专题06 广州教科版六年级上册Module1～6写作指导

2024~2025广州教科版六年级英语上学期考点复习 专题06 Module1~6写作指导及真题操练 Part1模块写作指导 Module 1写作指导 同学们，在 Module 1中我们学习了“乡村生活”的话题，我们应该怎样来描述乡村生活呢？让我们来学习一下吧！ 【模块主题】Country life 【学以致用】 在Unit 2的课文中，Li Wei 生动地描述了他的日常活动，支撑了他提出的“I love living in the country，but I’m usually very busy.”的观点，让读者了解到他的生活状态和日常的忙碌。在写作时，我们需要有理有据，通过具体的事例和描述来支撑我们的观点，这样读者才能更容易被说服。 【写作步骤】 1．提出观点：在你眼中，乡村生活是怎样的呢？例如： 1) I think a country life is a healthy life. 2) I think a country life is a hard life. 2．用事例来支撑观点：乡村生活有什么优势？有什么劣势？ pros（优） cons（劣） fresh food/air not many shops nice people few libraries play outdoors far away from hospitals ... ... 3．总结观点：总结自己对乡村生活的感受。例如： 1) So I think a country life is a healthy life. 2) That's why (I think) a country life is a healthy life. 【范文展示】 I think a country life is a healthy life. There aren't many cars or factories in the country, so the air is fresh.You can have plenty of fresh food for breakfast. It's good for your body. You can plant flowers or vegetables in the fields. You can feed the chickens and pigs on the farm. That's plenty of exercise.It's good for your body, too. That's why I think a country life is a healthy life. 【实战演习】 你喜欢乡村生活吗？你认为乡村生活是一种什么样的生活？写一篇至少40个单词的短文。要求观点鲜明，有理有据，逻辑合理，语言通顺、流畅。 A country life is a(n)________________life ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Module 2 写作指导 同学们，在Module 2中我们学习了“城市生活”的话题，我们应该怎样来描述城市生活呢？它有什么优势和劣势呢？让我们来学习一下吧！ 【模块主题】City life 【课文分析】 在Unit 4的课文中，Li Wei的信件记录了他在城市的旅游经历，同时通过一些事例（细节）来让读者了解到城市生活的优势和劣势。 【写作步骤】 1．提出观点：在你眼中，城市生活是怎样的？例如： 1) I like living in the city, because a city life is an interesting life. 2) A city life is very different to a country life. For me,I like living in the city. 2．用事例（细节）来支撑观点：城市生活有什么优势？有什么劣势？ pros（优） cons（劣） many supermarkets/theatres/museums modern buildings wide streets better hospitals more jobs ... heavy and slow traffic noisy at night crowded streets not many trees not much fresh food crowded with people ... 3．最后总结观点：总结自己对城市生活的感受。例如： 1) That's why I like to live in the city. 2) I like living in the city very much. 【范文展示】 I like to live in the city I like to live in the city. The life in the city is very interesting. There are many buildings, supermarkets,parks and streets in the city. The buildings are tall and modern. The supermarkets sell lots of different things. I can buy anything I like in the supermarkets.The parks are beautiful. I can play games there all day. But there are some bad things here too. The streets are crowded. The traffic is heavy and slow.Sometimes I'm afraid to go outside. But I still like to live in the city very much. 【实战演习】 你喜欢生活在广州吗？请用至少40个单词写一篇短文介绍一下你眼中的广州生活。要求观点鲜明，例子恰当，有理有据，逻辑合理，语言通顺、流畅。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Module3写作指导 同学们，在Module3中我们学习了“健康”的话题，那怎样用英语来表达呢？赶快来学习一下吧！ 【关于健康的英文谚语】 1．Health is wealth．健康就是财富。 2. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.每日一苹果，医生远离我。 【写作步骤】 1．开篇表明自己的观点：先简单描述一下健康的重要性，可引用相关谚语。例如：Health is important to everyone. 2．分点介绍保持健康的方法：分点写作文的时候，我们可以用一些常见的逻辑顺序词把作文连贯起来，让文章具有层次感和递进性，如：first，second，third，next，then，finally等。例如： First, we should get enough sleep. Second,weshould eat more fresh fruit. 3．结尾：可用一两句话来写这些方法的意义，或呼吁读者重视健康。例如： 1)So let's take exercise every day. Let's stay healthy together! 2)That's why I think eating fresh food is the most important thing for a healthy life. 【范文展示】 Health is very important to everyone. Here is some advice about how to stay healthy. First,you should do some exercise such as walking, running,swimming and jumping. Second, you need enough sleep. You should sleep for at least 8 hours each night. Third, you should keep a good diet. Eat more vegetables and less meat. Finally, being happy everyday is also important. If you can follow these tips, you can stay very healthy. 【实战演习】 根据写作步骤及范文，写一篇关于自己如何保持健康的小短文，不少于40个单词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Module 4 写作指导 同学们，我们在Module 4中学习了一般过去时，那么如何用一般过去时描述过去发生的事情呢？快来学习一下吧！ 【模块主题】描述自己或他人在过去做的事或经历 【写作思路】 1．描述过去的一段经历时，可以从“5W1H（六何分析法）”入手，即“where（地点）、when（时间）、who（涉及的人员）、what（发生的事情）、why（事情发生的原因或背景）、how（总结感受）”。例如： Last summer, I went to Hawaii with my family.We swam and played volleyball.It was wonderful! 2．在描述过去经历时，应避免句子堆在一起，可使用一些时间短语和连接词来帮助文章更清晰、有条理。 时间短语 in the morning / afternoon/ evening、at night、the first/next day... 连接词 first、next、then、finally、at last、after that... 3．总结你当时的感受时，可评价这段经历给你带来的感受，或表达对未来的期望等。例如： (1) It was an exciting weekend. (2) I hope I can do better next time. 【范文展示】 Yesterday, I visited my friend Meimei. I took a bus to her home and arrived at nine in the morning.First, we read storybooks and listened to music.Meimei's mother cooked a delicious lunch with fish,chicken and vegetables. In the afternoon,we saw a film at three. The film was very exciting, and we were both enjoyed it. I went back home at six and felt very happy. 【实战演习】 写一篇关于你难忘经历的小短文，要求不少于40个单词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Module 5写作指导 本模块我们学习了话题“Changes”，那么你知道怎样用英语来描述小时候的你和现在的你之间的变化吗？赶快一起来学习一下吧！ 【写作步骤】 1.自我介绍：可以先简单地自我介绍。例如： My name is Wang Xin. I'm twelve years old. 2．描述变化：可以先借助表格来理清思路，列举自己的变化，例如性格、爱好、身高、外貌等方面的变化。 Before Now thin,short strong,pretty couldn't cook can cook very well liked playing games like reading books ... ... 3．使用对比句型：对比过去和现在的情况，可参考以下句型： (1)Before / In the past..., but now... (2) When I was... (years old),.... But now... (3).... ago,... But now.... Six years ago, I often cried. But now I smile a lot. 4．总结与感想：列举完变化后，最后对自己这些变化进行总结，表达你的感受。例如： I am happy I become a good boy now. 【拓展延伸】 变化不仅仅发生在你自己身上，你周围的世界也在变化。你可以用相同的写作方法描述学校、城市等方面的变化。 【范文展示】 Changes Hi,my name is Wang Ping. I am in Grade Six now.When I was in Grade One, I was short, but now I am tall because I drink milk every day and exercise a lot. Before,I liked playing computer games, but now | enjoy playing basketball with my classmates. It's a much healthier way to spend my time. In the past, my hair was long, but now I always keep it short. I cried a lot before, but now I smile a lot because I have many friends. I'm happy that I've become a healthy and cheerful girl. 【实战演习】 根据写作步骤，用英文写一篇关于小时候的你和现在的你之间变化的小短文。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Module 6 写作指导 本模块我们学习了中国的一些传统节日。你最喜欢哪个节日呢？你会用英语介绍它吗？一起来学习一下吧！ 【注意事项】 注意时态的使用：如果是描述节日的习俗或活动，用一般现在时；如果是分享个人经历，用一般过去时。 【写作步骤】 1．介绍节日的名称以及日期。 节日＋is on＋ 具体日期. 节日＋ is celebrated on＋具体日期. My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival.It's celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. 2．简要说明节日的由来和意义。 It's celebrated to... People celebrate it to ... People celebrate it to remember the ancient poet Qu Yuan. 3．描述节日期间的主要活动。 At／During／Before＋节日，people usually... On the night of the festival, people usually eat mooncakes, enjoy the full moon and sometimes play lantern word guessing games. 4．最后，分享你喜欢这个节日的原因，或者你特别的节日经历。例如： (1) I like the festival best because it gets our families together. (2) One year, I went to a park with my family to enjoy the full moon. There were so many children there, and we played many lantern games. It was a very special and fun night. 【范文展示】 My favourite festival My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is celebrated on the first day of the first lunar month.Before the Spring Festival, we usually clean our houses and buy new clothes to welcome the new year.During the Spring Festival,families get together and have a big dinner. Adults also give lucky money to children for good luck. I love the Spring Festival because it gets our family together, and we have so much fun! 【实战演习】 仿照范文用英文介绍你最喜欢的节日，不少于40个单词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Part2 真题操练 一、小明想给外国小朋友介绍广州的情况，请按下面文字的意思用英语写一段话。（7分） 广州是一个现代化的大都市，有许多高大的建筑物，当交通繁忙时，满大街都是小汽车，广州有许多剧院和公园，超级市场里的商品琳琅满目，这里的人非常友好。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 二、书面表达。请写一封邀请信，邀请你的兄弟姐妹或朋友来广州度假。可以从吃、住、活动、交通、景点等方面描述你现在居住的城市广州。要求表意正确，语句通顺，逻辑合理，不少于40个单词。（5分） ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 三、根据给出的提示和参考单词写作，不少于6句，40个单词。（满分10分）你了解过北京吗？请你根据你对北京的认识，介绍一下北京这座城市。 city street traffic building crowded tall modern noisy heavy slow ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 四、书面表达。（6分） 假如你是Ben，上星期你学习了一些关于保持健康的知识。请给你在英国的爷爷写一封信，给他提出一些健康生活的建议。 要求：（1）可以从作息、饮食、体育锻炼、心情等方面提出建议。 （2）语句通顺，书写规范，不少于40个单词。 Dear Grandpa,I learned about“How to keep a healthy life” with my teachers and classmates. I knew the secret to good health. Now let me tell you. ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 五、看图，用英语描述小玲（Xiaoling）昨天做的几件事。（7.5分） 1.___________________________________________________________________________________ 2.___________________________________________________________________________________ 3.___________________________________________________________________________________ 4.___________________________________________________________________________________ 5.___________________________________________________________________________________ 六、按中文提示写句子。（6分） 你喜欢的节日名称、节日的时间、喜欢的原因、人们在该节日里常做的事。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 七、书面表达。（5分） 用不少于40个单词介绍你最喜欢的一个中国传统节日。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： Part1模块写作指导 Module1: A country life is a healthy life A country life is a healthy life. You can always have plenty of fresh milk for breakfast.In the country, you can play many outdoor games. You can also grow things you like to eat in your garden. So I think a country life is a healthy life. A country life is a daytime life The life in the village is very simple. In the daytime, people get up early.They make breakfast,clean the house and feed the animals.After breakfast,they go out and start the farm work.Sometimes,they stay outside all the day.They come home until the sunset.Because of the hard work,farmers usually go to sleep very early.They have to have a good rest to prepare for the next day. Module2: Guangzhou is a central city of Guangdong.It's hot in summer but it's not very cold in winter. Guangzhou has a long history. It's the famous for the Statue of Five Goats.There is a beautiful river across this city-The Pear River.People says "Eating in Guangzhou".Because Guangzhou dimsum is very famous.And we can eat Guangdong dimsum anywhere.l like Guangzhou very much. Do you like Guangzhou? Module 3 As we all know, healthy is very important to everybody.But do you really know how to stay healthy? Here are some useful tips. First,we should do exercise if we have time.For example, we can go to swim in the summer holiday.Or we can take a walk after supper.Doing exercise makes us healthy and strong. Second, we should take more vegetables and fruit and less candies.Stop eating junk food and drinking beers. Last but not least, we should go to bed early and wake up early. We should have enough sleep, or we will get sleepy in the day time. If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body. I wish everybody has a strong and healthy body. Module 4 It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,I decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and I was very happy,too. In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to seethe flowers smiling in the wind. In a word,today is an unforgettable day.because I saw my relatives helped people. Module5: I am much taller now. When I was a kid I was short and I had a large build. Now I have a medium build. My hair is much shorter now because I like short hair very much. I become stronger and stronger because I like doing more sports than the past. Module6: My favourite holiday There are many special holidays in China. My favourite holiday is the Mid-Autumn Festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival is in September or October.On that day,we eat many kinds of moon cakes. They are very delicious. In the evening, my family get together and watch the moon. It's wonderful! I like the Mid-Autumn Festival. Part2 真题操练 1、 Guangzhou is a big and modern city. There are many tall buildings here. When the traffic is heavy, you can see cars everywhere. There are many theatres and parks in Guangzhou. Supermarkets here sell lots of different things. People are very friendly. 二、Dear Lucy, Summer holiday is coming. I would like to invite you to visit Guangzhou. Guangzhou is a big and modern city. It is famous for its delicious food and places. We can visit the Guangzhou Tower and go on the Pearl River Cruise. After that we can have dimsum in Guangzhou Restaurant. I am looking forward to seeing you. Yours, Xiaoling 三、Beijing is a beautiful and modern city. There are many tall buildings in the city. The streets in Beijing are wide but crowded. And the traffic is heavy and slow. There are many beautiful places like Tian’anmen, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. The people there are nice, too. I like Beijing very much. 四、Dear Grandpa, I learned about“How to keep a healthy life”with my teachers and classmates. I knew the secret to good health. Now let me tell you. First, get plenty of sleep, at least 8 hours each night. Second. keep a good let. Eat more vegetables and less meat. Third, take plenty of exercise. I think the most important thing for a healthy life is to be happy. I hope you can always stay healthy. 五、1. Xiaoling got up at 6:00 this morning. 2. She cooked lunch at 12:15. 3. She had lunch at 12:30. 4. In the afternoon, Xiaoling did her English homework at 15:45 in her study. 5. She did some reading at 9:50 in the evening.  六、My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is usually in January or February. My family will clean our house together. My mother will buy new clothes for me and my father. My parents will give me some lucky money. And we will go to visit my grandparents and have a big dinner with lots of delicious food. I am very happy. So I like the Spring Festival best. 七、My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. During the festival, my family usually clean our house together. We also go shopping and buy some new clothes to make everything new and fresh. I can get some lucky money from my parents. In the evening, we will go to visit my grandparents. 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