读后续写 Writing three 导学案 -2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

2024-10-14

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Writing Three

主题语境: 紧急救助语篇类型: 个人故事关键词: hands quick 355w, 20min

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

I've always known that I'm very quick with my hands. If someone throws something, I catch it almost before I'm aware it has been thrown. When I was young, I had no idea how useful this skill would become.

Last week, I was going to visit a friend with her newborn and was on my way to a toy store to buy a gif. I'd once lived in the neighbourhood and I decided to head back to my old cupcake shop for a coffee. Sitting alone at a table outside with my drink, I was approached by an older man, who in a calm and very matter-of-fact way told me to call 911, because there was a baby on a fire escape, I jumped up to see where the baby was. I was so surprised to see it, wearing a little onesie(连体衣) and lying on the fire escape railings(栏杆) between the second and third storeys. I was nervous, so the baby boy became my only priority.

As I was on the phone to the emergency services, I made eye contact with the child, keeping him calm, telling him to stay there. Some people were going up the stairs to find the parents, who were apparently sleeping through the whole drama.

I just wanted the child to feel safe. I hoped he'd stay there until somebody could rescue him. Apparently he had slipped through pieces of cardboard placed next to an air-conditioning unit in the window, and without bars to protect him he'd crawled( f爬 ) out and up the fire escape towards the next storey. He was only 16 months old. For him to even climb up and balance in that position was incredible.

Then he slipped. Instinctively(本能), he grabbed on the railing as he fell, hanging by his arms. I knew he couldn't hold on, 25 feet above the street, for long. I sensed people had gathered behind, but my attention was purely focused on my intention to catch the baby.

注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150个左右。

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph 1:

I made sure I was positioned to catch him. __________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

The moments after he was saved were exciting. __________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

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思路点拨

第1段我们可以尝试问这些问题:

①How did I feel at that moment?

②What did the baby do?

③What did I do then?

然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段话:

Paragraph 1:

I made sure I was positioned to catch him. _______________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

第2段我们可以尝试问这些问题:

①How did the audience react?

②How did the baby's parents react?

③How did I feel and what conclusion did I draw from this experience?

然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段话:

Paragraph 2:

The moments after he was saved were exciting. __________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

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