运用明喻手法) Katherine looked at Maya in surprise, ________________________________________________________________. 7. Katherine 顿时被惊得一句话也说不出来，站在那一动不动。 (1) Katherine froze in shock, _______________________________________and she stood still.(运用状态形容词) (2) Katherine was so shocked _________________________________________ and she stood still. (运用so...that结构) 重点词汇 名词: curiosity 好奇心 finding 发现 mystery 奥秘 disbelief 怀疑 fascination 着迷 动词: peer 仔细看 unveil 揭开 conceal隐藏 trail 跟踪 形容词: precious 珍贵的 knowing会意的smart 聪明的 unexpected 意外的 副词: secretly 偷偷地 exactly 确切地 重要短语 gesture for sb. to do sth.示意某人做某事 be immersed in沉浸于 a flicker of doubt一丝疑虑 turn into转变成 make sense说得通 spy on暗中监视 高级句型 1. Gazing at them, Katherine was unbelievably taken aback for a moment. Katherine 凝视着他们，一时大吃一惊。 2. Instead of getting angry, Hilda giggled, feeling much funnier. Hilda 没有生气，反而咯咯笑起来，觉得更加有趣。 3.Tomn between mild annoyance and strong amusement, she tossed another fish to Maya.她时而感到些许烦恼，时而觉得很有趣，于是又扔了一条鱼给Maya。 4. Hilda, at the same time, bubbled up with a broader smile.281E8s102与此同时，Hilda露出了更灿烂的笑容。 5.Katherine chuckled, giving Maya three pats on her sleek skin. Katherine 咯咯地笑着，在Maya光滑的皮肤上拍了三下。 6. A look of understanding crossed her face as she watched Maya swim gracefully around the tank.当她看着Maya优雅地绕着水池游泳时，她的脸上掠过了理解的表情。 7. A mix of surprise and contemplation crossed Katherine's face as she realized the depth of Maya’s actions, her perspective on Hilda's capabilities transforming with newfound respect. 当Katherine意识到Maya行为的深度时，她的脸上露出惊讶和思考的表情，她对Hilda能力的看法随着新发现的尊重而转变。 8.While she marveled at Maya's reasons for doing this, she had to admire her intelligence and Hilda's subtlety. 当她惊讶于Maya这么做的原因时，又不得不佩服她的智慧和Hilda的细腻。 9.After uncovering the truth, a sense of relief appeared on her face, while she felt that the responsibility on her shoulders was greater than ever. 真相大白后，她的脸上露出了如释重负的神情，但同时她也感到自己肩上的责任比以往任何时候都要重。 Paragraph 1: "This is Maya's. secret," Hilda said with a big smile. ______________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Now Katherine realized what had been going on. ________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$