Unit 5 单元写作指导与演练-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）

Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show？ 单元写作指导与演练 【单元话题解读】  本单元写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群，涉及子主题“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”。其话题是“娱乐活动”。主要谈论喜欢的东西(电视节目或电影)和制订计划，学习如何询问别人的观点和如何表达自己的看法。询问别人的看法可用句型 What do you think of.../How do you like...,表达自己的看法可用句型I like.../I love.../I don't mind.../I can't stand...。常见的写作任务是阐述自己的喜好并对电影、电视节目做出相应的评价，体裁多为说明文或书信等应用文。  【写作目标】 本单元以“娱乐活动(Entertainment)”为话题, 谈论对不同类型的电视节目或电影的看法, 并说出理由。 写作方法 “喜好+原因分析”法写“影视节目评论类”作文, 首先, 陈述事实, 即介绍“喜欢/不喜欢某节目”, 介绍时应明确观点。然后, 分析原因, 从节目的内容、对自己的影响等角度分析。 【写作步骤】 .总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分: 第一部分：开篇点题，基本信息介绍，表明自己观点； 第二部分：谈论喜欢原因. 第三部分：推荐 【单元素材积累】 Beginning： 基本信息介绍 Basic introduction（基本信息）： My favorite movie/TV show is … … is one of my favorite movies/TV shows. The best movie/TV show I have ever watched is … . … is a famous cartoon/comedy/scary movie/talk show/talent show/sports show/sitcom/soap opera. ②Different people have different ideas on these shows. ③I prefer the movie that gives me something to think about. Body： 喜爱原因 Feelings（总体感受）： I really enjoy it. It’s a（n） fun/exciting/meaningful/educational/moving（感人的） movie/show. Watching … is a great way to relax. When I watch …， time goes quickly. Story（故事内容）： The movie comes from an old … story. The story is about a … boy/girl. He/She … （用1-2句话简单介绍） ①With a strong will and a kind heart, he was successful at last. ②The movie came out on…,which won people's heart at once. ③For 30% of the students, the news is their favorite, which can help them keep up with the latest information and find out what is going on around the world. Actor/Actress（演员）： The actress plays Mulan’s role well. Other actors are also fantastic and they did a good job in the movie. The actors are tall and handsome and the actresses are beautiful. Gains（收获）： I can learn some great jokes from it. I hope to find out what’s going on around the world. I like to follow the story and see what happens next. I like to find out what different people think about a subject. Spirits（精神）： One of the main reasons is that … is like a common man， but he always tries to face any danger. He is unlucky and has many problems. However， he is always ready to try his best. I always want to be like … … is a symbol of culture. The movie shows her love for her family, friends and country. ①As for me, I prefer more educational programs like the news and documentaries. ②The film is good enough for us to watch, not only because it is an action film with a Chinese character, but also because it teaches me to be brave when facing danger. Ending： 推荐 If you plan to watch something enjoyable， choose …！ Do you want to have an enjoyable evening？ Let’s watch … together！ It’s the best … in my heart. You can’t miss（错过） it！ 【名言积累】 ①Each one has his own point of view.仁者见仁，智者见智。 ②Literature is the tutor of the society.文学是社会的家庭老师。 ③There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes.一千个读者眼 里有一千个哈姆雷特。 【实例讲解1】 【写作任务】（Section B 3b&3c） 今天你所在的英语俱乐部组织观看了《笨鸟大冒险》这部电影，观影结束后俱乐部负责人王老师要求你们写一篇影评，并在下周活动时分享。请你写一篇短文为此做准备。 【审清题目】 内容：关于《笨鸟大冒险》这部电影的影评。 文体：议论文。 时态：介绍电影内容可用一般现在时；发表评论可用一般现在时和一般过去时。 人称：介绍电影相关内容如故事梗概等时，用第三人称；表达自己的观点时，用第一人称。 【头脑风暴】 A movie review About the movie • name • type (类型) • length of time (时长) • director (导演) • characters • content (内容)    • ... Your opinions (观点) • theme (主题) • acting         • music • characters   • ... 【提供素材】 ◆常用单词和短语 在横线上填写单词或短语。 1. 类型：cartoon, (1)___________(动作影片), comedy, tragedy (悲剧), scary movie, documentary (纪录片) 2. 人物：director, actor, actress, (2)___________(角色), movie / film star 3. 内容：story, scene (场景), plot (故事情节), start / beginning (开头), climax (高潮), ending 4. 观点：good, great, nice, excellent, fantastic, fun, (3)___________(令人愉快的), wonderful, (4)___________(有教育意义的), serious, interesting, relaxing, exciting, moving, funny, touching, sad (令人难过的), bad, terrible, (5)___________(毫无意义的), boring 【温馨提示】 在介绍电影故事梗概时，同样要遵循记叙文的写法，如包含记叙文的几个要素：时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果。 Key: 1. action movie   2. character / role   3. enjoyable   4. educational   5. meaningless ◆常用句型 1. content: • The movie is about ... • The movie shows ... • The film tells the story of ... • The story happens / takes place in ... • At the beginning / end of the movie, ... • At first / In the end, ... 2. comments (评论): • It is a(n) ... movie. • I enjoy ... very much. • I think the actress played ... role well. • ... did a good job in the movie. • The acting is true to life / excellent ... • That's why I like ... • It has a(n) ... ending. • The dialogues are touching / boring ... • One of the most interesting / moving parts (部分) is ... • My favorite character is ... 3. recommendations (推荐): • Don't miss it / ... • ... is a must-see. • I think it's a good movie with ... • All in all, it's worth (值得) seeing / watching ... • If you plan to watch a movie ... and want to see something ..., choose ...! 【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 Key: 1. he is afraid of flying / to fly 2. He doesn't go with them because he can't fly 3. He also makes two new friends 4. Xiaoyi wins the fight with the bad bird 5. He is both a friend and a teacher to Xiaoyi / To Xiaoyi, he is both a friend and a teacher 【实例解析2】 如今，网络已经成为人们娱乐和消遣的工具，通过网络人们可以看到各种各样的节目，比电视更方便。上周你们学校做了一个关于“对四种不同类型网络节目的看法及原因”的调查。请根据以下饼状图提示写一篇80词左右的英文调查报告，并谈谈你最喜欢的网络节目及原因。 参考词汇：variety shows综艺节目 ►►审题指导 1.文体：应用文 2.人称：第三人称 3.时态：一般现在时 4.写作要点：明确写作要点，所给的要点要全，并加入自主发挥的部分。 ►►思路点拨 Nowadays, the Internet has become a tool for people's entertainment. You can see all kinds of programs, which is more convenient than TV. Different people have different ideas on these shows. For 40% of the students, variety shows are the most interesting. They don't mind watching them, ①because it is one of the best ways to relax. For 30% of the students, the news is their favorite, ②which can help them ③keep up with the latest information and ④find out what is going on around the world.20% of the students ⑤don't like soap operas at all, ⑥neither do I. They don't want to spend too much time ⑦ following the story. Although people ⑧ expect to learn more knowledge from talk shows, 10% of the students still can't stand such boring programs. ⑨As for me, I prefer more educational programs like the news and documentaries. 点评： ①because引导的原因状语从句，②which引导的定语从句，④find out引导的宾语从句和⑥倒装句neither do I的使用使文章的句式 表达更高级。 ③keep up with, ⑤not…at all和⑨As for等短语的使用使文章表达丰富且有逻辑。 本篇范文语言丰富有逻辑，同时能够活学活用本单元所学知识，如find out what is going on around the world，following the story和expect to等。 写作练笔 【写作任务】  假如你们今天的英语作业是写一篇影评。请你挑选一部观看过的电影，写一篇影评。 【审清题目】  内容：写一部电影的影评。 文体：议论文。 时态：介绍电影内容可用一般现在时；发表评论可用一般现在时和一般过去时。 人称：介绍电影相关内容如故事梗概等时，用第三人称；表达自己观点时，用第一人称。 【头脑风暴】 【提供素材】 常用单词和短语 在横线上填写单词或短语。 类型：comedy, cartoon, (1)_______________ (动作影片), (2)_______________(恐怖电影), tragedy (悲剧), documentary (纪录片) ★人物：director, actor, actress, character / role, (3)_______________(表演者) ★内容：story, happen / take place ★观点：good, great, educational, serious, (4)_______________(毫无意义的), fun, wonderful, enjoyable, relaxing, exciting, (5)_______________(可怕的), boring, touch one's heart key:     1. action movie      2.scary movie      3. performer     4. meaningless      5. terrible 常用句型 ★影片简介 • One day, a general (将军) ... • The movie is about ... • The movie shows ... • The film tells the story of ... • The story happens ... ★影片评论 • I think the actress played ... role well. • The actors did a good job in the movie. • I enjoy the movie very much. • It is very long. • The acting is true to life / excellent ... • It has a tragic (悲惨的) end. • The dialogues are touching / boring ... • One of the most interesting parts is ... ★影片推荐 • Don't miss it. • All in all, it's worth (值得) seeing. • The film is a must-see. • It's a film with a deep message. • I think it's a good movie with ... 【谋篇布局】将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 key:     1. He enjoys / likes drawing pictures very much      2. he tries his best to get that magic brush     3. With the help of the villagers / With the villagers' help      4. I really enjoy / like the movie 【真题解析】 1．（广东揭阳·八年级校考期中）假设你家有四口人，请联系上文，写一篇短文谈谈你家人喜欢的电视节目。 内容包括： 1）简单介绍你的家庭成员； 2）谈谈平时你家里人都喜欢看什么类型的电视节目； 3）说说你喜欢的电视节目类型和不喜欢的电视节目类型，并说明原因。 作文要求： 1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 2）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. We like different TV shows. My father likes news. My mother likes soap operas. My sister likes cartoons. As for me, I love talk shows because I can learn a lot about the society. There are so many funny people with their stories. I don’t like soap operas at all. Most of them are so boring. I can learn nothing from them and I think watching them is a waste of time. Watching TV is a good way to relax, but watching too much is harmful to our eyes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的三个方面，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家庭成员； 第二步，具体介绍家人各自喜欢看的电视节目类型； 第三步，收尾，表达自己喜欢看的和不喜欢的电视节目类型和原因。 [亮点词汇] ①as for me对我来说 ②a waste of浪费 ②be harmful to对……有害 [高分句型] ①I love talk shows because I can learn a lot about the society.（because引导原因状语从句） ②I can learn nothing from them and I think watching them is a waste of time. （并列句和宾语从句） 2．（广西河池·八年级统考期末）我和Kelly是好朋友，放学后两人都喜欢看电视，但是我们喜欢不同的节目。请根据下表中的信息，写一写我和Kelly对电视节目的喜好以及对各节目的不同看法。 写作提示： 表示love；表示喜欢；表示不喜欢；表示不介意；表示不能忍受 TV  programs I Kelly Chinese history    educational sports shows exciting talk shows boring interesting soap operas meaningless boring 写作要求：1. 应包括以上所有内容要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，意思连贯； 2. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚； 3. 词数80词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Kelly and I are good friends. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Kelly and I are good friends. We both like watching TV, but we like different TV programmes. I love Chinese history very much, because I think it is very educational. While Kelly can’t stand it. I also like sports shows, because they are very exciting. And Kelly doesn’t mind watching them. For talk shows, I think they are boring. But Kelly like them, and she thinks they are interesting. I can’t stand soap operas, because they are meaningless. Kelly think they are boring too, so she doesn’t like them. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍“我”和Kelly对不同电视节目的看法。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。根据提示内容分别介绍两个人对不同电视节目的喜欢程度以及原因。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 3．（浙江宁波·八年级统考期末）假设你是李蕊，今年寒假你将代表学校去加拿大游学交流一星期。主办方要求每位成员先作一下自我介绍。请根据以下提示写篇发言稿。文章80-100词左右，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 姓名 李蕊 爱好 看电视。最喜爱看…… 做运动。最喜欢……（每周2-4次） …… 新年决心 What自我提高。 How…(至少一点） Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to stand here. Let me tell you something about myself. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Well, that’s about all the news I have for now. Thanks for listening. 【答案】例文 Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to stand here. Let me tell you something about myself. My name is Li Rui. I’m from China. I’m 15. I love watching TV. News is my favorite, so I can know what’s going on in the world. I like doing sports, too. My favorite sport is playing basketball. I play basketball three times a week. Besides, I like singing and listening to music in my spare time. I am a member of the music club. New Year is coming. I have some New Year’s resolutions to improve myself. First, I plan to read more good books to broaden my horizon. Next, I’m going to take piano lessons and practice playing the piano every day. Well, that’s about all the news I have for now. Thanks for listening. 【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达属于发言稿写作。寒假李蕊将代表学校去加拿大游学交流一星期，作文要求写作者以李蕊的身份写一篇演讲稿，作一下自我介绍，文章的开头和结尾已经给出。文章要围绕自己的爱好和新年决心展开，在所给的提示内容基础上，写作者要再进行拓展，把文章写得更具体、更充实。 2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：写作时主要应用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述，介绍新年决心时，适当结合一般将来时；注意格式规范，符合演讲稿语境表达。第二点：内容要围绕自己的爱好和新年决心，不可以遗漏表格所给提示，选用合适的连词，短语和句型来进行串联和拓展。第三点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。 4．（辽宁鞍山·八年级统考期中）假设你是王莉，以下是你的美国笔友Helen发给你的一封电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容回复她。 FROM: Helen TO: Wang Li SUBJECT: Favorite TV program Hi, Wang Li, How is it going? I like watching American TV shows very much now. Do you know Friends? That’s my favorite one. What’s your favorite TV program? Can you tell me something about it? Please e-mail me back soon. Yours, Helen 要求 1.语言表达要准确，语义通顺、连贯。 2. 词数不少于80，邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 FROM: Wang Li TO: Helen UBJECTS Favorite TV program Hi, Helen, You asked me about my favorite TV program. Now let me tell you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you are interested in this program, you can watch it, Yours, Wang Li 【答案】One possible version Hi, Helen, You asked me about my favorite TV program. Now let me tell you. My favorite TV program is Worlds Got Talent on Hunan TV. Everyone on the show is good at something. They come from different countries all over the world. They show their special talents and also share their most touching or funniest stories with us. Who is the best performer? It’s up to you. When people watch this show, they usually play a role in deciding the winner in each round. I like this program best, not only because I wonder how talented one can be, but also because I can learn something from these performers and feel their love for life. We all have a talent. It may be small or big. I think as long as we work hard, our dreams can come true one day. If you are interested in this program, you can watch it. Yours Wang Li [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕自己最喜欢的电视节目展开叙述，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明自己最喜欢的电视节目； 第二步，具体说明最喜欢节目的内容、特点和喜欢的原因； 第三步，书写结语，表达感受，建议对方也可以观看这个节目。 [亮点词汇] ① be good at擅长于 ②come from来自于 ③all over the world世界各地 ④play a role in 在某方面起重要作用 [高分句型] ① I think as long as we work hard, our dreams can come true one day. (as long as引导条件状语从句) ②I like this program best, not only because I wonder how talented one can be, but also because I can learn something from these performers and feel their love for life. (not only...but also连接并列的原因状语从句) 5．（八年级杭州市文晖中学校考期中）假定你是李平，正在杭州游学，期间收到了你校交换生Matt的电子邮件，请根据邮件内容回信。开头和结尾要得体，词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hi Li Ping, I hope you have a good time in Hangzhou. Did you go anywhere interesting? And which is the best restaurant? Can you tell me something about it? So next time I can have a try. Besides, I am excited to tell you that we will have a discussion about TV shows in class next Tuesday. What is your favorite TV show? What do you think of it/them? And why? Please write back to tell me. All the best, Matt Dear Matt, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping 【答案】例文 Dear Matt, Hangzhou is the capital of Zhejiang Province. It has a long history. If you travel here, you can visit West Lake, Zhejiang University and so on. The best restaurants here are Radisson Hotel, Hangzhou Shangri-La Hotel and so on. If you come, you must taste Dongpo Pork, Beggar’s Chicken and so on. My favorite TV program is Animal World. You can easily tell from its name what the program is about. It shows the living habits and eating habits of different kinds of animals around the world. I watch it once a week, usually on Saturday evening. I like Animal World best because I’m interested in animals. Also, I think the animals in the program are very beautiful. I can learn so much about animals from this program and why we need to save endangered animals. Li Ping 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。向Matt介绍杭州的情况。 2.写作指导：本文采用第三人称。向Matt介绍杭州的名胜古迹，出名的酒店，自己感兴趣的电视节目以及喜欢的原因。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 6．（八年级单元测试）你的家人都喜欢哪些电视节目？请写一封不少于80词的信告诉你的笔友Jerry。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jerry,                                                                                    How are you? Do you like watching TV? What kind of TV shows do you like? 现在让我来告诉你们一些关于我家人们最喜欢的电视节目的事。 我家的人喜欢不同的电视节目。我的祖父母喜欢京剧。他们经常跟着电视上的演员一起唱。他们觉得唱京剧让他们的生活很充实。我的父母喜欢董卿主持的Readers。那是因为他们俩都喜欢中国传统文化。他们说他们能从中找到生活之美。对于我而言，我喜欢体育节目，我经常在电视上看。我认为它们激动人心。我也喜欢情景喜欢因为他们搞笑又令人放松。 Could you please tell me something about yours? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Jerry,                                                                               How are you? Do you like watching TV? What kind of TV shows do you like? Now let me tell you something about my family’s favorite TV shows. People in my family like different TV shows. My grandparents like Beijing Opera very much. They usually sing together with the actors on TV. They think singing Beijing Opera makes their life full. My parents like Readers hosted by Dong Qing. That’s because both of them love traditional Chinese culture. They say they can find the beauty of life from it. As for me, I like sports shows, and I often watch games in TV. I think they are exciting. I also like sitcoms because they are funny and relaxing. Could you tell me something about yours? Yours 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文，因此书写时要注意作文格式。第一段已给出，承接上文内容表达问候；第二段主要描述家人喜欢的电视节目；最后一段结尾。另外注意本文给出汉语提示，因此要按照提示内容写作。 2.写作指导：主题段主要写的是家人爱好的电视节目，因此时态用一般现在时即可。写作喜欢的电视节目的原因时可用They think加宾语从句或者That’s because引导的表语从句，这样可使文章句型灵活，内容丰富。 7．（八年级单元测试）成长过程中你一定看过各种类型的电视节目，不同的节目带来的观看感受也是不同的。你和你的朋友是否就此问题进行过探讨？你是否会甄别和挑选有益的节目来收看？假设你是Jerry，请你给你的朋友Tom写一封信。 内容包括： 1、介绍你喜欢和不喜欢的电视节目的类型及原因； 2、你观看电视节目的频率和时长； 3、小时候你看过的怎样的电视节目对你产生过怎样的影响(与第一点的原因不能重复)； 4、你对观看电视节目的看法。 要求： 1、不能照抄原文； 2、不能出现真实姓名和学校、班级等个人信息； 3、80词左右。 Dear Tom, I heard that you have watched several good TV programs these days. So I’d like to share my ideas about TV shows with you._______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jerry 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I heard that you have watched several good TV programs these days. So I’d like to share my ideas about TV shows with you. Of all the TV shows, I like sitcoms best because I feel very relaxed when I am watching them. But I dislike soap operas because they’re meaningless. I usually watch sitcoms twice a week. And every time I watch them for half an hour, because watching too much TV is bad for our eyes. The reason why I prefer sitcoms is that I watched a sitcom named Home With Kids (家有儿女) when I was a child. It made me know about the enjoyment and the happiness with the family, and I also learnt a lot of great jokes from it. It made me laugh easily. Some TV shows are educational and meaningful, so we can get much knowledge from them. But some are boring and meaningless. Watching them is a waste of time. We should choose the good ones to watch. Yours, Jerry 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文——书信写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据问题提示的内容，介绍自己喜欢和不喜欢的电视节目的类型及原因；观看电视节目的频率、时长以及小时候看过的电视节目和影响；最后介绍对观看电视节目的看法。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容全面，条理清晰。 8．（青海西宁·八年级统考期末）用下列关键词或其适当形式，写一篇至少五句话的小短文。 many, on TV, are, programs, there. talent shows, like, I, are, interesting, because, they. too, like, news, I. tell, about, me, the, it, world. can, something useful, I, learn, them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 There are many programs on TV. I like talent shows because they are interesting. I like news, too. It tells me about the world. I can learn something useful from them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据所给提示词，至少写5个句子，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍电视上有很多节目； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢的节目以及原因； [亮点词汇] ①talent shows才艺节目 ②tell sb. about sth.告诉某人某事 [高分句型] I like talent shows because they are interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！20 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$