读后续写 Writing three 导学案 -2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

Writing Three 主题语境: 紧急救助 语篇类型: 个人故事 关键词: hands quick 355w, 20min 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 I've always known that I'm very quick with my hands. If someone throws something, I catch it almost before I'm aware it has been thrown. When I was young, I had no idea how useful this skill would become. Last week, I was going to visit a friend with her newborn and was on my way to a toy store to buy a gif. I'd once lived in the neighbourhood and I decided to head back to my old cupcake shop for a coffee. Sitting alone at a table outside with my drink, I was approached by an older man, who in a calm and very matter-of-fact way told me to call 911, because there was a baby on a fire escape, I jumped up to see where the baby was. I was so surprised to see it, wearing a little onesie(连体衣) and lying on the fire escape railings(栏杆) between the second and third storeys. I was nervous, so the baby boy became my only priority. As I was on the phone to the emergency services, I made eye contact with the child, keeping him calm, telling him to stay there. Some people were going up the stairs to find the parents, who were apparently sleeping through the whole drama. I just wanted the child to feel safe. I hoped he'd stay there until somebody could rescue him. Apparently he had slipped through pieces of cardboard placed next to an air-conditioning unit in the window, and without bars to protect him he'd crawled( f爬 ) out and up the fire escape towards the next storey. He was only 16 months old. For him to even climb up and balance in that position was incredible. Then he slipped. Instinctively(本能), he grabbed on the railing as he fell, hanging by his arms. I knew he couldn't hold on, 25 feet above the street, for long. I sensed people had gathered behind, but my attention was purely focused on my intention to catch the baby. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150个左右。 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: I made sure I was positioned to catch him. __________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The moments after he was saved were exciting. __________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 思路点拨 第1段我们可以尝试问这些问题: ①How did I feel at that moment? ②What did the baby do? ③What did I do then? 然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段话: Paragraph 1: I made sure I was positioned to catch him. _______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 第2段我们可以尝试问这些问题: ①How did the audience react? ②How did the baby's parents react? ③How did I feel and what conclusion did I draw from this experience? 然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段话: Paragraph 2: The moments after he was saved were exciting. __________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 高分表达(情绪情感描写) ▶完成句子/翻译句子 1.我的心怦怦直跳，手心冒汗，我的手虽然颤抖，但却很稳，时刻准备着。(运用独立主格结构表达紧张) __________________________________________, my hands, trembling but steady, were ready at all times. 2.时间似乎静止了。(运用夸张修辞手法表达紧张) _____________________________________________________________________ 3.我如释重负，满心欢喜，轻轻地在孩子的脸颊上捏了一下。(运用非谓语动词表达激动 ____________________________________________________________________, I gave the baby a gentle squeeze on the cheek. 4.每个人都听到了婴儿的脸撞在牌子上的声音，并且他开始哭了起来，大家都震惊地倒吸了一口气。(运用there be句型表达紧张) _________________________________________ as everyone heard the baby's face knock the sign and he started to cry. 5.焦急的父亲探出身子，试图够到婴儿，而母亲则惊恐地尖叫着。(运用并列句表达惊恐) __________________________________,trying to reach the baby, _____________ ___________________________________________. 6.很快，孩子的父母来到了我身边，表达了对我救下他们的孩子的感激之情。(运用非谓语动词表达感激) Soon, the baby's parents were by my side, __________________________________ __________________________________________. 7.就在那一刻，我意识到我能用我敏捷的双手改变世界。(运用宾语从句表达宽慰) 司器 At that very moment, I perceived _________________________________________ __________________________________________. 8.回想起这次经历，我感到如释重负。(运用无灵主语表达宽慰) Reflecting on the experience, _____________________________________________. 语料积累 重点词汇格 名词: grip紧握;紧抓 emergency突发事件 scene 场面:情景 scratch 划伤 commotion骚乱 动词: gasp倒抽气 slip 滑落 rush迅速移动 形容词：determined坚定的 still 静止的 thunderous雷鸣般的 sound 无损伤的重要短语 副词：luckily幸运地 perfectly非常 重要短语：hold on坚持 in shock 震惊 at case 感到轻松 prevent sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事 burst into突然迸发 高级句型 1.Though it seemed like a century, it was only seconds before his little fingers slipped and he came tumbling down towards me. 虽然看起来像过了一个世纪，但就在几秒钟之后，他的小手指打滑了，他向我滚了下来。 2. Although stumbling a bit, I leaned forward, reached out my hands and caught him securely and tightly.虽然有点磕磕绊绊，但我还是向前倾，伸出双手，牢牢地抓住了他。 3. The baby's chubby face first was written with panic, then softened into relief and finally, calmness and composure. 婴儿胖乎乎的脸上先是恐慌，然后变得轻松，最后是平静和镇定。 4. Emergency services arrived and gave the baby a quick check, declaring that he was safe and sound.急救人员赶到现场，对婴儿进行了快速检查，并宣布他安然无恙。 5. Amid the celebrations, a woman, presumably the boy's mother, rushed down the staircase, whose face was stained with tears of panic and self-reproach. 在一片欢声中,一个女人,大概是孩子的母亲,从楼梯上冲下来,她的脸上沾满了恐慌和自责的泪水。 6. I was about to head for the toy store when the baby's parents seized hold of my hands, tears of gratitude filling their eyes. 我正要去玩具店时，孩子的父母抓住我的手，感激的泪水充满了他们的眼睛。 7. While everyone was calling it a miracle, I knew it was my lifelong quick reflexes that had prepared me for this unforeseen moment of heroism. 虽然每个人都说这是一个奇迹，我知道正是我终其一生的快速反应让我为这一意想不到的英雄时刻做好了准备。 8. I suddenly became aware of the importance of making use of our advantages, because it may come in handy when we do not expect it. 我突然意识到利用我们的优势的重要性，因为它可能会在我们意想不到的时候派上用场。 9. Everyone will feel flustered in the face of emergency, but the preciousness of life can make us be fearless of danger. 谁都会在面对紧急时刻时感到慌乱，但是生命的宝贵可以让我们无惧危险。 3 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$